英语假期小作文初一【汇编20篇】

导语：在中国一到假期就会各种塞车，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

It was our national holiday and I had eight days off,so I went with my parents to visit my grandma in the country.Indeed，I will never forget the journey.

On the morning of Oct.1,Iwas woken up by my mother.She told me to start out early ,or we might be blocked on the way .Hearing this,I thought she was frighting me.

However,when we got to the expressway,I began to realize what I thought was wrong.There were so many cars,buses and trucks on the road that we found it very hard to move forward.More than five hours passed,butwe still hadover600 Km togo. hungryand thirsty, I could hardly stand it any longer. mother and father kept on comforting me. In the end,we arrived at Grandma`s,but it was already 11;00p.m.

the journeywas unforgettable andI think it is a trouble to go home on holidays for many people. I hope that our government can do something to solve this problem.

【参考译文】

这是我们的国庆假期，我有八天假，所以我和我的父母去看望我的奶奶在乡下，我永远不会忘记的旅程。

在10月1日早上，我被妈妈叫醒，她告诉我要早点出发，否则我们可能会被堵塞在路上。听到这，我以为她讨厌我。

然而，当我们到了高速公路，我开始意识到我的想法是错的。有这么多的汽车，公共汽车和卡车的道路上，我们发现它步履艰难。五个多小时过去了，我们仍然有600多公里的多哥。饥饿和口渴，我几乎无法忍受下去。爸爸妈妈一直安慰我。最后，我们来到了奶奶` S，但它已经是11;00p。M.

这段旅程令人难忘，我觉得许多人回家度假是件麻烦事。我希望我们的政府能做些什么来解决这个问题。

My Family

My name is Claire and I’m in my fourteen years old. I live a happy life because I have a warm and harmonious family.

There are four people in my family. They are my parents、my elder brother and me. My parents both are teachers so that my brother and I have been well educated. I am four years younger than my brother who always cares much about me. We have a good relationship, though we quarrel and even fight sometimes. Actually, I am likely to consider it as a sign of love.

In one word, I really love my family. How about yours?

【汉语翻译】

我的家庭

我的名字叫克莱尔,我十四岁了。我过着快乐的生活,因为我有一个温暖和谐的家庭。

我家有四口人，他们是我的父母、我的哥哥和我。我的父母都是教师,我和我哥哥都受过良好教育。我比我哥哥小四岁，他总是非常关心我。我们有良好的关系,尽管有时我们争吵甚至打架。事实上,我可能会认为这是爱的象征。

总之,我真的很爱我的家人。你的家庭怎么样?

The day before yesterday, the front wheel of my bike burst the tire, a tack of the ghost, I thought I accidentally got it. Yesterday, the back wheel of my bicycle also exploded, and it was a ghost of a tack. I doubted it very much.

Today, my bike leather are pulled away from my home holding the car, took more than half an hour. What is dad said I was a teacher at the school, really mad at me!

I must buy a bag of tacks, and every man who makes my car will put their car in a tack and let them try the taste of the walking car.

That is, my mother spent a lot of money, is to repair the car frame!

Really mad at me. You say, Ive been down and down???

【范文一】An Unforgettable Holiday

I am always busy with my lessons. What I have to do everyday is nothing but study.

Luckily, last summer my family went to my uncles farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday. During the holiday, I didnt have to get up early, nor did I need to finish many exercises. I rode the horse in the fields. I milked the cows on the farm. To my great joy, my uncle invited me to go fishing. Life on the farm is quite different from that at school. I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

【参考译文】一个难忘的假期

我总是忙于功课。我每天要做的就是学习。幸运的是,去年夏天我和我的家人去了我叔叔的农场。我们在那里有一个非常有趣的假期。在这个假期,我没有早起,也没有我需要完成的练习题。我骑着马在田地里。我在农场挤牛奶。令我十分高兴的是,我的叔叔邀请我去钓鱼。生活在农场和在学校是相当不同的。我想再一次回到我的暑假了。

【范文二】Life In Vacation

It was a sun day of the summer holiday. The weather was hot. My little brother and I decided to go to the resrvoir to swim by bike. It took us half an hour when we got there, many people were swimming. Then we ped into the water……

About an hour later, suddenly somebody called: “help! help!” We were surprised to see a boy struggling in the deep water. As quickly as possible. We swam towards him and pulled him to the shore. He lost his consciousness. We sent him to the nearest hospital at once luckily, he was saved.

In the end, we were worn out, but felt happy. That day was meaningful. We did a good deed!

【参考译文】假期生活

这是暑假阳光灿烂的一天，非常热，我决定和弟弟骑车去水库游泳。我们花了半个多小时才到达，很多人在游泳，于是我们也跳入水中。

约一小时后，突然有人叫：“救命啊!救命啊!“我们惊讶地看到一个男孩在深水里挣扎，我们游向他尽快将他拉到岸边。他失去了知觉，我们立刻把他送到最近的医院，幸运的是，他得救了。

最后，我们都很疲惫，但觉得很开心。这是有意义的一天，我们做了件好事。

【范文三】My Vacation

My vacation was very interesting. I did my homework on first day. I played table tennis on second day. I watched TV on the third day. I went shopping on the fourth day. But I liked my going shopping best.

On Sunday, I went to a shopping center with my mother. The shopping center wasnt far from my home. It took us about ten minutes to get there on foot. The shopping center was very big. There were all kinds of things. Every day a lot of people go there to buy things. It opens at eight in the morning and closes at nine at night. Now, I was helping my mother buying things. I had a shopping list in my hand. We were looking for things on the shopping list. After staying in the shopping center for about two hours, we got all the things and walked home.

What did you do when you were on vacation?

【参考译文】我的假期

我的假期非常有趣。第一天我做功课。第二天我打乒乓球。在第三天，我看电视。第四天我去购物。但我最喜欢去购物。

上星期日，我去了购物中心与我的母亲。从我的家去购物中心不远。这花了我们大约十分钟步行到那里。购物中心是非常大的。有各种各样的东西。每天都有很多人去那里买东西。早晨八点开门，晚上九点关门。现在，我在帮妈妈买东西。我在我的手上有一个购物清单。我们正在寻找购物清单上的东西。逗留约两小时购物中心后，我们得到了所有的东西，走回家。

你度假时你是怎么做的？

【范文四】Traveling in Our Life

Traveling in our life Traveling now is very popular with everyone. It’s becoming more and more important in our life, and it’s becoming the common activity that most people like to take part in. When we get tired, we would like to have a holiday to enjoy ourselves. When we are free, we also want to go out to enjoy the beautiful nature with our families. When we are sad, we hope to go to the beautiful mountains to breaths fresh air and relax ourselves. In this way we can have a good time and have a great change in our life. We can take a lot of photos, make many friends and enjoy different kinds of nature pictures. The most important is that traveling is good for our health. Traveling is really a very good activity, isn’t it?

【参考译文】旅行在我们的生活中

旅行在我们的生活中旅行现在是非常流行的与每个人。它在我们的生活中变得越来越重要，它已成为大多数人喜欢参加的共同活动。当我们累了，我们想有一个假期来享受自己。当我们自由的时候，我们也要和我们的家人一起去享受大自然的美好。当我们悲伤的时候，我们希望到美丽的山上呼吸新鲜的空气，放松自己。这样我们可以有一个好的时间，并有一个伟大的变化，我们的生活。我们可以拍很多照片，交很多朋友，欣赏不同种类的自然照片。最重要的是，旅行对我们的健康有好处。旅行真是一个很好的活动，不是吗？

[以假期为话题的英语作文

I have a good winner vacation!

In my winner vacation ，I often did my homework， and helped my mother clean rooms.

I sometimes went shopping with my friends . We had a good time! I also watched TV and played puter games. During Spring Festival ，I visited my grandparents.

I was very happy ，I think my winner vacation was very interesting!

【摘要】“初一英语作文关键词语指导”本文是编者为大家整理的英语作文写作关键词，希望可以给大家的学习带来帮助：

一、表示递进关系的关键词语

Additionally加之;又

besides此外;除……之外

equallyimportant同样重要的是

furthermore此外;而且

inaddition另外

inotherwords换句话说

lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是

moreover而且;此外

thatissay即;就是;换句话说

二、表示转折关系的关键词语

although虽然;尽管

atthesametime同时;但是

despite不管;尽管;不论

evenif即使

eventhough即使

however然而;可是

inspiteof不管

instead代替;而不是

nevertheless然而;不过

onthecontrary正相反

otherwise另外;不同地

regardlessof不管;不顾

still依然;仍然

though虽然;可是

while而

yet然而;但是;仍

三、表示选择关系的关键词语

either…or………或……

insteadof………，而不是……

neither…nor………和……都不……

not…but…不是……而是……

ratherthan…宁可;胜过

whether…ornot是否

四、表示比较关系的关键词语

comparewith/to与……比较

equally相等地;平等地

incomparisonwith与……比较

incontrast相反;大不相同

incontrastto和……对比

inthesameway同样地

instead代替;改为

onthecontrary正相反

while而

五、表示因果关系的关键词语

accordingly因此;从而

asaresultof作为结果

because(of)因为

consequently从而;因此

dueto由于;应归于

hence因此;从此

inthat由于;因为;既然

nowthat因为;既然

onaccountof由于

owingto由于;因……的缘故

so所以

sothat所以

thanksto由于

therefore因此;所以

thus因此

六、用于表示总结的关键词语

aboveall最重要的是

accordingly于是

asaconsequence因此

asaresult结果

ashasbeennoted如前所述

asIhavesaid如我所述

atlast最后

briefly简单扼要地

bydoingso如此

certainly当然地;无疑地

consequently因此

eventually最后

hence因此

inaword总之

inbrief简言之

inconclusion总;最后

inshort简而言之

insummary简要地说

insum总之;简而言之

obviously显然

onthewhole总体来说;整个看来

toconclude总而言之

tospeakfrankly坦白地说

tosumup总而言之

tosummarize总而言之

以上是小编为大家整理的“初一英语作文关键词语指导”全部内容。

Once a year the Tomb-sweeping Day to Tomb-sweeping Day, is Chinas traditional festivals, is also the most important festival is the ancestor worship, ancestor worship, an activity has mourn the passing of a loved one. This day, Grandma had been ready to give grandpa grandma and grandpa too too grave for something, uncle drove the car, we soon came to the mountain. First we went to the great grandfathers grandmas grave and put flowers, and burn some paper money. Then to Grandpas tomb, the tomb they are not far away, we take out the grandpas love of alcohol and tobacco, put in my grandfathers tomb, the grandfather to burn some money, so as to express our thoughts and wishes to relatives! And pray for them silently in my heart, bless them on the other side of the heaven and we can live happily.

In a flash, grandpa has been dead for four years. Grandpa died due to illness, when the time is still very young, I vaguely remember some of the pictures I played with my grandfather when I was young, I can not help but feel a bit more missing and sad.

One day the grave would end this way. On this special day, I realize the value of life.

Christmas Day-December 25-which celebrates the birth of Jesus Christ， the founder of the Christian religion， is the biggest and best-loved holiday in the United States.

According to the Bible， the holy book of Christians， God decided to allow his only son， Jesus Christ， to be born to a human mother and live on earth so that people could understand God better and learn to love God and each other more. "Christmas"- meaning "celebration of Christ "- honors the time when Jesus was born to a young Jewish woman Mary.

Mary was engaged to be married to Joseph， a carpenter， but before they came together， she was found to be with child. Because Joseph， her husband， was a righteous man and did not want to expose her to public disgrace， he had in mind to p>

Although the exact date of the birth of Jesus nearly 2，000 years ago is not known， the calendar on the supposed date p>

圣诞节只是基督徒庆祝其信仰的耶稣基督(jīdū)诞生的庆祝日。圣诞节的庆祝与基督教同时产生，被推测始于西元1世纪。很长时间以来圣诞节的日期都是没有确定的，因为耶稣确切的出生日期是存在争议的，除了《新约》以外，没有任何记载提到过耶稣;《新约》不知道日期，当然就没有人知道确切日期了。在西元后的头三百年间，耶稣的生日是在不同的日子庆祝的。西元3世纪以前的作家们想把圣诞日定在春分日上下。直到西元3世纪中期，基督教在罗马合法化以后，西元354年罗马主教指定儒略历12月25日为耶稣诞生日。现在的圣诞节日期跟西元纪年的创制是密不可分的。

西元纪年创制于西元5世纪，后来圣诞节这一天就按格里高利历法，即西元纪年的“公历”来确定了，而日历按着假定日期把时间分为公元前(耶稣基督诞生前)和公元后(A. D. 是拉丁文缩写，意思是“有了我们主--耶稣的年代”)。后来，虽然普遍教会都接受12月25日为圣诞节，但又因各地教会使用的历书不同，具体日期不能统一，

There is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing worry for the

residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with

traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the

vexing problem. How to solve the headache?

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus

systems and broadening major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve

traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic

annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive

a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a

system of customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways,

trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will

enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.

Parents fostered a seedling - that is what we are. In the storm, they like a big umbrella, zhefengdangyu for us, do their best to protect us, we must learn to Thanksgiving our parents.

As the saying goes, the fathers day, mother earth. Yeah! Is you give us enough nutrition; Is you give us sufficient moisture. Is you give us abundant sunshine; Give us enough oxygen. It is our great parents.

Gratitude is the traditional virtue of Chinese people. You will know gratitude towards the road to success, you know that gratitude soul becomes more rich, know gratitude your life will be more happy, happy. Gratitude is not saying a word, it is to rely on your own efforts can be obtained. The ancient Confucius, mencius and Lao tze which are know Thanksgiving will big achievements in return for their parents. With parents only have we, no parents we come from?

People ask me how to repay their parents? I said to them, go with your heart grateful; Use the results to return them.

People are always not satisfied, always want to get more. But if not grateful parents, cant get to the divine.

Quick to cherish! Let us learn to Thanksgiving, Thanksgiving care your people care you love you of person!

父母培养了一颗幼苗——那就是我们。在暴风雨中，他们像一把大伞一样为我们遮风挡雨，尽自己的全力保护我们，我们一定要学感恩自己的父母。

俗话说，父是天，母是地。是啊!是你们给我们充足的营养;是你们给我们充足水分;是你们给我们充足的阳光;给我们充足的氧气。那就是我们伟大的父母。

感恩是中华民族传统的美德。知道感恩你就会迈向成功的道路，知道感恩你的灵魂就变得更加丰富，知道感恩你的人生会更加美满、幸福。感恩不是说一句话就可以了，它是靠你自己的努力才可以获得的。古代的孔子、孟子与老子哪个都是知道感恩才会成就大事业来回报父母的。有了父母才有我们，没有父母我们从哪里来?

别人要问我怎样报答父母?我会对他们说，要用你的心去感恩;用成绩去回报他们。

人总是不满足，总希望自己得到更多。但是如果不懂得感恩父母，便无法得到便去祈求神灵。

快珍惜吧!让我们一起学会感恩，感恩关注你的人呵护你爱护你的人吧!

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

今天，我和爸爸妈妈一起去成都玩，已经约好了舅舅来接我们的，但我们把下车的地点弄错了，舅舅没在那儿。

妈妈着急的打电话，可好久了舅舅也没有来，我牵着妈妈的手，问道：“舅舅怎么还没来呢?我们回去了吧!”妈妈笑了，说：“别急，舅舅一会儿就来了。”

这时候，天下起雨来，妈妈用一个包把我遮住，不停的四下张望，可仍然不见舅舅的踪影。原来舅舅走反了方向，与我们背道而驰了，怎么能找到我们呢?他走了好远，又往回走，所以耽搁了好长一段时间。

在我们等舅舅的时候，一个面包车司机在旁边停了下来，假惺惺的问这问那，一看就不是好人样，哼，我才不会理这样的人呢!那人见我们不理他，最后驾着车灰溜溜的走了。

当舅舅找到我们的时候才发现，原来我们坐车坐过了站，不过距他等我们的地方只有四五百米。唉，居然没看见我们，还转了一个大圈。把我们也急坏了。

可怕的车祸

第二天，我们一起出去玩，在一个立交桥下，看到围着好些人，我在公交车上伸长脖子一看，“天啊!”，我不由地惊叫起来。

只见一辆水泥搅拌车停在那儿，在搅拌车的左前轮下，一辆电动车前轮被撵得稀烂，交警在那儿仔细的查看情况，人们七嘴八舌的谈论着，一些骑车的人也将车停在一旁，仔细的了解着事故情况，也许是想受到点现场教育吧。

但地上没有血迹，骑电动车的人也不知去向，也许是被送去医院了吧，或许伤得不是很重，希望是这样的。

想起前一段时间成都公交车燃烧事故，看到车辆来往穿梭，我越发感到交通法规的重要了。同学们以后出行，千万要注意遵守交通规则啊!

没有看到的日全食

7月22日这一天，最大的事情莫过于观测日全食了，成都新闻从早上六点多就现场直播，画面上好多人摆着专业的观测工具，

还有好些人专程赶到成都来看日全食呢。更有趣的是，居然有一对新人在今天坐热气球观日食结婚，有好多人为他们喝彩呢!

结果，天公不作美，天上一直阴沉沉的，太阳老躲在云背后，或许她也害羞了呢!这么多人同时看他，虽然是高高在上的太阳公公，也扭捏起来了。

初亏是看不到了，人们感觉没什么变化，日食正在进行中，天空也没什么显著的变化，依然是阴沉沉的，但没有电视里说的黑暗瞬间的到来，我们将信将疑的看着天空，云依然很厚，太阳只是偶尔露出一点点，但很快就躲回去了。

也许是太阳公公觉得人们快失望了，随着日全食的时间临近，天色很快暗了下来。人们沸腾了，大人小孩都目不转睛的盯着天上，鸟儿们在天空中惊奇的飞翔，城市的灯火也亮了起来。

没有谁注意时间，也许就一两分钟吧，天空就像夜晚一样暗了下来，人们的喧闹声此起彼伏，大人们竭力装出一幅不是很在意的样子，小孩们却不管这么多了，大声的喊着，闹着，尽情享受着自然给我们带来的乐趣。

突然间，天空一层层的亮开了，就那么一阵阵的亮开的，全然不是平时的样子，而且速度也比黑下来时快得多，好神奇啊!

My mother is the loveliest person in the world. She Ioves her children very much and is always kind and gentle to us. Every mother is kind to her children but my mothcrs kindness to us is unlike others.

She never gets angry and never loses her temper. When we are naughty and do not listen to her words, she truly pretends to be angry and walks away. She will come back to us later and asks whether we like to be good boys and good girls again. She is so gentle and patient to us.

My mother is busy all day. She cooks for us, washes our clothes and also teaches us to do our homework. We all love mad respect our dear mother.

[初一英语作文：我的妈妈

Its important for us to be healthy all our life. We cant study or work well without healthy body.

Therere many ways to keep healthy. First of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school, we can spend an hour playing ball games. If we live in a high-rise, we can walk upstairs or downstairs. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Finally, we must remember: "Early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."

though my daily life is extremely monotonous, i try hard to adapt myself to it. why? because i intend to be a good student. i wish to render service to my country.

i get up at six o’clock every day. after i wash my face and brush my teeth, i begin to review my lessons. i go to school at seven o’clock.

after school is over, i return home. we usually have supper at seven o’clock.then i begin to do my homework. i want to finish it before i go to bed.

My home is an old but comfortable house located in the suburbs of Wuhan.There are near it a few parks,a bus station and an elementary school.People in my neighborhood are friendly and cooperative.There is neither crime nor pollution there.Children are often found playing in the parks.A market,shops and a big department store are within walking distance.

There are around us some more expensive,bigger and more beautiful houses,but none is as warm as mine.

我的家是一个古老但很舒适的房子位于武汉的郊区。这几个公园,附近有一个公交车站和一个小学。我的邻居人友好合作。没有犯罪,也没有污染。孩子们经常在公园玩。一个市场,商店和一个大型百货商店在步行距离之内。

在我们周围有一些更贵,更大更漂亮的房子,但没有一个是我一样温暖。

[初一英语作文我的家

I think there is no one would say “no” to travel. People love travel, for it can make them relax and widen their vision. Some people like to travel with friends, because they want to share the pleasure of traveling, and they think the journey will be much easier for they can take care of each other. While some people like to travel alone, they can go anywhere in anytime. They don’t have to care about what the partner’s idea. In my opinion, I’m much preferred to travel with friends, but I always have an urge to travel alone.

我想没有人会对旅行说“不”。人们喜欢旅游，因为旅游可以使他们放松并开阔视野。有些人喜欢和朋友一起旅行，因为他们想要分享旅游的乐趣，他们认为旅行会变得更容易，在旅程中将他们可以互相照顾。有些人喜欢独自旅行，他们可以在任何时候去任何地方。他们不必在乎对方的想法。在我看来，我更喜欢和朋友一起旅行，但我总是有一种冲动想独自旅行。

Firstly, I was told that travel alone can help people to grow up quickly, and that’s what I really need. If you travel alone, you have to do everything by yourself in the journey, for instance, to buy a ticket, to book hotel, and ask directions. That maybe just a small case for extrovert, but for introvert, like me, it’s really a big challenge. I remember the first time I go to travel with friends and my little brother, they did everything, and I just follow and had fun. I even too shame to check into a hotel, and my little brother did it for me. I was humiliated for that. So, travel alone could force introvert to do the things that you don’t dare to do. It could help you to build an outgoing personality. For extrovert, travel alone could enhance your ability to handle emergence case.

首先，有人告诉我独自旅行能帮助人们迅速长大，这才是我真正需要的。如果你独自一人旅行，你必须在旅途中，自己做所有的事情，比如，买机票，预订酒店，问路。这些对于外向的人也许只是小事，但对于性格内向的人，像我，就是一个非常大的挑战。我记得我第一次与朋友和我的小弟弟去旅行的时候，他们把所有的事情都做好，而我只是跟着并寻找乐趣。我甚至太害羞而不敢到酒店登记，结果是我的弟弟为我登记的。对于这一点我感到很羞愧。所以，独自旅行能强迫内向的人做你不敢做的事情。它可以帮助你形成外向的性格。对于外向的人，独自旅行能提高你处理紧急情况的能力。

Secondly, travel alone gives you peace of mind. Image that, you walking alone in the beach, there are no sounds of human beings, just burst of sound waves. You close your eyes, enjoy the moment, you will feel peace.

其次，独自旅行可以让你心情平静。想象一下你一个人独自走在沙滩上，那儿没有人类的声音，只有浪花的声音。闭上眼睛，享受这一刻，你会感觉到平静。

In short, travel alone could be loneliness and dangerous, especially for girls, but it’s worth having a try for the beautiful scene in the journey, it seems like all the things are just exist for you.

总之，独自旅行可能会有孤独和危险，特别是对女孩子，但为了旅途中美丽的景色是值得一试的，似乎所有的事物都只为你而存在。

May First International Labor Day w ǔ y ī guójìláo dòng jiéalso calls " May Day " Decides in every year on May 1. It isthe world not produces team level, working peoples common holiday. Labor S Day is on May 1st. Labor S Day is an internationalday for workers. Working is glorious, and we should respect workers.

The Spring Festival, every family, bursting with happiness decorated, our family is no exception.

On the thirty day of the year, I came to grandmas home with my mom and dad. Morning, the street is always a "crash" huge crowds of people, and the "bite" sound. I asked my sister strangely, "what are these people doing, sister?" My sister smiled, but did not speak, so I put all his strength into the crowd, there is a pair of men are dragon dance. The dragons aunt and uncle are dressed in white clothes and red pants, they catch the dragon, the Dragon stretching from Voldemort swinging, gongs and drums accompanied by the sound of the dragon. They are praying for peace for people through every street and lane. At this time, we followed the team to the river. They were around the big boat by the river, praying for prosperity. The end of the dragon, we listened to the distant sound of gongs and drums, gazed at the dim figure.

In the evening, our family sat on a stool, eating a reunion meal. After dinner, we stood on the balcony upstairs and looked at the downstairs fireworks. The first one is the flower basket. The flower basket is made up of six circular holes. The flower basket first sprayed sparks, then suddenly flew up to the sky and burst into many colorful sparks. So it sprayed six times. It seemed to be blessing for people. Sister feel good, could not wait to pick up the Butterfly King, the elder sister quickly ignited in their hands, "flutter" sound of fireworks, to a light butterfly, dancing in the sky, the last "bang", divided into many a spark in the sky slowly and gently. Float to the ground. I took a bowl, hold in the hand, "bang", "bang", ten guns, resounded through the night sky symbolizes our joy and happiness.

The sky was getting dark. Our family went to the room to watch the Spring Festival Gala, say and laugh, how happy the Spring Festival is!

Mothers love

All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

I had a fun and special holiday。On Monday，I did my homework and read some interesting story－books。Tuesday morning，I went to a big nice supermarket。I bought a lot of food。Then I ate them。Oh，they were yummy！In the afternoon，I played ping－pong with my father。 I won the match。I was so happy。Wednesday morning，I played chess with my mother。My mother won the game。But I was not sad。Because it was only a game。We played，we had fun。Wednesday evening，I watched TV with my parents。My parents are always busy。They have no time to play with me。But that night we were very close，very happy！

I love this special holiday！

我有一个饶有趣味并且特殊的假期。在星期一，我做了回家作业，还读了一些有趣的故事书。星期二的早晨，我去了一个又大又漂亮的超市。我买了很多食物，接着我吃掉了它们。哦，它们真美味！下午，我与爸爸打起了乒乓。我战胜了他。我非常开心。星期三早上，我和我妈妈下棋，我妈妈赢了比赛，但是我不伤心，因为它只是一个游戏。我们在游戏中获得了乐趣。星期三晚上，我和我的父母一起看电视。他们总是很忙。他们没有时间陪我玩。但是那个晚上我们很亲密，非常高兴！

我爱这个特殊的假期！

[以假期为主题的英语作文以及中文翻译