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1000中秋节小学生英语作文
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+ 加入清单Moonquakes are to Mid-Autumn Festival what mince pies are to Christmas. The seasonal round cakes traditionally have a sweet filling of lotus seed paste or red bean paste and often have one or more salted duck eggs in the center to represent the moon. And the moon is what this celebration is all about. Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the 8th month,it is the time when the moon is said to be at its brightest and fullest.
There are two legends which claim to explain the tradition of eating moonquakes. One Tang Dynasty myth holds that the Earth once had 10 suns circling it. One day all 10 suns appeared at once,scorching the planet with their heat.
It was thanks to a skillful archer named Hour Yi that the Earth was saved. He shot down all but one of the suns. As his reward,the Heavenly Queen Mother gave Hour Yi the Elixir of Immortality,but she warned him that he must use it wisely.
Hour Yi ignored her advice and,corrupted by fame and fortune,became a tyrannical leader. Chang-Err,his beautiful wife, could no longer stand by and watch him abuse his power so she stole his Elixir and fled to the moon to escape his angry wrath. And thus began the legend of the beautiful woman in the moon,the Moon Fairy.
The second legend has it that during the Yuan Dynasty,an underground group led by Zhu Yuan Zing was determined to rid the country of Mongolian dominance. The moon cake was created to carry a secret message.
When the cake was opened and the message read,an uprising was unleashed which successfully routed the Mongolians. It happened at the time of the full moon,which,some say,explains why moonquakes are eaten at this time.
Moonquakes are usually stamped with Chinese characters indicating the name of the ry and the type of filling used. Some ries will even stamp them with your family name so that you can give personalized ones to friends and family.
They are usually presented in boxes of four which indicate the four phases of the moon. Traditional moonquakes are made with melted lard,but today vegetable oil is more often used in the interests of health.
Moonquakes are not for the diet-conscious as they are loaded with calories. The best way to wash down one of these sticky cakes is with a cup of Chinese tea,especially Jasmine or Chrysanthemum tea,which aids the digestion.
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篇1:导语:以下是关于小学英语写作指导
全文共 1551 字
+ 加入清单小学阶段不同年级的作文有不同要求和写作技巧小学英语写作指导小学英语写作指导。
对于小学3年级的学生,在他们已经掌握好了如颜色(colour)、衣服(clothes)、数字(number)、星期(day of the week)、月份(month)、宠物(pet)、情感(feeling)、身体部位(body)、文具(school things)的基础上进行文章的填空,如果学生能够按照文章的要求写进相关的信息,那就已经很不错了。下面是一个自我介绍的简单例子:
Myself
Hello,my name is_____. I am_____years old.My favourite colour is_____,_____, and_____.My favourite pet is______,_____ and______. My favourite food is_____,______and______.My favourite day is______. My favourite school thing is______and______.My favourite number is and______.I am______today.
上面的这个例子,如果学生能够依次能吧自己的姓名、年龄、喜欢的颜色、喜欢的宠物、喜欢的食物、喜欢的日子、喜欢的文具、喜欢的数字和今天的心情准确无误地写出来,那么就已经能够完成了3年级阶段的作文要求。
对于4年级的学生,可以写一篇介绍自己课室或者自己卧室的文章。下面是一篇4年级学生的介绍课室范文。
My classroom
I am studying at Tongji primary school.I am in Class Two, Grade Four. (介绍自己所在的学校和所在的年级) There is a blackboard in front of the classroom. There are twenty-five desks in our classroom, they are brown. There are many books on the desk. There are fifty students, thirty boys and twenty girls. There is a picture on the wall. There are two fans on the wall. (用there+be句型把班里和摆设和班上的人数都表达出来了) It is tidy and clean.I like my classroom very much.(最后是作者的总结)
对于5年级的学生,作文的要求也提高了很多,很多学生在介绍别人或者是写自己喜欢的小动物的时候很容易忘了第三人称单数动词要加ses,如:He get up at 7 o’clock(get忘了加s),在用到现在进行的时候动词很容易忘了加ing(如I am play the piano,play就忘记了加ing),介词和介词短语也占了很重要的位置如介词in,on,at,of。介词短语如dream of(区分dream that)和be afraid of都是很重要的介词短语,很多学生忘记了介词后面要加动词小学英语写作指导少儿基础英语。
对于6年级的学生,作文考查的是英语的综合应用能力,而且出的题目大部分都是看图作文,这就在一定程度上增加了写作的难度,它也是综合了3年级的分类词汇,4年级的句型,方位介词,5年级的重点介词短语和时态,不过我相信只要平时多点积累单词和句型、多点动笔、多注意语法上的问题、多看作文书,那么就能写出流畅、有深度的文章。
篇2:小学二年级优秀英语作文
全文共 2135 字
+ 加入清单Mr. Wang is my PE teacher. He is very tall and strong. He’s a bit fat. His skin is swarthy, but it looks healthy. He has a round face. There are two big eyes on his face. He always wears a pair of glasses. I think Mr. Wang is very handsome.
Our PE lessons are very interesting, because Mr. Wang is very humor. He always plays games with us. Sometimes he makes jokes with us. We feel very happy in PE lessons. We all like Mr. Wang.(约85字)
小学二年级英语作文:My New Teacher
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes.
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, we have science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou .
小学二年级英语作文:My English Teacher
In my life, Ms. Wang is the most important person to me. Her teaching skills are spanerse. In class, she usually uses games and posters. She works hard for us. When other teachers rest, she still keeps working and working. When we are mischievous, she is good at giving systematic guidance.
We are really grateful for what she has done for us. We want to say ”thank you” to her.
小学二年级英语作文:我喜欢哈尔滨
There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. You must wear warm clothes.
The most exciting thing is playing with snow. Skating is also very interesting there.
I will always remember Harbin, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. I love Harbin.
小学二年级英语作文:My Teacher
I have a new teacher.She is an English teacher,her name is Miss He.She is young and beautiful.She is strict but kind.She often goes to work by motor bike.But sometimes she likes piaying sports.Usualli she likes reading book.I like my English teacher very much.What about you?
小学二年级英语作文:My Backpack
I have a backpack. It is large and it is blue. It is a birthday gift from my parents. I love it very much. It is very hard-working, because I keep all my school things in it. It is very heavy. It is with all the time during school days. It is a good friend of mine.
篇3:小学生英语作文
全文共 323 字
+ 加入清单Our school had to give-away activity for the poor kids.Students gave away their pocket money,toys,used books and stationery to kids in need. This activity helped kids out of trouble.And it passed on kindness to others.Helping others made me happy.This activity can help kidslifes better. I hope you can help people in need.
篇4:小学英语的
全文共 429 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a businessman. He is always busy with his work and he often goes to business trips. But when he is free, he stays with us. My mother is a worker. She works hard, too. She works hard to take care of our home. I love my parents.
我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有三口人,我爸爸,妈妈和我。我的父亲是一个商人。他总是忙于他的工作,他经常去出差。但当他是免费的,他和我们在一起。我妈妈是一个工人。她也努力工作。她努力工作照顾我们的家。我爱我的父母。
篇5:关于节日的小学英语
全文共 947 字
+ 加入清单Today is my long-awaited holiday - "National Day". In the morning, I put on my clothes and traveled with my father and mother.
We came to the city of Changzhi City in the city of Huang cliff, where the beautiful scenery, the lake is clear and transparent.
Into the door to see both sides cliff top together, looking up as a ray of days, there is "Kazuo Guan, Wan Fu Mo open" risk. And then went up to the mountain park, the park around the Qifeng different stone, really beautiful.
Continue to climb, we entered the weapons library site, weapons warehouse depth of 72 meters, 18 meters wide, 25 meters high, where was once made "Huang Yadong Battle" site.
Huang Yadong is a good place for adolescent patriotism education and tourism.
今天,是我盼望已久的节日——“国庆节”。早上,我穿上衣服,和爸爸、妈妈一起旅游。
我们来到了位于长治市黎城县的黄崖洞,这里的风景美丽极了,湖水清澈透明。
进入大门,看到两侧崖顶欲合,仰视如一线天,有“一夫当关,万夫莫开”之险。再往上走来到了高山公园,公园四周奇峰异石,真是美不胜收。
继续攀登,我们步入兵器库遗址,兵器库洞深72米,宽18米,高25米,这里曾经是著明的“黄崖洞保卫战”遗址。
黄崖洞真是一个进行青少年爱国主义教育及旅游的好地方。
篇6:万圣节小学英语作文之万圣节的起源
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+ 加入清单While there are many versions of the origins and old customs of Halloween, some remain consistentby all accounts. Different cultures view Halloween somewhat differently but traditional Halloween practices remain the same.
尽管关于万圣节的起源和旧俗有很多不同的看法,但有一些是被所有人接受的。不同文化看待万圣节总是有点不同,但是传统的万圣节做的事情都是一样的。
Halloween culture can be traced back to the Druids, a Celtic culture in Ireland, Britain and Northern Europe. Roots lay in the feastof Samhain, which was annually on October 31st to honor the dead.
万圣节文化可以追溯到德鲁伊教,这是一种爱尔兰、北欧和英国的凯尔特文化,根植于Samhain节的庆祝活动,Samhain节于每年的10月31日纪念逝者。
Samhain signifies "summers end" or November. Samhain was a harvest festival with huge sacred bonfires, marking the end of the Celtic year and beginning of a new one. Many of the practices involved in this celebration were fed on superstition.
Samhain节说明夏天结束或者十一月,是一个丰收的节日。在Samhain节会燃起神圣巨大的篝火,标志着凯尔特一年的结束和新一年的开始。一些做法因为迷信被加入庆祝活动中。
The Celts believed the souls of the dead roamed the streets and villages at night. Since not all spirits were thought to be friendly, gifts and treats were left out to pacifythe evil and ensure next years crops would be plentiful. This custom evolved into trick-or-treating.
凯尔特人相信死者的灵魂会在夜里出没在街道和村庄 。因为他们认为不是所有的灵魂都是友善的,所以就把礼物和好吃的留在外面安慰恶灵来确保来年的庄稼可以丰收。这种习俗演变成了trick-or-treating。
篇7:小学六年级英语写一封信
全文共 737 字
+ 加入清单Dear Professor Smith,
I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences between America and China, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on Nov. 28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.
As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of the cultural differences between America and China, so we hope you could help us increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.
Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec @163.com if you could come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
篇8:小学英语作文:自我介绍
全文共 702 字
+ 加入清单Gooda fternoon,teachers! My name is XuLulu. I`m 11. I come from Class1 Grade 5 of TongPu No.2Primary School. There are 4 people in my family. My father is tall. My motheris pretty.My sister has a long hair. And I`m a good student. However, my homeis near the school, I often get up early. Because I must work hard. afterschool, I like playing computer games and reading books. I`d like to eatapples. They are sweet and healthy. And I like Tuesday best. We have English,music, computer and P.E. on Tuesdays. My math teacher is Miss Huang. Her classis so much fun. So my favourite class is math. And I like Chinese and English,too. This is me. An active girl. Please remember XuLulu. Thank you very much!
篇9:小学六年级英语一封信
全文共 546 字
+ 加入清单Dear Sir or Madam,
Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
篇10:小学课堂上的笑声作文
全文共 675 字
+ 加入清单“叮咚叮咚”,上课铃响了,“兹兹兹”的桌椅晃动声、“叽叽喳喳”的说话声、“啪啪”的放书声填满了整个教室。不知是谁突然叫了一声:“老师来了!”教室里立刻安静了下来,只听见一阵“咚咚咚”的有节奏的脚步声渐渐向我们靠近。
老师走进了教室,不管三七二十一,直接在黑板上“沙沙沙”地画了一个缺鼻子少嘴巴的脸。伴着老师“沙沙沙”的粉笔声的是同学们的“议论进行曲”。你听,有的说:“这节不是作文课吗?老师干什么画一个不健康的脸在黑板上呀?”有的说:“我猜这准是让我们来做‘画鼻子’的游戏。”这时,老师突然喊了声:“王语!”王语可是我们班的“调皮王”,听老师叫他的名字,他吃了一惊,“霍”地一下子站起来。同学们把疑惑的目光投向他。瞧,他低着头,皱着眉,满脸都写着无可奈何,心惊胆战地跟着老师走到了黑板前。可是,万万没有想到的声,老师不但没有惩罚他,还给了他一支粉笔,把他的眼睛蒙住,在他耳边小声嘀咕了什么。只见,王语用粉笔在黑板上比划了又比划,终于找到了下手的地方,开始画鼻子。不知是谁起了头,“哈哈哈”全班哄堂大笑——一场大型狂笑演奏会开始了。“啪啪啪”有的人边笑边拍桌子;“哎哟——哎哟”有的人笑得肚子疼,正嗷嗷直叫;“扑通”一声,哪个调皮鬼从椅子上笑摔下来了……王语在笑声中画完了,大家一看,他的鼻子长到脸外面去了。
接着,老师又请了两位同学去画鼻子。他们画的鼻子不是长在脸的外面,就是长到了下巴上面,引起了同学们一阵又一阵的狂笑。
今天,我们不仅在笑声中享受到了做游戏的快乐,更明白了一个道理:蒙着眼睛做事真难,当盲人的滋味一定很难过,我可要好好保护自己的眼睛呀!
篇11:寒假生活英语作文小学
全文共 875 字
+ 加入清单During the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. I wake up 11
oclock Am everyday, after a washing, I have a good lunch with my parents. Next
I play computer games till the time to have supper. After have dinner. I go on
playing till 2 oclock Am, and then go to sleep with tired. This is one dull day
of my winter vacation.
But I havent bored all the time. Sometimes I read the books, sometime I
listen to the music or the radio in the bed, because it was very cold outside
and snowy all the day. And I also meat some of my good friends during the
vacation, we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year
and play table tennis tegether. And I watched the spring festival party of the
CCTV in the last seconds of the 2004 year! I think this is the thing most people
of china doing at that time.
Thats all, all my dull, coldly and snowy winter vacation.
篇12:小学英语
全文共 345 字
+ 加入清单Almost every child will complain about their parents sometimes. It is
natural, because when people stay together for a long time, they will start to
have argument. But ignore about the unhappy time, our parents love us all the
time. No matter what happen to us, they will stand by our sides. We should be
grateful to them and try to understand them.
篇13:小学五年级英语作文:MyRoutine
全文共 489 字
+ 加入清单Hi, my name is Susannah Huang. My life is wonderful.
From Monday to Friday, I usually get up at 6.30. I brush my teeth and wash my face at 6.35.And then I have breakfast. For breakfast, I have bread and milk. At 7.00 I go to school. I always get to by bus. I have cLasses from 8.00am to 5.30pm. On Saturday and Sunday, I usually get up at 9.00.
On weekdays, I have many cLasses, Chinese、maths、English and other subjects. My favourite subject is English.
I like my life and my study very much.
篇14:小学春天英语
全文共 419 字
+ 加入清单spring comes.ltsgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lts as soft as silk. ltwashes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters peoples hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.
篇15:小学生佳作:课堂小插曲真有趣
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+ 加入清单今天下午,我们端端正正地坐在教室里,兴致勃勃地与老师讨论着试卷题目。
我们交流得很顺利,没有什么异议,也没遇到“拦路虎”。有些要费脑细胞的题,也都在大家的共同努力下,把它一一拿下。因此,课堂气氛很活跃,大家都很放得开,一有看法便会争先发表出来。
我们一路过关斩将,将“敌人”杀得片甲不留、满地找牙,不一会儿,便到了古诗积累的题目。按理说,不应该有什么难度,关键在于平时的积累和现在的交流。第二小题要求写出描写“春、夏、秋、冬”各个季节景色的诗句。大家交流得很起劲儿,常常是托着腮帮子思考十几秒,眼睛突然一放光,便会立刻把手举得高高的!当然了,答案也五花八门,充分显示出大家平时积累的功夫。几分钟过后,当大家都张口结舌说不上来时,王江朴一听老师的点拨,立刻把握笔的手高高举过头顶。大家的目光全被他吸引过来了。只见他站起来,满脸自豪,得意洋洋地说:“白雨跳珠乱入船!”“啊?哈哈哈……!”同学们一听,立即张开嘴,哈哈大笑起来!哦,原来,王江朴可能是饿了,把前半句“黑云翻墨未遮山”给吃掉了,呵呵!王江朴发现错了后,满脸慌张地赶忙说:“啊……啊……黑……黑云翻墨未遮山,白雨跳珠乱入船。”话音刚落,他便慌忙坐下,在大家的笑声中,羞得满脸通红。他把脸深深地埋在书中,恨不得找个地缝钻进去!此时,估计他正在心里埋怨自己怎么一时粗心,说错了呢!笑声慢慢地弱了,大家又都把心收回来了,重新回到课堂中。
这课堂上的小插曲真有趣,让大家在40分钟里多了一些欢笑!
篇16:你喜欢我吗小学英语作文
全文共 555 字
+ 加入清单hello, i’m han yueyuan . i’m a girl. i’m 11 years old. i’m form hangzhou. i have long hair , small eyes, small mouth.
i like english very much. i’m very happy every day. my favourite food is cake ,because it’s sweet. my favourite fruit are apples. they are tasty and healthy. an apple a day keeps doctor way. my favourite day is fridays, because we have english on the fridays.
on the saturdays and sundays i often do housework,i’m helpful. i can wash the clothes, water the flowers, make the bed. i can’t do the dishes, but i’d like to try. do you like me?
篇17:我自己小学英语优秀作文
全文共 440 字
+ 加入清单myname is wu yuwei .i’m 13 years old. i’m a chinese girl .i study in inqi primaryschool.i’m in class 3,grade 6. i’min row 3. i have many friends in class.for eample, che lei is my best friend . she is 13 yearsold , too. she is a good girl. weoften help each other.there are fourpeople in my family .they are my father, mother, sister and me .my parentsare formers . they work hard. my sister is a student . i love themand they love me ,too.
篇18:寒假英语小学生日记
全文共 1694 字
+ 加入清单During the winter vacation, I was idle at home and went to grandmas home to play.
When she came to grandmas house, I saw that grandma was making a fire. I saw it soon, and I wanted to try. So I said to the granny who was burning, "grandma, let me make a fire!" Did not think of grandma unexpectedly categorically said: "no.!" Do not change this trick: "grandma, my grandmother, let me try it, just a minute!" Grandma could not resist my persistence, readily agreed. So I took the match immediately and sat in front of the kitchen.
"Chi", lit, a gentle and brilliant light. I immediately took a straw like something lit into the kitchen. Im afraid the fire will go out soon, so I put a lot of firewood in. "Wow," the fire suddenly busy up, but soon went out, but also emitting a smell of smoke, choking me coughing. So I said, "the country and the city are not the same, and even a gas stove is not!" After that, I lit a match and threw it in. But it soon went out. The smoke not only did not dissipate, but it was thicker. I cant eat this time, choking out of the kitchen. Grandma washing meters, see my gray appearance, smiled and said: "who said the fire must be good?" As my grandmother said that, my head went down involuntarily. But I immediately regain confidence: "a word can never be withdrawn." said we should do. I must have a good fire! " So I went to the front of the kitchen, and then, I learned the old people to take a fan with a fan. There was no smoke, but the smoother was smaller. Not easy to fan the fire, open the pot to see, the rice just put in. So I had to pick up the fan and fan it again.
When I went home that day, my face had already become a big face in Beijing Opera!
篇19:生活处处是课堂小学优秀作文
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+ 加入清单暑假的一天,屋里非常闷热,我趴在窗台上透气,伸手摸了摸窗户外的防护栏,竟然那么烫。这时我听到了妈妈的喊声:“谣谣,陪我去逛街吧!”我答应了。我和妈妈来到商场门口时,就已经热得够呛。妈妈给我买了一个冰棍,我边吃边跟着妈妈走进了商场,一股凉风吹来,顿时舒畅了许多。我不禁赞叹道:“还是商场的中央空调好啊!”妈妈笑了笑,没吭气。我边吃冰棍边跟着妈妈逛,感到惬意极了。
冰棍吃完了,我看到一个垃圾箱,远远的扔了过去,也不知扔没扔进去,我转身就走了。可是,我没走几步,就听到一个稚嫩的声音在喊:“大姐姐,大姐姐,你把雪糕棍扔到外面了。”我寻声望去,原来是一个五六岁模样的小弟弟。我白了他一眼,冷冷地说:“多管闲事!”他看见我不理睬他,就挣脱妈妈牵着他的手,走过去半蹲下来,捡起了我刚刚扔在地上的雪糕棍,又跑过去扔进了垃圾桶里。这时,他的妈妈走过去,又牵住了他的手,并夸奖说:“宝宝,好样的!”听到这,我的脸突然火辣辣的烫。刚想赶紧溜走,那位小弟弟又说话了:“姐姐,你的雪糕棍从垃圾桶里掉出来了,我帮你捡起来了。”这时,妈妈也听见了,她急忙说:“这位小弟弟,可能是姐姐不小心把雪糕棍给扔到外面了。谢谢你哟!”那位小弟弟说:“不用谢,阿姨,我帮姐姐捡起来了,妈妈还夸我是好样的呢!”听着妈妈和小弟弟的对话,我的脸更烫了。
那位小弟弟走后,妈妈把我拉到旁边的座位上坐下,语重心长地说:“谣谣,以后在公共场所,要遵守规则哟!雪糕棍应该扔到垃圾桶里!”我点了点头,因为那位小弟弟今天给我上了一堂生动的品德教育课。
篇20:浅谈提高高中作文课堂教学有效性策略
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+ 加入清单【摘要】
作文教学是语文教学的重要组成部分,高中生作文课有效性能否得到充分的发挥是学生们写作的能力能否提高的一个重要因素,传统的作文课的模式桎梏着学生们思维创新能力的发展,教师要改变传统的思维定式,放开学生的手脚,给他们自由放飞的空间。本文从学生的发展空间、教师的课堂教学有效性策略等方面对作文教学提出了几点拙见,以此来为学生提高作文能力增添一份理论指导。
【关键词】
作文 课堂教学 策略
作文教学不是老师的包办教学,很大程度上,目前的作文课堂都存在着老师主导整个课堂的现象,这种作文课堂模式无疑将我们的学生思维桎梏在一个固定的模式中,阻碍着学生创新思维的培养。对于高中作文教学而言,学生如果一直接受传统的教学模式的渗透,那么就很难在将来的高考中取得理想的作文分数,不能不说,在汉语越来越被重视的今天,我们语文教师更应着力培养学生的自主能力。在作文课上,让学生们放开自己的手脚,将目光投向更加广阔的大干世界中去,而不是拘泥于一个小小的课堂。艺术源于生活而高于生活,写作是一个建立在现实世界的基础上的更高的艺术修养,所以,我们教师应该做的就是让高中生关注社会生活,再对这样的真实的材料进行一定的理性思考,得到认知上的升华,形成自己的独特的语言特点,表达自己内心真实的想法,使自己的教学由封闭走向开放,这是语文教育发展的一个必然的趋势。我觉得,要将作文课的有效性发挥到最大的程度,主要应该做到以下几个方面。
一、教师要转变观念,放开学生写作的时间和空间
写作是为了表达自己内心情感的一种文字体现,无论在什么时候,都应该随性的表达自己的想法,我们老师的任务就是要培养学生的写作习惯,将写作融入到自己的生活中去,摒弃只有上作文课才写作的陋习,老师也要转变自己的思想,让我们的学生始终处于一种写作状态中,经常写作,随时写作。在应试教育中,一篇800字的作文往往要限定时间写出来,虽然这样可以锻炼学生的审题、构思以及成篇的能力,但是却很难写出高质量的作文,所以,在作文课上我们应该给学生时间来进行资料的整理、揣摩和语言的润色。这样的文章质量应该是要高于我们限时要求学生完成的文章的质量。这样的文章也会更加具有现实的意义。此外,作文的课堂也不应该拘泥于上课的几十分钟,它应该是一个更加广阔的空间,除了学生们经常活动的室外,家庭、社会等各个空间也都可以为学生创作提供广阔空间,也只有在更加广阔的空间里,学生才能获得真实丰富的材料,才能抒发自己的真实情感。故而,走出课堂,经过自己的观察、访问、游览等多种方式接触自己不熟悉的社会生活,才能是课堂的一个有利的补充,才能使学生在上课时有话可说,有文可写,才能服务于我们的课堂教学,使课堂教学的有效性得到更好的发展。
二、课上要把握学生的共性问题加以指导
学生作文最难的一是不知道写什么,二是不知道怎么写。有的学生读了不少书,背了一些写作技法,但写作时无法联系、运用。究其原因,是教师的写作指导不到位。我认为指导的重点应放在教会学生如何审题立意,如何面对任何一道题都能迅速打开思路、选好切题的角度。
高中阶段的作文一般以命题作文为主,课堂教学过程中,很多时候会出现学生的立意不明确、不知道如何分析材料、从何处入手写作的问题,针对这样的学生的共性问题,()我觉得可以在课堂上给予学生综合性的指导,可以从关键语句来分析材料蕴含的主旨,也可以通过因果分析方法或者辩证分析法来解决这样的问题,培养学生透过现象写本质的思维模式,联系生活实际写出自己的独特的风格。这样一来就可以提高课堂的有效性。
课堂上印证观点的例子尽量来自教材及学生自己的习作,做到好懂易学。在具体的课堂操作过程中。教师肯定是要举一部分实例的,在这里我要建议老师们尽量不要采用一些陌生、陈旧的实例,这样不仅学生理解起来有难度,而且也浪费了课堂上的有效时间,最好就是选取一些比较新颖的、学生感兴趣的实例。在备课的时候把相关材料的有效资料准备充分,最好就是选取课本当中的例子,学生能够迅速的明白,也能够对资料进行全新的审视,在写作中能灵活运用这些曾经被搁置的实例。
三、培养学生课堂上的主人公意识和勇于发言的能力
新课改要求我们老师要还课堂给学生,所以激发学生的写作热情才是最关键的环节,我觉得可以通过以下方式来激发我们学生的勇于发言的热情。
1.比较阅读讨论
课堂上抽取两篇学生的佳作,教师就作文的某一个方面或全方位进行对比,然后让学生根据作文提出自己的见解,只要是“言之成理”即可给予鼓励,在讨论的时候强调简明、得体,在讨论中,提倡进行过细的分析并提出修改意见,尤其是分析文章的异同点。
2.自由辩论
针对一篇文章或者是多篇文章的一个方面或者多个方面进行辩论,可以在课堂中将学生分成若干个辩论小组,每个小组经过讨论得出自己的观点,然后跟对手进行辩驳,这样就可以引导学生善于就提供的文章发表不同的意见,发现作文中存在的问题,引以为戒。这种方法,强调的是表达与众不同的意见,它有助于摆脱思维的滞涩和定势,使思维和讨论活跃起来。这样,这个讨论就总是尝试性的,它迫使学生进行反省性的探究,从而获取知识和经验。胡适曾经这样说: “问题是知识学问的老祖宗,古往今来一切知识的产生和积聚,都是因为要解答问题。”可见,发现问题是多么重要。
3.现身说法
课堂上请作文写得好的同学在班里朗诵,并请他将写作的经过、体会介绍给其他同学,再请他自改作文,说出这样改的原因。以此为基础再请其他同学提出修改意见和评价体会。在这种批评与自我批评中体味写作的乐趣。真正找到属于自己的写作方法。
【结语】
语文教学中的作文教学是每个语文教师都倍感艰难的教学任务,教师应该首先改变自己的教学观念,用先进的教育理念指引自己的教学,以学生为主体开展教学活动,引导学生的课堂主体作用得到最大限度的发挥。鼓励学生在写作课上积极的发言,以学生的实际理解水平为基础进行多层面的鼓励教学,让课堂教学的有效性得到最大的提升。
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