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三年级我的家乡英语作文

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My hometown is beautiful all the year round. Like a spring flows through my memory. Hometown is a beautiful, at least in my eyes, everything is so beautiful and so strange.

Hometown has a rippling stream, on the bottom, water is very shallow, only to my knees. Can see a lot of pebbles, the stream on the above, let you both painful and itchy. The crook of a few unknown grass, green green, reflected on the stream, the stream of green. When I was a little boy, I like lying on the crook, looking at water from upstream to downstream. Its a pity that the stream by cement to replace now. Some disappointed in my heart.

Home against the mountain, each spring, starts is a green, in green dotted with pink peach blossom, white pear flower and the village residents channel out their own field, what a harmonious picture. I like the adults went up into the mountain to get water Wells of the forest. Well surrounded by large tracts of forest, and those unknown flowers and mushrooms. When the adults sat well chatting, I will run to watching floret, to play with insects.

I love my hometown, because that is where I lived as a child, the residents of the home mostly kept poultry. In my spare time, I am interacting with chickens and ducks. I sat down on a stone, look at them, they also looked at me, I and they produced a profound friendship.

My hometown is beautiful, the hometown the residents of adversity, even if a dispute will soon reconciled. All those beautiful in my hometown, I forever will not forget.

我的家乡一年四季都是美的。像一眼清泉从我的记忆中流过。家乡是美丽的,至少在我眼中,一切都是那么美好又那么陌生。

家乡有一条潺潺的小溪,清澈见底,溪水很浅,只到我的膝盖。溪底可以见到很多鹅卵石,踩在上面,让你既疼又痒。溪边种着几棵不知名的小草,翠绿翠绿,倒映在溪上,将小溪染绿了。我小时候喜欢趴在溪边,看着流水从上游流到下游。可惜现在小溪被水泥给代替了。心中不免有些惆怅。

家乡靠着山,每当春天,满山遍野都是一片翠绿,在绿中点缀着粉红桃花,洁白的梨花和那些村庄居民们自己开辟的田野,多么和谐的一幅画啊。我喜欢随着大人们上山去树林中的水井打水。井的周围有大片树林,还有那些不知名的小花和蘑菇。当大人们坐在井边闲聊时,我便会跑到一边看小花,和虫子玩。

我喜欢我的家乡,因为那是我小时候住的地方,家乡的居民大多都养了家禽。闲暇时,我与鸡鸭为伍。我坐在石头上,看着它们,它们也看着我,我和它们产生了深厚的友谊。

我的家乡是美丽的,家乡居民们守望相助,即使发生纠纷也会很快和好。那些在故乡的美好一切,我一辈子也不会忘记。

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My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

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我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它坐落在一条宽阔的河流和丰富的鱼和米饭。

但是在过去它是一个贫穷落后的小城镇。很多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。美丽的家乡

在1949年,我的家乡解放了。自那以后发生了很大的变化。街道已拓宽。工厂,学校,医院,电影院和剧院如雨后春笋般涌现出来。人民的生活大大改善。

我爱我的家乡。所有我爱的人。他们正在努力工作以使它更丰富、更美丽。

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篇2:20年后的家乡满分作文800字

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坐在透明供餐悬浮按摩椅上的人是谁?一个响指就有十几位保钾的人又是谁?哈哈!当然是那个父母口中的"扫地工"我呀!如今,我已成为一位公司的总裁。这次我回家乡不是有什么大项目,只是回去开个同学会。

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我在操场还走了一下,哇,基本全靠意念,只要想自己在打球,你就会眼前出现一个网球场,手上拿着球拍,和同学们一起打球,事实上你只是被机器人用光速传送到了网球场,与另外一位同学一起打球而已。

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我们日常悬浮的东西,浮也不顾过5厘米,那上下楼梯嫌累,又没有光速机器人怎么办一边的机器人,笑笑的跟我介绍,并拿出一对白白的贴纸:“把这个贴在鞋上,你就可以飞起来!”果然,把它贴在鞋上,然后再用力蹬个五六下,你的脚下就会冒出一点白白的东西,然后你就会飞起来,飞到你想到的位置。

然而天色不早了,同学会解散了。我不舍得,往母校望了望,感叹:啊我的家乡,我的母校,您变化如此之大,怎能让我不惊叹呢?

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篇3:2024年高二期末英语满分

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Times are changing day by day. Doing the shopping is easier. Most people

are better-dressed and they enjoy modern life.

Girls are changing, too. There are many differences between the older and

younger generations.

I know a twelve-year-old girl, who, to my surprise, has little time to

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Confident, proud and energetic, modern girls represent new times.

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篇4:初中英语满分

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Since I came to middle school, I have to learn so many subjects, at first,

I could not catch up with my classmates, I felt so worried. So I decided to keep

studying every night. After finishing dinner, I went to my bedroom and did my

homework. But when I finished my homework, I forced myself to go over other

subjects. Though I was very tired, I still keptstudying until midnight. But it

did not work, I did not made progress. I talked to my teacher, she told me to

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step. I realized my mistake and adjusted my method and it works.

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篇5:高考英语满分

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某校开展"研究性学习",要求学生设计一下未来的居室.下面请以"My Dream House"为题,描述你设计的居室.内容要点如下:

我梦中的住房将是建在海边的一幢别墅.前后有两个庭院,前面是一个四季都开满鲜花的花园,后面是一个游泳池,因为我的家人喜欢游泳.

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篇6:高一关于我的家乡英语作文60字

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My hometown is in the northeast, where there is a lake called "jingbo.

In the spring, the willows of the jingbo drew new yaren, bamboo shoots also emerge from the ground. The animals are awake: frog crawling around, waiting for the arrival of the summer; The little squirrel jump around, to look for food to the...

Summer, jingbo is full of vitality. Round the lake decorated with all kinds of small stone, stone is covered by green moss. The green of little noise in the grass, the quietly open a flower, for these made up a simple wreath. Water is so clear, can see the lake sand. There are fish in the water. May be it is because there are fish, so drew green duck. Each duck holding the bottom jump into the water, the frog also called on the lotus leaf.

Autumn has come, the maple leaves fall. Leaves fall around the perimeter of the lake, like only butterflies. The weather gradually turned cold. Frogs, turtles, green ducks are returned to the cave.

Finally look forward to in the winter! Its snowing. A gust of wind blowing, diffuse to a layer of mist on the horizon. Heavy fog, not as long as its snowing. After a while, just like white snow began to fall. First and falls, then gradually expand, flying, the earth covered with a layer of "silver". A piece of white between heaven and earth.

Ah! These are beautiful! I love these!

我的家乡在东北,那里有一个湖叫“镜泊湖”。

春天,镜泊湖旁的柳树抽出新芽儿了,竹笋也从地里钻出来了。动物们都苏醒了:青蛙爬来爬去,等待夏天的到来;小松鼠跳来跳去,去找吃的去了……

夏天,镜泊湖充满生机。湖的四周镶嵌着各种各样的小石头,石头上还覆盖着嫩绿的青苔。那绿的没有一点儿杂色的草,那悄悄开放着的花朵,给镜泊湖编了个朴素的花环。水是那样清,清的能看见湖底的沙粒。水里还有鱼。可能正是因为有鱼,所以引来了绿毛鸭。一只只鸭子抱着屁股往水里跳,青蛙也在荷叶上叫个不停。

秋天来了,枫树掉叶子了。叶子掉在湖的四周,就像一只只蝴蝶。天气逐渐变冷了。青蛙,乌龟,绿毛鸭都回山洞去了。

终于盼到冬天了!下雪了。一阵风吹来,从地平线上漫来一层轻雾。雾重起来,没有多久就下雪了。过了一会儿,就下起了白花般的雪。先是零零落落,后来逐渐扩大,横飞过来,给大地披上了一层“银装”。天地间一片洁白。

啊!镜泊湖真美!我爱镜泊湖!

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篇7:我的家乡英语作文

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My hometown is in at the products here are rich, with a beautiful view, listen to me to introduce my hometown!

Spring, my hometown spring flowers, flowers, all things recovery. Bouldering park where trees have begun to sprout, grow pale green leaves, grass also changed into the green clothes. To embrace the mountains of stone garden looks, wow! The mountain all turn green, as if the sea of green.

Summer arrived, all of you have a very hot sun burning sun, people sweat like the river water. At this time, I like the grapes mature, my mother often took me to do, these grapes like strings of pearls, make your mouth water. Bayhood park located in the hometown of the swimming pool was hilarious, we can swim like a fish in the water, and cool and happy, can also play in it.

The harvest in autumn, we at densely orange like YiZhanZhan small lanterns, there are many fruits are ripe. At this moment, mom often took me to face upwards also post up, when we looked down from a peak, is the size of a small ants, even the house also becomes very small. How like gold pieces stamp, red maple leaf on the mountain, it tells us that at the autumn is the harvest.

The cold winter is coming, a lot of little animals hibernate, they wait for the arrival of spring. The trees are bare of our school, students are put on the thick cotton-padded jacket and ran to the class. The class was over, the students went to the playground game, before you know it is not cold, on the way from school, my classmates and I play the snow battle, although face flushed with cold, his hands frozen stiff, but we dont give a damn.

I love my hometown, do you remember my hometown?

我的家乡在新余,这里特产丰富、景色迷人,听我来介绍我的家乡吧!

春天,我的家乡春暖花开、百花齐放、万物复苏。抱石公园那里的树已经开始发芽了,长出嫩绿的叶子,小草也换上了绿色的衣裳。向抱石公园的山上望去,哇!山上全变绿了,好像是绿色的海洋。

夏天到了,火热的太阳把大家晒得很热,人们的汗犹如小河流水一般。这时,我最喜欢的葡萄成熟了,妈妈常带我去摘葡萄,一串串葡萄像一串串珍珠,让你垂涎三尺。家乡的北湖公园里的游泳池顿时热闹起来了,我们可以像鱼儿一样在水里游泳,又凉快又快乐,还可以在里面玩呢。

丰收的秋天到了,我们的新余密桔像一盏盏小灯笼,还有许多水果都成熟了。这时,妈妈还常带着我去仰天岗登高,当我们从最高峰往下看时,人只有小蚂蚁那么大,连房子也变得很小了。山上红红的枫叶,它多么像一枚枚邮票,告诉我们:新余的秋天是丰收的。

寒冷的冬天来了,好多的小动物都冬眠了,它们等待着明年春天的到来。我们学校的树木光秃秃的,同学们都穿上了厚厚的棉袄跑去上课。下课了呢,同学们去操场上游戏,不知不觉就不冷,在放学的路上,我和同学们打起了雪仗,虽然脸冻得通红,手冻得僵硬,但我们一点也不在乎。

我爱我的家乡,你们记住我的家乡了吗?

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篇8:初三关于我的家乡英语作文

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Home in recent years, with the development of economy, great changes have taken place.

Hometown in the past, few decent road, narrow and dirty. Burying his face in a sunny day dust passing people had to walk. Let alone on a rainy day, but they may fall. The cyclist was worse, isnt a person riding a bicycle, but people carry bicycle. There are low small roof, small signs house... Littering, highly irregular. Garbage, all over the ground from the stench.

Now the street is wide asphalt road, the special clean, there is not even a bit the dust. Road center and both sides have green belts, the inside of the grass and trees. The grass of the partner, Chinese rose and Chinese rose are proudly in full bloom, blossoming flower into elegantly beautiful pattern, emitting fragrance, nice yue month.

The low houses disappeared, lined with high-rise buildings everywhere. People live on the new buildings, life constantly improve, added a lot of household electrical appliances in the home, these things convenient to make use of our life, also brought happiness to our life. It became known as the environment, peoples environmental protection consciousness to enhance the no longer throw litter about.

Now my hometown is in constant change, Im sure it will become more beautiful, more prosperous.

近几年,家乡随着经济的发展,发生了巨大的变化。

过去的家乡,没有几条像样的马路又窄又脏。晴天尘土飞扬过路的人只好捂着脸走。下雨天就更别说了,一不小心就会摔跤。骑自行车的人更糟糕,不是人骑自行车,而是人扛自行车。到处都是低矮的小瓦房,小栩屋......横七竖八,极不规则。垃圾满地都是,发出阵阵的臭味。

现在马路是宽阔的柏油大路,特别干净,连一点尘土也没有。路中心和两旁都有绿化带,里面种着小草,树木。小草的伙伴——月季花,月季花正傲然怒放,朵朵红花细成一幅幅美丽的图案,散发出阵阵清香,令人赏心悦月。

那些低矮的房屋不见了,到处林立着高楼大厦。人们都住上了新楼房,生活在不断地提高,家里增添了许多家用电器,利用这些东西方便了我们的生活,也给我们的生活带来了欢乐。周围的环境也变美其名曰了,人们的环保意识增强了再也不乱丢垃圾了。

如今家乡还在不断地发生变化,我想它一定会变得更加美丽,更加繁荣昌盛。

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篇9:给英语老师的一封信满分

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敬爱的殷老师

您好!

您在我人生道路上,是至关重要的一员,如果没有您,那我可能已经对英语绝望了,不是你的出现,我也不会充满了希望。如果我没有遇见你,我一定已经没了心。

您还记得吗?有次我在课堂上被点名读课文,而那篇课文我还没学过,所以我没有勇气读。可突然有个人对我说:“别怕,没有事,不会的单词问我。”我抬头一看原来是老师,我又充满了斗志,充满了信心。我终于把课文读完了。

您还记得吗?有一次虽然我们没考好,但您依旧带我们去外面放松放松心情,我们知道您这是想我们下回考好。我们一定不会辜负您的,我们一定加油,一定会拼尽全力。有一次,我在办公室门口看到有的老师上QQ,有的看电视,有的打游戏,有的玩电脑,而您却在桌子前改作业。别的班的老师都让组长改,而您都是自己改。

您还记得吗?有一次我们不听话,你罚我们到外头罚站。而我们也心甘情愿,因为您这是为了我们好!

老师,我们永远不会忘了您的。

祝您

工作顺利。

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篇10:高中英语满分作文及翻译

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When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one’s life.

It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What’s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.

In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one’s life can become better and better. Therefore, it’s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.

在谈到自己的事业和家庭的意见要求,人总是有不同的反应。有些人认为这更重要的是追求自己的事业,而总有那么谁认为家庭应该是一个人的生活的人数1人。

毫无疑问,任何事业在我们生活中起着关键作用。在第一个地方,可以给我们一个职业生涯的目标是生活。没有职业生涯中,大部分时间我们的生活一定会被浪费。更重要的是,职业生涯可以提供一种手段,对我们的生活。大多数人从工作中赚取的收入。另一方面,家庭也是生活中不可缺少的一部分,因为很多人会承认。家庭一直被认为是一个地方,我们可以摆脱生活中的麻烦。此外,我们可以得到一个属于家庭的感觉。没有它,人会感到孤独和绝望。

在我看来,职业和家庭是不反对对方。相反,它们可以加强彼此,使自己的生活能够越来越好。因此,它不是对与错之间的选择,但理想和现实之间的一个。

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篇11:高考英语满分作文:WaterPollution

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导语:水是生命之源,我们要保护水资源,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Spring is tht best season of the year. The weather gets warmer and warmer. My clas iamates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty. But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.

With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers. It has caused serious pollution. The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it. The river is giving off a terrible smell.

We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation. Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.

Water is tho source of our lives. It is very important to protect water.

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春天是一年中最好的季节,天气变得越来越暖和。我和我的同学们进行了一次环城一日游,所到之处景色宜人。但当我看到沿着城区流过的河流时,我感到很惋惜,想了很多。

随着现代工农业的发展,越来越多的污水排进河里,河水被严重污染。河水变得如此的肮脏以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水发出难闻的气味。

我们急切呼吁采取措施改变这种状况。政府应当建立各种设备,例如污水处理厂,并且鼓励科学家们想出更多更好的办法以减少水污染。

水是生命之源,保护水资源十分重要。

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篇12:2024年高二期末英语满分

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Within China, regional customs and traditions concerning the celebration of

the Chinese new year vary widely. People will pour out their money to buy

presents, decoration, material, food, and clothing. It is also the tradition

that every family thoroughly cleans the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in

hopes to make way for good incoming luck. Windows and doors will be decorated

with red colour paper-cuts and couplets with popular themes of “happiness”,

“wealth”, and “longevity”. On the Eve of Chinese New Year, supper is a feast

with families. Food will include such items as pigs, ducks, chicken and sweet

delicacies. The family will end the night with firecrackers. Early the next

morning, children will greet their parents by wishing them a healthy and happy

new year, and receive money in red paper envelopes. The Chinese New Year

tradition is a great way to reconcile forgetting all grudges, and sincerely wish

peace and happiness for everyone.

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篇13:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇14:家乡的变化的英语

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The twinkling of an eye, the elementary school six years has quietly but go to, my side there are many, many items are in change as time goes by, but the most obvious changes in my hometown - build.

Remember in elementary school, a grade one the way home or small TuDao, whenever it rains, the road will be muddy, a walk would step a foot mud, so at home when it rains, go out to buy things or have things out, to Wellington boots, or you go out, come back after your feet must be turning into mud strange feet.

But now, the strips into a muddy path paved roads, when it rains out walking shoes does not become dirty, instead of walking, watching the roadside trees, also another appeal.

Hometown house also is better than before, either before they are miserable, every rain cloudy, the house will leak rain, but now the house is no longer leak, tattered house turned into a two-storey houses before, people lived a happy life.

Six years in elementary school are gone, and things have changed dramatically. I think we will have a better life in the future.

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篇15:后的家乡满分作文

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二十年过去了,正在异地上的我,准备回老家一趟,看看故乡的变化。我身背喷气式背包,脚踏只能螺旋桨,以超音速的速度前往家乡

非彼昔日,以前这儿还是一条臭气熏天的小巷,现在已经成为了人来人哇的大街;以前这人还是破破烂烂的“烂尾楼”,现在已成为智能的电脑住宅;以前这儿的家禽随处可见,现在那些家禽早已被扔进了智能牧场。

我要去的第一站是小时候玩耍的天堂——田地。哎呀,我本以为这里已经被拆掉变成了住宅区,但是却还和20年前一样,时间就像停止在20年前一样,我看这片黑乎乎的土地,不禁感慨道:“现在有多少人小时候是在田地里成长,知道饭菜是从哪儿来的呀!”

第二站——操场。突然我定睛一看,那儿还是操场么?分明就是个赛场,里面有3个足球场那么大,现在正在进行看一场足球比赛,采用的是全息报幕屏,三维式球框,足球场就是裁判。我眼球一亮,发现里面有个运动员竟是我儿时玩伴。他在这人当了专业运动员和其他村比赛。

第三站——我的家。还没到家,我已经远远的看见了我妈在那儿朝我挥手,他领我到了一个电梯旁,告诉我那是纳米做的。吃着妈妈的饭,看着家乡的变化,突然间就感慨道了李白“举头望明月,低头思故乡。”的思乡感情。

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篇16:后的家乡满分作文

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昨天晚上做了一个美好的梦,梦到穿越到了20年后的家乡。20年后的家乡变化,真大呀!

20年后的家乡,绿树成荫,鲜花遍地,小鸟在枝头欢快地唱歌,蝴蝶在草丛中翩翩起舞。

20年后的家乡,在户外听不到一点噪音,地上也看不见一点垃圾,更看不见有人朝地上乱扔垃圾。

20年后的家乡,交通不再堵拥堵,到处是各种各样造型奇特的海陆空三用悬浮汽车,在陆地上跑着遇到堵塞就立即变形成飞机飞到空中,甚至遇河和海时就会变成潜水艇。这种交通工具可以随着我的想法随时变化,感觉像魔术师一样,一会变一个样,太阳公公仿佛也笑了!

20年后的科技也十分发达,除了悬浮汽车,智能机器人高科技新式飞机等等,这些东西也使人们的生活更快捷,方便。人类大部分工作都会让机器人做,比如机器人厨师机器人商店机器人一张而人们休闲自如买东西,跟朋友一起出去玩的人,随处可见20年后的科技,太发达了20年后的家乡,真美好,真希望快点来到。

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篇17:介绍家乡南昌英语

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My hometown Nanchang, capital of Jiangxi Province, stands on the eastern bank of the Gan River. An ancient city, its origins lie in the Han Dynasty over 2,000 years ago. In the late 1920s Carl Crow described it as a conservative town, surrounded by a high wall which had remained impenetrable even the Taipings, protected by the city god---the Universal Lord of Happiness; although Crow’s book came out in a fifth and thoroughly revised edition in 1933 there is no reference to the uprising or the activities in the soviets.

Modern Nanchang is a pleasant and prosperous city with a growing industry, places for recreation, and many historical sites connected with the Nanchang Uprising. Historical sites include the Plum Fairy Temple, which dates bark to the western Han Dynasty, and the Hundred Flower Islet, which is in the Bayi Park and dates back to the Song Dynasty.

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篇18:给英语老师的一封信满分

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敬爱的老师

您好!

您像辛勤的园丁,您精心培育着我们,从不让我们受苦;您还像我们的妈妈,从不舍得吵我们,即使有同学在课堂上捣乱,您也舍不得批评他们,有些同学家庭作业没有完成,您也只是让他们下课补上,从不惩罚他们。

您严格要求我们背单词,背课文,其实都是为了我们好,想让我们考个好成绩来回报父母。每次上课前,您为了让我们活跃气氛、放松大脑,您总是跟我们先做一个小游戏。

我记得有一次课间休息,一位同学吐了,大家都捏着鼻子往外跑,谁也不敢进教室,可您却不慌不忙地从办公室拿来一个拖把,给她又是拖又是擦,为了让教室不留异味,您还喷了点香水。上课了,有几位同学还是离她远远的,不肯靠近那位同学,您看到这个情况后,就让那几位同学向她道了歉,您处理事情的方法和态度很让我们佩服,您是我们学习的榜样,老师,我爱您!

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篇19:英语满分优秀作文

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dear bob,

i have found a place for you to live in. the room is on fangcao street, which is only one stop distant from jianxin chinese school. you can take no.11 bus there.

it’s a small fiat with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. and it is only 25 square meters. the rent is 500 yuan every month. in the bedroom, there is a sofa, a

bed, a chair and a desk. do you like it? if not, please tell me and i will find another room for you.

yours,

li hua

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篇20:优秀满分作文:我的家乡乌鲁木齐

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穿过那座城市,我看到的是红山顶上那坚硬陡峭的岩石;穿过那座城市,我看到的是国际大巴扎里琳琅满目的民族特产;穿过那座城市,我看到的是水磨沟风景区那汩汩流淌的泉水;穿过那座城市,我看到的是时代的发展与科技的进步;穿过那座城市,我看到的是满眼的风情与韵味。那座城市,就是我的家乡,美丽的乌鲁木齐

从南山顶上出发,可以看见那冰山上的积雪融化成一条细细的水流,轻缓地流过大地,流过那翠绿的草坪,拍打着岩石,将路边的野花映得别样灿烂。只见蓝天下群山峻峭,牛羊成群,密林绿野,溪流淙淙。南山草木茂盛,纯蓝的天空像孩子的眼睛清澈透明,漫步在山间,沐浴着春风,看云端的天山晶莹透亮,看挺拔的松树布满每一处空隙。

采一朵洁白的天山雪莲,我们继续出发。

在那一望无际的草原上,在云杉掩映下,毡房点点,小楼座座,风光如画。好客的哈萨克牧民骑着骏马驰骋,白色的毡房随着马蹄声在眼中越来越小,远处的群山也越来越近。蓝天上展翅的雄鹰,带着几分豪爽与洒脱,像甘醇飘香的大碗马奶酒给人从头至脚的爽快。白杨沟山谷的瀑布飞漱而下,在阳光下仿佛一道绚烂的彩虹,无限光彩。

喝一碗喷香的奶茶,我们继续出发。

你看,那繁华的街区离我们更近了。忙碌的人们穿梭在大巴扎之间,精致的花帽、手工刺绣、金银首饰、玉雕与木雕制品、地毯、皮靴、艾德莱丝绸、英吉沙小刀等真是应有尽有。瓜果的香甜气息随风越飘越远,紫色的葡萄、大红的苹果、金黄的香梨以及青绿的哈密瓜无不吸引人们的眼球。再顺着吆喝声望去,则是烤得黄灿灿的馕。那热闹的气氛烘托出了美好与和谐。

扯一段艾德莱丝绸,我们继续出发。

渐渐进入了市中心,现代化都市的气息也越来越浓重。乌鲁木齐是一座古城,在不断进步与发展。夜晚的乌鲁木齐,一片灯火辉煌,而城市道路上飞驰的车流,也像条条玉带,仿佛脉络一般连通了整个城市。

在乌鲁木齐的大街小巷中,需要细细体味那自然的美景与淳朴的民风。你的身体会在大草原上得到放松,你的心情会在冰川的映衬下渐渐明朗,而那匹奔驰向远方的棕色骏马,早已带我们穿过这座城市,穿过这里的每一处风景与每一抹韵味。

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