初一我的梦想英语作文5篇 作文怎么写（经典20篇）

My uncle has been in America for quite a few years. He used to live in Pudong. He wanted to come back to his homeland very much. Last summer he came to Shanghai and I took him to visit Pudong. He said the streets became wider and the buildings became higher. I told him, "Many people have moved into new and big flats. It is very convenient to go shopping here." He couldn＇t find his old house. He said, "What great changes!" He decided to stay and spend the rest of his life in Shanghai.

每个人都会有自己的梦想吧？我的梦想——做化妆师、服装设计师、发型设计师。

我还依稀记得，小学时去朋友家玩，老是会拿着妈妈的化妆品去。帮同学化妆啊、梳头啊、搭配衣服等。举一个简单的事例吧：

那是五年级时的一件事，我去我的好朋友家。我的好朋友说：“你带化妆品啦？”我一边收拾自己带了的东西一边说：“当然啦！我哪次来不带点东西。”我的闺蜜（好朋友）眼睛都快眯成一条缝了，又说：“好加喜，你帮我再化化妆呗，我妈妈都说你给我画的很好看。就是上次那个烟熏妆，我妈妈看了你给我画的，说还想让你给她画呢！”我只顾害羞去了，半句话没说。我闺蜜看见我没答应，又卖萌，说：“好加喜，你就给我画嘛。”我实在没有办法了，说了一句：“好了好了，给你画，行了吧？再说，我哪次来不给你化妆？”然后我们1都笑了起来。

还有一次哦：那是过年时我姑结婚，让我妈妈陪她去看婚纱。我让我妈妈带上我，好辛苦的呢！

进了婚纱店，我迫不及待也去试了一下迷你婚纱（就是内种花童装啦，按婚纱内种做的哦），我穿上了一种迷你裙的小婚纱。妈妈和姑姑直叫漂亮！于是，我姑姑让售货小姐也拿了个跟我这种小婚纱一样款式的。

因为我姑姑是蘑菇头嘛，穿这种婚纱不算很好看。姑姑试了很多种，都觉得不太适合自己，妈妈愁的直叫头疼。

在被迫无奈的情况下，我替姑姑去看了一种婚纱，内种没有裙拖的，短裙式的。姑姑说：“加喜，太谢谢你了啦，这款我超喜欢哦！”我害羞的说：“是嘛，嘻嘻。”

其实，生活中的一些小事就是与自己梦想有关的，只要你用心探索，一定会发现自己真正的优点，也会发现自己真正要做的。

I am good at writing and I am interested in travelling around the world,So I want to become a reporter in the future.

As a reporter, I can communicate with many different kinds of people. I can show the real world to readers.

As a metter of fact, to be a good reporter is not easy.

It is a challenge for me.

Now I must study hard and lay a solid foundation. Also I must build up my body.

我善于写作，也对环球世界也是非常感兴趣，因此，未来我想成为一个记者.

作为一个记者，我就可以和不同种类的人进行交流，我也能够把真正的世界展现在读者面前.

事实上，成为一个好记者是不容易的，对我来说是一个挑战.

现在我必须努力学习打下坚实的基础，还有必须要锻炼身体.

Inow living in a small house with my parents. Life for us is hard but

happy. I must study hard so that I can buy a big new house some day. I call it a

dream house.

It has three floors with five bedrooms, three bathrooms, two big dining

rooms and two living rooms. When my friends come to visit me, I will have enough

bedrooms for them. Well have a good time. Besides that, we will have a swimming

pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house. In the morning, my

parents can do some exercise in the garden. The air must be very fresh. When we

feel tired, we can have a swim in the swimming pool. Life will be easy for

us.

Ill study harder than before so that the dream can come true.

在教棒和粉笔的共同飞舞中，在老师声声叮咛，鼓励和无微不至地呵护下，多少位良师被学子深深地印在心里啊！

——题记

我在这里写的是一位普普通通，平凡得不能再平凡的人民教师，５０来岁，由于终日为我们不辞辛苦的操劳，脸上布满了皱纹，她的两眼黑得发亮，锋利的目光，仿佛要把什么刺穿似的。我有点害怕。她只教我们还不到四个月，但是，每当我想起她时。她对我们的严就像教练训练运动员那样一丝不苟；她对我们很关心，体贴，就像对待自己的儿女一样。 但是，那一次，我尽对她起了怨恨。那是一节自习课，英语老师让同学们把作业本Ａ订正好交到办公室去批改，作业本Ｂ作好的也去批改。我怀着喜悦的心情拿着作好的Ｂ去批改，＂报告＂＂进来＂她的声音很平稳，我走了进去，队伍并不长，我跑到英语老师右边去批改，无意间发现了电脑里有语文竞赛的成绩，我便很期盼得到自己的成绩，不听话的手尽往鼠标地区前行，不经意间，我触摸到了，这下手更不听使唤，一直往下翻动着，＂啊＂我目瞪口呆，倒数第三，我的喜悦心情沉淀了下来，＂谁呀，谁在动我的电脑？＂一声果断而又严厉的语言向我发起进攻，我吓了一大跳，我心里想：哎呀，这下怎么办呀，不如来个死不承认，或者，英语老师的教棒在桌上＂吃吃＂作响，＂把手拿过来。＂我害怕极了，真想使用一下神仙的仙术，把英语老师的教棒变成长长的棉花棒，只有我能看见，而老师看不见，软软的棉花棒触摸了我一下，＂哇！＂教棒落下来了，打得好痛呀，我有点生气，心里暗暗想着；你这个老太太，太坏了，我只不过碰了一下鼠标，看了电脑屏幕一眼，也不过如此，您竟打我，只要教育几下就行了嘛，我可是个怕痛的女孩。我心中的怨恨一直不能平静。但刚想完，那教棒的滋味和对老师的怨恨跑掉了，我寻找着，发现它屹立在英语老师身上展现出来的无可抗拒的人格魅力上。

她总穿着比别人温暖的衣服，长得虽不出众，但是她的人格魅力在我心中是最出众的，那一次英语课，因我们作业做得不好，而被英语老师斥责了一翻，最使我深受教育的是这样一句话：我做事情，要做就要做到最好。＂这声音在教室里久久回荡，震撼着我的心灵。一颗＇作一个高尚的人＂的种子便埋下了，自从那节课后，我猛然发觉自己长大了好多好多，幼稚正向我告别。我的心底默默地感谢这位教我如何做人的英语老师。

I went to Hainan Island with my parents for a holidy and we stayed there

for a week. It took us only more than three hours to get to Haikou airport. We

enjoyed the warm sunshine and the softwind. We walked on the beach and picked up

the beautiful shells. We also sufed on the waves and it was really exciting. We

played ball games on the beach as well. I believed Hainan was really an

attractive city with famous beach and mountains. We really enjoyed the beautiful

scenery of Hainan.

I met a girl called Sue on the Intemet. We are of the same age.she is in France. She is in No.1 Middle School, Class 7, and Grade 9. She can speak English and French. And we talked happily with each other. We can write down what we feel and what we think and then forward to each other. We also try to write in English. She once lived in with her parents, so she can speak native English.

In this way, we are getting closer and closer. And furthermore both of our English has improved quickly and greatly. Her favorite sport is soccer. Her favorite subject is math. Her favorite color is red. Her favorite food is sandwiches. Her favorite movie is Home alone. She has a brother. Her brother’s name is Tom.

She is a happy girl. How nice it is to have a "pen pal”

I have many favorite holiday, such as: the Dragon Boat Festival and the double ninth festival, but I most like the needlework. Because the needlework section is by niulang and zhinv, below I will speak to you of the origin of the needlework section.

Met a sick one day, the cowherds workhorse, cowherd saw it was ill, and was taken care of.

One day, met a group of vega cowherd, and fell in love with the one of the female, the vega also like cowboy, they lived a happy life. This thing is know the heavenly queen, and catch the vega on the day.

After women talked: "when I die, I made a pair of leather shoes, you can walking." The old cow died, cowherd took the old cow leather to make shoes, find vega flew to heaven, but was head of the heavenly queen hair clasp into the Milky Way of blocking the way. Cowboy on the other side has kept many days, finally, was touched by the heavenly queen so heavenly queen in July 7th this one day, only to meet niulang and zhinv. Vega ingenuity, women are begging for blessing themselves can also ingenuity.

This is the origin of the needlework section.

我有许多喜欢的节日，比如：端午节、重阳节，但我最喜欢乞巧节。因为乞巧节是由牛郎和织女而来的，下面我就来给你讲一讲乞巧节的由来吧。

有一天，牛郎碰见一头生病的老黄牛，牛郎见它生病了，就悉心照料。

有一天，牛郎碰见一群织女，并喜欢上了其中一个织女，那个织女也很喜欢牛郎，他们过上了幸福的生活。这事被王母娘娘知道了，又把织女抓上了天。

老牛说话了：“等我死了以后，把我的皮做成一双鞋，你就可以腾云驾雾了。”老牛死了以后，牛郎把老牛的皮做成了鞋，飞上了天去找织女，可是却被王母娘娘头上的簪子变成的银河挡住了去路。牛郎在对面守了许多天，最后王母娘娘也被感动了，所以王母娘娘只在七月七日这一天，让牛郎和织女见面。织女心灵手巧，女人都乞福自己也能心灵手巧。

这就是乞巧节的来历。

I have many dreams. And in the dream. I believe I can fly, in the dream, I grow a pair of white wings, soaring in the sky; I want a barbie doll, in the dream, I birthday, my mother gave me a beautiful barbie doll; I want to grow up as a pianist, in the dream, I play music is the most popular; I guess Im a merit student this year, in the dream, the teacher formally of the certificate issued to me, I was so happy. I want to grow up when painting teacher, in the dream, the children all like I painted picture; I want to see what my future looks like, in the dream, I through time and space, see I am so lovely; I want to have magic, in the dream, I let the poor and clothing is not short, I let those bad guys become kind; I think my toy dog will talk, in the dream, lovely toy dog in talking with me; I dont think I can grow up, in the dream, I always have the parents love and partner to help, to play with my friend; I think the world can find happiness from the difficulties, in the dream, the people on the street are smiling; I think I swim technology is very good, in the dream, I like Michael Phelps as fast...

I have lots and lots of dream, how I hope these can become a reality. I have been efforts to strive for to achieve these beautiful dreams, when I grow up, have more knowledge, I go to effort to fight for. The children, well go to strive for their good wishes!

我的梦想有很多。而且都在梦里实现。我想我能飞，在梦里，我长出一对洁白的翅膀，在天空中翱翔;我想得到芭比娃娃，在梦里，我过生日，妈妈送给我一个漂亮的芭比娃娃;我想长大当钢琴家，在梦里，我弹的曲子是最受欢迎的;我想今年我是三好学生，在梦里，老师郑重的把奖状颁发给我，我是那样开心;我想长大当画画老师，在梦里，小朋友们都喜欢我画得画;我想看看我的未来长什么样子，在梦里，我穿越时空，看到我是那么可爱;我想拥有魔法，在梦里，我让穷人衣食不缺，我让那些坏人变得善良;我想我的玩具狗会说话，在梦里，可爱的玩具狗在跟我谈心;我想我不能长大，在梦里，我永远有父母的爱护和伙伴的帮助，和我的朋友玩耍;我想世界的人都能从困难中找到快乐，在梦里，大街上的人个个笑容满面;我想我的游泳技术很好，在梦里，我像菲尔普斯一样快……

我有许许多多的梦想，我多么希望这些能变成现实。我一直在努力地争取去实现这些美好的梦想，等我长大了，有更多的知识了，我再去努力地争取。小朋友们，我们一起去争取实现自己美好的愿望吧!

Last week, my cousin was back at home from his trip. He had been away for

more than a month and he was a backpacker. I felt so envious, because he could

live the life he wanted. I listened to him and was so attractive by the scenery

he saw. The people he met also caught my attention. I made up my mind. When I

earned money in the future, I would do the things as my cousin do now. So the

first thing for me was to be more independent. I should learn to do the things

by myself, such as cleaned my own stuff instead of asking my mother to wash.

Secondly, I needed to study hard, so as to find a good job. I needed money to

support my dream. I believe that I can realize my dream and live my own

life.

Perfect Dream Harry Potter

Do you know Harry Potter? If you dont, then you are out of date. Many people love Harry Potter, whether children or adults. I love Harry Potter, too. Last week, I went to Nantong to see the movie "Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire".

It was a wonderful movie. In the movie, Harry is the same age as us and he is more handsome than me. Harrys best friends are Hermione and Ron. The movie tells the story of Harrys Fourth Year at Hogwarts. The Goblet of Five selects him to compete as one of four champions in the Throwizard Tournament, despite the fact that he didnt submit his name. The Tournament is very dangerous so his friends are all worried about him. Hermione and Ron try their best to help Harry to prepare for each task. I think their friendship is unbreakable. Cho Chang, who Harry likes, is a Chinese pretty girl. I liked her but I liked Hermione better because she is very clever.

Its very magical! I love magic as much as Harry does. If I lived in a magic world, I could pick up gigantic things easily, I could go to wherever I liked and I could fly on a broom, I could change my hairstyle of any time, I could.

Its a perfect world and its a perfect dream.

[哈利波特完美的梦想高中英语作文

Since I was a little child, I had a dream that I wanted to be a doctor. When I was little, I watched many TV series and movies about doctors. I thought they were so great. Therefore, I made up my mind to be a doctor. In my opinion, doctor is the people who can help patience get out of sickness and pain.I want to be the person who can help others. However, being a doctor needs so much professional knowledge and there is a long way to go. So I have to try my best on my study and go to a good college.

从我还是个小孩开始，我就梦想着成为一名医生。当我还小的时候，我看很多关于医生的电视剧和电影。我认为医生很伟大。因此，我下定决心要成为一名医生。在我看来，医生是可以帮助病人走出疾病和痛苦的人。我想成为可以帮助他人的人。但是，成为医生需要很多的专业知识，还有很长一段路要走。所以我必须努力学习，考上一个好大学。

My dream is to become an astronaut.

Because there are mysterious question mark to our discovery, bring contribution to the country. So, I want to be a good astronaut.

One morning, I am sitting spacecraft, suit to fly into space, along the way, I saw harmlessly over in front of my eyes, the stars twinkle, landed like bright big eyes.

I went to the moon, met an alien, I give him out of the one hundred math problem, he was only zero point zero zero zero one seconds to be done, all right.

I came to Mars, Mars and earth, all the year round has changed a lot, but there is no flower, grass, trees and so on, more no air, so I lay artificial air on Mars, also planted many flowers, grass and trees. A few days later, Mars is full of vitality.

I came to the...

"Zhang Kun Zhang Kun wake up! Wake up! The sun ass!"

I wake up, all dream without a trace. I wish my dream can come true! Believe that after my unremitting efforts, the future can dream come true!

我的梦想是当一名宇航员。

因为太空中有神秘的问号给我们探索发现，给国家带来贡献。因此，我想当一名出色宇航员。

有一天上午，我穿着太空服坐着宇宙飞船，飞向太空，一路上，我看见一颗颗流星从我眼前飞过，星星一闪一闪的，像一颗颗明亮的大眼睛。

我来到了月球，见到了外星人，我给他出了一百道数学题，他才零点零零零一秒就做完了，全对。

我来到了火星，火星和地球一样，一年四季都有很大的变化，可是就是没有花、草、树木等生物，更没有空气，于是我把人造空气铺在了火星上，还种上了很多花、草、树木。没过几天，火星就生机勃勃。

我来到了……

“张琨，张琨快醒醒!快醒醒!太阳晒屁股啦!”

我醒了，全部的梦都无影无踪。要是我的梦想能成真该多好呀!相信经过我不懈的努力，将来一定能梦想成真!

We all have dreams in our life,fighting with our passion so badly.We are so busy doing our work or our study just like an top ,spin and spin ,and never stop.But after fighting so many years,we might still be where we have been or win and fail.I do not think that this result in the end matters.The most important part is the process of trying and fighting.But what we can do or what we need to do more or less is that we shall never regret what we have done,and then we have no choice but follow what is at next.We may have some failure and lots of weaking points which may stop us getting to the success,which we do not notice.It is this kind of difficult that make us have the target to fight for.But in the end,we overcome our difficulties and made it.I think the most important part which is worth of memorizing is the process of our fighting for our dreams no matter what the result is.What we need to do is just to try our best to make it and value these memories of fighting for our dreams together.

[争取我们的梦想与激情英语作文

Everyone has their own dreams, I am no exception. My dream is to be a glorious peoples teacher, use white chalk to impart knowledge, to take care of students with broad mind.

If I were a teacher, I would let the poor in the remote mountainous areas was born in class in our school. I will teach them many knowledge, let them grow up have literary grace.

If I were a teacher, I wont shield the result good students, despise those bad students. A result good student make a mistake, should be criticized, the education they could not proud. A low-achieving students have problems, I will wait patiently to him, let him accept slowly, slowly.

If I were a teacher, in the class, I will make the class more laughter. Next class, I will be on time class is over, let the students to make full use of the valuable time to play, go to bask in the sun, spirit one hundred times to meet the next class.

If I were a teacher, I would with their own efforts to do a best teacher.

每个人都有自己的梦想，我也不例外。我的梦想是当一名光荣的人民教师，用洁白的粉笔来传授知识，用博大的胸怀来关爱学生。

假如我是一名老师，我会让那些边远山区的贫困生来我校上课。我会传授他们许多知识，让他们长大了都有文采。

假如我是一名老师，我不会包庇那些成绩好的学生，鄙视那些成绩坏的学生。一个成绩好的学生犯了错，应该受到批评，教育他们不能骄傲。一个成绩差的学生遇到难题，我会耐心地给他讲解，让他慢慢地接受，慢慢地体会。

假如我是一名老师，上课时，我一定会让课堂上多一点笑声。下课时，我一定会按时下课，让学生充分利用这宝贵的时间，去玩玩，去晒晒太阳，精神百倍去迎接下一堂课。

假如我是一名老师，我会以自己的全力去做一个最好的老师。

I will finish my middle school life soon, before I graduate, I need to take part in a very important test and it will decide which high school I will be in. I am so nervous now, I want to do my best and go to the ideal high school. My mother told me yesterday that no matter how the result was, she would be happy for me. She did not want me to have too much pressure and she believed me I could do well. Thinking about my mother’s words, I am not nervous now, what’s more, all of my families support me so much. The result is not that important, happiness comes first.

我很快就要结束初中的生活了，在我毕业前，我需要参加一场很重要的考试，那就会决定我上哪所高中。我现在很紧张，我想要尽力做到最好，进入到理想的高中。妈妈昨天告诉我无论结果怎么样，她都会为我感到开心。她不想要我有太多的压力，她相信我能做得好。想到妈妈的话语，我现在不紧张了，而且，我所有的家人都很支持我。结果不是那么的重要，开心才是最重要的。

[初一英语作文：重要的考试

Im looking for a weekend. Its happy and its free. This is my dream.

At this weekend, I dont have to play the violin; I dont have to draw pictures; Olympic Maths is far away from me; Handwriting doesnt bother me.

I can play and I can sing; I can do everything interesting. No one can stop me.

Oh, what a happy weekend! But, its only my dream. I hope it will come true.

My mother is a good woman. She is very good for me. Everyday she gives me a good breakfast. Then we go to my school, when I go to my class, she goes to work.

I love my mother!

Every night, she and I go to my room. She says: “Good night! Jenny.” “Good night!” I say. Then she goes to her room.

I love my mother!

During her work time, she does not rest. But she still picks me up at school everyday. When we get home, she gives me some milk and some beak. Then I go to my bed.

I love my mother very much!

[初一英语暑假作文：I love my mother

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写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building.

There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard.

Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much.

Every dream is heart empty twinkling bright stars on the stage, and each was born out of a young childs dream is to star in the most pure, most beautiful, just like a tender bamboo shoots and relaxed but person.

My dream - clothing designer, I want to be a famous designer in the world, and make China proud, let others envy, even though my dream is very big, but when it comes to do it, start from each step, the first step on the dream.

First of all, I will learn to paint, achieve the result that practice makes perfect, try to catch up with the ginger to level, because I lack of imagination, do not out of the beautiful clothes, so I have to look at a fairy tale book. When I tired, want to be lazy, I always think of celebrities is not all through daily practice every night to become famous artist, scientist, costume designer? Just because of this, makes I insist now, because dream makes me become more diligent than ever, more easy to learn.

If my dream come true, I will make the most beautiful clothes. I painted clothes, while any celebrity design clothes, soon, I painted a garment is, after all comments, modify, can make a different clothes. I also want to let the people of the whole country all know: making clothes to different, like to write a composition to ingenuity, to create unique clothing.

Have a dream is beautiful, a dream to make you hard. Efforts, as long as you set your mind to.

每一个梦想都是心空舞台上闪烁的一颗颗耀眼明星，而每一颗幼小童心里诞生出来的梦想更是明星中最纯真、最美好的，就像嫩笋一般清爽可人。

我的梦想--服装设计师，我要成为世界上响当当的设计师，为中国争光，让其他国家羡慕，虽然我的梦很大，但说到做到，从每一步做起，踏上梦想的第一步。

首先我会学好画画，达到熟能生巧的效果，努力追上姜来的水平，因为我缺乏想象力，做不出漂亮的衣服，所以我必须得看童话书。每当我筋疲力尽、想偷懒时，总会想起名人也不都是经过每日每夜的练习才成了有名的画家、科学家，服装设计师的吗?就因为这句，使得我坚持到了现在，就因为梦想使我变得比以往更加勤奋，更加好学。

如果我的梦想实现了，我一定会做出有史以来最漂亮的衣服。我一边画衣服，一边采纳名人设计的衣服，很快，一件衣服就被我画成了，在经过大家的评论，进行修改，就可以制作一条与众不同的衣服啦。我还要让全国人民都知道：制作衣服要与众不同，就像写作文一样要别出心裁，才能创造出独一无二的服装。

有一个梦想是美妙的，有梦才能使你勤奋。努力，只要你下定决心。