介绍花茶的英语作文(热门20篇)

Today isnh birthday.My ther andgrand bought a big cake for .When i got ho,i saw a cake on the table. There were nine candles on it and there was a present next to the cake.I askedther what the present was .My ther toldto open it.Oh!there was a note under the scarf.It said :"the weather is getting cold,please wear this scarf ." "thanks and grand.i love you very ch!" I was so happy today.

My birtiday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings onbirthday. Why I ahappy? I have group of friends thate over to celebrate with . And they givebirthday presents, sotis the gifts surprisedvery ch. Also, I can feel how chfaly lovesbecauseparents always ke a birthday cake for . They do not go to buy one, but ke one theelves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understandther was the one who suffered the st pain on the date I ca to the world. I feel so sorry forther for what she had suffered. But I prose her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

英语作文自我介绍带翻译

To introduce myself(介绍我自己)

Hello,every one!(大家好)

My name is **** . (我叫****)

Im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改) I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(我住在美丽的Rizhao城)(你可以把Rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)

Im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)

In the school , my favourite subject is maths .(在学校，我最喜欢数学)

Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

But I like it.(但我喜欢他)

I belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)

I also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)

Such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等) Im kind-hearted.(我很热心)

If you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助，就来找我) I hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友) OK.This is me .A sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩

Hello, everyone! Im Feng Biyu, a girl of 19 years old. As you can see, I am very glad to get along with all of you and I hope we’ll have a good time in our subsequent study.

My hometown is in SiHong, Northern JiangSu Province, a beautiful place with a lot of clear rivers and lakes. When boating on HongZe Lake, I always feel free and relaxed. It is really a wonderful  place to enjoy your life.

I graduated from SiHong Middle School. It was set up in 1949 and now it  is more than 60 years old.

I have a lot of friends in my middle school. We love each other. Time goes by, but our friendship will never go away. They cheer me up, make me happy and do some help when I meet with difficulties.

Thats all, thank you!

A no African black boy, this year 12, small eyes, collapse collapse on the nose. And there was a big ears Desmond tutu gene "siddhi moving ears!

"The teacher is saying!" See, I and sister trueer, for example, 3/4 * 7/10. I said must take three quarters into the denominator is ten, elder sister said, also can directly take, I didnt pay attention in class, to lead to such result, I this is impatient.

"Clicking" I played the boys favorite through the wire. The mother shouted: "have a pear for me!" When I was have a good time, very reluctantly said: "go play again for a while." After a while mother urged again, I still say to play for a while. When I play enough, its been more than an hour, after the mother took a pear, mother long give a sigh said: "eat pears, you wash is really not easy!" This is I love playing computer.

"Get up!" Sister woke me, I rubbed his dim eyes, deep ground to say: "what time is it?" "11" "only 11 o clock will go to sleep!" "Today, cleaning,! Hurry up!" Three words heard the cleaning, I immediately pack to sleep, you know, I usually take a little clothes, socks, are ok, but... Cleaning or forget it! Sister cry to me a few words: "slacker!" This is not love doing housework, I love to sleep.

"Second, second pass" the person who is fierce Shouting it is me. I love playing basketball and table tennis, although Im not too good, but I can play, a free until to dont want to play! And table tennis, we are all activity to practice and play, although I played not champions, but "no challenge champion will never be the champion" is the movement of love me!!!!!!!

"Oh! I have forgot my meal card in our bedroom!" Poor Zhang Shanzheng pain shouted. "I borrow your" I said without hesitation! Zhang Shanzheng hurriedly said thank you to me, my arms around him. "All are brothers, dont mention it!" Another time before six and I (3) class Zhao Junkai and fit in with the cui, we are all iron elder brothers, once was playing it, Zhao Junkai injured, we two word, holding him and ran the clinic, to check he dont have my card. I didnt take, I will let him to register my name, since the return of money!

This is me, more I trouble, less advantage of me. Dont you want to make friends with me?

一个没有非洲人黑的小男孩，今年12，小眼睛，塌塌的鼻子。又有大耳朵图图的基因“动耳神功!”

“老师就是这样讲的啊!”看，我又和姐姐较真，就比如说3/4*7/10吧!我说必须把3/4化成分母是十，姐姐说，也可以直接乘，都是我在课上没注意听，才导致成这样的结果，这就是不耐烦的我。

“嗒嗒”我又玩起了男生的最爱《穿越火线》。妈妈喊到：“给我洗个梨!”我正玩得高兴的时候，就很不情愿地说：“再玩一会再去。”过了一会妈妈又催了，我还是说再玩一会。等到我玩够了，已经过了一个多小时了，之后才给妈妈洗了个梨，妈妈长叹一口气说：“吃你洗的梨，可真是不太容易啊!”这就是爱玩电脑的我。

“起床了!”姐姐叫醒了我，我揉了揉朦胧的眼睛，低沉地说：“几点了?”“11点了”“才11点再睡会!”“今天大扫除，!赶紧起来!”一听到大扫除三个字，我立即就装睡，要知道，平常我洗个小衣服、小袜子，还行，可是……大扫除还是算了吧!姐姐对我嚎了几句：“懒虫!”这就是不爱干家务，爱睡觉的我。

“秒传，秒传”那个正激烈喊着的人正是我。我非常爱打篮球和乒乓球，虽然打得不是太好，但是一有空我就玩，直到玩到不想玩为止!还有乒乓球，我们都是活动课练和玩，虽然我打得不是冠军，但是，“不与冠军较量就永远不会是冠军”这就是爱运动的我!

“哎呀!我的饭卡忘在寝室了!”可怜的张山正痛苦得呐喊道。“我借你”我毫不犹豫的说!张山郑连忙对我说了声谢谢，我搂住他。“都是兄弟，不用客气!”还有一次我和以前六(3)班的赵俊凯还有崔合群，我们都是铁哥们，有一次正在玩耍时，赵俊凯受伤了，我们俩二话不说，挽着他就往医务室跑，要结账了他没带卡。我也没带，我就让他登记我的名字，下回来还钱!

这就是我，毛病多的我，优点少的我。你们难道不愿意跟我交朋友吗?

Di Yage is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. She’s a model student. She’s clever and she’s helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

我的好朋友

蒂亚戈是我的好朋友。她在Class1 ， Grade4的天骄小学。她是一个模范学生。她的聪明，她的帮助，太。她常常帮助教师和青年学生在学校。她是在中国好，数学，英语，艺术和手工艺，音乐等等。她有很多爱好。她喜欢绘画和绘图。和她喜欢听音乐，野餐后与她的父母。噢是的，她喜欢钓鱼，太。但她并不喜欢打篮球，足球，乒乓球和排球。张颖是最好的朋友。我喜欢与她一起玩。我们总是一起工作，互相帮助。

Good morning. I am glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is Youtheme， 24. I come from GuangZhou，the capital of GuangDong Province. I graduated from the ****** department of *****University in July ，2001.In the past two years I have been prepareing for the postgraduate examination while I have been teaching *****in NO.****middle School and I was a head-teacher of a class in junior grade two.Now all my hard work has got a result since I have a chance to be interview by you.

I am open-minded ，quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time，I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books， especially those about ****.Frequently I exchange with other people by making comments in the forum on line.In addition ，during my college years，I was once a Net-bar technician.So， I have a comparative good command of network application.I am able to operate the computer well.I am skillful in searching for information in Internet.I am a football fan for years.Italian team is my favorite.Anyway，I feel great pity for our country’s team.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning .Of course， if I am given a chance to study ****** in this famous University，I will stare no effort to master a good command of advance ******

Hello, everyone!Let me introduce myself, I was a student in the *** school, seven Eight, my good grades, teachers, students and I are good, I like them, my after school with mystudents to play together, we are very happy together, we learn subjects: geography, politics, history, language, mathematics, English, computer and science as well as some other subjects, class schedule and at eight at night school at five 40a week eight lessons, we learned a very hard, has an extra-curricular activities after school, some students to participate, some students go home every day we had a wonderful time.

[初一英语自我介绍优秀作文

I like many animals ,such as cats,monkeys,fishes and tigers. but my favorite animals are dogs.I keep a dog in my house .My family members call it "Wang Wang" .It is black and white .All of us like him.It is very cute ,friendly and clever .I often takes him out for a walk in the evening.It brings us joys and smiles.So I like it best.

I have a happy family, I grow up happily at home. Let me introduce my family members!

The first one to come on is my mother. My mother was a little fat, with a red face, a pair of curved eyebrows, a pair of bright eyes, a black hair, very beautiful. She likes comedies and surfing the Internet most.

My father is tall, with a high nose and a beard. Dad works a bit busy, but he still takes time to play with me.

Next, its me! Im not too tall and I have a ponytail. I like reading and playing.

This is my family, living a happy life every day!

Hi，boys and girls, good morning, it is my pleasure to take this change to introduce myself,

my name is Leo, I am 10 years old. About my family, there are 4 people in my family, father, mother, brother and me,

my father and mother are all very kind, welcome you to visit my family if you have time!

嗨，男孩女孩们，大家上午好，很荣幸能有这个机会来介绍我自己，我叫力欧，今年10岁。关于我的家庭，我家有四口人，爸爸妈妈，哥哥，还有我，我的爸爸妈妈都是很友善的人，如果你有时间欢迎来我家玩。

I ’m a very outgoing boy(girl), I like reading、playing games and listening to music, of course, I also like to make friends with all the people in the school, I hope I will be your best friends in the school life.

我是一个很外向的男孩（女孩），我喜欢阅读，玩游戏，听音乐，当然，我也喜欢与学校里所有的人交朋友，希望在以后的学校生活中，我能成为你们最好的朋友。

Panda—the National Treasure

Panda is one of the scarcest animals.People in the world like it very much.There used to be many pandas in China long ago.As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer,pandas became less.But at present,the number of pandas is increasing year by year.There are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

Nowadays,the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan.There is a research centre for nature and wild life there.Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

As the new bell tolled, the Chinese people exclaimed with excitement, "the New Year is here! New Year! Ah! What a wonderful New Year! I am excited to run back and forth in my home, unable to restrain my joyful mood, the Spring Festival composition 600 words. When I ran to the balcony, all of a sudden, the fireworks fly on the sky, in a flash, Fried opened, and some like countless meteor, some like colorful flowers, some like golden coat, and like the golden sun, the earth was like the day. How beautiful!

My Sister goes to Taipei First Municipal Girls High School and is in her second year there. This is the best girl high school in the city, and My sister is a very good student. My sister likes Sports. And now she is a member of the school track team. The regular schoolwork and the sports keep my sister very busy and yet very happy. She hopes to be able to go to college when she graduates. She enjoys English which they have nine sessions of one hours class every week she hopes to major in English in the future. Usually she goes to school at six in the morning and in the afternoon she comes home at six, too. After dinner she usually studies until ten oclock or so and then goes to bed. On Saturday afternoons she spends her time at the school track. I think I have a very good sister; she also likes to smile often.

Now I am the most happy day is yesterday. Just dont have to write my homework, but go out to play for a day. That day Ive been sleeping at 10:30, we play it to have a meal, dinner aunt words so much. But she will be leaving today, so we went first to be bought some food for her to eat on the train, then go to the market to buy some fruit to bring her back. Of course, is to take us to my dad to drive a car. Because yesterday the weather was very hot, inside the car and opened the air conditioning, so the temperature of the inside and outside temperature difference is very big, the car I sweat.

This afternoon we send after go to the railway station, the father of the telephone rang, like father classmates call my dad to huaqiang north inspection. Then we drove to che, then take the subway to huaqiang north. After the huaqiang north, mother will go shopping, I will go with dad Ming tong digital city inspection. Shops, and there are number, then press the number found we will go to the shops. I see outside a few cases at the beginning, I thought thats what we are going to check the goods. As a result, the dad after talking with them, they moved out of the 20 cases of rectangular box, I just know thats where we want to check the goods. The man opened, wow, turned out to be a mobile phone, each box has twenty cell phone. Father first open a phone box, look at the instruction, if there is a stamp. Then my father asked me to help him to read the box. When my dad "spot check" dozens of mobile phone, we begin to open the box of each hand, look at the packing are in good condition, have less mobile phone, batteries, chargers. Weve been watching all four radix stemonae mobile phone. Four radix stemonae mobile phone, a few mobile phone package damaged, then we find the boss to change. After check the mobile phone, the boss will pull the 20 cases of mobile phones on the trailer to the Courier company. Actually express company also is very close to there after, people express company with woven bag wrap 20 cases of mobile phone is divided into five. Above good stick bar code, write good to send, then we are there waiting for my dads classmate turn money to the bosss account, the task is finished.

I was going to check the goods, such as call dad took me to play video games, but in more minutes at seven o clock. Dads mobile phone has no electricity, we went to my mother. After dad generous please my mother and I eat meatballs, drink juice. The fruits of labor "delicious!"

目前我最快乐的一天就是昨天了。不仅仅是不用写作业，而是出去玩了一天。那天我一直睡到了10：30，玩了一下我们就吃饭，吃饭时阿姨还是那么多话。可是她今天就要走了，于是我们就先去了人人乐买了一些吃的给她在火车上吃，然后又去菜市场买了一些水果给她带回去。当然，都是我爸爸开车带我们去的。由于昨天天气很热，车里面又开了空调，所以车内的温度和外面的温度差别都很大，一下车我就直冒汗。

下午我们送阿姨去火车站后，爸爸的电话就响了，好像是爸爸的同学叫我爸爸去华强北验货。然后，我们开车去车公庙，再坐地铁去华强北。到了华强北后，妈妈就去逛街，我就跟爸爸去明通数码城验货。那里店铺和普通的店铺一样，都有编号，然后就按编号找到了我们要去的店铺。一开始我看到外面有几箱货，我以为就是我们要验的那些货。结果，爸爸和他们交谈后，他们搬出了二十箱长方形的箱子，我才知道这才是我们要验的货。那人一打开，哇，原来是手机，每箱有二十部手机。爸爸先打开一部手机的盒子，看了一下说明书，有没有盖章。然后爸爸就叫我帮他把看过的盒子装起来。爸爸“抽查”了十几部手机后，我们就开始把每一部手的盒子打开，看一下包装是否完好，有没有少手机，电池，充电器。我们一直把四百部手机都看完。四百部手机中，有几部手机的包装损坏了，然后我们就找老板换。验完手机后，老板就把这二十箱手机放在拖车上拉到快递公司。其实快递公司也非常近，到那里以后，快递公司的人拿编织袋把二十箱手机分成五包装。在上面贴好条码，写好要发到的地方，然后我们就在那里等爸爸的同学把钱转到老板的账上，任务就算完成了。

本来我打算等验完货，叫爸爸带我去打游戏机的，但是到了七点多钟了。爸爸的手机也没电了，我们就去找妈妈了。之后，爸爸大方的请我和妈妈吃肉丸，喝果汁。劳动的“果实”真好吃啊!

The Great Wall was renovated from time to time after the Qin Dynasty. A major renovation started with the founding of the Ming Dynasty in 1368, and took 200 years to complete. The wall we see today is almost exactly the result of this effort. With a total length of over 6,000 kilometers, it extends to the jiayu Pass in Gansu Province in the west and to the mouth of the Yalu River in Liaoning Province in the east. What lies north of Beijing is but a small section of it.

导语：元旦是美好的总结,就像句号;元旦是未来的开启,就像冒号;元旦是惊喜的祝福,就像感叹号下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理了优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

At the first day of New Year,I was so excited that I got up very early in the morning.But Mother was earlier than me,and she had gotten the breakfast ready.Dumplings,thats my favourite.After the wonderful breakfast,I left home with my parents to visit our relatives.On the way,I said "Happy New Year" to everyone that I met and they all said that back to me.Everyone is happy and friendly.In my relatives house,they prepared many sweets and snacks for visitors.They are all very delicious.The more exciting thing was that I got some money from my relatives.I had a fine day in my relatives family.

My first day of New Year was very happy.It was a good start,and I would try my best to make this happiness last for the whole year.

【参考译文】

在新年的第一天，我非常兴奋，我早上起得很早。但妈妈比我早，她把早餐准备好了。饺子，这是我最喜欢的。早餐后，我离开家和我的父母去看望我们的亲戚。在路上，我说：“新年快乐”，我见过的每一个人，他们都说，回到我。每个人都是快乐和友好的。在我的亲戚家里，他们准备了许多糖果和零食。它们都很好吃。更令人兴奋的是，我从我的亲戚得到了一些钱。我在亲戚家里过得很好。

我的新年第一天很高兴。这是一个很好的开始，我将尽我最大的努力，使这幸福的最后一年。

I am a boy.My name is Sheng Qiyun.I am a pupil in Pingjiang school in Suzhong.I like play table tennis very much,and I like swimming,too.I go to school five days every week. My school is not far from my home,and it is a nice school.There are 3000 teachers and 7000 students in my school.There are 300 classes in my school.My English teacher is tall, my PE teacher is tall,too.I love them a lot.Welcome to my school.

Autumn, is a fresh autumn, fruit season, everywhere beautiful.

Look, the field is golden. Wow a lot of gold necklace Yo, but I thought again, how could there be so many gold necklaces on the field, I came forward to see, just beans fills, empty hi a; rice has caught the harvest season, from a distance Like a sunset of the sea, from the near look, like a beach; Hey, lying so many fat dolls, a closer look, the original is some big melon.

Look, there is a crystal clear river around the rice fields. Although the river is not as spectacular as the Yellow River, but this river for the field to add a new scene. Here the river is clear, ah, clear can see the free fish in the river; here the river "singing" gurgling in the fields farming farmers uncle can often hear the river crisp, sweet "song"; here the river More blue ah, blue like the ocean, blue pure, blue deep Zhan. How beautiful the river!

This kind of field in the crystal clear river, with colored butterflies and all day buzzing little bees, all kinds of beautiful flowers fragrant, so you feel like walking into a continuous pastoral painting The

Ah, I love the fields of autumn!

[介绍秋天的田野英语作文

Hello, my professors.It’s a fine day today,and i’m very pleased to meet you here.First of all,i’d like to introduce myself to you.My name is ***,my hometown is ***,which is a really beautiful city.Even when i was a young boy,i was very interested in biology science.Every one may have a dream,and i still remember that my dream is to be a biology scientist (just like ZHU KE ZHEN).I liked to make wonders just like,where are we from?Where are we going in the universe?And then i would find the answers in book by myself.Still today i think that interest is the best teacher in one’s whole life (and knowledge comes from practice).

Second, i will introduce my major in the university.My major is Biological Engineering in *** University.It has a great relationship with biology scince.Their relationship can be shown with an example: Just like a river,biology science,which often finds new discoveries and theories, is at the head of the river.And my major,which lays more stress on practical use, seems to be at the end of it.When both of them interact well enough,the discovries and theories in biology science can be soon turned into products in all of the modern industry.

Four years’ university education gives me a lot of things to learn,a lot of chances to try,and a lot of practices to improve myself.It teaches me not only what to study and how to think,but also to see the importance of practical ability (such as doing expriment as much as possible). In the university life,i have made many good friends.They help me improve my study and research ability, do ererything just like a man,and often give me good example to follow.

Besides what i have introduced myself above,i also have many interests in my spare time.I like playing football,which is an effective way i think to improve my body health,and it can teach me how to join in a group and deal with other people.Drawing and writing is another favor to me.

Above all,i choose the major in order to broad my view in biology scince,and enhance my research ability.I will do my best to join the new group and be good at postgraduate study.

你好,我的教授。今天天气很好,我很高兴在这里见到你。首先,我想介绍一下自己。我的名字是* * *,我的家乡是* * *,这是一个非常美丽的城市。甚至当我还是个小男孩时,我非常感兴趣的生物学的科学。每一个人可能有一个梦想,我仍然记得,我的梦想是成为一个生物学科学家(就像朱可甄)。我喜欢让奇迹一样,我们从哪里来?在宇宙中我们要去的吗?然后我将自己的书中找到答案。时至今日我认为兴趣是最好的老师在一个人的整个人生和知识来自实践。

第二,我将介绍我的专业在这所大学。我的专业是生物工程在* * *大学。它与生物学scince有很大的关系。他们的关系可以用一个例子所示:就像一条河,生物科学,经常发现新的发现和理论,在河的头。和我的专业,这将更注重实际应用,最后似乎是。当他们两人充分交互,discovries和理论生物学科学可以很快变成了产品在所有的现代工业。

四年的大学教育给了我很多的东西要学,很多的机会去尝试,和大量的实践来提高自己。不仅教我如何学习,如何思考,但也看到实践能力的重要性(例如做实验尽可能的)。在大学生活中,我认识了很多好朋友。他们帮助我提高我的学习和研究能力,做ererything就像一个人,经常给我学习的好榜样。

除了上面我介绍我自己,在我的业余时间我还有许多利益。我喜欢踢足球,我认为这是一个有效的方法来提高我的身体健康,它可以教我如何加入一组和处理他人。绘画和写作对我来说是一个忙。

最重要的是,我选择的主要以广阔的我的观点在生物scince,和提高我的研究能力。我将尽我所能加入新的团体和善于研究生学习。

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It s really a nice place to visit.

黄山是中国最著名的山脉之一。它位于安徽的南部。每年都有成千上万的中国人和外国人去那里参观。离这儿不远。乘公共汽车到那儿大约需要三个小时的时间。你也可以乘火车或乘飞机去那里。当你在爬山的时候，你可以欣赏到你周围的云朵，奇异的松树和独特的岩石。清晨，太阳升起时，天空看起来很漂亮。这真是一个很好的地方。

[介绍黄山的英语作文带翻译