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+ 加入清单Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.
There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.
张东是我最好的朋友。他是上学期来我们班的,他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语,因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。放学后,我们经常在操场上踢足球。他跑得特别快,我追不上他。他是个优秀的学生,他不但各科功课好而且很友善、谦虚。他喜欢流行音乐,也喜欢古典音乐。
他家有三口人,他是独生子。父亲是个医生,母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕,但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他有一个梦想,就是将来当个律师。
这就是我的朋友,一个聪明、友好的男孩。老师和同学们都喜欢他。
高考的满分英语作文二:
Zhang Dong is my best friend. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. Besides,football is our favourite sport. We like watching football match. Zhang Dong works hard at his lessons. He often studies late into the night. No matter how tired he is, he insists on doing his homework. So he gets good marks in all his subjects. He loves popular songs and classical music, too.
There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dongs family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He dreams of being a lawyer in the future.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. I highly value the friendship with him.
张东是我最要好的朋友,他是个男孩。我们两个人都擅长英语,因此我们经常在课余时间用英语聊天。此外,我们两人都喜欢足球,爱看足球赛。张东学习很努力,他经常学习到深夜。不管他多么累,他都坚持完成他的功课,所以他各科功课都很好。他喜欢流行音乐,也喜欢古典音乐。
他家有三口人,他是独生子。父亲是个医生,母亲是个京剧演员。尽管张东家境比较富裕,但是他的穿着却十分朴素。他梦想将来当个律师。
这就是我的朋友,一个聪明、友好的男孩。我珍视同他之间的友谊。
高考的满分英语作文三
Dear Jane, Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs. Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, when praised, we reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners. Next, when receiving a gift, we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone’s health or success to show that we’re warm. Anyhow, different cultures, different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
亲爱的简,很高兴收到你的来信,欢迎你到中国来,七月。以下是一些中国习俗。首先,我们打招呼对方说“你好”或问这样的问题,“你去哪里?“或者”你很忙吗?“以表达我们的关心。其次,当赞美,我们回答“哦,没有!“或”我为表现出良好的礼貌。其次,当收到礼物时,我们通常会说:“这是不必要的”,除了“谢谢”以示礼貌,然后把它放了。最后,在宴会上,当我们喝到别人的健康或成功的时候,我们会大声地和触摸眼镜来证明我们是温暖的。总之,不同的文化,不同的风俗。如果你“在罗马做罗马人”,你会在这里享受更多的停留时间。我希望上面提到的可能是有益的,祝你旅途愉快。你的真诚,李华
高考的满分英语作文四
Li Hua is my good friend. We are classmates. He is tallest in our class. He is very kind and always ready to help others. We have many in common, so that we have many things to talk. For example, we both like playing basketball and we like the same basketball player Kobe. Besides, we both like cartoon very much. We always watch cartoon program together. At weekends, we oftenplay basketball. Whats more important, he studies hard. So do I. We can make progress together. He is a good friend.
李华是我的好朋友,我们是同学。他是我们班上最高的。他很善良,总是随时帮助其他人。我们有很多共同点,因此我们有很多事情可以交谈。比如说,我们都喜欢打篮球,我们都喜欢同一个球星——科比。除此之外,我们都很喜欢卡通。我们经常一起看卡通节目。周末的时候,我们经常一起打篮球。更重要的是,他学习很努力,我也一样。我们可以相互进步。他是一位好朋友。
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1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.
在这个迅速发展的世界里,对每个人来说,学好英语是非常重要的。
同样句型包括:It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.
2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.
你工作越努力,你取得的进步就越大。
(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...
(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)
3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献,世界会变得更加美好。
类似的句型还有:If necessary…, they can…
4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.
记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。
5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic
我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。
6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.
人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。
7. I had a great first impression of American people.
我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。
8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.
我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。
9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.
随着现代科技的迅速发展,互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。
10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.
大家应该尽可能的多读书。
11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.
由于实施了改革开放政策,中国变得更加繁荣了。
12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.
我们都需要呼吸清新的空气,我们都需要饮用洁净的水,我们都需要绿地来享受。
13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.
让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。
14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.
我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。
15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.
我们应该养成一个好习惯,明智地利用时间。
16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?
我的确想知道的是,他是否会在下个月出国?
17. Television is harmful to developing minds.
电视不利于开发心智。
18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized
孩子们都有很大的潜能,而父母却没有意识到这一点。
19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.
在过去的10年里,我们学校发生了巨大的变化。
20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.
那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。
21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quite half way.
这份工作太辛苦,差点使我半途而废。
(1)直接使用:so… that…
The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.
这份工作太辛苦、太无聊,而且没完没了,这使我非常累,差点半途而废。
(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有:
(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)
22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.
生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂,始建于1980年。
23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.
我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室,对老师和同学都同样开放。
24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.
我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。
25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇:increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.
工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人,而且他们有80%都是大学学历。
26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.
在校园内,学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。
27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.
现今,在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困,而无法供应他们上学。
28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.
人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视,因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。
29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.
到2008年,我们会看到北京像花园一样,有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。
30. How nice to hear from you again.
能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。
31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.
敬盼早日回复。
I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.
我期待与你早日相见。
32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.
如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。
33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.
不管你将来做什么,英语都是最重要的。
34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。
35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.
毫无疑问,玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。
36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.
显然,早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。
写作高手使用的高难度表达:
I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.
我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。
37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功。
38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.
吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.
有句名言说道:风暴使树木深深扎根。
41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.
很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友,刘翔。
42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.
出于英语教师世家的她,对英语有着特别的兴趣。
描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下:
diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的
modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的
43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.
我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。
44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!
我觉得电子字典很方便,但会使人们变懒。
45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.
总之,出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。
46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.
现在,我想这真是一次成功的经历,并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。
47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.
通过这次的地震,我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。
高级名言谚语活学活用。
解释:“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的,极具威力,然后再安在毛主席的头上,更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点,使判卷老师误以为真,根本不敢怀疑。于是,心想:“这个句子太棒了,我都没听说过!”
造句:In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.
48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.
如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客,我会非常乐意做你的导游。
49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.
如今,老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。
50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.
对于该问题的看法因人而异。
51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.
我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。
52. Thank you for your consideration.
感谢你的体谅。
53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.
我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。
We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.
如果你帮助我们小孩学英语,我们将感激不尽。
54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.
我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。
55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.
很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。
56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.
报告将在10月12日3:30在报告厅举行。
57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.
学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。
58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.
我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。
59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.
征服英语不亚于征服一座高山,都需要决心,勇气和毅力。
60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.
我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。
61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.
到目前为止,我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。
更多表示“决心”的高级句型:
I’m determined to…
I have made up my mind to complete the task.
62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.
这个城市位于长江畔。
63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
两星期前收到了你的来信,我真是太高兴了。
64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.
我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。
65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
最近,我们班展了开一场讨论,是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。
66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.
我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。
67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.
可以肯定,如果开车的人少一些,空气污染就一定会减少。
68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.
我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。
69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.
我们无法想象没有纯净的水,这个世界会变成生么样子。
70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
当我沿着公园路往东走的时候,有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。
71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
在大城市,有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。
72. Some people think that we should read extensively.
有一些人认为,我们应该有选择性地阅读。
73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.
在我看来,你结束留学后应该回国。
74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.
另一个原因,我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。
75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.
我们学校通常下午四点下课。
76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.
我很抱歉,明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。
77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟,只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。
78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.
你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。
79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.
好习惯是成功的捷径。
80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.
那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我,因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。
81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.
很多新的楼房建了起来,路也都拓宽了。
82. It is more than ten months since we last met.
从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。
83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.
每天帮助我复习功课,你真是太好了。
84. Nothing can live without air and water.
没有空气和水,任何东西都不能生存。
85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.
我宁愿住在农村,而不愿住在城市。
86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.
应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。
87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.
彼得每月留出一点钱以便购买一辆新汽车。
88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.
为了看完这本书,琳达直到午夜才睡。
89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.
早睡早起有益于健康。
90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.
越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。
91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.
布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师,她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛,她去过中国的各个地方。
92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.
5月8日,星期天,我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。
93. I think students should balance well between work and study.
我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。
94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.
在我们的生命中,友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。
95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
不言而喻,青春一去不复返。
96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.
最后而又很重要的一点,它必定给市民带来福利。
97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.
随着日益迅速的经济发展,更多的问题受到我们的关注。
98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern
保护森林引发人们的广泛关注.
99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…
就我而言,我赞同…的观点
100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.
不仅仅是为了我们,更是为了我们的后代,政府和普通市民应该联合起来,使这个世界变成更美好的家园。
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一.对比议论:
1、我同意这个计划。
I agree to/am in favor of the plan.
2、首先,建工厂会给人们提供不同的工作。
First, the building of the factory will provide people with different jobs.
3、其次,它可以省许多钱。
Second,it can save a lot of money.
4、最后,它不会太危害环境。
Last,but not least, it won’t do much harm to the environment.
5、我反对这个计划。
I don’t agree to the plan.
6、一方面,它会占去学校太多的空间。
On one hand, it will take too much space of our school.
7、另一方面,机器的噪音会影响我们的教学工作。
On the other hand, the noise of the machines will have bad effect on our teaching work.
8、总之,我认为这不是个好计划。
In a word, we don’t think it a good plan.
9、一般来说,我们必须特别注意这个问题。
Generally speaking, we must pay much attention to this problem.
10、在我看来,它不值得做。
In my opinion, it is not worth doing.
二.图画说明
1、这副图描写了我们的学校生活。
This is a picture of our school life.
2、有一个男孩站在那儿。
There is a boy standing there.
3、有一些学生在打篮球。
Some students are playing basketball.
4、另外一些人在彼此交谈。
Others are talking with each other.
5、甚至有一个人在打太极拳。
There is even one who is practicing taichi.
6、阳光明媚。
The sun is shining brightly.
7、天空蔚蓝。
The sky is blue.
8、微风吹拂。
The wind is blowing softly.
9、鸟儿在树上欢快地叫着。
The birds are singing happily in the trees.
10、树木充满了生机。
The trees are full of new life.
三.数字说明
1、关于这个问题,大家意见不同。
Opinions are divided about/on the problem.
2、百分之八十的学生喜欢校服。
Eighty percent of the students like school uniforms.
3、他们认为校服设计得好。
They think the uniforms are well designed.
4、其余的人对校服不感兴趣。
Therest are not interested in school uniforms.
5、三分之一的学生住得离学校近。
One third of the students live near their school.
6、一半多学生要花50分钟才能到学校。
More than half of the students spend 50 minutes on the way to school.
7、很少的人坐小汽车上学。
Few of them go to school by car.
8、2020年,这个城市将会有三百万辆汽车。
There will be 3 million cars in the city in 2020.
9、他们每天花一个半小时做作业。
It takes them an hour and a half to do their homework every day.
10、他们学了一年多英语了。
They have learned English for more than a year.
篇3:2024年高考英语作文预测mydream
全文共 1315 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has their own dreams, I am no exception. But as a child dream too much, I dont know where to begin. Until one day, I put the entrepreneurs as my dream. From that day on, I strive for my dream.
I remember one day, my parents and I went for a walk flow river side. Dad suddenly asked me: "daughter, whats your dream?" "Mom, what are the career can choose? I said. "Lawyers, doctors, nurses, staff, scientists, inventors, etc., can be." Mother said. I thought for a while and said, "mom and dad, my dream is to: great entrepreneur." With that, I thought to myself: do entrepreneurs should read mba, you want to read mba will be admitted to the university, want to be admitted to the university study. I promise I will earnestly study and implement remote and great dreams.
When I dream, I will continue to struggle for their other dream. Make all his dreams had come true, leaving only a trace of regret. Ill take "struggle for your dream" for the purpose of this sentence.
每个人都有自己的梦想,我也不例外。但小时候的梦想太多了,我不知从何开始。直到有一天,我把企业家当作我的梦想。从那天开始,我为我的梦想而奋斗。
记得有一天,我和父母一起去流溪河边散步。爸爸突然问我:“女儿,你的梦想是什么?”“妈妈,有什么职业可以选择?”我说。“律师、医生、护士、公司职员、科学家、发明家等,都可以。”妈妈说。我沉思了一会儿,说:“爸爸妈妈,我的梦想是:伟大的企业家。”说完后,我心里想:要做企业家就要读工商管理,想读工商管理就要考上大学,想考上大学就要认真学习。我保证一定会认真学习,实现遥远而伟大的梦想。
当我实现梦想时,我会继续为自己别的梦想而奋斗。让自己所有的梦想都实现,让自己只留下一丝遗憾。我会以“为自己的梦想而奋斗”这句话为宗旨。
篇4:热点高考英语作文:光盘行动
全文共 1315 字
+ 加入清单导语:谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。节约是我们中华民族的优良传统,因此我们不应该浪费一点食物。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
As is shown in the picture, two men had a big dinner in a restaurant, but much of the food was left and some was even untouched at all. When the waitress asked them to pack the remaining food, they felt very surprised, thinking that it was unbelievable for them to do things like that with too much money in their pocket.
It is a pity that many people act like the two men in the picture. In my view, we should pack the leftovers when we have meals outside. As we all know, saving is a fine tradition for our Chinese people and therefore we shouldn’t waste a bit food. Also, there is not enough food in the world and there are many people starving. In addition, we students should form the habit of saving food and give away some to the people in need. Finally, we have the responsibility to help people around us realize the importance of saving.
Only in this way can we build up an economized society and live a happy and healthy life.
【参考译文】
正如图中所示,2人在餐厅吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐,但大部分食物都是左,有的甚至根本没有被人动过。当女服务员要他们把剩下的食物打包时,他们感到非常惊讶,认为他们做的事情是难以置信的,在他们的口袋里有太多的钱。
这是一个遗憾,许多人的行为就像在照片中的男人。在我看来,当我们在外面吃饭的时候,我们应该把剩下的食物包好。我们都知道,节约是我们中华民族的优良传统,因此我们不应该浪费一点食物。还有,世界上没有足够的食物,有很多人在挨饿。另外,我们学生应该养成节约食物的习惯,并且给人们一些需要的人。最后,我们有责任帮助我们周围的人们意识到储蓄的重要性。
只有这样我们才能建立一个节约型社会和健康愉快的生活。
篇5:高考状元与广告Collegeentranceexamandadvertising英语作文
全文共 1084 字
+ 加入清单高考过后,总有一些学习用品商家千方百计在高考状元身上下工夫,让状元们说是使用过他们的产品后才取得了优异成绩。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,谈谈自己的看法。内容应包括以下要点:
1. 简要描述这种现象;
2. 给状元们提一点建议。
注意:
1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2. 参考词汇:
状元 Number One Scholar;
产品 product;
适合suitable
参考例文:
After the college entrance exams,some companies that sell learning products are always trying to do anything they can to make full use of Number One Scholars in order to sell their products.
在大学入学考试之后,一些销售学习产品的公司总是试图做任何他们可以充分利用的数量的学者为了推销他们的产品。
In fact,its not easy for students to become Number One Scholars. Most of them succeed not because of the products,but their proper way of learning and hard work. Every student has his own way of studying,so the Number One Scholars experience may not be suitable for all the students. Most important of all,not all of these products are good enough to help us study.
事实上,学生成为一个数字是不容易的。他们中的大多数成功不是因为产品,而是他们正确的学习和努力工作的方式。每个学生都有自己的学习方式,所以,一个学者的经验可能不适合所有的学生。最重要的是,并不是所有这些产品都足以帮助我们学习。
I do hope that Number One Scholars can think of the poor students instead of themselves only.
我真希望这个数字有一个学者能想到的贫困学生,而不是自己。
[高考状元与广告College entrance exam and advertising英语作文范文
篇6:2024高考英语作文预测网上交友
全文共 1067 字
+ 加入清单网上交友
假设你是李华,在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事 :希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
(1)你怎样得知David的愿望;
(2)你愿意成为他的朋友;
(3)你打算如何帮助他;
(4)你盼望他的回复。
注意:(1)电子邮件的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数;(2)词数:100左右。
Dear David,
Ive learned__________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【猜题理由】交友话题为学生熟知,也符合当前对学生的情感教育方向。利用此话题加强学生英语交际能力的培养,较好地体现了"语境生活化、任务真实性、行为个性化"的设计特点。
【构思点拨】该命题属于应用文,需符合电子邮件的格式要求。在写作过程中要抓住要点提示,做到不遗漏、不重复,并注意保持书信语言的简洁性和精炼性。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Ive learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. Im glad that you show such great interest in China and I would like to be your friend.
I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, Ill teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?
Im looking forward to your reply .
篇7:高考话题英语作文:信心与希望
全文共 982 字
+ 加入清单导语:当我们面对他们时,没有什么比希望和自信更重要。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!
【参考译文】
众所周知,我们生活在一个充满各种困难的充满活力的世界里。当我们面对他们时,没有什么比希望和自信更重要。有信心,我们可以发现有时问题并不像我们想象的那样“庞大”。
以我们大多数人为例,高考似乎是一个可怕的怪物。因此,有些人放弃,有些人坚持。在我眼里,有信心,有正确的评估困难,以及充分的准备,尝试和发挥你的力量,然后我们将克服所有的问题和挑战。总的来说,我相信我们年轻人应该以正确的方式面对困难。没有什么是不可能的,勇敢的去做!
篇8:高考英语满分作文Neverjudgeabookbyitscover不要用它的封面来判断一本书
全文共 1463 字
+ 加入清单还记得这句英文谚语"Never judge a book by its cover"吗 下面四幅图就描述了这样一个故事.假设你是第一幅图中左边的男孩,站在右边的是你的朋友Jack,你的妈妈一开始因为他的穿着打扮很不喜欢他,可是后来又发生了什么呢
请根据图画写一篇日记,并适当加以评论,发表自己的看法.
词数:100
Possible Version:
March 21th Sunday Sunny
My new friend Jack is a fashion follower who often wears strange clothes and long hair. But my mother drove him away from our flat at the first sight yesterday. She thought he was a bad person, although she didnt know him at all.
However, mom totally changed her mind this morning. When we were walking down the street near our home, we witnessed an accident. A boy was hit by a car when he was walking across the road with headphones. Many people saw it, but at first no one knew how to help. Then someone rushed forwards and covered the boy with his coat to keep warm. He looked after him well until the ambulance came. It was Jack! His calmness and seasoned first aid skills moved mom. She went and apolpgized to Jack for her former attitute, and told him that he was always welcome to our home.
That gives me a lesson. The appearance may reflect ones interest, but it isnt the symbol of ones quality. We should never judge a book with its cover.
可能版本:
三月二十一日星期日晴
我的新朋友杰克是一个时尚的追随者经常穿着奇怪的衣服,长长的头发。但是我妈妈昨天第一眼就把他从我们的公寓里赶走了。她认为他是个坏人,虽然她根本不认识他。
然而,今天早上妈妈完全改变了主意。当我们走在我们家附近的街道时,我们目睹了一场事故。一个男孩被一辆汽车撞在马路上时,戴着耳机。很多人看到它,但在第一,没有人知道如何帮助。然后有人冲了上去,用外套盖住了那个男孩,以保持温暖。他很好的照顾了他,直到救护车来了。这是杰克!他冷静和老练的急救技巧感动了妈妈。她为她以前对杰克的态度道歉,并告诉他,他总是欢迎我回家。
篇9:2024年高考英语作文万能句子
全文共 775 字
+ 加入清单This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先,……;第二,,……;第三,……
Why did …? For one thing …,for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会……?一个原因是……,令一个原因是……;或许其主要原因是……
I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即……,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言,……
It was obvious that …很显然,….
It may be true that …, but it doesnt mean that …
可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……
It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldnt ignore that …
认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……
There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……
篇10:2024高考英语作文素材:母亲节贺卡祝福语英文版
全文共 1903 字
+ 加入清单Here’s a little token of my appreciation for all that you have done for me over the years.这是我一点小小的心意,感谢您这么多年来所付出的一切。
There may be moms all over the world, but you’re the only one that matters to me.全世界也许到处都有妈妈,但您是我惟一最在意的。
Thank you for everything over the years, mom.母亲节快乐!妈妈,谢谢您这些年来所做的一切。
Mother’s Day is a time when mothers discover how well their children can prepar e breakfast.母亲节是妈妈们发现她们的小孩会把早餐做得很好的时刻。
We would love to fix breakfast for you mom, but we think it would be safer for us all if we took you out.妈妈,我们很乐意为您准备早餐,不过我们想,如果带您上馆子,会比较保险一点。
Moms should get more than a special day, they should get a medal of honor.妈妈们应该得到的不只是一个节日,她们该获得荣誉勋章。
When I was sick, you always stood by me.当我生病时,您总是陪伴着我。
Considering the quality of food that children make their mothers on Mother’s Day, it becomes apparent that without moms, their kids would starve to death.想想母亲节时,孩子们为妈妈所做的早餐;很明显的,如果没有妈妈,孩子们将会饿死。
I want to wish you a happy Mother’s Day.祝福您母亲节快乐。
Roses are red, violets are blue. This card on Mother’s Day is especially for you.玫瑰是红色的,紫罗兰是蓝色的。这张母亲卡是特别给您的。
Thanks for being there, mom. Happy Mother’s Day.谢谢您不断地扶持我。祝您母亲节快乐。
Sometimes it may not seem like it, but I really do love you.有时候好像不是这样,但是我真的爱您。
Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mother’s Day.今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您。母亲节快乐。
We may not be angels all of the time, but we do appreciate what you do.我们也许不是一直都像天使那样乖巧,但我们确实感谢您的教诲。
On this day we honor you, dear mother.亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬。
On this day we all sit back and think about how much our mothers do for us.在这一天,我们将会抽空休息一下,想想妈妈们帮我们做了多少事。
We will try to make this your best Day ever.我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节。
Though it is hard to tell you sometimes, I do love you dearly, mom.虽然有时要告诉您并不太容易,但是我真的非常爱您,妈妈。
This card comes from the whole family. Happy Mother’s Day.这张卡片是我们全家合送的。祝您母亲节快乐。
I’ve tried many times to tell you, but I’ll say it again: I love you mother.我已经告诉您许多次了,但是我将再说一次:我爱您,妈妈。
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篇11:高考英语作文预测:私家车的利与弊
全文共 1804 字
+ 加入清单导语:最近几年,随着我国经济的快速发展,越来越多的人们拥有私家车。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Recently years, with the rapid development in our country, more and more people own their private cars. Some people think that private cars should be restricted, while others think that private cars should be encouraged. As far as I concern, I think owning a private car has both advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, private cars do bring the owners convenience and comfortable. If you have a car, you don’t need to take the bus or subway to work. You can image how crowded and slow when you get on a bus, especially during the rush hours. With your own car, you just don’t need to worry about this problem. What’s more, you can go to any places at any moment with your private car. Traveling by car is very comfortable and flexible. You can stop as you pleased and don’t need to worry about others feeling. I guess this is the biggest advantages of private cars. On the other hand, the disadvantages of private cars are obvious. The noises that produce by cars are unbearable, the exhaust gas that cars give off are bad for people’s health. With countless cars on the street, people find it becomes harder to find a parking spot. What’s worse, tens of thousands people are killed or injured in the traffic accidents. To sum up, private cars provide us with convenience as well as harm. Whether or not afford a private car depends on personal details.
【参考译文】
最近几年,随着我国经济的快速发展,越来越多的人们拥有私家车。一些人认为应该禁止私家车,而一些人认为对其应该鼓励。就我看来,私家车有利有弊。 一方面,私家车给车主们提供了方便和舒适。如果你有了车,就不用搭乘公车或者挤地铁上班了。你可以想象在上下班高峰期公车上是多么的拥挤,速度是多么的慢。有了车,你就不必担心这个问题了。更棒的是,你随时可以开着你的车到任何地方去。开着私家车去旅游方便又灵活。你想停就停,不用担心其他乘客的感受。我想,这就是私家车最大的好处吧。 另一方面,私家车的缺点也显而易见。车子发出的噪音难以忍受,排出的尾气也对人的身体有害。不计其数的车涌入街头,人们发现找位置停车比以前困难多了。更为糟糕的是,成千上万的人死于或者在车祸中受伤。 总的来说,私家车带给我们方便的同时,也带来了伤害。至于是不是要购买私家车,取决于个人情况。
篇12:申请信高考英语作文
全文共 839 字
+ 加入清单Dear Sir/Madam ,
I’m lihua from class one ,senior two 。 I am wring to apply for the opportunity to help the students in chenxin Hope School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation 。 Meanwhile , I can learn how to get along well the students and benefit the whole school.
I’m kind , easy-going and always ready to help others 。 I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence 。 English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests 。 So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need 。 Besides ,I ‘ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories , singing songs ,playing games and so on 。
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity 。
Yours Sincerely ,
Li hua
篇13:英语高考作文漂亮句子之数字说明
全文共 650 字
+ 加入清单1、关于这个问题,大家意见不同。
Opinions are divided about/on the problem.
2、百分之八十的学生喜欢校服。
Eighty percent of the students like school uniforms.
3、他们认为校服设计得好。
They think the uniforms are well designed.
4、其余的人对校服不感兴趣。
Therest are not interested in school uniforms.
5、三分之一的学生住得离学校近。
One third of the students live near their school.
6、一半多学生要花50分钟才能到学校。
More than half of the students spend 50 minutes on the way to school.
7、很少的人坐小汽车上学。
Few of them go to school by car.
8、2020年,这个城市将会有三百万辆汽车。
There will be 3 million cars in the city in 2020.
9、他们每天花一个半小时做作业。
It takes them an hour and a half to do their homework every day.
10、他们学了一年多英语了。
They have learned English for more than a year.
篇14:高考英语
全文共 722 字
+ 加入清单Good morning , ladies and gentlemen ,
Some of us are having problems with our parents , as they often look into
our school bags or read our diaries . I fully understand why we are not
comfortable about it , but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are
checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble .
They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we
might do the same . Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing
it all wrong . My suggestion is : Tell them we want them to trust us as much as
we’d like to trust them .If you don’t think you can talk to them , write them a
letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it .
Thank you!
篇15:2024高考英语作文预测哥本哈根会议
全文共 3250 字
+ 加入清单As world leaders are in Copenhagen (哥本哈根)this month,talks about climate change are gathering steam. But is climate change the most pressing threat(威胁)for mankind?
Write an essay to show your opinions on the most immediate threat for mankind.
Directions:
1. About 200 words
2. Support your position with reasoning and examples.
3. Give the essay a proper title by yourself
Love Makes Beauty
With the fantastic spur both in industry and economy,the past 100 years has seen how modernization and civilization has affected mankind. Recently,Copenhagen is being a focus for its Climate Change Conference. A majority of people hold the belief that climate change is the pressing threat for mankind.
However,acknowledging the great abundance of harms that the changing climate will bring,I‘d say the most immediate threat is just ourselves. I always imagine a view of life filled with fresh air and various flowers swung in gentle wind. But the reality shows this is a real fantasy. With the fantastically developing industry and the rising number of personal cars,not only the air but also the water is at risk universally. For example,what used to be a pride for Ruianees was Tang River,the clean and clear mother river of Ruian. But with time going by,it was seriously polluted and gradually turned into the biggest block of development. What upsets us most is that such a situation is spreading countryside. It seems that citizens on the earth care little about their land,which directly causes further consequences.
How can we deal with environmental problems?There is no doubt that this topic is complicated and unstable as well. But the irreplaceable way,in my thought,is love,love for the earth. It is love that makes beauty,and nothing else will do.
Some say love is a river that drowns the tender reed;some say love is a hunger,an endless,aching need. I say love is a flower,and you,are the only seed.
Heal the world
Nowadays,world leaders are in Copenhagen talking about climate change. Who has such a strong power to gather them from busy work?It‘s our mother——the Earth that has told her kids to start to heal the environment for the pressing threats they are facing now.
It‘s commonly thought that lots of countries are blind to the protection of environment while developing the country. And as the quality of life has developed,many families have its own car. As a result,more and more CO2 has caused the earth to be a “Green House”。If no measure is taken,a large number of kids won’t see the lovely and beautiful snow in winter before long.
To my delight,some people have been concerned about the environment. The movie >is just a good example. It took me 150 minutes to watch the movie. At the same time,I spent a long time considering the meaning which the movie wants to tell people. When the world is at an end,can anyone heal themselves?It‘s obvious that the answer is No. It’s commonly accepted that what the director wants to tell people is that we should take measures to beautify the environment at once or we‘ll die soon.
In a word,the environment pollution is a matter of life and death——a matter no country can afford to ignore. People all over the world are supposed to spare no effort to heal the world. Let‘s take action from here and now!
篇16:2024高考英语作文预测_myhobby
全文共 1677 字
+ 加入清单Everyone has their own hobbies, I was no exception. My hobby numerous as the stars in the sky, but I most like to read books.
Since I was young, I love reading, where I can see, in bed, go to the toilet see, going to travel in the car, even to eat. Mom and dad always hope me the real little bookworm go out to play for a while, but I dont know a person in the neighbourhood, so the book has become my best friend. Remember once I went to a bookstore reading a book, with my mother agreed to go back until five o clock, but the sight of the wide variety of books, I swim in the sea of stories to boil. I picked up a book "laughing cat diary", read, and was attracted by Yang hongying style of writing. Time like off the string arrow, blink of an eye by six o clock, I remembered that time, is on his way back, met a mother, I look with my mom out in a rash.
A few days ago, I was in the toilet for more than half an hour, I was so angry mother nose crooked, is this why? Because I see in the toilet, "meaning Lin" youth version by that mom took her killer response - animal roars at fellow players.
However, a yard to yard, reading is a good thing. Now, one in the class, my composition since school reading quantity reach millions of words. The classmates, let us read more books!
大家都有自己的爱好吧,我也不例外。我的爱好像天上的星星一样数不清,可我最喜欢读书。
我从小就爱看书,在哪儿都看,在被窝里看、上厕所看、去旅游时在车上看、就连吃饭也不放过。爸爸妈妈总希望我这个不折不扣的小书虫出去玩一会儿,可是我在小区里一个人也不认识,所以书成了我最好的朋友。记得有一次我去书店看书,跟妈妈说好五点回去的,但一看到琳琅满目的图书,我禁不住在故事的海洋里熬游。我拿起一本《笑猫日记》,读着读着,被杨红樱的文笔吸引住了。时间像离了弦的箭,眨眼到了六点,我才想起时间,正在回去的路上,遇到了妈妈,我贪看竟把妈妈急得团团转。
前几天,我在厕所里呆了半个多小时,气得老妈鼻子都歪了,这是为什么呢?因为我在厕所里看《意林》少年版看入迷了,以致于老妈使出了她的必杀技---狮吼功。
不过,一码归一码,读书可是件好事。现在,我的作文在班里数一数二,自上学以来阅读量达到数百万字。同学们,让我们一起多读书吧!
篇17:2024年高考英语写作句型
全文共 3085 字
+ 加入清单英语书面表达是体现个人水平的一个主要因素,也是各种考试考查的重要内容。怎样才能提高英语写作能力呢?方法是多种多样的,但最重要的是夯实学生的语言基本功,打好坚实的基础。语言的基本功在写作教学中体现为准确应用词汇和正确使用句型结构的能力,语句的组织衔接和谋篇布局的能力。在学生真正地掌握语汇用法的前提下,比较行之有效的方法是把句型教学放在写作情景中进行教授,培养学生的应用和运用能力。
在句型结构教学中,应尽多设计一些写作情景,使句型结构服务于教学,这样不仅提高了学生的写作兴趣,也加强了教学的目的性和针对性。为了提高写作能力和写作水平,本文主要归纳和总结了英语写作中常用的一些重点句型。希望能给同行们在教学中,学生在学习上有一些帮助。
以形式主语it引导的句型。
句型1.
It (so) happened(chanced) that +clause. = sb. happened /chanced to do sth. =sb.did sth. by chance. 如:
It happened that he was out when I got there. 当我到那儿时,碰巧他不在。=He happened to be out when I got there.= It chanced that he was out when I got there= He was out by chance when I got there.
句型2.
It seems that sb. do/ be doing/ have done/ had done= Sb. seems to do/ be doing/ have done/to be done/to have been done(还有动词appear等可这样使用)如:
It seemed that he had been to Beijing before.他好象以前去过北京。=He seemed to have been to Beijing before.
句型3.
It is / was+被强调的部分+that(who)+剩余的部分.如:
It wasn’t until he came back that I went to bed.直到他回来我才睡觉。(一定要注意被强调句型中的谓语动词否定的转移)。 It was because he was ill that he didn’t come to school today.只因为他有病了今天没有来上学。(只能用because而不能用for, as 或since)
It is I who am a student. 我确实是个学生。(句中am不能用are来代替。)
句型4.
It is high time (time/ about time)+ (that) 主语+should do / did+其它。(从句中的谓语动词用的是虚拟语气。)如:
It is high time that we should go / went home.我们该回家了。
句型5.
It is / was said ( reported…)+that+从句. 如:
It was said that he had read this novel.据说他读过这篇小说。=He was said to have read this novel.
句型6.
It is impossible / necessary/ strange…that clause.(从句中的谓语用should+do / should have done,其形式是虚拟语气。)如:
It is strange that he should have failed in this exam.真奇怪,他这次考试没有及格。
句型7.
It is + a pity/ a shame…that clause.(注意从句中的谓语动词用should do或should have done的形式,但should可以省略。)如:
He didn’t come back until the film ended. It was a pity that he should have missed this film. 他直到电影结束才回来。他没有看到这部电影真可惜。
句型8.
It is suggested / ordered/ commanded /…that +clause.(从句的谓语动词用should do, 但should可以省略。)如:
It is suggested that the meeting should be put off.有人建议推迟会议。
句型9.
It is/was+表示地点的名词+where+从句。(注意本句不是强调句型,而是以where引导的定语从句。)如:
It was this house where I was born.请比较:It was in this house that I was born.(后一句是强调句型。)
句型10.
It is / was +表示时间的名词+when+从句。(注意本句型也不是强调句型,而是以when引导的定语从句。)如:
It was 1999 when he came back from the United States. 请比较:It was in 1999 that he came back from the United States.
句型11.
It is well-known that+从句。如:
It is well-known that she is a learned woman.众所周知,她是个知识渊博的妇女。
句型12.
It is +段时间+since+主语+did. 请比较:
It was +段时间+since+主语+had done. 如:
It is five years since he left here.他已经离开这儿五年了。
It was five years since he left here.(同上)
注意下列句型的翻译:It is five years since he lived here.他从这儿搬走已经有五年了。
句型13.
It +谓语+段时间+before+主语+谓语.( before引导的是时间状语从句。) 如:
It wasn’t long before the people in that country rose up.没有多久那个国家的人民就起义了。
It will be three hours before he comes back.三个小时之后他才能回来。
句型14.
It is +形容词(possible, impossible, necessary等) +for+ sb.+ to do. 如:
It is impossible for me to finish this work before tomorrow.我明天之前完成此工作是不可能的。
句型15.
It is +(心理品质方面的)形容词+of + sb. +to do.= 主语+ be +形容词+to do.(常用的形容词有:kind, stupid; foolish, good, wise等。)如:
It is kind of you to help me.=You are kind to help me.你真好给我提供了帮助。
篇18:高考英语
全文共 788 字
+ 加入清单Should We Help Strangers?
Recently our class had a discussion aboutwhether we should help
strangers.Differentstudents have different opinions.
Some think we should try to help strangers. Helping others is a virtue,and
helping others is helping ourselves.Wemay come across some trouble and need
others’ help some day.If everyone isn’t willing to help us just because we are
strangersto them,it’s hard to imagine what our world will belike.
However,some areafraid that helping others can sometimes bring us
trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost
ofkindness.
In my opinion,we should tryour best to help others when they are in need of
help,butwe should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone
tries a little kindness,ourworld will be full of love.
篇19:2024高考英语作文高分技巧:议论文三段式
全文共 2531 字
+ 加入清单随着越来越多的省市进行自主命题,开放式、半开放式作文愈加受到青睐。因为此种题型可以更准确地考查考生是否能使用英语准确表达自己的观点,充分体现了对实际解决问题的能力的考查。此类作文多为议论文性质,所以议论文的写作显得愈加重要根据议论文的特点,最好采用三段式论证法,第一段提出问题(总写),即主题段,陈述自己的观点;第二段用论据进行正反两个方面的论证(分写),即拓展段,摆出支撑论点的论据;第三段得出相应的结论(总写),为总结段,总结自己的观点。类似中文里(总——分——总)的写法。这种写法可以使文章层次分明,结构清晰。
1.在议论文三段式里,首先要写好开头,好的开头是成功的一半。开头写得好,会给阅卷者留下美好的印象,有吸引力。任何一篇文章都应该做到主题鲜明,中心突出,提出论点要开门见山,紧扣题目。高考作文篇幅短小,因此开头不能冗长拖沓,务必要点题,即说清楚文章的人物、事件和作者的观点。
2.要深化中间段。中意部分是文章的主体,需要用具体的事例、细节来阐释主题句,因此中意的部分应该是具体的、详细的,不可泛泛而谈或点到即止,安需要围绕主题句的内容而展开,不能谈论与之无关的东西,即论述主题要具体而又有说服力。常用方法有:比较法、举例法、归纳法、推理法、对照法和驳论法。
3.把好结尾关,避免虎头蛇尾,使结尾缺乏力量。好的结尾会深化主题,进一步强化阅卷老师的良好印象。文章最后可以回到开头提出的中心思想上,达到再次肯定强调的效果;或者引用格言或名人名言总结全文,即言简赅又有较强的说明力;也可用几句话概括全文的内容,并进一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者观点。
4.注意一些关联词的使用,使文章更连贯顺畅、条理清晰。
表因果的:as, as a result, because of, for, due to, owing to, thanks to, etc.
表意思的:in one’s opinion, have different ideas on, my idea/view is, it strikes me that, etc.
表比较的:unlike, in the same way, on the contrary, etc.
表结论的:in brief, to end/ sum up, in other words, in conclusion, in short, in summary, etc.
5.注意文章的层次和段落。
为了更好地考试中运用三段式的写作手法,考生在平时的学习中要进行严格、系统的训练,练习题材要丰富,选票质量要高,讲求写作效果,训练时要限时完成,只有严格的训练,才能确保考试中的超水平发挥。
【典例1】根据以下关键字,并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。
【范文】
We want to have our own time.
As we all know, today students have more and more homework. They spend their spare time doing the homework and taking lessons. Therefore, students have no time for themselves. In my opinion, students should have more time to develop themselves.
First, students should have time to relax and play. It doesn’t mean that they will waste time. They also can study and learn from playing. After doing homework for a long time, it is necessary to have some time to relax. As saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” We don’t want to dull boys. Second, we should have our own time in order to make our body strong enough. This can be helpful in our further study.
In short, I want to say, students should have their own time to develop themselves.
专家点评:这篇范文充分体现了议论文的三段式的精髓,从以下几个方面我们可以充分感受到它和闪亮之处。
1.结构合理,富有条理性。文章分为三段。第一段简要描述了图画内容,直接点题,观点明确;第二段提出了自己的观点并列瘵出论据支撑论点;第三段简明扼要地概括了自己的观点。
2、开门见山,没有在图画上费太多笔墨,简要描述后直接引入主题:Students should have more time to develop themselves.
3、文章描述得非常清晰,有层次感,逻辑性强。段落间和句子间连贯自然,过渡巧妙。作者充分地发挥了连词及副词的功能,例如:as we all know, therefore, in my opinion, first, second, in short等。
谋篇布局
1.仔细审题,确定体裁格式,选择文章主体时态,弄清中心人称。
2.确定文章的中心论点。
3.围绕中心论点列出提纲,选好论据。
4.选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。
5.利用所列短语、句型组句成文,打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达,根据自己所掌握的词汇,在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇,使文章增色。
6.将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。
7.最后做一次全面检查,注意文章的文体、格式是否正确,要点是否全面,是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误,是否有单词摭写错误,字母大小写是不是恰当,词数是否符合要求。
篇20:2024高考英语作文:网络公开课
全文共 1262 字
+ 加入清单导语:现在网络公开课很盛行;网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;对此你有什么建议吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
话题:Open Courses
1. 现在网络公开课很盛行;
2. 网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;
3. 我对此的建议。
范文:
Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years. Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses. Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.
The courses have brought many benefits to people. Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us. Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world. But that can also be a problem. Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.
In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons. But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.
【参考译文】
在线开放课程近年来越来越受欢迎。以下全球知名大学喜欢耶鲁和哈佛,在中国一些大学也开始提供网上开放课程。这些课程吸引了来自不同职业的班级的人们。
这些课程给人们带来了许多好处。许多课程都是由国外的大学提供的,从而为我们提供了新的思路。通过他们,我们可以跟上世界各地的人们在想什么。但这也可能是一个问题。一些课程可能不适合中国学生,因为文化差异,可能会造成混乱的中国校园。
在我看来,网上开放课程是有用的,我们应该利用它来扩大我们的视野。但我们也要记住,要有自己的思想,不要被错误的想法洗脑。