减压方式英文作文（实用20篇）

My father is a manager. He likes singing and playing cards. He liakes

drinking tea in his office. He likes watching TV and smoking. He likes making

friends very much. So he has many friends, He`s outstanding and calm. I like his

personality. My mother is a history teacher. She likes drinking juice in her

free time. She likes playing volleyball and badminton. She likes watching tv

,too. And she also likes listening to the music. She always does housework

because she wants to have a beatiful and clean house. She`s economical and

smart. I love my parents.

我的父亲是一位经理。他喜欢唱歌、玩扑克牌。他在他的办公室liakes喝茶。他喜欢看电视和吸烟。他非常喜欢交朋友。所以他有很多朋友,他是优秀的平静。我喜欢他的个性。我的妈妈是一位历史教师。她喜欢在业余时间喝果汁。她喜欢打排球和羽毛球。她喜欢看电视。她也喜欢听音乐。她总是做家务,因为她想要有一个美丽又干净的房子。她的经济和聪明。我爱我的父母。

I have heard a beautiful poetry, written by a novelist, Amy Cheung. With a

little adjustment, it can vividly depict the alienation among people in reality

- "The further distance in the world is not between life and death. But when I

stand in front of you, your eyes turn to your smartphone; don’t know that I love

you."

The smartphone has been gaining a great popularity, becoming a toxic

compulsion. It has invaded our lives and occupied all our interstitial time. It

is so commonly seen that the smartphone addicts attend to their phone, ignoring

everything. Even meeting with friends, they often pull out the phone in order to

take a photo, check a message or even play with a game. Seeming connected with

the whole world, they have actually fiddled the conversation and done harm to

the relationship.

It is high time that we threw away the phone and raised our heads up. Do

cherish the ones around us and appreciate the splendid scenery ahead of us.

It is hit by in the children eye , is is a festival being full of the mysterious color. The veil of night comes , colourful putting on makeup of the children field put on just too impatient to wait is accustomed to , puts on the exceedingly strange mask, mention previous "Jack light " running go out to play. And then "Jack light " appearance is very lovable , method of work is that Spanish gourd is hollowed out, outside engrave be all smiles the eye and big mouths, having ed a candle , it is ignited in melon, people just can see this charmingly naive smiling face in very distant place.

The portable child "Jack light " punishing the ready queen , disguising self as all sorts of evil-doers group, runs before the neighbour door of a house , intimidates as the field is shouting: "Ask a practical joke to still be to being entertained " ", given money to still being eaten".

天下的父母都爱孩子。为了孩子，他们愿意付出一切。

——题记

“窗外的雨，落在地上，大地轻轻地把它们搂在怀里。雨点是孩子，大地是父母，父母对孩子永远是那么亲切地给予呵护。”我独自面对电脑，看着上面的文字，泪水浸湿了双眸。

父亲是一位工程师，这是我最感到自豪的；父亲整日忙于工作，这是我最伤心难过的。我常常想，可能再过一段时间，我都会忘了他的模样。

父亲经常出差，即使不出差，在家的时间也是极其短暂的。有一次，我有个题目不会，恰巧爸爸在家，我就去问他。可他刚给我列个式子，就被一个电话催走了；还有一次，他告诉我，晚上可以回家吃饭。我开心极了，做了几样刚学会的菜等他。没想到一直等到钟敲了八下，桌上的菜早已凉透了，爸爸才打电话告诉我，要加班，不能回来了……希望一次次落空，我对爸爸一次次地失望。“我……我能和您谈谈吗？”“行啊！什么事儿？”“您能不能多一点时间来陪……”“对不起，我有个电话……喂，行行，好，我马上过来……文雯，对不起，我有事先走了，晚上回来再和你谈！”“爸爸！您……”门关上了，我的心也彻底凉了。

今天，我打开电脑，发现邮箱里有一封邮件：“文雯，对不起。我不是一个好爸爸。爸爸知道你是个懂事的孩子，也知道你最近压力很大，请你理解爸爸，你一定要努力上进，爸爸相信你会做到的！因为——你是我的孩子。”

我哭了，泪水一滴滴地落下来。这时，爸爸回来了，我扑到他的怀中：“爸，对不起，我以为您不喜欢我了呢。”“傻孩子，是爸爸不对，没有多抽出一些时间来陪你。”

不必说爱，也不必说感动，我们都能体会彼此的心情，都能体会彼此爱的方式。

“爸！您的生日快到了，您最爱吃什么菜呢？”“这个嘛……你会做什么我就喜欢吃什么了。”父亲笑着说。

窗外的小雨也笑了。

The spring festival is Chinese most traditional festival every 365 days. Each Chinesepay much attention on it. Every year about 15 days before spring festival， themigrate works and white-collars are beginning crowded home-returning.

But， in recent years， with the development of the world， many different attitudes between the young and the old towards the spring festival come forth. The old are still pay more attention to the spring festival， but the young gradually change the mode to spend their spring festival holiday， such as travel overseas.

When I am a childhood， I celebrated the spring festival with my family about amonth in my winter vacation in traditional way， such as helping cleaning our houses， putting red couplets on gates， setting off firecrackers， and wear new clothes. Now， I spend only 4 or 5 days at home with my parents in celebrating thespring festival， then I will hurry back to work. Maybe in the near future， I will have no time celebrating spring festival hometown， and my parents have to cometo stay with us in the city.

Whether or no， I like the spring festival. It is one of the most important part of our Chinese culture. However busy I am， I will try my best to celebrating it with thetraditional way to protect those our ancestor has leave behind.

My dear:

This is the first time Ive ever sat at my computer and written to you so

late. I must have a reason for doing this.

Now I will tell you my feelings humbly, because I dont want to

misunderstand you easily. Today, I made our photo in my dorm room and set it as

a screensaver. I miss you, I want to tell you my happiness. But the answer you

gave me was truly astonishing.

Text messages dont come back, you can do that. I cant believe it. I dare

not connect you who are indifferent to me with you who are committed to me.

Who was the man lying beside me who came to see me the day before

yesterday?

Who left me yesterday and kissed me at the station?

Can you tell me?

I am angry. Why should I be angry? I am so happy. Waiting for your text

message, waiting for your call. I wait for you.

However, I came to a deep silence and your indifference.

Now the sisters in the bedroom are all asleep. But Im writing a letter.

Even if I hadnt written, I couldnt sleep. Because Im crying.

Am I sad? I dont know.

You know what? I think you lied to me.

Maybe you dont love me as much as you say.

To you, my existence is just the icing on the cake. You are more successful

and satisfied with me. Without me, your life will still be so wonderful. So, you

can be so cool, so cool.

When Im with you, treat me well. When Im not, treat me as if I dont

exist.

Maybe you should say youre busy. Busyness is relative. Youre busy during

the day. Youre busy at night, too. May I ask what you are doing? !

Can be busy to a message also reluctant to send it?

Look in your inbox and your outbox for yourself. You get the idea.

Darling, I want to love you well. Because I think you love me.

However, I am a selfish person.

If your love for me continues like this. Thats what youre going to end up

with.

Then you will know how I feel. Since ancient times is lost just know how to

cherish.

Im not gonna send you a text back. Im not taking a call from you. I

disappeared. Youll never find me again.

Please dont make me sad any more. My feelings for you are limited, and so

are my tears. I promised you I wouldnt break up with you again. So I wont

say.

Two days ago, I was very sad, but you came, I was dizzy with happiness, I

am happy, I am blindly happy.

But I didnt think this was just the beginning.

Im so tired!

I clearly feel your speechless and indifferent to me.

Do you love me? Do you love me? Do you spoil me?

I dont know.

If you love me, please prove it with your actions.

If you love me, please dont think once and for all.

If you spoil me, please dont keep your high profile.

Finally, Ill tell you. I am fragile, but I beg for your love. Although,

you say firmly, I leave you, I cant find, you love me so much.

But Ill tell you something. Even if later no one loves me, I do not want

to love you so humble.

Is love so cheap to you as entertainment in your spare time? Do you talk

with you when you are lonely?

I also have my business, however, I would like to separate out to miss you.

While youre busy. You a student so busy, I dare to expect you to work in the

future, will give me a phone call, a text message?

Are you looking for a wife? What do you think your wife does? Is it the toy

in your hand? In a good mood to tease! Busy just throw aside, do not ask.

What you have done and what you have promised is entwined in my heart,

making my heart ache. I began to ask myself, "Does he love me?"

If this is love, if this is love, if this is his model of love.

So, what do I do?

In my heart of hearts, I clearly know that people can not change for

someone, change is not this person.

So, I dont have any requirements, from then on, you can do whatever you

want, you can talk to me whenever you want.

Write here, you send me a message to say, we normal point love it!

I think its normal. But is our relationship normal?

What boyfriend can have you so arrogant, so high profile! Did you give me

the cold shoulder? Youre thinking, just leave it here and youll be fine.

Youll be your wife.

I love you?

Now I want to say, I hate you.

I hate your promises to me. I hate your love for me.

Honey, I tell you, Im angry, disappointed, sad, upset, and hate you.

You drive me crazy. Madness is followed by long apathy.

The opposite of love is indifference, not ruthlessness.

Youre gone, youre in your own city, youre completely different.

If there is any grievance in your heart, you say! If you think you dont

want to talk to me, go ahead! If you want to leave me, you say!

If you dont love me, you are brave to tell me. You have to trust in my

resilience. You say you do not love me, say a few more times I believe. Just

like you say you love me, say it more times and Ill believe it. I believe

you.

Ha ha...

I dont know why, Im heartbroken. This doesnt feel good. Because Im

afraid of heartache. In order not to heartache, I will run. Will choose habits

without you. Why, you make my heart ache? Im afraid of pain. What shall I do?

Is it true that only do not fall in love will not hurt?

Dont I have any other choice?

Your tone of voice to me, is I good for nothing, and then you pain, you

speechless. Is that hard for you when youre with me? My dear? ! Do you find it

so hard?

Do you feel so tired? Is it so hard to cheer me up? Is that whats

bothering you? Or am I too tough? Ha ha...

This is my letter to you. What shall I do in the future? I dont know.

But, I know, It hurts. I dont want to do anything. Dont give me any more

lessons. Too many people in the world are too self-righteous. Too many people

are poor teachers. I want a husband who loves me, not a university professor or

a government worker!

Even if you are Song Shiming, I am Seaweed. Song Shiming is not going to

talk about the financial crisis to Seaweed! And youre not really successful

yet!

Finally, I want to ask you, who am I to you, are you in the right

place?

Where do you go from here? !

Also: Happy Christmas Eve to you!

I went to visit my grandparents last August. They lived in a small village far from Shenyang. I was born there ten years ago. I remembered it had been a poor place before.

去年八月份我去看爷爷奶奶。他们住在离沈阳很远的一个小村庄。十年前我就出生在那里。我记得以前那是一个穷地方。

But when I got to the village, I found that great changes had taken place there. The villagers became richer. They looked happy and healthy. A lot of new buildings were built.

可是当我到达村子之后，我发现那里发生了巨变。乡亲们变富了，他们看起来又快乐又健康。许多新楼兴建起来。

My home village took on a new look.

家乡呈现了新貌。

Without exception,everyone has to make choices in life,whether they concern school,career,or love.While some choices are simple,one cannot avoid the task of making difficult decisions.

Choices are often directly related to ones happiness.University students,for example,face a hard and crucial decision upon graduating.Many students have difficulty deciding whether to continue studying or begin developing a career.Every individual is different,and one must take the factors of ones personal life into consideration.In addition to an awareness of specific circumstances,however,making the right choice also depends on correct appraisal of oneself.

In order to choose correctly,therefore,one must be both realistic and self aware.Furthermore,once having made a decision,one should seriously accept and pursue the path one has chosen,and strive towards the realization of ones goal with spirit.

A suichu fireworks, energy-saving - signature

With the sound of familiar firecrackers in the ear, the taste of the year became thicker and thicker. The eyes see, the ears hear, the nose smells full of jubilation.

Spring Festival comes, we are very happy, all families have attached to the couplet, and the word "Fu", "Fu Fu" is the meaning of "blessing". With regard to the origin of "Spring Festival", there is a kind of legend that there was a kind of beast called "year" in ancient times of China. "Year", head long antennae, ferocious abnormality. Long years of deep seabed, each to a specific day (which is now the new years Eve) to climb the shore, devouring livestock harm human life. Therefore, every new years Eve, people help the aged and the young stockaded village fled to the mountains, to avoid "year" damage. One year on New Years Eve, the old man begged from the village. The villagers rush to a scene of panic, no one cares about him, only village as an old woman gave the old man some food, and urged him to speed up the mountain to avoid "year", the old man pulled up to the mustache smiled: "if her mother let me stay at home one night, I have to years away." The old woman continued to persuade the old man to laugh without saying.

So there must be fireworks in the Spring Festival

The fireworks in the sky diversiform dressed in brightly coloured, "fireworks into the sky", "bang" sound exploded, the sky suddenly become colorful, the faint powder is like colorful flower blooming. But the drama is not long. The fireworks are fading slowly from the sky until they disappear. Over there, a shock silver light caught my attention, and it sprayed and sprayed up. Falling back then jumped out of the silver, like pearls falling from the sky to tens of thousands of people, very beautiful feeling; snapping, snapping, the deafening sound of firecrackers is certain! The noisy sound is enough to add a lot of joy to the 2013.

There is a warm fire, burning, and intensified, the orange flames rolling up and down, as if calling what, like dancing in joy. People, things, China, the Spring Festival is becoming more and more intense, bringing 2013 new weather!

The Spring Festival rich in the rich years, the rich people.

①表达方式分为叙述、描写、说明、抒情、议论的表达方式的分类解释;

②一篇文章可以以一种表达方式为主，兼用其它表达方式;

③现在流行的话题作文的要求里也有相关表述——可任选一种表达方式为主并综合运用其它各种表达方式。

综合起来，“表达方式”应当为在用语言、艺术、音乐、行动把思想感情表示出来时所采取的方法和形式。

写作手法：写作手法属于艺术表现手法(即：艺术手法和表现手法，也含表达手法(技巧))，常见的有：夸张，对比，比喻，拟人，悬念，照应，联想，想象，抑扬结合、点面结合、动静结合、叙议结合、情景交融、衬托对比、伏笔照应、托物言志、白描细描、铺垫悬念、正面侧面比喻象征、借古讽今、卒章显志、承上启下、开门见山，烘托、渲染、动静相衬、虚实相生，实写与虚写，托物寓意、咏物抒情等。表达方式就是常见的叙述、描写、抒情、议论和说明。(其实也属于艺术表现手法)。

Dear Santa Claus,

Hello! Im Yoyo. Do you remember? You have on Christmas Eve, give me a lot

of crayons, colored paper, pencil case. As a thank-you, I put cookies in my

Christmas stocking. Thank you for so many years of hard work, so that every one

of our children can receive gifts. I was very happy when I received your gift

last year. I went to my school to tell my classmates that I received your gift.

But It never occurred to me that my classmates would not believe it. But Im not

paying attention to them! Because mama said, "As long as you have something

beautiful to look forward to, something beautiful will always be around you."

For our children, you are the most amiable and respectable person in the world,

you gave us each of the children most hope of the gift.

I have a wish to let the construction engineers build the house up the

chimney in the future, so that your work will be more convenient and

labor-saving. If you are too busy next Christmas Eve, you can take me with you

and help you send gifts together. I want to thank you face to face for your care

in these years.

Finally, I also want to say to you: Dear Santa Claus, this Years Christmas

Eve, I want to learn a skill, I hope I can talk with small animals, so I can

know what they are thinking, also know what they need, in this beautiful

Christmas Eve, I also want to give them a gift!

Its getting late. Thats all. Good night and a good dream.

I like your youyou

When Spring Festival comes, people will pay special attention to the news about Spring Festival gala, they get used to watching it every year, the director will take a long time to prepare for it. Every piece of news about the gala will become the hot topic, Spring Festival gala has become part of people’s life, even the tradition.

当春节到来的时候，人们会格外注重有关春晚的消息，他们习惯了每年看春晚，导演也会花很长的时间来准备。每则有关春晚的消息都会成为焦点新闻，春晚已经成为了人们生活的一部分，甚至成为传统。

Since our parents’ generation, Spring Festival gala holds every year in the eve of Spring Festival, after eating the dinner, the families get together and watch the gala. As the development of the TV program, the traditional show has faced many challenges, the young generation is not that into the Spring Festival gala, but it still attracts people’s attention and keeps the highest audience rating.

从我们父母那一代开始，在每年的新年前夜，春晚都会播放，在吃完晚饭后，家人聚集在一起，观看这个晚会。随着电视节目的发展，传统的节目面临了很多挑战，年轻一代并不是那么的喜欢春晚，但是它仍然吸引了很多人的注意，并且保持着最高的收视率。

The popularity of the gala shows that it has become the tradition, people get used to watching it, if this show is cancelled, we will feel something is missing in our life. In fact, the meaning of the gala gives people a chance to get united and enjoy the time with their families.

春晚的受欢迎展示了它已经成为传统，人们习惯了收看，如果这个节目被取消了，我们会感到生活中似乎流逝了什么东西。事实上，晚会的意义在于给人们提供了一个团结，和家人欢度时光的机会。

[描写春晚的英文作文

I have a lovely dog. Its name is YoYo. I like it very much. It has two big ears， two big and bright eyes. Its hair is brown. It has come to my home for a year. It has become a part of my family. It has its own house， but it likes to sleep under my bed， play in my house. I like talking to it， because its a friend worth of trusting. I would like to share my happy things with it. When I am sad， talking to it makes me feel good. I am happy to have such a lovely friend.

我有一只可爱的小狗，它的名字叫悠悠，我很喜欢它.它有两只大耳朵，两只明亮的大眼睛.它的毛是棕色的.它来我家已经有一年了.它成为了我家的一部分.它有自己的房子，但是它喜欢睡在我的床底下，在我的房间玩.我很喜欢和它聊天，因为我觉得它是一个值得信赖的朋友.我喜欢和它分享开心的事.当我难过的时候，和它聊天使我感觉舒服.我很高兴有这样一个可爱的朋友.

生活中，人海茫茫，世事万千。唯有万里挑一寻觅独属于自己的方式，方可径行直遂，收获最终胜利的果实。

分组编排舞蹈是形体课的最终考核。为了用心完成舞蹈，我们决定运用独有的创新方式，编排出一支独创惊羡的舞蹈。

其他组都在匆匆讨论后千篇一律地选择跳健美操，可我在观看她们排练后发现这舞种怎能体现我们的原创。于是，我们将舞种选定为带有民族元素的现代舞。

学校里，听同学们谈论她们要运用哪首歌曲，模仿哪个视频，我不屑，想以自己独创舞和曲的方式超越她们。放学后，几个女孩便冲出教室，来到排练厅稍加热身，跃跃欲试。我打开电脑中的音乐编辑界面，播放背景乐曲，让组员们“试音”，跟着节奏舞动。接着，我便反复斟酌，不时根据组员们的表现对音乐进行剪辑：这里节奏变缓些，那里反复这个八拍，间奏时再编进一段泉声……就这样，经过无数次的修改调试，我们的独创音乐也“新鲜出炉”。相较于他组，由于是经过个性化调整创作的舞曲，我们因此对音乐节奏更加熟悉，也更加适应，有益于下一步的排练舞蹈。对此，我引以为傲，信心倍增。

接下来的动作编排，我摒弃了其他同学先排后练却因不断修改而拖慢进度的方案，运用了自己的方式：边排边练。对着镜子，我耐心地手把手教着组员基本步伐，与此同时，脑海中源源不断地涌出新的动作组合，并依据组员的不同程度适当调整，从而达到最佳效果。望着组员们早已汗水淋漓却依旧认真练舞的身影，感受着组内互帮互助其乐融融的编舞氛围，喜悦涌上心头，仿佛这方式早已助我赢取胜利。

终于，到了最终展示的时刻。我们在台上一字排开，身着靓丽的舞衣，心中默念着节拍，动作行云流水，表现堪称完美。不出意外，我们的舞蹈令大家耳目一新，获得大家的一致好评，得到了最高的分数。

演出过后，心中的愉悦喜形于色。这心中的喜悦不仅仅是因最终的成功，还因这原创的舞蹈注入了我们的无数心血，更因这胜利肯定了我的方式。正是这原创的方式使我们从别组抄袭的舞蹈中脱颖而出，使我们径行直遂获得胜利。我有我的方式，这独树一帜的风格令我收获喜悦与胜利！

Panda is familiar by more and more people as the development of Internet.

Now people can see the live show from the Internet. These lovely angels are

favored by the fans from all over the world. What they do in the daily life

makes people laugh out loudly. No one can resist the charm from these angels.

But it is known to all that panda is dying out, because it is not easy for them

to get birth to the new babies. What’s more, people damage the environment,

which makes panda lose their home. We can do small things to protect them. When

we go to the zoo, we should not throw away the rubbish and keep quiet, in the

purpose of not to disturb these lovely creature. We love panda, it is our duty

to protect them from dying out.

"Paddington bear" is the weinstein companys 2014 production reality animation films.Film directed by Paul Kim, Ben visa, nicole kidman and Hugh shaw bonnet Willie, Sally Hawkins, etc.The story of the film revolves around a young bear Peru, story tells the story of this only like to eat jam bear lost after landing in London from dark Peru, a series of special experience and human story.Film on November 28, 20** in the UK premiere, on March 5, 20** in mainland China.

时间流逝的飞快，时代的变迁也随之而变化着。每天早晨睁开眼映入的第一缕阳光是崭新的一天在向你打招呼。可能你还在转角的咖啡厅静坐，当你还看着老电影听着老歌，回味昨夜的梦的时候，时间的锯齿在反复不停地转动，每天都给你呈现一个不一样的世界。就这样，一个新时代也悄然而至。

随着这样一个共享时代的推进，人们把大部分的东西都变成了公共产物，让我影响最深刻的还是共享单车。第一次听到“共享”这个词大概是在一年前。那个时候共享单车的安置点才刚刚开始安装，朋友圈里就已经在疯狂的转发有关共享单车的视频和图文。现在的人环保意识越来越强，生怕城市空气越来越差，最后危及到自己的生命，共享单车也因此深得人们的喜爱。几个月后，单车正式开启使用，每天上学路上会经过两个安置点，常常看到的是每个安置点上的车所剩无几。那时候的新闻中总会播出许多有关人们好于使用共享单车，有序使用共享单车的报道，我也常能在朋友圈里看到一些亲朋好友会晒出骑着单车去附近郊游吃饭的照片。人们在那时总以为我们可以再这样一个“共享时代”中有序融洽的生活。但后来的事实给了我们一个重重的巴掌。

之后的日子里单车数量逐渐增多，那增多的速度完全可以用“疯狂”一词来形容也不为过。而且这增加的大部分单车都是没有指定的放置点的，属于自由停放。把这样的福利放在那些制度严格、尽然有序的国家，那一定能还算是“福利”，但是放在中国这简直就是一场“灾难”。为什么说是灾难，这也不是无依无据的。只要每天在马路上进进出出就一定能看到这样一个现象：各种各样的共享单车被横七竖八的仍在路边，有一些竖立起摆放的算是停靠，而更多的是倒下的，甚至有些单车的坐垫也不知去向了。这只是你看到的一部分，那么另外一部分为什么看不到了呢？因为有一些人把他们放进了自己的家中，你当然就看不到了。他们把共享单车从公共产物变成了私自占有的东西，那这样“共享”二字还有什么意义？共享是指公共享用，也就是说每个人都有使用的权利，但他没有资格将它占为己有。所以说将其占为己有的行为是不被允许的，而造成这种结果的原因又是什呢？就像鲁迅先生说过“世上本没有路，走的人多了，也便有了路。”那我想说世上本没有人会有这种想法，一旦有人这么做了，其他人也会跟着这样做。

人们喜欢共享时代给我们带来的便利，同时也厌恶共享时代造成的秩序混乱。有人会说这两者不是矛盾的吗？对！没有错，的确矛盾。要解决这个矛盾靠的不完全是政府机构的明文规定，不是他人的强力限制，而是我们每一个人的自觉遵守。共享时代的推进只有我们每一个人都把当初开拓的初衷理念牢记于心，才能共享。而不是造成像现在这样的一片混乱不堪的景象。还是那句话“世上本没有路，走的人多了。”

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

Yruesday January lst Sunny

Its New Years Day today. This morning when I got up, I heardsomebody

singing a love song. It was mum! Ifelt very strange because Iknew mum didnt

enjoy popular songs. And I didnt think it was suitable formy middle-aged mother

to sing any love songs. Whats more, dad wasfollowing what mum was singing.

"What had happened to them?" Then Inoticed a box with a small card on the table.

I got close to it carefully andunderstood then. As a matter of fact, it was

their 15th marriage anniversarytoday. Thats why they were so happy. When seeing

their happiness, I alsofelt happy.

It is known to all that today the environment has been badly polluted.

Though many action have been taken to protect our environment, it still has a

long way to go. Two years ago, I went to middle school, and the first moment I

saw the environment, I found that trees were very small, and many workers were

busy planting trees. Now, when I looked around our school, the trees were taller

than people and they grew so fast. People always talk about planting trees but

less of them can take action. If they plant trees immediately, then there would

be more green scenery. Protecting the environment is not just words. We should

take action right now.

My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He

works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his

lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often

helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very

busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me

but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often

play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us,

everyone in our class likes him.