我的假期英语作文70词初二（合集20篇）

什么是“低碳生活”呢?带着这个疑问，我来到了绍兴科技馆，里面图文并茂地展出了许多关于“低碳生活”的图片，其实，所谓的“低碳生活”就是减少二氧化碳的排放，选择健康地生活，我们每一个球人都应该从节约资源开始做起。

What is "low carbon life"? With this question, I came to the Shaoxing science and Technology Museum, which displays many illustrations of "low carbon life" picture, in fact, the so-called "low carbon life" is to reduce carbon emissions, to choose a healthy life, we each ball people should start from the conservation of resources.

首先从节约用电开始说起吧，发电会消耗许多的能源，像我们这里是用烧煤来发电的，这样就会污染环境。所以平时冰箱里要少存放食品，用完电器后要及时拔掉插座，把家里的白炽杰换成节能灯等。

First, from the conservation of electricity to start, power will consume a lot of energy, like we are burning coal to generate electricity, it will pollute the environment. So usually the refrigerator storage of food less, run out of time after pull out the electrical socket, the home of the incandescent, replaced with energy-saving lamps etc..

其次，我们出行时要少开车，多坐公交车和骑自行车，这样可以大大减少二氧化碳的排放。保护了环境，减少了雾霾的产生，更能有效防止地球变暖后，北极的冰川融化，涨平面升高等。

Secondly, when we travel to drive less, take the bus or riding a bicycle, which can greatly reduce carbon dioxide emissions. To protect the environment, reduce haze, can be more effective to prevent global warming, polar melting glaciers, rising levels of higher.

最后，我们还要节约用水，洗涮时要少用清洁剂，减少水的污染，生活用水要做到一水多用，比如洗脸水可以用来冲厕所，淘米水可以用来浇花等

Finally, we need to save water, wash to use less detergent, reduce the pollution of water, living water to do water use, such as washing water can be used to flush the toilet, washing water can be used to water the flowers.

总而言之，“低碳生活”的方式有很多，少用一次性的碗和筷子，用环保袋来代替塑料袋，用手帕来替代纸巾。

To make a long story short, "there are a lot of low carbon life", use less disposable bowls and chopsticks, use environmental protection bags instead of plastic bags to replace the paper towel, handkerchief.

地球只有一个，需要大家共同的爱护，走近低碳，让世界更加灿烂。

There is only one earth, we need to work together to take care of, to low carbon, to make the world more brilliant.

How time flies, it is a year, this morning, the winter holiday will begin school. I like past holidays, there will always be on the first day of the holiday started, make a plan for the feasible, purpose is in order to be able to make myself in the holiday, have a more happy and substantial, and can learn more knowledge outside, and after a joy.

I want to develop my interests and hobbies, I want to practice calligraphy, together with dad grow up can also write good word. See the TV news report, understand the society. I more exercise and keep healthy.

I want to insist on keeping a diary, composition. Before, I write diary "dry", mainly is the lack of observation; Later, Im going to look at 30 minutes a day of extra-curricular, put some thoughts and recorded during winter vacation, and some meaningful person or thing written in the article. See some excellent composition, learn other peoples writing strengths. To find on the Internet to write good articles, learn from somebody elses learning. In addition, I have a brochure, called "diary of a small material", at ordinary times is trivial to observe, record some wonderful things, writing an article that is a good material! When the time comes to write something, then dont worry about "theres nothing to write"!

Visiting relatives and friends, do civilized manners, respect their elders, to the relatives and friends about their own learning, to their peers share their experiences in learning.

This is my winter vacation plan, I not only want to strengthen learning, also want to do more to help parents, do you think I do this winter holiday plan?

时间过得真快,转眼又是一年,今天上午，学校开始放寒假了。我与以往放假时一样，总会在假期开始的第一天，订一个切实可行的计划，目的是为了能够使自己在假期中，过得更加的充实和快乐，并能学习到更多的校外知识，欢欢喜喜喜过个年。

我要培养我的兴趣和爱好，我要跟爸爸一起练练书法，长大以后也能够写一手好字。多看电视里的新闻报道，了解社会。我还要多锻炼身体，保持身体健康。

我要坚持写日记、作文。以前，我写的日记“干干的”，主要就是缺少观察;以后，我打算每天看三十分钟的课外书，在寒假期间把一些所见所闻记录下来，并把有一些有意义的人或事写成文章。看一些优秀的作文，学习别人的写作长处。在网上查找写的好的文章，向人家学习学习。另外，我还要一个小册子，起名为“日记小材料”，平时发生一点小事都要留心观察，把一些精彩的东西记录下来，那可是写文章的好材料哟!到时候要写东西，那就不愁“没事可写”了!

走亲访友，做到文明礼貌，尊敬长辈，向亲戚朋友介绍自己的学习情况，向同龄人交流学习心得。

这就是我的寒假计划，我不但要加强学习，也要多帮爸妈做事，大家觉得我这个寒假计划怎么样?

My holiday

I have a good winner vacation!

In my winner vacation ，I often did my homework， and helped my mother clean rooms.

I sometimes went shopping with my friends . We had a good time! I also watched TV and played puter games. During Spring Festival ，I visited my grandparents.

I was very happy ，I think my winner vacation was very interesting!

My vacation

This years summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside， where I saw mountains fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village， the water in which was quite clear.

I kept a diary every day. Besides doing farm work， I help the children in the neighborhood with their lessons. All of them showed interest in English. They could read write wellthey could hardly understand simple English. So every day in the morning I spent about two hours helping them improve their listening spoken English. They all made great progress. Their parents all thought highly of me. I now realize that knowledge is very needed in the countryside.

We’ve been busy working in the past three years. The summer holiday is coming and I want to do something interesting and relaxing.

First of all, I’m going to visit my grandparents because I haven’t been with them for a long time. Next, I plan to go to the seaside, swim in the sea and lie on the beach. Then, I’ll practice playing table tennis which is my favorite sport. Finally, I’ll read some interesting books.

I’m sure I can enjoy myself during the summer holiday. I’m looking forward to it.

An annual one National Day long vacation finally arrived, I go out with my father and mother, visit places of interest, enjoy the great culture of the motherland. Stores the door hung balloons and colorful flags, red, yellow, green... Is permeated with a festive atmosphere. Inside is buzzing, carried out a series of promotional activities. The street people mountain people sea, riding car also want to be a long queue for tickets. Scenic visitors like a long dragon, countless. Men, women, and children should enjoy, people took advantage of the holiday come out to play. The parking lot, hotel, shopping mall must be very considerable.

National Day is a happy day, peoples living standards improve really fast. In our motherland mothers arms. Happiness, happy growth, I wish the motherland mother always beautiful, always prosperous and wish the motherland prosperity every year, the rich!

一年一届的国庆长假终于到了，我和爸爸妈妈一起走出家门，游览名胜古迹，领略祖国的伟大文化。商店门口悬挂着气球和彩旗，有红的、有黄的、有绿的……洋溢着喜庆的气氛。里面人声鼎沸，开展一系列促销活动。街上人山人海，就连坐车买票也要排着长长的队伍。风景区的游人犹如一条长龙，不计其数。男女老少竟乐在其中，人们都趁这个节日出来游玩。停车场、饭店、商场一定十分可观。

国庆节是一个快乐的日子，人民的生活水平真的提高的很快。我们在祖国母亲的怀抱中。幸福、快乐的成长，但愿祖国母亲永远美丽、永远繁荣，愿祖国一年比一年兴旺、发达!

Today, as I have nothing to do, my father decides to take me to the gym. There are people playing all kinds of sports. I see my father play badminton and he teaches me how to play. It is so easy for me to learn, after a while, I can play with my father. I fall in love with this sport, I will play it on the weekend.

今天,当我无事可做的时候, 爸爸决定带我去健身房。人们在玩各种各样的运动。我看到我的父亲在打羽毛球,他教我怎么玩。这对我来说很容易学习,过了一会后,我可以和父亲一起打。我爱上了这项运动,我会在周末去玩。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Post-holiday Syndrome Among Students. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 很多学生在开学伊始都会出现假期综合症

2. 出现这一现象的原因

3. 我的建议

范文：

Post-holiday Syndrome Among Students

With the gloomy prospect of returning to school, many students could suffer from post-holiday syndrome, which refers to a general feeling of depression before returning to campus life, which is caused by irregular lifestyles during the holiday. Symptoms include fatigue, lack of appetite and concentration, irritability and a feeling of helplessness.

Various reasons can account for it. But most important of all, a large number of students tend to overindulge themselves in eating, merrymaking and playing around during the holidays, which makes it difficult to adjust to their routine study schedule and life pace on the campus.

My suggestions to deal with this syndrome are as follows. First, exercising and sticking to a normal schedule over the holidays will make a difference and nip post-holiday syndrome in the bud. Besides, it pays to return a few days earlier before the semester starts. The early return seems to have kept the holiday blues at bay.

[英语作文:假期综合症

My experience in working is not too long, but it is a bumpy experience.

A weight of less than ninety of the furniture I chose this profession, I have often been thin people bullying and indifference, and no longer call these I dont care, naive I thought that as long as the sincerity to pay, will service our weaknesses will be accepted, which in the eyes of others like it never happened.

My job is to give the furniture edge, every day I carefully to each board edge, to the class two, 2 to 3 meters and the bed, wardrobe, bookcase, small drawers for ten cm. In the face of the big 2, 3 meters long. I always try to make up for their own strength, so let the boss see have been shot, the boss asked not to put on the table, from the Paizi underground picking up, this alone is me, even physical good people also fear is it is very difficult, someone said, that time I luckily escaped unharmed.

And once we took the bull to feed the real pull the material, because of my physical strength can not suddenly fell away, again by the boss, then how this did not have the strength to hate myself. When the machine was bad, I had to blow my temper. I had a face when I didnt throw the board, and I had to bear it. Who called us a part-time job. Whos patience is limited, the boss see I placed the board edge on the table, and said angrily: I couldnt remember, to another factory made you open it, I always couldnt, Ill give you the boss fight.

Although I have been laid off, the heart is always a bit awkward, but I am also free at the same time, there is a loss. Some things can be held and put down.

Here I call on the brothers and sisters of the whole society, and people who have the same experience with me, and sometimes life should be simplified. You can pick it up, and you can put it down. Let the migrant workers live with dignity!

Today, I did housework for grandmother. She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently. And she will feel happy and become better. Suddenly, an idea hit me that it’s terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others’ opinions. Once again, I make a decision to be a good girl.

i spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. i used to run about every day in previous  summer vacations， but this summer vacation i simply could not afford to do so. i would soon be in the last year of my high-school education and would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations. though those examinations were still a year away， i had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things i had learned at school and this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this. at first i was rather dismayed at the thought of this， but later i thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer i could count on  endless happy summers to e. with this in mind i then set to work like anything and only occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. i was not at all bored by this kind of life， for i was sustained by a hope.

A Day to Remember

It was Sunday. Our teacher Mr Zhu led us to a park nearby.Usually we go to the park to spend our holiday. But today we went there to take part in voluntary labour.

We got there at nine oclock. Mr Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working.

The students in Group One planted trees and watered flowers. The studentsin Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourist. They also cleaned the benches in the park. I was in Group Three. We went to the childrens playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.

At about eleven we finished working. We met at the gate of the park. We all felt tired but very happy.

初二英语作文：Beijing Opera

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera. Beijing Opera is very popular in China. It has a history of more than 200 years. During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera. In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing. Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration. In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes. The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera. Now is the performance. I hope you will like it.

初二英语作文：Why Do We Study English?

English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. It is spoken by nearly three hundred million people： in England, the United States, Australia, Canada and many other countries. It is one of the working languages at international meetings and is more used than the others. It is said that 60 percent of the worlds radio broadcasts and 70 percent of the worlds mail are in English. Millions of books and magazines are written in English, too. English is really a bridge to knowledge. With the help of English we can learn modern science and technology faster and better form the developed countries. In this way we can serve our country better.

初二英语作文：Spring Festival

The Chinese New Year is called Spring Festival, it usually comes in February. There is a name for each year. It may be called the year of the dog or the year of the monkey. And this year is the year of the cock.

Before the Now Years Day, the Chinese people usually give their houses a general cleaning. On the last day of the old year, there is a big family dinner. All members of the family try to be present at the meal. On the first day of the new year, people go to visit their relatives and friends. As a rule, children are given some money to buy things they like.

People often have a good time during the Festival.

初二英语作文：How Cities Began

Do you know how cities began?

Long ago, the world had only a few thousand people. These people moved from place to place, hunting animals for food. No one knows how or when these people learned about growing food. But when they did, their lives changed. They began to live near one another. And so the first villages grew. Many people came to work in the villages. The villages grew very big. From there the cities began. joozone.com

When machines came along, life in the villages changed again. Factories were built. More and more people lived near the factories. The cities grew very big.

初二英语作文：Early Rising

Early rising benefits us in many ways.

First, it helps to keep us fit. We all need fresh air. But air is never so fresh as early in the morning. Besides, by taking morning exercises we can improve our health.

Second, it can help us in our studies. In the morning we can learn more quickly.

Third, it can enable us to plan our work for the day. We cannot work well without a proper plan. Early rising can also give us enough time to get ready for our work..

So we say that those who always get up late should make great effort to get up early.

I like the summer holidy so much.I look forward to summer holiday every year.Last summer,I went to Shen zhen for my holiday,which is also a city of seashore like Haikou.I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the afternoon.The sky is blue,the air is fersh.Wherever you go,You can always see the green trees,the neat grasses and the colourful flowers.They were really wonderful.Shen Zhen has a lot of tall buildings.And it is a modern city.

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year.Playing basketball is always my favourite,so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together.Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

If you ask me what my favourite summer holiday will be like,traveling aound the only answer.I hope that one day I could meet different people and vist different places of interest.

I wish I could have two long holidays in a year,what about you?

[中学生假期英语作文

May Day Holiday at last came! I have lood forward to it for a long time. Because I studied very hard in my school life and L was always thinking of having a holiday and relax myself.

During this holiday, at first I spent two days finishing my homework. Then I spent three days visiting my relatives. At last I spent two days reviewing my lessons.

It was fun to communicate with my relatives,especially my cousin Li Ping.Li Ping and I are very good friends. We have a lot in common.But he lives in another city which is far from mine. So we seldom have a chance to play together.

This holiday, I went to his city and we spent two days togrther. He ledme to many places of interest in his city. And together we played many games. we talked a lot about our schools,our school lives and our friends. We also talked about the best ways to learn well, especially about how to learn English well. Because he was good at English, he gave me some useful advice on it. How I wish I could stay with him for a longer time!

The virus has no lover. Every change of the epidemic affected the hearts of

the people of the whole country and even the people of the world: neighboring

Japan not only did not refuse Chinese tourists to enter China, but also gave a

large number of medical materials to our country; overseas students tried their

best to raise masks and transport them back to China at the first time; medical

students and nurses from all over the world left their families and rushed to

the front line to cure the disease and save the people, and they worked day and

night, tired and trapped Lying on the table and resting on the ground for a

while, Huzhous 83 year old grandfather made a living by picking up rubbish, but

he did not hesitate to donate the ten thousand yuan saved by frugality; an uncle

from Anhui ran into the police station, threw 500 masks, turned around and left,

silently giving his love

Happy winter vacation life winter holiday will be over, back to the more than 30 days of life, there is a lot of memorable and pleasant things.

"Chinese New Year! New Years day good!" A few lucky words the first drifting into my ears. This is my winter holiday life these days the most profound impression: lively! On the first day, I climbed out from the hot bed, it didnt feel any cold. Look, full village a piece of red - let firecrackers paper, every high hung with red lanterns and wearing red tang suit with everyone walking folks, festive atmosphere is subsequently. I wear good clothes, hot breakfast with family. Ordinary gruel, pickles, and last night, the rest of the dumplings, the whole family together to eat, also especially sweet. Just after the meal, someone come and happy New Year. They face is permeated with a smile, his hands together, happy New Year to everybody, "said the auspicious words. Go before also plug lucky money to children. Children are stare big eyes, looked at the adults pushing the location of the red envelopes, after finally received a red envelope, also dare not do STH without authorization, all the parents passed that way.

Biggest difference, winter and summer vacation is in the winter holiday will have a New Year, family reunion, enjoy family happiness. This year New Years day, I in the nonlocal aunt, brother, brother, all came to our house. Our houses popularity increased at a draught, and after a busy year of the rabbit. Big cousin came back with excellent academic performance; Second cousin came back with a suitable job; The younger brother also brought back the eloquence class learning outcomes. You were each made for a, communicate with each other, so well. Perhaps this is the special atmosphere when Chinese New Year.

I had a happy, ordinary, but there are substantial winter vacation. I enjoy it.

愉快的寒假生活寒假生活就要结束了，回想这三十多天的生活，还真是有很多难忘而又愉快的事。

“过年好!过年好啊!”几声吉祥话第一个飘入我的耳朵里。这就是我这几天寒假生活的最深刻的印象：热闹!大年初一，我从热乎乎的被窝里爬出来，经没有感到任何的寒冷。放眼望去，满村红彤彤的一片——放过的爆竹纸皮、家家高挂的大红灯笼、还有满大家走着的穿着红唐装的乡亲们，喜庆的气氛随之即来。我穿好了衣服，和家人们一起吃热腾腾的早饭。普通的稀粥、咸菜，还有昨夜剩下的饺子，全家人在一起吃，也格外的香。刚吃完饭，就有人过来拜年。他们脸上洋溢着笑容，双手握在一起，向大家拜年，说着吉祥话。走前还往小孩手中塞压岁钱。小孩儿们则是瞪大眼睛，看着大人们推推嚷嚷时红包的位置，最终接到红包以后，也不敢擅自妄为，一切都看父母的眼色行事。

寒假和暑假最大的不同，就是在寒假里会过新年，亲人重聚，享受天伦之乐。今年过年，我远在外地姨、哥哥、弟弟们，都来到了我们家。我们家的人气一下子增高了，并且过了个热热闹闹的兔年。大表哥带回来优异的学业成绩;二表哥带回来适合的工作;小弟也带回来了口才班的学习成果。大家各有所得，互相交流着，十分融洽。这也许就是过年时的特殊气氛吧。

我过了一个愉快，平凡，但有充实的寒假。我乐在其中。

Today is October 1, do you know what day is it today? Ha ha! Are you sure you dont know, let me tell you the truth, today is the National Day and the 60th anniversary of the founding! There are big parade, has a big military parade in Beijing, the big parade in tiananmen square in Beijing.

President hu jintao delivered an important speech on the tiananmen rostrum, announcing the parade began. Some sitting President hu jintaos 2009 car inspected the armed forces, we all of the peoples liberation army uncle is spirited take a heroic posture.

Finally, I saw many colorful floats, jiangxi, hainan......

Finished watching the military parade, I feel how great, how great of our motherland.

今天是10月1日，你知道今天是什么节吗?哈哈!你肯定不知道吧，让我来告诉你吧，今天是国庆节，建国60周年呢!还有大阅兵，在北京有大阅兵，北京的大阅兵在天安门广场。

胡锦涛主席在天安门城楼上发表了重要讲话，宣布了阅兵开始。有的胡锦涛主席坐着2009号车检阅了海陆空三军，我们的解放军叔叔个个都是英姿飒爽雄姿英发。

最后，我看见了许多五颜六色的花车，有江西的、海南的……

看完了阅兵，我觉得我们的祖国有多么强大、多大伟大。

Today is Chinese New Year, was the day of family reunion, I waipojia New Years day this year.

After lunch, I found the red lanterns are hung from house to house, stick couplets on the Spring Festival, I also cant wait to stick couplets on the Spring Festival, and he said to mother: "mom, I want to stick couplets on the Spring Festival." Mother agreed. I just went to see my uncle and help put the ladder and take up Spring Festival couplets. Uncle put on the Spring Festival couplets of double-sided adhesive to off, then carefully stick Spring Festival couplets on the wall, to look left, look right, did alignment, so just stick Spring Festival couplets.

When we eat dinner, have applauded "pa" firecrackers outside. I have to succumb to, cant help to go outside to watch the beautiful fireworks, some like a chrysanthemum, some like a peach blossom, and like a light rain, beautiful! Watch, I also itching, want to set off firecrackers by our own hands. Grandpa let me go to some large firecrackers, I started a little dare not, first looked for a moment, found in adults, are not dangerous, at last I scary, carefully lit firecrackers to lead, I fly back immediately, "crackling crackling......" Good enough!

In the evening, our whole family sit together, eating snacks, watching the Spring Festival gala. The party is wonderful! Crosstalk, sketch, dancing and magic...

New Year is lively, everywhere decorated, every family is permeated with happy New Year. I wish you all a happy New Year!

今天是农历的大年三十，是阖家团圆的日子，今年我在外婆家过年。

吃完午饭后，我发现挨家挨户都挂着红灯笼，贴着春联，我也迫不及待地想贴春联，于是对妈妈说：“妈妈，我想贴春联。”妈妈答应了。我就去请姨父帮忙，把梯子和春联拿了过来。姨父先把贴在春联上的双面胶给撕下来，然后再把春联小心翼翼地贴在墙上，左看看、右看看，对齐了没有，这样春联就贴好了。

我们吃晚饭的时候，外面就有“啪啪啪”的鞭炮声了。我已经按捺不住，情不自禁地跑到外面观赏美丽的烟花，有的像菊花，有的像桃花，还有的像小雨点儿，真美!看着看着，我也蠢蠢欲动了，想自己亲手放鞭炮。外公让我去点大的鞭炮，开始我有点儿不敢，先旁观看了一会，发现有大人在，并不是很危险，最后我提心吊胆、小心翼翼地把鞭炮的引线给点燃了，马上我飞似的往回跑，“噼噼啪啪，噼噼啪啪……”好过瘾哦!

晚上，我们全家人围坐在一起，一边吃零食，一边看春节联欢晚会。晚会真精彩!有相声，有小品，有舞蹈，还有魔术……

新年真是热闹，到处张灯结彩，家家户户都洋溢着过年的喜气。祝大家新年快乐!

Do you have a dictionary?I think almost everyone has one.But, how often do you use a dictionary? I dont believe that everyone makes good use of it.You may come across lots of new words in your study and you will ask someone for the answer.But if you have a dictionary, please dont let it sleep. You should make better use of it.

Dictionaries are very useful and important to us.They are like silent teachers.When you have a question,you can turn to them.They will give you the right answer.They are also like a trusted friend. You can learn a lot from them.

Dont be lazy.Dont let your dictionary sleep any more.

你有字典吗？我认为几乎每个人都有。但是，你经常使用字典吗？我不认为每个人都会很好的利用它。在学习中遇到了许多新单词时，你会问别人请教答案。但是如果你有一本字典，请不要让它睡眠。你应该好好利用它。

字典是非常有用和重要的。他们像无声的老师。当你有问题，你可以问他们。他们会给你正确的答案。他们也像一个值得信赖的朋友。你可以从他们身上学到很多。

不要偷懒。不要再让你的词典沉睡了。

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

This years summer vacation was most enjoyable. I spent fifteen days helping my grandparents doing farm work in the countryside， where I saw mountains fields covered with green plants. Sometimes I went swimming in the river to the west of the village， the water in which was quite clear.

今年的暑假是最愉快的。我花了十五天帮助我的爷爷奶奶做农活在农村，在那里我看到了山区域覆盖绿色植物。有时我去游泳的河以西的村庄，水是很清楚的。

I kept a diary every day. Besides doing farm work， I help the children in the neighborhood with their lessons. All of them showed interest in English. They could read write wellthey could hardly understand simple English. So every day in the morning I spent about two hours helping them improve their listening spoken English. They all made great progress. Their parents all thought highly of me. I now realize that knowledge is very needed in the countryside.

我每天写日记。除了做农活，我帮助邻居家的孩子做功课。他们都对英语的兴趣。他们能读书写字wellthey几乎听不懂简单的英文。所以每天早上我花了约两个小时帮助他们提高他们的听力口语英语。他们都取得了很大的进步。他们的父母都以为我。我现在意识到，知识是非常需要在乡下。