大学英语作文写人模板【优秀20篇】

Born into a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17,1955, Mo Yan, whose original name is Guan Moye, showed great interest in reading and calligraphy in his early years. Whats more, not only is he outgoing but he also has a strong sense of humor.Having graduated from the PLA Academy of Arts in 1986, Mo Yan went on further education and received a Masters Degree in Arts from Beijing University five years later. With a talent for literature, he won Chinas high estliterary prize, Mao Dun Literature Prize by his book Frogin 2011. Toall Chineses excitement, this year he became the first Chinese writer to be awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature, which will certainly make great contributions to the development of Chinese literature.

[描写人物英语的作文

I have a nice friend. His name is Roy. He lives in XieQiao. He’s 12 years old and his birthday is in March. He speaks Chinese. He can speak English, too. He’s short. His hair is short. He wears a pair of yellow glasses. He likes swimming in the river in summer. Swimming can make him happy. His math and English are very good. Sometimes he teaches me math. Usually I read books with him. He will be my good friend forever.

我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫罗伊。他住在谢桥。他12岁，他的生日是在3月。他会说汉语也会说英语。他不高。他的头发是短的。他带着一副黄色的眼镜。他喜欢在夏天到河里游泳。游泳能使他开心。他的数学和英语都很好。有时他教我数学。我常常跟他一起看书。他永远都是我的好朋友。

[我的朋友小学英语写人作文

2015年12月19日大学英语四级考试继续沿用多题多卷形式，写作作文所占分值比例为15%，话题方面主要考查考生根据所提供的信息和命题考查对题目的理解和写作能力，本次考试本质要求无大变化。

本次四级写作考试作文类型：人生哲理类，话题方面均强调树立积极乐观向上、正面努力的观点的重要性，话题密切联系现实，具有一定教育启示意义。按题目要求写相应的内容是保证不跑题的方法。

我们已经拿到了三个题目，大家可以一起来看一下你考的是哪个题目。

第一篇作文题目是：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being creative rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words.

第二篇作文题目是：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying ‘Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

第三篇作文题目是：

Writing

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

此次作文，依旧没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题，而是“平民草根、接地气”的人生哲理类，三个题目在今年的考试当中有以下几个特点：

第一，易审题，延续了上一次四级写作考试“反押题”的倾向。

之前我们可能会去了解了宏观的大话题，这次考试题目预测和之前的准备有所出入。作文的主题非常开放而明显，基本上不存在跑题的问题，所有考生均可表达自己的观点。

第二，重语言，主题明确，考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身。

一篇不再“假大空”的文章，注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”，而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达，写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。同学们比拼的是驾驭英语语言本身的能力，对词汇、语法、固定句型套用的熟练程度和精采程度。

第三，技巧和能力并重。

北京新东方四六级(精品课)课堂所倡导的“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点，又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨，多背，多写，背好，写好，总能够在考场上有话好说，有分可拿。

第四，目前的题目是描述与议论文并重。

这次的考试其实更多的是重在考生的思考问题、发表评论、写议论文的能力。这样的话题涉及的面比较广、话题比较正式，作文考的是你真正的语言描述和议论点能力。

以上四点是我们对本次四级考试作文部分的题型的归纳和总结。大家在备考的时候还是要技巧与背诵并重。我们应该学会如何举例子、写过程、去描述，如何发表论述、论证。第二点我们可能更多的要进行考前的背诵。在新东方在线的官网上有大量的考前跟这三道题目话题非常接近的范文，不知道同学们有没有背到和下载。如果您有相应的准备加上新东方老师讲的相应的策略、技巧和方法，我想本次作文题目应该是非常简单的，手到擒来。这是我们对四级作文的一个点评。

通过我们的点评和解析，你大概了解自己的考试成绩和状态，如果你觉得自己考得不错的话，给自己放一个美好的寒假，让自己放松一下，多读一些书，跟朋友交流都可以。如果你发现自己的作文还是有问题，那你在寒假开始也许就应该开始背单词，甚至准备我们在2016年6月份四六级的考试。我们新东方在线诸多的课程包括全程班也许就是同学们一个不错的选择。

第二，对今天下午要考六级的同学，我们对作文这个专项也有一个小小的提醒，因为12月份的四级和6级的四级高度的一致，我们也可以进行一个预测，下午的六级是不是也会延续上次考试出题的风格，六级还是会出“引语作文”，给你一句名言警句，或者是给你一句名人名言，让你对名言进行评论、进行提炼、进行内涵的升华写成一篇议论文;我们也不排除出现图表作文的可能性，所以这些我们都希望同学们能够准备到，并且预祝已经考完四级的同学，能够考出理想的成绩。也预祝下午参加六级考试的各位考生能够考出理想的成绩。

Hello everyone and good morning! I am very privileged to be given this platform by the professor and really happy to introduce myself. My name is XX, 19 years old, from XXX, which is a very beautiful place!I am very happy coming to XXX and able to study with you all for the next 4 years. We are all from every corner of the country, which is a kind of fate. I like reading, playing computer and also love the subject of maths.

But unfortunately, we dont have this subject here.My ideal is to be a director and one day be able to make my own movies. Therefore I have chosen this major and I have every confidence that I shall do very well.I believe that all of you have chosen the same subject must share the same love with me. Hope we shall learn from each other in the coming 4 years. Help each other so that we all could hand in satisfactory results for our tomorrow .

我们知道，很多人认为大学生活是自由、舒适的，但我想说这不是真的。事实上，我的大学生活是如此的忙碌，以至于我都不知道我的能量是否足够。下面是小编帮大家整理的大学生活感触英语作文，希望大家喜欢。

As we know, many people favor theidea that the college life is free and comfortable, but I’d like to say it’snot true. As a matter of fact, my life in university is so busy that I wonderif my energy is enough. As to my college life, I divide it into four parts,including study, student activities, library and the others.

Firstly, I want to talk about thestudy. In my opinion, study is the priority in college. When I received theletter of admission in summer, I knew clearly that what I should do. So I makeup my mind to study hard and pursue learning as much as possible. I’m greatlyconvinced that knowledge can change my life. Therefore, I often go to the quietstudy room where many people study there. By working so hard, I get good gradesin the exams.

Secondly, student activities playan important role in our college life. To be honest, the student Union is agood place where one can develop social skills, get his abilities trained. Itake part in many student activities. For example, I’ m a volunteer, teachingthe kids to learn to dance and write. I think it’s meaningful for everyone togive a hand to others. I can also do some jobs in the Student Union, includingreceiving and sending fast mail, selling papers and magazines. I think they’re unforgettableand worthwhile experiences for me.

Thirdly, I also visit the libraryconstantly. It’s said that “shelves of books, oceans of knowledge”, so I readbooks that I’m interested in. In this way, I can share stories with my new friendsand it also changes my horizons .When I’m sad, lost or in trrouble, staying thelibrary makes me quiet and comfortable. After all, every life has bad momentsas well as good ones, and the library for me is a support in bad moments. So it’s wise choice for me to stay in thelibrary.

Finally, I often do other thingsin my spare time. In order to alleviate parents’ burden, I often do somepart-time jobs and write some articles to earn money. It helps me to beindependent and improve my social skills.

In short, mylife in university is busy but valuable. You can see that study brings me knowledge,student activities improve myself, library changes my horizons, the othersthings make me independent. They get all my abilities trained. And I see thatthe chance will come only if you have a prepared mind, so I’m sure that I canachieve my dreams in college life.

Mr Shao taught me English when I was in Senior Three.With the bald head and hunchback, the fifty or some man distinguished himself from his counterparts in many ways.

He was so addicted to tobacco that he couldn`t even skip acigarette in the corridor at the interval between two classes. Due to the long time consumption of cigarettes, his teeth had gone totally bad and occasionally let off unpleasant smell which really disturbed us when we were talking to him. At times, he came to recognize it and consequently found out a solution. He suggested we write down our problems and he answer them in the written form. Although I knew all along that he was a careful man, his quotations of five different dictionaries on a single multiple choice problem was still beyond my wildest dream.

What`s more, none of us could imagine how excellent his ancient Chinese literature was. What he tended to do in his class was to recite several segments of the famous ancient prose and then put them into English.  However, under the pressure of College Entrance Exam, the students didn`t seem to be so interested in his performance.  Therefore, he tried to stimulate the class by editions of Times as prizes for answering questions. It worked on us instantly.

On the day of the entrance exam, he waited nervously with us out of the examination room.  He kept reminding us not to drink water in case that we would feel like going to toilet during the exam. Not withstanding his constant claims that we students were far less important than his beloved daughter, we did feel his devotion to us.

My College---My New Life

New life begins! Ive been expecting this moment for a long time.Finally,I become a college student .

All good things must come to an end ! I am now apart from my family members and many good friends.I am awared that I will have to do everything on my own .

Being responsible is the exact thing that I am supposed to think about! Im now dealing something responsibly with my new rommates.I enjoy being together with them,they just like my good friends in high school,being kind and thoughtful !

My college is a place for a new beginning ,Im sure Im taking a new life ,everything here is full of challenge,quite different from things in high school,teachers are not going to tell you exactly what you are going to do ,you will have to make your own decisions.

So far,Im geting along so well with people aroud me ,college provides me with chances and challenge,Im going to make a difference to my life!And I have every confidence on myself.I will still have to move on......

解释：

我的大学----我的新生

新的生命开始了！ 我期待这一刻很久了。终于，我成为大学生了。

天下没有不散的宴席！我与我的家人和许多好朋友分开了！我意识到我做一切事情都要靠自己了！

有责任感，这是我首先要考虑的！ 我现在能够带着一种责任感与我的新室友一起处理一些事情，我很享

受跟他们在一起的时光，他们就想我高中的朋友，一样的友好，体贴！

大学是一个重新开始的地方，我确信我已经在过我的新活，这里的一切是那么的有挑战性，不像高中的时候，

大学老师是不会什么事都告诉你，你该做什么，要怎么做。你必须自己做决定。

目前，我和身边的人都相处得很好，大学给我提供了很多机会，也同时给我带来挑战，我将使我的人生变得不同，我对自己有100%的信心。我还将继续向前走......

[我的大学英语精选作文

I have a brother, he is like the other boys, with a long black hair, look, he has a child right here on the forehead, the hair upwards, a pair of big eyes, a flat nose under thick lips. My brother is a clever boy!

I have a brother, he is like the other boys, with a long black hair, look, he has a child right here on the forehead, the hair upwards, a pair of big eyes, a flat nose under thick lips. My brother is a clever boy!

Once at noon, my mother was cooking, my brother and I were watching TV, a cartoon will come soon. At this time, the home of the oil ran out, the mother pushed open the door and said: "the home of oil run out, you who go to buy?" My brother turned his eyes and went to turn off the TV and said, "I have a lot of homework to do." I had no choice but to go. As soon as I closed the door, my brother turned on the TV again and said, "arent you doing more homework?" Brother smiled and said: "I finished my homework yesterday, but I forgot." When I came back, I saw my brother watching TV again.

My brother is not only clever, but also a "bookworm". Saturday morning, brother to eat breakfast go to read him with a "Andersen fairy tale", imperceptibly, brother to buy the little match girl sitting together, the little girl lit a match, the food appeared in their eyes…… "Boy, have lunch." Mothers voice pulled her brother out of the illusion. "Mom, Im reading a book." "You ah, is really a little bookworm, go for lunch." Brother looked at her mothers smiling face, he laughed.

This is my brother, a smart and like reading brother.

Korea is a country that famous for its beach, culture, even their products. Luckily, I had a chance to go to Korea last year.

When I got Korea, it was night. We went our hotel. To our surprise, the hotel was so beautiful and nice, the room was comfortable and the food in the restaurant was also delicious.

The most famous palace in Korea Gyeongbokgung Palace. It is spectacular and it is too big that we spend 5 hours finishing visiting this place.

We also try the Korea food. But I dont like it, it was always made of vegetables and seafood, with a little salt and oil, but my mother said it is healthy.

The shopping mall in Korea is big, very big. The Lotte shopping mall is the biggest one with almost all kinds goods in it. We bought many nice things.

I enjoy myself during this trip. If I can, I want to visit there again.

“The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstance they want, and if they cannot find them, make them.” Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people. I’m very glad to receive college education and i reached the conclusion that i have come to college not for one single reason, but for many.

“这世上的成功之士，是那些奋力寻觅自己想要得到机遇的人们。倘使找不着机会，他们就自己创造机会。”这句名言是一个伟大的作家萧伯纳写的。被原来越多的人分享着。我很高兴能够接受大学教育，我总结出我想上大学不单单是为了一个原因，而是很多个。

First, university is such an ideal place to broaden my horizon and make more friends. The youth of 21stcentury should be open-minded, instead of being a person with a tunnel vision. I’m ready to meet more challenges and make more friends during the four years.

第一，大学是能开阔我眼界和结交更多朋友的理想之地。作为21世纪的年轻人，我们应该开拓思维，而不是目光狭隘。我已经做好在这四年内接受挑战和认识更多朋友的准备了。

Second, I’m unwilling to step into the society straight after high school. I’m afraid I’m not fully prepared for the working environment: complicated interpersonal problems, jockeying for position, a tremendous amount of pressure and etc. I have to face various kinds of major conflicts as well as trivial things. I seem to be over-pessimistic, but that actually accounts for part of my choice.

第二，我不愿意在高中之后就直接进入社会。我害怕我没有完全做好踏入工作环境的准备：复杂的人际问题，用手段谋取职位，巨大的压力等等。我必须面对各种重大冲突还有琐碎事情。我也许是过度悲观了，但是事实上这也是我做出选择的一个原因。

Finally, thanks to the all-out support from my parents, i am able to further my study in university. I’ll spare no efforts to live up to their expectation on me to be a well-trained and well-rounded person.

最后，幸好有我父母的全力支持，我才得以在大学继续我的学业。我会不留余力地满足他们的期望成为一个训练有素全面发展的人。

I will learn experience and challenge myself in my college life and be an outstanding person of future.

我会在大学生涯中学习，经历和挑战我自己，在未来成为一个佼佼者。

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me  introduce myself. My name is ,24. I come from Nanchang,the capital  of Jiangxi Province. I graduated from the ****** department of *****University  in July ,2001.In the past two years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate  examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a  head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a  result since I have a chance to be interview by you.

I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare  time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books,  especially those about ****.Frequently I exchange with other people by making  comments in the forum on line.In addition ,during my college years,I was once a  Net-bar technician.So, I have a comparative good command of network  application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching  for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my  favorite.Anyway,I feel great pity for our countrys team.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on  learning .Of course, if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous  University,I will spare no effort to master a good command of advance  ******.

Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue，and

helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need

others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are

strangers to them，its hard to imagine what our world will be like.However，some

are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are

just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion，we

should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should

also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little

kindness，our world will be full of love.

You may feel that college life is boring. We do not know how to deal with the plenty of spare time. But I think the college life will become wonderful as long as you make it meaningful.

In your spare time, you could play basketball, football and so on. Doing sports is very interesting and good for your health.

In fact, you can do anything which you are interested in.Do not be nervous.We are friends.

Studying in college is a brand new start of our life.You can continue to study hard for the better scords. Libary is a good place for students to study in. If you want to show your talents and skills you can join in all kinds of activities.

In a word,college life is wonderful!

你或许会认为大学生活很枯燥，你不知道如何处理这么充足的空余时间。但是我认为只要你过得有意义大学生活会变得非常精彩。

在业余时间，你可以打篮球，踢足球等等，做运动是很有趣的，并且对你的健康也有帮助。

事实上，你可以做任何你喜欢做的事情。不要紧张，我们是朋友。

在大学里的学习是我们生活的新起点，为了好成绩你可以继续努力学习。图书馆是个学生学习的好地方，如果你想展示你的天赋和才能，你可以参加各种各样的活动。

总而言之，大学生活是非常精彩的!

I have an inseparable friends, he is XXX.

XXX x years old this year, is XXX x grade students. He is a tall, not fat nor thin, appear very spirit. Round head with plank inch, hair pitch-black shine. Also like the apple face inlaid with a pair of intense big eyes, like two black pearls. He is especially love to laugh, laugh to reveal a pair of small dimples on her face. Usually like to wear school uniforms, because it is convenient to wear school uniform activity.

XXX is a love to help others, no matter big or small, in the class to find his help for it. Remember that math test, the teacher let we all use pen paper. The moment when I open the pen bag, immediately dumbfounded. Oh, my pen is missing. "Hitched" my heart once, in a hurry to find, but not see it. Was I like a cat on hot bricks - around. Because courage small, so cant and the teacher said, his tears secretly. XXX at this moment, sitting behind me saw I worry of appearance, then quietly asked me: "XXX, whats the matter with you?" I sobbed, said: "my pen is missing, how to answer?" He said: "dont be sad, use mine, I have two pens." Say, from took a look the new pen in the pencil case, gave it to me. Look at the pen, I am excited to tears, quietly say: "thank you!" He says with a laugh: "youre welcome, who let we are good friends."

This is my good friend, listen to my introduction, you also willing to become friends with him!

我有一个形影不离的好朋友，他就是——xxx。

xxx今年x岁了，是xxx小学x年级的学生。他的个子高高的，不胖也不瘦，显得很精神。圆圆的脑袋上留着板寸，头发乌黑发亮。在苹果似的脸上还镶嵌着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，像两个黑珍珠一样。他特别爱笑，笑起来脸上就露出一对小酒窝。平时喜欢穿校服，因为穿校服活动起来很方便。

xxx可是一个爱助人为乐的人，班里无论大小事，找他帮忙准没错。记得那次数学测试，老师让我们都用钢笔答卷。当我打开笔袋的那一刻，顿时傻眼了。糟了，我的钢笔不见了。我的心“咯噔”一下，急急忙忙找了起来，可就是不见它的踪影。急得我像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。因为胆子小，所以也不敢和老师说，只好自己暗自落泪。这时，坐在我后面的xxx看见我着急的样子，便小声地问我：“xxx，你怎么了?”我抽泣着说：“我的钢笔不见了，怎么答卷啊?”他说：“别难过了，用我的吧，我有两支笔。”说着，就从笔袋里拿出一支看起来很新的笔，递给了我。看着这支笔，我激动得热泪盈眶，小声地说：“谢谢你!”他笑着说：“不客气，谁让我们是好朋友呢。”

这就是我的好朋友，听了我的介绍，你们也愿意和他成为朋友吧!

Our English teacher is a foreigner, oh, shes a veritable canadians because she has the characteristics of the typical north American: golden hair, blue eyes, white skin. So always give a person a kind of visual aesthetic feeling.

Foreign teacher teach students also have their own saying: some classmate say she like a child, always in words and deeds with a childlike innocence; Some students said foreign teacher is a little like aliens, because her pronunciation, let us look at her lips mouth of big, like aliens.

These views are, of course, also cant let we deny that she is a good teacher, she is kind, patient and to our teaching is also very lively, also often lets play a little game, such as to the horses tail, guess the action and so on, do well, will award to our pencils, stickers, small gifts. Many students in our school to see her, will be scrambling to greet her, chat, it seems that people like her very much.

In a word, I like our teacher, she is our good teacher!

我们的英语教师是个老外，她可是个名副其实的加拿大人哦，因为她具有典型的北美人特征：金灿灿的卷发，碧蓝色的眼睛，白白的皮肤.所以总给人一种视觉的美感.

同学们对外教老师的也各有说法：有些同学说她象个孩子，言语和行动中总透着一种孩子般的天真;有些同学说外教有点像外星人，是因为她让我们看她嘴唇发音的时候，嘴咧的大大的，像外星人。

当然，这些观点也不能让我们否认她是个好外教，她亲切、耐心，给我们的外教课也很活泼，还经常让我们玩一些小游戏，如给马贴尾巴啦，猜动作啦等等，做得好的，还会奖给我们铅笔、贴纸类的小礼物呢.我们学校很多同学见到她，都会争先恐后的跟她打招呼，聊天，看来，喜欢她的人还是挺多的。

总之，我喜欢我们的外教，她是我们的好老师!

I have a beautiful and serious good mother.

Mother has a bright black straight hair, her fierce eyebrows under a pair of watery eyes, eyes with a big mouth. When she was happy, the sound from the mouth was pleasant and pleasant; when the unhappy voice was like a rumbling thunder.

When I was young, my mother gave me milk, porridge, but also with me to play, take care of my food and clothing. When I was sick, my mother carrying me to the hospital injection, dispensing. When my temper, my mother has been coaxing me, tell me storytelling. When I am not sensible, my mother has always taken the trouble to teach me the truth of life.

Now, I went to primary school, my mother began to become serious. Every semester, my mother gave me to buy a lot of information to me, but I do not want to do, empty a lot, my mother hit me with a stick. The teacher arranged to see the extracurricular book homework, I do not like to see, my mother on their own, and then she saw the knowledge told me that she said she would slowly cultivate my interest in extracurricular books. Although the mother becomes serious, but I know what my mother did is for me.

Mom, I thank you, I want to sing a song to you, that is - grateful heart. I hope you can understand that the daughter of you, is full of love.

As we know, many people favor the idea that the University life is free and comfortable, but I’d like to say it’s not true. As a matter of fact, my life in university is so busy that I wonder if my energy is enough. As to my University life, I divide it into four parts, including study, student activities, library and the others.

Firstly, I want to talk about the study. In my opinion, study is the priority in University. When I received the letter of admission in summer, I knew clearly that what I should do. So I make up my mind to study hard and pursue learning as much as possible. I’m greatly convinced that knowledge can change my life. Therefore, I often go to the quiet study room where many people study there. By working so hard, I get good grades in the exams.

Secondly, student activities play an important role in our University life. To be honest, the student Union is a good place where one can develop social skills, get his abilities trained. I take part in many student activities. For example, I’ m a volunteer, teaching the kids to learn to dance and write. I think it’s meaningful for everyone to give a hand to others. I can also do some jobs in the Student Union, including receiving and sending fast mail, selling papers and magazines. I think they’re unforgettable and worthwhile experiences for me.

Thirdly, I also visit the library constantly. It’s said that “shelves of books, oceans of knowledge”, so I read books that I’m interested in. In this way, I can share stories with my new friends and it also changes my horizons .When I’m sad, lost or in trouble, staying the library makes me quiet and comfortable. After all, every life has bad moments as well as good ones, and the library for me is a support in bad moments. So it’s wise choice for me to stay in the library.

Finally, I often do other things in my spare time. In order to alleviate parents’ burden, I often do some part-time jobs and write some articles to earn money. It helps me to be independent and improve my social skills.

In short, my life in university is busy but valuable. You can see that study brings me knowledge, student activities improve myself, library changes my horizons, the others things make me independent. They get all my abilities trained. And I see that the chance will come only if you have a prepared mind, so I’m sure that I can achieve my dreams in University life.

关于成功Success大学英语作文

When it comes to success, different people have different opinions about what makes it come true. Some people regard hard-working as an essential quality to success while others believe being clever would lead to success. From my point of view, I think perseverance and hard-working are indispensable for those who want to make an achievement.

谈到成功时，对于实现成功的原因不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为勤奋是成功必备的素质，而另一些人则相信聪明人会实现成功。从我的角度来看，我认为毅力和勤奋对于那些想要成功的人是必不可少的。

Firstly, perseverance let people step closely towards success. Most people want to make a big difference to prove their value. People who set their goal and keep moving would make their dream come true. However, there are some people who set their goal but they stop at the difficulty would fail in the end. I think the difference between success and failure is perseverance. If we have perseverance, even if we are not clever, we will make a great difference, but if we not, we are doomed to lose. As we all know, Edison is a great inventor in the world. However, before he invented the bulb, he kept trying for tens of thousands of times to find a suitable wire. Let us imagine, if he gave up at the 999th, then how he couldn’t become so successful. So, I strongly believe that perseverance produces success.

首先，毅力让人离成功越来越近。大多数人都想用不同的方式证明自己的价值。设定自己的目标，向着目标走，就可以使梦想成真了。然而，有些人设立了目标，却在困难面前妥协了将以失败告终。我认为成功与失败之间的差别是毅力。如果我们有毅力，即使我们不聪明，我们也会有很大的不同，但是如果我们没有毅力，我们注定是要失败的。我们都知道，爱迪生是一位伟大的发明家。但是，在他发明电灯泡前，他试了为数千次去找一个合适的线。让我们想象一下，如果他在第九百九十九次放弃了，那么他就不可能变得如此成功。因此，我强烈认为，坚持就会成功。

Secondly, there is also a kind of people who are born with cleverness, I think they are lucky. Nevertheless, if they don’t make a hard work on their way to their goal, they, absolutely, will become loser. Whether we are gifted for intelligent, we must be hard-working so as to success. I regard hard-working as an efficient approach to be successful because I believe ‘pains and gains’. As for those who do not make great efforts on work, failure follows. In old times, there is a clever boy who can make excellent poem when he can talk. When his father found the little child’s cleverness, he just let the child make poems to show around while never let the boy learned anything. When the boy grew up, people forgot him because he lost the ability

to compose poems and became ordinary as others. From this matter, we can see that only by hard-working can we get knowledge and make a good future.

其次，还有一种人是天生聪明的，他们是幸运的。然而，如果他们没有在实现目标之前努力工作，他们当然也会成为失败者。无论我们是否有天资，我们都应该努力工作以获得成功。我认为勤奋是成功的一个有效的方法，因为我相信的“付出和收获”。对于那些不努力工作的人最后是失败的了。在古代，有一个聪明的男孩，在他能说话的时候就可以作优秀的诗歌。当他的父亲发现他孩子的聪明时，他只是让孩子到处作诗歌来炫耀，却从不让他儿子学习别的知识。孩子长大后，人们把他遗忘了，因为他失去了创作能力，成为了普通人。从这件事中，我们可以看到，只有通过努力工作才能获得知识，拥有一个好的未来。

Anyway, I think perseverance and hard-working are both important in our way to success for they enhance us and produce success.

不管怎么样，我觉得毅力和勤奋在成功路上都是很重要的，因为他们提升我们并获得成功。

[关于成功Success 大学英语作文

HuangMei is  my  hometown. It is  in  the  East  in  HuBei.It is East  on  the  city  named  AnQing  of   AnHui.And it is  south to   the  city  named  JiuJiang  of  JiangXi. It  is  a    great city  in  my  heart.It  has  a long  history for about  1800 years  in  China .Example .The  temple  named  SiZu  and  WuZu were   in  HuangMei for a  long  years-old.Today,Every  year  many   visitor  come  different part  to  there.As  a  daughter  from Huangmei.I  leaved it away  for  about  seven  years. But  I miss it everyday .Even  in  a lot of  my  dream  in  the  night  .I belive HuangMei will  be  richer and  richer .The  new  year  2009  will going .Tonight  I  hope  everything  will  be  well  in  my  new 26  years-old.All  my friends  will be  well.I  must  work  hard in   the new  year.I will be ain growth as  my  hometown .

中文：我的故乡在黄梅.黄梅位于湖北省的东部，它东接安徽省安庆府，南邻江西省九江市.在我心中，它是一座伟大的县城.它在中国史上约有1800余年的历史，像闻名遐迩的四祖寺，五祖寺在黄梅有很长时间的历史了.每年，都有来自不同地域的许多游客去那.我自离开故乡已是七载余，但是我却每天思念故乡，以致在梦里都是如此.作为从黄梅走出来的女儿，我坚信我的故乡会越来越富饶.新的2009就要来临，今晚我祝福新的一年将万事顺利，我所有的朋友都好.在新的26岁年轮里，我必须努力工作，我会像我的家乡一样成长.

Hello everyone! My is., from Qinzhou. I’m so glad to meet you, and I’m currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School. my major is knitting. It’s my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp, because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work. As we all know English is very useful in every field.

My English is limited that’s why I’m here. I know it’s a huge challenge for me to conquer English, but I believe that “No pains, no gains, success belongs to the persevering”, I hope I can learn more from you, Thank you!

My mother is a clean worker, she has a long hair, perennial hard work, so that she made a hair of a long hair white hair. She has a pair of big eyes, but now it becomes boring. Her face darkened, eyes wrinkles began to rise more. In order to make more money for the family, in order to let me and my brother and other children as comfortable day, my mother swept the streets during the day and night to someone elses restaurant to wash the dishes, she washed every day like a bowl of rice, only to the Late at night, she can drag her tired body to go home.

She for our family to eat a lot of bitter, she will get up at three or four every morning, help us find clothes, boiled porridge to us as breakfast. After doing these things, she also went to the street to clean up. I only know that the cleaners are looked down upon by the people, I told my mother, said: "Mom! You find other work is good, open the parents will be when someone elses children are pointing to you," that persons mother is a clean Ah! Is such a job ah! "I have been looked down upon others, hum! You better find out the job soon." Mother did not speak, she head down, silently tears. My mother did not listen to me, still doing the job, I know my mother did not want to change jobs, it did not force her.

Until now, I understand that the mother is for our family will be so tired, here I want to call the world: mother, I love you!