初一英语作文过新年（最新20篇）

Do you know what kind of animal I like most? It’s monkey. Monkey is a kind

of lovely animal. Many people like monkeys very much. Generally, monkey has

small body covered with fur. Some kinds of monkeys have two big eyes and ears

and a long tail. I can see them on TV or the zoo. Every time I go to the zoo, I

will go to see them. Monkeys often stay in trees and jump between them. They are

so lively and favorable. When they are happy, they will act for visitors. It’s

very funny.

【摘要】“初一英语作文关键词语指导”本文是编者为大家整理的英语作文写作关键词，希望可以给大家的学习带来帮助：

一、表示递进关系的关键词语

Additionally加之;又

besides此外;除……之外

equallyimportant同样重要的是

furthermore此外;而且

inaddition另外

inotherwords换句话说

lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是

moreover而且;此外

thatissay即;就是;换句话说

二、表示转折关系的关键词语

although虽然;尽管

atthesametime同时;但是

despite不管;尽管;不论

evenif即使

eventhough即使

however然而;可是

inspiteof不管

instead代替;而不是

nevertheless然而;不过

onthecontrary正相反

otherwise另外;不同地

regardlessof不管;不顾

still依然;仍然

though虽然;可是

while而

yet然而;但是;仍

三、表示选择关系的关键词语

either…or………或……

insteadof………，而不是……

neither…nor………和……都不……

not…but…不是……而是……

ratherthan…宁可;胜过

whether…ornot是否

四、表示比较关系的关键词语

comparewith/to与……比较

equally相等地;平等地

incomparisonwith与……比较

incontrast相反;大不相同

incontrastto和……对比

inthesameway同样地

instead代替;改为

onthecontrary正相反

while而

五、表示因果关系的关键词语

accordingly因此;从而

asaresultof作为结果

because(of)因为

consequently从而;因此

dueto由于;应归于

hence因此;从此

inthat由于;因为;既然

nowthat因为;既然

onaccountof由于

owingto由于;因……的缘故

so所以

sothat所以

thanksto由于

therefore因此;所以

thus因此

六、用于表示总结的关键词语

aboveall最重要的是

accordingly于是

asaconsequence因此

asaresult结果

ashasbeennoted如前所述

asIhavesaid如我所述

atlast最后

briefly简单扼要地

bydoingso如此

certainly当然地;无疑地

consequently因此

eventually最后

hence因此

inaword总之

inbrief简言之

inconclusion总;最后

inshort简而言之

insummary简要地说

insum总之;简而言之

obviously显然

onthewhole总体来说;整个看来

toconclude总而言之

tospeakfrankly坦白地说

tosumup总而言之

tosummarize总而言之

以上是小编为大家整理的“初一英语作文关键词语指导”全部内容。

If I had my life to live over...I would have talked less and listened more.

I would have invited friends over to dinner even if the carpet was strained and the sofa faded.

I would have taken the time to listen to my grandfather ramble about his youth.

I would never have insisted the car windows be rolled up onasummer day because my hair had just been teased and sprayed.

I would have burned the pink candle sculpted like a rose before it melted in storage.

I would have sat on the lawn with my children and not worried about grass stains.

I would have cried and laughed less while watching television-and more while watching life.

I would have gone to bed when I was sick instead of pretendingtheearth would go into a holding patter if I were not there fortheday.

I would never have bought anything just because it was practical,would not show soil or was guaranteed to last a lifetime.

There would have been more I love yous ... more Im sorrys...but mostly, given another shots at life, I would seize every minute... look at it and really see it...live it...and never give it back.

hello, everyone! my name is i’m a student in a very beautiful school called liangbing middle school and i am in class 1 grade 7.my hometown liangbing is also a beautiful town. i’m very happy and i like to make friends with others. i  also like singing but traveling is my favorite, i have been to  many interesting places in china but i haven’t been to other  countries. what a pity!

at school, i study chinese,math, english, history, politics  and so on. i like all of them. i often help my teacher takecare of my class and i think i am a good helper. i live with my parents and we go home on time every day.

when i am at home, i often help my mother do some housework and my

mother said i am a good helper, too. my mother is a barber.she cuts hair very well.she is kind.many people like her. she often teaches me the way of

learning well, if you want to learn english well, here is some of my advice. at first , you must read many articles and know many words, if you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary, you should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. if you keep working hard, you will be successful. then, you ought to speak english as much as possible. remember an old saying, nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it.  that’s all, thank you.

Dear teacher takong

Hello, I wish you health and happiness in the New Year!

It is said that one day is a teacher and "life is a father". You have

taught me hard for four years. The knowledge I learned in my four years of

Enlightenment has benefited me a lot. I regard you as "a mother for life". I

often think of three old people -- father, mother and you.

Think of your efforts to us, todays teachers will pay, but their

remuneration is high to the sky. Students who are not good at learning can make

up lessons. In the past four years, there are no repeaters in our class. It was

an excellent class with red scarf in the county. At that time, it was worthy of

the name. It is not like that we have to evaluate what we want to send from East

to west. At that time, there were a lot of poor students. Some students couldnt

even pay the tuition fee of 1 yuan and 6 jiao. You paid it for them. Todays

teachers are impatient to see many poor students.

When you were born to build a new brother, the students invited to see you.

Everyone gathered together a few cents to buy two catties and dried it. You said

that was not good. As long as you had this intention, you would be very happy

and asked everyone to eat it. At that time, you were not sensible and greedy, so

they ate more than half of those sent to you. Now I think of it as ridiculous,

naive and lovely. You told us to listen to the substitute teacher and ask the

monitor to take some poor students to your home with their homework books. You

patiently tell them the reasons why they are not good at their studies, and tell

them about it. An inch of time is worth an inch of money, and an inch of money

is hard to buy an inch of time. If you fail to pass the grade for another year,

its a pity that you have given them supplementary lessons. In order to

consolidate the results, you let the students with good grades help one poor

student, This kind of professionalism has infected us and sowed good seeds in

our hearts. Even when we are adults, we are very dedicated to our work, but not

as good as you.

You said that you often have classmates to see you, said that we have

teacher-student feelings - this is your love for us, so we can not forget you,

so we have to visit you. We know how many years ago you were named a model

teacher, and the students are happy for you; you deserve it!

What moved me all my life is that you came to my sick mother! When you

heard that my mother was seriously ill, you brought the expensive nutriment and

asked to find our home. We all thank you very much. It has been 30 years since

you taught me. Is there any such teacher now? In addition to visiting my parents

every time I go home to visit you, no gift has been given to you. A primary

school teacher remembers the students she taught for decades, Im afraid not

many; Im not a celebrity, Im not a big money, I dont have an official

position, Im a very ordinary person, teacher; you are my cultural benefactor,

the most respected person in our family, when I write this letter to you, my

mother will be happy in heaven, because in her illness, you go to see her, she

is happy for a long time.

New years day, I wish the teacher to enjoy the happiness of his family,

students, you study hard, do not understand the place to ask me, I am a teacher,

"can not mislead peoples children" with this sentence will always linger in my

ears. Teacher, you can live a long life. Now you are 80 years old and still in

good health. I am happy for you. I will not forget you. I will go to see

you.

I wish the teacher health, happiness and longevity

Your student Lu Guiling

New Year is coming, everybody happily preparing for New Year. This time, every family hung red lanterns, my house is no exception. In the New Year everyone talking and laughing there to buy clothes, some through the door to someones home, and eat in.

When night falls, street by street lamps are lit up, just then, I quickly ran downstairs, holding all kinds of fireworks, so I hurriedly set fire to, see back fire burning fireworks, like a rocket fly into the sky, fireworks in the sky, suddenly blown away, heaven left a colourful word mark, suddenly, my eyes filled with light.

Then I entered into the crowd of happy, I suddenly see, people in happy to play games, a happy smile on his face. Even I also involuntarily went in. Tell jokes to each other, we play games, set off firecrackers and charade, etc. Then, I met a classmate, I say: "happy New Year!" She also said: happy New Year! Then we visit each other. Later, I heard the deafening firecrackers, the voice warm and lasting. I see people in voice shout, yell, I hurry to leave.

Smell of rice fragrance in the home, I will follow the aroma ran back to the home, eat delicious dumplings, ensure that you would went to the big full the luck to eat STH delicious. After dinner, I put on new clothes to go shopping, the man in the street that is people mountain people sea! I almost fell down! Not only this, that is, to the street a bargain. People immersed in laughter, that night, chill in approaching, people are not willing to leave, still there and celebrate, looking forward to the New Year arrives.

新年到了，大家兴高采烈地做迎新年的准备。这时间，家家户户挂满了火红的灯笼，我家也不例外。在新年里大家说说笑笑，有的去买衣服，有的去别人家闯门，还有的在家里吃饭。

当夜幕降临的时候，街道旁的路灯都不约而同的亮了起来，就在这时候，我飞快的跑下楼去，手里拿着各种各样的烟花炮竹，于是，我连忙点起火来，只见背火熊熊燃烧的烟花，像火箭一样向天空飞去，天上的烟花，突然间被炸开了，天上留下了五颜六色的道痕，突然，我的眼睛里充满了光明。

然后我就融入了欢乐的人群当中，我忽然看到，人们在高兴地做游戏，脸上露出了开心的笑容。连我也不由自主地走了进去。我们互相讲笑话，玩游戏，放鞭炮，猜字谜等。接着，我碰到了同学，我说：“新年好!”她也说：新年好!然后我们就互相拜访。过后，我就听到了震耳欲聋的鞭炮声，那声音热烈而持久。在声音里我看到人们大声欢呼，喊叫，我着急地离开了。

闻见家里的饭香味，我就顺着香气跑回了家里，吃上香喷喷的饺子，保证你去了会大饱口福。吃完饭，我穿上了新衣服去逛街，街上的人那是人山人海啊!我差一点就摔倒了!不光这个，街上的东西还应有尽有，物美价廉。人们沉浸在欢声笑语之中，夜深了，寒意在逼近，人们都不愿意离去，还在那里尽情地欢庆，期盼新的一年到来。

It is about half past four.It is time for sport.The students are on the playground.

They are playing a football match.LiDong is one of them.He is good at football.He plays well.He is on the school football team.LiDong says,I like playing football.It is my favourite sport.LiDong‘s friends,PanChen and WangHaisay,He‘s a football fan.Ronaldo is his favourite player.

Look at the boys around the basketball court.Many boys are watching a basketball match.The tall boy,Tanglin,is very good at playing basketball.He is very fast and he plays well.Many of his friends say,He is a good basketball player.His favourite basketball player is YaoMing.His team is sure to win.

I hope they can be the good players of our country,too.

现在是四点半。该是体育运动的时候了。学生们在操场上。

他们正在踢足球match.lidong就是其中之一。他擅长踢足球，他踢得很好。他是学校足球team.lidong说，我喜欢踢足球。这是我最喜欢的运动。立冬&lsquo；的朋友，潘琴和WangHaisay，他&lsquo；是一个足球迷，罗纳尔多是他最喜欢的球员。

看看周围的男孩篮球场。许多男孩正在看篮球比赛，高个子的男孩，Tanglin，篮球打得非常好。他很快，他打得很好。他的许多朋友说，他是一个很好的篮球运动员。他最喜欢的篮球运动员是YaoMing，他的团队肯定赢。

我希望他们也能成为我们国家的好球员。

Teachers Day

September 10 is our Teachers’ Day. In the afternoon, Zhonghua school held a celebration meeting, at which more than twenty old teachers each were praised with a medal for their over thirty years of teaching. Our principal made an enthusiastic speech at the meeting, and then the representative of the teachers and students gave a talk to us. After the meeting, we started performances played by some teachers and students, which were very interesting and instructive. We all had a wonderful time. I think we all should respect the teachers, engineers of human soul.

译文：九月十日是教师节，下午中华小学举行了一场庆祝活动，会上有20多位教师授以奖牌，为他们30多年坚守在教育岗位。会上校长做了激情澎湃的演讲，然后分别是老师代表，学生代表发言。会议结束后，我们观看了老师及同学表演的节目，非常有趣且有教育意义，我们度过了很棒的一天。我觉得每个人都要尊敬老师——这位灵魂的工程师。

Teachers Day

Teachers’ Day comes on September 10th every year. On the day we usually give our teachers cards to show our thanks. I thank them for helping me when I am in trouble, and I thank them for teaching me how to be a real man.

Of course they are very friendly to everyone. They always get on very well with their students. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. They love us very much and we love them,too.

译文：每年的9月10日是教师的节日。在这一天，我们通常会给老师卡片以示感谢。我感谢他们在我遇到困难的时候帮助我，感谢他们教会我如何成为一个真正的人。

当然，他们对每个人都很友好。他们总是和他们的学生相处得很好。他们不仅是我们的老师，也是我们的朋友。他们非常爱我们，我们也爱他们。

When neutrons is the turn of midnight, New Year bell sounded, the entire land of China over firecrackers Beidao Tianyu. In this "age, a month, when Yuan," "3" times and in some places still yard barrier "Wanghuo" Airbus to show brisk gas, booming levels. Wanghuo burning in flames around, the children set off fire crackers, joyous to jump and when that happens, the house is brightly lit, the lights. Pretrial is brilliant sparks house is the noisy sounds, the eve of the Chinese Lunar New Year festive atmosphere to a climactic.

on new year s eve, our class had a party. the atmosphere was good. it was out of the ordinary from the very begining. the boy student from one bedroom gave an unusual performance. we saw a boy named li xinmin turn off all the lights in a sudden snap. then with three resounding crow of a cock echoing in the hall, the hall was again brightly lit in a snap.

then, the representative of the bedroom zhu guozhang asked us to guess a line of a poem related to the above situation. he added that li xinmin alone was born in the year of the dog and the other three were all born in the year of the chicken. they left us all in confusion. and it was our monitor who was quickwitted. he shouted our, the day breaks as the cock crows three times at dawn. the hall after that, they had another item. this time li xinmin was placed in the middle of the circle. while he was standing there, the other three stood around him, each bowing down to him at an angle of 120 degrees. it was an idiom. this time i got it right: the dog stands out among a group of chickens.

then we all sang and played games until it was eleven o clock at night. the old man on night watch came to turn off the lights. we had to tear ourselves away from the party.

from this activity, i discovered that many of our classmates are really talented singers.

[关于新年高一英语作文

winter is my favourite season. because my birthday is in it. it lasts from december to february. in winter it is cloudy, windy, cold and dry. in winter i take off my dress and put on my coat. i can make a snowman, go sking and go skating in it. i can drink chocolate. but i can’t drink cold water and eat ice-creams. winter is white. i like winter very much.

导语：乡村的景色真的很美丽，那是很多人向往的生活，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语范文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I live in the village with my grandparents. I love the life here. Early in the morning, the air is very fresh and the thick fog covers this small village, making the village look charming. At dusk, the sunset is very big and it looks like a burning ball. I can see it almost everyday. The scenery here is so beautiful.

【参考译文】

我和我爷爷奶奶住在农村。我很喜欢这里的生活。清晨，空气非常清新，浓雾覆盖了这个小村庄，使之看起来很迷人。黄昏时分，夕阳非常大，看起来就像一个燃烧的火球。这样的情景我几乎每天都可以看到，这里的风景是那么的美丽。

“哦，太棒了!”我情不自禁地跳跃着，终于可以独立了，家长不是常说我们的自理能力太差吗?这可是一个极可以表现自我的机会。

来到寝室，我胡乱地塞好了东西，重重地躺到床上，美滋滋地想到，这就是我以后的小窝了。当我得知我的好朋友睡在我的上铺时，我一蹦三尺高……那晚，我几乎没睡，是聊天聊了一晚吧。第二天一早，大约三、四点，我们和太阳公公比赛看谁起得早(去看日出)跳啊，蹦啊!也许这就是我们最快乐的时光了。

可好景不长……

More and more people makes the traffic busier and busier.

Most people keen to live in the big cities where are more convenient and the children can receive better education.But the problem is the heavy traffic create too much pollution which does great harm to humans health.

So,to keep ourselves safe,I think we should do at least two things like below.

Firstly,we should obey the traffic rules whenever we are and even when we are in a deadly hurry.If everyone can do so,everything on the road will be in turn well.

Secondly,we should ask ourselves and our relatives and friends to walk instead of riding or driving if possible,when the time is no enough,we must try to take a bus rather than drive a car.More vehicles will of course cause more traffic problems.Thats my ideas,I hope it is acceptable.

Last night, I watched a tennis game, it was the US open, because there was

a Chinese female player came to the semi-final, so I stayed up to watched the

game. Unluckily, she was injured twice, though she still wanted to finish the

game, her body situation did not allow her to do so. Her insistence moved so

many audience, they gave her the biggest applause.

The power of insistence is great, it will help you set free your potential

and keep move on. Just for the players, they will face all kinds of incidences

now and then, but the will to insist will make them finish the game. Sometimes,

people win the game not because of their excellent skills, but their strong

will. Those who can stick on to the final line will win people’s applause.

What’s more, when people insist to finish the game, it is the respect that

they show to their opponents. Their spirit deserves people’s applause.

Insistence is a merit, we should keep it, no matter what we do, we must remember

to insist.

初一英语作文一：My day

I had a wonderful holiday at spring festival.I went to the park with my friends.We met at eight oclock at the school gate.We went to the park by bike.It was a beautiful day.We sat under a big tree and chated with each other.We took about some movies and some fun things.We had lunch there.We ate hamburgers and some drinks,but I know they are not healthy and not good for us.Then we played some games.

We were all fell tired,but we were very happy!It was great fun!

初一英语作文二：My day

In the morning of yesterday ,I got up a little earlily.After my breakferst ,I began to stduyed until the moon . I played soccer and computer to rest.In the final of the day ,I spent 30 mins on watching TV berfore finishing my homework.

初一英语作文三：My day

My Day Today is sunny. I get up early and read some English. Then I have breakfast and go to school. In the morning we have four lessons, they’re two Enlish lessons, one Chinese lesson and one history lesson. I like English best. At noon we have lunch at school, we have rice and vegetables, but we don’t like them very much. In the afternoon we have two math lessons and one music lesson. Math is difficult, but I study hard. And we sing a beautiful song. We finish school at a quarter to five. I play basketball with my friends on the playground. It’s fun! Then I go home and do my homework, next I have dinner with my parents and watch TV. I go to bed at nine o’clock.

【参考译文】

今天是晴天。我起得很早，读了一些英语。然后我吃早饭去上学。在早上我们有四节课，他们是英语课，一节语文课和一节历史课。我最喜欢英语。中午我们在学校吃午饭，我们吃米饭和蔬菜，但是我们不太喜欢他们。下午我们有两节数学课和一节音乐课。数学很难，但我努力学习。我们唱一首美丽的歌。我们在五点一刻结束学业。我和朋友在操场上打篮球。这很有趣!然后我回家做作业，然后和父母一起吃晚饭，看电视。我九点睡觉。

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

I like the new year, people in the Spring Festival, the spring festival couplet, watch the Spring Festival Gala, set off firecrackers, fireworks, eating hot pot … … new year is really lively!

To thirty in the big year, after eating the rich years night meal, it is time to see the Spring Festival evening. The Spring Festival Gala began, and the family gathered in front of the TV punctually, concentrating on their faces, hum and mouth dancing from time to time. The evening shows are colorful, with cross talk, sketches, singing, dancing and magic … … every program wins everyones compliments, cheers and laughter. At the end of the party, the host shouted: “ ten, nine, eight … … two, a ” the new year began.

New years first day, often to go out to play. Our family came to the busiest place in Putian, — — the pedestrian street, the “ the ground Avenue ” Then he went to Putian, one of the famous places of interest “ Lantau Peak Park ” the time tunnel, the ice carving, the enjoyment of the food … … have fun.

The first two often do not go out, so only “ nest ” at home, do homework, watch TV … …

The next few days, in addition to new years day. The remaining few days to go to visit our relatives, relatives, eat dinner together tonight. If you have time to go shopping together, pick up some new clothes, buy some special purchases for the Spring Festival … …

The new year day is very busy, at night, eating while watching tv. My evening meal is more abundant than on the thirty from the 6. At the beginning of 7, you usually have to eat 8. The 9 point is enough. That is, at 8, many people celebrate this special festival with fireworks and firecrackers. The fireworks are simply flying all over the sky, and the sky is decorated with colorful and colorful.

The new year is a lot of fun, a lot of good-looking, and a lot of delicious food.

Dear Mr. Shan

Hello! The Spring Festival is coming. I sincerely wish you a happy new year

and smooth work!

I have been getting along with you for four years. When I first came into

this campus, I was still a little girl. You taught me how to learn and how to be

a person. I remember that I got the first full mark in the Chinese test in grade

one. Your encouraging words and affirmative eyes have made me unforgettable.

Since then, I have determined to be a good student with both good character and

learning.

Mr. Shan, I know that my handwriting is not good. Every time I see you

annotate "write carefully" at the end of your homework, I feel very ashamed.

This winter vacation, I set a goal for myself to practice calligraphy for an

hour every day. Do you know what? I have written the words in the fourth grade

Chinese textbook three times and practiced each word 12 times, so as not to let

you worry about my words any more.

Single teacher, I quietly tell you that I like you very much. It is you who

have taught me rich knowledge, you have taught me the truth of being a man, it

is you who have cultivated my positive and enterprising character, and you have

given me a pair of powerful wings to let me roam in the world of knowledge!

Single teacher, you have worked hard for us. You should pay more attention

to your body and drink more water, which is good for your voice. Id like to

express my highest respect to you! I can only repay you with excellent results -

teacher, you have worked hard!

I wish you a happy New Year!

Your students

导语：如今，几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服，这引起了越来越多的关注。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Nowadays, almost all junior and senior students wear school uniforms which attract a growing number of attention. But the evaluation of students and parents on the school uniforms is always dissatisfied than commended. Don’t we want to wear school uniforms? Absolutely not. The real reasons are that the uniform style is old fashioned and the color is too dark. Besides, the school uniform is expensive but poor quality. In school, we are willing to wear school uniform, but we just hope that the style of uniform is what we like and suit for us.

【参考翻译】

如今，几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服，这引起了越来越多的关注。但是，学生和家长对校服的看法总是不满多过赞成。我们想穿校服吗?绝对不想。真正的原因是校服的款式过时了，而且颜色太暗了。除此之外，校服又贵质量又不好。在学校，我们愿意穿校服，但是我们只希望校服的款式是我们喜欢并且适合我们的。

There are many kinds of animals in the world. What animal do I like? Let’s

know her.

Many people like her very much. I also like her. She is from China. She is

very cute. She doesn’t eat grass and meat at all. She eats bamboo every day. She

is so nice. She is black white. She has two big black ears and eyes. And she

also has black legs and arms.

What animal is she? She is a panda. I like panda very much. Do you like

her? What animal do you like?