英语口语比赛自我介绍稿子(汇总20篇)

I have spent fifteen years in my life. So, this is my ninth year to study. By the way, my name is WengJingru. My father thought hard about my name. He consulted the dictionary two times to find how to name me. Of course, this name is very good and I like it very much.

Sometimes I think I am a little strange. Because I often think the world isn’t full of happiness. And I want to be different from others. I hate superficial people. But always I am very out-going and kind to others. I can’t say ‘no’ to others. So I don’t know how to refuse.

I can’t see I am a pretty girl, but I am not an ugly person, either. I am very general. I can’t say too much about my appearance.

In this term, I make a little progress in my study. In my life, I have my parents’ love, and many, many people’s love. I am happy. I achieved so much, and I also lost so much.   My star sign is Aquarius. It represents kindness and wisdom. But I don’t think I am such a clever person. Maybe I am modest. Aquarius has many friends. It also says that some people think I am strange because I hate to be like others. I try to do everything differently.

I like yellow the most. Yellow is the color of the sun, it can remind me of a warm, sunny day. Yellow is also the color of wisdom. And I like it because it is one of the colors that are vivid.

Of course, most students have problems in their study. I don’t know how to make progress. I think I should work harder. That is the only way.

I like reading very much. My favorite writer is GuoJingming. And now I am reading a book called ‘Gone with Wind’. I keep reading half an hour every day.

I like English and Chinese best. I want to establish an English club. I want everyone to speak English in the daily life.

All above are my real things. I hope everyone will like me.

My name is XXX.And Im 13 years old.My hobbies are singing,dancing and

drawing pictures.And Im a sanguine person.My favourite stars are Shu Chang and JJ Lam.I like playing computer game and reading classic

in the rest.Im studying at Xiao Shi Zhong Xin school.

My name is Liu yang. I`m a thirteen-year-old boy. I`m a student of Class Four, Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang . My study is well. I`m tall and strong.

I`m a diligent boy. I study hard at all my lessons. My dream is to be a knowledgeable man. I know it`s very hard. The way is very long. But I will try my best to do it well. And I belive myself. I have many hobies. They are reading, running, swimming, playing, basketball, climbing and playing table tennis. Everyday I all need some time to reading. On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.

In my free time, sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do. I have a colorful life!

[新初一的英语自我介绍

HuangMei is  my  hometown. It is  in  the  East  in  HuBei.It is East  on  the  city  named  AnQing  of   AnHui.And it is  south to   the  city  named  JiuJiang  of  JiangXi. It  is  a    great city  in  my  heart.It  has  a long  history for about  1800 years  in  China .Example .The  temple  named  SiZu  and  WuZu were   in  HuangMei for a  long  years-old.Today,Every  year  many   visitor  come  different part  to  there.As  a  daughter  from Huangmei.I  leaved it away  for  about  seven  years. But  I miss it everyday .Even  in  a lot of  my  dream  in  the  night  .I belive HuangMei will  be  richer and  richer .The  new  year  2009  will going .Tonight  I  hope  everything  will  be  well  in  my  new 26  years-old.All  my friends  will be  well.I  must  work  hard in   the new  year.I will be ain growth as  my  hometown .

中文：我的故乡在黄梅.黄梅位于湖北省的东部，它东接安徽省安庆府，南邻江西省九江市.在我心中，它是一座伟大的县城.它在中国史上约有1800余年的历史，像闻名遐迩的四祖寺，五祖寺在黄梅有很长时间的历史了.每年，都有来自不同地域的许多游客去那.我自离开故乡已是七载余，但是我却每天思念故乡，以致在梦里都是如此.作为从黄梅走出来的女儿，我坚信我的故乡会越来越富饶.新的2009就要来临，今晚我祝福新的一年将万事顺利，我所有的朋友都好.在新的26岁年轮里，我必须努力工作，我会像我的家乡一样成长.

Im a grade three pupil. Feng Zekai is my name. Im 8 years old. My eyebrows are black; the round eyes are bright; the mouth is big.

My hobby is watching tv. Do you know what I dont like? Oh, let me tell you: swimming, riding a car, listen to my mother talk.

I am very good at learning, and actively participate in all kinds of activities in the school, I am seriously preparing for the day after tomorrow reading contest

My advantage is love learning, the disadvantage is not love sweeping the floor.

I am what I am。 Boys and girls, would you like to be friends with me?

It is said that Chengdu is a city which if you come you cant leave.It has a long history.there stands Du Fus thatched cottage ,The Temple of Zhugeliang and some other place of historical interest.They are all so famous that many foreign tourists like to come here.Chengdu also has a comfortable weather for people who live in there.Even though in the winter it is still warmer than any other cities in China.Besides,as Chengdu people are fond of eating,they have created many delicious food such as hot pan,Three Big guns,and some others.

There are three people in my family. They are my father﹑mother and I.

My name is XuZiXuan. I‘m 12 years old. I‘m in Grade 6.I like playing computer games. My father is a driver. He drives a car. He likes playing computer games too. My mother is a doctor. She works very hard.She likes singing.

My family is very happy.

介绍自己的英语作文二：

Different people have different hobbies.For example,someone likes reading,someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.

I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could learn many funny things.But now I dont like it.I can only learn from books.I couldnt get knowledge from others.I need a change.Traveling is my favorite hobby now.But I cant go traveling a lot.I can visit many different places of interest by traveling.I can learn a lot about people,places and history.Its very interesting.What is your hobby?Lets share each other!

I have many good friends.They all have their hobbies.Ann studies very hard.So her hobby is book reading.Tony loves labour,and his hobby is gardening.He usually plants flowers and trees in his yard.Judy is a quiet girl.She likes knitting.She always knits some sweaters for her dolls.We have different hobbies,but we are good friends.

I love traveling.I have great fun in traveling.

Mom often said that Dad was a nerd. I see my father is also like a nerd, but it should be called "big book fans" fishes.

Dad every time to go to work, sitting on the bus, have to take a book, if there is a seat, he sat down, he immediately took out a book to see. Once, because the book is too fascinated, the car opened 2 points, only to think of the get off, the results had to take the return of 2 cars, and then to the company to work, to the company said to colleagues, colleagues Said: "You are a book fans ah!" Every day after lunch, as long as there is a free, he immediately took out the book to see.

Another time, my father, the "book fans" also made a big joke, that day, my father came back from work, eat dinner, and got into his study, won his book, look ah look. Suddenly, the study of the cabinet on the table clock "Dangdang" even knock on the next seven, my father took the bag, hurry out from the study. Mom asked puzzled: "Where are you going?" Dad said: "seven oclock, go to work, do not go late!" I listened to the side of the secret smile. Mom opened the curtain and said, "You look outside." "It was seven oclock at night." Dad scratched his head. Mom said: "You are a big book fans, twilight down friends." Dad heard their own laugh.

Dad likes to read books, has been accustomed to. But my mother is also often to my father said: "My glasses have to deepen the degree, do not read it again." My father? He just smiled, for a while put the mothers words thrown into the clouds. Every night, he must see the night to sleep.

Dad is a "big book fans" ah! I want to learn from him, to be a "little book fans."

Everyone has a really good friend or Zhixin Ren, so I have a friend like her grown very ordinary, very pure, performance is also very good, she is adorable, but her character is very cheerful, I particularly like him.

He helped me a lot of busy, I have once physical education class, careless, wrestling has. Her to send me to school medical room, and she still takes care of me and asked if I have things to buy me water to drink, I am very grateful to her, so呀was my best friend.

翻译：每个人都有一个真心的好朋友或者是知心人，我就有一个这样的朋友，她长得很普通，很纯洁，成绩也很好，她是个活泼可爱的人，她的性格非常开朗，我特别喜欢他。

他帮我很多的忙，有一次，我上体育课时，一不小心，摔跤了。是她把我送进校医室的，她还很照顾我，问我有没有事，给我买水喝，我非常感谢她，所以呀是我最好的朋友。

each examiner：

i call/**， come from shandong province。this year is 21 years old， ， is a student who will soon graduate。

passes the foundation knowledge that the teachers guidance controled a calculator with personal effort firmly in the school。mainly studied c language at the software aspect。 c#。 java etc。 plait the distance language， the data structure， vf。 access etc。 database is applied， calculator operate system。studied the dreamweaver web page manufacture and the asp network to weave a distance also。studied the calculator network at the hardware aspect， the calculator construction with www。oh100。combine many times to attend to pack machine， set the fulfillment of the net operation lesson， make me control the work principle of the calculator and the set of the calculator network net process。

in addition， i attend various activities of the school organization to come to the oneself of 锻炼 actively and do various part—time to increase social experience。the teacher is divided into the group to us in the experiment and practice of the lesson remaining to complete mission， make we the deep comprehension arrive the importance of the team。the and the rise time acquires the school scholarship during the period of school， three staffs。

however necessarily limited at the knowledge that the school learn， therefore i would ready to take advice study in the later work， the backlog working experience， the exaltation work ability。hope your company to give me a displays an own opportunity！

this with the result that。

salute

导语：在商务交往当中，我们要如何正确得体地介绍自己呢？下面是小编搜集整理的一些商务礼仪中的自我介绍内容，愿望对你有赞助。

商务礼仪中的自我介绍

根据公关礼仪的常规，地位低者先介绍。比如，主人要先向客人把自己介绍一下;公关人员要把自己向贵宾作一个介绍;男士要把自己向女士作介绍。晚辈要把自己向长辈作介绍。位低者先介绍，这是非常首要的一个细节。当然有的时候也没有必要过分地拘谨，如果对方位低，但他忘了介绍了，位置高的人，先作个自我介绍也没有什么。但是，应该位低的人先作介绍，这是介绍的顺序，这一点很首要。这是对地位高的一种尊重。否则的话，人家不知道你是谁。说了半天，不知道你是谁，那会很为难的。

在进行自我介绍时，接下来你要注意的是什么呢?先递名片再作介绍，自我介绍时先递名片为佳。训练有素的公关人员要养成名片应用规范化的习性。要先递名片。先递名片有三个好处，，其一，少说很多话。我什么头衔，什么职务，就都没有必要说了，其二，加深对方印象。其三，表示谦恭。不仅作自我介绍的时候，地位低的先介绍，交换名片的时候，也是地位低的人先递名片，实际上也是对对方一种尊重，等于说了很多话。

在专业的场合就不同了，公务介绍含有四个要素。哪四个要素?姓名、单位、部门、职务。

例如：您好，我是中国国民大学国际关系学院金正昆教授。在此单位、部门、职务、姓名全出来了。但要注意：父母给你起名是如何浮想联翩，而你的名字跟你坎坷人生如何相关?这都属于废话，进行自我介绍不要谈这些。

此外，自我介绍时务必要应用全称。当你第一次介绍你的单位和部门的时候，别忘怀应用全称。有时候报单位时，要报清楚，该报全称的时候报全称，该报简称的时候报简称，否则很麻烦。自称的话招人笑，称别人的话不礼貌。

商务礼仪中的自我介绍禁忌

1.自我介绍最忌讳平淡无奇，不能够把个人的特性展示出来。

2.自我介绍还忌讳写成简历形式，缺少文学色彩。

3.自我介绍还忌讳雷同。

商务礼仪中的自我介绍方式

工作式：

适用于工作场合，它包括本人姓名、供职单位及其部门、职务或从事的具体工作等。如“你好，我叫XX，是XX公司的销售经理。”“我叫XX，在XX学校读书。”

应酬式：

适用于某些公共场合和一般性的社交场合，这种自我介绍最为简洁，往往只包括姓名一项即可。“你好，我叫XX。”“你好，我是XX。”

交流式：

适用于社交活动中，愿望与交往对象进一步交流与沟通。它大体应包括介绍者的姓名、工作、籍贯、学历、兴趣及与交往对象的某些熟人的关系。如“你好，我叫XX，在XX工作。我是XX的同学，都是XX人。”

问答式：

适用于应试、应聘和公务交往。问答式的自我介绍，应该是有问必答，问什么就答什么。

礼仪式：

适用于讲座、报告、演出、庆典、仪式等一些正规而隆重的场合。包括姓名、单位、职务等，同时还应加入一些适当的谦辞、敬辞。如“各位来宾，大家好!我叫XX，是XX学校的学生。我代表学校全体学生欢迎大家光临我校，愿望大家……。”

商务礼仪中的自我介绍运用处合

1.用于不认识的朋友间的初次见面时介绍。

2.一般还用于求职时应用。

3.参加公务员考试也需要应用。

4.学生入学自我介绍

5.各种考试也需要应用。

I have a little white rabbit, small it loves green tender leaves, red eyes, long ears, white body, short tail, very cute look.

It was just when we are still very strange home, a door to hide under the cabinet. Refused to come out. After a few days it began to no longer unfamiliar to us! Every time no one at home, it will put the trash is not left all down, although I am very angry, but looking at it red eyes like I said: "You can not be angry ah!" See the white rabbit naughty look, my heart and soft down, gently told it later not allowed this.

Because the family is a unit room, keep a small rabbit is not convenient, after my father and I discuss, the rabbit was sent back to the country grandmother home, I miss my little rabbit. In the holidays I went back to my grandmother to see the white rabbit when you know that the poor little rabbit in the yard was killed by the rats, I was very sad, standing in the courtyard left tears, I think you my Little rabbit, thank you to accompany me through those happy times, I will not forget you, my little rabbit!

尊敬的各位评委：

我是这次声乐比赛的第三十八号选手，名叫潘巨龙。我来自**。江南自古多才俊，在**这个人杰地灵的地方，我理解了4年的大学本科教育。这天我站在那里无比的骄傲，因为我最后有机会用自我的才华去展现这块土地的人杰地灵;我热烈期盼着，此刻是各位评委，将来是将是更多的观众朋友和粉丝，能够倾听到**这块热土成长的声音。

我喜欢唢呐，喜欢竖笛，喜欢用激烈热情的音乐表达我对生命的激情热爱，宣泄我对人生的感悟。而喜欢摇滚歌手似乎也来自这种表达的渴望，我期望自我能够像邦乔文一样拥有为所爱挥洒汗水和泪水的“mylife”，愿意和崔健一齐“一无所有”，了解黑豹“无地自容”的艰辛和付出，和sum41拥有“HalfHourofPower”，像汪峰一样为了理想“飞得更高”。此刻，摇滚歌手，就是我最梦想的职业，我会紧握着自我的梦想继续前进，固执的追求，真诚的期盼。

我明白，自我就像一块璞玉，需要更多磨难与打磨，我期望能得到这次机会，从而让自我变成那只最美丽的和氏璧，无限接近摇滚歌手那份光华与荣耀。

BACKGROUND

I was born in a small village of Shan Dong Province on April 4th, 1968. When I was young, my family was very poor, so I had to work to earn money to help my parents after class when I was in the middle school.

In 1986 I was admitted by University of International Business and Economics (or: UIBE) to pursue a bachelor degree in Economics. My major is accounting in Department of International Business Management. The undergraduate education gave me a wide range of vision and taught me how to cooperate with others. I developed several professional interests in Accounting, Finance, and International Trade.

The following eight-year working experience offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence. In 1990-1993, I worked as an assistant to funding manager in China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. In 1993-present, I was employed by China Kingdom Import and Export Corporation to be the Manger of Financial and Accounting Division.

I do believe that with my hard early life, solid educational background and ample working experience, I would be an excellent student of you MBA program.

MY PERSONAL ACCOMPLISHMENT: After graduating from UIBE, I was employed as the assistant to the funding manager by China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. After reading a lot of related files, and analyzing the overall funding situation of the corporation, I found that the loan policy was not been put into effect. So we have thousands of millions RMB loan with very high interest rate while a large amount of cash in bank with very low interest rate was idle. I reported this to my supervisor, and then we studied and revised the loan policy. This revision saved the corporation approximately RMB thirty millions yuan. In order to raise the funding effectiveness, after one year’s hard work, I developed the internal banking system within the corporation based on the actual funding supply and need of the different divisions and projects. This internal banking system made full use of the corporation’ funding resources, and due to this, I was highly praised by the president of the corporation.

WHY CHOOSE YOUR MBA PROGRAM? After I have worked in business area for eight years, I feel that I need to continue my education by pursuing a Master degree in business administration. I have practiced my professional expertise in accounting, demonstrated my leadership abilities and perfected my communication skills. But I have yet to become an entrepreneur in my own right, and to fully master the art of modern business. I want to be trained more vigorously in scientific methods of analysis and synthesis. There are a lot of opportunities and challenges in China that I do not yet fell fully confident to seize. My business career has so far benefited mostly the companies that I worked for, but a good business education in your university will probably become a new era for me.

Your university is well known for its excellence in China’s business education. I am sure that, with my extensive business experience, I can be a worthy student of yours. I am anxious to benefit from your seasoned guidance and take advantage of your research facilities.

Hello, everybody. I am ning cai chen from beijing, i am working for an agent for a electric company in beijing. it is about five months since i came to the united states, and i miss my family very much. itll be several months before they come here, and i hope to continue to have an enjoyable single life till then. thanks.

My mom and dad may not be the best, but love me; my mom and dad may not be the best, but in my heart is the most beautiful of the most handsome. Because one thing makes me know my mom and dad is the best. Do not lose someone elses mom and dad.

I remember when I was four years old, I came back from the kindergarten, finished homework on the outside and the children play games ----- turn. I called my mother bought me a product of orange Shuang, is a glass bottle to do, I and the children turn when the halo, it fell to the ground, the glass bottle to scratch my face, out of a lot of blood Well, left a deep mark, when I touch my face, I am very sad, Mom and Dad also tears.

Blink of an eye I was twelve years old, on the sixth grade.

Now I read the sixth grade, see my mother and dad for my little early test is good, busy busy busy, almost every day I will flow a tear, my mother sitting on the sofa, I saw my mothers white hair and more; to the father of tea Daddy has lost a lot. See my mom and dad so worried about me, I have no reason not to learn, I have no reason in such a good environment do not seriously study, I have no reason not to listen to my mothers father. Mom and Dad do not have to worry about me, why do they worry about me, because I do not listen, do not study hard. So I went to junior high school, I must change their own, I want to become obedient, good learning good boy. Mom and Dad often say where it does not matter, as long as the attitude, hard to learn, so good test a good high school, so I should attitude to positive, good learning.

Mom and Dad, so I am in junior high school, and I will become more sensible, I want for you, for me, for my grandfather grandmother, good study. Will not let you worry.

I have got two baby cats. they are very beautiful.

One is yellow. the other is white. they are very lovely. the yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones.

But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face.

And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.

Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.

导语：来到新班级遇到新朋友，我们都会进行一次自我介绍，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Hello, my name is Lin Fan, the first day of school I know our class have a classmate, also called Lin Fan, how have the fate ah, the teacher in charge teacher sun because my age small call me "xiao Lin sails". I believe you to me you are not familiar with, let me introduce myself.

I am 13 years old and I am an honest, cheerful, lively and steady boy. My advantage is that every time on learning seriously complete the teacher the assignment, my grades are ok. The disadvantage is that, cant take the initiative to answer questions in class did not dare to speak out, some careless in the exam, sometimes simple question is wrong. Due to primary school didnt cram English, so English learning not enough system, the result has been not so good. I very like painting, also like Internet, love to play games.

While, as Ive become a middle school student, in the new semester, I want to get rid of the defects in learning, with a new attitude to meet new learning, also hope that teachers and students to guide me, help me, believe we can become good friends.

【参考译文】

大家好，我的名字叫林帆，开学的第一天我就知道我们班级还有一个同学，也叫林帆，多么有缘份呀，班主任孙老师因为我年龄小一点叫我"小林帆"。相信大家对我还不熟悉，下面我做一下自我介绍。

我今年13岁，我是一个诚实、开朗、活泼又稳重的男生。在学习上我的优点是每次都认真完成老师布置的作业，我的学习成绩还行。缺点是课堂上不能主动回答问题，不敢大声发言，考试时有些马虎，有时简单的问题也会答错。由于小学阶段没有补习英语，所以英语学习的不够系统，成绩一直不太好。我非常喜欢画画，也喜欢网络，爱玩游戏。 一转眼，我已经成为一名中学生了，在新的学期里，我要改掉学习上的缺点，用一种崭新在学习态度迎接新的知识，也希望老师和同学们多指导我、多帮助我，相信我们也能成为好朋友

Shanxi Province got its name due to its location to the west of Taihang Mountain. Shanxi neighbored on Hebei, Henan, Shaanxi and Inner Mongolia & Autonomous Region. It is located to the east of the Yellow River, and is also known as Hedong. Shanxi belonged to Jin State in Spring and Autumn Period, so it is abbreviated in Jin. Shanxi occupies an area of 156,000 square kilometers (about 60,000 square miles) and has a population of over 32 million, including its minority ethnic population. Its capital is Taiyuan City.

When to go

Being at a high altitude, Shanxi Province has a cold and dry climate and has an annual rainfall of between 400-600 millimeters. The province is also frequently plagued by sandstorms, especially in the spring, so it is often useful to bring along both sunglasses and a hat when visiting. Generally speaking, the provinces climate is the best between May and October.

History

Shanxi is one of the birth places of Chinese civilizations with a long history and traditional culture. As early as one hundred million years ago, the ancestors of the Chinese lived and propagated in this region. Legend tells us that the Yellow Emperor, founder of the Chinese nation, once lived in Shanxi for a certain period. Today, many Neolithic sites from that period can still be seen dotted across the vast expanse of the province.

What to see

Shanxi is endowed with an abundance of cultural sites from its long history. Most of the ancient structures were built before the Liao and Song Dynasties. So it is the reason why Shanxi is often called the Chinese Ancient Architecture Museum. The more obvious of these include: the Buddhist wonder of the Yungang Grottoes in Datong City, the ancient city of Pingyao which was listed as a World Cultural Heritage site by UNESCO in 1997, the oldest and tallest ancient wooden pagoda in China, the Wooden Pagoda of Yingxian County and the remote Shuanglin and Jinci Temples, which are well worth the long journeys for the visitors.

Of course, there are a number of natural magnificent and beautiful places that can also be seen in Shanxi. The most famous of them include Wutai Mountain with the longest and most prestigious history in the four most well-known Buddhist holy lands of China, the whistling rage of the Yellow Rivers Kettle Spout waterfalls (Hukou Waterfalls) and one of the Five Sacred Mountains in China - Mt Hengshan.

想要获得更加高分的英语写作，在语言表达需要增加一些"亮点"。下面是语文迷为大家提供的具体指导，大家一起来阅读吧。

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old). She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

拓展阅读：写好作文"加分点"

合理使用动词使表达更生动

(例)In front of the building, there was a tall tree。

In front of the building stood a tall tree。巧妙使用动词短语增加表达的新颖性

(例)I like writing poems at middle school。。

I took great interest in writing poems at middle school。

改变动词增强文章的感染色彩

(例)When she heard he had died, she was very sad。

At the news of his death, she felt very sad。

Leaves silently fell, the autumn girl walked the pace of light, quietly came to earth.

Autumn, no summer heat, no winter cold, is a cool season. It is also a bumper season.

There is a golden field in the field, like a little girl braids like rice, coral bears like corn. Everyone in the field busy enjoying themselves, my father and mother also joined the happy team.

We came to the golden fields bent down, picked up the sickle, ready to harvest the fruit of this large labor. I hold a row of rice, with a sickle hard cut, hey! This rice is really stubborn, little movement and no, I squatting in the ground against the bottom half of the rice, resorted to the whole body strength, knife cut off, Huh I do not believe it, I do not believe it, I dropped the sickle, his hands to seize the rice, pride called "Hey!" At the same time forced pull, that rice shook, and if nothing had happened to "stand" When I was disappointed, my mother smiled and came down, bent over her hand, caught the rice in one hand, caught the sickle in the other hand, wiped the rhythm of the ground with rice, and slowly, The wind came down. Wow! The original cut rice so simple ah! I learned my mothers appearance, happy cut rice.

Looking at this row of rows of rice, I think the food is really hard to come! Farmer uncle too hard, we should cherish every drop of water, every grain, make a thrifty good boy!

导语：山九华山是中国佛教的四个神圣的山脉之一。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Jiuhuashan(also called "Mount Jiuhua"， literally "Nine Glorious Mountains")

Mount Jiuhua is one of the four sacred mountains of Chinese Buddhism. It is located in Qingyang County in Anhui province and is famous for its rich landscape and ancient temples.

Many of the mountain’s shrines and temples are dedicated to Ksitigarbha (known in Chinese as Dìzàng， Traditional Chinese：)，

who is a bodhisattva and protector of souls in hell according to Mahayana Buddhist tradition. Pious Buddhists often come to this popular attraction in Anhui to climb to Greater Tiantai peak， which is regarded as Jiuhuashan’s most important peak， although it is not the tallest.

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(也称为“九华山山”字面上的“九光荣山”)

山九华山是中国佛教的四个神圣的山脉之一。它位于安徽省庆阳县并以其丰富的景观和古老的寺庙。

很多山的神殿、寺庙都致力于地藏(中国传统在中国被称为地藏)

菩萨保护灵魂的入地狱率根据大乘佛教的传统。虔诚的佛教徒经常来这个流行的吸引力在安徽爬到天台峰这被认为是九华山最重要的高峰虽然它不是最高的。