最难忘的老师英语作文60词（最新20篇）

Dear teacher,

Hello!

Teacher, you have taught us Chinese for more than a year, my education, I will never forget. I want to say to you: Teacher, thank you!

In the last year, when I did wrong, it was you who taught me in time; The help you gave me when I couldnt do a Chinese question... I want to say to you: "Thank you, my teacher!

Because in your class, we all feel so relaxed and happy, without any tension or stress! Every time school is over, we cant bear to go! You really are an excellent teacher!

Teacher you said in the classroom, we are not only teachers and students relationship, but also friends! I feel very honored to be your student!

Teacher you also ask us to read the text with feelings, articles. Before, we talk is a spit out, when you come to let us go home to practice the word to be fast, now we and your words are about the same, but also with feelings to read the text. You read beautifully and emotionally, and your class is like a magnet full of new gravity. Even the class to learn the most bad, are also in the straight waist, with relish to listen to, our classmates are very like your Chinese class.

If we are beautiful flowers, you are hard garden ding if we are a candle, you are a match, with the teacher we can grow strong, big shine! Teacher, we all say that you are cultivating the pillars of the motherland; But I say, you are the pillars of the motherland. It is you who support the backbone of our generation! Ah, teacher, your spirit, always remember my heart! You are like the obscure roots that make the young trees grow strong and full of fruit, yet you do not ask for any reward.

I really said: "Teacher, thank you!"

Finally, I wish Mr. Cui good health, smooth work and good luck in everything!

Advance!

Salute!

The long-awaited Lantern Festival finally arrived, people be jubilant in various ways to celebrate this happy day. We are one family get together fireworks lanterns.

Came to the square, here is already huge crowds of people, we walk through the crowd, bought a kongmin light, I am carrying lanterns, mother took the pen, write on the desire in the lanterns. I put the sky lanterns distraction, it slowly becomes a cylinder, dad put alcohol block on the small hook, with lighter lit it. One minute, two minutes, three minutes...... I slowly let go, lanterns slowly rose to the sky, drifting away, slowly turned into a little red dot, finally disappeared. Originally put kongmin light also need patience!

We finished the lanterns and go to the fireworks. Fireworks lit up, "bang!" A yellow spot moment in the air blast a lotus, opened a prelude, followed by various shapes of fireworks turns into battle, will the sky to flourish stage.

"Wow!" A blue fireworks opened in my head like fried, debris covered the sky. Some fireworks like beautiful flowers, some like a stupid face hanging in midair...... The whole square over into invites, Ambilight ocean of joy!

A second time in the past, people have to leave; and end with a small fireworks. I would be reluctant to part of the home!

This year I had a really happy lantern festival!

期盼已久的元宵节终于到了，人们兴高采烈地以各种方式来庆祝这个欢乐的日子。我们一家人约好一起放烟花孔明灯。

来到广场，这里已经是人山人海，我们穿过人群，买了一个孔明灯，我提着孔明灯，妈妈拿着笔，在孔明灯上写上了愿望。我把孔明灯撑开，它慢慢变成一个圆柱体，爸爸把酒精块放在小钩上，用火机把它点燃。一分钟、两分钟、三分钟……我才慢慢地松开手，孔明灯也慢慢地升上了天空，越飘越远，慢慢变成了小红点，最后不见了。原来放孔明灯也需要耐心呀！

我们放完了孔明灯又去放烟花。点燃烟花，“嘭！”一个小黄点瞬间在空中炸出一朵荷花，揭开了序幕，紧接着各种形状的烟花轮番上阵，将天空化为争奇斗艳的舞台。

“哇！”一朵蓝色的烟花在我头顶炸开了，像是碎片布满天空。有的烟花像美丽的花朵，有的像一个笨脸挂在半空中……整个广场上空变成了火树银花，流光溢彩的欢乐海洋！

时间一分一秒地过去了，人们都纷纷离去；最后在一个小烟花中结束。我也依依不舍的回家了！

今年的元宵节我过得真快乐！

[难忘的元宵佳节英语作文及翻译

My English teacher, Mr. Jones, is a middle-aged man with thick glasses above his nose. We all like his classes, for he is always very active and has many ways to make his lessons lively and interesting. After class, he often plays table tennis with us. And at night, he usually works late and prepares the lessons carefully.

When we told him that we had passed the entrance examination of senior middle school, he Was so happy that he jumped like a child.

We all get along well with him. All of us still miss him very much after we have left the junior middle school.

冯老师是个又高又胖的男人，还是个戴眼镜的的数学老师。他从一年级到三年级都教我们，因此，我们已经建立了深厚的感情了。

冯老师讲课的时候情绪好极了，他一边讲一边做起搞笑的动作，让枯燥无味的加减乘除变得更搞笑，还让我们哄堂大笑。

有一次，一位同学在说话，被老师看见了，气哼哼的说：“我在上面说，你就在下面玩，把他带到教导处”。结果，他以后也不敢上课开小差了。

期末快到了，同学们都在紧张地复习，老师忙着复印试卷，从早到晚都忙个不停，老师为了我们喋喋不休，我们不要辜负老老师对我的期望啊。考试后，老师把试卷发了下来，我居然考了75分，我好害怕啊。老师走到我旁边，我立刻慌了，老师对我说：“你考得不太理想，没关系，下次努力”。哟，这句话真温暖，好想给我吃了颗“定心丸”，整个人都踏实起来。

如今，我上了四年级，有时看到老师声音嘶哑，还不时咳嗽，我还要对您说一声：“谢谢你”。

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She teaches us maths.She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

语文老师最让人难忘，因为在所有课中，语文老师最有趣，带给我们的快乐也最多。我经常想起我们的语文老师——薛海波，想起他带给我们那满满的一箩筐快乐。

薛老师身高一米七多，可谓风度翩翩。用他自己的话说就是：“我比中国十大美男之一周恩来帅多了，不信，你们看看你们的波哥，皮肤白净，浓眉大眼，还是双皮的。”

薛老师教语文多年，他用幽默就跟耍魔术似的。每天一睁开眼睛，薛老师的幽默生活就开始了。

早晨，成长明白课上，董明仁主持送李小芳生日诗活动，董明仁说：“下面由波哥为小芳同学送上生日礼物，”薛老师一手伸进口袋，一手拿着生日诗，踮着脚，眼睛瞟着董明仁走上讲台说：“还小芳同学，喊得咋这么亲哩。”结束时，董明仁边看老师边走下讲台，薛老师说：“你怎么不和小芳同学挥手告别?”我们都哈哈大笑起来。

上课是薛老师施展幽默的最佳舞台。袁航同学害眼戴眼镜，一星期后把眼镜摘掉了，薛老师说：袁航，你怎么把眼镜摘掉了，我喜欢你戴眼镜的样子，特别像黑帮老大。“李永辉同学很爱张嘴巴，薛老师说：”永辉，把你的坏毛病改改，不要再张嘴了，再张嘴就把我吃了。“薛老师上课时，有些同学不抬头看黑板，薛老师说：”难道我长得太丑你们都不能看了。“还有薛老师让我们买《朝花夕拾》，老师说：”注意买有鲁迅头像的这一种，不要买错了，鲁迅先生是不是长得有点像我?“我们大笑起来，”噢，我比鲁迅先生帅多了。“

课间活动，老师让我们站起来，说：”双手垂直够到天，天上有二百万元钱，快点够吧。“把我们的物理老师也逗笑了。开运动会我们班选男女导引员，我们班选上任子恒、王细亚，同学们都看他们俩，薛老师说：”你看他们俩长得太俊太羡慕，有人羡慕我没有?“同学们说没有，薛老师说：”太伤自尊了，我去跳楼呀，不要拦我，我死后给我买花圈，不要买太贵的。“同学们都哈哈大笑起来。

考试前，薛老师总是一遍遍叮嘱我们：”听到没有，听到没有?考试不要留空——不要留空，不知道答案的题目就胡填，明白了吗?如果作文不会写，就瞎写，字写工整就行，那也比不写强多了。“

薛老师和许多语文老师一样自命不凡，喜欢吹嘘：”要不是高中耍游戏、贪玩，我就考上清华大学了。“实际上，我们的薛老师真的是才华横溢，博学多能，只是我们班许多同学在小学没有打好基础学习学初中课本有点吃力，没有考出好成绩。

我们的幽默生活就要结束了，我们开始有浪漫主义变为现实主义了，因为薛老师要狠抓我们的成绩了。

I had an unforgettable Labour Day holiday.

My classmates threw a celebration party at our middle school principle‘s flat. Our parents were invited to the party. Everybody was excited about the holiday. I ate a lot of delicious food at that time. I also went visiting my relatives with my parents. We went to celebrate our good time at a fancy restaurant in Shanghai. Later that day, we sang karaoke in my uncle‘s house. We stayed for the night.

The next day, I went shopping with my cousins. We bought some brand name t-shirts and pants. In the afternoon, my cousins gave me a fun ride on the city highway. They also taught me how to drive their fancy car, so I tried to do some turning and parking. It was not easy first. But I learnt quick. We returned home with many gifts from our trip. I tried to get some rest. At night, I chatted with my classmates on the phone, and I watched CCTV before going to bed. Since last Friday, I started to finish up my homework assignments on my personal laptop. Some of my assignments were quite boring. After I finished the homework, I emailed them to my teachers.

That was my unforgettable Labour Day holiday. Yeh, I had a lot of fun!

[难忘的假期英语作文120词

how time flies!im fifteen years now.during the long time,there was one thing that i will never forget.

the spring festival is our traditional festival.during the spring festival,people usually visit their friends and relatives.when i was 9 years old,my family took the bus to my grandparents to say "happy new year" to them.

in the bus,i had a good seat.at 7:30,the bus came to a village.a woman got on with a baby in her arms.at that time,there was no seat.but she must look after her baby carefully.she had to stand next to me.i wanted to stand up and let her sit down,but i was afraid of hearing the other people say"that girl want to be praised."i looked around.most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.suddenly,a little boy behind me,stood up and made room for the woman.she said "thank you very much" with a big smile.the boy smiled,too.when i told my cousin about it after that,he said "the child is the father of a man." im very ashamed.why couldt i do the same thing as the little boy did?

from that i learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.if everyone makes a contribution to helping others,the world will become much more beautiful!

Mr. Zeng

Hello! Winter vacation for a long time, did not see you, so want to write a

letter to you, talk about my new years interesting events.

On the second day of the first month, my parents and I went to visit aunt

mans house for new years greetings. We met four cousins and cousins. Mother

saw that our children had no fun staying in the yard, so she proposed to climb

the mountain. We were overjoyed and rushed to say yes. It should not be too

late. Mother and aunt Jingjing set out with five children. The road up the

mountain is extremely rugged, and to the back is almost full of dense jungle. I

led two cousins to rush forward through all kinds of difficulties to open up a

passage for my mother and two sisters. Later, I felt that I was the biggest boy

and should not not take care of my sister, so I went back to the back to protect

my sisters. For a moment, I plucked the trees for Kiki, and then led Xi Xi Xi

across the pit. We took care of each other, and finally climbed to the top of

the mountain. My mother took some pictures for us as a souvenir. It began to go

down the mountain again. We ran into a house with dogs. We three "little men"

came back home to protect our two cousins and two mothers.

My aunt and grandmothers house is backed by green hills and facing the

fields. After dinner, we happily went to the fields to play! As soon as we saw

the haystack, we would sleep, roll and play on it. We had a lot of fun. The

lovely smiling faces on the haystack entered the mothers camera. The haystack

that others have painstakingly piled up has been broken up. We feel sorry for it

and try to pile it up again.

On the fourth day of junior high school, we went to my uncles house to pay

New Years greetings. His family has a unicycle, usually used to carry grain or

farm tools. Seeing this special "rustic" car, I was very happy and invited

brother hang and brother Yi, who came to pay New Years greetings, to play with

me. Yi Di and I were sitting on the wheelbarrow, and brother hang came to push

the wheelbarrow, which was much more fun than riding in the car! However,

brother Hangs strength was too strong, the speed was too fast, and there was no

safety guarantee, so we screamed nervously!

Mr. Zeng, you see, in such a vast country, we have spent a healthy, happy

and beautiful spring festival in the city for a long time. Did you have a

colorful spring festival?

Best wishes

Everything is as good as you wish!

Since I went to college, I have made many friends and we shared the same interest. My friends and I liked traveling so much. We decided to travel abroad. The destination was Thailand. We spent ten days there and had a nice trip. It was such an unforgettable trip, and I learned a lot.

自从我上大学后，我认识了很多朋友，我们有着共同的兴趣爱好。我和我的朋友们都很喜欢旅游，所以我们决定出国旅行。目的地是泰国。我们在那里逗留了10天，旅途很愉快。这是难忘的旅行啊，我学到了很多东西。

Firstly, it was my first time to travel abroad. My friends and I had made many preparations. We read the travel guide and chose the information that was useful to us. I classified the information and wrote down tourist sites. During the trip, I become much independent. Sometimes I even walked down the foreign street by myself, appreciating the beautiful scenery.

首先，这是我第一次出国旅行。我和我的朋友们做了很多准备工作，我们看了旅游指南，选择对我们有用的信息。我把信息分类并写下与旅游景点相关的信息。在旅途中，我变得更加独立，有时我甚至可以独自走在国外街头，欣赏美丽的风景。

Secondly, I broadened my vision and enrich my mind. Before I came to Thailand, I needed to read some information, then I got to know this countrys culture and their tradition. When I was in Thailand, I could feel its religious belief. Whats more, there were so many foreigners here, and I talked to them happily.

其次，我扩宽了我的视野，丰富了我的思想。来泰国之前，我需要提前阅读一些信息，然后我了解了这个国家的文化和传统。我在泰国的时候，我能感觉到它的宗教信仰，更重要的是，这里有很多外国人，我可以跟他们愉快地交流。

Traveling is a good way to learn knowledge, and I know the importance of English. It is the key to know about the world.

旅行是一种很好的学习知识的方法，而且我也了解英语的重要性，它是了解世界的关键。

It was the Lantern Festival, and my parents took me to the Confucius temple to see the Lantern Festival. Along the way, it was drizzling. One to the Confucius temple, the eyes are all lights, as if into the light of the sea. The lotus lantern on the left, the advertising lamp on the right, looks like two soaring dragons.

After that, my parents took me to the lantern market to buy lanterns. What a lot of lanterns! There are rabbit lights, pigeon lights, and dog lights... I looked back and forth several times. It was dazzling. I was dazzled, didnt know which to buy? Finally, I bought an antique candle lamp.

Then mom and dad took me to the pedal boat. Because of the festival, so many people, lined up a long team. We chose a goose boat, my father and mother pedaled, and I held the rudder. We had a happy Lantern Festival.

一眨眼，就要升入初中。在我的小学生活中，有太多的人使我难忘。但给我印象最深的要数我的二年级语文老师——周老师了。

周老师平日里穿着比较朴素，喜欢穿布鞋。他一张略瘦的脸上点缀着一双明亮的眼睛。高高的鼻梁上挂着一副眼镜。

要说为什么周老师给我留下的印象最深刻，这还得从我读二年级时说起。我是一个转班生，由于换了个环境，我觉得有些陌生，所以无论是上下课，我都沉默不语。周老师好像发现了我的孤僻性格，想要对我进行改造，上课时给我机会让我多发言。“逼”得我不得不认真听讲。

我对周老师的念念不忘，不仅仅是因为他的“别出心裁”的教学方法，还因为他对班上典型“扶贫对象”没有歧视，而是努力帮他们提高成绩。

就拿我来说吧，我一次期中考试只得了64分，成了班上的“拖油瓶”，在考试后的一节班会课上，我本以为周老师会狠狠的批评我，我做好了充分的准备。谁知，周老师不但没有批评我，反而说是自己没有尽到责任，对不起同学们，并且他说要加倍努力让同学们都取得优异的成绩，说着说着周老师的眼眶红了，掉起了“金豆豆”。看到那情景，比打我骂我都难受。

啊!老师，您是美的播种者，耕耘者。是您用美的阳光普照着我，才使我的心灵花园繁花似锦;您传授给我的知识，如春雨点点滋润我的心田上的幼苗，让它生长成大树。十年树木，百年树人;插柳之恩，终生难忘。

老师：

您好!

从我们班主任的口中得知你即将去美国留学，虽然我们不能阻止你前进的道路，带我们永远支持你!每个人都是自私的，我也一样，我依然舍不得你离开我们，虽然我们只相处一年，可是产生的暖厚感情是千言万语道不尽的，每当我们遇到难题时，你总是耐心的讲解，您的课总是讲的那么细，生怕我们听不明白，您就像我们的大姐姐一样，永远的和蔼可亲。

我希望你不要去美国，不要离开我们，我希望你能陪我们一起走过初中三年，可我不能这样做，因为我明白这是你人生的转折点，我很知足，也很幸运，因为一位英语中的佼佼者可以做我们的老师，叫我们知识。

虽然我们四班的同学在你的课上都很调皮，还经常给你捣乱，但我们四班是一个很重感情的班级，听到这个消息，大家都很难过，并一致决定要在您教我们剩下的日子里，做一个乖学生，我们真恨时间为什这么少，真恨为什么不好好珍惜和你在一起的时间，四班是一个可爱的班，四班是一个爱你的班。

你走的那天，我们一致要笑着送你走，可你刚进班，大家就都哭了，你和我们谈心，让我们好好学习，不要想她。希望老师你能在这次美国之旅上一帆风顺，开心每一天，四班永远是你最坚强的后盾，不要忘记我们这些可爱的笑脸。

后记：这是一封迟到的信，已经过了一年了，我看到你在美国的照片了，古老的建筑，时尚的街道，各种不同的人，在美国的其他州旅行，看到你的发展和生活，我真为你感到高兴，你说过会在我们毕业前回来的，我一直很期望那一天，我们现在过得很好，你的英语口语是不是变得更好了，老师总说你很努力，很勤奋，才会走的这么远，我很羡慕你，我认为你就是我的偶像，那么的有能力，之前我在逅逅姐姐书中读到过美国，不同的教育，不同的社会体制，一个实现梦想的地方，那么的令我着迷，令我向往，我认为那离我太远，可看到你之后，又给了我希望，我要向你那样，走出这片天地!

支持你的学生：__

时光如流水，一去不往返。许多人或物早已都忘的差不多了．可让我记忆犹新始终不能忘记的是老师的那双眼睛。

老师的眼睛是敏锐的，是严厉的，又是鼓励的。

老师的眼睛是敏锐的。那次，由于我不小心，把饭打的太多了，吃不完了，可学校规定吃多少打多少，千万不能丢了也不能剩下。否则，以后这个班就不给早点了。没办法，我决定要偷偷倒掉，下课了，同学们都不在，我飞快的从桌子里取出馒头，丢进垃圾桶，用垃圾遮起来了，可您却在丢垃圾的时候发现了这个被抛弃的馒头。

老师的眼睛是严厉的。那次，我上课的时候不专心，你在上面讲课，而我则和我的同桌打闹，说话还做小动作，影响前后左右的同学。突然，我感觉一股寒气袭来，我抬起头，正对上你那双严厉的眼睛，我不由得身体一哆嗦，立刻认真听课。

老师的眼睛是鼓励的。那次，老师问了我们一个问题，大家都不会，老师的目光在我们每个人的身上来回打量。最终，老师的目光停在了我的身上，老师说让我回答，我紧张得都结巴了。你向我投来鼓励的目光，我不知怎的，竟不结巴了，而且回答得很好，你带头给我鼓掌。

难忘你的眼晴，每当我又犯错误的时候，那双眼睛便浮现在我的脑海……鼓励着我，提醒着我。

在一声声叮嘱中，在一声声教导中，在一个个板书中，我感受到了她的严格，她的奇特，她的关爱。她如一座塔屹立与我心中，使我对她倍感尊敬。

她。短短的头发，十分漂亮，有一点青少年的气息，一点都不像教了好几年书的老师！可那头发，虽美却不听话，不时跑到她的额前来，哎！大大的眼睛中又含着几分严厉，在高高的鼻梁上架了一副眼镜，紫粉色的，戴上去又漂亮了几分。玲珑的小嘴，别看它小，说起英语来，那可是一流的，仿佛就是个天生的英国人。

她不仅口才好，而且教学方法也很好。

她有着一种独特的方法，往往都能将死气沉沉的我们顿时生龙活虎起来。就如今天上午来说吧，她在上课前，在黑板两边各贴了12张卡片，有六组，让我们“连连看”，将全班分为两组，哪一组先消完，哪一组赢。全班来了兴趣，老师也顺水推舟讲了好多知识点，一轮又一轮，每次都是我们蓄目以待是否相同，真是“胆战心惊”。

你们看，她是不是很有创意呢？

“follow me！”

她要教我们课文了，后会有期，拜拜！

[以我的英语老师为题的作文

My favourite teacher is Miss Meng.shes my new math teacher.Her class is very funny.Shes tall and thin.Shes pretty.Shes very very smart and active.Shes strict,but shes very kind.Her fevourite food are tomatoes.She often reads books on Saturdays and Sundays.

This is my fevourite teacher.I like her!

[我的老师初中英语作文

她是一个很平凡的人。一张白皙而以俏丽的脸上；两道细溜溜的眉毛；一双小而有神眼睛，薄薄的嘴唇，常常挂着恬静的微笑。她个子不高，站在我们中间像是我们的一员。

她是一个很幽默，可爱的人。一次她在黑板上画了一只猴子，指着画，请了一个开小差的同学问她这是什么。她一慌之下把monkey说成了lizard。陆老师瞪大眼睛，装出一脸狐疑，轻声地问：“同学们，你们看到过像这种品种的lizard吗？下面一阵哄堂大笑。老师及时纠正说：“这是monkey，以后上课要认真听。”

有一次，有位同学上课在开小差，陆老师轻轻地走过去，拍拍他的肩膀说：“革命尚未成功，同志仍需努力啊！”小朋友有错误时，陆老师从不正面批评而是用巧妙的语言给予提醒。

在她的英语课上总是充满了欢声笑语，我们也越来越喜欢英语了！

Dear Peter,

I’m very glad to know that you are a table tennis fan. So am I. Table

tennis is the national ball of China. Almost everyone in China, whether old or

young, can play it. The tables for playing it can be seen here and there, in

parks, squares and in many working places, even at some people’s homes. The

Chinese table tennis players have very excellent skills. Since 1959 when a man

named Rong Guotuan won the first world champion at the 25th World Table

Tennis

Championship, China has had many table tennis world champions, and the

Chinese people are very proud of them. Hope one day you will come to China, and

we can play a game together.

Best regards.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

Miss Wang is very tall and thin. She is about 1.7 meters  tall. She has long fair hair. She has big eyes and a small mouth. She looks very pretty.

Miss Wang is also a friendly teacher. She is kind to us and she gets on well with everyone. I like her very much. Miss Wangs favourite colour is pink and she likes pink things too. I think Miss Wang has many hobbies. She likes reading,running and playing tennis.

She thinks" Health is the first", so she likes doing sports. She won the first prize in the English speech competition last term.

[英语作文介绍老师

老师您是辛勤的园丁用汗水滋润了我们，您把知识毫无保留的给予了我们。老师，您是是神圣的，是伟大的，是高尚的。您为我们付出的太多太多，日日夜夜地操劳着，夜以继日地忙碌着。【孩子，这些话语虽然是你的内心体现，但是要注意措辞，简单的重复这些赞美的语言，并不是一种好的表达！有时一句话就可以点明主旨了。】亲爱的老师我怎能忘记您。

还记得刚踏入五十七中的时候，看着那宽阔的操场，忙碌的老师，陌生的同学，兴奋中有一丝害怕，害怕中有一点紧张。那时的我还不懂什么是初中生活，就由于我的身体原因离开了只生活了一个月的班级。

如今的我虽然身体还未痊愈，但又回到了五十七中，看着熟悉和陌生的同学，心中万分紧张。【语言稍显重复，可以只说明自己由于身体原因休养了一段时间，回到学校后的感受。】刘老师，还记得您上第一节课，是您温柔的眼神，生动的话语，使我心中的紧张放松了许多。还记得您上一次找我谈话，使我懂得了如何与别人交流。【这应该是大家最想知道的故事，刘老师怎么温暖了你的心灵，所以要把故事叙述的详细生动。这里需要变成两个时间，注意写到刘老师的时候的细节刻画。这些才是文章的重点。】您的爱，如同春风一般和煦，清泉一般甘甜。您的爱，比父爱更加严峻，比母爱更加细腻。您的爱，是天下最伟大最高尚的。

您如同一支烛燃烧了自己却把光明奉献给了别人。您是春天里的细雨，滋润着我们。您是严冬里的炭火，是酷暑里的浓荫，是雾海中的指航灯灯。【还是那句话，只有表扬的语言，而没有具体的事件，感觉较为空洞。所以还是删去。】老师，谢谢您！是您给了我自信心与勇气。是您为我点燃了希望的光芒。谢谢您，老师！【点题句不错。如果单看这句话没有问题，如果结合文章的话就有问题了，因为没有具体的事件讲述，所以我们不知道你为什么会总结出这一句话来。】

整体评价：

宝贝，你的学习态度和学习热情，老师都很欣赏。同时写作这方面，建议你能注意以下这两个方面：

1、写作前先列提纲，想好要写什么事件来反映主题；

2、选择事件里能够体现中心的一两处细节展开刻画。

[难忘老师，谢谢您作文