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5972024年高考英语作文结尾写作技巧
全文共 1914 字
+ 加入清单一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型
1.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…
2.Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that…
3.Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that…
4.All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…
5.From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…
6.To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that…
7.In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is…
8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that…
9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that…
10. It is believed that…
二、表达个人观点的句型
1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.
3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that…
4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.
5. In my opinion/view, we should…
6. As for me, I…
7. As I see , …
8. From my point of view, …
9. Personally/ I think…
10. My view is that…
11. I think/consider…
12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of…
三、表达建议的句型
1. It’s high time that we tried every possible means to put an end to…
2. It’s really high time we took measures to solve the problem of/put an end to…
3. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to…
4. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of…
5. There is no easy solution to the problem of…, but… might be useful.
6. There is no quick answer to the question of…, but … might be helpful.
7. It is necessary that effective/proper/quick actions/steps/measures be taken to…
8. It’s suggested that great efforts be made to…
9.To check/control the tendency/trend is no easy task, and it requires a good/deep awareness/consciousness/understanding of…
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篇1:高考英语作为必备万能句:2024年高考英语作文必背万能句
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+ 加入清单语作文必背万能句
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It"s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.
3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… Peoples opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our
day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why
中 间 段 落 句 1.相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。
On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time,they say____.
2. 但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。 But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example,____.Worst of all,___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our country"s development and construction. First,______.What"s more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can______
5. 面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面......。
Confronted with______,we should take a series of effective measures to______. For one thing,______For another,______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures will certainly______.
7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于……
Why______The first reason is that ______.The second reason is
______.The third is ______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。 However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as ______.
9. 尽管如此,我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下:
I fully agree with the statement that ______ because______.
结 尾 句 1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____.
2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future.
3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)…….。
But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______.
4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为…… Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
篇2:2024高考英语作文:网络公开课
全文共 1262 字
+ 加入清单导语:现在网络公开课很盛行;网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;对此你有什么建议吗?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
话题:Open Courses
1. 现在网络公开课很盛行;
2. 网络公开课有不少好处,也存在一些问题;
3. 我对此的建议。
范文:
Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years. Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses. Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.
The courses have brought many benefits to people. Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us. Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world. But that can also be a problem. Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.
In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons. But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.
【参考译文】
在线开放课程近年来越来越受欢迎。以下全球知名大学喜欢耶鲁和哈佛,在中国一些大学也开始提供网上开放课程。这些课程吸引了来自不同职业的班级的人们。
这些课程给人们带来了许多好处。许多课程都是由国外的大学提供的,从而为我们提供了新的思路。通过他们,我们可以跟上世界各地的人们在想什么。但这也可能是一个问题。一些课程可能不适合中国学生,因为文化差异,可能会造成混乱的中国校园。
在我看来,网上开放课程是有用的,我们应该利用它来扩大我们的视野。但我们也要记住,要有自己的思想,不要被错误的想法洗脑。
篇3:高考英语作文预测留言条
全文共 1313 字
+ 加入清单假设你是李华,星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动,你去找他,但他没有在家 ,你给他留言说明要求,内容如下:
(1)9:30在学校门口集合;
(2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等);
(3)自带午饭,骑自行车前往。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ming,
______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性,2010年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。
【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活化的原则。应注意下面几点: (1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条:(2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开门见山。
【参考范文】
Dear Li Ming,
This Sunday well go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, well meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and dont forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because well stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, youll phone me at once.
Li Hua
篇4:关于英语四级图表作文复习技巧
全文共 846 字
+ 加入清单图表作文就是升级版的看图说话,在大学英语四级考试中,看图作文出现的概率相对来说要小一些,所以考生平时练习得也少一些,考试时就不容易把握住写作技巧,针对这个问题在此为大家总结了图表作文写作的一些技巧,希望对大家有帮助。
图表作文不像其他作文一样题干会给出提纲,我们需要看图来寻找信息确定文章写作思路,这无形中又增加了难度,尽管图表作文与一般作文有很大不同,但是基本的写作思路还是可以归结为以下三个步骤。
简要描绘图画直观内容
写好图表作文的第一步就是要把自己眼睛直观看到的图画内容简单的描述出来,这点在题干中也有强调。如果考生英语水平一般,无法组织好自己的语言,在对图画内容进行描述时,可以饮用图画中人物的对话。此外,这一段的描述简要描述即可,不用发散和深挖。这样一来,如果考生没看懂图画内容也可以照抄题干。
阐明观点并深层探讨
图画作文的观点一般在题干中都会清楚地给出来,考生在写作中除了需要看懂图画中的对话还要仔细审清题干,在写作过程中,考生阐明观点之后的思路与一般的六级英语作文提纲型写作一致,针对作文的观点可以先举例说明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象可能导致的后果等;还可结合数字、研究、名言等材料对这个观点进行论证和深层探讨。总之,这一段就是要考生来发散和深挖内容。
总结陈述观点并给出合理建议
跟一般的提纲作文一样,图画作文的最后也要对全文进行观点总结,考生还要根据不同的图画内容和主题给出相应的建议或者评价,这一点有点类似解决问题型的作文结尾。对于第三部分的写作,考生一般都很熟悉,无论哪种作文,除了书信体以外,作文结尾一段都会要求考生给出自己的观点或意见,图画类的也一样。
英语四六级考试改革说明现在考试也开始注重创新和改变,所以作文类型也会灵活多变,不会仅仅拘泥于传统的提纲写作,考生在复习时要时刻保持对创新的热情,做到无论考试有什么变化,自己都能有所准备。
掌握了这些图表类作文的写作技巧大家就算入门了,除了这些技巧之外,考生平时依然不能放松语法和词汇的复习,希望大家考试顺利过关!
篇5:高考英语作文带翻译精选篇
全文共 1383 字
+ 加入清单It is quite usual that one meets failures, for ones life can never be
plain sailing. However, different people hold different attitudes towards
failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and
they can not endure failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously
dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again.
遇到失败这是很平常,因为人的生命不可能一帆风顺。然而,不同的人对失败持有不同的态度。获取某些东西失败对有些人来说是一个沉重的打击,他们不能承受失败。当他们失败,他们将非常的沮丧并且不能鼓起勇气再试一次。
However, others think it natural to meet failures in ones career.
Therefore, they are psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will
not be frustrated. Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me,
Im in favor of the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is
also the mother of success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he
will get success in the future. Furthermore, ones life can never be smooth
sailing; it must be full of difficulies and setbacks. If one is daunted by
difficulies and frustrations, he will always be a failure. However, if one holds
a positive attitude toward failure, he will overcome difficulties and
frustrations to win victory.
然而,其他人认为,在自己的职业生涯中的败是很自然的。因此,他们的心理有所准备。当他们遇到失败,他们不会失意。相反,他们将继续迎接新的挑战。就我而言,我赞成后一种观点。失败是一个可怕的事情,但它是成功之母。如果一个灵感来自失败的教训,在大多数情况下,他将在未来获得成功。此外,一个人的生活永远不会是一帆风顺的;它必须是充满困难和挫折。如果一个人被困难和挫折吓倒,他将永远是一个失败者。然而,如果耸对失败持有积极的态度,他将克服困难和挫折,赢得胜利。
篇6:2024年高考英语作文万能句子及模板
全文共 766 字
+ 加入清单比较
1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.
2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages
that...
4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim
that...
5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6.Like anything else, it has its faults.
7.A and B has several points in common.
8.A bears some resemblances to B.
9.However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are
...
篇7:大足石刻高考英语作文
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+ 加入清单dazu county, located in the southeast of sichuan province, is 271 kilometres away from chengdu and 163 kilometres away from chongqing. "dazu" here means "harvest and abundance (dafeng, dazu)".
the work of dazu rock carvings began in the first year of yonghui in the tang dynasty (650a.d.), and continued until the ming and qing dynasties. now, it enjoys equal popularity with theyungang and longmen grottoes. the general term of "dazu rock carvings" refers to all the cliffside carvings in dazu county, which includes the carvings in beishan (including beita), baodingshan, nanshan, shizhuanshan and shimenshan. baoding grotto, 15 kilometres northeast of the county seat, is the largest and best preserved one and is a key cultural relic site under state protection.
there are more than 50,000 buddhist, taoist and confucian rock carvings and 100,000 characters of inscriptions dotted around dazu. the carvings not only include the statues of buddha and bodhisattva but also include that of monarchs, ministers, military officers, high and low-ranking officials, jailers, executioners, monks, rich and poor people, and folk art performers. the earliest grotto was carved in the early tang dynasty and most of them have a history over 1000 years.many of the carvings in baoding grotto reflect religious doctrines and another set of carvings reflects confucianism, specifically filial piety. what the carvings offer to visitors is not only the wonderful enjoyment of the magnificent art but a buddhist teaching like this: one can free himself from earthly worries by self-cultivation and does not need to go beyond his own inner world to
find the truth of buddhism. there are also many other carvings at the site that tell buddhist doctrines through the lives of ordinary people. with rich images as well as inscriptions, the dazu grottoes are regarded as an art treasure house that fully reflected the society, philosophy, religion and folklore of that time. in 1999, unesco listed dazu stone carvings as a world cultural heritage site. one point to be noted is that the dazu grottoes are the only ones that were implemented according to an overall design among over 100 grottoes in china.
篇8:英语高考作文:中国的骄傲
全文共 2049 字
+ 加入清单"… 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 Ignite! Go! "On October 15, 2003, China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.
Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.
As the worlds largest developing country, China is more than proud of making its own contribution to human beings outer space exploration. Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and social development. The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.
“5,4,3,2,1。点火!发射!”2003年10月15日,中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船,进入了轨道。
喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后, 巨大白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起,蔚为壮观,慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。
作为世界上最大的发展中国家,中国为其对人类的空间探索作出自己的贡献感到非常骄傲。同时,这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。
We will never forget the day when China launched its first manned spacecraft into orbit on October 15, 2003 from the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Centre in Northwest Chinas Gansu Province.
Spraying a mass of orange flames, the large, white Long March II-F rocket carrying the Shenzhou-V spacecraft and Chinas first astronaut Yang Liwei soared spectacularly skyward, gradually becoming a bright ball before vanishing into deep space.
Our dream becomes reality. Though the Shenzhou-V circled the Earth 14 times within 22 hours and 18 minutes, it has clearly displayed Chinas spirts of devotion, co-operation and pursuit of the unknown. Meantime, it will turn out to be an important driving force for the countrys economic and social development. The successful launch of Shenzhou-V ushered in a new chapter in space history.
我们永远也不会忘记2003年10月15日。中国在其西北部的甘肃省酒泉卫星发射中心首次发射了载人宇宙飞船,进入了轨道。
喷射出一团橘黄色的火焰后,白色的长征n-F火箭运载神州5号宇宙飞船和中国第一个宇宙飞行员杨利伟腾空而起,蔚为壮观,慢慢地变成一个亮球消失在茫茫的太空中。
尽管神州5号在22小时18分钟内仅仅绕地球转14圈,但它清楚的体现了中国的奉献、合作和探索未知的精神。同时这一事件将证明对中国的经济和社会发展起到重要的推动作用。神州5号宇宙飞船的发射成功揭开了太空历史的新篇章。
篇9:高考优秀英语作文:AboutWeight-losing
全文共 905 字
+ 加入清单导语:现如今很多女孩子追求漂亮都会选择减肥,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Nowadays weight-losinghas become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty-looking, they try many different ways of losing weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise,some eat medicine ,others even turn to operation for help. As a result,a lot of products have come into being,such as special medicines, tea and equipment. They are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, its understandable that women seek beauty, but they should do it in a proper way. Taking exercise is the way that I most favor. But the other methods are likely to do harm to peoples health more or less.
【参考译文】
如今减肥已经成为中青年女性的热门话题。为了使自己看起来漂亮,他们尝试了许多不同的减肥方法。有的节食,有的运动,有的吃药,有的甚至转手术求助。因此,许多产品应运而生,如特殊药品、茶叶和设备等。它们用不同的方式和不同的工作,但有些有副作用。
在我看来,女人追求美是可以理解的,但她们应该以正确的方式去做。锻炼是我最喜欢的方式。但是其他的方法或多或少会危害人们的健康。
篇10:中高考英语作文素材:中间过渡篇
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1、On thecontrary, there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time, they say____.
相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。
2、People may havedifferent opinions on taking exercise is closely related to health.
人们对…可能会有不同的见解。
3、Attitudes towards(drugs) vary from person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
4、There are differentopinions among people as to…
关于…。 人们的观点大不相同。
5、Different peoplehold different attitudes toward (failure).
对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
6、A lot of peopleseem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
7、It is commonlybelieved that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
8、Many peopleinsist that…
很多人坚持认为…
9、I think / Idont think that …我认为,…… / 我认为……不
I wonder whether … 我想知道是否……
He doesnt think I should stop him joining theclub. 他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。
10、so …that … 如此 …,以至于…
At that moment, I was so upset that I wantedto give up.
当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。
篇11:三册经典对比论证手法在英语高考作文中的运用
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+ 加入清单在新概念三册中,对比论证的方法反复被运用到,至少出现了五次,分别在篇章L12,L23,L38,L41 和L54的第一段出现。如果对这五篇文章中的对比论证段落仔细研读,会发现这些段落有着几乎完全一样的结构,有规律可循,所以对比论证方法应该是三册学习中不可忽略的一个部分。
这里我们就拿第12课为例。对比论证出现在了第一段。作者在第一段开门见山提出了论点:Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island(我们许多人对于荒岛生活有一种不切实际的想法)。之后作者讲了两种截然相反的想法:一种想法是imagine it to be a sort of paradise(认为荒岛是天堂);另一种想法是Life on a desert island is wretched(荒岛生活很可怕)。最后一句话是个总结句。作者正是通过两种呈对比的想法来论证“人们对荒岛生活有不切实际的想法”这一观点。需要读者关注的是,在两种成对立的想法之间作者用了一句非常漂亮的过渡句:The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. (另一种想法恰恰相反)。于是,一个结构清晰严谨、论述有理有力的段落跃然纸上。
读罢上述五篇文章的第一段,不难发现它们都是由两种相反的观点组成,而在相反的观点中间,作者都运用过渡句,这里对对比论证的过度表达稍作总结:
The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. (L12)
on the other hand (L23)
but (L38)
…be only part of the picture. (L41)
however (L54)
了解了对比论证之后,我们不妨思考下如何运用这种手法,毕竟学以致用才是我们的最终目的。如果针对当前的英语高考作文题,我们完全可以让它在我们的考场上发挥作用。这里以上海2004年和2005年的英语高考作文题为例,看看这一新概念三册中反复出现的手法如何作为应试技巧运用到考试中。
2005上海英语高考作文题:
古人云:“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)。通过描述你生活中的一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。
写作文首先要做的是审题,这个题目要求你在写文章时做到两点:你的观点是支持“天生我才必有用”;用你生活事例论证。如何引出自己的观点呢?我们可以运用对比手法,可以先就题中话题先找到两个对立观点,然后再抛出自己的观点。值得一提的是,考官在批阅一片作文时首先会注意考生是否偏题。那我们如何避免偏题呢?一个很好的方法就是在开头就告诉改卷老师你扣题了。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段:
People have formed an unrealistic picture of their talents. Some imagine themselves to be unconquerably intelligent. On the opposite, others tend to consider themselves a drop in the ocean, powerless and useless. There is an element of truth in both ideas, but I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent, as it can be proved by my own experience.
先写人们对自己的天赋形成了不切实际的看法,然后写两种极端的看法:一种是认为自己绝顶聪明,另一种是自己如沧海一粟,微小无用。在这两个相反的观点之间有了on the opposite来过渡。这正是运用了对比论证的手法,但是别忘了上述的两点考题要求。在列举了两种相反的观点之后就可以抛出自己的观点:I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent.而后自然用过一个as it can be proved by my own experience的句子过渡到以下的事例对这一观点进行论证。如此一写,完全不用担心是否扣题的问题,因为在这一文章首段告诉了考官自己的观点,并且通过一个过渡句说明下文内容是起到论证作用的事例。当然不要忘记这里是通过对比的手法来引出自己的观点的。
上述高考题属于比较严肃的话题,如果遇到的话题涉及生活事件呢?下面再列举另一种风格的高考作文题。
2004上海英语高考作文题
老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。
我们首先还是要捉摸清楚考题的要点:你的决心;你的想法。负责班级墙报貌似是个小话题,但是我们完全可以运用上对比论证的手法。比如在写自己的决心时,不妨先写一般人对这样一个老师指派的任务是何种态度,而后引出自己的决心。而在写一般人的态度时完全可以用上对比的手法。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段:
People show different attitude when appointed to be in charge of wall newspaper. Those who regard the task as a great burden would decline it while those who long to serve their fellow students would accept it with great pleasure. As for me, it is a golden opportunity to practice myself, so when the challenge comes, I will accept it.
可以先用一句话总起人们会有不同的态度,而后写两个呈对比的观点:一种是认为这是个负担因而拒绝承担;另一种是渴望为民服务因而欣然接受。中间运用的过度是while,这样可以将呈对比的做法浓缩在一个句子里,句子结构的复杂性提升。然后通过as for me来表达自己的态度,也就是我的部分决心。
当然,不要忽略作文题中的另一个非常重要的要求,即该作文是以日记形式出现,所以不妨将将这一比较正式的段落放在文中而非文首。
这里暂以两个高考作文题为例,运用上新概念三册中的对比论证手法,希望可以给大家一些启发,帮助大家真正地将这一结构手法活学活用。
篇12:高考英语作文热门话题之食品安全
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+ 加入清单我们的身体健康与食品安全息息相关,但现在我们却面临越来越多的食品问题如染色馒头、毒奶粉。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文,简要分析食品问题形成的原因并提出相应的解决措施。
染色馒头the industrial dye of steamed bun 毒奶粉the notorious milk powder
It is universally acknowledged that the safety of food is closely related to our health. As the famous saying goes, “we are what we eat.” However, things often go contrary to our wishes since we are faced with a series of food safety problems at present, ranging from the industrial dye of steamed bun to the notorious milk powder.
There are several reasons for this severe problem. First and foremost, many manufactures produce fake food of poor quality in order to get higher profits. In addition, the relevant laws and regulations are imperfect and even ineffective. Last but not least, the public especially customers from poor families, are not alert enough to the safety of food.
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures must be taken to improve the situation. Firstly, it is essential that relevant laws and regulations on food safety should be enforced. Secondly, the relevant department should attach more importance to supervising监督 the manufacturers. Also, the public should be trained to be alert to food quality, believing our efforts will make an enormous difference. Only by taking these actions can the problem be coped with successfully in the nearest future.
篇13:2024高考英语作文素材:母亲节的英文祝福语
全文共 1275 字
+ 加入清单Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mothers Day.
今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您。母亲节快乐。
We will try to make this your best Mothers Day ever.
我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节。
On this day we honor you, dear mother.
亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬。
Where would we be without you, mom?
妈妈,没有您我们将流落何方呢?
On this day we all sit back and think about how much our mothers do for us.
在这一天,我们将会抽空休息一下,想想妈妈们帮我们做了多少事。
Ive tried many times to tell you, but Ill say it again: I love you mother.
我已经告诉您许多次了,但是我将再说一次:我爱您,妈妈。
Though it is hard to tell you sometimes, I do love you dearly, mom.
虽然有时要告诉您并不太容易,但是我真的非常爱您,妈妈。
We will try to make this your best Mother’s Day ever.
我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节.
我也许并不常挂在嘴上,但我真正爱您。
There are little things that I should have said and done to show my gratitude, but it is appreciated what you do.
尽管我为表示谢意所说的和所做的都那么少,但同样也是表达对您所做一切的感激之情。
I dont take the time to tell you this often, but I love you, mom.
虽然我经常没有时间告诉您,但我真的爱您,妈妈。
Sometimes I cry and make you sigh, but you know that I love you so.
有时候我哭泣而使您叹息,但您却知道,我是如此地爱您。
To mother on Mothers Day: Thank you for all of the wonderful things that you h ave done for me.
母亲节给妈妈:谢谢您为我做了那么多奇妙的事。
Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mother’s Day.
今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您.母亲节快乐.
On this day we honor you, dear mother.
亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬.
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篇14:高考英语满分
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+ 加入清单寻找失物信 The letter for looking for the lost
Directions: You have just spent a weekend staying at the St. Regis Hotel in Beijing. When you get home you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write to the manager of the hotel:
1) Enquire whether the bag has been found,
2) Give any relevant information about the bag and its contents,
3) Ask the manager to contact you immediately if the bag is found and tell him/her how the bag can be sent to you.
Dear Mr./Ms. Manager:
I stayed in Room 608 in your hotel on August 10, 2015. Could you please check your Lost and Found Department and see if my bag is there?
The bag is a small black, leather document case. Inside it, you will find several business cards and a photo of Miss Lin Daiyu. These things are not very valuable in money terms, but they have a lot of personal value.
I would appreciate it if you could contact me as soon as possible. If you could send the bag to me by EMS, I would be most grateful. Thank you for your help.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
尊敬的先生/女士经理:
我在你的旅馆里住了608个房间,2015年8月10日。你能检查一下你的失落和发现的部门,看看我的书包在那里吗?
这个袋子是一个黑色的,皮革的文件盒。在里面,你会发现几张名片和一张林黛玉小姐的照片。这些东西在金钱方面不是很有价值,但他们有很多个人价值。
如果你能尽快联系我,我将不胜感激。如果你能把这个包寄给我,我会很感激的。谢谢你的帮助。
你真诚
李明
篇15:2024年高考英语作文热门话题之四---H7N9流感
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+ 加入清单假设你是李华,从电视上看到H7N9流感仍然在上海流行,并有少部分人因此而丧生,你为你正在上海上学的笔友Anderson的健康与安全担心。请你给他写一封信询问他的情况,并给他提出防护建议。
要点:
1、询问(他的健康状况;人们对流行疾病的反应:是否感到恐惧等) 2、建议(至少三点)
注意:词数:120左右;
Dear Anderson,
_________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 参考范文:
Dear Anderson,
From TV I know there are still many H7N9 flu cases reported recently in Shanghai and some people are even killed as a result. I’m so worried about you. So I’m writing to get to know some information about you. Are you all right ? Are there any H7N9 flu cases
in your school ? Are you still afraid of this widespread disease ? To stay away from the disease, I strongly suggest you doing the following things. Firstly, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Then it would be a good idea to wash your hands more often to keep them clean. Besides, open the window to have more fresh air in the room. And last but not least, eat more fruits and vegetables to keep yourself fit and strong. So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease ! Take care and you’ll be OK. Yours, Li Hua
2015年高考英语作文热门话题之五---雾霾 假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾(haze),非常担心,写E-mail询问有关情况,请回复。回复应包括以下要点: 1.实况描述;
2.对生活造成的影响;
3.成因简析与教训;
4.你个人的情况。
要求:
1.词数100-120;
2.email的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear Mike,
Thank you very much for your concern. ______________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ Regards! Yours, Li Hua
参考范文:
Dear Mike,
Thank you very much for your concern. Last months several places in Beijing were blanketed with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children and seniors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life we have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air. Regards!
Yours, Li Hua
篇16:有关流感的高考英语作文
全文共 1259 字
+ 加入清单导语:流行性感冒(简称流感)是流感病毒引起的急性呼吸道感染,也是一种传染性强、传播速度快的疾病。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
As we know, a growing outbreak of H1N1 flu has been sparked in many countries. An increasing number of cases are being reported every day。
It’s thought that H1N1 flu spreads in the same way that regular seasonal influenza viruses do, that is, spreading from person-to-person, mainly through the coughs and sneezes of people who are sick with the virus。
Faced with this severe disease, here are some everyday measures we should take to stay healthy. First, cover your nose and mouth with a tissue when you cough or sneeze. Wash your hands often with soap and water, especially after you cough or sneeze. Avoid touching your eyes, nose or mouth. Germs spread that way. If you get sick, stay home from work or school and limit contact with others to keep from infecting them。
Finally, H1N1 flu is not a terribly deadly disease, which is curable. So, don’t be nervous and just keep calm as usual。
【参考翻译】
正如我们所知,在许多国家已经爆发了H1N1流感的爆发。每天都有越来越多的病例被报告。
人们认为甲型H1N1流感的传播方式和常规的季节性流感病毒一样,也就是说,人与人之间的传播,主要是通过病毒感染者的咳嗽和打喷嚏。
面对这种严重的疾病,这里有一些日常的措施,我们应该保持健康。首先,在咳嗽或打喷嚏时用纸巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴。经常用肥皂和水洗手,尤其是在你咳嗽或打喷嚏之后。避免接触眼睛、鼻子或嘴巴。细菌传播的方式。如果你生病了,留在家里工作或学校,并限制与他人接触,以防止感染他们。
最后,甲型H1N1流感不是一种致命的疾病,可以治愈。所以,不要紧张,像往常一样保持镇静。
篇17:2024年新课标2卷高考英语作文真题
全文共 795 字
+ 加入清单适用地区:青海、西藏、甘肃、贵州、吉林、宁夏、内蒙古、黑龙江、新疆、云南、海南、辽宁、广西
假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结语已为你写好。
Dear Lucy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇18:2024高考英语作文带翻译mydream
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+ 加入清单Yesterday, we had a discussion. The topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.
昨天,我们有一个讨论。的主题是。我的梦想是什么?每个人都有自己的梦想。一些人想成为教师,其他人想成为科学家。我的梦想是成为一名医生。
My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. Then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. They took me there. I was saved.
我的朋友问我为什么。我告诉他们我的故事。当我还是个小男孩的时候,我很弱。我曾经非常发高烧。我的父母送我去医院,但医生可以为我做什么。然后我的父母听说有个很好的医生在另一个城镇。他们把我带到那里。我得救了。
A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.
一个好医生可以挽救人的生命。从那时起我就决定要成为一名医生。我知道要成为一名医生是不容易的。但我决心努力学习。我相信我的梦想会成真。
篇19:高考英语满分作文保护动物
全文共 1195 字
+ 加入清单Animals are our good friends. People should be friendly to them. But now, many people in China as well as in the world kill animals in order to get money. Its well known that there are many kinds of rare animals in China, such as pandas, golden monkeys and so on. Some people catch or kill them. They use their furs and skins to make clothes and shoes or eat their meat. As a result, a lot of rare animals have disappeared.
What a pity!
At present, our government have made some plans to punish these people. Recently, some nature parks have been built. Lots of money collected for protecting them. For example, some students put on perfom ances or have other kinds of activities to collect money for rare animals.
Its our duty to protect wild animals. As nature is like a big family, man and animals must live together in it peacefully. We must keep the balance of nature. If we do like this, our world will become better and better.
动物是人类的好朋友,人们应该善待它们,但现在,中国和世界上的许多人为赚钱而捕杀动物。众所周知,中国有许多珍稀动物,如熊猫、金丝猴等。一些人捕杀它们是为了用它们的皮毛制衣制鞋,或是为了食用它们的肉。
结果大量的珍稀动物死亡了,真可惜呀!
目前,我国政府已制定出有关严惩不法分子的法律;近来又建起了一些自然公园;人们:也捐款来支持保护动物的活动,如,有些学生通过义演或用其它方式为保护珍稀动物积极筹款。
我们有义务保护野生动物,因为自然就像一个大家庭,人类和动物必须和平共处:我们必须保持生态平稳。
如果人类能这么做,这个世界就会越来越好。
篇20:2024高考英语作文常用素材:英语短语
全文共 1392 字
+ 加入清单1. 经济的快速发展
the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长
the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard
3.先进的科学技术
advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战
be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为
It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果
the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注
arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8.不可否认
It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9.热烈的讨论/争论
a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题
a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点
a totally different argument
12.一些人 …而另外一些人 …
Some people… while others…
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言
As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致
reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持
be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点
argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用
play an increasingly important role in…
18.对…必不可少
be indispensable to …
19.正如谚语所说
As the proverb goes:
20.…也不例外 …
be no exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响
exert positive/ negative effects on…
22.利远远大于弊
the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages
23.导致,引起
lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象
a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 / 成就感
sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神
sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界
widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28.学习知识和技能
acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担
financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素
take many factors into account/ consideration