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359写家乡的初一英语作文
全文共 752 字
+ 加入清单My hometown is suizhou there is very beautiful in a city park and the south of baiyun shennong park is recreation visit places. Winding road and thick vegetation and Xuan mesh to deprive a person bonsai let a person with nature.
To realize fall lake feeling the hushan is right choice. The hushan LiuAn supple boasts beautiful scenery jade stroll relaxed.
In the evening jiefang road LongTai pedestrian street lights shopping shopping two not mistake; Pearl plaza railway station plaza leisure sports and tide of stream of people boisterous might as well go see suizhou of mass cultural life.
我的家乡随州非常漂亮的城市公园和南白云神农公园娱乐访问的地方。蜿蜒的道路和茂密的植被和宣网剥夺一个人盆景让人与自然。
意识到秋天湖山湖的感觉是正确的选择。拥有美丽的风景湖山LiuAn柔软玉散步放松。
晚上解放路LongTai步行街灯光购物购物两不误明珠广场、火车站广场、休闲、运动和潮汐流的人热闹的不妨去看看随州的大众文化生活。
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篇1：关于汽车和自行车的初一英语作文
全文共 452 字
+ 加入清单I like going to school by like, because I think I can keep healthy by riding.Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. Some foreigners buy bicycles to ride.But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles.In fact the exhaust gas from cars makes the air dirty and they waste energy.I think bicycles are better than cars.
我喜欢骑自行车上学，因为我可以通过骑车保持健康。自行车在北京依然很流行，一些外国人也买自行车骑。但是越来越多的人买汽车，因为他们认为汽车比自行车快。汽车的尾气污染了空气，浪费了能源。我认为自行车比汽车好。
篇2：初一英语过去式作文大全
全文共 2563 字
+ 加入清单Last summer vacation ,I had a great time. Because I went to Beijing. Beijing was very beautiful, but there was an interesting thing,it made me very happy!
One day, I got a toy tiger from my mother.So,I wanted go to the zoo.When I came to the zoo,I saw a woman and her baby first, that woman took her baby to here also see the tiger. The tiger spent time on sleeping,the woman pointed the tiger and asked her baby:"Look,what#39;s that ?#39; The baby answered:"That#39;s a big cat." Haha,yeah,
when the tiger slept , it just like a big cat!
初一英语过去式作文二：Last weekends
last weekends I was so busy.
In the morning,I visited my grandparents and had lunch together.
We had#39;t seen each other for a long time.
so I really missed them.
In the afternoon,I went out with my friends.
we had basketball games in the park.
It was a really good time for me and I was very happy.
初一英语过去式作文三：My weekend
I had a busy weekend.On Saturday morning,I cleaned the room and washed the clothes.In the afternoon,I did my homework.It was a little difficult,On Saturday evening,I went to the movies.On Sunday
morning ,I went to the library to read a book about history.Then in the afternoon ,I went to the beach.
On Sunday night,I watched an interesting talk show.
What a busy but happy weekend I had!
初一英语过去式作文四：Thursday
Thursday, August 1st
Today I went to the Palace Museum. It was cool. Then I went to the Great Wall . It was fantastic. There were many people there. In the afternon, I visited Tian’an Men Square. There were many beautiful flowers .It was really great. I went to a Beijing Hutung. It was really fun.
I enjoyed myself very much.
初一英语过去式作文五：Last summer holiday
Last summer holiday,My family had gone to HongKong ,At the morning ,my father drive the car to Shenzhen,After the lunch,we take the car to HongKong,HongKong is a center of fanancial.There are many people in there,We just go shopping ,then ,we had a good dinner. The next day ,we gone to the Ocean Park,it was very intersting and wonderful.The good expression was the informce of the dophin,They could save people,also could show many things.They are very smart! I like HongKong very much !
初一英语过去式作文六：Weekend
Jenny had a busy weekend.Last Saturday morning, she did her homework and practiced speaking English at home . She watched TV and played tennis on Saturday afternoon. That night, she went to the movies. On Sunday morning , she cleaned her room and went to the beach. . On Sunday afternoon, she visited her friends and went shopping .She had a party last night. What a busy but happy weekend she had!
篇3：给好朋友的一封信初一英语作文
全文共 2096 字
+ 加入清单Dear John,
亲爱的约翰：
Long time no see, how is your summer vacation? I’m really sorry for writing so late. I have been too busy at this moment. I am happy to hear that you have traveled to Tibet at this summer holiday. How I wish I could go there with you!
好久不见，你的暑假过得还好吗?很抱歉那么晚才写信给你。这段时间我真的太忙了。我很高兴听说暑假你去了西藏旅游。我真希望我也和你一起去。
Let me tell you something about my summer holiday. My summer holiday is rich and colorful. My parents take me to Hong Kong. That’s a beautiful place. I buy a lot of funny things at there. Such as pretty dresses, cute dolls and the snacks I never eat before. I really want to stay there and never come back! In a word, I really appreciate the life there.
让我告诉你我的暑假趣事吧。我的暑假过得丰富多彩。我父母带我去了香港。那是个美丽的地方。我在香港买了很多新奇的玩意。比如漂亮的裙子，可爱的娃娃和一些从来没有吃过的零食。我真想待在那里再也不回来了。一句话，我喜欢那里的生活。
I’m really looking forward to your reply!
我很期待你的回复!
Truly yours,
Zoey
你忠实的朋友
写给好朋友的一封信篇二
Dear Friend,
亲爱的朋友，
How have you been recently? I miss you very much. Do you still remember me?
最近过得怎么样?我很想你。你还记得我吗?
To be honest, Im honored to make friends with you. I still remember the days when we were together. As far as I know, you are the kindest person in the world. Once we were together, you always treated me as if I were your dear brother, so I was grateful to you in my heart. After you leaving, I always thought of you. Next time we have a chance to see each other, I will say "thank you" to you. Thank you for your kindness. Now I have got the meaning of my life.
老实说，我很荣幸成为你的朋友。我还记得我们在一起的日子。我觉得你是世界上最善良的人。我们在一起的时候，我们总是亲如兄弟，所以在我的心里我很感激你。你离开后，我总是想起你。下一次如果我们有机会见到对方，我会对你说“谢谢你”。谢谢你的善良。让我现在的人生有了意义。
Although we are in two different places now, we are still together, because we are always heart to heart. I believe we can see each other again. Since we are always close friends as well as dear brothers. Because of you, my life is always so significant. Wherever I am, I will pray good luck for you.
虽然现在我们在两个不同的地方，但我们依然在一起，因为我们总是心连心。我相信我们还能再次见面。 因为我们是亲密的朋友，亲爱的兄弟。因为你，我的人生总是那么的有意义。无论我在哪里，我都会为你祈祷好运。
Last but not the least, I hope you can make it and have a bright future.
最后但并非最不重要的是我希望你能有一个光明的未来。
Sincerely yours,
Jason
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篇4：关于初一的暑期英语作文
全文共 785 字
+ 加入清单初一暑期英语作文：A Present For Mother’s Birthday
A Present For Mother’s Birthday
Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people. So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.
It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.
Why do you think it was a good present?
篇5：初一英语
全文共 592 字
+ 加入清单These are lots of books in our daily life. Some are about history, some are
novels, and some are even about the dream in the future. I think its useful to
read stories, because it can be used sometimes. Once, there was a very difficult
question in an important history exam history, which wasnt mentioned in our
history books, even our teacher has never told us about it. But I remembered
clearly that I had read it in a history story, so I answered the question
without difficulty and became the only student in our class who answered the
question correctly. In my view, its useful to read stories.
篇6：端午节的初一英语
全文共 1820 字
+ 加入清单Today is the Dragon Boat Festival in the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar. Every year, aunt will pack lots of delicious food. Sweet sweet jujube dumplings for us, especially my mother and I like it best. You can also eat with your elders and sisters at your grandmothers house, and enjoy the Dragon Boat Festival, but this year, it is not so lively. Uncle and aunt went out to earn money. Uncle went out with his sister. There were only three family members and grandparents. It looks very cold.
Early this morning, I have the mother will give me to eat dumplings package dates, who knows but mother was busy with housework. At noon, dad cooked a good meal and cooked food, called grandpa and grandma to come to dinner, but not a bit of a cheerful atmosphere. In the afternoon, in order not to let the festival have a little meaning, my mother and I went out for a stroll with my grandmother. We went to the market, but did not see the shadow of half of the dumplings, to buy dumplings but no jujube. I was disappointed. My mother comforted me and said, "next time you see the decision to sell the zongzi, you can eat it." Its a little better to hear that. Mom visited the clothing store and took us to the home supermarket, and bought some delicious food on the way. From the supermarket out, we have been fruitful.
Back home, I wanted my uncle and aunt, and my four year old sister, so I went online to chat with them, and the little aunt laughed and told me that a lot of jujube zongzi was given to me at the Dragon Boat Festival next year, so I could eat enough. Though we have not been together for Dragon Boat Festival this year, we can also enjoy seeing them online. Uncle and aunt also have an appointment with me. Next year, Dragon Boat Festival will definitely come back for the holidays.
篇7：初一英语作文：学会微笑
全文共 751 字
+ 加入清单smile, how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy. and this happiness is from the bottom of heart.
it’s not like enthusiastic laughter, but just warm, makes your heart warm.
mother’s smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again…
smile, so easy, but also so useful.
| so, let’s learn to smile. everyone needs others’ smile. when we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. and maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you.
let’s learn to smile often, i believe it can even make the whole warm. living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.
篇8：初一英语作文
全文共 375 字
+ 加入清单Henry is a little fatter than he wants to be. He is a bit worried. He
decides to lose weight. He eats only a little food for breakfast and supper, and
has some fruit. He doesn’t eat much sugar because he thinks it makes him
fatter.
Besides having only a little food, he keeps doing exercises every day. He
swims very often and runs every day. Some time later, he becomes stronger.
篇9：ExcessiveDrinking初一英语作文
全文共 472 字
+ 加入清单Everybody knows drinking a little is good to health, but excessive drinking is bad. Those who drink too much may not live long. Excessive drinking may cause many diseases, such as high blood pressure and heart attack. Drinking too much can also result in a series of family problems and social problems, such as the break up of a family and social crimes.
If everyone can keep control over drinking, we can enjoy a more peaceful social environment.
篇10：初一下册英语作文大全
全文共 348 字
+ 加入清单im a student now and i study in no.2 middle school. i like study. i study
every day . i think its very interesting. in the future. i want to be a
reporter. i think its an exciting job. i like talking to people. i like going
to many different places. i like meeting lots of interesting people. but
sometimes its a little dangerous. i like exciting work.
篇11：初一英语作文theRainofSummer
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+ 加入清单The Rain of Summer
Beginning this summer, even here the next several days of rain, the suns anger at once extinguished, and the weather has become very cool that people are feeling refreshed.
When it rains, foam has been of coffee, sitting in his study playing online games, but can not help， but be attracted to the rain outside. Rain on the leaves， issued dull sound; rain hit the road, splashes of white foam; rain hit the racks, the issue sounds sweet tinkle.
Lie in the window sill and see rain, dense rain such as pearl curtains, hammer down from the sky, grab a hand, her lack of playfully escape, leaving only a trace of cool in the palm of the hand.
After the rain, my friends and barefoot, to play in the water puddles in the area. Walk through the rain, my little feet very comfortable, I splash a small partner, and made each other who are wet, and we really enjoyed ourselves.
Rain, you give us a cool, but also brought me happiness.
篇12：BreakBetweenClasses初一英语作文
全文共 549 字
+ 加入清单Class is over. The students are jumping with joy, just like runaway horses. Look, some of them have left their seats and begin to play noisily. They are laughing and screaming from time to time. Some don’t leave their seats.
They are making use of the short time to play games. Sometimes they argue so seriously and sometimes they appear so polite. Others are sitting in their seats, as if they are thinking of something. Now and then they will stop to watch what others are doing. What an active ten minutes’ break it is!
篇13：初一关于万圣节英语作文
全文共 2220 字
+ 加入清单Halloween is a western festival, legend on Halloween day, will be a ghost. So a lot of people in the home made pumpkin head, to scare people at night; And children knock on the door in someones home say: trick or give sugar; There are people use E-mail to send greeting CARDS to wish...
Halloween is a day in November. In western countries, a noisy:
, a small red girl was followed a group of friends to other peoples house knocking at the door, mouth say: trick or to give candy, give candy, or I really want to rock the boat. The home of the person who opened the door, give the children sweets, mouth smiled and said, give you a candy to eat, dont make trouble oh, go quickly, go to someones home to play well, I wish you happiness. Red and the other children to another to eat candy, return in mouth to eat the sweet sweet candy, to the uncle say: trick or give sugar, to eat candy, otherwise we will be doing mischief. But the uncle rather than give them candy, a meal also scold them: "dont rock the boat to go to go to, you, dont go to my house to candy, you hurry up and get out of here, go to someones home to candy, dont come here." Red and the other children cry, crestfallen walk to another, "ah! A ghost!" "Dont be afraid of me." A wearing a pumpkin heads uncle said, that was you ah, friends and red red red stunned, frighten our uncle was not give us the sugar uncle, the uncle saw that partners and red surprised, explains: "people dont have to be afraid of me, I just tease you play, come on, let uncle give you candy." Friend and red led the candy, his mouth a piece of laughter.
Halloween, although sometimes will be scared, also can eat candy.
Halloween is how beautiful!
万圣节是西方国家的节日，传说在万圣节那天，会有鬼。所以很多人在家里制作了南瓜头，晚上来吓唬别人;还有小孩在别人家敲门说着：不给糖就捣乱;还有人用电子邮箱发贺卡来祝福……
万圣节是在十一月一日。在西方的国家，一片热闹：
一个叫红红的小女孩正在跟着一群小伙伴们一起到别人家敲门，口里念着：不给糖就捣乱，快给糖果，不然我真的要捣乱啦。那个人的家打开了门，给了小朋友们糖果，嘴里微笑着说：给你们糖果吃，不要捣乱哦，快走吧，去别人家好好地玩，祝你们快乐。红红和小伙伴们到另外一个要糖果吃，嘴里还吃着香香的糖果，对那个叔叔说：不给糖就捣乱，给糖果吃，不然我们就要捣乱哦。可是那个叔叔非但没有给他们糖吃，还骂了他们一顿：“去去去，你们别来捣乱，别去我家要糖果，你们快点滚出去，去别人家要糖果，别到这儿来。”红红和小伙伴们哭了，垂头丧气的走到另一家，“啊!有鬼啊!”“别怕是我。”一个戴着南瓜头的叔叔说道，原来是你啊，小伙伴们和红红红惊呆了，这位吓唬我们的叔叔竟然是不给我们糖的叔叔，那位叔叔见伙伴们和红红很惊讶，解释道：“大家不用怕我，我只是逗你们玩的，来来来，叔叔给你们糖果吃。”小伙伴和红红领了糖果，嘴里一片欢笑。
万圣节虽然有时又会被别人吓，但也可以要糖果吃。
万圣节是多么美好啊!
篇14：城市绿化初一优秀英语作文
全文共 1866 字
+ 加入清单Blue sky white clouds, clear pledge ", when heard the words of the lyrics, the situation here is as in the word can describe the same. Nowhere to escape the sun pledge according to the heat. Alas - once the leafy village are now built a small house. In this new era, in a little bit of modern human, and the earth began to a little bit of become scarred, become overwhelmed.
According to research, the green coverage rate reached 30%, the carcinogenic substances in the air can fell by 58%, carbon dioxide at least by 90%, but now dont say those big cities, is even we this small country is doomed.
When summer arrives, sorching summer, cement road tan as hot as the red coals in the kitchen. Not a piece of green plays for us to talk, everyone stay at home, alone the cool, from a distance is very bleak.
Plants also is life, people are enjoying provide rich resources, it gives us life bring us countless convenience at the same time, should learn to be grateful. I can conveniently, for example: plant to filter and absorb the dust in the air is good, it is understood that the atmosphere through the forest, can reduce the amount of dust, 32% fly ash quantity reduced by 30%!
Dear classmates, greening can bring us a lot of good life, why dont we take action? Let us join hands and according to the requirements of the ecological civilization, cherish the nature, protect the environment, we will be more beautiful tomorrow!
蓝蓝的天空白云飘，晴空万里当头照”，当听到这句歌词时，此处的情景已如词里所形容的的一样了。太阳当头照酷暑无处逃。唉—曾经绿树成荫的小村如今都建起了小洋房。在这样的新纪元里，人类在一点点的现代化，而地球却开始一点点的变得伤痕累累，变得不堪重负。
据研究，在绿化覆盖率达30%的地段，空气中的致癌物质可下降58%，二氧化碳至少下降90%，可如今不要说那些大城市，就是连我们这个小乡村都难逃厄运。
一到夏天，炎炎酷暑，水泥路晒得如同灶里的红炭一样炙热。没了成片的绿茵供我们嬉戏畅谈，所有人都呆在家中，独自乘凉，远远望去甚是凄凉。
植物同样是生命体，人们在享受它给我们生活提供丰富的资源，带给我们无数便利的同时，应该学会感恩。我可以随手举个例子：植物对空气中的灰尘有良好的过滤和吸收作用，据了解，大气通过林带，可使尘量减少32%，飘尘量减少30%！
亲爱的同学们，绿化能带给我们生活许多好处，我们为何不行动起来呢？那就让我们携起手来，按照生态文明的要求，珍爱自然，保护环境，我们的明天一定会更加美好！
篇15：初一英语作文教学
全文共 5518 字
+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：
（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。
（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。
（4）书写规范、准确。
（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：
（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；
（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。
（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；
（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；
（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：
1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇16：元宵节初一英语
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+ 加入清单The Lantern Festival which occurs on the 15-th day of the First Month of the Chinese Year marks the end of the New Years Holidays.
Lanterns are everywhere. A most interesting tradition is the posting of riddles called Lantern Riddles. Riddles are written on pieces of paper and posted on lanterns or wall. Any one solving the riddle is awarded a prize. And the food for lantern festival is Tang Yuan i have made some Tang Yuan in a ginger soup my wife got a serious cold so i cooked a pot of ginger soup for her. I look forward to the next spring festival.
篇17：初一英语
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+ 加入清单Everyone has a hobby. I like doing sports and I like playing basketball the
best. So I decided to play basketball every morning with my classmates. Today,
the weather was nice. Early in the morning, I got up and worn clothes quickly.
When I arrived at the basketball ground, my classmates have already been there.
First, we ran around the basketball ground so that we could play better in the
game. After that, we began to play basketball. In the end, we beat another team.
Although we all felt tired, we were happy and proud.
篇18：新初一的英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单hello, everyone! my name is i’m a student in a very beautiful school called liangbing middle school and i am in class 1 grade 7.my hometown liangbing is also a beautiful town. i’m very happy and i like to make friends with others. i also like singing but traveling is my favorite, i have been to many interesting places in china but i haven’t been to other countries. what a pity!
at school, i study chinese,math, english, history, politics and so on. i like all of them. i often help my teacher takecare of my class and i think i am a good helper. i live with my parents and we go home on time every day.
when i am at home, i often help my mother do some housework and my
mother said i am a good helper, too. my mother is a barber.she cuts hair very well.she is kind.many people like her. she often teaches me the way of
learning well, if you want to learn english well, here is some of my advice. at first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. if you keep working hard, you will be successful. then, you ought to speak english as much as possible. remember an old saying, nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it. that’s all, thank you.
篇19：初一英语作文：我最喜欢的城市
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+ 加入清单【范文】Shen Zhen is my favorite city. It is a young and promising city. I have been living in this city for over ten years. I love the seafood in this city as well as its beautiful scenes. In summer, I can go to the sea to see the sun rise, or enjoy the fresh cool sea water. On weekend, I can go to the park to have a walk. Shen Zhen is my hometown. When I grow up, I want to make contribution to this city and make it becomes a better city.
【翻译】深圳是我最喜欢的城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候，我可以去海边看日出，或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候，去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了，我要为这所城市作出贡献，让她变得更好。
篇20：作文初一英语
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+ 加入清单Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24
hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to
twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The
temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the
highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature
would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in
Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.