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1000关于课堂趣事的小学六年级作文
全文共 450 字
+ 加入清单上课了,老师一本正经地走进教室,清了清嗓子,说:同学们,今天我们上一节语文活动课。同学们听到这句话,顿时活跃起来,首先看动作猜一个成语。话音刚落,老师剥开了一个拳头大小的桔子吃了起来,我们就这样眼睁睁地看着老师把桔子独吞了,吃完桔子后,老师叫我们猜这是什么成语。有一位同学说:一毛不拔,老师说有些接近,再猜一猜,又有一位同学说:自食其果,老师说::对啦,我们再猜一个字谜,这个字谜你们肯定要三天才能猜到,‘九横六竖’猜一猜吧!全班同学都没抓耳挠腮、紧皱眉头,有的说曹,有的说田,我在纸上写了好多字,突然想到了晶字,我大声喊了出来。老师说:对了!‘晶’字有3个日所以老师说3天才能猜出来,‘晶’有九横六竖。全班同学豁然开朗、恍然大悟。老师又说:接下来,我们再来猜一个脑筋急转弯吧!新买来的袜子,为什么上面有两个洞?这个问题太无聊、太简单了吧!同学们都举起手来,老师叫了一位同学起来回答,那个同学说:如果没有两个洞你怎么穿呀!全班顿时哄堂大笑。
嘿,这节课真是上得津津有味吧!
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+ 加入清单My friend and I
My name is Li BaoLing . I have a good friend . Her name is Chen ZiQing . I am 13 years old . She is as old as me. I am 155cm tall. She is 150cm tall . She is 5cm shorter than me . I am 36kg . She is 37kg . She is heavier than me .She often does homework with me .We always help each other. I am happy to have a good firend .
篇2:,小学生写我的妈妈英语作文
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+ 加入清单I have a gentle and kind mother, I love my mother.
Once, my mother brought me to the big supermarket to buy things, where I want a lot of things, have to wear, play, etc., my mother every kind of buy me more, when I walk in front of a lot of small food pointed to To buy, the mother was one by one refused, my mother patiently told me about the harm of eating small food, then I understand that my mother is so much care for me.
And once again, I was sick, in the hospital, my mother asked the doctor anxiously my condition, carrying my upstairs downstairs ran to do a variety of tests, looking at her mothers full of sweating look, I Very distressed her, I secretly determined, must take good care of the body, no longer let my mother worry about me.
This is my mother, my mother is my care is endless, my mother love for me can not use words to express, my mothers greatest wish is to let me learn, grow up, I want to tell my mother, I Will not live up to your expectations of me, I love my mom!
篇3:有关圣诞节英语作文小学
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+ 加入清单Christmas Day is very popular around the world, which originates in western
country, but now it is celebrated by the world. When this big day comes, there
will be a lot of products that sold in very low prices, and the Santa Clauss
image will be seen all the street. Shops will play Christmas songs. I always
spend this festival with my friends, because my parents dont take this day
seriously. We hang out the street and join the big crowd in the square, singing
with people and then wait for the time to count down. It is such a great moment
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篇4:小学六年级英语作文:春天来了
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+ 加入清单Spring comes,some people can do what they want to do.Look at the lake,the ducks swim in there.ther are laughing.I know they are very happy.Look at the trees,begin to turn green.Lot of pepole is working hard.And everywhere are so warm.Look at the sky,swallow is flying.They are Freedom.A year moment lies in spring,and Spring is very beautiful.So, I love Spring very much.How about you?
春天来了,有些人可以做他们想做的事情。看湖上,鸭子正在那游。他们在笑,我知道他们非常快乐。看树,开始变绿。很多人正在工作努力。到处都是温暖的。看看天空,燕子在飞。他们是自由的。。一年之际在于春,春天是很美丽的。所以,我很喜欢春天。你呢?
篇5:小学英语反义词大全
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+ 加入清单certainly 当然地 -- perhaps, maybe 或许;大概
cheap 便宜的 -- expensive, dear 昂贵的
clean 干净的 -- dirty 肮脏的
clever 聪明的 -- foolish 愚蠢的
cloudy 天阴的 -- bright, clear, sunny 晴朗的
cold 寒冷的 -- hot 炎热的
come 来 -- go 去
cool 凉爽的 -- warm 温暖的
danger 危险 -- safety 安全
dark 黑暗的 -- bright, light 明亮的
day 白天 -- night 夜晚
dead 死的 -- alive, living 活的
death 死亡 -- life 生命
die 死去 -- live 活着
down 向下 -- up 向上
dry 干燥的 -- wet 潮湿的
early 早的 -- late 迟的
easy 容易的 -- difficult, hard 困难的;艰巨的
empty 倒空 -- fill 装满
empth 空的 -- full 满的
entrance 入口 -- exit 出口
fall 落下 -- rise 升起
far 远的 -- near 近的
fast 快-- slow 慢
above 在……上-- below 在……下
after 在……后 -- before 在……前
all 全部 -- none 全无
alone 单独地 -- together 一起
always 总是 -- sometimes 有时
answer 回答 -- ask 询问
answer 答案 -- question 问题
back 背部 -- front 前面
bad 坏的 -- good 好的
badly 恶劣地 -- well 很好地
beautiful美丽的-- ugly丑陋的
before之前 -- after之后
begin 开始 -- end, finish 结束
best 最好的 -- worst 最坏的
better 更好的 -- worse 更坏的
big 大的 -- small, little 小的
black 黑的 -- white 白的
borrow 借入 -- lend 借给
both 两者都 -- neither 两者都不
break 打破 -- mend, repair 修理
busy 忙碌的 -- free 空闲的
buy 买(入)-- sell 卖(出)
fine 晴朗的 -- cloudy, rainy 天阴的下雨的
finish 结束 -- begin, start 开始
first 最初的 -- last 最后的
foreign 外国的 -- home 本国的
forget 忘记 -- remember 记得
freeze冰冻 -- melt融化
from 从…… -- to 到……
give 给予 -- take 拿走
glad 愉快的 -- sad, sorry悲伤的难过的
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great 伟大的 little, small 渺小的
happy 高兴的 -- unhappy, sad 难过的
hard 艰难的 -- easy 容易的
hard 硬的 -- soft 软的
hate 憎恨 -- love, like 热爱喜欢
here 在这里 -- there 在那里
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+ 加入清单今天听了仇海云老师的讲座,给我留下了深刻印象使我对高效课堂有了一个初步的认识,我觉得它主要是指教学过程的最优化,教育效果的最大化。是师生的共同进步,是知识和素养的共同提高。下面是我的一点体会。
我理解的高效课堂是在课堂教学中,通过学生积极主动的学习过程配合老师的点拨指导,在单位时间内高效率、高质量地完成教学任务、促进学生获得高效益发展。教学高效益就其内涵而言,是指学生在知识与技能,过程与方法,情感、态度、价值观“三维目标”的协调发展。就其外延而言涵盖高效的课前精心预习、课堂教学中实践展示和课后反馈来提高课堂教学效率。一般来说,高效课堂效益评价主要标准是,学生思维活跃,语言表达正确、流利、有感情,课堂充满激情,分析问题与解决问题的能力强,目标达成且正确率在90%以上。前提是看学生是否愿意学、会不会学,乐不乐学,核心是教学三维目标的达成。
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篇7:我的暑假小学三年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单Everyone always has a good Sunday. On Sundays, everybody does some things what he like.
Last Sunday, Jack had a relaxing Sunday. He got up 6 o’clock. After breakfast, Jack played basketball with his friends. They were very happy. Then he played the guitar in the room. And he sang songs very loudly. Though it’s very relaxing for him, it also make very noisy for neighbors. Maybe he should turn down the music. At noon, jack fed his pet cat henry. He is Jack’s favorite. Jack always play with him on the weekends. At night, he watched TV on the sofa. At the some time, he ate many delicious snacks. So he really had a great time.
At the of day, jack thought if I always have a relaxing Sunday like today. I will become the happiest boy all over the world.
篇8:元旦快乐小学生英语作文_小学生作文800字
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+ 加入清单Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It’s to celebrate the lunar calendar ‘s new year.In the evening before the Spring Festival ,families get together and have a big meal.In many places people like to set off firecrackers. Dumplings are the most traditional food. Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes.They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck. People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune.
The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long. People visit relatives and friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”. People enjoy the Spring Festival ,during this time they can have a good rest.
篇9:小学生写可爱的小狗英语作文
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+ 加入清单This afternoon, I finished the homework, took the skates to play, I was playing, saw a lovely puppy.
Puppys ear pointed, you can hear the voice of the speech, can be flexible. Water Lingling eyes inside a small round beads, a blink of an eye, like a star blinking like, the nose is very flexible, smell the delicious, and quickly ran over, it ran faster. Mouth sweet, like cherry mouth like. Head round yo. Body black and white, like a cute little panda. Calf and thick and strong, the tail of a Alice Alice a Alice, very cute.
I play every day with the lovely puppy, I am very happy, I put it every day as their own family. I hope it will always be happy. I gave the dog took a name, called "Wang Tsai".
篇10:小学四年级英语带翻译作文
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+ 加入清单My mother always complains about my bad behavior, like I don’t eat up the food and sometimes I don’t have responsibility on what I do. I decide to behave myself, I want to help my mother to relieve her pressure. So I want to be a good child, I will eat up the food, no more pick up them and I also will keep on finishing the job I do.
我的妈妈总是抱怨我的坏习惯,比如我不吃完食物和有时候我对自己做的事情没有责任感。我决定自我自律,我想要帮助妈妈减轻她的压力。所以我想要成为一个好孩子,我会把饭吃饭,不再挑食,我也会坚持做完自己的工作。
篇11:有关圣诞节英语作文小学
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+ 加入清单Christmas is annual festival in western world that is one of the most
important festivals for them. Previously, only westerners or Christians
celebrate it. But in recent years, more and more Chinese people celebrate it,
especially among young people. There are many activities in that day. I think
there are the following reasons that make Christmas popular in China. First,
it’s a western holiday and it’s new to Chinese. Second, with the development of
the world, the mutual influence between China and the west makes it work. Last,
the merchants make great contribution to its popularity.
篇12:小学四年级英语作文:Mydreamjob
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+ 加入清单导语:你长大后想干什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的My dream job英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My dream job(约80字)
When I grow up, Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to move somewhere interesting. Paris sounds like a city that I could that enjoy. There are lots of art exhibitions there. I want to be an artist . So how am I going to do it? First, Imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. Then Im going to be a student at an art school in Paris.
翻译
我梦想中的工作
当我长大后,我要做我想做的事。我要搬到一个有趣的地方。巴黎听起来像是一个我可以享受的城市。那里有许多艺术展览。我想成为一名艺术家。那么我该怎么做呢?首先,我打算找一份兼职工作一两年,存一些钱。然后我将成为巴黎一所艺术学校的学生。
篇13:BusyWeekend小学六年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单Hi ,this is Wang Fang Ping, I’m going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I’m going to go shopping with my friend by bus. I’m going to buy a pair of new shoes, some books and magazine. Then I’m going to visit my grandparents by bike.
On Sunday, I’m going to my friend home. We will do homework.. Then, in the evening, I’m going to supermarket with my brother. He likes toy very much.. In the market, I’m going to buy five notebooks, one pen, three pencils, one pencil-case, a color pen and many snacks. At home, we are going to watch TV together. That will be fun. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
篇14:寒假生活小学英语作文
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+ 加入清单My winter holiday is intersting, my winterholiday is very interesting.I can play a computer and watch aTV in the home.I still read some good books in the winter holiday.Because of the plan of value result of our school, let us time of few lesson remaining.Also opportunity to have no does the affair that likes to do.So, the winterholiday liked too to me.
But again schooled begins quickly, its be over means a kind of another life of beginning, my in the mind have a little longing , also have a little fear.Imagining to what freshman live is more.long for enjoyment,long for liberty.
篇15:关于雾霾的研究小论文小学作文
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+ 加入清单看看近几天的报纸,我发现,空气污染越来越严重了,杭州的空气质量指数不断的下降,这到底是为什么呢?原来,这都是雾霾搞的鬼。
到底什么是雾霾呢?它有多大的危害?雾霾天气是怎么形成的呢?我们又能为敢走雾霾天气做出一些力所能及的事情呢?通过资料的收集和自己的了解,我找到了答案。
原来,雾霾是雾和霾的组合词。因为空气质量的恶化,雾霾天气现象出现增多,危害加重。中国不少地区把雾霾天气现象并入雾一起作为灾害性天气预警预报。统称为“雾霾天气”。雾霾的危害可大了!由于雾霾、轻雾、沙尘暴、扬沙、浮尘、烟雾等天气现象,都是因浮游在空中大量极微细的尘粒或烟粒等影响致使能见度很差,开车时,由于能见度差,就可能会引起车祸。霾在吸入人的呼吸道后对人体有害,长期吸入严重者会导致死亡。所以呢,在雾霾天气到来时,我们应该少在户外活动,一定要出去的话,一定要戴上口罩。少开窗,多补充维生素。这些都是预防雾霾的好方法哦!
这样害人的雾霾是怎样形成的呢?一大部分还是我们人类自己造成的。形成的原因有五个:
一、大气空气气压低,空气不流动时主要因素。由于空气的不流动,使空气中的微小颗粒聚集,漂浮在空气中。
二、地面灰尘大,空气湿度低,地面的人和车流使灰尘搅动起来。
三、汽车尾气是主要的污染物排放,近年来城市的汽车越来越多,排放的汽车尾气是雾霾的一个因素。
四、工厂制造出的二次污染。
五、冬季取暖排放的CO2等污染物。
其中,第二三四五条都是我们人类造成的,那我们是不是要减少这些行为,为治理空气污染做出贡献呢?
现在,城市里的汽车太多了,尾气排放造成了空气污染。我们要倡导绿色出行,出门尽量用公共交通工具,最好能骑自行车,这样就能有效的减少空气污染的程度。
祖国是我们的家,我们应该保护她。让我们绿色出行,减少尾气排放。让我们的家园更美丽!
篇16:体育英语作文小学80词
全文共 1326 字
+ 加入清单Sports benefit me in many ways. Firstly, sports call can make me fit and
strong physically. When taking part in sports, I get the chance to train almost
all parts of our bodies. In addition, sports call can maintain my psychological
well being, Whenever Im in low spirit,aking part in sports can help me forget my
anxieties and worries. Besides, sports can teach me some lessons about life.
Through participation, I can learn that on the playground I not only struggle
for my own self but also fight for my team. Sports teach me to be considerate,
cooperative and optimistic.
I am fond of sports very much. I feel that I not only gain a well balanced
life through going in for sports, but also get more chances to make more
friends, to move closer to nature. Sports add happiness to my everyday life when
I participate in them in a proper way.
My favourite sport is football, as it is very exciting. I play footetball
three times a week. Most often I play it in my school. I feel very happy when I
play football in school with my friends. Sometimes I play football in the
playground near my school.Football is very easy to play. If you play football
very well, you can form a football team to take part in the competition. You may
become a famous football star.
Therefore, football is a very good sport. I think, you can play football,
cant you?
篇17:小学生英语作文
全文共 318 字
+ 加入清单My favorite animal is pandas. He name is Beibei, he is blak and white. I like Beibei very much, becavse he is so cute, and he is kind of shy. Beibei form the China. He is five years old. Is so many people take photos with beibei. I want to see the beibei, i want to take photos with beibei. He live in the Beijing zoo.
篇18:小学生植树节英语
全文共 872 字
+ 加入清单It was fine on March 12, I got up early that day . All the students in our school went to the hill to plant trees .
We arrived at the hill at eight oclock . The teacher asked each of us to plant at least six trees . Then we started digging , planting and watering . We all worked so hard that we could finish our tasks ahead of tim e.
Among us , our monitor set a good example for us . Though he was ill , he worked harder . When he finished his task , he went on to help others without even a little rest. He was wet all over after work .“ I must learn from him ,” I said to myself . Looking at the lines of the young trees , we smiled happily, forgetting our tiredness.
3月12日天气晴朗,那天我起得很早。我们学校所有的学生都到山上种树。
我们八点到达了山上。老师让我们每人至少种植六棵树。然后我们开始挖,种植和浇水。我们都努力工作,以便在天黑之前完成任务。
在我们中间,班长为我们树立了一个好榜样。虽然他病了,但他更努力工作。当他完成任务时,他继续帮助别人,连一点休息都没有。他下班后全身湿透了,“我必须向他学习,”我对自己说。看着小树的线条,我们高兴地笑了,忘记了我们的疲劳。
篇19:有关友情英语作文小学
全文共 945 字
+ 加入清单There are various emotions in the world. People need valuable emotions
which can support them both in mind and in life. Friendship is one of the most
vital emotions.
It is not easy to deal with friendship. As for friendship, sometimes you
and your friend may meet difficulties. Trust is the most remarkable trait of
forever friendship. Trust plays a very important role in daily communication. As
the saying goes, “Between friends all is common.” Furthermore, tolerance is also
a considerable factor in remaining good friendship. If your friend makes a
mistake accidentally, you should have largeness of mind. Friendship is too
precious. When we face some misunderstandings, we need to make joint efforts to
protect our friendship. We should not give up friendship at random. We should
treat our friends as treasures.
Friendship is so pure, clear and beautiful. We cannot be lack of friendship
in our life. Try our best to insist our trust in making friends.
篇20:浅谈小学作文教学创新的策略探究
全文共 3494 字
+ 加入清单小学作文教学要从封闭走向开放和创新,培养学生的创新精神与实践能力,促进个性的健康发展,我认为应该采取以下教学策略。
一、人本策略:小学作文教学实现创新的前提
封闭型的传统作文教学受应试教育的束缚,已经异化为学生攫取语文高分的手段,成了传授写作知识和纯技巧的训练,背离了作文教学的根本要求。学生习惯于奉命和应付,作文成为教师意图的代言人,假、大、空;缺乏灵性、生气、情感,灵魂被扭曲,创造性被扼杀,造成个性的缺失。其实,作文是运用语言文字表达自己主观见解和感受的直接方式,学生通过作文进行自我观察、自我体验、自我反馈、自我调节,了解自己的个性情感和心理需要,给自己的成长塑造出一个丰富的精神世界。作文教学固然要培养技巧和提高学生语言表达能力,但最本质的是促进学生个性的健康发展。因此,作文教学必须以人为本。
素质教育以改善和提高学生的主体性为最高目的,以人为本必须突出学生的主体性。首先要让学生意识到作文是表现“真我”的需要,而不仅仅是一种训练的手段,激发学生的写作欲望。想写这是张扬学生主体性的前提;其次要让学生独立写作,保护学生的主见意识,培养写作独立性。敢写这是张扬学生主体性的基础;第三要让学生有所发现、有所感受悟、有所创新,培养创造性。能写这是主体性的最高体现。
以人为本还必须遵循学生身心发展规律。作文教学好象只要解决“写什么”和“怎么写”的问题,学生的水平似乎就能突飞猛进,一日千里,其实学生的身心发展规律才是制约学生作文水平提高的深层因素。为适应考试的需要,人为地拔高要求,揠苗助长式地开发,将极大地损害学生的身心发展健康。特级教师斯霞曾经指导低段学生写话时,不去删改“法国阿姨是个女的”一句,认为这个话出自学生天真幼稚的脑海,是他们认识水平的真实反映,而且闪动着孩子追求“进一步认识”的思维火花。这对今天的作文教学应该有所启发。尊重学生身心的发展规律应以学生的可持续发展为本。
二、开放策略:小学作文教学实现创新的核心
革新陈旧的作文教学模式构建开放的作文教学模式是作文教学实现创新的核心。
1.开放作文内容和立意
有的学生写命题作文绞尽脑汁,一筹莫展,私下写的日记却灵气飞扬。本来学生的生活是很丰富的,学生对于生活的观察也有自己的视角,不愁没东西写。但现实给了他们太多的限制,如泛化的政治论调,使得丰富的现实生活进不了作文。写母亲,没有不勤劳的,做好事不是让座就是拾金不昧,以司空见惯的所谓“好人好事”来服务于预设的光明主题,自欺欺人地演绎着这可怕的流行病,于是在高考的作文中不约而同地出现了许多考生因为“死”了母亲而悲痛欲绝。虚拟的伟大掩饰不了情感的苍白,苍白成了现代学生作文的流行色,更可怕的是导致思维的萎缩,语言的发展也成了无根之木,无源之水。拆除束缚学生作文的“紧箍”,首先要开放作文内容和立意,让学生敢于反映真实的生活,表达真实的情感。
2.开放作文过程
“教师命题—教师指导—学生作文—教师批改—教师讲评”这种传统的作文教学模式以教师为主体,学生主体性的发挥则是很有限的。先导后作,引导学生明确目标,该写什么,不该写什么,是有一定的教学效果,但一开始就给学生定下许许多多的条条框框,学生只能按教师的意图行事,作文循规蹈矩,不敢越雷池一步,哪里谈得上创新?而开放的作文教学模式以学生为主体,以学生自己的写作活动作为教学的主线。其基本模式是“搜集材料—尝试作文—分类指导—协作修改—完善提高”。在这里,摒弃了教师先行指导的条条框框,实施先作后导,放手让学生尝试作文,学生能想自己所想,说自己所说,写自己所写。然后,教师按照作文要求和学生的实际情况,进行分类指导训练,对遇到不同困难的学生,给以明确、具体、有效的指导和帮助,或者组织引导学生互相帮助,这样的指导更有针对性,有利于解决学生的实际问题,学生的写作主体得以确立。
3.开放作文时空
作家陈燕丹曾这样评论上海《萌芽》杂志发起举办的“新概念作文大赛”:“让我吃惊的是,那些在拾到一分钱的主题上开始写作文的孩子们,一旦给他们一个自由的空间写作,他们还是会迅速地洗尽铅华,表现出一个原生的自己,那些长长的句子,纤细的伤感,那些富有含义的、幽暗的多愁善感的细节,那些欲说还休的情致,甚至是那些与作文训练格格不入的词库,他们在作文的覆盖下还有一个秘密的写作世界。”学生拥有很大的写作潜能,问题是他们受到僵化的思维模式的束缚,不能拥有一颗自由飞翔的心灵,没有一个自由的写作空间。作文不是生活的点缀,而是现代生活的一种需要。学生的作文水平不能依靠那几次集中的作文教学来提高,要突出实用性,提倡随机作文,化整为零,从课内向课外拓展,开放作文写作空间,让学生时时感到作文就在身边,渗透随时运用作文表达的意识,强化作文的实用意识。像结合学习写观察日记、学习日记等,结合阅读写摘记、读书笔记、读后感等,结合影视观看写内容提要、情节记录、感想体会等都是好形式。
4.开放作文评改
开放的作文教学模式,学生应该参与作文教学的全过程。不仅引导学生参与命题,以提高学生写作的兴趣,而且引导学生参与评改。“改”的优先权应属于学生自己。为了让学生能有效参与作文评改,教师先可以让学生学会批改方法,让学生能用常用的比较统一的方法进行评改,并能熟悉批改过程。在批改过程中,尽量让批改者能和写作者面对面协作批改,改的人能知道习作者的意图和想法,习作者能明了批改一方的心思。让评改成为下一次作文新的起点新的开始。
三、信息策略:小学作文教学实现创新的关键
作文涉及到一个人搜集、贮存、加工、处理、检索、利用和传递信息的方方面面,作文教学实现创新的关键问题是培养和提高学生的信息素质。信息素质的提高十分有利于学生自觉寻求各种信息,正确吸收、利用有益于自身成长的信息,从而促进学生自身个性的发展。
其一是拓宽素材积累空间,促使学生建立素材“信息库”,对素材进行分门别类,提高信息的搜集、贮存、加工、处理能力。首先是拓展素材积累的事实空间。给学生提供交流各自生活经历的机会,对学生间接获得生活经验进行指导,实现信息资源共享,奠定素材积累的基础。比如,班里经常性地召开新闻发布会或者素材交流会,同学自行交流自己的近期所得材料和感想,既可以是口头的,也可以是书面的。其次是拓展素材积累的幻想空间。幻想是一种与自我生活愿望相结合,指向美好未来的想象。富于幻想是小学生生活的重要组成部分。我们在作文教学中往往容易忽视滋养学生作文成长的这一方沃土。开发好这一土地,我们的作文教学就大有可为。第三是拓宽学生的阅读空间。学生许多的素材来源于他们的阅读,加强课外的导读活动可以弥补学生生活的单一性和见识的狭窄性之不足。
其二是丰富语言积累,加强获取语言信息能力的培养。主要是语言的积累、转化、创新、运用,实现语言个性化的能力。
四、语感策略:小学作文教学实现创新的基础
作文教学要解决“怎么写”的问题,就不可避免地要谈到语感。语感能力好坏表现在听说读写任何一环之中。语感就是语言操作者对语言文字的感悟,是语言操作者与语言发生联系时,对语言文字的含义、正误、情味等,迅速地、自动化地作出判断的一种能力。语感源于人的感官和心灵对语言的感受,并由这种感受不断积淀而成,一个人的个性品质就蕴含其中。学生要突破“语言面具”,语言表达充分个性化的根在于良好语感的形成和发展。当作文教学的新理念定格在促进学生个性发展之上时,培养语感就很自然地进入作文教学改革的视野。
第一,增强阅读体验,培养语感。语言是相当复杂的信息载体,语言文字作为表情达意的一种符号。什么概念,用什么符号表示,是约定俗成的,而字、词、句的隐含意义在于使用符号的人和环境所给予它的影响。也就是说在具体语境中,语言具有特定的潜在意义。语感的培养就必须培养学生对这种潜在意义的感知和理解,没有对这种潜在意义的感知理解,就不可能有真正意义上的语感的形成。因此,在阅读教学中,特别要挖掘语言文字的深层意义(潜义),只有把具体的语言文字放在特定的语言环境中,联系上下文,才能实现,从而更好地感受这些语言,进而把共同的语言转换成富有自己个性化的语言。
第二,联系生活情境,培养语感。联系生活情境我们更能把握语言的得体与否。作为第二信号系统的语言,如果离开了现实生活这个第一信号系统,良好的语感就得不到培养。叶圣陶先生认为,“要求语感的敏锐,不能单从语言文字上揣摩,而要把生活经验联系到语言文字上去。”语感是不能单靠翻查字典来培养的。
五、评价策略:小学作文教学实现创新的保证
完善评价机制是作文教学实现创新的重要保证。
1.成功激励。
心理学家盖兹说得好:“没有什么比成功更能增