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初三英语重点

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Linda is my best friend。 She has changed o lot in the past two years。

She used to be short and have short hair。 However, now she is much taller

than before。 She has long hair。 She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV

and chatting with friends。 But she likes playing the piano, reading books and

taking a walk now。 She used to be outgoing。 Now she is a little quite。

I think people sure change as time goes by。 Even though she has changed a

lot, we will be the best friends all the time。

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篇1:初三英语作文:ReadingIsaGoodHobby

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Reading Is a Good Hobby

With development of science and technology,new knowledge comes every day. If you stop learning even for a day,you will be lost. Reading is a good way to help you keep in touch with the outside world.

Read widely and youll be rich in knowledge. Reading is also a good way to relax yourself.

You can get a lot of fun in the books. A good book is a good friend to comfort you when you are unhappy. So long as you have a good book at hand, youll never feel lonely. Every valuable book will open a new world before you.

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篇2:写长城的英语作文初三80词

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The Great Wall of China is called the "Ten thousand Ii Great Wall" in

Chinese. In fact, it s more than 6 000 kilometres long. It winds its way from

west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it

reaches the sea.It is one of the wonders of the world.The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries. The first part of it

was built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

During the Warring States Period, more walls were put up to defend the

borders of the different kingdoms.It was during the Qin Dynasty that the kingdom of Qin united the dif ferent

parts into one empire.

To keep the enemy out of his empire, Emperor Qin Shi Huang had all the

walls joined up. Thus, the Great Wall came into being.The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk

side by side.Along the wall are watchtowers, where soldiers used to keep watch.Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came.It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any

modern machines.

All the work was done by hand. Thousands of men died and were buried under

the wall they built. The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of

the flesh and blood of millions of men.

Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese

but to people from all over the world. Many of them have come to know the famous

Chinese saying: "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."

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篇3:初三英语作文理想的学校

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My Dream School

I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn.

We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.

[初三英语作文理想学校

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篇4:关于初三英语作文:ToExperiencetheLife

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Saturday Nov. 15, 2003 Cloudy

My teacher gave me an assignment experience life last week. I had been thinking how to finish it because I had never done any thing by myself before.

Mother was out today. It was a good chance to complete the assignment. Seeing the barrel was empty, I decided to fetch water from the well.

I took the empty barrel and went towards the well outside the yard. It snowed yesterday, so the alley was very slippery. A layer of thickice was frozen on the platform of the well. I was frightened by the sight, but I gathered my courage to walk towards it.

The alley was so slippery that I walked with difficultly. Suddenly, I slipped and fell down, water in the barrel totally poured down on the ground. I stepped on the platform carefully. After standing steadily and squatting down slowly, I hooked the barrel at the end of the rope and put the rope down slowly. I made an effort to drag the barrel up after it was filled with water. I was very careful because it was easy to slip and fall. Then, I carried the barrel of water and returned to my house. My figners were frozen stiff. I realized my effort was in vain. I hated myself.

I failed to finish the assignment but I did experience life through a trifle which seemed easy but difficult to do well. Such was my first experience of life.

[关于初三英语作文:To Experience the Life

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篇5:初三英语优秀作文:恰当的复习方法

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Study is the necessary process that everyone need to experience. And then exam will follow. To obtain a good score, review is inevitable. Almost everyone wants to find the best review method. But there is no best review method, but there is the most suitable way. Different people will find different methods for them to do review. For example, some students should study in group, while some should study alone. When recite things, some need to write it down, some need to speak loudly, and some just need to read it. Different methods just depend on different people. Don’t compare with others; just find the most suitable one for yourself.

学习是每个人都必须要经历的过程。然后考试就随之而来了。为了获得好成绩,复习是必须的。几乎每个人都想找到最好的复习方法。但是,没有最好的只有最适合的复习方法。不同的人会找到不同的复习方法。例如,一些学生适合集体学习,而一些则应该独自学习。在背诵东西的时候,有些需要写下来,有些需要大声说出来,而有些则只需要看看。不同的人依赖于不同的方法。不要与他人相比较;找到最适合自己的。

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篇6:初三年级英语作文:小词大义

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Small Words

【范文】One day, the Buddha passed a village, some villagers speaked to him with foul language. The Buddha listened to them quietly for a while, then he said to them:"thanks a lot, and now l have to preach the villagers of the next village, goodbye." "Dont you heard the foul words for you?" One of the villagers asked unbelievably."Of course l did, but l am not controlled by somebadys words, and l would never have response to someones feelings. l am the master, not the slave of my own feelings."

【翻译】有一天,佛陀经过一个村庄,一些人对他口出秽言。佛陀静静地听了一小会,然后说:“谢谢你们,我今天还要赶去下一个村庄。”其中一人听后觉得不可思议,说:“难道你没有听见我们骂你吗?”佛陀:“我不会被别人的嘴巴所控制,也不会对别人的情绪做反应,我是情绪的主任,不是情绪的奴隶。”

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篇7:一个快乐且有意义的寒假初三英语作文

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I have a great time during the winter holiday, because I enjoy myself as well as focus on my study. As its known to all, the Spring Festival is the most important in winter holiday that would occupy much time to celebrate it. Therefore, I finished my homework first, so that it won’t bother my enjoyment during the festival. I finished my home work in one week. And I went shopping with my parents. We bought a lot of things, especially snacks and fruits. Then, it was the Spring Festival. We had a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. My parents prepared the big dinner and I could only act as assistant. The dinner was so delicious that I ate so full. In the next several days, my parents and I visited our relatives and friends or they visited us. Sometimes, we went out for fun together. We children were always the most excited. Now, holiday is coming to the end and I will go to school soon. I am so happy that I have a wonderful winter holiday.

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篇8:初三英语作文:Unforgettableperson

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My Math Teacher Mr. Wu is my math teacher. He is tall and outgoing. He likes sports very much. Mr. Wu is a kind teacher. When I was in Grade One, my math was poor and I couldn’t work out the problems. He helped me with it and told me the good ways to learn math. He regarded me as his own child. Now my math is better and I often get good grades. I really thank him for his kind help. No matter where I go, I will remember I have an excellent teacher.

我的数学老师吴先生是我的数学老师。他又高又外向。他非常喜欢运动。吴先生是一位善良的老师。当我在一年级的时候,我的数学很差,我不能解决问题。他帮我学习,并告诉我学习数学的好方法。他把我当作他自己的孩子。现在我的数学成绩好了,我经常取得好成绩。我真的感谢他对我的帮助。无论我走到哪里,我都会记得我有一个优秀的老师。

[初三英语作文: Unforgettable person

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篇9:2024初三英语作文:为春节做准备

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Prepare for the Chinese New Year

It’s about one and a half month away from the Chinese New Year, It is a festival celebrated by the Chinese people at the beginning of the lunar calendar year.

As of the Chinese traditional customs, our parents and grandparents will sweep every corner of the house and clean the windows until they gleam, and washing clothes, buying foods and goods for the new year’s future use and presents.

Children will be the most benefited group during this feast period. One month before that, they are expecting the new clothes, delicious foods. The firecrackers and the year’s allowance for their increased ages.

In recent years, with the rising of the standard of life, Chinese tend to make various holiday plans to spend a different and meaningful new year. Such as traveling abroad, or be absorbed in their hobbies, and even work.

Why today we try to spend our Chinese new year in such a different way? I think that’s because this is a era of free life and personality high-ranking. Though there are still something traditional, our young generation is attempting to make something new and suitable for ourselves. And we would like to take something really worth to be cherished in our memorable treasures. That’s amazing and wonderful!

I’ll always keep in mind that the Chinese new year is a great feast inherited from our ancestors, but if necessary, I would like to enjoy it by some ways personal.

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篇10:Thespace初三英语作文

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初三英语作文:The space

The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.

The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.

The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.

The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.

[The space初三英语作文

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篇11:初三寒假英语作文:我的寒假生活

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Do you want to know what I did during the winter vacation? Well, on the first week, I did my homework,surfed the Internet,played computer games and watched TV.

On the second week, I helped my parents with housework, so I did the dishes, washed lots of my parents` clothes and helped them take out the trash.

On the third week, I chatted with my girl friend on cell phone(手机) and we both had a good time.I had a happy winter holiday! So how about you?

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篇12:道德礼仪初三作文

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做一个有道德的人其实很简单。因为……

有一种道德叫作爱国、爱家,当你即使挨饿,受苦的时候,无论如何也不要接受辱骂自己国家的人施舍的钱财。为什么爱国,每个人都能说出一百个理由:因为我的血管中流着祖国的血,因为我父母亲所悼念和敬重的祖先埋葬在这片土地上。因为我出生在这里,说着属于这个国家的语言,读着属于这个国家的文字,,我的兄弟姐妹、同学朋友,包括我,都生活在这片土地上。我看见的、热爱的、学习的、研究的、崇拜的一切都属于这个国家。

有一种道德叫作爱心,当一名扫烟囱的孩子辛辛苦苦赚的钱从衣服的裂口漏掉,即将面临回去就要挨打的时候,请你不要袖手旁观,请你把你准备买漂亮的衣服的钱送给他。为什么要这么做,因为你回去后可以向父母撒娇,得到更多的零用钱。而这个孩子,回去后得到的只能是打骂。

有一种道德叫做尊敬,当你在某个地方碰见乞丐乞讨的时候,请不要厌恶的走开,因为他们也是生活所迫,如果你真的没有钱,请你在心里默默地为他们祈福,祝愿他们早点过上像你一样幸福的日子。当你看到卖艺者的时候,请你认真的听或看完他们的表演,然后掏出你的钱,轻轻的放进装钱的器皿中。

有一种道德叫做礼貌,当你有事要离开时,家里碰巧来了客人,请你先放下自己手中的事情,尽心的去招待这位“不速之客”。如果真的有急事,请你邀请他进屋坐坐,并说自己出去一会,或者婉言辞退他,并邀请他下次再来玩。当你在公车上碰到需要帮助的老年人、孕妇、小孩子时,请你把你的座位让给她。

有时,道德就是这么简单,只需要你做到爱国、爱家、有爱心、尊敬别人、有礼貌,那么,你就是一个有道德的人,既然这么简单,就请你做一个有道德的人吧!

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篇13:MyHomeTown初三英语满分作文

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My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[My Home Town初三英语满分作文

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篇14:初三英语作文:ProblemsinMyLife

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In the life, everybody has a lot of problem. For example, I am a wonderful student. I can usually get a high mark. I study very well. But sometimes I reckless of the examination, so, I cant do it very well. After the exam, I blow it. Most of my teachers usually apprehend me, but my mother sometimes makes little of me. She usually says that, Honey, why you blew the exam, dont forget, you are an excellent student, you must study hard, and you must get the high mark next exam.

When my mother says that, I always feel very chagrin. I am not oracle, why I cant make mistakes. But my father apprehends me. He thinks I am a children, so I can make a little mistake. I always study hard after I blew the exam, because my father cheers on me. I study hard for me, for him, of course, I study hard for my mother too.

When we barge up against, dont trepidation, dont be scared, and tell the tribulation to our kiths, they can help you.

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篇15:HowIlearnedtolearnEnglis初三英语作文

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In order to learn English well, you should keep practicing it as much as possible. There are several good ways to help you with the English study.

First of all, you must listen carefully and be active in class .Speak as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes .Second, you’d better read widely and learn some important points by heart .Third you should practice writing often .Of course there are many other ways , You can also see English films ,learn to sing English songs or make pen pals with foreigners . You can listen to English programs on the radio and you can join English clubs and so on .They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it .If you do it like this in your English study ,I am sure you will learn English well.

[HowIlearnedtolearnEnglis初三英语作文

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篇16:初三年级关于全国爱眼日英语作文

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In order to better take care of the eyes, prevent eye disease and protect vision, on September 25, 1992, tianjin medical university, professor of ophthalmology Wang Yanhua and professor of epidemiology at GengGuan to national initiative for the first time, and held a national held seminars for the first time in tianjin. The initiative response by educational circles and eye eye experts, decided on May 5, every year for the "national sight day". On May 5, 1993, tianjin held promotional activities for the first time.

Affected by this, starting in 1994, Beijing, Shanghai, guangzhou and other domestic large and medium-sized cities have yizhen advisory activities on May 5, publicity of the significance of sight day at the same time.

In 1996, the state ministry of health, the ministry of education, central, China disabled persons federation and other 12 ministries jointly issued a circular, will held activities listed as one of the national holiday, and reschedule on June 6 for "national sight day" every year.

为了更好的爱护眼睛、预防眼底疾病及保护视力,1992年9月25日,天津医科大学眼科教授王延华与流行病学教授耿贯一首次向全国倡议,并在天津召开了全国爱眼日第一次研讨会。这一倡议受到眼科学界和眼科专家们的响应,决定每年5月5日为“全国爱眼日”。1993年5月5日,天津首次举办爱眼日宣传活动。

受此影响,从1994年开始,北京、上海、广州等国内大中城市相继在5月5日举办义诊咨询活动,同时宣传爱眼日的意义。

1996年,国家卫生部、国家教育部、团中央、中国残联等12个部委联合发出通知,将爱眼日活动列为国家节日之一,并重新确定每年6月6日为“全国爱眼日”。

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篇17:初三英语作文:我的妈妈MyMother

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My mother is a simple woman who comes from the countryside with little education. But in my eyes, she is the greatest mother in the world. Her perseverance gives me courage in all my life. Whenever I have trouble doing something and think about giving up, the scene that happened three years ago to mother just come into my mind.

我的母亲是一个简单的女人,从农村来的小教育。但在我的眼里,她是世界上最伟大的母亲。她的毅力让我在所有我的生活的勇气。每当我有困难做某事,想放弃的时候,妈妈刚开始我的脑海里,发生在三年前的场景。

Having asked for a leave from the teacher, I left the boring class and went to home with my favorite novel tucked under my arm. Father was at work, brother was at school, mother wouldnt be back from her small store until evening. I felt very happy thinking that I would have the entire house to myself. I bounded up steps, burst into the room but was shocked by whatever I saw. Mother was sitting in the sofa, sobbing with her shoulder twitching. I had never seen mother crying before. I went close to her, asking what had happened. She wiped her tears, forced a smile, and told me calmly that her small store was going to break. I didn’t know how to comfort her at the moment, but I did know what the small store meant to her.

有一个由老师请假,我把无聊的课,去家里我最喜欢的小说藏在我的胳膊。爸爸在工作,弟弟在学校里,母亲就不会从她的小商店后面,直到晚上。我觉得我会以自己的整个房子非常快乐的思考。我跳上台阶,冲进房间而感到震惊,我看到。母亲坐在沙发上,与她的肩膀抽动抽泣。我以前从未看过妈妈哭了。我走近她,问发生了什么事。她擦了擦眼泪,强作笑容,和冷静地告诉我,她的小商店是要打破。我不知道现在如何安慰她,但我知道为了她的小商店。

Now both my brother and I are studying at college. Mother works harder to finance our education. She is struggling by all means to keep the store business going. Her unusual perseverance is so inspiring to me that I will never give up halfway in my life.

现在我的两个哥哥和我在大学学习。母亲工程融资难的教育。她正在努力采取一切手段保持商店经营。她不寻常的毅力使振奋的是我,我不会放弃我的生命一半。

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篇18:初三英语作文:英语作文的结尾方式范例

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文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容,进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想,使文章意义表达得更加深刻。

文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的,常见的有以下几种:

1、首尾呼应,画龙点睛

在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如I Cannot Forget Her (我忘不了她)的结尾:

After her death,I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away,but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.

2、重复主题句

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如I Love My Home Town(我爱家乡)的结尾:

I love my home town,and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.

3、自然结尾

随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如Fishing(钓鱼)的结尾:

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours,but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing,we lay down on the river bank,bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.

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篇19:初三要毕业英语

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In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Miss, leave a long lament, I hope that the thoughts like the sky, forever bright......

At dusk there is a helpless figure, she is waiting for what. Who is that? Thats me, my friend. Will you come back?

In your busy days, you can look up at the sky and see the stars twinkle. Twinkle, I put my blessing on him, lonely night, let him send you blessing. Life keeps us from losing our joys and sorrows. Your choices make us miss them. Absence makes me appreciate more, you and I are connected, that is the evidence of friendship. Missing, leaving a long lament, I hope that the air color, forever bright.

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篇20:2024年初三英语写作技巧精选

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导语:英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧,希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧:

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说,英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限,远不能达到用英文流畅表达,挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的,如果非要创造,只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此,模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿,一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文,然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作,效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿,充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先,模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上,而非个别的词汇。道理很简单:一个词,随着文章内容的变换,可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西,适用的范围广,学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次,模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习,记一些不中不洋的句子,以讹传讹,浪费时间。

最后,模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说,新概念第三册有一个句式说:“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么,用在大学英语考试中,我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行,表达为:“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而,很多同学经常背了这些句式不用,一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”,等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中,经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足,出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山,行道如水”,套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文,一定要有决心把它写好,有信心把意思表达清楚,这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度,能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说:在某大型国际会议的招待会上,一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译:“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题,结果翻译太紧张,忘了“egg”这个词,但是他急中生智,回答:“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里,就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达,是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文,还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察,注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说,在正式文体的写作中,很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式,而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说,翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文,会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时,转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分,以插入语的形式出现。分析原因,是因为段落一开始就用转折词,会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后,许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

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