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1000高一年级关于春节的英语作文
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+ 加入清单A lunar New Year, no doubt, is sound, taste and township.
A New Years eve firecrackers. Melody in the New Year, fireworks is low and grand drums, heavy yet explosive, accompanied by a large umbrella of scattering flowers, jinlong fall and arc of the rainbow, here every corner of the flower, a pair of, a group of cheng fang, a piece, a world, in a sudden the incomparable luster. And on the square table, and celebrate the applause, light spirit is ringing, can not help but think of "harps friend" -- it is natural to performance, the smile of gentle feeling let everyone around without his joy. Then a sound clear gong, it is in the middle of the night the cheer of the New Year, is not so short but lingering sound waves, times, stretches, like a stream, seeped into next year. In the end, a string of bells sound, it so mysterious, as if the passage of time, is at the end of the sea and the nien beast roar.
Through every form, and to have bouts of aroma. Like bacon that hard sweet, like the mutton soup hot sweet, like the natural aroma of coarse grains like steamed bread fresh incense, sweet like a sausage chewy, like dumplings a pack of sweet juice, like nuts, crisp sweet, like good old 994 stuffed sweet ChunChun... The fragrance, as they themselves. A wisp of fragrance, flavor, a dish, a table, a handful of happiness. I like dumplings, white white fat, quietly lying on the soup. It successfully, that sweet thick sesame paste, now a love heart.
JianJu the most popular cartoon "bears in the New Years day" in a situation: even if a lumberjack, also know that mothers dumplings, dads wine, are looking forward to the calendar page, end the arrival of the New Years eve. Whether its cold rime, shaking winter bamboo shoot, a speeding train, shimmering bright lights... Township, there is only one, let the wanderer to gallop tirelessly.
But you have such a scene: in the mobile phone clicking, hands of quick-frozen dumplings immodesty slide to the ground, fell to pieces, like a boom ray reminds you, want to travel to Hong Kong this year Spring Festival. So, the sound? Taste? Township?
一个春节,无疑便在于声、味、乡。
爆竹声中一岁除。过年的曲谱中,烟花是低沉而隆重的大鼓,重重的一声声爆响,伴随着大伞的散花、金龙的出落和弧形的彩虹,在这儿的每个角落一朵、一双、一群、一片、一世界地盛放,在瞬间迸发出无与伦比的光彩。八仙桌上的谈笑,与庆祝的掌声,轻灵清脆,不禁联想到“琴瑟友之”——它自然是尽情的琴声了,笑的柔和让周围的每个人都情不自己地欢欣起来。然后是一声清亮的锣响,它就是午夜时分新年的那一阵欢呼,虽短,但余音袅袅,不绝如缕,一直绵延着,就如一条溪,汩汩地流向明年。最终,有一串编钟声,它那么神秘,好像是时间的流逝,是沧海尽头年兽的咆哮。
走过每一个门洞,都有一阵阵的香飘来。像是腊肉那硬硬的香,像是羊肉汤那热乎乎的香,像是粗粮天然的香,像是馒头新鲜出炉的香,像是香肠有嚼劲的香,像是饺子一包汁的香,像是坚果干脆的香,像是陈年佳994酿醇醇的香……这香味,就如它们本身。一缕香,一丝味,一盘菜,一桌人,一捧幸福。我最喜欢汤圆,白白胖胖,安静地躺在汤里。它圆满的外表下,那甜稠的芝麻馅,宛然一颗爱心。
简举最红的动画片《熊出没之过年》中的一情景:就算一个伐木工,也懂得,妈妈的饺子,爸爸的酒,都是期待着日历的那一页,岁末除夕的到来。不管是冰冷的雾淞,晃动的冬笋,飞驰的火车,灿亮的灯光……乡,只有一个,让游子不倦地飞奔。
但是你的身边有这样的场面吗:在手机的点击声中,手里的速冻汤圆不慎滑落在地,跌得粉碎,像轰雷般提醒了你,今年春节要去香港旅游。如是这样,声呢?味呢?乡呢?
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Hometown Spring Festival atmosphere is very thick, everywhere permeated with festive holiday. From the twelfth to the fifteenth day, every day there are a lot of good.
Twelfth month is off year, that day "the kitchen god" to leave the room, leave the family to the jade emperor god this year are doing day, also known as "CiZao", so every family to send "kitchen god", we also can eat people "sugar is sweet and delicious. At the same time, the families began to buy necessities.
December 28 families all want to put everyone, paper-cut, couplet, door gods, such as colored New Year paintings, to meet people festivals dream of praying, will decorate a new house inside and out. Since that day, every family will evaporate peculiar to our hometown high bun and all kinds of cakes, pomegranate flowers, have a little fish, and butterfly shape. And steam for a big, round cakes to memorial ancestors, the flower cake but have to wait until after the Spring Festival to eat! While everyone is busy in busy outside, but if compare busy and happy, I feel or more joy.
New Years eve is the most worth celebrating. In this evening everyone will return home with the family reunion, eat rich family reunion dinner together, watching a wonderful Spring Festival gala, enjoy the joy of reunion. By twelve o clock, every family can fireworks, to meet the arrival of the New Year.
Starting on the first day, we all want to relatives and friends home at New Year. Our children can get lucky money elders, not to mention how happy.
The fifteenth day of the first is an important date in the Spring Festival, every family hangs red lanterns and eat dumplings, the significance of all of us, life HeHeMeiMei. Through the day, year has finished, people began to normal work and study.
This is the Spring Festival, my hometown is colorful? Is your hometown? Is so rich and colorful?
每个地方的春节都不一样,都有很多的风俗,我家乡的春节别有一番特色,让我来给你们讲讲吧!
家乡的春节气氛很浓,到处洋溢着过节的喜庆。从腊月二十三到正月十五,每天都会有很多的精彩。
腊月二十三是小年,这一天“灶王爷”要离开人间,上天向玉皇大帝禀报一家人这一年来所做所为的日子,又称"辞灶",所以家家户户都要送“灶神”,我们还可以吃香甜可口的“祭灶糖”。同时,家家户户开始置办年货。
腊月二十八家家户户都要贴福字、窗花、对联、门神等彩色年画,以满足人们喜庆祈年的美好愿望,将宅子里里外外装点一新。从这一天开始,家家要蒸我们家乡特有的高馍馍和各式各样的花糕,有石榴花的,有小鱼的,还有蝴蝶状的。还要蒸一个又大又圆的花糕用来祭奠先祖,这个花糕可是要等到过完春节才能吃得哦!虽然大家忙里忙外,但是如果把忙碌和欢乐相比,我感觉还是欢乐更多。
除夕是最值得我们庆贺的时刻。在这个晚上大家都会回到家里与家人团圆,一起吃丰富的年夜饭,一起看精彩的春节联欢晚会,享受着团圆的乐趣。到了十二点,家家户户都会燃放烟花爆竹,迎接新的一年的到来。
从大年初一开始,大家都要到亲戚朋友家里去做客拜年。我们小孩子还能收到长辈们的压岁钱,别提有多高兴了。
正月十五又是春节里一个重要的日子,家家户户都会挂火红的灯笼、吃汤圆,寓意着我们大家团团圆圆,生活和和美美。过完了这一天,年也就过完了,人们开始正常的工作和学习。
这就是我家乡的春节,是不是多姿多彩呀?你的家乡呢?是不是也如此丰富多彩呢?
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+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇10:春节的五年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单Today is the beginning of seven, I went to town with cousin, the Zhuo flag hill of watching a wonderful acrobatic Festival " to celebrate Chinese New year ".
We arrived, to find a show place, find a place to sit down, and then patiently waited for the show to start.
" The beginning of the show ", do not know who is shouting. We immediately back to god.
The first program is, little monkey riding old goat go rope. I saw the old goat carrying small monkey step by step on the rope, hey, too. Is really amazing! The next program is more splendid! For example: wire walking, the tiger jumped the ring of fire, lions and tigers, bears swing across the beauty slip exercise, air swing ... ... And this " new acrobatic show" the protagonist is mainly animal.
This " new acrobatic show" is really meaningful!
篇11:英语作文写春节
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+ 加入清单In china, spring festival ione of the most important festivals. it ialso getting more and more popular in some foreign countries. when spring festival comes, it meanthat a new year comes, and people grow a year older. during the festival, it ivercrowded throughout the country.
on the eve of spring festival, parentget food, clotheand spring festivalgoodprepared. the people who work outside come back, and the whole familgettogether to have mealand sagoodbye to the last year, and welcome the new year. after the meal, thewait until midnight comes. theset off fireworkthen.
on the first morning of the spring festival, everyone weartheir new clotheand then go to otherhometo celebrate the new year. each familsetoff fireworkwhen their guestcome, and thetake out sweetand peanutto share. on the following days, thego around to their relativeand friends. the spring festival haseveral meanings. it meanpeople working outside can come back to relax themselves, a new year begins. when spring comes, farmerbegin to plant cropand people make a plan for the new year.
all the people throughout the world pamuch attention to it. our countrof course holdsome national celebrationto celebrate it. thimost traditional festival in china will go on being celebrated in the future.
篇12:怎样过春节英语作文
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+ 加入清单Chinese spring festival
The spring festival is Chinese most traditional festival every 365 days. Each Chinese pay much attention on it. Every year about 15 days before spring festival, the migrate works and white-collars are beginning crowded home-returning.
But, in recent years, with the development of the world, many different attitudes between the young and the old towards the spring festival come forth. The old are still pay more attention to the spring festival, but the young gradually change the mode to spend their spring festival holiday, such as travel overseas.
When I am a childhood, I celebrated the spring festival with my family about a month in my winter vacation in traditional way, such as helping cleaning our houses, putting red couplets on gates, setting off firecrackers, and wear new clothes. Now, I spend only 4 or 5 days at home with my parents in celebrating the spring festival, then I will hurry back to work. Maybe in the near future, I will have no time celebrating spring festival hometown, and my parents have to come to stay with us in the city.
Whether or no, I like the spring festival. It is one of the most important part of our Chinese culture. However busy I am, I will try my best to celebrating it with the traditional way to protect those our ancestor has leave behind.
篇13:春节由来英语作文
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+ 加入清单Lunar New Year , the most solemn of traditional Chinese folk festivals. First day of the first lunar month in the traditional Chinese lunar calendar, known as the Moon, commonly known as "New Year" and "New Year." The long history of the Spring Festival, which originated in the Shang period the year draws to a close servicemen and the memorial activities. According to Chinas Lunar, the first day of the first lunar month yen ancient name, Yuan-chen, a copy, is Emperor, the New Year Day, which is commonly known as Day of the Republic. switch to the Gregorian calendar, the calendar on January 1 as New Years Day, January 1st called the Lunar Spring Festival.
篇14:关于我喜欢的童话初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单SinceI was a little baby, my parents read simple stories for me. They bought me manycartoon books with stories. They were my bedtime stories. Among all theinteresting stories, I like fairy tales most, because they are often beautifullove stories between prince and princes or Cinderella. They are so moved andfull of love. Besides, in fairy tales, no matter how much they suffer, theywill always live a happy life in the end. The happy endings bring hope andsatisfaction to people, making us hopeful to our own lives. Every time I readfairy tales, I put myself into the story, imagining I am one of them. That’swonderful.
篇15:我的春节初一作文750字
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+ 加入清单长辈发压岁钱红包,是中国春节的传统习俗。和大多数同学不一样,除了传统红包外,我常常收到一份另类的、私人定制版的“红包”。这究竟是怎么回事呢?
那就先从大外公的人生经历说起吧!
大外公年少时家境贫困,交学费时捉襟见肘。教材需向同桌借着看;曾外祖父揣着5分钱借遍所有的邻居,凑不齐6分钱买半斤盐;当时家里难得才能吃一次白米饭,大外公就将自己在学校的口粮省出来,带回家过年吃。如此窘境比比皆是。在同学和邻居的帮助下,大外公一边劳动一边读书,完成了小中高的学业。日子虽清苦,学习生涯却很丰富多彩:第一次看电影,第一次使用显微镜,第一次接触五线谱,第一次进阅览室……
第一次参加高考时,大外公辗转汽车、火车来到金华,晚上蚊帐里满是臭虫,不得不在婺江边的窄石凳上躺到天亮,匆匆吃了早饭就参加考试,却不幸落榜。第二次高考时,大外公边在家乡帮助办学,边自主复习,考取了杭州师范大学,我几乎能想象大外公站在校园中,贪婪地注视着,欢呼着“我,是一名大学生了!”大外公怀着为国育才的理想,在永康西溪中学、永康二中、明珠学校种桃种李种春风,一种就是四十二年。
莫道桑榆晚,微霞尚满天。这位耄耋老人,至今都行走在传播中国文化的道路上,虽然步子缓慢,却坚定。 退休后的大外公乐于发挥余热,不仅在金华市老年大学任教两个诗词班,还担任金华市婺城区诗词楹联学会会长一职。
每次拜年时,大外公除了给我压岁钱外,还附赠另类的“文化红包”,那就是亲自签名的著作,如《历代诗词曲释评》、《中华新韵(十四韵)新编》、《婺城对联集成》等。抚摸着写着“韵佳侄外孙女惠存”的书,聆听着大外公的谆谆教诲,我感到特别温暖,特别幸福。从年少贫寒到老有所乐,大外公见证了教育事业的发展,他特别期待我们传承源远流长的中华诗词文化。
收到这些另类的“红包”,我一定要倍加珍惜,并代代相传!
篇16:春节英语作文带翻译
全文共 986 字
+ 加入清单There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to have some fun.
On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.
在我国,一年有很多节日,在这些节日中,我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日,更因为它是新一年的开始,给人们带来新的希望,也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方,人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。
通常,我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,之后家人团座一起,分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一,人们通常会早起,会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里,人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之,春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。
篇17:初一英语作文:中国的新年ChineseNewYear
全文共 1130 字
+ 加入清单Chinese new year is a chinese traditional festival. We also call it the spring festival. It is on lunar january 1st.
On new years eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. There are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. Overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. After dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. We have a wonderful evening on new years eve.
On the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. After breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. On the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.
Everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.
春节是中国的传统节日。我们也称它为春节。它是在农历1月1日。
在新年前夕,所有人围坐在桌子上,有一个大的家庭晚餐。有一些蔬菜,一些鱼,一些肉,一些水果和一些喝果汁、可口可乐、百事可乐和一些不错的葡萄酒。总的来说,这是一个很好的和美味的晚餐。晚饭后,我们总是看电视节目。我们有一个美好的晚上在新年前夕。
在春节的第一天,大部分的人早起,说“新年快乐”。早餐,人们经常吃饺子和包子。早餐后,人们常常做出许多美味的食物,和孩子经常打牌,电脑游戏和烟火。第二和第三天,我们拜访亲戚、朋友。
在中国新年每个人都很忙,每个人都是快乐的,也是。
篇18:2024关于春节的英语作文带翻译
全文共 979 字
+ 加入清单There are many festivals in china. And among them, I like the most is the Spring Festival. Because of it, not only is the biggest holiday of the year, but the start of a new year, but also all of us all the people, come together festival.
Before the Spring Festival, people go home, no matter where they are. Usually, we in the new years Eve dinner. Then the family sat together to share their lives or aircraft. Some people play games or go out to play. On New Years day, people get up early to meet people who say. Children can get lucky money from relatives. In the coming days, we will visit relatives to pay New Years call, give them. In a word, it is the family reunion and we all the time to enjoy it.
This is our happy Spring Festival, Do you feel happy?
译文:
在中国有很多节日。其中,我最喜欢的是春节。正因为如此,不仅是一年中最大的节日,但新的一年的开始,也是我们所有的人,聚在一起的节日。
在春节之前,人们回家,无论他们在哪里。通常,我们的年夜饭。然后一家人坐在一起分享他们的生活或飞机。有些人玩游戏或出去玩。在元旦,人们早起人说。孩子可以从亲戚那里得到压岁钱。在未来几天,我们将拜访亲戚支付新年的电话,给他们。一句话,这是家庭团聚,我们所有的时间去享受它。
这是我们的春节快乐,你觉得快乐吗?
篇19:五年级关于春节的英语作文
全文共 2413 字
+ 加入清单In the firecrackers, we usher in the Chinese the most grand festival: the Spring Festival, every family beaming, hang red lanterns, labeled red couplets, busy...
In the past I was up late, but today I make a first, because very want to smell the aroma of firecrackers. A string of lit firecrackers in the hands of people, sounds really big, splash around, as if to send every blessing to every household, successive waves of fireworks, scratching, very busy.
Havent been to the Spring Festival, it is the busiest time of the housewives in the kitchen, only in a few days before the ready, and the family reunion dinner is always in the year to come, and on the first day of the dumplings in large eve bag out. At this time every the chopping block in unter den unter den busy chopping, chopping vegetables. At this point, the chopping block, firecrackers, in to mingle with people, the YangYangYingEr, interwoven into the New Years eve the cheerful music. Eat dinner is the most happy when it is the Spring Festival families, a big family reunion dinner with a table, a family reunion, sitting at the table, the reunion dinner, fill up my heart. People is both enjoy a full table feast, and enjoy the atmosphere of joy.
New Years eve that night, we have a large family home ate dinner, all around in front of the TV, tasting the fruits, to enjoy the Spring Festival gala, looking forward to the New Years bell sounded quickly. When the New Years bell sounded at that time, the whole city, firecrackers moro tianyu. The children firecrackers, cheerful healthy-looking. At this time, the room is lit lights, front is a bright spark, outside is deafening noise, push the lively atmosphere of the New Years eve to the highest level.
This is my New Year, organic would want to play! I will welcome you to play, linze will also take you played all places!
在爆竹声中,我们迎来了中国人最盛大的节日:春节,家家喜气洋洋,挂上红红的灯笼,贴上红红的春联,忙忙碌碌……
以往我都是起的最晚的人,可今天我挣了个第一,因为极想闻闻那香气扑鼻的爆竹味儿。一串串鞭炮在人们手中点燃,声音真大,四处飞溅,仿佛要把每一个祝福送到千家万户,一阵阵爆竹声接连不断,噼里啪啦的,热闹非凡。
没到过春节的时候,也正是主妇们在厨房里最忙碌的时候,年菜都在前几天作好了,而年夜饭总要在大年三十做出来,而且大年初一的饺子也要在大年三十晚上包出来。这时家家的砧板都在噔噔噔的忙着剁肉,切菜。此时,砧板声,爆竹声,在夹杂着人们的说笑声,此起彼伏,洋洋盈耳,交织成除夕欢快的乐章。吃年夜饭是春节家家户户最愉快热闹的时候,丰盛的年夜饭摆满一桌,合家团聚,围坐桌旁,共吃团圆饭,心头的充实难以言喻。人们既是享受满桌的佳肴盛宴,也是享受那份欢乐的气氛。
除夕那天晚上,我们一大家子热热闹闹吃完了年夜饭,都围在电视机前,一边品尝瓜果,一边欣赏春节联欢晚会,盼望着新年的钟声快快敲响。当新年的钟声敲响的那时,整个城市的上空,爆竹声震响天宇。孩子们放爆竹,欢快的欢蹦乱跳。这时,屋内是通明的灯光,屋前是灿烂的火花,屋外是震天的响声,把除夕的热闹气氛推向了最高潮。
这就是我家的春节,有机会要来玩呀!我会欢迎你们到临泽来玩,还会带你们玩过所有的地方哦!
篇20:有关压力英语初一
全文共 1232 字
+ 加入清单Pressure seems to be a natural part in our daily life in this competitive
society. Like it or not there is always pressure of one kind or another. And it
seems there is hardly any way to avoid it or get rid of it. Moreover, as the
pace of modern life continues to quicken, pressure seems to be on the increase
all the time.
Different people have different ideas about pressure. Some hold that
pressure is something very vicious. If there is too much of it, it will lead to
the decline of ones physical and mental health. So they are always complaining
about it or trying to flee from it. They think, only relaxation, the opposite of
pressure, is what we should desire. On the other hand, others argue that
pressure is not as bad as is often thought. In fact a certain amount of pressure
is essential to provide motivation and meaning to our life. It is pressure that
propels our progress and contributes to our success.
Personally, Im in favor of the latter idea. I believe that a little
pressure is certainly an important incentive in life. It is only when the
pressure gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and bad health.
Since it is impossible to avoid pressure, certainly there is no sense trying to
do so or complaining about it.