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1000中考的英语作文提分技巧介绍
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文是一大难点,怎么样让自己的作文更加的高分呢?下面请看语文迷网为大家整理的技巧。
1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚,要把时间固定下来,如:记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写,要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致,首尾呼应,不要随意改动,以免造成误解。
2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇,对这些一知半解的词你不会用,不知道如何搭配,结果可能适得其反,使文章显的生硬、不协调,甚至错误百出,所以要使用有把握的词,避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件,我们通常用“have an accident ”来表示,不要错误的使用“have an incident”。
3、注意不同语言的表达习惯,也是写好英语作文的重要环节,如“我的理想是做一名歌手”,很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer,” “to do”表示“做”或者“干”,“to make”表示“制作”,而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”;又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”,而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此,平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯,切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。
4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句,写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去,如:定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型,关键时用上一、二个,就能使文章不同凡响,更有文采,特别是对关联词的使用,如“so that”、“not…but ”“not only...but also”等,会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚,更能显示出你的英文功底,但要做到这些并非一日之功,要靠平时的不断训练和积累。
5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象,在扣分时自然会“手下留情”,而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫,得到这一分并不难。
注意事项:
最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节:
1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画,明确文章的中心思想,弄清题意,确定写作体裁,掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数,避免随心所欲,文不对题。
2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点,然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序,分出层次。如果是看图作文,则要按图构思,这样做既可避免要点遗漏,又可使表达内容条理清楚。
3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯,构成写作的整体框架,进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后,写作就有了把握。
4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来,多用简单句,用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短,避难就易。若遇到表达障碍,可换一种说法,将一句变成两、三句,只求达意。
5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来,注意上下句的逻辑关系,适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语,使短文浑然一体,层次分明,过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后,默读1~2遍,检查修改,尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误,要点有无遗漏,文句有无语病,词数是否恰当,行文是否连贯。
英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程,只要同学们在平时多加训练,多读文章,做一个有心人,就能在中考作文中取得理想的成绩。
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+ 加入清单Hi, my name is xxx. Im xx years old, a middle school student apparently. I love music very much although Im not very good at singing. Ive been playing guzheng, an ancient traditional instrument for a long time and now Im in level 10, which means a really high level among the amateurs. Apart from that, I also like to reading and writing. They both give me a lot of fun and build my unique personality as well as my goal and dream. I like Wangfei very much. She could be my favorite singer.... Personally, Ive been considering I have a really complicated personality because sometimes dont really like to study, sometimes..... However, Im very positive and look forwards to my future because Im the one who will realize my goal.
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+ 加入清单Spring - It is quite late now, though it was not late to me before at this clock. I should not stay so late I know. When one is getting old,he knows more about life. I think I do. I never felt time passing from me so fast like now. I always belived that the days would be splendid in the future . But I have came to know - it is not certain. I have came to understand what life is. Life is to be limited. I can say I dont fear death for I know it is part of nature. Once I talked with my friend, I said I could accept death, death of everybody, including myself. I know everyone who is existing in this world now will disappear one day. It is our destiny. How should we face it? Cry or smile? Looking at the blossom on the trees outside the window,I still remember the flowers falling down last year. Did they cry? I didnt ask them so I didnt have answer to this question. I saw the yellow leaves dancing in the air last autumn, I didnt ask if they were sad either. I just saw them flashing in the sunlight, like the good dancers with good rhythm...
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+ 加入清单I have a happy family.I like my family forever.
I love my family, because I have a happy family.
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+ 加入清单A pair of brothers received a letter which gave him a million pounds.
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参考译文:
一对兄弟收到了一封信,给了他一百万英镑。
原来兄弟打赌,赌如果一个贫穷、诚实的人从天空坠落收到一百万英镑,他会有什么结果?
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哥哥认为他会很好,所以他们兄弟将一百万英镑的支票借给穷人,和国外花了三十天。
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敬拜的钱是可耻的,不劳而获我们不应该!
钱不是万能的世界上有许多比金钱更重要的东西。
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+ 加入清单My name is xxx . There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.
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我的英语老师是余老师她有两只大眼睛一张小嘴吧和一头乌黑靓丽的长卷发.她很美.她对孩子们很好她喜欢和我们玩英语游戏.所以我们喜欢上英语课.她非常爱我们.我们是好朋友她每天早晨都来教我们读英语单词.所以我们的英语成绩是最好的.
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+ 加入清单Good morning/afternoon, teachers and classmates. Im XXX from class 1. I am a girl/boy of 13. My family including my father, mother and me. I like basketball best. In addition, I also like table tennis. My favorite food is carrots. Im also very interested in snacks. What, Im good at computer. Using the computer E-mail, shopping and even solve my problems in the study and the life is so convenient. So I put my computer as my good helper. As for reading, Ive read about magic novel. Are these. Nice to meet you! I sincerely hope to make friends with you.
老师同学早上/下午好。我是XXX。我现年13岁(女生或男生)。我的家庭包括我爸爸,妈妈和我。我最喜欢篮球。除此以外,我也喜欢乒乓球。我最喜欢的食物是胡萝卜。我也对小吃很感兴趣。还有什么,我很擅长电脑。用电脑发邮件、购物甚至是解决我学习和生活中的问题是如此的方便。所以我把我的电脑视为我的好帮手。至于阅读,我以前读过一些关于魔法的小说。就这些。很高兴认识你们!我真诚地希望与你们做朋友。
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+ 加入清单My hometown is in Gansu Lixian, there are many mountains.
In the distance, the mountains look like a green planet surrounded by forests. The stone on the mountain dressed the mountain as a world of stone.
The trees grow more luxuriantly in summer and dress up as green cashmere. The mountain terraces like people walking the steps, also like the mountains in Grandpa smile.
The mountain became a yellow world in autumn, and the fruits and crops were ripe, and the mountain was like a magician, constantly changing crops and fruits for human beings.
In winter the mountains covered with a white dress, like an angel, in the fog, the mountains like a bottomless mountain, no matter how you cant see the mountain bottom.
This is the mountain of my hometown all the year round, I love it.
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+ 加入清单Despite the cultural conflicts between the Orient and the Occident, there do exist some admirable ingredients in the Western culture.
First and foremost, the equality between parents and children. The parents are not always superior to their children, and the children do not always need to obey their parents ‘order, that is, they are more like close friends.
Second, the independent personality. Western people have a strong sense of supporting themselves and being independent. They begin earning their pocket money early in their life, even as kids.
Last, Western people do not always assess a person according to his background. If only he can achieve success through personal struggle, he can win status. Its a talent-oriented society, not background-oriented.
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+ 加入清单My name is Ruby Lin, and an actor of the same name, my parents want me to become an educated girl. I am 12 years old. I am from the 4 class in 6 years in XX road school. I have many hobbies: badminton, painting, playing chess and so on. Among them, I like playing the piano most, because playing the piano can make me forget all worries and intoxicated. Besides, I won many gold medals in the piano competition. I have passed the ten level now.
In school, my academic record is pretty good, and I can get the best in every school. In the eyes of the parents, I am a lively little girl; in the eyes of the teacher, I am a positive student; in the eyes of my classmates, I am a helpful, optimistic and cheerful classmate; and in my own eyes, I am a unique girl, a girl full of personality and ideal. Please remember me, Ruby Lin. Thank you all.
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone. Im glad to introduce myself to you. Im from Chongqing. I
am a teacher. I have many hobbies, such as taking notes, reading, listening to
music, dancing, singing, playing basketball and swimming. I think we should
treat everyday as the last day for us to live in the world. That is me. I like
making friends. I hope I can be your friends.
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+ 加入清单Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is l, 24. I come from Nanchang,the capital of Jiangxi Province. I graduated from the ****** department of *****University in July ,2001.In the past two years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interview by you.
I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books, especially those about ****.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.In addition ,during my college years,I was once a Net-bar technician.So, I have a comparative good command of network application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my favorite.Anyway,I feel great pity for our countrys team.
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篇18:关于介绍劳动节的由来的英语作文
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+ 加入清单The international workers day, also known as May day, is celebrated on the first day on May. There are more than eighty countries celebrate this festival since 1889. People may know that the workers day is about having a rest on that day, but most of them dont know how this day comes from and the story behind it.
In the late of 18 century, the cruel capitalists in order to make more money, they demanded their employers to work all day, but only paid them with low salaries. In America, the workers had to work at least 14 hours a day, sometimes, they even worked as long as 18 hours. Due to the unfair payment, the works knew that they had to stand up and fight for their rights, or all of them will die young. Then the workers started to go on strike, demanded that the reasonable working hours should be 8 hours a day. However, the capitalists did not pay attention to the workers demand. The workers had to fight for their rights for themselves. On may 1st, 1886, the United States and Canadas worker unions got together to start the biggest strike. After that day, the law had passed the rules that the workers working hours would be 8 hours per day. This strike had made a different. The worker did not need to suffer from the long working hours with low payment.
The international workers day aims to memorize the spirit of brave and show our honor to the former workers. Because they had make great contribution to todays happiness.
篇19:介绍故宫的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City, whichstarted to be built in 1407. It took 200,000 people fourteenyears to build it.
It was finished in 1420. There are 9,999 rooms in all the palaces. In China, nine is regarded as a lucky number traditionally. At present, it is free for Chinesestudents to visit every Tuesday.
The Palace Museum has treasures of over 5,000 years history.
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+ 加入清单My hometown is in shanghu lake village. Hometown is so beautiful, so natural, I love my hometown.
My hometown is picturesque scenery, I love it very much. The clear water like a huge mirror. The wind blows, the water ripples, sipping on the like many scales. The fish swimming in the water, kept blowing bubble, bubble colorful, landed like grapes. The shore flowers with the wind girl with out of graceful dance. Beautiful flowers nodded to the river, like to make friends with the stream. The grass foil the floret, far look like a picture. Draw water, flowers, grass, and green mountain. Such as pine trees, plum trees, peach trees on the hill. Pine trees tall and big, like falling warrior in protecting our country. The plum tree is not afraid of wind pressure deceives snow; Not afraid of the cold. In the cold winter, proudly stand on snow. This is not the spirit of the Chinese nation?
Our hometown is not only beautiful scenery, but the hometown people industrious guileless. He sunrise and make, whether every day. Facing the loess back down. Home now people want to get up early on, under the sun shine to pick a eggplant grain of grain sweat from the forehead to the ground, put the eggplant at noon sold, hurried back home to eat lunch. A meal again to pick, the end of the day they are busy. Hometown people break water bamboo, even to break in the morning, the sun to go home.
The hometown people industrious, I and many of the children at home! I and children play together, study together, to the stream to play, every day to go out for a walk. In winter, we together make a snowman in the snow snowball fights, the wonderful memory always in my mind.
Ah! I love my hometown. My hometown is beautiful, natural, I want to stay at home forever.
我的家乡在尚湖村。家乡是那么美,那么自然,我爱我的家乡。
我的家乡山清水秀,我非常爱它。清澈的湖水像一面巨大的镜子。风一吹,水面泛起粼粼波纹,像有许多鱼鳞一样。水中的鱼儿游来游去,不停地吹着泡泡,泡泡五彩缤纷,像一颗颗葡萄。岸边的小花随着风姑娘的伴托跳出优美的舞姿。美丽的小花向小河点头,像是要和小河交朋友。小草衬托着小花,远看就像一幅画。画上有水、小花、小草,还有翠绿的山。山上有松树、梅树、桃树等。松树又高又大,像一位位战士在保护祖国。梅树不怕风欺雪压;不怕寒冷。在寒冷的冬天里,傲然雪立。这不是中华民族的精神吗?
我们的家乡不仅风景美,而且家乡人们勤劳朴实。他每天日出而作、日落而息。还要面朝黄土背朝天。现在家乡人们要早早地起床,在太阳照耀下摘茄子一粒一粒的汗珠从额头流到地上,中午又要把茄子卖出去,急匆匆地赶回家吃午饭。吃完饭又要去摘,一天下来他们可忙了。家乡人们还要掰茭白,早上去掰,太阳落山才能回家。
家乡人们勤劳,我在家还有许多小朋友呢!我和小朋友一起玩,一起学习,每天要到小溪边玩,还要出去散步。冬天,我们一起在雪地上堆雪人,打雪仗,那美好的回忆一直在我脑海里。
啊!我爱我的家乡。我的家乡美丽、自然,我要永远留在家乡。