减压方式英文作文（汇编20篇）

Moving old freight car came, those who stop in my home is downstair. A few blue, dirty old freight car is stopping shipshapely, father is directing a worker to move furniture and goods. Our old building is too old, was forced to take away. At that time, I just am controlled 6 years old, at the back of see a few workers put one pile empty cabinet, empty shelf into old freight car, my heart thinks: Really amused, can play hide feline cat ah! I look around all around: Ground of father without a stop is being directed, bead brandish is aspersing the sweat with big beans; Mom has baled the dress that leave terribly defeatedly. Nobody notices me, I am stepping on a piece of small table, climbed the jian hou mian of van, get into an ordinary little cupboard, had closed the door, foolish the ground is laughing. Passed a little while, listen to a worker to say only: Be installed, go.the rear cover door of van was shut, I am foolish still foolish is the jian hou mian that the ground crouchs in van what kind of outside the illusion. Passed a little while again, air is heated up again frowzily again, I opened cupboard door, see only all around inky, outside faint the sound that transmits father motherhello, where is her person? how can I know? Be you look at?... just began, I still feel especially amused, laugh persistently, but do not have with a bit activity sultrily more and more as airy outside, Wow wow!I cried. Later, one moves a thing slow when the worker is opening lid, just mereleasecome out, see sky and father mother, I just arrive cheerfully to take candy at the same time again.

[关于童年趣事的英文作文

Saving Water

As we know， water is so important to man. Theamount of water which is

suitable to drink is less and less. But somepeople don’t care about it. They

waste a lot of water in their dailylife. Even worse， they pour dirty water and

throw rubbish into rivers.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be doneto stop the pollution(to deal with the problem). And

I think it’s agreat shame to waste while millions are in great need of

water.Wehave to save every drop of water. For example， turn off the tap

afterusing it and use a basin to wash as well. It’s also a good idea to

encouragemy friends and family members to join me! Only in this way can we

livehappily. If not， the last drop of water will be the tear.

I believe if everyone dose like this， we can make agreat difference.

An October Sunrise 十月的日出

I was up the next morning be fore the October sunrise, and away through the wild and the woodland. The rising of the sun was noble in the cold and warmth of it peeping down the spread of light, he raised his shoulder heavily over the edge of grey mountain and wavering length of upland. Beneath his gaze the dew-fogs dipped, and crept to crept to the hollow places; then stole away in line and column, holding skirts, and clinging subtly at the sheltering corners where rock hung over grassland, while the brave lines of the hills came forth, one beyond other gliding.

The woods arose in folds, like drapery of awakened mountains, stately with a depth of awe, and memory of the tempests. Autumn’s mellow hand was upon them, as they owned already, touched with gold and red and olive, and their joy towards the sun was less to a bridegroom than a father.

Yet before the floating impress of the woods could clear it self, suddenly the gladsome light leaped over hill and valley, casting amber, blue, and purple, and a tint of rich red rose; according to the scene they lit on, and the curtain flung around; yet all alike dispelling fear and the cloven hoof of darkness, all on the wings of hope advancing, and proclaiming, “God is here!” then life and joy sprang reassured from every crouching hollow; every flower, and bud and bird had a fluttering sense of them; and all the flashing of God’s gaze merged into soft beneficence.

So, perhaps, shall break upon us that eternal morning, when crag and chasm shall be no more, neither hill and valley, nor great unvintaged ocean; but all things shall arise, and shine in the light of the Father’s countenance, because itself is risen.

随着语文考试制度的改革，作文占据了语文教学的半壁江山，小学作文批改方法。以下是“小学作文批改的多种方式及效果”希望能够帮助的到您！

一、作文批改的现状分析

语文教师要培养学生的写作能力，这是毫无疑问的。但是，需不需要培养学生批改作文的能力，看法就不一致了。传统的作文批改方法是教师全批全改，精批细改。这种方法至少有两大弊害：一是教师疲于奔命，二是学生受益甚微。学生作文教师批改，学生始终处于被动的客体地位。“这表现在作文批改上，批改时只顾到学生作的文，却忘了作文的学生。他们看见错的就改，认为多余的就删，认为不足的就补，甚至整段地重写。可是，很少考虑学生为什么错，为什么要这样写，他想说的究竟是什么，他为什么说不清楚。评语或是称赞或是批评，大多比较空泛，对学生甲说的也可以写到学生乙的作文本上”（叶圣陶《序跋集》第200页）。学生始终处于被动的“受领者”的地位，试想，这样的批改，对学生有什么好处呢？

其次，教师对学生作文的批改，大多数是“背对背”的。教师在办公室批改时发扬愚公移山的精神，默默地“挖山”不止；而学生早已把作文内容忘到“爪哇国”去了。于是乎，作文批改收不到实效，教师的“精批细改”纯属无效劳动，“一江春水”只得付诸东流了。还有一个不争的事实，就是从小学到初中，教师批改的作文不知其数，但真正受益的学生又有几个呢？鉴于此，我们应该从开始写作文就培养学生自己修改作文的能力，尽快地改革作文批改的现状，变“背对背”的“暗中摸索”为“面对面”的“明中探索”，采用多种方式让学生亲自参予到作文批改中来。习作评改应是师生情感交流的桥梁，也是学生通过多种反馈对自己的文章作出较为正确审视的一个过程。

因此，习作评改的方式应是开放的，多元的。师评师改，自评自改，互评互改……都应随机采用。教师要想方设法创设和谐开放的评改氛围，让每一个学生都有参与评改的机会。

二、作文批改的若干方式

（一）、眉批，激活灵感

所谓眉批，主要解决评价文章的局部性问题，对字、词、句、标点或段落

等方面的优缺点进行提示、说明、分析、评定，联系实例给学生提供具体的帮助指导。

学生作文中有错别字或有些句子不通顺，教师就去帮学生一一修改，让学生订正在本子上，然后打上个“良”，写上“本文能抓住重点，突出中心，可错别字、病句多”等之类的评语——这是教师们一般修改作文的方法。遇到很多语句不通顺，错别字又多的作文，教师想帮他批改，就觉得非动全篇不可——每个错字替他改，每句不通顺的话要替他修——这就是老师最头疼的作文。改下来，学生作文面目全非，教师付出太多。

其实，我们又何必如此修改作文，让自己感觉头疼呢？我们何不发挥一下眉批的作用呢？不管是字句通顺的还是字句不通顺的作文，我们都先通篇浏览一下，看看内容符不符合写作要求，如果符合，我们就再重新阅读一遍，发现优美的句子或用得准确生动的词，就用红笔标注出来，再在旁边写上激励性评语：“佳句！”、“好词！”如果有错别字或哪个句子不通顺，我们也用红笔标注，再在旁边注上：“换个词好吗？”、“有错别字！”或“请疏通一下句子！”这类提示性批语。发现有好的过渡句或好的中心句，也用红笔画出，写上“此过渡句用得好！”或“此句子点明中心，效果很好！”之类批语，然后写上评语。发下去后，指导学生根据教师的眉批自行修正，再通过展示台抽一些学生上来汇报他们的修正结果即可。例如：凉爽的夏风吹（1）开了夜的面纱，沉淀了一天的暑气在黑夜里散尽，迎接新一天曙光的是习习凉爽的夏风（2）。大地万物都起得格外早，它们要抓住这美好的夏晨好好地享受一番，那在微风中微微舞动的树叶配上玫瑰红的朝阳，那宛若脸颊般红润柔美的红（3）云，就是一幅绝好的风景画，难道你不为之陶醉吗？改为：（1）将“吹”改为“撩”，“撩开…面纱”，动宾搭配，写出夏天的变幻神奇。（2）这里加上“如果你站到阳台上面对着朝霞沐浴在晨风中再来个深呼吸，那种清凉舒爽的感觉定会叫你心旷神怡”一句，与下文中的“享受”相照应。（3）“红”改为“彩”，避免重复写出多种颜色。

这样批改老师又怎会觉得头疼呢？其实，我们教师根本没有必要每个错字、每个病句都替学生修改，你只要指出文章的优缺点，然后指导学生来修正就可以达到轻松、有效的效果。再说这类学生他们本身就不怎么懂写作文，如果教师再在他的本子上圈一大堆错字、错句，写上批评的语言，那他们就会觉得自己真的很不行，自卑心理日渐加重，对写作就会越来越害怕，这种“批改”不但苦了教师自己，使教师增加烦恼，也不符合“人文”教育的要求。所以，我们教师批改作文，要充分发挥眉批的作用。

（二）、自改互批，汲取精华

1.自改作文，锤炼能力

这是最基本最直接的批改方式，在完成作文后由学生进行自批自评。学生自改的方法能将批改的权力最大限度的下放给学生，使学生变被动为主动，成为批改的主人。叶圣陶十分重视学生的自改，他说：“改与作关系密切，改的优先权应该属于作文的本人，所以我想，作文教学要着重在培养学生自改的能力。”②叶老还曾一再强调：“假如着重培养学生自己改的能力，教师只给些引导和指导，该怎么改让学生自己去考虑去决定，学生不就处于主动地位了吗？养成自己改的能力，这是终身受用的。”“作了文又能自己改，不用请别人改，这就经常处于主动地位，岂不是好？”③ 的确自改能让学生用自己的双手，用自己的头脑，用自己的语言，用自己的方式去体会批改的乐趣，从而在快乐中提高自己的作文水平。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。如要求学生把自己写作时认为写得最好的句子加上划线，让老师批改时注意。再如对格式的修改，基础分为60分（即能交作文的都有此分数），只要求对格式写得正确与否进行批改，正确的则可得满分；又如错别字的修改，也是在基础分60分的基础上，整篇没有出现错别字的可得满分，2个扣4分，4个扣10分，如此类推，扣20分就不再扣。这样操作简单，学生的写作积极性不易受打击，批改的兴趣也会随批改的次数增加而增加，最后养成良好的自我修改习惯。

这种方式的缺点是由于学生的水平有限，学生的写作能力、赏析能力、批改能力尚浅，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。

2．互改作文，集思广益

互批，这是一种同学间交换批改的方式。这种方式简单易行。在批改前是由教师定出批改的范围，然后同学之间进行批改。这样的批改可以使同学之间及时交换批改意见，正如教师的面批作文一样，当遇到不理解、不明白的地方时，可以立刻与作者商量，研究其写作的初衷、意图，达到更有利的批改目的。这种方式可以在一定程度上克服自改的缺陷，它可以通过同学间的互改互相促进，互相提高。具体而言，有以下优点：第一，经过多次批改实践，学生不仅准确地记住了写作文的基本要求，而且对这些要求理解得越来越深刻。他会指导别人应该怎样写，不应该怎样写，自然也增强了自己的写作能力。第二，每个人都有机会看到多名同学的作文，这样容易发现、学习别人的长处。别人的缺点短处，自己引以为戒，也是好事，学生的思想多了一个相互交流，开放的机会。第三，每次批改作文，每人只批一本，负担不重，每次又都抽签换人，批改的人有新鲜感，有兴趣。每位同学的作文，每次又都换一位同学批，看不同的同学对自己的批语，当然也有新鲜感。这种新鲜感，有利于培养学生批改作文的兴趣和看别人批语的兴趣。第四，批改作文时，学生站在批改者的角度，进入教师的角色思考问题，有利于增强学生的心理适应能力、心理平衡能力、角色互换能力，促进学生心理走向成熟。第五，教师只抽查翻阅一部分同学的批改结果，在短时间内看多篇作文，有利于教师比较思考，且保持较浓厚的阅读兴趣，容易激发教师的智力潜能与创造潜能。还可将节省的大量用笔批改的时间，用于研究学生心理，研究学习方法，进一步提高教书育人的效率。

这种方法的缺点同样是由于学生的水平有限，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生身上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。如果互改的有一方不认真对待，效果也会打折扣。

组改，这是一种分小组批改作文的方式。作文批改是一种阅读，是一种心灵的沟通、交流，是一种享受，更是一种提高。因此，学生的参与意识不容忽视。把学生推到写作的另一前沿阵地——修改，使其在互相批改中认真切磋，取长补短。孔子云：“三人行，必有我师焉。”④这种方式鼓励学生积极参与，激起学生“为师”的欲望，引发作文批改的兴趣，并出示自己创作中的部分手稿，营造一种积极向上的气氛。这种作文批改方式要注意每组发放一定数量的学生作文，在一定的时间完成批改任务。数量不宜太多，否则学生无法完成任务，又影响批改的质量。起初，可让小组学生在一课时内批改两篇作文，往后可适当增加。这样的小组互批互改活动它还可以为学生提供互相学习的机会，有利于培养学生团队合作的精神，有利于培养学生探索问题的能力，有利于培养学生认真负责的态度，养成良好的书写习惯。 “学习如春起之苗，不见其增，日有所长”，学生在互相批改中渐渐形成了浓厚的作文兴趣，悟出一些作文之道来，会获得出人意料的效果。这种角色互换，还可以使他们切身体会到批改文章的甘苦，进而更加尊重教师的劳动。同时，也把教师从令人头晕的“劳役”中解脱出来。

上述三种作文批改的方式有一点必须注意，就是在让学生批改作文以前要教给学生作文批改的方法，学生应该从哪些方面进行作文批改呢？魏书生认为应要求学生从以下十个方面教给学生作文批改的方法：

（1）、格式是否正确  刚开始，使学生感到写作文，批作文都不难。随随便便地写，老师只要求同学们作文的格式正确，批改作文时只写一条关于格式的批语。批作文的时候要抽签，谁都有可能抽到全班任何一个人的。抽到人家的作文本，打开作文一看，格式没锗，便拿出红笔，写上批语：1．格式正确。批文用减分法，此项倘不减分，此文则为满分，然后签上批改人的尊姓大名。

（2）、卷面是否整洁  显然这一条又是大家都能看得出来的。后进学生批改别人作文，指出卷面不整洁时，下次自己写作文也注意卷面了。

（3）、错别字几个  发现错字，要将错字在原文处打上标记，并且写到批语处，再在后面写上正字。有的粗心的同学错字挑不出来，怎么办？我们就搞流水作业：每人要批四篇文，每篇文要经过甲、乙、丙、丁4个人之手。甲批错别字六个，乙发现本文错别字不是6个，而是7个，那么甲就要对为什么漏掉这个错别字写出一百字的说明书。丙发现本文错字是八个，那么甲、乙同学都要被追究责任，各追加一百字的说明书。学生批改之后，我还要抽查，重点抽查那些粗心的同学。这样使粗心的同学也认真起来，批改的时候，手里抱着大字典，唯恐漏掉了错别字。发现错别字，每两个扣1分，最多扣5分。10个以上也不再多扣，但要一一给予指正。

（4）、有几处病句  挑出一篇作文中的病句，凡病句，都要在下面划上横线，写出病在何处，再在文后批语中，写清病句几处。每处病句减1分，减至5分，不再多减。

（5）、标点符号有几处明显错误  强调句号、引号、叹号、问号的使用。发现明显错误的地方，有一处扣一分，有五处扣五分，超过五处，不再多扣。

以上五条，都是写文章最低的要求，学生经过三、四篇文章的批改实践，就能够掌握。再批改两三篇，掌握得比较熟练了，再一条一条地增加新的要求。

（6）、看文章的中心是否鲜明、集中  这两点在作文指导时，就具体举例，告诉学生什么叫鲜明、集中。学生批改之前，老师先大致看几篇文章，在进行批改指导时，又简介两篇好的文章，再举两篇中心不突出，不集中的例文，学生从老师举的正反两方面的例文，举一反三，就能批得符合实际。

（7）、看文章的选材  这条批语提三点要求：①是否围绕中心。②是否符合生活实际。③是否具有典型性。这三点中最要紧的是第一点，随着作文水平的提高，才提出选材具有典型性的要求。  （8）、看文章的结构

就结构而言，也要写清三点批语：①层次段落是否清晰。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。

（9）、看表达方式  主要看其是否符合文章体裁的要求，记叙文以记叙为主，说明文以说明为主，议论文当然以议论为主。除此之外，还要看其是否符合作文指导的要求。如写记叙文《他进步了》，要求夹叙夹议，本文是不是做到了。写说明文《芦苇》，要求说明中有描写的成份，文中有没有适量的描写。写散文《家乡赞》，要求记叙、议论、抒情相结合，文中结合得怎么样。

（10）看语言是否简练、通顺、准确  语言不简练，重复、罗嗦者酌情扣分，此项不超过二分。语言不通顺，不是指有病句，而是指句与句之间衔接不连贯者，扣分也不超过二分。

后五条要求，每条5分，不做太具体的减分规定，由批改人酌情处理。每个人都要在作文本上写出5个方面的批语，一般情况一篇作文的批语都在100字以上。我参照实行后，我认为是行之有效的，广大同仁不妨试一试。

（三）、“评”“ 改”有别，学生因材施教

1.优秀生着重“评”

贯彻因材施教原则，在作文评改上，应根据学生作文的差异，有所区别，侧重对待，即个性化批改。优秀生以“评”为主，中差生以“改”为主。这是因为优秀生作文有了一定的基础，需要锦上添花。教师应在文章的立意、结构等写作方法这些有一定难度的方面提高要求，给予指导。选评优秀生作文，把它作为“突破口”，它可以起到牵一发动全身的作用。兴趣是最好的老师，每次讲评都要增换新的学生名单，逐渐扩大优秀面。为了培养这部分学生的作文兴趣和能力，还要积极组织他们开展作文课外活动，如办作文园地，开展作文竞赛，编优秀作文选，读书评报，写观察日记，给报刊投稿等，让成就感长久坚定学生习作的信心。

2.学困生着重“改”

研究差生作文差的原因，不难发现他们主要差在知识能力上的不足。而且这种不足非一日形成，久而久之，产生了“怕作文、作文难”的心理状态。要想提高差生作文水平，克服这种心态是前提，其次是给他们具体帮助，应在最基础的选材、写具体、字词句的训练上多给予帮助，使他们走出作文困境。对待差生作文，主要是面批面改。针对主要缺点，一学期每个学生只需批改2次。最初面稍大，逐渐形成宝塔形。面批面改力求做到：一是严，逐词逐句，从不马虎；二是爱，让学生感受到老师的真诚，不歧视，有耐性，善于发现他们进步的点滴火花，给予鼓励。改后作文不免写上几句“你进步了，难能可贵”“祝贺你进步了，你是有能力写好作文的”等之类热情鼓励的话。寥寥数语，往往起到难以置信的作用；三是评，教师要使自己的评语具有感染力，公式化、千篇一律的句式是不会引起学生兴趣的，要使评语具有感染力，就须形成个性化的评语，在评语中 融入 老师饱满的激情。故而评语应少一些教化，多一些引导，形成有针对性，有亲和力的评价，既抓学生作文中的闪光点进行肯定，又抓存在问题进行引导，使每一次评语如一次亲切的交谈和情感的沟通，让学生感受到老师对他的关注，带动学生关注自己的作文；四是奖，奖项面对学生，指向习作过程，力求让学生经过一定努力都能获奖，因而奖项的设置应类型丰富。如“个性奖”颁给文风别具一格、表达独特的同学，“进步奖”颁给进步明显的同学，“创新奖”颁给构思巧妙的同学……

3.师生评促成长

作文的批改、讲评，如果光是老师的专利，这对培养学生的作文能力不利。 叶圣陶 先生说：“‘改的优先权应该属于作文者本人，所以作文教学要着重培养学生自己改的能力。”批改之后，老师们已注意让学生尝试修改自己的作文，但是力度还不够，还要进一步开放作文评改的途径，让学生真正参与评改。每一次选取一定数量的作文，进行小组评改。

评改时，以学习小组为单位，组长负责组织学生评改作文。先由小作者朗读自己的习作，其他学生听，听后再由组长组织组员对小作者的文章进行修改、评判。评价的方式可以活泼一些，比如：达到本次习作的某点要求可以摘取一颗星星；未达到要求的可以通过再次修改自己的习作以获取星星。利用激励的方式，让学生感到跳一跳就能摘到“苹果”，促使人人争当“五星级”作文的作者。还可以适当地让学生来讲评作文，方式可以是学生上讲台，推荐自己认为优秀的作文（包括推荐自己的），先朗读这篇优秀习作，再谈习作的成功之处，也可谈要改进的地方。

在讲评中，老师尽量起组织作用，少将自己的观点强加于学生，真正的让学生成为讲评的主角，以评促写，以评激发学生写作兴趣，通过讲评使学生获得作文的愉悦感。这样个性化的作文评价能集众之长、补己之短，各得其所，能发现甚至挖掘出学生作文的很多闪光点，能充分调动学生的积极性，进一步激发学生的写作兴趣，有利于培养学生的创新意识和创造性思维。然而个性化作文评价并不是一味的说好话，它还包括有针对性地指出作文中的不足，可以是立意方面的，也可以是一两个词语运用方面的等等，有针对性的个性化评价自然让学生能更清楚地了解自己，从而更快地发展自己。

其实上述作文批改方式在作文教学实践中不是孤立的，作文批改可根据批改的目的不同进行优选，灵活使用，综合运用。总之，怎样做有实效，就怎样批改。作文批改含有“批”和“改”两层意思。“改在要害处，批在筋节上”，改其当所改，批其所当批。要清楚地认识到，提高学生作文水平，关联到多方面知识和技能，决不是单纯依靠作文课，在短期内就可立即奏效的。要加大课外阅读和社会实践，培养高尚健康的情趣，学会正确分析事物的方法。只有这样，才能切实有效地提高学生作文能力。而作文批改的方式远远不止上面所列举的那些，只要广大语文老师在作文教学中不断探索创新，就会发现更多行之有效的方法。

A Sports meet运动会

The sports meet of our university was held on a charming spring day.The stand around the playground was packed with spectators.Firt came the parade of the opening ceremony.Athletes walked into the field in orderly arrays.After the opening address was delivered,the athletes withdrew.Then there was a performance of group callisthenics.

The contests and races of track and field events were exciting.The runners of 100 metre race dashed to the terminal point.The winner took the lead only by a small fraction of second.A boy athlete gave a javelin a lorceful throw.It shot across the sky and arrived at a point far ahead of the former record.A girl athlete,in a long distance race,stumbled over the foot of another athlete and fell down.She rose to her feet,clenched her teeth,and continued her running.The most attractive is the relay race that was so intense that all spectators cheered,hailed and applaused.

The sports meet was over.Our athletes not only gained a good harvest of prizes,but also strengthened their body and tempered their will.

在迷人的春季我们学校举行了一场运动会，操场上挤满了观众，首先举行的是开幕式典礼。运动员们井然有序的在操场上排着队列， 开幕词发表之后运动员退出，团体操表演随之进行。

在比赛中田径比赛是令人兴奋的，百米赛跑运动员都奋力奔向终点，冠军仅以一秒只差领先。运动员中的一个扔标枪的小男孩，标枪划破天空远超越始前记录。在长跑比赛中，一个女孩绊了另一个运动员的脚摔倒了，她站起身咬咬牙继续比赛。最吸引人的接力赛跑让全场观众欢呼雀跃。

运动会结束了，运动员们不仅获得了好成绩，更锻炼了自己的神态和意志。

[运动会英文作文

Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus.It is about thirty miles from the city.We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.

As soon as we got there,we began to climb up the mountains.How great the sight is!We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty,peaeefulness and loveliness.There are hundreds of mountains,one after another.there are magnificent cliffs,one above another.We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily.As the sun was going down,we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill,where we had a big dinner,and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.

Before daybreak,we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark.Unaware of the cold wind,we stood motionlessly,with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east.Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky.As the redness deepened,some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky,dividing heaven from the earth.Just at this moment,up from the brightening far east rose the sun.It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes.and a slight applause from us.the amazed spectators,rang through the peak.Up,up it rose,adding to itself strength and glory at every step.It dazzled with vigour,driving away darkness,cold,and misery from the earth,and bring light,warmth,and happiness to men.

We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.

Hello everybody, my name is xx. Is the xx school students. Very pleased to be able to participate in the Expo volunteers interview, also very grateful to the school for giving me this opportunity and hope through this interview, so I can become a glorious and sacred Expo volunteers.

In my mind, a new generation of young volunteers are responsible and dedicated, without asking, a symbol of selfless dedication.

As a professional student exhibition, the first day of school I took my Expo tight, organic link, looking forward to one day into the Expo, more profound, more direct understanding of the Expo.

Now I have the opportunity near the Expo, more eager I am able to participate as a volunteer in the Expo, I will use what I learned, the enthusiasm for the World Expo services, and through my efforts, to our great, Beautiful China has shown in front of the world, and let the world understand China, love China.

I believe I am capable volunteers for the job. Sincerely look forward to receive the honor. Thank you!

My name is XXX， is set in Shanghai xx in the language school， is now Chinas Shanghai world expo exhibition center 201x professional docent.

Came to the exhibition center already has a years time， once I am also a demonstration center volunteers， actually I have been as a volunteer herself. Volunteers there is sense of responsibility， has the sense of mission; Thanked， selfless dedication. Work， although some people would say， also get the same salary each month， do more and less alike. But， for the audience to introduce more， every day looking at them look forward to the expos eyes， I can understand this is not a boring thing.

Very honored to be the first anniversary of the opening in the center of the display， I earned for the narrator gold medal. Received in the past year as the kingdom of the Netherlands ministry of economic affairs minister， minister of the ministry of culture of the republic of Mali and nanjing military region is chief heads and yangzhou municipal party committee secretary of the VIP， leadership， etc. But left the deepest impression is of a blind girl， I will let her on her hands every exhibit touch， she is in the heart. When talking about the story of Helen Keller， I clearly see the persistence and light in her eyes... I think this is what I work value.

In work， I also have some disadvantages， such as too impetuous. Once， in the course of the interpretation of a live audience too much or dont follow the order， and easily excited， sometimes even impact on the quality. Therefore I was a good reflection， strive for patience， careful， enthusiastic， in the work， only in this way they can better the expo.

Next year， now my biggest wish is to have a good job in the expo park service， participate in the event， whether as a volunteer or to the identity of the staff. Believe that the 201X on October 31， the evening， China announced to the world that we held a successful， splendid and unforgettable world expo， and I can proudly say: 201X， I am the part of a successful， splendid and unforgettable!

Joy depicts the crisis of faith that overes Rabbi Banish of Komarov， who， having buried his four sons and two daughters. Only through the mercy of the God he has denied， manifest in a radiant vision of the dead Rebecca， his beloved youngest daughter， is the rabbi’s belief restored. The sense of wonder and the touch of heavenly joy that linger after the vision dissolves convince Rabbi Banish of the folly of judging God’s actions by human standards. The rabbi has interpreted the apparent tragedy of his children’s premature deaths as evidence of God’s alienation， forgetting that God is by definition inscrutable. That God’s purpose transcends man’s ability to prehend it is made clear to the expiring rabbi when the family dead approach his deathbed with arms outstretched to enfold him among them. For theirs is the kingdom of heaven to which a loving God has called them; and their deaths have evidenced not God’s wrath but his grace.

A version of Rabbi Banish’s deathbed revelation appears to Rabbi Nechemia in Something Is There. At twenty-seven he is already racked by the doubts that torment Rabbi Banish. So shaken is his belief in God that he deserts his rabbinical post in provincial Bechev for the flesh-posts of Warsaw. Although the prostitutes， unclean food， and shady business dealings which he witnesses there hold no attraction for the erstwhile rabbi， they intensify his revulsion from the world created by God and therefore his alienation from God himself. Unlike Rabbi Bainish， whose intimations of immortality and consequent rededication to God precede his radiant deathbed vision， Rabbi Nechemia cannot allay his doubts until the very moment of death， when a light he never knew was there flickered in hid brain.

While his dying words—something is there—resolve his crisis of faith， they e too late to affect the spiritual renewal attained by Rabbi Banish. No explicit promise of immortality， let along of salvation， attends Rabbi Nechemia’s vision. Perhaps grace is accorded Rabbi Banish because his doubt is triggered by devastating personal losses， and withheld from Rabbi Nechemia because his despair is the bitter fruit of idle speculation about the unknown. Whatever the reason， relatively few of Singer’s characters are granted at the moment of death the transcendent vision of unity between man and God that appears to Rabbi Banish in Joy. For the fortunate few， release from time into eternity is affected by a divine visitation which obliterates distinctions between past and present， living and dead.

These kinds of characters are lost in their world because of the seducement of the material world. They doubt their formal faith and gradually give up what they believed. But after they have experienced so much hardship， they realize that they cannot adapt to the life of the outer world so they regress to the former life with formal faith. They realize the importance of God and they begin to think seriously about the relationship between man and God. At last they find their right way of their life.

Dear Lucy,

I am sorry to hear that you are feeling upset because of some problems met during studying Chinese. You said that you would feel nervous when facing this language and you did bad in listening. You couldnt improve your oral Chinese and you found it difficult to communicate with your classmates in Chinese.Well, dont worry. I will give you some suggestions. Firstly, like English, Chinese is a language,which we learn to communicate. So you need to practice speaking in Chinese as often as possible,which will help to improve your oran Chinese and improve your sense of the language. Secondly, you can listen to Chinese radio program,for this is a very useful way to improve your listening ability. Thirdly, be brave enough to make some Chinese friends.Close friendship will help you learn this language well. And doing some reading will help you learn more. I hope these can help you.

Best wishes!

yours,

Wang Xia

In the three days trip in Shenzhen， I was interested in the central and southern part of the city， which are the heavens for most visitors。

在深圳旅行的三天，我对市中心以及城市的南部感兴趣，这是对大多数游客的天堂。

I started my trip at the East Gate Shopping Mall。 This area is a fascinating shopping center。 On the two sides of the streets， there are different shops selling all kinds of commodities。 Almost everything was on sale， so I bought a lot of souvenirs for my friends。 After that， I went to visit Diwang Building， the symbol of Shenzhen。 It looks so tall and grand。 It has 69 storeys。 As you are on the top of the building， you can overlook the whole city。

我的旅程是在东门购物中心开始的。这是一个令人着迷的购物中心。在街道的两侧，在不同的商店里出售着各种各样的商品。几乎所有的东西都很便宜，所以我买了很多纪念品给我的朋友。在那之后，我去了地王大厦，那是深圳的象征。它看起来是那么的高大宏伟。它有69层。在楼房的顶部，你可以俯瞰整个城市。

Next morning， the sun smiled gently， so I went to Dameisha， the seashore of Shenzhen。 I swam in South China Sea and walked on the sandy beach。 It was so relaxing。 I moved on， stopping at Xiaomeisha， another beautiful seaside resort of the city。 There I just picked up some seashells and ate some delicious sea food。 In the late afternoon， I visited Zhong Ying Street， which is the landmark of Shenzhen and Hong Kong， so that I could enjoy an elegant picture of the exotic world。

第二天早晨，阳光很温和，所以我去了大梅沙，是深圳的海滨。我在中国的南海游泳，在沙滩上散步。令人感到如此的放松。我我继续往前进停在了小梅沙，它是这座城市的另一个漂亮的海滨度假村。在那里我只是捡了一些贝壳，吃了一些美味可口的海鲜。傍晚的时候，我去了中英街，它是深圳和香港的标志，所以我能享受到一张具有异国情调的世界的精美照片。

My final stop was the Gold Coast。 From there， I could see the high—rise buildings and skyscrapers of Hong Kong。 They look so modern。 It seemed like I entered into a foreign country。

我的最后一站是黄金海岸。从那里我可以看到高层建筑和香港的摩天大楼。他们看起来很现代。我好像是去到了国外。

After my three—day trip in Shenzhen， I left there with great lingers。 “How time flies when were having fun"， I said to myself。 I really didnt want to leave。 If one day I retired from work， I would buy a villa near the seashore in Shenzhen， so that I could always spend my happy time at the seaside。

在我为期三天的深圳旅行后，我恋恋不舍的离开了那里。“我们玩得很开心的时候时间过得真快”，我对自己说。我真的不想离开。如果有一天我退休了，我想在深圳附近的海边买一栋别墅，这样我就总可以在海边度过快乐的时光。

The New Year has come. Many people have returned to their hometowns for a long time.

We bought a new Spring Festival couplets and fireworks, go back to home, I cant wait to old Spring Festival couplets to tear down, and the new put up Spring Festival couplets, I just ready to put a new Spring Festival couplets, was blocked by the mother, she said: "to have a look at it first!" I looked right and left, putting a bit of a sticker on it, and my mother shouted, "no, no, no." With that, she poured the spring couplet upside down, I laughed: "mother, you make a mess. The spring couplets are on the wrong side. "Dont talk too much," said the mother gravely. "its lucky to be here." Thats what struck me. Thats it. Youre done with the new one.

My brother and I each took a fireworks lit cigarette lighter, 1 of "slish" suddenly, fireworks up small spark, then the fireworks in the chip, Li, every 20 seconds, the fireworks on the color becomes limpid, when the last color, I cant help but sigh: "this is fun!"

Dad filed firecrackers go toward outside walk, obviously, he is going to set off firecrackers, the designated site, dad put the fire on the ignition mouth with lighter, throw them away, firecrackers rang "or". The year is getting stronger and stronger.

What a wonderful New Year!

LOST

Apr4, 2010

I was so careless that l lost a blcak mobil phone on the way to our canteen at noon. There is much important information in my phone. Will the finder please return it to Xiao Ming at Class6, Senior3? Thank you very mach!

Xiao Ming

有时竟感慨起了科技生活对人类现代发展的改变。它把世界上的人分开，却又用“绳子”连在一起，这种“绳子”就叫网络。无论你在哪里，随时随地，我都可以找到你，网络让世界更近了，但在某种意义上说又让世界更远了。

我总是在想：有没有真正意义上碎片化的生活呢？如果我遇上了这种碎片化的生活，我又会如何呢？我不知道自己心中的答案。然而今朝，生活猝不及防地给我来了个下马威，它真的被碎片化了，就如同打碎了的玻璃一般，一块一块，扎的人手疼。

那是在五年级的一次毕业旅游上，别看那时我们还小，却已经“get”到了手机的种种功能。毕业晚会吃饭时，大家围坐在桌旁，本应是一副谈笑风生的场景，但几乎所有人都在玩手机，除了我。大家只是低着头，目不转睛地盯着手机，丝毫不顾及菜有没有被别人吃完，秉着一种菜又不好吃，还不如玩手机的心情坐在饭桌旁。偶尔累了，就看一秒舞台上的表演，又继续刚才的动作。五年的同学像是不认识一样，而我是全班唯一一个在认真看表演的人，其他人仿佛与我隔绝，就像碎了的玻璃片一样，再怎么拼，还是有缝隙。毕竟，那时我们不是亲密无间的朋友。同学们的脸上充满冷漠，难道真的是21世纪改变了他们吗？

还没改变他们的我，却被网络改变了，网络就像内心深处的恶魔，一口一口吞噬着我的心灵，让我的心灵脆弱，风化，侵蚀，让我在也承受不了，最后沦为“低头族”。当我成为“低头族”的那一刻起，我已经意识到，我的心不再有活力了。也许网络就是有那么大的魔力，明明知道它是毒药却还要去触碰。就像黑洞一样，不管是什么靠近它的东西，都会被吸进去，突然一下粉身碎骨。这样碎片化的心灵，还能重新拼起来吗？

其实并不是所有人的心灵都是被碎片化的。我身边就有这样一个例子。他总是保持着他那颗天真而又不卑不亢的心灵，为身边的人带来一份来自他独特的美好。是的，他身处在碎片化的生活中，但他从未被这种碎片化的生活变得碎片化。我曾问过他：“你一个信息科技拿优的人，为什么没有被这个时代的网络所影响呢？”他笑了笑，回答我说：“在心里，我觉得网络只是一种工具，并不是让你深陷其中的无底洞，只要你内心保持对网络的纯真态度，心就不会被碎片化。”有许多人认为，内心没有改变过的人一定是从未接触过网络的人，不然他是如何抑制内心的呢？我想这些人是错的，问题不在于接不接触网络，而在于人心。人心不同，选择的道路也不同。被碎片化的心，也会让人碎片化。碎片化生活的背后却是人心。如果心还保持着那份热爱，那份仁道，又怎么会被碎片化。

于是，我得到了答案，开始以一种纯真的态度对待网络，让它既不靠近，也不远离。虽然我们正身处在一个碎片化的时代，一个碎片化的世界。但请不要忘记当我们遇上碎片化，只要我们还有人的情感，不管心灵还是肉体，依旧不会被碎片化。保持纯真，才是遇上碎片化生活的“正确打开方式”。

dear vvx,

my name is vvx.im writing to you to introduce my family to you.there are four people in my family.they are my father, my mother, my sister and i. my father is a worker in a factory. my mother is a teacher in a middle school. my sister is a primary school student and she is 8 years old. i’m a middle school student and i’m 14 years old.

look forward to hear from you soon.

yours,

vvx

The Lantern Festival (元宵节) is the last day of the Chinese New Year celebration.

This day is for the last moment for setting off fireworks, the last excuse for eating a big feast and the last chance for family getting together before the “年” celebrations are over. (Latern Festival is also a traditional time of celebration for foreigners who live in China).

The Lantern Festival, the 15th of the first month of the lunar calendar, is the first full moon of the year.

Celebrations and traditions on this day date back to the Western Han Dynasty.

Traditions for this festival: as the name indicates, hanging and looking at lanterns is the main tradition.

Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are displayed on trees, or along river banks.

Parents often take their children to Lantern Fairs and sometimes lucky kids even get a mini toy lantern.

Another tradition is guessing lantern riddles. These are riddles that are hung on lanterns for people to shoot down and solve. The riddles are usually short, wise, and sometimes humorous.

The answer to a riddle can be a Chinese character, a famous persons name, a place name or a proverb. This tradition has become a popular game with serious staying power even as social development changes other traditions.

Other than that, the most important thing to do today is to eat sweet dumplings. In northern China, sweet dumplings made of glutinous rice flour are called “元宵” while in southern part they are called “汤圆”.

Typical sweet dumplings are filled with black sesame sauce, sweetened bean paste, or hawthorn. Making “元宵” today is like a game or an activity, so its seldom done without a reason and a group of friends or family present to help out.

What is the taste of home? Before I lodge in school dormitory, I never think of this question. But, now I know what the taste of home is as I have lived in school for a month. I miss the delicious food cooked by my mother and her endless chatter. My father sits in the middle of the hall watching TV. The fight between my two younger brothers and the ice cream in the refrigerator make me feel warm. All these make a house a family. And it is the taste of home in my mind.

什么是家的味道?在我住校前，我从来没有想过这个问题。但是，如今在我已经住校一个月后我知道什么是家的味道了。我想念我妈妈做的美味食物了，还有她喋喋不休的唠叨声。爸爸坐在客厅中间看电视。两个弟弟的打闹声还有冰箱里的冰淇淋都让我觉得很温暖。所有这些都使得一个房子成为一个家。这些就是我心目中家的味道。

However, communications being what they were in the days when news traveled by foot, many people did not receive the news for several years. Others, the more obstinate crowd, refused to accept the new calendar and continued to celebrate the new year on April 1. These backward folk were labeled as "fools" by the general populace. They were subject to some ridicule, and were often sent on "fools errands" or were made the butt of other practical jokes.

This harassment evolved, over time, into a tradition of prank-playing on the first day of April. The tradition eventually spread to England and Scotland in the eighteenth century. It was later introduced to the American colonies of both the English and French. April Fools Day thus developed into an international fun fest, so to speak, with different nationalities specializing in their own brand of humor at the expense of their friends and families.

In Scotland, for example, April Fools Day is actually celebrated for two days. The second day is devoted to pranks involving the posterior region of the body. It is called Taily Day. The origin of the "kick me" sign can be traced to this observance.

Mexicos counterpart of April Fools Day is actually observed on December 28. Originally, the day was a sad remembrance of the slaughter of the innocent children by King Herod. It eventually evolved into a lighter commemoration involving pranks and trickery.

Pranks performed on April Fools Day range from the simple, (such as saying, "Your shoes untied, or I accidentally stepped on your glasses!), to the elaborate. Setting a roommates alarm clock back an hour is a common gag. Whatever the prank, the trickster usually ends it by yelling to his victim, "April Fool!"

Practical jokes are a common practice on April Fools Day. Sometimes, elaborate practical jokes are played on friends or relatives that last the entire day. The news media even gets involved. For instance, a British short film once shown on April Fools Day was a fairly detailed documentary about "spaghetti farmers" and how they harvest their crop from the spaghetti trees.

April Fools Day is a "for-fun-only" observance. Nobody is expected to buy gifts or to take their "significant other" out to eat in a fancy restaurant. Nobody gets off work or school. Its simply a fun little holiday, but a holiday on which one must remain forever vigilant, for he may be the next April Fool!

then, the representative of the bedroom zhu guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. he added that li xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken.

they left us all in confusion. and it was our monitor who was quickwitted. he shouted our, "the day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn." the hall after that, they had another item.

this time li xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle.

while he was standing there, the other three stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. it was an idiom. this time i got it right:"the dog stands out among a group of chickens."

最近，老师布置我们去研读儒家文化，为了体会这份文化精髓，这份中华血脉中的信仰，我决心要以我的方式细细“研读”。

来到孔庙，侧身走在窄小的石砖胡同，轻轻叩开门环，用手掌推开落满槐花的大门，跨过门槛。来到院中一口古钟前，双手抓紧绳端一摇，持久，低沉的古音从青绿大钟的底部缓缓传来，钟声的深沉渐地让我联想着当年的孔子是否也曾摇过这口老钟，在钟声悠悠中信步走来？是否他的弟子会伴着这钟声，与老师用古语问候，而后拾起书卷？是否他们也会像我一样，被钟声吸引，对儒家文化充满向往？

坐在孔庙钟宇的大殿前，我想要亲临地，观看儒家传来的礼教。十几名男子着淡蓝长袍，挽起的发髻，束起的布带，端起的竹简，他们从几扇打开的门中缓缓迈入。一蹲一停，他们单膝跪下，将手卷置于身旁，双手手掌扶地，向着孔子像叩头。我望着他们的布袍一起一伏，浅浅的褶皱一痕一痕，头前的发丝一垂一起，终于懂得这幅春秋时期的场面，这儒家礼教的深厚。这一叩一拜中充满了多少礼仪的学问，它代表了孔圣人对弟子的教诲，代表了儒家礼教的风貌，代表了儒家文化的深厚以及重视品行的内涵。

孔庙中的一间展馆中有一卷竹简做的《论语》，我用手拾起它，解开缠绕着的细绳，展开长卷，学着古人朗诵的方式，将卷轴举起，摇头吟哦“子曰：‘学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆’。”那是孔子对着向他求教的学生，严厉而又深刻地教导；“子曰：‘学而不厌，诲人不倦，何有于我哉！’”那是孔子托着长衫踱步时意味深长的感叹；“仁者乐山，智者乐水。”那是孔子在山水间游历，在青山岫云间仰望，在水波荡漾间撑小舟随波浮行后的感慨。一部《论语》，凝聚了儒家的理念与思想，又再现了孔子慨叹出这些的场面与意境。

回到学校，听着同学们抱怨网上关于儒家的简介太晦涩，《论语》上的文言用语难以理解，儒家礼教的内容无处可找。看着他们忙着翻书查资料，我笑笑。或许这就是现在大多数人“读”古典的方式，只是将书上内容死死地往脑里塞，一遍一遍毫无感情地机械式地读出，就这样不停地反复，直到脑子似乎腾出些地方来让他记忆，才能把它浅浅地装进脑去。而用这样的方式研读，能读到些什么？能读出些什么？能读懂些什么？能读懂孔庙中古钟悠深的乐音？能读懂儒家礼教的叩拜之意？能读懂《论语》中孔子的经历与深刻的思想？还是能读懂这文化，这中华血脉中深厚的一部分？

或许，只有真正接近了文化，才得以将它研磨透彻。文化本身，是需要用心来感受的，而不是泛泛地，刻板地印入脑中。

只有接近了文化，才能体会出其中的意境，得以将文化渗入骨髓。我用我的方式，研读了这份文化。

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will

graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and

sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them

impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found

it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and

almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a

talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping

me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I

think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her.

I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing

to help others.