我的家乡英语满分作文【热门20篇】

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home of the most alcohol, home food, the most impressive.

I was a Hakka. I left my hometown Meizhou from my childhood. I followed my parents to this strange land and opened up our new home. As I grew up in this new environment, the impression of my hometown was gradually blurred. But in my mind, it cant forget the hometown dish of my childhood taste buds.

Many home dishes are famous far and near, and those special flavors have attracted a lot of people. One of the most famous dishes is "Mei Cai Braised Pork", my dad is a generation old Hakka love. Although it sounds like this dish seems to be difficult to get in good taste, but this dish is representative of Hakka peoples diligence and frugality quality.

My father said, "our hometown is Mei Mei Cai Braised Pork" single dishes there are many complicated steps. When the farming harvest, the farmers harvest the mustard, then put it in the sun to matured, and then take the food to the ground, arrange it, and sprinkle a lot of salt on it. According to my father, when they were young, they were trampling the dishes with clean feet after the salt was sprinkled. After the tread, put it in a vessel to a degree, then take the steam, then take the sun... So the three steamed three sun, the earthly plum dried vegetables!

"Mei Cai Braised Pork" another character is meat, meat to choose "pork fat pork". Making this dish, put the Mei food dry cleaning, cut thin pieces, the fat basin under the streaky pork belly pieces, Mei dish, steamed for a long time, fat oil seeping into the plum dried vegetables, plum dried vegetables fragrance dipped into fat, opened a pot. Hot, delicious food Braised Pork pan mei! A pot of delicious food Braised Pork Mei can eat for a long time, because the salty, not perishable. A small pinch to the bowl, the fragrance of the four spilled, can pick up a few rice, that taste, to taste to understand. Such a dish reflects the diligence and frugality of the Hakka people, which is the favorite of the Hakka people.

When I heard my Dad talking about his hometown dishes, dad was fun, innocent, and rich in homesickness. In my fathers age, and cant eat "Mei Cai Braised Pork", to wait until the new year will kill pigs, so have a good heart is also waiting for Spring Festival to eat.

In my opinion, McDonalds and Kentucky fast food are far more infatuated than this dish. Maybe it is because I have not experienced the father of that era, cannot understand a dish not easily won; perhaps because there is no contact with the home, can not understand the charm of home cooking; perhaps because now no children of that age as difficult as father, do not know how precious home cooking. But from my fathers love for home food, I read the charm of my hometown cuisine, and I also fell in love with home food.

Home of the most round moon, home of the most tea, home wine is the most alcohol, home food is the most lingering.

My hometown is no strange steep mountains, also does not have the spectacular waterfalls, less famous scenic spots. But in my heart, there is a kind of beauty, a kind of indescribable beauty. A kind of elegant and not common, expensive and not every beauty; The beauty of a deep-rooted, never die; Let me is most lasting. Hometown is born I keep my place, where there is my familiar homeland; I have loved ones; My childhood, I have wonderful memories.

Home, seems to be inclusive, and then when I was frustrated, it let me enjoy the catharsis; I am happy again, it let me sing; When I was a success, it warns me proud; When I was a failure, it encouraged me dont be discouraged. As long as in my hometown, a smile, a concern greetings, sincere encouragement, can let a person feel incomparable happiness; As long as in my hometown, a bunch of beautiful flowers, a wisp of thick tender feelings, a sympathetic regrets, can let people comprehend the true meaning of personal. It found that, hometown is so warm.

Hometown, is a boating shelter, faced with difficulties, it will sincerely accept you; Home, is an umbrella when it rains, when meet danger, it will take you to keep out; Home, is one of the long drought desert on pools, twinkle when youre cornered, it also in silently for you encouragement, come on, let the sentence "all road, away from her" become a reality; Home was a sea of light, when you dont know the direction, it is right in front of guidance for you.

Home, sounds so nice. It is standing behind me in silence the backer, is when I hunger meal, is when I was ill, plaster, is the warmth of my mind most deep place. Home of the patch, ever let me step, it is so smooth. The silk hometown trickle, ever let me drink, its so sweet. Hometown of the food, feed I grew up, it is so sweet.

Dont say mountain, located in the hometown of the water, dont talk about hometown more people who do not speak hometown, alone home, can let a person silent.

我的家乡没有奇特险峻的大山，也没有雄伟壮观的瀑布，更没有远近闻名的景点。但是在我的心中，却有一种美，一种无以名状的美;一种雅而不俗、贵而不鄙的美;一种刻骨铭心、永不逝去的美;让我久久难以忘怀。家乡是生我养我的地方，那里有我熟悉的故土;有我挚爱的亲人;有我的童年、有我美好的回忆。

家乡、似乎可以包容一切，再我失意的时候、它让我尽情的宣泄;再我快乐的时候，它让我放声高歌;在我成功的时候、它警告我不要骄傲;在我失败的时候、它鼓励我不要气馁。只要在家乡，一个会声的微笑、一声关切的问候、一句真诚的鼓励、就可以让人感受到无比的幸福;只要在家乡，一束美丽的鲜花、一缕浓浓的柔情、一声同情的惋惜、都能让人感悟人身的真谛。这才发现，家乡是如此温暖。

家乡、是船泊的避风港湾，在遇到困难的时候，它还会诚心的接纳你;家乡、是下雨时的一把伞，在碰到危险的时候，有它给你遮挡;家乡、是久旱荒漠上的一汪清泉，在你走投无路的时候，它还在默默的为你鼓励、加油，让那一句“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花明又一村”成为现实;家乡还是出海时的明灯，在你不知道前进方向的时候，它还在前面正确的为你指引。

家乡，听上去还是那么亲切。它就是默默立在我后面的靠山、是我饥饿时的饭菜、是我生病时的膏药、是我心灵最深处的温暖。家乡的那寸方土，曾让我踏过，它是那么的平稳。家乡的那丝细流，曾让我喝过，它是那么甜润。家乡的那些食物，曾喂养我长大，它是那样的香甜。

不说家乡的山，也不谈家乡的水，更不讲家乡的人，就单单家乡的情，都会让人沉默。

The Longhu villa in my hometown Pengshui County, where the fog is floating, (.) is a magical and beautiful place.

The flag up to an altitude of about 1000 meters high, halfway up the mountain air is very sweet, very refreshing. The mountain long rows of trees under the tree is a wild profusion of vegetation, and insects and other small animal snake, so you walk can hear small animal sounds.

The most interesting, is that the top of the thick fog, one or two months a year, on the top of the mountain will have a thick layers of fog, you can put the fog blowing a "hole" in one breath, but it closed in neither fast nor slow, steep peak, have a piece of egg shaped stone. Its a good place to watch the fog, but prone to hallucinations sitting on the stone, you will feel as if you are sitting in the clouds is Sun Wukong, somersault cloud, all of a sudden to jump down! And its easy to sit on the stone and jump down! You know, this stone is surrounded by a cliff! So, its better not to sit on the stone, because its a safe one!

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表哥就要去美国留学了，这一去也许就是两三年，也许就是数十年。大姨说，不少中国孩子出国留学，学成后就留在那边工作，好多年都不回来。

望着大姨哭得红肿的眼睛，我们也跟着抹眼泪。表哥却一脸嘲讽之意。我知道他心里一定在笑我们儿女情长、婆婆妈妈。他心里满怀对未来的憧憬，恨不得立即飞到那所心仪的大学，哪里懂得家里人的担忧呀。

可是再担心，再依依不舍，表哥出国求学已是铁定之事。随着分别的日子越来越近，我的心越来越难过。我想起了许多表哥带我一起玩耍的往事，钓鱼、放风筝、游泳更想起表哥利用假期帮我补习功课的镜头，泪水禁不住直往下流。我得给表哥送份礼物，让他记住家乡，记住亲人。

送什么呢？钢笔、书、小钥匙扣这些都太俗气了。苦思冥想中，我突然想起曾经读过的一篇文章，说一个年轻人出国，他的母亲送了一捧家乡的泥土给他，希望他永远不要忘记故土。我茅塞顿开，立即行动

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飞机终于升空，舷窗外的蓝天真美，那洁白的云朵好像就在身边游走似的，真想伸手去和它们握握手。

对了，刚才在机场，表弟送我一个精致的信封，说是送给我的礼物，并要我登机后才能看。这个小精灵，一脸的泪花，仿佛生离死别似的，他到底送的啥呀？

打开信封，一个小红布袋映入眼帘，这里面装着什么呢？对，还有一张信纸，只见上面写道：

亲爱的表哥：你就要出国了，我想送你一份礼物，思来想去，我决定送你家乡的一小捧黑土，希望你要永远记住故土，记住我们，早点学成回来。我还请班上的女同学在小布袋上绣了一只雄鸡，那是中国地图，地图上画圈的地方，就是我们的家乡了

解开小布袋，黑油油的泥土呈现在眼前，一股熟悉的味道钻入鼻孔，直入心扉。我不禁想起了故乡那片广袤的田野，想起了在那片土地上辛苦劳作的人们。我还想起了钱学森、钱三强、钱伟长等许多科学家的名字，当年，他们都曾胸怀理想出国，然后又怀着报效祖国的赤子之心回来的

泪水夺眶而出，故乡、亲人，可不就是培育我长大的一片沃土。我下定决心，不管飞得多远、多高，也要心系这片土地，回到她的怀抱。

[一捧家乡的泥土中考满分作文

我的家乡在陕西华县，这里的气候干燥，但景色宜人，是个美丽的地方。

My hometown is in Shaanxi County, where the climate is dry, but the scenery, is a beautiful place.

华县不仅景色宜人，而且有着丰富的钼矿，所以它被称为“中国钼都”。

County is not only beautiful scenery, but also has a rich deposit, so it is called "China molybdenum".

华县有两大特产，第一是花花馍，花花馍就是在过年，寿辰，结婚，满月等重大日子时，用发面做成的各种各样的造型，有龙、有鱼、有猴子、有仙桃、有凤凰……形态各异，栩栩如生，表达了人们对美好生活的希望和祝福。第二就是皮影，这里的皮影非常有名，它是这里的民间艺人用驴皮雕刻加工成的工艺品，颜色鲜亮，人物形态各异，活灵活现，它不光可以挂着作装饰，还可以用来表演皮影戏呢!

County has two products, the first is steamed steamed flower, flower is to have the Spring Festival, birthday, marriage, the full moon and other major days, use a variety of ways into shape, with dragons, fish, monkeys, Xiantao, phoenix...... Different forms of expression, true to life likeness, hopes and wishes for a better life. The second is the shadow, the shadow is very famous, it is the folk artists with arts and crafts, carving a donkey skin bright colors, patterns of different characters, vivid, it not only can be hung as a decoration, can also be used to show the shadow play!

华县的人民个个热情好客，只要你来这里旅游，他们都会热情的招待你，我希望我的家乡更加美丽、繁荣、昌盛!人民更加勤劳、幸福、富裕!

If the people are hospitable, as long as you come here to travel, they are hospitable to you, I hope that my hometown more beautiful and prosperous! People work hard, happy, prosperous!

My hometown is a small beautiful village. It is surrounded by mountains. There is a small river near my home. The water is clear.

When I was a little child, I liked playing in the river. My hometown is not so rich. Most of the villagers are farmers. They plant rice, corn and peanut.

Now, I live in the city, but I still like going back my hometown.

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我的家乡是一座美丽的小村庄。它被群山环绕。我家附近有一条小河，河水很清澈。

当我还是一个小孩的时候，我喜欢在河里玩。我的家乡不是很富裕，大部分的村民是农民。他们种植水稻，玉米和花生。

现在，我住在城里，但是我仍然喜欢回到我的家乡。

Dalian is my hometown. It’s a pretty city in the northeast of China, and it has a population of 5.3 million people. It’s on the coast. It has modern seaport and airport. It is known as the “pearl in the north”. Its scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that travelers all over the world come to visit it . it’s famous for the seafood, the football team and the International Fashion Festival. Shanghai is the biggest city which lies on the east coast of China. It’s on the River Chang Jiang, too. It’s older, bigger and busier than Dalian. The buildings are taller and population is over twice larger than that of Dalian-13 million. The weather there is neither too hot nor too cold. Lots of places of interest attract visitors from other countries all the year round. I would like to work there to make more money when I grow up. It’s one of the largest trade centers in the world.

假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一简短的告别演讲：

1、对三年高中生活的怀念;

2、对老师的感谢;

3、对母校的祝福。

My teachers and fellow students,

In a couple of weeks, we’ll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It’s really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.

To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.

It’ll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we’re going to begin a new journey.

Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!

[高考英语满分作文：毕业告别

My hometown is beautiful, the hometown of a stream is the most worth up attachment to place.

In spring, in the thick forest, streams "hua hua" to sing, songs of joy into the distance. Bird "chirp" over the stream, is greeting the stream sister! Look, the spring breeze mother-in-law also came here, is to stream comb my hair! The glimmer of layers of ripples, is the stream sister. Then, we came here. We send the stream sister bundles of beautiful flowers.

Summer arrived, streams and singing a happy song, to welcome summer sister. The fiery red sun shines on the lush forest, cicadas in the trees cried, as if speaking to stream sister. The stream to the crops, see they are going to die, then, gave a drink of water. Rootstocks spirit up immediately, curved waist, as if he were to stream sister thanks! The stream is pleased to go. Autumn has come, the stream through the crops, and saw the farmer uncle is a bumper harvest this year, flattered, for she helped farmers uncle! Streams in orchard, see we are picking fruit, her naughty to fruit took a bath, fruit happily laughed, look, laugh all red in the face. A stream of happiness.

In winter, with a thick layer of ice streams, became our "paradise". I and friends in skating together. "Look," snow!" We cried happily in the water. For a while, the snow stopped, we are a big snowman on the stream. Snowman smile more happy, to see it so happy, even we smiled happily.

Hometown river like a kindly mother, care for us. I love you, hometown of stream!

我的家乡风景优美，其中家乡的一条小溪是最值得家乡人留恋的地方。

春天，在茂密的森林中，小溪“哗啦哗啦”地唱着，欢乐的歌儿流向远方。小鸟在小溪上空“叽叽喳喳”，是在向小溪姐姐问候呢!快看，春风婆婆也赶来了，正在给小溪梳头呀!那泛起的层层波纹，就是小溪姐姐的纱衣。这时，我们也赶来了。我们给小溪姐姐送来了一束束美丽的鲜花。

夏天来到了，小溪又唱着欢快的歌儿，来迎接夏姐姐。火红的太阳照在郁郁葱葱的森林里，蝉在树上叫着，好像在给小溪姐姐说话。小溪流到庄稼边，看见小苗都快渴死了，于是，就给了点水喝。小苗就马上精神起来了，有弯弯腰，像是在给小溪姐姐致谢呢!小溪高兴地走了。秋天来了，小溪流过庄稼，看见农民伯伯今年又是一个大丰收，心里美滋滋的，因为她帮助过农民伯伯呀!小溪又来到果园，看见我们正在摘果子，她淘气地给果子洗了个澡，果子高兴地笑了，看，笑得脸都红了。小溪快乐的走了。

冬天，小溪结了一层厚厚的冰，就成了我们的“乐园”。我和小伙伴们一起在上面滑冰。“看，下雪啦!”我们欢快地叫着。一会儿，雪停了，我们就在小溪上堆了一个大肚子雪人。雪人笑得多开心，看它那么开心，连我们也开心地笑了。

家乡的小溪像一位慈祥的母亲，呵护着我们。我爱你，家乡的小溪!

My hometown Nan Chang City is in Jiangxi , this is a beautiful , civilized city. There is a lot of places of historic interest, for instance , rope Jin Ta county, prances, king cabinet , all sorts of flowers in Nanchang continent , child pavilion , uprising memorial hall August First, ... Limpid eyes the public square fountain has attracted many visitors , the fountain high and low alternatively with music like naughty child in dancing. Have arrived at evening , the whole city colourfully decorated lantern Gao Zhao , is very beautiful! Take a look on that my hometown is what beautiful , what beautiful! I love my hometown Nanchang!

虽然是乡下人家，住着小小的房子，但好像宫殿一般大，到处都有花草，美丽极了! Although it is a rural family, living with a small house, it seems that the palace is large, there are flowers and plants everywhere, beautiful!

春天来了，他们总爱在屋前搭一瓜架，种上南瓜、丝瓜让那些瓜藤爬上瓜架，成熟时，红的瓜，青的瓜，他们全都像装饰品一样，装饰着房屋。不像高楼门前的石狮子那样庄严，显得别有一般风趣!

乡下人家总爱在院子里种几株花，鸡冠花、山茶花、杜鹃花它们都依着时令顺序开放，游客来时就可以知道现在是那个时间。不时还引来许多蝴蝶。蜜蜂，在花丛中飞舞，让人感到心情愉悦。阵阵花香飘到我们的鼻子中，立刻陶醉在花香中了!他们还会在屋前屋后种几枝竹子，一场春雨过后，常常会看见几个顽皮的竹笋从土里探出头来，甩甩泥土!

鸡，乡下人家照例要养几只的。从他们的房前屋后走过肯定会瞧见一只母鸡带领一群小鸡走过。或是看见一只耸着尾巴的雄鸡，在场地上大摇大摆地走来走去。

倘若屋前有一条小河，那么在石桥边，在大树下，会瞧见一群鸭子在水中嘻戏。不停的把头伸在水中觅食。就算是有人从那里走过，它们也从不吃惊。

若是在夏天的傍晚出去散步，常常会瞧见乡下人家吃晚饭的情景。他们把桌椅搬到屋前，天高地阔地吃起来。天边的红霞，傍晚的微风，飞过的归巢的鸟儿，都是他们的好朋友他们和乡下人家一起，构成了一幅和谐。自然的田园风景画。

秋天到了，许多的果实都成熟了，乡下人家都忙着收获丰收的果实，甭提都高兴了!望着那金黄的果实，好像一望无际的大海。甜甜的，酸酸的，看着真想尝一口呀!

乡下人家，不论什么季节，不论什么时候，都有一道独特、优美的画卷。

我的家乡虽不是什么着名的旅游景点，但却有着它独特的魅力;我的家乡虽没有青山绿水，但却有淙淙小溪;我的家乡虽不是富丽堂皇，但却清新自然。

My hometown is not what the famous tourist attractions, but it has its unique charm; my hometown although there is no green mountains and rivers, but there is a stream; my hometown is not magnificent, but fresh and natural.

春天，是万物复苏的季节，这时，家乡里的一棵棵果树，还有许许多多的野花与自家种的花卉、果树都发芽了，那么鲜的绿，那么活的绿，花儿们也不甘落后，争先恐后地开放，那儿的花虽不及城市里的奇花异卉那般娇气、珍贵，但却展现出自己的活力与生机，呼吸着田野的雨露阳光，它好像已经很满足了，它的朴素中透露出常人所体会不到的清新感。

Spring recovery of all things, is the season, at this time, the Yi Keke trees in my hometown, there are many flowers with their own kind of flower, fruit trees sprouted, so fresh and green, so living green, the flowers are not to be outdone, fall over each other to open, there is not the exotic and strangely scented flowers flowers in the city like you, precious, but to show their vigor and vitality, breathing the fields of the sun and rain, it seems to have been very satisfied, not ordinary people experience revealed the freshness of its simplicity.

一场绵绵的细雨，叩开了夏季的门。经过雨水的滋润与洗礼，树叶更加苍翠欲滴。登高望远，一片片绿色映入眼帘。

A drizzle, opened the door of the summer. After the baptism of rain and moisture, more verdant leaves. Standing high, a piece of green in my eye.

秋姑娘挽着菊花姐姐的手，姗姗而来，秋姑娘的篮子每年都沉甸甸的。瞧!椭圆的柿子，，犹如一个个小灯笼，那金黄的梨，诱惑着人们，让人们情不自禁地咬上一口，那甜甜的味道从味蕾沁入人心……

Autumn girl Wan chrysanthemum sister by the hand, Shanshan, autumn girl basket every year heavy. Look! The ellipse, persimmon, like a small lantern, the golden pear, the temptation to people, let the people be overcome by ones feelings to bite, the sweet taste from taste bud and heart......

寒风与大雨携手而来，大家在冬风的逼迫下穿上了毛绒大衣，唯有梅花独自屹立在风雪之中，真是应了“梅花香自苦寒来”千古名句啊!

The wind and the rain together, everyone in the wind under the pressure put on the plush coat, the only club stand alone in the snow, it should be "plum flower" famous through the ages!

我爱我的家乡，爱家乡的绿，爱家乡的美，更爱家乡的生机与活力!

I love my hometown, hometown green love, love of hometown beauty, vitality and love home!

导语：很多公园都需要收票，你觉得要不要收?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为

40%的同学认为

1.不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

1.应收门票，但票价不要太高

2.支付园林工人工资

3.购新花木

注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。

2.词数：100左右。

3.参考词汇：门票---entrance fee

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【参考翻译】

亲爱的编辑，

我写信告诉你关于我们的讨论，关于是否应该收取停车费。我们60%的同学认为一个入场费不符合人们的期望，因为公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以有一个很好的时间，当他们不忙，无论是在家里还是在工作。如果一个入场费必须由游客来支付，那就必须建造一个门和周围的墙。在结束一个城市将采取一个坏的外观。我们40%的同学认为可以接受入学手续费，但不能太贵。门票销售的钱可以用来支付公园的园丁和买一些其他种类的花和树。

关于我自己，我认为一个入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。亲爱的编辑，我们有同样的看法吗?

你真正的，

李华

你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文：

1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法;

2. 举例说明理由。

注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。

满分作文2

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”

在英语阅读周，我的一个同学推荐了一个报价给我们，这是这样的：“你的未来取决于许多事情，但主要是在你。”

As far as I’m concerned, I completely agree with the view. Of course, our future depends on many things such as our living environment, opportunities, luck, others’ help and etc. But it is we ourselves that determine our future. Our positive attitude, our determination, our confidence and our sense of discipline are the keys to our future.

就我而言，我完全同意这一观点。当然，我们的未来取决于我们的生活环境、机会、运气、别人的帮助等，但我们自己决定了我们的未来。我们积极的态度、决心、信心和纪律是我们未来的关键。

Madame Curie was a good example to us. In her times, women were not admitted to university in her motherland, Poland, so she was forced to leave her homeland and studied in France. She often said: we should believe every one of us can do something and above all we should believe in ourselves. It was her confidence that made her discover radium and later win the Nobel Prize. So I firmly hold the belief that our future is in our hands.

居里夫人是我们的好榜样。在她的时代，妇女在她的祖国，波兰不承认，所以她被迫离开她的祖国，在法国学习。她常说：“我们应该相信我们每个人都能做些什么，首先我们应该相信自己。是她的信心，使她发现镭，后来赢得了诺贝尔奖。所以我坚信我们的未来是在我们手中。

昨天晚上做了一个美好的梦，梦到穿越到了20年后的家乡。20年后的家乡变化，真大呀！

20年后的家乡，绿树成荫，鲜花遍地，小鸟在枝头欢快地唱歌，蝴蝶在草丛中翩翩起舞。

20年后的家乡，在户外听不到一点噪音，地上也看不见一点垃圾，更看不见有人朝地上乱扔垃圾。

20年后的家乡，交通不再堵拥堵，到处是各种各样造型奇特的海陆空三用悬浮汽车，在陆地上跑着遇到堵塞就立即变形成飞机飞到空中，甚至遇河和海时就会变成潜水艇。这种交通工具可以随着我的想法随时变化，感觉像魔术师一样，一会变一个样，太阳公公仿佛也笑了！

20年后的科技也十分发达，除了悬浮汽车，智能机器人高科技新式飞机等等，这些东西也使人们的生活更快捷，方便。人类大部分工作都会让机器人做，比如机器人厨师机器人商店机器人一张而人们休闲自如买东西，跟朋友一起出去玩的人，随处可见20年后的科技，太发达了20年后的家乡，真美好，真希望快点来到。

我的家乡没有红叶似火的香山，也没有巍峨峻拔的泰山，没有微波粼粼的漓江，也没有“淡妆浓抹总相宜”的西湖。但她也有自己的山，自己的水，蓝天白云的衬托，农家村落的辅助，也让家乡的山水别有一番诗情画意。 My hometown does not have red leaves like flame -like incense mountains, no towering Taishan, no microwave sparkling Lijiang, and there is no "light makeup and thick."EssenceBut she also has her own mountains, her water, blue sky and white clouds, and the assistance of the farm village, which also makes the landscapes of her hometown have a different poetic and paintings.

家乡的山，连绵不断，绵亘蜿蜒。大山山脊十分绵延，但主峰极其峻拔，到了四月，你站在主峰，便能感受到“人间四月芳菲尽，山寺桃花始盛开。”的那一份别样的情趣。春意盎然之中，大山、田野，野花盛开，遍地都是，引的蜜蜂飞来飞去。农人在低头耕作，小孩儿则在山间嬉戏，而大山像一位慈祥的老爷爷，不知用了什么法术，总是紧紧吸引着孩子，保护着孩子。花儿、树儿、草儿、溪水，欢声笑语，田间劳作，使大山成了一幅祥和的画卷。

骄阳似火之中，大山可是一个避暑场所，绿葱葱的树木，像一个个忠实的仆人，在林间小路上，他们为你打扇。溪水像一个顽皮的小孩子，在山间飞跑，像是想与你一同度过这清凉一夏，看到这些，夏日的闷热早就抛到九霄云外去了。

秋天来了，在山坡上开垦出来的土地，也结出了金黄的果实，丰收的喜悦充实了农人的笑脸。这座大山与这里的人们产生了深厚的感情，——它养育着这一方人。

冬日的大山失去了生机与欢笑，但是，它换上了一件银白色的纱衣，远远望去，分外妖娆。

家乡有一条环乡河，是人们一段美好的回忆，它不是漓江，它比漓江更有魄力，它不是黄河，它比黄河更要委婉。它在人们的眼里是那么可爱，河水清澈见底，水上有一座老桥，在夏天，河水有节奏的哗哗声与鸟鸣声、蝉鸣声打成一片，像一曲优美的乐章。晚上，随着风儿摆动的树叶儿沙沙作响，不知名的小虫在角落里吟唱，河水又与它们打成一片，犹如天籁之音。

河边有树，树多成林，林旁有桥。远处有山，山下有房，几处景物构成一幅唯美的画卷。

我爱我的家乡，爱家乡的美景，时光荏苒，泡沫聚散，唯有你依然如旧……

As we all know, our life is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Every one of us expects to be successful and deserve others’ respect. In my opinion, the key to success is that we should manage to make the most of what we’ve already had.

When I was a child, I am fond of making things by hand. At one time, I took part in a hand-made activity in our school. I wanted to make a model house as I usually did, but suddenly I found the materials that I had weren’t enough. Faced with such a situation, I really wanted to give up. However, after a second thought, I thought of an idea to pide some of the materials into small parts and I finally succeeded in making a special model plane. To my great joy, I was given the first prize because of my creativity.

After that, I understand whenever we face trouble, it is no use complaining. We should try our best to make use of what we have already had to solve problems.

我们都知道，我们的生活充满了挑战和机遇。我们中的每一个人都希望获得成功，并得到别人的尊重。在我看来，成功的关键在于我们应该设法使我们所拥有的。

当我还是个孩子的时候，我喜欢用手做东西。有一次，我参加了一个手工制作的活动在我们学校。我想做一个模型房子，我通常做的，但突然发现我的材料是不够的。面对这样的情况，我真的很想放弃。然而，经过一次思考，我想到了一个想法把一些材料分成几个小部分，最后我成功地制作了一个特殊的模型飞机。我非常高兴，因为我的创造力，我得到了第一个奖。

之后，我明白每当我们面对麻烦，抱怨是没有用的。我们应该尽我们最大的努力去利用我们已经解决的问题。

[中考英语满分作文努力

我的家乡在安阳这座古城内西部的一座小村庄，这里是我永远的乐土，因为这儿有我最喜欢的味道——皮渣的味道。皮渣是家乡婚宴三下锅文化、三道版文化、八大菜系文化的主要食材，是独具地方特点的美味菜肴。

每逢过年，我都会回到这个美丽的宁静的村庄，和家人一起辞旧迎新，度过这喜庆非凡的节日。而在众多饭菜中，皮渣一定是最引人注目的，它既可煎可烩，也可炒菜做汤，我曾经无数次看着奶奶做出这种晶莹的佳肴，奶奶首先把正宗的红薯粉条与淀粉糊融合在一起，两者是1比1的，还要加“调味”，绿绿的葱丝，黄黄的姜穗，白白的蒜蓉，奶奶挥手一洒，就像雪花般飞舞，飘飘然，均匀落在已熔好到糊糊里，顿时一股清香飘出。然后把它放在容器中，如锅、盘之类，上笼开蒸40分钟即可，一出锅，那浓浓的混着姜、蒜辣的气味扑鼻而来，过会儿就会慢慢的香起来，就不像那般猛烈了，却有丝带温柔划过鼻尖。最后，把皮渣切成一块块，它看着已是晶莹剔透十分精致，不过这时候可不能尝噢！要耐心，因为它十分烫，凉后尝起来可是果冻般弹软，看似软软，却十分筋道，不会碎，不会变成糊，香而不腻，厚味绵长。每次当我大口咀嚼着这喷香的皮渣，忙活很久的奶奶都会坐在一边慈爱的看着我，满足地笑着。

我爱家乡的味道，就是饱含着奶奶对我爱的皮渣味道。

姑姑告诉我，皮渣除了给自己人吃，还有给来访的客人邻居，以及给远在外打工的儿女。没错，每逢春节村子里就会被浓浓的皮渣味弥漫香，香而浓郁，看起来烟雾缭绕，实际是皮渣的热气儿，往而平静宁和的小村庄，这时沸腾起来了，热闹非凡。人们在村子里来往穿梭，敲敲东家门，拍拍西家窗，给对方送上自己的一份祝福，有礼有节，笑脸相迎。各家的皮渣有各家的味道，浓缩着各家的情，不同的人家做出的皮渣自然各有特点，但那种祝福与期望美好的朴实情感早已包在这可爱软软的皮夹里了，这是一种异曲同工的味道更是热情友爱的味道，

我爱家乡的味道，是饱含着热情有礼的景色味。

甜而暖，红而香的皮渣是家乡人民最朴实最实在的情，像红色丝带般系在每个家乡儿女的心中，将他们紧密的连在一起。那带着皮渣出门打工的儿女们就像是带着家味，无论走到哪儿，无论遇到多少挫折，都不会忘记那份温暖，也会永远记住，总有家在身后等着你凯旋归来，在心中和行动上也会越来越有劲，不负家乡所盼望，不忘初心，懂得感恩之情。

我爱家乡的味道是皮渣的味道，人情的味道，爱的味道。

is not only the city where I was born, but also the only place Ive never been able to leave. 5 years ago, I moved from here to another city to begin my college life. The day I left  I felt as a fish out of water.

is the only place where Ive walked past a schoolyard and pictured a future son or daughter of mine playing balls.

I love this city. She’s small and quiet. Every day I live here, I could have the safety feeling which I got when my mother held me in her arms.

I love this city. She is very beautiful and lovely. Everywhere you can see the flowers, grass and trees. The shops are full of all kinds of goods. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air.

I love this city. The climate here is very warm which is very suitable for people to do some outdoors activities.

I love this city. She is where I have lived for ____ years with my parents, my good friends, and my teachers who have supported me. She has almost all my memories.

I love the night of . People sit in the gardens of their houses or in the small restaurants, chatting, drinking and enjoying the delicious seafood which is abundant in our city.

I love the suise of . When I was still a little girl, my parents and I used to climb up the hill in the morning to see the suise. When the beautiful sun went up, the gentle breeze brought us the fragrance of the flowers, the golden sunshine made our hair shimmer, and my heart would be filled with hope and happiness!

Maybe someday I will have to leave this city, but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, its people, its trees and its suise. Yes, everything that it gave me could be given by other places, but my love won’t be changed, because it is my home town.

不但是我出生的城市，也是我无法离开的唯一地方。5年以前，我离开这里到另外一个城市开始我的大学生活。离开的那天，我感觉自己像是一条离开了水的鱼儿。

当我走过一座校园，想象我未来的儿子或女儿能在这里玩耍。，就是唯一一个让我有这种想法的地方。

我爱这座城市。她小而安静。每天我在这里居住, 我都有一种安全感。这种感觉只有当我母亲用双手环抱着我的时候我才能感觉得到。

我爱这座城市。她美丽而可爱。在，你各处都能看到花、草和树木。商店里陈列着各种商品。当你走在街道上,你能感觉温和的风触摸着你的脸，并且呼吸到新鲜的空气。

我爱这座城市。这里的气候温暖，并且非常适宜做一些户外活动。

我爱这座城市。在这里，我居住了____年。这里有我的父母、我的好朋友和支持我多年的老师。她拥有我几乎所有的回忆。

我爱的夜晚。人们在他们房子的花园或小餐馆中闲坐，聊着天、品尝我们城市所盛产的海鲜。

我爱的日出。当我仍然是一个小女孩的时候, 我的父母和我常常早起爬山去看日出。当美丽的太阳升起的时候,轻柔的微风带给我们花的芬芳,金色的阳光使我们的头发也漾起一层亮色，那一刻，我的心总是充满了希望和快乐!

也许有一天，我将不得不离开这座城市, 但是无论我走到哪里，我都不会忘记、它的人们，它的树和它的日出。是的, 凡是它能给予我的别的城市也可以给与，但实我的爱将永不被改变。因为，这里才是我的家乡.

2009年北京卷高考英语满分作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。