减压方式英文作文【20篇】

在祝福别人生日的时候朋友为了赶时髦,显得洋气,很多情况下都会选择用英文来替代中文，下面为大家分享了生日的英文寄语，一起来看看吧！

1、Happy birthday to a wonderful person!

——祝一位极帅的人生日快乐！

2、Happy birthday. I hope today treats you well.

——生日快乐，祝你今天过得愉快！

3、Congratulations and warmest wishes for your birthday and every day.

——祝你生日快乐，天天快乐！

4、Here comes today with special pride in all the achievements you have made. May your dearest wishes through all the years in store come true, and make you happier than you have ever been before.

——愿你宿愿得偿，快乐幸福更胜以往。

5、Wishing you a wonderful day and a year filled with happiness！

——祝你生日妙不可言，整年沉浸在幸福里！

6、May you enjoy to the fullest the joy of today. Wishing that your special day be a winner all the way!

——敬贺诞辰！愿这一切充满欢乐、成功！

7、May every special happiness fill this day for you and may the year bring all the best things you are looking forward to.

——愿你享尽今日之欢乐，祝你的生日百事顺心！

8、Congratulations on your birthday. May the coming year be filled with happiness and success.

——愿你的生日特别快乐，愿新的一年中心想事成！

9、May your life brighter as each birthday comes and goes. The nicest kind of birthday that could be wishes for you.

——愿你每个生日都使生命更加亮丽，祝生日无比美好、快乐！

10、Many happy returns of this special day. All our best wishes go to you on your birthday.

——祝你生日快乐，给你我们所有的祝福！

11、May your birthday be a celebration of the life. Wish you all happiness, health and prosperity with many returns of the day.

——愿你的生日是对生命的歌颂，祝健康快乐，事业蒸蒸日上。

12、Hope your birthday is like you——special.A Happy Birthday!

——希望你的生日像你一样——不同寻常。生日快乐！

13、May your birthday bring lots of joy in the year you have begun. Accept my wishes for many happy returns on your birthday.

——愿你的生日带给你无限快乐的一年，请接受我的生日祝福！

14、Warmest wishes that your birthday holds nothing but the best. The finest things in life today and every day!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，愿生日中最美好的一切属于你！

15、In hon our of your moving out of the twenties, we are giving you a marvelous birthday party.

——为庆祝你跨越二十岁，我们准备了一个盛大的生日宴会。

16、The kindest friend there could ever be is the kind of friend you are to me.Happy Birthday!

——世上如有诤友， 那就是像你对我那样关怀的朋友。祝你生日快乐！

17、Its time to celebrate your birthday. Happy birthday to an attractive and intellectual girl.

——是庆祝你生日的时候了，祝福美丽、聪颖的你生日快乐！

18、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

19、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

20、Wishing you a birthday that is among your very best. I hope that all the years ahead will be as happy as you have been in the past.

——祝你度过一个最美好的生日，希望你未来的日子与以往一样快乐！

21、Happy birthday. May gladness fill your every hour on this special day.

——生日快乐！愿这特殊的日子里，你的每时每刻都充满欢乐。

22、We hope that you enjoy this special day and your birthday grows happier by the minute!

——我们祝你欢庆这一天，愿你生日的快乐与分俱增！

23、My heartiest birthday greetings to you, a feeling much warmer than anybody can know. Best wishes for everything your heart desire in the year.

——我诚挚的生日祝福，情深意重，祝你在未来的一年里，心想事成！

24、Wishing you a happy birthday! May the best and loving things be some of the joy your birthday brings.

——祝你生日快乐！愿生日带给你的欢乐中蕴涵着一切美好！

25、It is not everyday you have a birthday, so hope you have a wonderful one. May it be followed by days and weeks and months and years of happiness for you!

——不是每天都能过生日，希望你今天生日快乐，愿你年年岁岁幸福永伴！

26、Have a great day, for today is your birthday and a wonderful event. Wish you happiness unfolding like the petal of a rose.

——生日之际，祝你度过妙不可言的一天，愿你的幸福如绽放的玫瑰般芬芳！

27、Each birthday is a milestone we touch along lifes way. May your birthday be happy in more ways than one.

——每个生日都是我们人生之旅的一个里程碑，愿你的生日百事顺意。

28、Warm wishes on your birthday. I send along my love and affection for you as well as a small gift. Take care!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，捎给你我对你的爱，也寄去一件小礼物，多保重！

29、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

30、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

31、Let me join all your other friends in wishing you a happy birthday. Today specially belongs to you. Take this chance to enjoy yourself in everything you do.

——让我与你的朋友们一道共庆你生日快乐，今天属于你，祝你欢欢喜喜！

32、My birthday wishes to you are the warmest. May all the plans you are making work out just right for you and may life always bring the best things your way.

——热烈祝贺你的生辰！愿你的计划都能实现、愿你的生活永远美丽！

33、May each hour be happy one on this special day. May the day ahead be more than happy, too, as all your dreams and plans work out just right for you.

——祝你在这特殊的日子里，时时刻刻都充满快乐，祝你来日多福，捷报频传！

34、A little birthday wish just to let know how much I care about you. May you seek all the best that the world has to give. May you never stop learning for as long as you live.

——小小的生日祝福。略表我的心愿。愿你的追求孜孜不倦，愿你永远学而不厌。

35、A wish for your wonderful birthday that brings a world of bright and lovely things to remember each day through the year.

——生日来临，带给你无数的快乐日子，一年中天天都会想起，生日的快乐、温馨。

36、Allow me to congratulate you with all my best wishes upon your having reached your sixtieth birthday. May you live a long, healthy and joyful life.

——在您六十大寿之际，请允许我向你表示最衷心的祝福，祝你健康、长寿、生活愉快！

37、I want to tell you on this special day that Im very glad time hasnt changed our friendship any. Hoping your birthday is great.

——在这特殊的日子里，我想说我真高兴，时光没有改变我们的友谊，祝你生日其乐无穷。

38、Birthday comes and birthday goes each year, and this leaves the happy memories for ever. May this special day brightens each hour like sunshine that cheers every flower.

——年年生日来而复去，留下永久的快乐回忆。愿今天的每时每刻都充满明媚，似阳光普照鲜花绽放！

39、Wish you a whole world of happiness now that your birthday is here. May your memories today be warm ones. May your dreams today be dear. May your joy last through the year.

——愿你的生日充满无穷的快乐，愿你今天的回忆温馨，愿你今天的梦想甜美，愿你这一年称心如意！

40、Every day is birthday time when thinking of you, and I shall keep one sublime hoping your many dreams come true.

——每当想到你我好似天天都在过生日，可我特别珍视其中的一天，祝愿你在这天美梦都能实现。

41、Affectionate birthday greetings. Birthday means a new beginning and a new chance to take hold on life.

——在你生日之际，向你致以亲切的祝贺。生日意味着一个新的开端，意味着重新把握生活的机会。

42、My special wish may bring you health, luck and happiness each minute! Hope it really proves to be the nicest birthday you have spent.

——给你我特别的祝福，愿它每分每秒都带给你健康、好运和幸福。希望这是你度过的最美好的生日！

43、I sincerely feel a grateful interest in each return of this happy anniversary. Send you a birthday card and the accompanying gift is a token of my best wishes for your success and happiness.

——每到你的生日，我都十分快乐。送上一张生日卡和一件礼物，略表心意。祝事业成功、生活幸福！

44、Be happy, be cheerful. Its time to celebrate. My friend was born today. Hope your course is charted for lots of luck all the year through.

——祝你幸福，愿你快乐，庆祝今天你来到这个世上。在生命航程新的一年中，愿幸运时时与你相伴！

45、Looking back across the years, we come to realize that it takes many birthdays to make us kind and wise. Growing older only means the spirit grows serene. Happy birthday!

——回首以往，我们渐渐认识到，是这些众多的生日使我们宽厚仁爱，更增智慧，年龄的增长使心境愈趋宁静。祝生日快乐！

46、Wishing you a wonderful birthday. You make this world a nicer place just by being so kindhearted. May this day that is all your own hold happiness for you and the years to come be filled with all the best things, too.

——祝你生日快乐，你的善良使这个世界变得更加美好，愿这完全属于你的一天带给你快乐，愿未来的日子锦上添花！

47、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

48、Among the friends we make in life, there are only one or two who can be called ”a special friend“and thats how I think of you.You show the warmth of your friendship in so many different ways,Thats why I hope your birthday is the happiest of days.

——在我们结交的朋友中，只有一、二人堪称”知已“。我正是这样看你。你事无巨细都表现出温馨的友谊，为此我祝你生日幸福无比。

49、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福。弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

50、Permit me to congratulate you on reaching another of these anniversary landmarks today. May each day be as happy as your birthday. Have a wonderful birthday!

——祝贺你抵达了生命的又一个里程碑，愿你每天都象过生日一样充满喜悦。祝你生日无比快乐。

New Year is coming. I have many great New Year’s resolutions. I will study math harder than before because I want to get better grades. I’m going to improve my spoken English because I want communicate with foreigners better in English.

I plan to learn German because I really want to travel to Germany by myself. And I’m going to learn a new instrument, it may be guitar.

As for friends, I’m going to make more good friends. Because I think friendship is important and valuable.

These are my New Year’s resolutions. I’m working hard to make them come true. I trust myself.

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robot , confortable What people s Life In the Future Will Be

In the future, people will work at home since robots(机器人)will do most of the work instead people. Even those have to go to important work only need to stay at home in front of a special computer which can control the work far in the factories. All in all(总之),people will lead a comfortable life in the near future

[同学讨论未来的生活英文小作文

dear teacher,

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Hello， nice to meet you.

My name is xxx. I am a sophomore studying in Beijing institute of petrochemical technology. My hobbies are varied from individual to group activities. Such as XXX XXX XXX XXX.

The main reason of applying to be Olympic volunteer of 20XX is that I think this will be my unforgettable and GREat experience in my whole life. This is the first time to hold Olympic Games in china， for every Chinese person， this Olympic game is very important and memorable. Besides， Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. As a citizen of Beijing， I feel very proud. Although I am only a graduate， I think that I must actively contribute to the Olympic Games. Unnumbered people want to be Olympic volunteers， but they have no opportunities.

I am so lucky that I am a graduate， and I have opportunity to work for Olympic. My heart tells me that I cannot lose this GREat opportunity. I have geographical conditions that I live in Beijing and I study in Beijing. I have no reason to give up this opportunity to be Olympic volunteer. Furthermore， I can learn and get exercises in many respects， for example， my language skills， communication skills， association skills and ability to deal with matters of sudden urgency. Of cause I may have opportunity to meet my dream sport stars who are XXX， XXX and XXX.

All in all， this experience has great influence on my future life and I have a lot of confidence.

[英文自我介绍志愿者

随着语文考试制度的改革，作文占据了语文教学的半壁江山，小学作文批改方法。以下是“小学作文批改的多种方式及效果”希望能够帮助的到您！

一、作文批改的现状分析

语文教师要培养学生的写作能力，这是毫无疑问的。但是，需不需要培养学生批改作文的能力，看法就不一致了。传统的作文批改方法是教师全批全改，精批细改。这种方法至少有两大弊害：一是教师疲于奔命，二是学生受益甚微。学生作文教师批改，学生始终处于被动的客体地位。“这表现在作文批改上，批改时只顾到学生作的文，却忘了作文的学生。他们看见错的就改，认为多余的就删，认为不足的就补，甚至整段地重写。可是，很少考虑学生为什么错，为什么要这样写，他想说的究竟是什么，他为什么说不清楚。评语或是称赞或是批评，大多比较空泛，对学生甲说的也可以写到学生乙的作文本上”（叶圣陶《序跋集》第200页）。学生始终处于被动的“受领者”的地位，试想，这样的批改，对学生有什么好处呢？

其次，教师对学生作文的批改，大多数是“背对背”的。教师在办公室批改时发扬愚公移山的精神，默默地“挖山”不止；而学生早已把作文内容忘到“爪哇国”去了。于是乎，作文批改收不到实效，教师的“精批细改”纯属无效劳动，“一江春水”只得付诸东流了。还有一个不争的事实，就是从小学到初中，教师批改的作文不知其数，但真正受益的学生又有几个呢？鉴于此，我们应该从开始写作文就培养学生自己修改作文的能力，尽快地改革作文批改的现状，变“背对背”的“暗中摸索”为“面对面”的“明中探索”，采用多种方式让学生亲自参予到作文批改中来。习作评改应是师生情感交流的桥梁，也是学生通过多种反馈对自己的文章作出较为正确审视的一个过程。

因此，习作评改的方式应是开放的，多元的。师评师改，自评自改，互评互改……都应随机采用。教师要想方设法创设和谐开放的评改氛围，让每一个学生都有参与评改的机会。

二、作文批改的若干方式

（一）、眉批，激活灵感

所谓眉批，主要解决评价文章的局部性问题，对字、词、句、标点或段落

等方面的优缺点进行提示、说明、分析、评定，联系实例给学生提供具体的帮助指导。

学生作文中有错别字或有些句子不通顺，教师就去帮学生一一修改，让学生订正在本子上，然后打上个“良”，写上“本文能抓住重点，突出中心，可错别字、病句多”等之类的评语——这是教师们一般修改作文的方法。遇到很多语句不通顺，错别字又多的作文，教师想帮他批改，就觉得非动全篇不可——每个错字替他改，每句不通顺的话要替他修——这就是老师最头疼的作文。改下来，学生作文面目全非，教师付出太多。

其实，我们又何必如此修改作文，让自己感觉头疼呢？我们何不发挥一下眉批的作用呢？不管是字句通顺的还是字句不通顺的作文，我们都先通篇浏览一下，看看内容符不符合写作要求，如果符合，我们就再重新阅读一遍，发现优美的句子或用得准确生动的词，就用红笔标注出来，再在旁边写上激励性评语：“佳句！”、“好词！”如果有错别字或哪个句子不通顺，我们也用红笔标注，再在旁边注上：“换个词好吗？”、“有错别字！”或“请疏通一下句子！”这类提示性批语。发现有好的过渡句或好的中心句，也用红笔画出，写上“此过渡句用得好！”或“此句子点明中心，效果很好！”之类批语，然后写上评语。发下去后，指导学生根据教师的眉批自行修正，再通过展示台抽一些学生上来汇报他们的修正结果即可。例如：凉爽的夏风吹（1）开了夜的面纱，沉淀了一天的暑气在黑夜里散尽，迎接新一天曙光的是习习凉爽的夏风（2）。大地万物都起得格外早，它们要抓住这美好的夏晨好好地享受一番，那在微风中微微舞动的树叶配上玫瑰红的朝阳，那宛若脸颊般红润柔美的红（3）云，就是一幅绝好的风景画，难道你不为之陶醉吗？改为：（1）将“吹”改为“撩”，“撩开…面纱”，动宾搭配，写出夏天的变幻神奇。（2）这里加上“如果你站到阳台上面对着朝霞沐浴在晨风中再来个深呼吸，那种清凉舒爽的感觉定会叫你心旷神怡”一句，与下文中的“享受”相照应。（3）“红”改为“彩”，避免重复写出多种颜色。

这样批改老师又怎会觉得头疼呢？其实，我们教师根本没有必要每个错字、每个病句都替学生修改，你只要指出文章的优缺点，然后指导学生来修正就可以达到轻松、有效的效果。再说这类学生他们本身就不怎么懂写作文，如果教师再在他的本子上圈一大堆错字、错句，写上批评的语言，那他们就会觉得自己真的很不行，自卑心理日渐加重，对写作就会越来越害怕，这种“批改”不但苦了教师自己，使教师增加烦恼，也不符合“人文”教育的要求。所以，我们教师批改作文，要充分发挥眉批的作用。

（二）、自改互批，汲取精华

1.自改作文，锤炼能力

这是最基本最直接的批改方式，在完成作文后由学生进行自批自评。学生自改的方法能将批改的权力最大限度的下放给学生，使学生变被动为主动，成为批改的主人。叶圣陶十分重视学生的自改，他说：“改与作关系密切，改的优先权应该属于作文的本人，所以我想，作文教学要着重在培养学生自改的能力。”②叶老还曾一再强调：“假如着重培养学生自己改的能力，教师只给些引导和指导，该怎么改让学生自己去考虑去决定，学生不就处于主动地位了吗？养成自己改的能力，这是终身受用的。”“作了文又能自己改，不用请别人改，这就经常处于主动地位，岂不是好？”③ 的确自改能让学生用自己的双手，用自己的头脑，用自己的语言，用自己的方式去体会批改的乐趣，从而在快乐中提高自己的作文水平。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。在批改前，由教师根据训练的要求规定一定的修改内容，以逐步养成学生良好的自批习惯。如要求学生把自己写作时认为写得最好的句子加上划线，让老师批改时注意。再如对格式的修改，基础分为60分（即能交作文的都有此分数），只要求对格式写得正确与否进行批改，正确的则可得满分；又如错别字的修改，也是在基础分60分的基础上，整篇没有出现错别字的可得满分，2个扣4分，4个扣10分，如此类推，扣20分就不再扣。这样操作简单，学生的写作积极性不易受打击，批改的兴趣也会随批改的次数增加而增加，最后养成良好的自我修改习惯。

这种方式的缺点是由于学生的水平有限，学生的写作能力、赏析能力、批改能力尚浅，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。

2．互改作文，集思广益

互批，这是一种同学间交换批改的方式。这种方式简单易行。在批改前是由教师定出批改的范围，然后同学之间进行批改。这样的批改可以使同学之间及时交换批改意见，正如教师的面批作文一样，当遇到不理解、不明白的地方时，可以立刻与作者商量，研究其写作的初衷、意图，达到更有利的批改目的。这种方式可以在一定程度上克服自改的缺陷，它可以通过同学间的互改互相促进，互相提高。具体而言，有以下优点：第一，经过多次批改实践，学生不仅准确地记住了写作文的基本要求，而且对这些要求理解得越来越深刻。他会指导别人应该怎样写，不应该怎样写，自然也增强了自己的写作能力。第二，每个人都有机会看到多名同学的作文，这样容易发现、学习别人的长处。别人的缺点短处，自己引以为戒，也是好事，学生的思想多了一个相互交流，开放的机会。第三，每次批改作文，每人只批一本，负担不重，每次又都抽签换人，批改的人有新鲜感，有兴趣。每位同学的作文，每次又都换一位同学批，看不同的同学对自己的批语，当然也有新鲜感。这种新鲜感，有利于培养学生批改作文的兴趣和看别人批语的兴趣。第四，批改作文时，学生站在批改者的角度，进入教师的角色思考问题，有利于增强学生的心理适应能力、心理平衡能力、角色互换能力，促进学生心理走向成熟。第五，教师只抽查翻阅一部分同学的批改结果，在短时间内看多篇作文，有利于教师比较思考，且保持较浓厚的阅读兴趣，容易激发教师的智力潜能与创造潜能。还可将节省的大量用笔批改的时间，用于研究学生心理，研究学习方法，进一步提高教书育人的效率。

这种方法的缺点同样是由于学生的水平有限，有时无论怎样改，都不能改掉文章的一些缺点，甚至是谬误，在差生身上更是如此，难以取得良好的效果，这是老师应该注意的。如果互改的有一方不认真对待，效果也会打折扣。

组改，这是一种分小组批改作文的方式。作文批改是一种阅读，是一种心灵的沟通、交流，是一种享受，更是一种提高。因此，学生的参与意识不容忽视。把学生推到写作的另一前沿阵地——修改，使其在互相批改中认真切磋，取长补短。孔子云：“三人行，必有我师焉。”④这种方式鼓励学生积极参与，激起学生“为师”的欲望，引发作文批改的兴趣，并出示自己创作中的部分手稿，营造一种积极向上的气氛。这种作文批改方式要注意每组发放一定数量的学生作文，在一定的时间完成批改任务。数量不宜太多，否则学生无法完成任务，又影响批改的质量。起初，可让小组学生在一课时内批改两篇作文，往后可适当增加。这样的小组互批互改活动它还可以为学生提供互相学习的机会，有利于培养学生团队合作的精神，有利于培养学生探索问题的能力，有利于培养学生认真负责的态度，养成良好的书写习惯。 “学习如春起之苗，不见其增，日有所长”，学生在互相批改中渐渐形成了浓厚的作文兴趣，悟出一些作文之道来，会获得出人意料的效果。这种角色互换，还可以使他们切身体会到批改文章的甘苦，进而更加尊重教师的劳动。同时，也把教师从令人头晕的“劳役”中解脱出来。

上述三种作文批改的方式有一点必须注意，就是在让学生批改作文以前要教给学生作文批改的方法，学生应该从哪些方面进行作文批改呢？魏书生认为应要求学生从以下十个方面教给学生作文批改的方法：

（1）、格式是否正确  刚开始，使学生感到写作文，批作文都不难。随随便便地写，老师只要求同学们作文的格式正确，批改作文时只写一条关于格式的批语。批作文的时候要抽签，谁都有可能抽到全班任何一个人的。抽到人家的作文本，打开作文一看，格式没锗，便拿出红笔，写上批语：1．格式正确。批文用减分法，此项倘不减分，此文则为满分，然后签上批改人的尊姓大名。

（2）、卷面是否整洁  显然这一条又是大家都能看得出来的。后进学生批改别人作文，指出卷面不整洁时，下次自己写作文也注意卷面了。

（3）、错别字几个  发现错字，要将错字在原文处打上标记，并且写到批语处，再在后面写上正字。有的粗心的同学错字挑不出来，怎么办？我们就搞流水作业：每人要批四篇文，每篇文要经过甲、乙、丙、丁4个人之手。甲批错别字六个，乙发现本文错别字不是6个，而是7个，那么甲就要对为什么漏掉这个错别字写出一百字的说明书。丙发现本文错字是八个，那么甲、乙同学都要被追究责任，各追加一百字的说明书。学生批改之后，我还要抽查，重点抽查那些粗心的同学。这样使粗心的同学也认真起来，批改的时候，手里抱着大字典，唯恐漏掉了错别字。发现错别字，每两个扣1分，最多扣5分。10个以上也不再多扣，但要一一给予指正。

（4）、有几处病句  挑出一篇作文中的病句，凡病句，都要在下面划上横线，写出病在何处，再在文后批语中，写清病句几处。每处病句减1分，减至5分，不再多减。

（5）、标点符号有几处明显错误  强调句号、引号、叹号、问号的使用。发现明显错误的地方，有一处扣一分，有五处扣五分，超过五处，不再多扣。

以上五条，都是写文章最低的要求，学生经过三、四篇文章的批改实践，就能够掌握。再批改两三篇，掌握得比较熟练了，再一条一条地增加新的要求。

（6）、看文章的中心是否鲜明、集中  这两点在作文指导时，就具体举例，告诉学生什么叫鲜明、集中。学生批改之前，老师先大致看几篇文章，在进行批改指导时，又简介两篇好的文章，再举两篇中心不突出，不集中的例文，学生从老师举的正反两方面的例文，举一反三，就能批得符合实际。

（7）、看文章的选材  这条批语提三点要求：①是否围绕中心。②是否符合生活实际。③是否具有典型性。这三点中最要紧的是第一点，随着作文水平的提高，才提出选材具有典型性的要求。  （8）、看文章的结构

就结构而言，也要写清三点批语：①层次段落是否清晰。②过渡是否自然。③开头和结尾是否照应。

（9）、看表达方式  主要看其是否符合文章体裁的要求，记叙文以记叙为主，说明文以说明为主，议论文当然以议论为主。除此之外，还要看其是否符合作文指导的要求。如写记叙文《他进步了》，要求夹叙夹议，本文是不是做到了。写说明文《芦苇》，要求说明中有描写的成份，文中有没有适量的描写。写散文《家乡赞》，要求记叙、议论、抒情相结合，文中结合得怎么样。

（10）看语言是否简练、通顺、准确  语言不简练，重复、罗嗦者酌情扣分，此项不超过二分。语言不通顺，不是指有病句，而是指句与句之间衔接不连贯者，扣分也不超过二分。

后五条要求，每条5分，不做太具体的减分规定，由批改人酌情处理。每个人都要在作文本上写出5个方面的批语，一般情况一篇作文的批语都在100字以上。我参照实行后，我认为是行之有效的，广大同仁不妨试一试。

（三）、“评”“ 改”有别，学生因材施教

1.优秀生着重“评”

贯彻因材施教原则，在作文评改上，应根据学生作文的差异，有所区别，侧重对待，即个性化批改。优秀生以“评”为主，中差生以“改”为主。这是因为优秀生作文有了一定的基础，需要锦上添花。教师应在文章的立意、结构等写作方法这些有一定难度的方面提高要求，给予指导。选评优秀生作文，把它作为“突破口”，它可以起到牵一发动全身的作用。兴趣是最好的老师，每次讲评都要增换新的学生名单，逐渐扩大优秀面。为了培养这部分学生的作文兴趣和能力，还要积极组织他们开展作文课外活动，如办作文园地，开展作文竞赛，编优秀作文选，读书评报，写观察日记，给报刊投稿等，让成就感长久坚定学生习作的信心。

2.学困生着重“改”

研究差生作文差的原因，不难发现他们主要差在知识能力上的不足。而且这种不足非一日形成，久而久之，产生了“怕作文、作文难”的心理状态。要想提高差生作文水平，克服这种心态是前提，其次是给他们具体帮助，应在最基础的选材、写具体、字词句的训练上多给予帮助，使他们走出作文困境。对待差生作文，主要是面批面改。针对主要缺点，一学期每个学生只需批改2次。最初面稍大，逐渐形成宝塔形。面批面改力求做到：一是严，逐词逐句，从不马虎；二是爱，让学生感受到老师的真诚，不歧视，有耐性，善于发现他们进步的点滴火花，给予鼓励。改后作文不免写上几句“你进步了，难能可贵”“祝贺你进步了，你是有能力写好作文的”等之类热情鼓励的话。寥寥数语，往往起到难以置信的作用；三是评，教师要使自己的评语具有感染力，公式化、千篇一律的句式是不会引起学生兴趣的，要使评语具有感染力，就须形成个性化的评语，在评语中 融入 老师饱满的激情。故而评语应少一些教化，多一些引导，形成有针对性，有亲和力的评价，既抓学生作文中的闪光点进行肯定，又抓存在问题进行引导，使每一次评语如一次亲切的交谈和情感的沟通，让学生感受到老师对他的关注，带动学生关注自己的作文；四是奖，奖项面对学生，指向习作过程，力求让学生经过一定努力都能获奖，因而奖项的设置应类型丰富。如“个性奖”颁给文风别具一格、表达独特的同学，“进步奖”颁给进步明显的同学，“创新奖”颁给构思巧妙的同学……

3.师生评促成长

作文的批改、讲评，如果光是老师的专利，这对培养学生的作文能力不利。 叶圣陶 先生说：“‘改的优先权应该属于作文者本人，所以作文教学要着重培养学生自己改的能力。”批改之后，老师们已注意让学生尝试修改自己的作文，但是力度还不够，还要进一步开放作文评改的途径，让学生真正参与评改。每一次选取一定数量的作文，进行小组评改。

评改时，以学习小组为单位，组长负责组织学生评改作文。先由小作者朗读自己的习作，其他学生听，听后再由组长组织组员对小作者的文章进行修改、评判。评价的方式可以活泼一些，比如：达到本次习作的某点要求可以摘取一颗星星；未达到要求的可以通过再次修改自己的习作以获取星星。利用激励的方式，让学生感到跳一跳就能摘到“苹果”，促使人人争当“五星级”作文的作者。还可以适当地让学生来讲评作文，方式可以是学生上讲台，推荐自己认为优秀的作文（包括推荐自己的），先朗读这篇优秀习作，再谈习作的成功之处，也可谈要改进的地方。

在讲评中，老师尽量起组织作用，少将自己的观点强加于学生，真正的让学生成为讲评的主角，以评促写，以评激发学生写作兴趣，通过讲评使学生获得作文的愉悦感。这样个性化的作文评价能集众之长、补己之短，各得其所，能发现甚至挖掘出学生作文的很多闪光点，能充分调动学生的积极性，进一步激发学生的写作兴趣，有利于培养学生的创新意识和创造性思维。然而个性化作文评价并不是一味的说好话，它还包括有针对性地指出作文中的不足，可以是立意方面的，也可以是一两个词语运用方面的等等，有针对性的个性化评价自然让学生能更清楚地了解自己，从而更快地发展自己。

其实上述作文批改方式在作文教学实践中不是孤立的，作文批改可根据批改的目的不同进行优选，灵活使用，综合运用。总之，怎样做有实效，就怎样批改。作文批改含有“批”和“改”两层意思。“改在要害处，批在筋节上”，改其当所改，批其所当批。要清楚地认识到，提高学生作文水平，关联到多方面知识和技能，决不是单纯依靠作文课，在短期内就可立即奏效的。要加大课外阅读和社会实践，培养高尚健康的情趣，学会正确分析事物的方法。只有这样，才能切实有效地提高学生作文能力。而作文批改的方式远远不止上面所列举的那些，只要广大语文老师在作文教学中不断探索创新，就会发现更多行之有效的方法。

“赤日炎炎似火烧”，酷热的夏天已经来了。请大家跟随我的步伐，一起来探索夏日的奥秘吧！

夏天，是千姿百态的季节。我和妈妈来到荷花池旁，这里的荷花姿态万千：有的还是花骨朵，好像马上就要破裂似的；有的才展开两三篇花瓣儿，有的花瓣全都展开了，露出了小小的莲蓬。看着这美丽的荷花，我不禁轻声吟诵道：“接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。”

夏天，是热闹非凡的季节。你听，青蛙“呱呱呱”地叫着，它们在碧绿碧绿的荷叶大舞台上，尽情欢唱。蜻蜓在荷花丛中飞过来、飞过去……累了，就立在小荷的尖尖角上歇息；知了也不甘示弱，它们在繁枝绿叶间夸耀着自己：“知了！知了！”

夏天，是个吹空调、吃冷饮的季节。太阳好像一个大火球，又好似一个大蒸笼。人们在外面走一会儿，就会汗如雨下。哈哈，我们放暑假啦！你瞧，我正舒舒服服地躲在房间里，吹着26度的空调，吃着冷饮，要多爽有多爽！你们知道吗？妈妈给我买了一堆冷饮，有冰激凌，有绿舌头，有小布丁，还有“随便”……

夏天，是嬉水的季节。你瞧，我和朋友们来到游泳馆边，换上泳衣，戴上泳镜，“扑通——”一声跳下水。会游泳的，摆出了各种姿势：有蛙泳，有自由泳……不会游泳的，也套上了游泳圈，在浅水区快乐地泼水。

夏天，是旅游的季节。打开朋友圈，你会发现：小伙伴们正跟着爸爸妈妈一起走南闯北：有人去北京，有人去杭州，还有的人去了国外……你们猜，我要去哪儿？哈哈！告诉你们吧！妈妈准备带我去上海玩。妈妈说：要读万卷书，更要行万里路。她想利用暑假的时间带我外出走走，开阔眼界。

夏天有N多种打开方式。来吧！让我们一起去享受夏日的美好时光吧！

Last summer vacationmy family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh airwhich made us so comfortable.We went to the seasidethe sea was as blue as the skyand bathing in the sunshine on the beach was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirsI was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings theresuch as fishprawnand so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hoteland the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very muchand if I got a chanceI hope to come here againit is such a beautiful and interesting place.

As we all know， the environmentaround us is getting worse and worse . In

some places we can’t see fishswimming in the river or trees on the hills. Not

only does it affect our lives and health， but also has a great affection in the

future. So I thinkwe must do something to protect the environment. .But what can

we do?

Now green commuting and a low-carbon life are more and morepopular in the

society .For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike ， we can use

shopping baskets notplastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides

of the paper when wewrite .

In a word ，if everyonepays more attention to(makes a contribution to) our

environment ，there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.

介绍健身房 Introduction to the gym

你的朋友Dennis想到你常去的健身房锻炼身体，写一封电子邮件给他，向他介绍健身房的基本情况。电子邮件的开头部分已经写出。其余部分应包括以下内容：

1．健身房内的基本设施。

2．健身房开放时间和联系电话。

DearDennis,

You want to know about my gym．

The gym is”In Shape”...

健身房内的基本设施，健身房开放时间和联系电话。

Dear Dennis,

You want to know about my gym．The gym is“In Shape”...

The surrounding there is pretty well, they have all kinds of exercises machines, such as walker, etc... and of course you could take a warm bath after your exercises.

here is the schedule of it:

Monday to Friday: 9 am to 5 pm

Saturday: 8 am to 8 pm

Sunday: Closed

Their number is : 1-718-568-4540

Good Luck!

Pisci Ni

亲爱的丹尼儿，

你想知道我的健身房，健身房是“在形状”…

周围有相当好的，他们有各种各样的练习机，如学步车等。当然，在你的练习之后，你可以洗个热水澡。

这是它的日程安排：

星期一至星期五：上午9时至下午5时

星期六上午8点到下午8点

星期日：关闭

他们的电话是：1-718-568-4540

好运！

pisci

跑步 Running

I like many kinds of sports, such as swimming, running, table-tennis and badminton. But I like running most. Running is a good activity for people to keep healthy and relieve pressures. Besides, it’s very easy for me to running. I can run in the morning or after class. And I can run alone. I don’t have to find a partner to run with me. After running, I always feel good and relaxed. It has become a part of my life.

我喜欢很多种运动，比如游泳，跑步，乒乓球和羽毛球。但是我最喜欢的是跑步。跑步是人们保持身体健康和释放压力的运动。此外，我觉得跑步很容易。我可以在早上或课后进行跑步。我也可以一个人跑，不需要找伴一起跑。跑步过后，我总是感觉很好很放松。跑步已经成为我生活中的一部分。

[介绍健身房英文作文

It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion slated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

Are professional success and a fulfilling personal life mutually exclusive? Probably not, although it is more difficult today to achieve both.

Undeniably, todays professionals must work long hours to keep their heads above water, let alone to get ahead in life financially. This is especially true in Japan, where cost of living, coupled with corporate culture, compel professional males to all but abandon their families and literally to work themselves to death. While the situation here in the states may not be as critical, the two-income family is now the norm, not by choice but by necessity.

However, our societys professionals are taking steps to remedy the problem. First, they are inventing ways such as job sharing and telecommuting to ensure that personal life does not take a back seat to career. Second, they are setting priorities and living those hours outside the workplace to their fullest. In fact, professional success usually requires the same time-management skills that are useful to find time for family, hobbies, and recreation. One need only look at the recent American presidents-Clinton, Bush, Reagan and Carter- to see that it is possible to lead a balanced life which includes time for family, hobbies, and recreation, while immersed in a busy and successful career. Third, more professionals are changing careers to ones which allow for some degree of personal fulfillment and self-actualization. Besides, many professionals truly love their work and would do it without compensation, as a hobby. For them, professional and personal fulfillments are one and the same.

[GMAT理想与现实为题目的英文作文

1、Maymanyfortunesfindtheirwaytoyou!

多福多寿!

2、OnthisspecialdayIsendyouNewYearsgreetingsandhopethatsomedaysoonweshallbetogether.

祝你今后获得更大成就。

3、MaytheNewYearbringmanygoodthingsandrichblessingstoyouandallthoseyoulove。

祝新年快乐，并愿你幸福吉祥，前程似锦。

4、BestwishesfortheholidaysandhappinessthroughouttheNewYear.

恭贺新禧，祝身体健康、事业发达。

5、MaythecomingNewYearbringyoujoy,loveandpeace.

请接受我们对你及你全家的美好祝福，祝你们新年快乐。

6、PleaseacceptmysincerewishesfortheNewYear.Ihopeyouwillcontinuetoenjoygoodhealth.

愿快乐幸福永伴你左右。

7、PleaseacceptourwishesforyouandyoursforahappyNewYear.

致以最良好的祝福，原你新年快乐幸福。

8、WithbestwishesforahappyNewYear!

祝好运、健康、佳肴伴你度过一个快乐新年。

9、Takegoodcareofyourselfintheyearahead.

愿你健康长寿!

10、WishingyouhappinessduringtheholidaysandthroughouttheNewYear.

愿新年为你带来快乐，友爱和宁静。

As more and more students graduated from universities and colleges, youth employment is becoming a problem in our society. Nowadays, many young people are having a hard time finding jobs. They often faced the "No experience, no job - no job, no experience" dilemma.

To solve the problem of youth employment, I think the government should take some measures to help college students who are finding their jobs. The government should work with the employers and organizations, such as fund them to help those students obtain career information, develop skills, find good jobs and stay employed. In addition, the employers should provide opportunities for students to get their first work experiences and develop their skills and potentials. Whats more, the employers should also provide assistance for those who face barriers to employment and help them to get and keep a job.

ast Saturday,with all my classmates and teachers,I went on a trip to the nature park .We departed from school at about half past seven and spent about 40 minutes travelling to our destination.When we first entered into the park,all of us were shocked by the natural beauty and the hamonized ecosystem of the park.Then,happily we were playing games on the sand; swimming in the pool and taking with our friends on the grassplot.After lunch break,our programs were continued with an contest of story narating held and each of us was immerging within the funny stories We left the part at about 5 oclock,and unitl now,most of us are still haunted by the beautiful memory of that trip.

I have a very happy family.There are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and I.My fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.As a famous saying goes :" There is always an able woman behind a successful man .",my mother is a housewife.She can cook very dilicious food and she is often busy with some houseworks.Sometimes,brother and I help her tidy the house,but of course,we couldnt tidy as clean as her.

I love my parents as well as my family.I hope we can be happy forever!

I like to watch movie, I had watched many movies,Jackie Chen is my favorite male actor.

When I was small, I watched Jackie Chen’s actionmovie, he can beat many guys at the same time, heis many teenagers’ hero.

In the last ten years, Jackie Chen has aimed at the foreign market, he took many movies andcooperated with foreign stars, he has achieved great success.

Jackie’s success teaches us a lesson, the secret of achieving success is hard work.

Jackie got wounded when he shot films, he has many scars on his body.

Now he is over 50, but he is going on his playing, we are happy to see Jackie Chen’s movie.

Thanksgiving Day is a harvest festival. Traditionally, it is a time to give thanks for the harvest and expressgratitude in general. It is a holidaycelebrated primarily in Canada and the United States. While perhaps religious in origin, Thanksgiving is now primarily identified as a secular holiday.

The date and location of the first Thanksgiving celebration is a topic of modest contention. Though the earliest attested Thanksgiving celebration was on

September 8, 1565 in what is now Saint Augustine, Florida[1][2], the traditional "first Thanksgiving" is venerated as having occurred at the site of Plymouth Plantation, in 1621.

Today, Thanksgiving is celebrated on the second Monday of October in Canada and on the fourth Thursday of November in the United States. Thanksgiving dinner is held on this day, usually as a gathering of family members and friends.

Thanksgiving Dayin America is a time to offer thanks, of family gatherings and holidaymeals. A time of turkeys, stuffing, and pumpkin pie. A time for Indian corn, holiday parades and giantballoons.

在美国，感恩节是一个感谢恩赐，家庭团聚，合家欢宴的日子；是一个家家餐桌上都有火鸡、填料、南瓜馅饼的日子；是一个充满了印第安玉米、假日游行和巨型气球的日子。

Thanksgiving is celebrated on the 4th Thursday of November, which this year (2005) is November 24th.

每年十一月的最后一个星期四是感恩节，在今年（2005）则是11月24日。下面让我们来看看感恩节的由来吧：

The Pilgrims who sailed to this country aboard the Mayflower were originally members of the English Separatist Church (a Puritan sect). They had earlier fled their home in England and sailed to Holland (The Netherlands) to escape religious persecution. There, they enjoyed more religious tolerance, but they eventually became disenchantedwith the Dutch way of life, thinking it ungodly. Seeking a better life, the Separatists negotiated with a London stock company to finance a pilgrimage to America. Most of those making the trip aboard the Mayflower were non-Separatists, but were hired to protect the companys

interests. Only about one-third of the original colonists were Separatists.

乘"五月花"来到这个国度的旅行者（朝圣者）原本是英国分离者地下x会清教徒，他们的家在英国，因不堪忍受国内的宗教迫害，他们逃亡到荷兰。在荷兰，他们享受了更多的宗教信仰自由，但最终却意识到在荷兰的这种生活方式是对他们的主的亵渎。为了寻求更好的生活，他们与伦敦贸易公司协商，由该公司资助他们到美国。在这趟旅途中，船上只有大约1/3的乘客是清教徒，其他大多数人并非分离派清教徒，而是公司雇佣来保护其利益的人员（契约奴）。

The Pilgrims set ground at Plymouth Rock on December 11, 1620. Their first winter was devastating. At the beginning of the following fall, they had lost 46 of the original 102 who sailed on the Mayflower. But the harvest of 1621 was a bountiful one. And the remaining colonists decided to celebrate with a feast -- including 91 Indians who

had helped the Pilgrims survive their first year. It is believed that the Pilgrims would not have made it through the year without the help of the natives. The feast was more of a traditional English harvest festival than a true "thanksgiving" observance. It lasted three days.

1620年12月11日，旅行者们在"普利茅斯石"登陆。他们的第一个冬季是灾难性的，第二年秋天来临时，原来的102名乘客只剩下56人。但1621年他们获得了大丰收，这些幸存的殖民者们决定和帮助他们度过困难的91名印第安人一起飨宴庆祝。他们相信，若没有当地居民的帮助，他们是不可能度过这一年的。这次节日的盛宴不仅仅是一个"感恩"仪式，它更像英国传统的丰收庆典。庆典持续了三天。

Governor William Bradford sent "four men fowling" after wild ducks and geese. It is not certain that wild turkey was part of their feast. However, it is certain that they had venison. The term "turkey" was used by the Pilgrims to mean any sort of wild fowl.

总督布雷德福派了“四人捕鸟队”去捕捉野鸭和野鹅。我们现在并不能确定是否有野生火鸡在当时的筵席上，但筵席上肯定有鹿肉。当时，朝圣者用 "火鸡"一词来代表各种野禽。

Another modern staple at almost every Thanksgiving table is pumpkin pie. But it is unlikely that the first feast included that treat. The supply of flour had been long diminished, so there was no bread or pastries of any kind. However, they did eat boiled pumpkin, and they produced a type of fried bread from their corn

crop. There was also no milk, cider, potatoes, or butter. There was no

domestic cattle for dairy products, and the newly-discovered potatowas still considered by many Europeans to be poisonous. But the feast did include fish, berries, watercress, lobster, dried fruit, clams, venison, and plums.

现在，几乎每家感恩节餐桌上都有南瓜馅饼――感恩节的另一种主食。但在当年的第一次庆典上却不可能有这种食品。因为面粉奇缺，所以面包、馅饼、糕点等食物都没有。但他们却吃了煮南瓜，并用收获的玉米制成了一种油炸面包。也没有牛奶、苹果酒、土豆和黄油。没有驯养的奶牛，自然没有牛奶；而新发现的土豆被很多欧洲人认为是有毒的。第一次庆典上有鱼、草莓、豆瓣菜、龙虾、干果、蛤、鹿肉、李子等。

This "thanksgiving" feast was not repeated the following year. But in 1623, during a severe drought, the pilgrims gathered in a prayer service, praying for rain. When a long, steady rain followed the very next day, Governor Bradford proclaimed another dayof Thanksgiving, again inviting their Indian friends. It wasnt until June of 1676 that another Day of Thanksgiving was proclaimed.

紧接着的第二年(1622)却没有举行"感恩"庆典。到了1623年，发生了一场严重的旱灾，朝圣者们聚集到一起，举行了虔诚的祁雨仪式，刚好在第二天，一场充沛的大雨从天而降。威廉布雷德福总督宣布再次庆祝感恩节，并再次邀请了他们的印第安朋友。之后数年无感恩节，直到1676年6月，感恩节才再次被提出。 每年11月的第四个星期四是感恩节 (Thanksgiving Day) 。感恩节是美国人民独创的一个古老节日，也是美国人合家欢聚的节日，因此美国人提起感恩节总是倍感亲切。

感恩节的由来要一直追溯到美国历史的发端。1620年，著名的“五月花”号船满载不堪忍受英国国内宗教迫害的清教徒102人到达美洲。1620年和1621年之交的冬天，他们遇到了难以想象的困难，处在饥寒交迫之中，冬天过去时，活下来的移民只有50来人。这时，心地善良的印第安人给移民送来了生活必需品，还特地派人教他们怎样狩猎、捕鱼和种植玉米、南瓜。在印第安人的帮助下，移民们终于获得了丰收，在欢庆丰收的日子，按照宗教传统习俗，移民规定了感谢上帝的日子，并决定为感谢印第安人的真诚帮助，邀请他们一同庆祝节日。

在第一个感恩节的这一天，印第安人和移民欢聚一堂，他们在黎明时鸣放礼炮，列队走进一间用作教堂的屋子，虔诚地向上帝表达谢意，然后点起篝火举行盛大宴会。第二天和第三天又举行了摔跤、赛跑、唱歌、跳舞等活动。第一个感恩节非常成功。其中许多庆祝方式流传了300多年，一直保留到今天。

初时感恩节没有固定日期，由各州临时决定。直到美国独立后的1863年，林肯总统宣布感恩节为全国性节日

Fourth of November every year is Thanksgiving Day on Thursday

(Thanksgiving Day). Thanksgiving Day is a creative USA the people antiquited festival, festival being also an American whole family happy get-together, American mentions Thanksgiving Day therefore always feeling very kind.

The Thanksgiving Day reason needs to trace back to till USA history start. In 1620, the famous "May flower " number boat is fully loaded with the religious persecution puritan 102 people who endures United Kingdom in the homeland extremely getting to America. Winter in 1621 joint of in 1620 and, they have come across difficulty hard to imagine, above being poverty-stricken, past

tense in winter, the immigrant who lives down only has 50 messengers. At this time, good-natured Indian being given to have come an aliment by immigrant , goes out of selfs way to send person to teach them how hunting , maize , Spanish gourd catching fish and cultivating. Under Indian help, immigrants have finally gained good harvest , the immigrant has stipulated the day thanking Gods , have decided to be that the sincerity thanking Indian helps their to observe a festival , invites and in the day celebrating good harvest joyously , according to religious tradition convention.

This a day , Indian and immigrant on the first Thanksgiving Day get together joyously , they are in airing of views in the dawn the salvo, forms order walking into the room one being used as church , express a gratitude piously to God , light up and then a bonfire holding the grand banquet. The day has held a second day with third tripping and falling , race, has sung , has danced to wait to use personal influence. The first Thanksgiving Day are very successful. Among them a lot of the more than 300 years having celebrated way go around, reserves till today.

When original Thanksgiving Day does not fix date , the prefecture decides for a short time by every. Until USA is independent, in 1863 in the day afer tomorrow, President Lincoln announces Thanksgiving Day is countrywide festival.

“碎片化”如今已然成为一个形容各方面因素模块化的新名词。凡是指完整东西破成诸多零块的都可称为“碎片化”。大千世界下，整个社会都可称之为“碎片化”。碎片化的生活无时无刻不在影响我们的心态和认知，这究竟是时代的进步产物，还是快节奏生活所残留的遗骸？我们又是否应该使碎片化重圆？

“碎片化”一词最早出现与“后现代化主义”的相关文献中，21世纪后，我国学者将“碎片化”引入传播学。再后来，随着网络社会的发展，”碎片化“所形成的诸多新名词应运而生。我们在认知这个词的同时也思考着其真正的褒贬所在。

在社会转型的过程中，碎片化是不可避免的。时代在进步，优胜劣汰。各层面自然会有层次不齐的现象，“碎片化”的发展就是社会发展的基础。好比社会的贫富差距的扩大也是社会阶层“碎片化”的根源。

这样的”碎片化”似乎与我们所能及的认知范围尚有距离。但大量的碎片化时间，碎片化购物，碎片化阅读等与我们朝夕生活密切相关的新名词，则不断汲入我们的生活中、这所谓的“碎片化”似乎能很好地帮助我们合理利用闲暇时间来学习工作生活。可过多的碎片化模式也一定程度上揭示了社会上部分散乱的现象，“碎片化”的泛滥必然会引起量的积累，从而达到无法复原的地步。

由是观之，”碎片化”也可算为一个中性词。“碎片化”的生活是现代化社会发展的必然产物，但也注定标志着社会体系的非整体化现象愈演愈烈。所以，面对碎片化生活的袭来，我们应合理利用其优势的同时巧妙地将非合理的碎片化重圆，从而达到兼揉并济的目的。

作为学生的我们，“碎片化”的阅读是一种合理利用时间的新方法，许多零碎的时间的拼凑足以帮助我们记忆许多单词，名句。可细想，这碎片化的时间为何不能重圆成一段时间，我们为什么会没有足够的时间，“碎片化”的阅读又是否对我们有长久的帮助？故“碎片化”下的生活自然有利有弊。

其实，究其缘由，“碎片化”的关键在于如何把握，把握整体下的部分的全部，就是使“碎片化”趋向完整的过程。“碎片化”的产生源于我们心态的改变。如何使“碎片化”如拼图般拼凑在一起，就是我们面对碎片化生活的第一步。

因此，学会利用“碎片化”时间，我们也应该使“碎片化”尽可能更大更全面。使每一段“碎片化”时间尽可能连贯在一起，亦或是有所交集。恰如每一次碎片化学习都先回想下上一次碎片化学下的内容，两相融合。又好比碎片化社交下，学会归纳社交的共通之处，更好地修葺自身的认知与谈吐。诸如此类，渐渐地，“碎片化”也会从外表的碎片达到内在的复原。

“碎片化”生活是我们现如今必然面对的现象，合理改变心态，善于把握整体中的部分，使之丝丝相扣。利用碎片化时间处理碎片化的事务。这样的“碎片化”生活也许就会成为新型社会下最受欢迎的生活方式。

Usually Saturday night is the time for students to get back to their desks

and do their weekend homework. Six school days are enough for the students who

have many other interests.

I think weekend homework should not be given. With homework arranged for

Saturday night and the whole of Sunday, when can he find time to help around the

house, play a game of football or see a good film, or just relax?

In fact weekend homework is usually put off until Sunday night. As a result

our homework is done very poorly and we achieve no results. If there were no

homework on weekends, students would go to school on Monday well rested, willing

to work. Teachers, dont you agree?

Last Tuesday, I went out by bus. I was reading a newspaper on my seat when a voice said to me: "Would you please make room for this lady?" I raised my head and found a young lady standing there with a baby in her arms. She looked very tired. I quickly stood up and said awkwardly, "Sorry,I didnt notice it. "But the lady just smiled and thanked me. When I looked around, I saw all the passengers smiling at me for my good deed.

[发生在寒假的事的英文作文

生活中，人海茫茫，世事万千。唯有万里挑一寻觅独属于自己的方式，方可径行直遂，收获最终胜利的果实。

分组编排舞蹈是形体课的最终考核。为了用心完成舞蹈，我们决定运用独有的创新方式，编排出一支独创惊羡的舞蹈。

其他组都在匆匆讨论后千篇一律地选择跳健美操，可我在观看她们排练后发现这舞种怎能体现我们的原创。于是，我们将舞种选定为带有民族元素的现代舞。

学校里，听同学们谈论她们要运用哪首歌曲，模仿哪个视频，我不屑，想以自己独创舞和曲的方式超越她们。放学后，几个女孩便冲出教室，来到排练厅稍加热身，跃跃欲试。我打开电脑中的音乐编辑界面，播放背景乐曲，让组员们“试音”，跟着节奏舞动。接着，我便反复斟酌，不时根据组员们的表现对音乐进行剪辑：这里节奏变缓些，那里反复这个八拍，间奏时再编进一段泉声……就这样，经过无数次的修改调试，我们的独创音乐也“新鲜出炉”。相较于他组，由于是经过个性化调整创作的舞曲，我们因此对音乐节奏更加熟悉，也更加适应，有益于下一步的排练舞蹈。对此，我引以为傲，信心倍增。

接下来的动作编排，我摒弃了其他同学先排后练却因不断修改而拖慢进度的方案，运用了自己的方式：边排边练。对着镜子，我耐心地手把手教着组员基本步伐，与此同时，脑海中源源不断地涌出新的动作组合，并依据组员的不同程度适当调整，从而达到最佳效果。望着组员们早已汗水淋漓却依旧认真练舞的身影，感受着组内互帮互助其乐融融的编舞氛围，喜悦涌上心头，仿佛这方式早已助我赢取胜利。

终于，到了最终展示的时刻。我们在台上一字排开，身着靓丽的舞衣，心中默念着节拍，动作行云流水，表现堪称完美。不出意外，我们的舞蹈令大家耳目一新，获得大家的一致好评，得到了最高的分数。

演出过后，心中的愉悦喜形于色。这心中的喜悦不仅仅是因最终的成功，还因这原创的舞蹈注入了我们的无数心血，更因这胜利肯定了我的方式。正是这原创的方式使我们从别组抄袭的舞蹈中脱颖而出，使我们径行直遂获得胜利。我有我的方式，这独树一帜的风格令我收获喜悦与胜利！