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1000有关感恩节的英文作文_节日作文1600字
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+ 加入清单Do you know thanksgiving day? Do you know why human thank god?
Thanksgiving falls on the fourth thursday of november, a different date every year. the president must proclaim that date as the official celebration.
Thanksgiving is a time for tradition and sharing. even if they live far away, family members gather for a reunion at the house of an older relative. all give thanks together for the good things that they have.
In this spirit of sharing, civic groups and charitable organizations offer a traditional meal to those in need, particularly the homeless. on most tables throughout the united states, foods eaten at the first thanksgiving have become traditional.
What should we thank?
The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with we existence of space, bring storm to let us accept
To toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.
The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life!
The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us.
The thankful classmate and friend grows up road of, let i no longer standing alone in the itinerary of life; the with gratitude is frustrated and let us become in a time the failure stronger.
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篇1:初中英文
全文共 584 字
+ 加入清单Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I
always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will
try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights
when I leave the classroom. I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life. And
even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I
suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And we’d better not spend
much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment,
I believe the earth will be a better place.
篇2:《草船借箭》缩写
全文共 389 字
+ 加入清单作者: 齐士轩
周瑜看到诸葛亮很有才干,心里很妒忌。
有一天,周瑜和诸葛亮一起商议军事,周瑜让诸葛亮造十万只箭,诸葛亮说只要三天,周瑜认为诸葛亮在开玩笑,而诸葛亮却立下了军令状,周瑜很高兴,便摆了宴席。
诸葛亮走后,周瑜吩咐军匠们不给诸葛亮齐全的材料,还让鲁肃去探听诸葛亮。
鲁肃见了诸葛亮,诸葛亮让鲁肃帮他的忙,而鲁肃却说,他能怎么办?诸葛亮便对鲁肃说了自己的要求,最后还对鲁肃说不能让都督知道,否则计划就完了。
鲁肃私自按着诸葛亮对他说的办,一连两天都不见诸葛亮的动静,直到第三天诸葛亮让鲁肃跟着他一起去取,诸葛亮是去曹营的,这时候大雾非常的大,什么也看不见,诸葛亮下令让士兵们擂鼓、呐喊,曹操听见了,便让弓弩手朝他们放箭。
天快亮了,雾还没有散,诸葛亮让士兵们回去,曹操得知上了当,因为这边的船是顺风,追也追不上了。
到了江边,周瑜正好来拿箭,鲁肃见了他把经过说了一遍,周瑜便自愧不如。
篇3:关于秋雨的记忆作文800字
全文共 1508 字
+ 加入清单我爱雨,更爱秋天的雨。虽然现已冬至,我却把秋雨看做一种语言,喜爱她,有时甚于春天。
秦少游的“自在飞花轻似梦,无边丝雨细如愁”二句,虽然未必是在写秋雨,但那一份芊绵清远的情味,却早已与秋雨暗通款曲了。秋之雨连绵细密,天空中铺开了一帘水雾,像画家泼墨晕染出的一派缥缈迷离的幻境。触目所及,那些建筑、树木、街道,路上的车辆,还有行人,都变得朦胧起来,平添了些许绰约的风致。
秋雨有足够的耐心,它不疾不徐,淅淅沥沥地,细细擦拭着天地间的万物。街道两边原来是风尘仆仆、舟车劳顿的灌木,现在被洗得发亮,像是脱下了脏兮兮的褴褛衣衫,换上了盛典华服,在雨中漫步、顾盼,想象自己是雨中丽人。灌木丛圆圆的叶片儿上,凝着一粒粒雨珠,晶莹闪亮,映着天光,变幻着色彩,每一粒都如万花筒一般,映出一个奇妙的世界。灌木丛之间,间或伸出一些袅娜的花枝,合着秋雨的舞步,颔首、敛眉、垂手、斜倚栏杆,忽若轻颦,倏忽浅笑,“似牵衣待话,别情无极”。低矮的灌木丛脚下,狼藉着的是残红,是落英,零落成泥。而在它们的上面,一排排伫立着的是那些常年青翠的乔木。对于它们来说,秋雨就如同天沐,是真正的甘霖。它们一株株挺拔了身形,舒展开臂膀和四肢,在浓浓的秋雨中保持着一种虔诚、惬意的渊深与静默,又像是一些沉入暝想中的清教徒,凝神闭目在谛听,享受那远自天国的音乐。
在我眼里,秋雨就像一位梳着亚麻色麻花辫的姑娘,一袭清袍。她跪坐在教堂,纯洁又虔诚,教堂四周的穹顶上有彩色玻璃,她在祷告。秋雨应该就是那个样子的。
与秋雨结伴而行的是那些天上的薄雾、浓云,山间之朝岚、之暮霭,一丝丝、一缕缕地飘过来飘过去,充满了灵性,也带来了某种对于奇幻的期待,仿佛就在下一秒钟,阳光就会穿透云层的缝隙,放射出灿烂犀利的光芒,风卷云散,云蒸霞蔚,气象万千起来。
秋雨中我不喜欢撑伞,总是趁妈妈没注意时,悄悄探出手去,感受一下雨触碰到皮肤上的清凉。我会想象雨滴是一个孩子,独自闯入了一个陌生世界,睁大他好奇而惊恐的眼睛,悄悄挨近我,试探着碰一碰,马上又缩回手,假装什么都没发生一样。我看穿了他的心思,悄悄笑起来,允许他继续这种幼稚而天真的游戏。有时我还会闭上眼睛,用心去捕捉耳边掠过的秋雨的声音,窸窸窣窣,俯在你耳边细语,说着女孩之间的悄悄话,我会仔细分辨那些声音里所传达出来的神秘信息。有时候秋雨靠得我太近,简直要贴到我的耳朵上来,它的呼吸逗得我耳朵发痒,禁不住要笑出声来。可是我又怕惊到它,不敢挪动身体,生怕秋雨一溜烟跑开,跑到街角的拐弯处,再也不回来了。时间一长,有时候我真的错以为自己听得懂秋雨的话。这些说给别人,可能没人会认真地听,这叫“可为知者言,不足为外人道”呀!
雨后初霁是另外一番景象。地面上的雨还没有干透,秋意便先心神荡漾起来。它吻遍了所有的生灵和万物。谁说秋风一例都是萧条无情的?在我看来,秋仙子提着她藕荷色的裙摆,轻轻摇曳着,微步凌波,让那些金桂啦、银桂啦、丹桂啦,一路追逐着、小跑着、芬氲着,然后回看它们俏皮而又狼狈的样子。树下不时掠过一阵秋风,仿佛不经意间滑落在湖面上,小憩,流连,揉出涟漪,掀翻荷叶,一痕一痕渐渐地远去了。然后在芳草的尽头轻灵地一跃,扶摇而上,像古琴的泛音。这正是初唐诗人王勃大展拳脚的时机——“落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色。”湖中是天光云影,而天上则是静影沉璧,湖中的五色锦鲤都蜕变成晚霞,缓缓展开它美丽的花纹,绚烂的色彩熠熠闪亮。
过去,人们看秋天的眼光不免局促。人的格局一小,满眼看到的就尽是悲秋的意绪和枯竭了的才气。今天,我们也可以换一种心情,去登高临远,去矫首长歌,去发现秋天里的风华绝代——是那么丰饶、成熟、五彩斑斓、五音繁会的世俗人生啊!
篇4:秋雨作文400字
全文共 382 字
+ 加入清单沙沙沙……像柔丽清新的旋律,像温情脉脉的音乐。还在沉睡中的我被这样的声音惊醒了,我睁开眼睛向窗外眺望,秋雨犹如潺潺的清泉,融入我的心田,留下了不可抹去的痕迹。
秋雨细细的,像花针,像细丝,像牛毛密密斜织着,使我眼前展现出了一幅绚丽明艳的图画。在那远处的山间蒸腾起了白雾,那白雾迷漫,仿佛是一条条白龙盘绕在山腰上,远看上去又好像是一条白色的围巾,围在山腰上给山保暖。在白茫茫的烟雾中,我偶尔看见了披着蓑戴着笠的农民在收获庄稼,偶尔也看见了颗粒饱满的稻谷金黄一片,构成了一幅美丽的画卷。
秋雨落在快要成熟的果实上,使果实更加光彩照人;火红的枫树叶在秋雨的抚摸下,变得更加红艳而美丽;秋雨落在清澈透明的小河上,荡起阵阵水波;秋雨飞洒进小溪,使小溪加快步伐流得更快了,使小溪更加优美了。
秋雨绵绵下个不停,画出一幅幅绚丽的图画,奏出成熟、丰收的乐章,秋雨就是这样留在了我的心上。
篇5:将相和缩写
全文共 335 字
+ 加入清单作者:郝兵雨
战国时候,秦国最强,常常进攻别的国家。
有一回,赵王得了一块和氏璧,秦王想用十五座城换和氏璧,赵王就叫蔺相如去换壁。
蔺相如到了秦国,进宫见了秦王,秦王只欣赏璧,不提城的事,蔺相如知道秦王不想拿城换璧,就用妙计取回了璧,没让秦王得逞,赵王就给蔺相如升官了。
这就是完璧归赵的故事。
过了几天,秦王约赵王来到渑池会,赵王让蔺相如随行,亲王侮辱了赵王,蔺相如就想方设法侮辱秦王,秦王又没得逞,赵王又给蔺相如升官,比廉颇职位高。
廉颇不服气,就想要侮辱蔺相如,有一天,蔺相如见了廉颇,就赶紧回去,他的手下可看不顺眼了,蔺相如就给他的手下讲为什么这样做,这些话传到了廉颇的耳朵里,廉颇觉得自己不对,就脱下战袍,背上荆条,来负荆请罪。
从此,蔺相如和廉颇成了好朋友,一起保卫赵国。
篇6:写秋雨的
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+ 加入清单早晨,嘀嗒!嘀嗒的雨声把我从睡梦中惊醒,我轻轻推开窗户向外一望,天空雾蒙蒙的,整个住宅小区笼罩在一片蒙蒙水雾中,樟树的叶子被秋风吹得四散奔跑,小草喝饱了雨水,在低声歌唱,远处偶然传来几声秋虫的鸣叫:叮铃铃,叮铃铃,秋天来了!秋天来了!……雨还在不停地下着,淅沥淅沥地水滴落在雨棚上,像一曲动听的歌儿,空中一会儿弥漫着一簇簇烟云状的浓雾,飘来飘去,连对面的高楼都看不清了,就像海市蜃楼一样……
风小了,雨也小了,吃过早点,我高兴地坐在外公的电瓶车上,拉紧了雨衣的领子,迎着风雨上学去。
篇7:英文成语故事三:守株待兔
全文共 582 字
+ 加入清单In the Spring and Autumn Period, a farmer in the State of Song was one day working in the fields when he saw a rabbit bump into a tree stump(树桩) accidentally and break its neck.
The farmer took the rabbit home, and cooked himself a delicious meal.
That night he thought, I neednt work so hard. All I have to do is wait for a rabbit each day by the stump.
So from then on he gave up farming, and simply sat by the stump waiting for rabbits to come and run into it.
This idiom satirizes(讽刺,挖苦) those who just wait for a stroke of luck, rather than making efforts to obtain what they need.
篇8:秋雨小学生作文
全文共 488 字
+ 加入清单秋天,是凉爽的,因为这几天都在下雨,而卧恰恰在下雨天发现了各种奇妙的景象。
早上,我看向窗外,灰蒙蒙的,都打得雨点哗啦啦的往地上落,但我听到的却不是哗啦啦的`雨声,认识那清脆悦耳的铃铛声。是呀,雨点的声音是动听的。
在路上,雨还在下着,但却没有把我的视线淹没,我依旧能发现雨点的精彩。
陆航油许多雨水堆积的小坑,里面“装”满了水,每辆车经过,都会溅起许多水花,谁多的坑,就会形成搞搞的“水帘”,让我感觉里面会走出来一个漂亮的女人,但“水帘”一个个形成,又一个个落下……我突然惊醒,呵,我太沉醉了,但我从心里觉得“水帘”真美!是呀,谁可以使无形的,也可以是有形的。
雨稍稍小了点了,我看着周围的雨水,看着它在地上,坑坑洼洼却也不是“身份”,还是那么的干净,形状却也是那么的梦幻,像花,像鸟,像太阳?但我看见更多的是像花,让我进入画的王国,但粗看,去诶下那个一面镜子,照出这个时代的善恶美丑。是呀,于也是“照妖镜”
世间万物都需要雨的滋润,雨算的上是大地之母了。秋天,秋雨,秋风,在秋的季节里,什么都是美好的,梦幻的,美妙的,世间万物也是美妙多姿的。
秋风习习,愿我们如枫叶般火红,活力永恒!
篇9:秋雨初一作文
全文共 365 字
+ 加入清单哗啦啦、哗啦啦……
雨,正买力的歌唱,就像要和我分享快乐一样。但是我并不快乐,心里刮起了愁云。
望着淅淅沥沥的雨,我看着屋檐,看着滴落下来的水珠,犹如一面水帘。
我惆怅的低着头,心里想到了朋友,自己本来想和朋友跳皮筋、捉迷藏的,这下全泡了汤,都怪这雨。想着想着,看到这雨,又喜欢这雨,喜欢它绵绵的美、喜欢它淅沥的声音。
在雨中,一朵娇小的花儿饱受了雨点的“折磨”,但是仍挺胸抬头,好像整个世界都压不倒它一样,我突然明白了:是啊,在人生的旅途中,谁没有个坎,没有个磕磕碰碰,只要坚持不懈,你总会成功。
我拿了雨衣,去给小花盖上,虽然雨打翻了它的花瓣,但是花茎仍挺立着……我好像明白了什么……心中万分感慨!
在雨中,花朵仍傲立着,给雨景增添了几分魅力……
愿每个人都像花儿一样坚强,“阳光总在风雨后”在一次次失败背后,成功的脚步也在慢慢的靠近你……
篇10:缩写猎人海力布的故事500字作文
全文共 603 字
+ 加入清单海力布刚说完就变成了一块石头,乡亲们非常后悔悲伤,赶紧收拾好行李,牵着孩子,扶着老人,赶着牛羊,把海力布石头拿着,走向安全的地方。每个人边走边一直呼喊:“海力布、海力布……”走在半路上,只听“轰”一声,大山崩塌了,洪水淹没了他们的村子。
过了许久,他们到达了安全地点,安营扎寨。从此以后,他们又过上了平静的生活。过了三年,老村长去世,又换了一个新村长,叫李村长。他知道了海力布石头的来历,感动得流了泪,他决定找到解救海力布的解药,他召集全部人员开会,他说“我决定找到解药,解救海力布,谁赞同?”“可是海力布他是不能复活的,不是吗?”“怎么可能会有解药呢?”村长说:“难道你们就肯定找不到解药吗?”
经过激烈的讨论,最终都说去龙王那儿找解药。他们出发了,翻了十座山,越过三片沼泽,终于到了龙王那儿。李村长说:“请问有没有解救海力布的解药呢?”龙王说:“怎么回事啊?”村长把海力布变成石头的经过告诉了龙王,龙王很感动。他说:“有啊,经过两年的时间,我制造出了解药,现在就给你们。”说完,他就拿出一根药剂说:“只要挤完过十分钟就可以恢复人身。”乡亲们答谢过后,大家回到村子。
他们赶紧拿出药剂挤到海力布石头上,十分钟后,海力布真的变回原来的样子,海力布说的第一句话就是:“我这一觉睡了好久呀!”全村人看到救命恩人复活了,开心得不得了。大家唱歌跳舞欢庆,从此以后,村长在村口建了一座海力布石头雕塑,他们又过了幸福的日子。
篇11:猎人海力布缩写
全文共 499 字
+ 加入清单尹佩茹
我是一名猎人,名叫海力布。喜欢乐于助人,大家非常尊敬我。
有一次,我去山上打猎,看见有只老鹰抓了一只小白蛇,急忙挽弓搭箭,救下了小白蛇。可是,我万万没想到,它竟然是龙王的女儿。为了感谢我的救命之恩,它父亲就把嘴里的宝石送给了我。
老龙王再三叮嘱我:只要含着这颗宝石,就可以听懂飞禽走兽的语言,但是一定不能把这个秘密告诉其他人,否则会永远变成石头。
我每天含着它,打猎十分方便。大家分到的猎物,比以前更多了。一天,我正在深山打猎,忽然听见一群鸟在议论什么。走近一听,带头的鸟说,今天晚上这里的大山要崩塌,大地会被洪水淹没……我大吃一惊,准备把这个消息告诉乡亲们。可是,即使我说得千真万确,并且发誓,乡亲们也都不相信。我急得掉下了眼泪。为了救乡亲们,我只好牺牲自己,便把我怎样得到宝石,怎样听到鸟的议论,为什么不能把这个秘密说出来,原原本本地照实说了,接着就变成了石头。
乡亲们后悔不已,连夜离开了村子。走在路上,乌云密布,狂风怒号,接着下起了倾盆大雨。半夜,突然一声巨响,大山崩塌了,洪水也涌了出来,瞬间,村子就被淹没了。
从那以后,人们世世代代纪念着我,给我取了一个名字“海力布”,写在了海边的石头上。
篇12:致一封信英文小学
全文共 1388 字
+ 加入清单20 July 2006
Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you for taking the time to write your wonderful letter in support of MCEA (Maywood Chinese Education Association). Your letter clearly articulates all the major reasons children in Maywood will benefit from studying the Chinese language as part of their elementary school education. It provides invaluable support that will help making bilingual Chinese education a reality in Maywood public schools.
Although MCEA would like to see Palo Alto public schools implement the first bilingual Chinese kindergarten class in September of 2006, we have learned that the school district must take the time to understand how a new program will affect existing educational offerings, and to validate community interest. Nevertheless, MCEA, with more than 70 members, will continue to actively promote bilingual Chinese education in the Palo Alto public schools and will keep you apprised of the progress we make.
Thanks again for sending a letter in support of MCEA. We will continue to do all we can to realize this program both for families of Chinese descent and those with a general interest in participating in the growing economic power of China.
Yours sincerely,
George Chen
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篇13:草船借箭的故事缩写
全文共 416 字
+ 加入清单周瑜嫉妒诸葛亮的才干,想设计陷害他。
有一次,周瑜让诸葛亮三天造十万支箭,诸葛亮答应了。诸葛亮允诺了周瑜的话后,立刻去找鲁肃帮忙,叫鲁肃借他二十条船,每条船上要三十名士兵。船要用青布幔子遮起来,还要一千多个草把子,排在穿的两侧。鲁肃按照诸葛亮的吩咐去做了,等候诸葛亮行动,奇怪的是诸葛亮头两天没什么动静,直到第三天四更的时候诸葛亮才把鲁肃秘密约进船里,请鲁肃陪同取箭。那时候,大雾漫天,连人面对面都看不清楚,诸葛亮吩咐军士们向曹军水寨驶去。当船快靠近曹军水寨时,诸葛亮下令把船头朝西,船尾朝东,一字排开,又叫船上的军士擂鼓呐喊。曹操吩咐曹军不要轻易出动。只是叫弓手朝江中射箭。诸葛亮又下令把船头朝东,船尾朝西,直到船上受满箭为止。到那时,诸葛亮又让军士们按原路返回。曹操这时才明白上当受骗了,但诸葛亮的船顺风顺水,已经驶出了二十多里,要追也来不及了。
船快靠岸时,周瑜正在江边等待,鲁肃见了周瑜,告诉了他借箭的经过,周瑜听了,自叹不如。
篇14:秋雨初中
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+ 加入清单“沙沙沙,沙沙沙”,窗外的雨滴在不停地飘落着,它给我们带来了一首时而舒缓、时而欢快的“秋的变奏曲”。
细细的雨滴轻盈地从天空中洒了下来,它们随着清爽的风儿,斜着身子向下落,仿佛那深秋的落叶,在空中缓缓地打着旋儿,又像是一个个天上的小精灵,跳着优美的舞蹈,来到了人间。
这时的小雨,从远处望,就像是一层薄薄的雾,在雨中的景物,变得稍稍有些朦胧,宛如披上了一层巨大的薄纱。这样的风景,看上去还有种挺梦幻的感觉呢。路上的行人纷纷撑开雨伞,于是,马路上便开出了一朵接着一朵五颜六色的花。
这场柔和的雨把我吸引住了。我趴在窗前,静静地,目不转睛地欣赏着雨中的一切。雨滴落在碧绿的树叶上,它把叶子当成了滑梯,调皮地滑过了整个叶片,最后在叶尖处变成了一个珍珠似的圆润的小水珠,这才滴了下来。
雨滴落在青翠的小草上,一下子就滑了下来,落到泥土里,于是小草贪婪地吸吮着甘露,然后伸展开身体,变得更加翠绿了。雨滴落在鲜艳的花瓣上,花瓣似乎想留住它,便像一只小手一样托住了雨滴,很快,花瓣上的雨积得不少了,它就只好把雨水放下去,继续迎接着后面更多的“雨滴朋友”。雨中的所有植物,都被这温和的雨水冲洗得分外洁净,比之前变得更加富有生机了。
我迫不及待地冲进雨帘,顿时感觉身边的空气变得清凉、新鲜了很多,而且到处弥漫着淡淡的泥土清香。雨水,还在不停地飘洒着。这场雨,它不仅带来了清爽,还带来了秋天。
秋,是一个收获的季节。我们在秋季,进入了一个新的学期,我想,我们作为一名初中生,也应该在这金色的秋天里,收获到沉甸甸的果实,而这些果实对我们来说,不正是知识吗?所以,从现在开始,把握当下,专心学习吧!
篇15:草船借箭的故事缩写
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+ 加入清单一天,周瑜让诸葛亮十天内造10万支箭,诸葛亮说,只要三天就够了。
第三天早上大雾弥漫,诸葛亮用长绳把二十只船连起来,在上面放上稻草人。二十只船来到曹军水寨,曹操下令放箭。
这时诸葛亮和鲁肃正在船内对饮,雨点般的箭一起射向二十只船。过了一会,二十只船的一侧已经受满了箭,诸葛亮下令让船掉头,让船的另一侧受箭,于是另一侧也被射满了箭。
当太阳升起时,大雾散去,船上大约被射了十几万只箭。诸葛亮朝着曹军的水寨大声的说:“谢谢曹丞相的箭。”曹操这时才明白自己中计了。
当返回陆地时,船上已经有十多万只箭了,周瑜佩服不已。
篇16:怎样写出正确的英文好句
全文共 2002 字
+ 加入清单每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?
好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。
特点一:整体性
句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。
Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。
【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.
特点二:连贯性
句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。
Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?
【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.
【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。
【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.
特点三:准确性
句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。
Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.
【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。
【提升】He returned in early August.
特点四:重点突出
好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。
Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。
【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
特点五:语法正确,句式多变
句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。
Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.
【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。
【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.
如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。
篇17:初中英文
全文共 572 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays, with the development of Internet, people count on the Internet to
do a lot of things. The most common thing is to follow the information they are
interested in. Most people like to write down their comments, while as there is
no law to limit the comment. I always see the negative words. Internet has
become a main way for people to attack others. So horrible it is. We should be a
wise person. The way we respect others decides what kind of person we are. It is
unwise to follow the bad comment and attack others. We need to have our own
judgment and be a nice person.
篇18:用英文给朋友写一封信
全文共 817 字
+ 加入清单dear chen lin and li hua,
i’ve just been out of hospital for a couple of days. right now ,i am really fine, but without your support, i wouldn’t have got better so soon.
you know, the traffic accident gave me a very hard blow, both physically and mentally. in the first two weeks after my injury, i almost lost my confidence in my future life. it is the doctors’and your encouragement that rendered me much strength and determination。
anyway, i learned a lot from this unfortunate accident. i’d neverrealize how important your friendship was to me. i can’t say anymore to show my gratitude for your taking turns keeping me company,and getting me through the blue time.
next saturday, my mother would give a recovery party to thank myfriends. i really want to see you there. so, 7 o’clock at my place,ok?
your truly,
li ming
篇19:父亲节英文日记
全文共 1767 字
+ 加入清单Fathers Day is a holiday to celebrate fatherhood and parenting by males,
just as Mothers Day celebrates motherhood. Typically giving gifts to fathers
and celebrating as a family is the main event of the day. Fathers Day is
celebrated on different days in different countries.
Fathers Day exists almost all over the world to honor and commemorate
fathers or forefathers. In the Roman Catholic tradition, Fathers Day is
celebrated on Saint Josephs Day, March 19, though in most countries Fathers
Day is a secular celebration.
In recent years, retailers have adapted to the holiday by selling
male-oriented gifts such as electronics and tools. Schools and other childrens
programs commonly have activities to make Fathers Day gifts.
In the United States, the driving force behind the establishment of the
celebration of Fathers Day was Mrs Sonora Smart Dodd, born in Creston,
Washington. Her father, the Civil War veteran William Jackson Smart, as a single
parent raised his six children in Spokane, Washington. She was inspired by Anna
Jarviss efforts to establish Mothers Day. Although she initially suggested
June 5, the anniversary of her fathers death, she did not provide the
organizers with enough time to make arrangements, and the celebration was
deferred to the third Sunday of June. The first Fathers Day was celebrated on
June 19, 1910, in Spokane.
Unofficial support from such figures as William Jennings Bryan was
immediate and widespread. President Woodrow Wilson was personally feted by his
family in 1916. President Calvin Coolidge recommended it as a national holiday
in 1924. In 1966, President Lyndon Johnson made Fathers Day a holiday to be
celebrated on the third Sunday of June. The holiday was not officially
recognized until 1972, during the presidency of Richard Nixon.
篇20:白蛇传缩写400字
全文共 418 字
+ 加入清单从前有一个人救了一条白蛇,把它放回了大自然,白蛇为了报答他,努力修炼变成了人。
后来许仙出来散步和白娘子在西湖桥上相会,两人一见钟情,结为夫妻,一起开了一个药店。他们生活过得很好,日复一日。到了端午节,许仙高兴地喝下了雄黄酒,白娘子怎么都不愿意喝下雄黄酒,最后白娘子还是喝了雄黄酒。他们都晕在床上,过了一会儿,白娘子现出了真身,许仙看到了白蛇被吓死。白娘子为了救她去昆仑山盗仙草,许仙被救后,许仙路过金山寺,法海感觉到许仙身上有妖气,就把许仙关了起来。白娘子知道自己丈夫被关的消息,动用洪水想救出许仙,可被法海的袈裟挡住。法海趁白娘子刚动用洪水削弱了很多力量,就用雷峰塔压住了白蛇。妹妹小青接到消息后立马来救白蛇,可法力不行,救援失败。青蛇苦练法术最终青蛇把白蛇救了上来,两人一起攻打法海。法海见状况不妙,立马躲进西湖中的一个螃蟹里。不知怎么回事,螃蟹把法海关了起来,因为法海曾经横行霸道,所以螃蟹就横着走路了。
许仙和白娘子幸福地过日子!