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五彩的生活,美妙的人生,伴随风风雨雨藏在我的心里,让我沉醉、让我着迷。下面是小编为大家整理的是作文有一种神奇让我着迷的内容,欢迎阅读!

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介绍自己的英语作文

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Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies are the important things in our life. I also have hobbies. Next,let me tell you.

Exercise is my one hobby. I love sport. The more exercise I do,The more healthier I have. After I have dinner,I often go for a walk with my sister on the streets,and when class is over,I usually play badminton with my friends. Sometimes I play ping-pong,too. So I think I live in a wonderful life.

Reading is my the other hobby. In weekends,I often read some novels. Such as《Jane Love》. 《Zhao Hua Xi She》and so on. That can make me improve my Chinese.

This is my hobbies. If you have hobbies,you can exchange with me.

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篇1:初中英语作文-我的朋友-Myfriend

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初中英语作文:我的朋友-My friend

I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation.He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made GREat proGREss. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.

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篇2:大学英语自我介绍样本

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Hello everyone and good morning! I am very privileged to be given this platform by the professor and really happy to introduce myself. My name is XX, 19 years old, from XXX, which is a very beautiful place!I am very happy coming to XXX and able to study with you all for the next 4 years. We are all from every corner of the country, which is a kind of fate. I like reading, playing computer and also love the subject of maths.

But unfortunately, we dont have this subject here.My ideal is to be a director and one day be able to make my own movies. Therefore I have chosen this major and I have every confidence that I shall do very well.I believe that all of you have chosen the same subject must share the same love with me. Hope we shall learn from each other in the coming 4 years. Help each other so that we all could hand in satisfactory results for our tomorrow .

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篇3:初中英语作文题目

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Mid-autumn festival is one of the most important festivals for Chinese

people. At that time, people will come back home and spend time with their

families. The meaning of this festival is to provide people a chance to get

reunion. Chinese people pay special attention to the family reunion. It is a

good tradition, which is inherited for thousands of years. Mooncake is the

classic food, which can represent this festival. The most exciting moment for me

is to appreciate the moon at the balcony and chat with my families. We eat some

snacks and talk so happily. Mid-autumn Festival is part of Chinese culture and

should be reserved forever.

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篇4:介绍青岛的英语作文

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Qingdao, a beautiful seaside city, is located in the southeast part of Shandong Province. To the east, a short distance across the Yellow Sea, lie Korea and Japan, making Qingdao an important city for international trade.

For thirty three years, until 1949, Qingdao was a colony of Germany and Japan. As a result, buildins in Qingdao have a great deal of European architecture. This foreign architecture -a remnant of the colonial past- now beautifies this seaside city.

The red roofs, green trees, blue sea, and azure sky form a bright and colorful picture of Qingdao. The city is sometimes known as the Switzerland of the Orient.

Surrounded by the sea on three sides, Qingdao attracts many tourists with its charming seascape. Sights like the Eight Passes Villas, the Zhan Bridge, Wusi Square, Mt. Laoshan, will help you remember Qingdao. Just walking on the sand and listening to the surf breaking on the beach becomes enjoyable.

Qingdao offers food with distinctive flavors--especially seafood. So take this chance to enjoy the delicious seafood of Qingdao. Also, Qingdao is the home of the famous Qingdao (Tsingtao) Beer. Have a bottle of pure Qingdao Beer right here in Qingdao!

The Qingdao Municipal Government recognizes the importance of the tourism industry and has further plans to develop tourism in Qingdao. To enhance the tourism industry, Qingdao now sponsors the Qingdao International Beer Festival, the Qingdao International Sea Festival, Beach Culture Festival, the Sea Affection Festival, and the Summer of Qingdao Festival.

In cooperation with the Beijing Olympic Games 2008, Qingdao will hold the Sailing Competition in the Olympic Games in 2008. This great event brings a great opportunity for this charming city to build its bright future.

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篇5:初中英语作文大全

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As it is known to us all ,LuXun is a famous Chinese writer. He is not only

a writer, thinker, but also the founder of Chinese Literature . He wrote many

classic (经典的)novels and his stories, which are translated many languages, were

made into film,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice,which

deeply showed peoples suffering in the old days.

Because of his achievement to Chinese literature, Chairman Mao spoke highly

of him. Besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high

school and university. I think youll gain a lot from reading his works.

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篇6:初中英语作文:我的家乡

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请你根据下面的提纲,以 我的家乡为题,写一篇100-字的短文。 提纲: (1) 家乡的地理位置; (2) 解放前的情况; (3) 解放后的变化; (4) 对家乡的感情。

满分作文: My Home Town My home town is a beautiful pla

请你根据下面的提纲,以我的家乡为题,写一篇100-字的短文。

提纲:

(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

满分作文:

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

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篇7:自我介绍英语

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My name is xxx . There are 4 people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

I like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. Reading E- books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

I hope to study both  in English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

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篇8:介绍活动情况英语

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The schools campus activities are rich and colorful, learn to sing folk songs, learning folk dancing, the squadron will show --- in this one activity, I love the most is the May 31st meeting of the group in the water cube, the harvest and the feeling of campus activities.

At about 5 that day, we came to the Olympic swimming pool, the National Swimming Center (Water Cube). After all, the team will begin. The first chorus singing songs, and is the first grade student initiation ceremony. The representatives of the first grade students went to the stage in an energetic manner, and presented the garlands to 55 minority students, accompanied by the team song, and the minority nationality classmates wore a red scarf for the first grade students. After the ceremony, the minority students met with us to greet each other. "I am the Dong nationality, my name is Huang training Festival.". "Minority partners do self introduction, and simply introduce their own nation." After listening to them, I was surprised.

I didnt even hear about so many ethnic groups. Let alone understand their customs. I should learn more and have more knowledge. Several ethnic minority partners also performed a show for us, including a unique style of dance, a lot of distinctive songs, and so on. This time I really know the minority people, they have their own custom, unique singing and dancing. Though I cant understand the dialect in the song, I still feel it has an unknown and special beauty. Though I dont know the dance, I still feel the dance is very graceful. I deeply comprehend the colorful national culture and the profound and profound national culture. The performance was over, then, all the students of our present for minority students Oh performed 5 of this folk dance. The dance was very beautiful, and the students of the minority nationalities jumped with us. For a time, we all merged into the dance. With the beautiful songs, the team will end this time. In order to celebrate Childrens Day, we also watched the drama Beijing legend.

I like this national activity, it makes me know a lot of knowledge, and it has brought me a lot of joy.

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篇9:初中英语作文我的暑假

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篇一: Times flys. My summer holiday is coming to the end. My holiday is just so so. It is not too much difference as before. At the biginning of the vacation, I was doing my homework. After all, study comes first. After I finished my homework, it was almost the end of July. It is the time for me to help my family for harvest. It is so tired to to the farm work. Howevr, being a member of our family, I have to give a hand. Watching the achievement, I felt proud though I just help a little. After finished the farm work, I found myself become much more tan. Who cares! It was my happy time, when I finished all the things. I went out with my friends almost everyday. Sometimes we played games or sport or went hiking. Sometimes we went shopping in the evening for the sun is too heavy in the daytime. We felt uncomfortable. But now there are two days left before the school opening time. So I have to stay at home for a good rest to store energy for my study. Everything is so perfect. It is 11 o’clock. I think I have to say good ninght now.

时间飞逝。我的暑假就要结束了。我的假期一般般。在假期一开始的时候,我写家庭作业。毕竟,学习是最重要的嘛。我做完作业后,几乎到了七月底了。是时候帮助家人收获了。干农活是如此的累。然而,作为家庭的一员,我不得不帮忙。虽然我只是帮了一点点,但是看着那些成果我感到很骄傲。干完农活后,我发现自己变得更黑了。不过,谁在乎呢。当我完成了所有的事情就是我的快乐时光。我几乎每天都和我的朋友出去玩。有时我们玩游戏或运动或去爬山。有时我们晚上出去购物,因为白天太阳太烈了。我们觉得难受。但现在离开学还有两天的时间。所以我必须呆在家里为学习养精蓄锐。一切都是那么的美好。现在已经十一点了。我想是该说晚安的时候了。

篇二:

Summer holiday is from July to August .It s a long time for me to do all kinds of things . I like visiting some places of

interest . And I like travelling by train . It takes me too much time , but it saves money .Sometimes I stay at home and do

my homework , sometimes I help my parents do some house work. When my parents are free , we often go to the park or

the zoo , and we have a good time there . I have a good summer holiday .

我的夏日假期暑假从7月至8。这山对我来说长的时间做各种事情。我喜欢参观一些地方的利益。我喜欢坐火车旅行。这要花我太多的时间,但它可以节省资金。有时候,我留在家里做功课,有时我帮助我的父母做一些家务。当我的父母都是免费的,我们经常去公园或动物园,我们有一个好的一段时间。我有一个愉快的暑假。

篇三:

My summer holiday begun on July 7th.I love summer holiday because I dont have to go to school and I can enjoy myself with my friends.I often spend the mornings doing my homework.And I always watch TV in the afternoon at home because its very hot outside.And in the evening,I go swimming with my family and then hang out with my friends.I love swimming very much.

我的暑假7月7日开始。我喜欢暑假,因为我不用去学校,可以和朋友玩。我经常在上午做作业,下午在家看电视,因为外面很热。傍晚,我和家人去游泳然后和朋友去逛街。我很喜欢游泳。

My plan for August is travelling.I travel with my family every summer holiday.I like travelling because I can go to different places and meet different people.Sometimes I make good friends during the journey.And its very sad to say goodbye to them when the journey ends.

我八月份的计划是去旅游。我每个暑假都和家人去旅游。我喜欢旅游是因为我可以去不同的地方认识不同的人。有时候我在旅途中交到了好朋友。旅途结束和他们告别的时候我觉得很难过。

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篇10:自我介绍日记400字初中

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我叫__,今年12岁,在__省__市__小学五(1)班读书。我个子不高,长得也不胖,有一头乌黑的头发,弯弯的眉毛下,镶嵌着一双大眼睛。

我喜欢音乐,特别喜欢拉二胡。只要有我认识的曲子,都会拉。大人们夸我还真有点音乐细胞呢。我听了,心里美滋滋的。

我的优点是在家里认真预习、复习功课。每次老师布置的作业我都认真完成。数学还用草稿纸再重新验算一遍呢。因此,我的成绩还行。

我的缺点是上课不敢大胆发言,考试时不仔细。就拿语文第二单元考试来说吧,我有些会写的词都写错了,作文还写走了题呢。所以那次考得实在不理想。我已经在努力改掉这些缺点了,争取做个更好的学生。

我特别喜欢和别人打赌。输了,嘟着嘴巴就走。要是赢了,笑得眼睛变成了一条细缝。有一次,我和同学打赌,这位同学说身上有200元钱,我想:“谁会有这么多钱呀,分时是吹牛”。就让他把钱掏出来看看。果然不出我所料,他对我说:“我是骗你的”。这时,我笑着高呼:“我赢了!我赢了!”

哈哈!这就是我。听了介绍你该对我有些了解了吧。

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篇11:初中一年级英语作文:我的校园生活MySchoolLife

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Dear Wang Han(亲爱的王涵)

My school life is interesting(我的校园生活很有趣).We have many subjects to learn(我有许多科目要学习).My favourite subject is English(我最喜欢的科目是英语).Because my English teacher(以为我的英语老师),Miss White(怀特小姐),is kind to me(对我是慈祥的).I don’t like math(我不喜欢数学).I think it’s a little difficult(我认为它有一点困难).

After school(放学后),I like playing basketball reading books(我喜欢打篮球和读书).Sometimes(有时),my classmates and I play games on the playground(我的同学和我一起在操场上玩游戏).I’m happy at school(我在学校非常开心).I love my school life(我爱我的校园生活).

Yours,

Lucy.

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篇12:关于故宫的英语作文初中

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Beijing Forbidden City, the Ming and Qing dynasties of the palace. Located

in the center of Beijing. Ching Ming, said the Forbidden City in 1925, said

before the Forbidden City. Station area of 15 square meters. Is the worlds

largest and best preserved ancient palace complex. Is the highest level of

ancient Chinese architectural masterpiece

Forbidden City palace building is divided into the northern part of the

former southern part of post-sleep. Former are Wo, and in Bulgaria together the

three main hall, the emperor towards a receiving Chaohe, drawing ministers and

holding large ceremonies where the three main hall and also the tallest building

in the Forbidden City, showing their extraordinary the lofty status. After

Emperor Qin Shi Huang and Empress, funeral, Fei place to live, the emperor and

empress at the central axis of the palace residence, the Palace of the sides,

six Eastern Palaces and the Western Hospital said Liu Gong, for the aunt,

Princess live. After former sleep, clear division of labor, not easily crossed,

it reflects the Chinese ancient hierarchical, differentiated ethics.

Palace of ancient buildings, from the emperor Zhu Di himself planned

construction. Largest existing structure of the rigorous, beautiful decoration,

heritage of the many unique buildings in China, the world famous palace

complex.

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篇13:初中生介绍自己的英语作文

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Hello, everyone. My English name is Sisi .I am a middle school student.

大家好。我的英文名字叫茜茜。我是一个中学生。

My favorite animals are dolphins and rabbits. I think dolphins are smart and friendly, and rabbits are cute and a little bit quiet. Do you like koalas? They are one of Australian’s native animals. Well, to tell you the truth, I dont like them very well, because I think they are ugly.

我最喜欢的动物是海豚和兔子。我觉得海豚聪明,友好,而兔子则是可爱又有点点安静。你喜欢考拉吗?他们是一个澳大利亚的本土动物。嗯,说实话,我不是很喜欢他们,因为我觉得他们长得好丑。

I like reading books! What an interesting thing it is! From books, I can read so many good stories, For example, The Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe, this story is imaginary and powerful.

我喜欢阅读书籍!阅读是多么有趣的一件事啊! 从书中,我可以读到很多好的故事,例如,《狮子、女巫和魔衣橱》这个故事是虚构的,而且也是很强大的。

I like spring, and I think spring is the most beautiful season in the year. It’s a warm time. The winter is good, too. We can play snow and make snowman.

我喜欢春天,我觉得春天是一年中最美丽的季节。那是一个温暖的时候。冬天也很好。我们可以玩雪,堆雪人。

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篇14:小学生一分钟英语自我介绍

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Hello everyone.My name is Happier1.I come from Guangxi.

Im very happy to come here to study with you.

This class feels just like a big family to me.

Im interested in sport,pop music.I also enjoy playing games on net.I would love to play with you sometime.

I hope I can become your friend soon and make our dreams come true together.

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篇15:我的语文老师初中英语作文

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以 My Chinese Teacher 为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下: 1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。 2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。 3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。 My Chinese Teacher Of all the s

以My Chinese Teacher为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.

Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

[我的语文老师初中英语作文

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篇16:春节英语初中作文

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Hi! Peter,

I’m glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu.

TheSpring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is a custom to give lucky money to children. I get lucky money every year. I will put most of it in the bank, and spend the rest on some books. This year is no exception(也不例外) and I also got lucky money.With it, I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia,hoping the things can bring some happiness to them.

For you, I think it’s a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your hostfamily before you leave China. You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England. Or, just keep it as good memories.

I hope what I said can help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

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篇17:关于生活英语作文初中

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Nowadays, with the development of technology, the market competition is

fierce and people feel great pressure. In order to improve the working

efficiency, they force themselves to work overtime. However, they are not

machine and need to slow down life pace, or they will break down sooner or

later.

We cant slow down the working hour, but we can control our private time. A

lot of young people mix with working time and private time, so they cant enjoy

their life and feel depressed all the time. The smart person will find the

balance. They will put aside the working stuff when the clock tells them that it

is time to be off work and find the way to release their pressure, such as

KTV.

Spending the time with friends and families is always a good way to enjoy

our time. No matter what kind of difficulties we face, when we recall of these

happy moments, we will have motivation to move on. We cant choose everything we

want, but we can adjust ourselves to the environment and keep the good mood.

Once life pace slows down, we control our life.

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篇18:关于介绍自己情况英语作文

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高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况5年高考英语满分作文的基本信息_·ISBN:7802088275 9787802088276·条形码:9787802088276·版,欢迎来到/六年级作文栏目,本文为大家带来《介绍自己情况英语作文》,希望能帮助到你。

对英语试卷的评价与建议

篇一:介绍自己情况英语作文

每一次考完试之后,仅仅由别人的评价来判定自己是不全面的,当自己也沉淀下来,窥探自己的内心,写下自己的自我评价,这样才可以不断进步。但是自我评价要怎么写呢?下面是小编为大家带来的对英语试卷的评价与建议,相信对你会有帮助的。

对试卷的评价与建议篇一

一、 试卷基本结构分析

安徽卷英语试卷卷面满分150分,共86道题目。全卷由选择题和非选择题组成,第Ⅰ卷选择题包括听力、英语知识运用和阅读理解三个部分;第Ⅱ卷为第四部分写作,分为第一节任务型阅读和第二节书面表达。具体情况分布如下表:

二、总体评价

本套试卷是严格按照XXXX年安徽省高考英语《考试说明》,结合新课标《考试大纲》精心命制的,难度适中。整套试卷立足教材,突出语篇,强调应用,注重交际,语言考查的灵活性更强,

完全符合安徽高考英语试题的命题原则。其特点有下列几个方面:语言注重时代性及隐含的情感态度和文化意识,关注社会热点,语言考查的灵活性增加。

三、具体分析

第一部分 听力

.听力注重以考生熟悉的话题考查考生听英语的能力,从今年的听力试题可以看出,直接获取信息的试题有所减少,推断题有所增多。选用的材料特别注重语言的真实性和交际性,对话的内容涉及面较广,口语化程度较高。

第二部分:英语知识运用

(I)单项填空

单项填空题在保证知识覆盖面的基础上,突出一贯倡导的语境化、交际化的特点,题干力求语言生动、地道,语境真实、新颖,所选考点都是《考试说明》中所列的语法知识和要求掌握的词汇。该部分涉及动词时态和语态、固定搭配考查的有24、26、28题,33题考查倍数表达法,25、35题考查交际用语。同时兼顾对代词、形容词短语等项目的考查。整体考查全面,要求考生掌握好基础知识。

XXX年安徽卷单项填空试题考查项目数据统计:

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出,2013年高考在单项填空部分考查了考试大纲所要求的基本考点,考查的项目多达13项。主要考查了动词的时态与语态、非谓语动词以及交际用语。但去掉了对冠词、主谓一致和其它特殊句式的考查。各题题干简洁,却能够给考生创设一个个较为完整的语言情景,这有利于考查学生在具体语境下对所学过语言知识的掌握情况。

(II)完形填空

完形填空是一篇议论文,作者谈了如何学好一门语言,难度属于中等。综合考查考生在语篇中对词汇的掌握和运用能力,以及对篇章逻辑的理解和把握能力。从考点上看,主要考查实词,兼顾虚词。请看下表。

2010-2013年安徽省高考英语完形填空考点分布:

从这个统计表格中我们可以看出,高考完形填空题重点考查名词、形容词、和动词等实词。这就要求考生在了解语篇的基础上,加强语义、语境的深层次理解,同时还应具备一定的逻辑思维能力。所以在平时的学习中一定要注意高频词汇的积累,对于这些常考词的词性、词义与用法要准确无误的把握。

第三部分:阅读理解

根据考试说明,阅读理解主要考查学生六个方面的能力,即理解事实细节、理解主旨要义、推理判断、猜测词义、理解文章的基本结构、理解作者的意图,观点和态度。下面是近四年的阅读理解题的考点分布表。

XX安徽省高考英语阅读理解相关考点统计表:

从上表可以看出,2013年试卷阅读理解选材广泛。文章涉及健康习惯调查、如何确保有足够的生活用水慈善基金会、网络的发展让人们忽视了现实中交往、探戈舞的介绍等话题, 题型设计多样 ,细节理解题、推理判断题考查较多,兼顾对主旨大意、句意推测题的考查,试题整体难度适中。

第四部分:写作

该部分共分两节,第一节为任务型读写,考查考生对书面语言的监察能力;第二节为书面表达题,考查考生根据所提供的话题和特定的要求进行书面表达的能力。

(I)任务型读写

任务型读写题与2012年相比,难度相当,内容是关于幸福,学生读起来较为轻松,题目设置有梯度,答题要求简练和规范。涉及词语释义、同意替换、归纳演绎、细节理解等。 近几年安徽卷任务型读写所选文章以说明文为主,内容贴近现代社会生活。2013年此题的难度与往年持平。这就要求考生在阅读理解的基础上,对文中所提供的信息的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括,并根据表格的形式,把加工后的信息准确、有序地完成与短文有关的表格,这一题型共10题,每个空格只能填一个词。其特点是任务型阅读属于综合能力考查题,考查的能力有:(1)捕捉信息能力,属基础题,快速获取信息的能力;在这十个空中,捕捉信息题要占一半。(2)组织信息能力,属活用题,考查学生组织信息和表叙信息以及对文中的有效信息进行筛选、整合和综合概括的能力。(3)概括信息能力,属概括题,要求学生在获取相关信息后,根据表格相关要求,对所获取的信息进行二次加工,这主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。

(II)书面表达

XX年安徽省高考英语书面表达题统计表:

书面表达依旧属于话题作文,关于文明校园征稿,难度不大。命题贴近考生生活,符合考生的认知水平,能够让不同层次的考生都能不同程度地发挥自己的英语水平,体现考试的公平性。

总之,整套试卷命题科学,充分体现安徽新课标高考的精神。紧扣时代热点,整套试题渗透着对考生人文素养的培养,让考生在答题的同时受到思想感情、文化意识、价值观等方面的启发和教育。

对试卷的评价与建议篇二

期中考试已经结束了,这次考试是对于不少刚刚接触英语的初一新生而言是一次重要的考试,是全面衡量学生这段时间学习情况的一次考试。下面我主要从以下几个方面来分析:

一、考试质量分析

1.试题方面

就整个试题而言,考点分布均匀,覆盖面广,考题难度适中,大部分试题能够体现目前注重基础、体现能力的考试命题要求。

2.试卷方面

本次考试题型,分为听力部分、辨音、单项选择、阅读理解、完形填空,词汇运用,阅读表达,翻译句子和写作几个大部分,各部分难易程度不同。大部分题都比较基础,和平时的练习比较起来相对集中一些,更能反映出学生在这一阶段学习中的问题。

此次英语考试的听力部分,内容为与日常教学相关的材料,与所学教材难度相当,较为简单。朗读速度适中,对平日教学的听力训练有着良好的导向作用。但在第一节中还是有部分学生容易犯书写不规范的错误,也有些学生“g”、“j”不分,“r”、“l”混淆,因而造成较多失分。这学期对学生在听力方面的练习不是很多,除了在课堂上少量练习外,平时课下学生几乎得不到练习。

单项选择,突出了课本和平常练习中较基础的知识,学生训练较多,此部分得分较好。

完形填空,对于我校大部分基础较薄弱学生而言觉得难度较大,因选项具有大的灵活性,而学生在平时对单词的记忆和对句子的积累还不够牢,而且也没有掌握好做题技巧,没有联系上下文推测出正确答案,以至于此部分得分较低。

翻译句子,由于平时练习较多,且反复强调大小写及单词、字母的正确书写,因此这部分得分比预计要好。阅读表达学生在此题得分较少,不是多了这个就是漏了那个,答的不好,得分非常低。

写作部分大部分学生书写较差,只有极少数学生在这部分未动笔。

二、分析原因

教师方面的原因:

这段时间由于课时多,时间紧,因此对学生部分知识掌握情况的落实不够,这也是这次考试成绩不高的原因之一。从这次考试中应该吸取这样的教训。在以后的英语教学中,加大管理力度,提高学生在课堂上的学习效率。

学生方面的原因:

1.部分学生的基础知识不够扎实,且大部分学生毫无学习习惯而言,记忆知识极难,遗忘知识快,过去滚瓜烂熟的东西一段时间不用就忘了。

2.学生的应变能力有待提高,不能正确写出单词的正确形式。

3.理解能力不强,完形填空、阅读理解失分较多,不能理解通篇大意。

4.不能熟练运用学过的句型。很容易漏掉be动词。

三、今后采取的措施

抓好单词、词组过关,狠抓知识落实。在进行单词和词组教学时,首先让学生读准音,然后反复读单词和词组,并找出同义词、反义词、类似用法的词一起记。在进行句型时,以小组合作等方式举一反三,反复练习课堂上学习的句型。平时督促学生多听录音磁带,一星期集中训练两次听力,在培养学生的听力技巧和听力能力上多下功夫,提高他们的听力能力和听力技巧。

在阅读教学中,设计一些问题,通过学生自读文章找出其答案,在整体上感知文章内容。而且讲解文章时,注意生词在句中的运用、注意文章里出现的词组,注意对关键句子的理解。针对学生阅读能力差的问题,将通过大量阅读来培养学生的语感以及通过上下文捕捉信息的能力,还要注意文化背景知识的学习,拓宽学生的知识,开阔学生的视野。

不会用英文写作文是绝大多数学生的通病。作文是由句子构成,一个正确的句子需要用正确的句型、正确的词组,正确的时态构成。训练学生的答题技巧和书写方面的好习惯。写好作文,没有诀窍,只有多写多练。

在今后的教学中,我们将继续抓好双基知识的训练,打牢基本功;引导学生梳理知识,掌握语法规则,逐步引导学生灵活运用英语知识的能力;培养学生上课时的听课习惯,要求学生全神贯注,要和老师同步思考出现的问题;讲课时,尽量使用简明、准确、形象、生动的语言,坚持用英语教学,让学生用英语来想英语;在平时要通过阅读,培养学生阅读多种文体的能力,如何从文章中获取信息的能力和运用英语解决实际问题的能力。在训练中要注意方法的多样化和灵活性,同时,启发他们学会运用多种不同的方法来表达同样的思想,逐步培养良好的英语语感。在培优辅差上下功夫,大面积提高学生的优秀率和合格率。

对试卷的评价与建议篇三

英语测试对于提高教学质量起着有效的促进作用。通过测试一方面教师可以取得教学工作的信息反馈,另一方面,可以调动学生的学习积极性,使学生在今后的测试中不断发扬成绩,克服缺点,取得最佳效果。测试的重要性是显而易见的,对试卷的评讲就显得尤为重要。高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

高质量的试卷评讲会让师生收益非浅。有效的评讲,能让老师更成功地总结教学经验,分析学生学习情况以改进教学,提高教学效率和教学效果。有效的评讲,能让学生找到自己的不足和改进学习的方法。

有效地评讲英语试卷应该坚持三个原则:

一、评讲的内容和细节必须由学生实情决定。学生才是课堂的主体,教师只是引导者。学生在测试中暴露了他们自己在英语各方面存在的问题或漏洞,学生有他们自己的难点和疑惑。教师具体该讲什么和怎样讲必须根据学生的情况和特点来进行。对于学生普遍存在的难点,应该仔细分析,详细评讲。对于个别学生存在的难题,可以个别辅导,个别评讲。

二、评讲必须结合试卷特点。尽管都是英语测试,但不同阶段,不同时间的测试试卷是有其自身的特点的。教师应该在认真分析和研究试卷的基础上评讲试卷,切不可千篇一律的对待各种英语试卷。试卷的评讲步骤和时间长度都要根据试题的难度来定,当然必须结合学生实际。对于不同类别的试卷应该有不同的评讲方式,对于试卷中的不同题型也应该用不同的方法。

三、评讲时必须给予学生必要的反馈和消化的时间。英语课堂的师生互动性很强,即使是评讲试卷也应如此。评讲时切不可让老师一个人唱独角戏,其间必须穿插必要的互动和反馈。尤其在评讲典型错题时,有必要先让学生自述答题思路,然后由老师根据学生的错误根源进行讲解,最后让学生再读题目和正确的解答依据。学生始终是受教育的主体,教师切勿包办一切。

简而言之,评讲试卷必须结合试卷的特点和学生的实际情况,切不可草率行事。 怎样才能有效的评讲英语试卷呢?

第一、认真了解和初步分析试卷。在评讲前,教师有必要用自己教给学生的方法亲自把试卷做一遍,以便确定试题的检测范围和感受试题的难度。在做题的过程中可以预测学生的难点,也可以根据学生所学内容,看看哪些题目超出了学生的学习范围。当然,也可以检阅试卷的不足,以便今后选择并合理利用英语试卷。

第二、认真统计学生成绩。在批阅完学生试卷后,认真统计学生的成绩是很有必要的。统计的项目主要有:求出平均值和求出差距。在统计出平均成绩后,可以参照其他班的情况分析,确定该班的成绩位置。平均分较低,就说明该班的成绩较差。如果平均分较高,那该班的整体情况就较好。另外,还要排列出全班考生中的最高分和最低分,找出二者之间的差距。差距越大,两级分化就越严重,教学的难度就越大。在排列学生成绩时,最好由高分到低分排列,找出中间位置考生的分数,并把该成绩列为全班成绩的中位数。在评讲试题时,要特别注意中位段的学生的反映和效果。

第三、根据学生的成绩和分析情况,再次分析试卷,并做好学生的错误统计。在分析学生成绩后,及时的看学生答题的错误率,从中找出学生的典型错题。错误率较高的题目,就是要评讲的重点部位。这部分题目,既是学生应该关注的,也是教师应该详细评讲的。在统计错误率后,教师应该耐心的查阅典型错题,分析学生答错的原因,反思自己教学上的不足。对于,教师很难作分析的题目,要及时与学生进行交流,然后再确定学生做错的根源。 第四、认真耐心的评讲试卷。在试卷发给学生之后,教师可以安排学生自主讨论和简单分析自己的试卷。教师最好要提示学生如何讨论和分析。例如,要求学生发现自己的错题,并尽力分析出错题的知识类别:是宾语从句还是动词不定式,还是动名词或是其他的。

在学生分析错误类别后,可让学生互相讨论解答的方法或依据等,让学生达到初步了解解答出错的根源,并试着改正自己的错误。对于学生猜对的题目,也要要求学生诚实地标出来,一并作为错题对待,设法杜绝学生答题的侥幸心理。在学生讨论分析试卷后,教师就可以开始评讲试卷了。对于学生错误率较高的试题,教师必须详细的评讲。评讲时不光要书写答题的根据,还要多举相关的例子,最终要让学生能正确解答这些题和相似的试题。对于错误率较低的试题,蜻蜓点水般的评讲就可以了。当然,这部分错题的分析可以让成绩优秀的学生来完成。既可以从分发挥优生的能力,又能给其他学生提供鲜活的榜样。最后,就要解答学生的疑问了。

在评讲试题时,教师最好不要全部评讲,而是留一些小的疑问给学生。这样便于引导学生学会提问和思考。在教师评讲了主要错题之后,可以让学生之间互相讨论,让他们尝试相互探讨相互学习。在讨论和研究的过程中,激发学生学习的激情,启发他们思考和解决问题。在学生提出疑问后及时有针对性地给予解答,并随时肯定学生的质疑能力和探讨精神。

第五、师生认真翔实地做好总结。在师生互动地评讲完试卷后,教师和学生都有必要进行各自的总结。学生需要总结初自己在知识和能力上的薄弱环节,并写好错题集。在学生收集错题时,教师应要求他们写明解题的正确依据。英语教师也有自己的总结。要总结学生的薄弱环节,要总结自己评讲时出现的不足(范围过大,语言不清楚,讲解欠通俗等)。教师也要收集学生的典型错题。以便今后检测时插入以往的错题,让学生巩固和弥补以前的不足。

总而言之,坚持实事求是的原则,坚持师生互动的方式,让英语试卷的评讲体现教师、学生、试题和环境之间的相互作用的关系,让英语试卷的评讲更有效,才能真正的体现英语检测对学生的评价和督促作用,才能真正地增强英语教学的实际效果。

高考英语满分作文-我的秘密

篇二:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文:我的秘密

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I

immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boys parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely. When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people. Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷,而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心,我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来,小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭,但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。 我到家时已经很晚了,因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来,我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boys parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷,我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这,我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子,小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了,因为我依旧想看比赛。

但是我到家太晚了,比赛已经结束了。真遗憾!然而我仍然很高兴因为我帮助了他人。我没有将这件事告诉其他人,这只是我的秘密。

高考英语作文优秀范文分类(全)

篇三:介绍自己情况英语作文

经典范文

1、表达观点类

在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一:只用英语

优点:有助于提高听说能力等

缺憾:不易听懂等

结论:??

授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用

优点:易于理解等

缺憾:英语氛围不浓等

结论:??

注意:1.词数 100~120,短文开头已给出(不计词数)。

2.参考词汇:atmosphere 氛围

I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

名师点评:

审题是作文的第一要素,本文的审题准确无误。无论是要点的把握还是结构的组织都证明了这一点。本文运用多种复杂句式,整体看来是不错的。文中的一个复合句式显示了作者的英语功底。其他出彩短语的使用也很地道,可以参看好句中的分析。

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背诵内容:

好词1.advantage n.优点2.be familiar with,对某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.气氛高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about.

我更喜欢采用双语教学,其优点是可以更好地理解老师的话。

2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

满分文(二)

I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

名师点评:

本文写作十分成功。语言和句式是本文最大的特点。好词中词汇的使用,将作者的意思表达得完整而准确,从而映衬了词汇的重要性;其次,本文的句式以复杂句为主,表语、定语和状语从句的使用都十分到位。

应背好词:1. immerse v.沉浸2. explanation n.解释3. make progress 取得进步

应背好句:1. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so Id like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress.高考英语满分作文,介绍自己的基本情况

2. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.( 表语从句)

因此,我的观点是,用英文教授,同时对于一些难以理解的内容用中文进行辅助讲解。

练习篇目:

请根据下列内容,在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

2、学生会将于5月6日中午12:30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

3、希望全校同学从我做起,节约水资源。 2

参考词汇:干旱drought 注意:词数不少于60。

From the news we know that there is a severe drought in southwest China now. Most places we hope that all of us can realize the

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。(2009·天津)

1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;

2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意: 1. 词数:不少于100词;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。

范文背诵:

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can

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perform at your best!

Thank you!

句型背诵

①In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition.

②I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading...

③...I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

练习篇目:

假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,假如你是李华,美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物,该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信,主要内容如下:

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目:栏目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

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Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。仔细分析了这篇文章,写的的确是好,很地道的美式英语,一些词语的大胆使用,这么地道标准的英语,可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说:my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用,list, cant wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误,不管是书写还是语法。

(3)利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论,同学们观点有分歧,各自理由主要如下表所示,请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意:1.词数:150左右 2.标题、开头已经写好,不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。 参考词汇:故宫the Palace Museum; 颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization(文明). And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the

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高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

篇四:介绍自己情况英语作文

高考英语满分作文 一次受表扬的经历

July 17th Fine

This morning, on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A little girl was calling for help in the river nearby. I immediately got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. At last the girl was saved, After sending the girl back home, I hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

However, in the afternoon the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. Soon the story spread all over the school. TherefOre, the teacher knew why I was late this morning and he apologized to me. The headmaster also praised me and called on all the students to learn from me.

7月17日 晴

今天早晨,在上学的路上,我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩正在附近的河里喊救命。我立即跳下车,脱掉衣服,跳到河里。女孩终于得救了。把小女孩送回家后,我急忙赶到学校,但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因,老师批评了我。

然而下午小女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿,很快我的事迹传遍了整个校园。由此老师知道了我今早迟到的原因,他向我道歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。

July 17th Fine

Today I did a thing that was well worth doing although I was misunderstood at the beginning.

This morning on my way to school, I was riding when I heard a call for help. A girl fell into the river! I got off my bike, took off my clothes and jumped into the river. After a few minutes struggle, I finally saved the girl, I informed the girls parents and then hurried to school. But I was still late for class. Not knowing the reason, the teacher criticized me.

In the afternoon, the girls parents came to my school and thanked me for having saved their daughter. After the teacher learned the whole thing,he made an apology to me. And the headmaster praised me and also called on all the students to learn from me. I felt very proud.

7月17日 晴

今天我做了一件非常值得做的事情,尽管开始我被误会了。

今天早晨,在上学的路上,我正骑着车突然听到呼救声。一个小女孩落水了!我立即跳下车,脱掉衣服,跳到河里。几分钟的努力后我终于救了小女孩。我通知了小女孩的父母然后就急忙赶到学校,但是仍然迟到了。由于不知道原因,老师批评了我。

下午女孩的父母来学校感谢我救了他们的女儿。老师知道了整件事后向我道了歉。校长表扬了我并号召所有的学生向我学习。我感到非常自豪。

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篇19:我最难忘的老师初中英语作文

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Time flies so fast . I will to be a middle school student . In my class , I have a good teacher . Her name is Zhu Xihui.

She is my math teacher . She is good at math . Many math teachers ask her quastion .One day , Iwent to her office asked her quastion . She explained it for me . Careful and clearly .My math teacher Is my first teacher . The teacher I never forget . I will tell her : I love you ! You are my teacher . I’m very happy !

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篇20:初中英语作文年轻人减肥的态度

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When we watch TV, there are so many beautiful models, wearing beautiful dress with their skinny body, they are sending out such message that if you are skinny, you’ll be looking gorgeous just as them. Affecting by the trend, young people loose weight by no means.

当我们看电视的时候看到很多漂亮的模特,纤瘦的身材,穿着漂亮的衣服,他们在发出一种信息,如果你纤瘦,漂亮的衣服,他们在发出一种信息,如果你纤瘦,你也会看起来像他们美丽。受潮流影响,年轻人不惜使用一切方法来减肥

On the one hand, some young people lose weight by taking medicine, even eat no food. The ads are always leading the young people to the wrong thought, they tell people that they can loose weight quickly by taking some pills, which are doubted by the doctors. In order to look as the movie starts, people even reject to take food, they eat fruit and fight against hunger.

一方面,一些年轻人通过服药减肥,甚至不进食。广告总是让年轻人产生错误的想法,广告告知人们可以通过服药来快速减肥,这是被医生怀疑的。为了看起来像电影明星一样,人们甚至拒绝进食,吃少量水果,和饥饿做斗争。

On the other hand, some young people keep the clear mind, they make themselves look perfect by doing exercise and keep balanced diet. Their purpose is not looking as good as movie starts, but for keeping fit. They don’t believe in the ads, they believe that lose weight not properly will hurt the body, so they pay special attention to the health.

另一方面,一些年轻人保持清醒的意识,他们通过运动和平衡饮食来让自己看起来完美。他们的目的不是为了像明星一样好看,是为了保持健美。他们不相信广告,相信不适当的减肥会导致身体受害,因此他们特别注重健康。

Loosing weight is hard work, even dangerous thing, if we are so blind to loose weight, we will lose our life. Young people should take care to the healthy way.

减肥是艰辛的工作,甚至是危险的事情,如果完美盲目减肥,会丢掉性命。年轻人应该注重健康的方法。

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