英语考试分析范文优秀20篇

这个星期，我们般语数英三门功课都考试了，成绩出来后，语文数学我不太满意，最满意的当然是英语了，最值得骄傲，97分，全班第二名，我从来没有考过这个成绩呀！

哎，先从最不满意的数学开始说吧。数学只有92+10分，比我预计的满分差了八分，再努力一下就一百分了，对，我就是要考一百分。我前面三页一题都没有错，问题就出在应用题，一错九是八分啊，粗心大意，这是我的老毛病了，这次又犯了。好好的一百分摆在面前我不要，偏要了92分。单位问题！单位问题！单位应该是厘米的，被我糊里糊涂的题目不看清，错误的写成了分米，老师毫不留情的给我打了个大红叉，诶，这题我就扣了八分，我后面也是全对没有错的啊！到手的一百分就这样从我手里溜走了，多可惜呀！以要我要改进，认真做题，看清单位，正确换算，不再犯这个老毛病了。

接下来分析语文。语文主要问题在于阅读。课外的积累太少。连《小王子》中小王子住的叫什么星球都忘了。只要这本书的相关题错光光，勉强答对了作者是法国人。老师父母都说语文重在积累，肚子没有墨水，想挤一点话也挤不出来，所以写作文时语言干巴巴的，想句子没有，想词没有，写出一句话，能把我想好长时间，好不难受。我以后要多读课外书，养成阅读的好习惯，将阅读变成有效阅读，而不是读过就忘。

最后分析的是英语。本周一共考了两场，相对满意。但也有不好的地方，有也一题我错的奇怪，连我也不知道怎么错的，老师在卷子上写三个大字“没人错”。我觉得很丢人，我以后考试要在这种小题目上做到十拿九稳，别看它分值小，错多了也会考砸的。

回家后，我把成绩汇报给妈妈，妈妈先批评我：“看看，语文考的太糟糕了，在课外累积上丢了分，我叫你多课外书，你也不看，看了也不认真看，这下吃亏了吧？数学，又犯粗心，这问题你也不知错了多少遍了？看了英语卷子后，妈妈说："恩，英语不错，加油。”

每次考完，认认真真地分析一遍，记住这题为什么错，以后该怎么写，还可以抄在错题本上，在大考前复习，是很有效果的。

英语考试记得姚老师说要举行一次英语考试，我心里高兴极了，老师好几次都说要发奖状，这次我一定会得奖的。老师特意留意了单词和句子，我一看太好背了，于是看了几遍，志在必得的样子，觉得明天的奖状非我莫属。可谁知道第二天，我怀着喜悦的心情考完了试，把听写本交了上去……发本子时，只听见最前面的都是100分，唯独没我的名字，我心里一直浮现着记单词句子时，没有什么不会的呀？听见老师喊道：“马昕宇，99分。”我羞愧地低着头跑上去拿了本子，心里有一种说不出来的滋味，就像打翻的五味瓶一样，在课堂上，我伤心的差点哭出来。回到家，我大哭了一场，我想了想，以后必须要认真了，如果再这样粗心大意，我永远不会得到奖状了。是啊！小树只有经历风雨后，才会更坚强。但是，人们常说：虚心使人进步，骄傲使人落后！

Topic one：Environment Protection（环境保护）

Water Pollution

With the development of industry, water pollution is becoming more serious now. The polluted water not only kills fish, it is also harmful to our health. Many people get sick because they drink the polluted water. In some rivers the water is so dirty that they can even kill plants.

We should fight against the pollution. We should stop using harmful things. I wish it is not a dream that in the near future we can have clean rivers again.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, a great number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

Forest Pretention保护森林

[精选高一上学期英语期末考试话题作文

Recently, the phenomenon of students pursue famous brands has become the focus of the public concern.They always do anything in order to buy what they want. What has caused this problem?It is no easy/simple task to offer the reason for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor.

There are two aspects reason as follows. On the one hand,with the development of the economy/society/people’s living standard, we can afford the articles of luxury. On the other hand,the mind of rivalry is the most important reason.The topic of the famous brands is the main idea among the students, they think a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste.

To change this situation, I suggest that college school students should cultivate positive values and look at things in a proper way.Although brand is the best way to show their status,we shouldn’t pursuit brand blindly.students ought to pay much attention to their studies.

[大学生该不该追求名牌大学英语等级考试六级作文

周五，在这个阴云密布的早晨，进行了让人紧张而又难忘的英语期中考试。

早读课时，我认真地阅读着英语书，生怕漏掉了什么，使得没能考到好成绩，不过，当时并不是很紧张。就在这时，我听到了让老师领卷子的广播，心里默默地想：放松，放松，我可以考好的，为什么要紧张呢?虽然，我竭力地安慰着自己，可是紧张的感觉，却油然而生。突然，四(3)班的老师走了进来，原来，她就是我们这次的监考老师。开始放听力的录音了，声音震耳欲聋，有一道题目没能听清，结果就蒙了一个答案，心里暗暗地想：惨了，这个题目没听清，如果蒙的答案是错的，岂不是要拖累自己了?后面的笔试部分我觉得很简单，于是就没有认真检查。

第二天，报成绩时，我的心“扑通扑通”地跳着，脑神经简直绷到了极点。虽然得到了一个不错的成绩：98.5，但是那依然不是我心目中理想的成绩。果然，我没听清楚的那道听力题不出所料错了和一个单词少了复数形式的“S”。顿生悔意，如果我当时检查一遍或许就只会错一道题了。

这次考试，因为我粗心和对题目的轻视而犯下的错误，铭刻在我的脑海里，从今以后我不能再让自己重蹈覆辙，要认认真真地做好每一件事。

(1)模版1

_________ is currently becoming a serve problem in China, which happen to ________. So long as ________, ___________ will always unsurprisingly ________.

Why does ________ become so rampant? First and foremost,__________. Secondly,_________. Last but not least, ________. As a consequence,___________.

(2)模版2

During the last decade, there has been a steady rise in the number of _________. In detail,________.

Three reasons, in my mind, account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost,__________. Moreover,_________. In addition,___________. As a result,__________.

Personally, I firmly believe that the problem derives from __________. Thus, if the government make relevant policies and take relevant measure to __________, the problem can be readily solved in __________.

(3)模版3

Nowadays,_________ is/are doing great harm to ___________.

What are the incentives that drive people to _________? The most important factors should be __________. Furthermore,________. It directly leads to the patent and salient harmfulness that ________.

Consequently, it is high time that the whole society should contribute to the collective efforts to put an end to ________.

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

The general age of college students are between 18 to 25 year. From the psychological point of view, it’s in the medium of youth. Some people say that the college students are adults that they handle well with psychological problems. However, the rest argue that college students are not so mature when faced with psychological problems. I agree to the latter and i think it’s necessary to open a psychological lesson to the college students because of the following reasons.

大学生的一般年龄是在18到25之间。从心理的角度来讲，这是青年中期。有的人说大学生是成年人了，能够很好地处理心理问题。然而，剩下的人认为大学生面对心理问题的时候没有那么成熟。我同意后者的观点，我认为向大学生开设心理课是必要的。原因如下。

Firstly, in recent years, there are more and more college students drop out from school due to psychological problems. Growing , homicides and other unusual serious incidents are reported from time to time. Now, the social attention to college students’ mental health has reached to climax. Secondly, college students are in a perplexed and contradictory age. On the one hand, they have to study in school to enrich themselves and to get a diploma. On the other hand, they think they are mature to live an independent life, but most of them still depend on their parents. In addition, study challenge, employment pressure and life stress could produce psychological problems.

首先，近几年，越来越多的大学生由于心理问题而辍学。越多自杀，谋杀以及其他不正常的严重事故时不时有报道。如今，对大学生心理健康的关注已经达到了高潮。其次，大学生处于一个困惑和矛盾的年龄。一方面，他们认为自己已经成熟了，能够独立生活，但是大部分仍然依靠父母。而且，学习压力，就业压力和生活压力也会产生心理问题。

To sum up, college students are adults but they are still faced with many pressures causing psychological problems that they can not deal with. Therefore, it’s very necessary to open a psychological lesson to college students, helping them get through this period smoothly.

总之，大学生是成年人，但是他们仍然面临很多他们不能解决的引起心理问题的压力。因此，向大学生开设心理课程是有必要的，能够帮助他们顺利度过这一时期。

[心理健康分析英语作文

If you start preparing for the exams ahead, you’ll feel a lot better about getting everything accomplished.

Here are some ways to help you prepare your mind and body for a successful final exam season:

First,you should focus your time on difficult classes.

If you always do well in a course,then you obviously don’t need to spend as much time studying for that course.You should spend most of your study time on the difficult courses where your grade is borderline.

Second,spending time reviewing notes is also necessary.

By simply going over all your class notes, you’ll get a good overview of the specific areas you should start studying. This will also provide your mind with a good summary of everything you’ve been learning

Besides,you can design a study schedule and stick to It.

By setting aside time now to focus on the final exam, you’re preparing your mind for what’s ahead. And you’ll also find areas that you have questions about. This will provide you plenty of time to get answers from your professors.

现实生活中没有完美的人生，正如舞台上没有纯粹的喜剧。

海浪不回避礁石的撞击，才得以壮观，人生不拒绝遗憾的存在，才得以乐观。

——题记

这两句话我很喜欢，正和我这次考试一样，这次考试不是完美的，但现实中没有全是完美的，正如第一句现实生活中没有完美的人生，这次的失利不代表失败，一次的失败不代表永久的失败，这次的失败并不能说明什么。只要在哪里跌倒，就在哪里爬起，这次的失败不是给下次的成功有了经验吗，有了失败才有成功，失败乃是成功之母嘛。而返回到前面说，人的一生不可能是一帆风顺的，哪能不经历点风风雨雨，"不经历风雨怎么见彩虹，没有人能随随便便成功"，这句话说的不也就是吗。这次考试考完了就过去了，不要再去想，只要知道自己错在哪里，就是最好的，也可以说是一种进步，知道了哪里错还要去填补这快空缺，补得严严实实，缝不可透。第二句名句也是说不经历点挫折失败，哪能有成功胜利。

虽然刚才一直都在安慰自己，可是我还是按捺不住自己的情感，豆大的眼珠总是在眼圈晃动，这回考试辜负了太多人的期望，就不用一一再提，我真的自己也很不甘心，很伤心，辜负了你们，对不起，真的对不起，辜负了你们的一片苦苦期望，爸爸妈妈。我的全家人。好友。y友。老师……都对我们寄予了很高的期望，可是我却……虽然老师对我的成绩十分满意，可就是让我数学再努努力，而我的其他家人好友们都对我的成绩难以置信，怎么才考这么点，怎么别的时候不失礼，非要在这个时候失礼，这是多么重要的一次考试，但是我还是希望过去就过去了，不要再提了，提也只能让我更伤心。这次考试是普遍的没考好，可大姨对我说，不要把普遍当作理由，我会记住的257d，深深地记住。爸爸也对我说，第一名只有一个。难道不是吗，虽然是普遍没考好，但也有考好的呀，我还是要象他们奋进，需要的则还是努力，假期里好好弥补自己的不足，再一步地提高提高，我相信，只要有我的努力，就一定会有我的成功，只要我努力了，我能行。不经一番彻骨寒，怎得梅花扑鼻香。我到下次考试时一定不会再辜负你们了，争取升学考试时一鸣惊人。你们相信我吗。你们还会一如既往地鼓励我支持我吗。我在你们眼里还是个优等生吗。我希望还能象以前一样，你们还能鼓励我支持我相信我，好吗。在升学考试时我一定要给你们一个惊喜。

不再想了，过去就过去了，笑对人生，人生路上坎坎坷坷，这算什么。"风雨中，这点痛算什么，擦干泪不要怕，至少我们还有梦……"抬起头扬起胸，以后的路还很长……

作者： 郭梓栋

期中考试，考完试后，我感觉我数学考的差不多不太好，不过上了80分以上而且我看试卷上的那些题大部分也算是我不会的。

英语和语文考得不太好在80分下，但是我感觉我能考的更好英语我考了66。5错的大部分都是句子那些该打写的字母，没大写扣分而且在考试的时候考英语的时候我的笔试部分大部分都错在句子上没大写。

还有没读题目语文我考了77。7分没上80分我觉得很遗憾，作文本来不用扣分的，但我不小心把道理写成的格言扣了6分如果加上这6分我就能考到80分以上了。

我争取期末考一个让我自己满意的成绩，我的目标是超我我们组的3号高佳乐。

A Letter of Application

1. 表达自己对该工作的渴求态度

2. 尽量展示自己的技能和经历

3.信中应包括自己的联系方式

【范文】

January , 2013

Dear Sirs,

I am writing you this letter to show my keen interest in the post ofassistant manager which you advertised in yesterdays China Daily for, as isindicated in the enclosed resume, my major and experiences closely parallelyour requirement.

I have always been a top student in my specialized area, biochemistry. Itook several other courses in my spare time and excelled in all of them due tomy hard work. I am sure such courses as British and American literature andculture, business management and statistics will lend me an edge in the fiercecompetition in the job market. Another point I want to draw your attention to isthat I have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activities. Inthe due process teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skillsimproved.

I would like to meet you at your earliest convenience and discuss thepossibility of working with your company. Or, if you are too busy these days,you can contact me at 64543575 for further information. Thank you for yourfavorable consideration.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Jenny Green

【点评】

这篇文章是一篇非常成功的求职信。首段表明了自己对经理助理这一职位的渴望，其中包括了自己如何得知这一职位的，而后说明自己的条件符合要求，引起下段。次段分五句，说明自己在专业上是个尖子生，并指出对于其他课程自己做得同样出色，为将来的工作奠定了坚实的基础;后两句说明自己参加了各种学校活动，培养了多方面的能力。第三段首句说明自己非常希望能早日获得面试的机会;次句说如果对方太忙，可以打电话联系;末句对对方表示感谢，是一句客套话。

首段中的keen表示“热切的”， parallel这里做动词，表示“与……相当，比得上”。第二段首句中的specialized area表示“专业领域”;第二句中的excel是不及物动词，表示“突出，超常，胜过他人”;第三句中的edge表示“优势”;第四句中的a variety of等于various,表示“多种多样的”;第五句中的teamwork spirit表示“团队精神”，interpersonal skills表示“人际交往的能力”。

As the world gets globalized, the communication between countries has been enhanced, studying abroad has become a dream for countless young students. As a college student who is majoring in English, I would like to keep my further study in a foreign county after graduation, so that I can improve my knowledge and my ability to live.

随着世界变得全球化，国家间的交流得到了加强，出国学习已经成为了无数青少年的梦想。作为一名学习英语专业的学生来说，我喜欢毕业后出国学习，这样我就可以提高我的知识和生活的能力。

As for me, learning English in a native speaking environment is very important. I would choose to continue my further study in Britain orAmerica, both are good for my major. The English-speaking countries can provide me a good chance for me to gain my knowledge. I can know more about the culture and conventions, it helps me to do some translation work.

对于我来说，在一个讲本土语言的国家学习英语很重要。我会选择在英语或者美国继续我的学业，这两个国家都对我的专业有好处。讲英语的国家能给我提供学习知识的好机会。我可以学到更多的文化和习俗，这有助于我做一些翻译方面的工作。

Overseas study would also provide a good opportunity to learn how to live by myself. In china, I have been living with my parents all my life, my mother takes care of me all the time, but now, I am an adult, it is time for me to be independent. I can learn how to communicate with others, how to take care of myself and so on. All these abilities are vital for my future career.

出国学习也能提供一个学习如何独立生活的好机会。在中国，我一直都和父母生活在一起，我的妈妈一直在照顾我，但是现在，我已经是一个成年人了，该是时候自立了。我可以学着如何与人交流，如何照顾自己等待。所有的这些能力对于我将来的职业很重要。

With the constant interaction between nations, it is necessary for us to learn more about the world. Studying abroad provides such chance, at the same time, we could also learn to be independent.

随着国家之间的交流日益频繁，更多的了解世界对我们来说是很必要地。出国留学提供了这样的机会，同时，我们也能学着自立。

我想是这几个原因而导致这个成绩的：

第一就是平时上课光顾着记笔记了，并没有完全参入到课堂里，所以学起来不仅仅吃力、还没有什么效果。今后上课多举手回答问题，顺着老师问题的思路走，笔记能够下课补记，只要这一课听明白了，也就掌握了。

第二就是巩固练习不够，平时学完之后，做完练习，这一课就算过去了。之后并没有进行温习什么的。只是快考试的时候再看一看。上面许多的重点也都忘记了。以后多温习温习，学完后把重点、主题思想再看一遍。深刻的记在脑中。

第三就是复习时没有抓住重点。每次考试时复习都是大致的看一看主题思想，并没有把某些句子、词语之类的理解赏析透彻。连每课的作者简介也必须要记住。这次考试就是作者没写出来。在考试复习时必须要抓住讲学稿上的重点进行复习，再对照着点击的错题温习一遍，效果就会好得多。

就应来讲这次的卷子并没有太多的难题，只是做题目时太马虎，太虚心，而且基本上都是半错，也就是问题没有回答完整，总是差那一点，所以以后回答问题要完整，看题要仔细。

第四就是我的作文总是写的枯燥，缺少细节描述和修辞手法等一些精华之处，就是简单的叙事，记流水账。此外，我的课内阅读也没有全对，这是不就应发生的，这说明我对文章的理解不够深刻。另外，我的课外阅读扣分较多，这一点同样十分重要，这表现出我的课外知识缺乏，对语句的理解不够透彻。

经过这次惨痛的教训，我明白了一些关于学习的方法。以后，我就应在作文方面多加功夫，多看一些课外书，增加自己的知识，丰富自己的词汇，并且要在写作文的时候多用些修辞和细节描述，增加文章的精华之处，不再是一篇流水账。其次是加强对文章的理解，不是简单地背答案。最后是加强课外文章的理解，要联系全文理解文意，做题时不要仅仅看句子的前后，而是要仔细阅读全篇文章，这样不仅仅能加快做题的效率，而且还能够增加题目的正确率，可谓是一举两得。

There is a famous saying goes like that “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” This saying shows the relationship between knowledge and practice vividly.

As far as we know, if we don’t have corresponding knowledge of some fields, we cannot do well in the fields. There are innumerable examples to illustrate this point. For instance, a singer can sing well only if he or she possesses musical knowledge; a dancer can dance well only if he or she knows how to dance; a worker can get the job well-done only if he or she is familiar with the basic principles of the job, and so on. But in turn, if we do not apply what we have known to practice, knowledge cannot play its role. For example, if we have learned different methods of cooking vegetables, but we do not cook, then the different methods of cooking vegetables do not produce value for us.

Therefore, if we do not have knowledge, we have nothing to practice, but if we have knowledge without putting it into practice, knowledge is of no avail. So we should acquire as much knowledge and put it into practice.

There are four seasons in a year.My favorite season is summer .Because when the summer is coming .I can change the beautiful skirt and I can go swimming .I like the swimming pool very much.In summer ,all things are bright.I can go to a lot of places that I like.In summer holiday,I also can spend my holiday with my parents and we can go to the Forbidden City.How interesting !

The four seasons accompany us and make our lives interesting.Summer is when everyone has fun under the warm sun,autumn is the time of harvesting,and winter’s white snowflakes decorate the bare earth and trees.But it is spring’s vitality that fascinates me the most.

I remember when I was a small child,my favorite season was winter.But one thing made me change my mind.

I loved playing in the garden and climbing trees when I was small.But I realized one autumn day that golden leaves had started to fall from my favorite tree,and by winter its branches were already bare.I thought that it had died,and would never turn green again.

When my father knew why I was crying,he told me:“The tree hasn’t left you.It’s just resting.I promise in three months,that tree will be prettier than ever.” I believed what my father said and waited for three months.

Sure enough,when the time came,the tree was greener and taller than ever.Sprouts started to stretch their heads out of the melting snow,and creeks and streams started to run again freely.

From then on,spring has become my favorite time of the year because its vitality brings me happiness.

一年有四个季节。我最喜欢的季节是夏天。因为夏季即将来临。我可以改变这个漂亮的裙子,我可以去游泳。我非常喜欢游泳池。在夏天,一切都是光明的。我可以去很多地方,我喜欢。在暑假,我还可以花我的假期和我的父母和我们可以去故宫。多么有趣!

四季陪我们,使我们的生活有趣。夏天是当每个人都有有趣的温暖的阳光下,秋天是收获的时候,冬天的白色雪花装饰裸土和树木。但这是春天的活力,最让我着迷。

我记得当我还是个小孩,我最喜欢的季节是冬天。但有一件事使我改变了主意。

我喜欢在花园里玩,爬树的时候小。但我意识到秋天的一天,金色的树叶已经开始从我最喜欢的树,和冬天的树枝已经光秃秃的。我以为它已经死了,不会再变绿了。

当我父亲知道我为什么哭,他告诉我:“这棵树就没离开过你。只是休息。我保证在三个月内,那棵树将会比以前更漂亮了。“我相信我的父亲说,等待三个月。

果然,的时候,这棵树是绿色的,比以往任何时候都高。豆芽开始伸展头上的雪融化,自由和小溪,小溪又开始运行。

从那以后,每年的春天已经成为我最喜欢的时候,因为它的生命力给我带来了快乐。

Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, and put out fires and so on. We use millions of liters of water every day.

Do you know how does the water come to your home? It travels through water pipes. Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow. Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs. Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories that purify the water. When the water is purified, we can drink it. Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line, and keep the water clean.

“我这次英语考得不错!” 英语调研考试结束了，同学们小声议论着，大家看起来都很自信，我也有信心能考一百分。

这不由得让我想起黄老师经常对我们说的一句话：信心来自于实力，实力来自大家的努力。我们也是因为努力过，才有今天的自信啊!可我的心里却像打翻了的五味瓶有一种说不出的滋味。

记得考试前一天，我们上了将近一天的英语课，同学们认真地听老师讲着，认真地做着笔记。老师也很辛苦地为我们一题一题地讲解，为第二天的英语调研考试做准备，可我还会偶尔思想开小差，没有把考试放在眼里，可正是因为这次考试，使我知道了我应该好好地听讲。

考试当天，监考老师拿着一堆试卷走进我们教室。上课铃一响，就把试卷发下来了，同学们拿起笔，“唰唰唰……”地写了起来，我过五关斩六将，在前面听力部分做得很轻松，最后只有一道选择题实在想不起来，我的心像十五个吊桶打水——七上八下。我看了一下表，还有二十分钟呢?难道就白白浪费了吗?这道题两分呢，我可错不起，我一定要做出来!我又看了看题目，使劲回忆老师平时讲的内容，这时一个念头闪过了我的脑海，抄!我向老师看了看，老师正在低头找东西。这可是最好机会，可再想一想老师昨天为我们复习了一天，难道老师的辛苦换来的就只是抄吗?我不能这样，我静下心来，把答案一个一个地带进题目中试读，然后，终于得出了答案!对，选C。考试后，我又与同学对了一下，对了，我高兴得蹦跳了起来。

这次考试，让我明白了抄是我们不应该做的，我们要在平时下功夫，认真学习，好好听讲，因为成功就来自平时的努力。这是一次让我受益匪浅的考试。

对这次考试进行了一次彻底的分析，这次月考没有考好，总结原因如下：

一、学生对英语考试的态度不端正，遇到难一点的题不是去分析而是瞎做，遇到不会就不做。

二、作为教师缺少了在学生心中的威信。回想一个月以来我一向定位错误没有把自我定位于学生的老师而是学生的朋友，很少对学生严厉的惩罚，以致于学生敷衍了事，课上瞬时记忆，课后缺乏落实，根本无视英语考试的严肃性与重要性。

三、教师与学生都没有处理好兴趣与知识学习的关系。作为教师过于注重学生的兴趣，导致学生有兴趣就愿意学，没兴趣就不想学。

语重心长地说了这么多，我明白这些远远不够，最重要的还是今后工作中该怎样做：

首先，今后在教学过程中对学生要严格要求，和学生建立亦师亦友的关系，重新建立在学生心中威信，让学生从心里佩服尊敬自我。

其次，适当地多做题，是学生养成良好的解题习惯。

最后，教师与学生都要调整心态，正确应对考试，尽快从失败的阴影中走出来，为期中考试做好充分准备，争取打一场悲壮彻底、问心无愧的战役。

【摘要】在英文写作过程中，学生们常常误入歧途却自己不能察觉。一些常见的写作错误会出现在大部分考生的试卷上。比如审题不清，经常出现偏题或跑题；习惯汉语思维，逐字翻译；用词搭配不当，张冠李戴；词不达意，拼写错误严重；等等。具体来说，常见的错误主要有这些：

一、指代方面的错误

在使用代词it，he，this，that，which，one等时，前文中应出现明确的先行词。

如：Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future，it is senseless to force him to learn it.，这句话中，him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词，分别是a child和knowledge，因此句子的含义非常清楚。

可是，不少学生在使用这些代词时，虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么，但在作文中却没有交代清楚，结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁，反而造成了意思上的模糊，让阅卷老师不知所云。

误：Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

正：Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

【说明】句1中的they既可指教师，也可指学生，属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。

二、修饰方面的错误

修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分，并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当，就会造出模棱两可的病句。

误：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

正：To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村，还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryside的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构，就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。

三、一致方面的错误

在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。

误：Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

正：Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

四、平行结构方面的错误

这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

1、误：Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

正：narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

误：A great change has been taken place since then.

正：A great change has taken place since then.

误：But it may occur some new problems.

正：But some new problems may occur/arise.

误：Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

正：Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.

2、误：The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

正：The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

误：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

正：Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

误：Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

正：Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

五、断句方面的错误

一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。

误：TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

正：TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.

【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。

六、连词方面的错误

作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

误：One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.

正：If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.

【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。

七、搭配方面的错误

学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

1、误：However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

正：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.

2、误：In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

正：In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldnt afford it.

【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.

由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如速度快、价格贵、学习知识、人减少等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

八、误用方面

学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。

1、误：With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

正：With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

2、误：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

正：Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是勤劳的，工业上的应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示产生、实现，而这里的意思是影响，应换成affect。

另外为了方便大家学习，提高复习的效率。小编为广大学子整理了考研技巧和考试大纲，更有历年真题提供测试等等。针对每一个科目进行深度的探讨和技巧挖掘。欢迎各位考研的同学进行了解和资讯。考研的痛苦是难免的,不要丧失信心,坚信苦尽甘来。预祝各位学子取得成功！

“终于到期末考试了，以后就不用上英语课了！”一大早，同学们就商量着考完试后做什么事情。“英语老师来啦！快快快！”不知何人大声喊叫，同学们听到后，就开始乱读，读什么的都有：teacher、singer、bybike…我终于知道到应有尽有的意思了。

监考老师刘老师来了，刚到就说了句：“人，要做君子。”同桌轻轻地嘀咕里一句：君子迟早会在战场上阵亡的，我不要做君子。对于同桌的这句话，我真的是无可奈何。我开始审题了，一题一题都看的十分仔细，听力部分的时候，讲台桌里的音箱发出低沉的声音，震得地板都在颤抖着，我也迷迷糊糊的，听不清它说的是什么单词，非得把耳朵往前，仔细听这才听得清楚。听力部分终于熬过去了，到笔试部分了，我开始奋笔勤书，一个单词都不丢下的看过去，终于写完了。我开始检查了，发现错误很少，几乎没有错误，这才放心的等待着交卷。

收卷以后，同学说这张试卷中有陷阱，我在人群中挤了又挤，终于听清楚了，有一道题是阅读短文中没有的，应该选择：Sorry，Idoutnow。完了，我中计了，怎么期末考试还有陷阱的，两分就这么没了。

监考老师刚走，科学老师就来了，这考试真得小心点，千万别掉陷阱里了。