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我的爸爸身材较胖,个子不高,嘴角稍稍往上翘,当他望着我的时候,那对大眼睛总是带着希望。只要是我老爸选的东西呀,我准喜欢,总爱吃。他常常和我一起玩游戏,给我讲故事,可当我学习时,爸爸就不会打扰我了,总是静静地在旁边看着我,只要我遇到不懂的地方,他准会耐心地给我讲解。

记得有一次,我有一道题不会做,爸爸就很耐心地给我讲解,可是讲了两遍过后,我还是没有彻底明白,爸爸就不厌其烦地耐心给我讲解。一遍又一遍,爸爸讲得额头都冒出了汗。我一看墙上的钟,时针都指向九点了,就对爸爸说:“爸爸,平常这时我都睡觉了,干脆明天再讲这道题吧!”可爸爸一脸严肃地说:“不行!今天的事情必须今天完成!”我听后也觉得有道理,于是又认真地听爸爸讲解,爸爸用了几种方法从不同的角度对这道题作了进一步地分析,时间一分、一秒地过去了,到了九点半,我终于彻彻底底地弄明白了!我心里真高兴呀,爸爸脸上也露出了愉快的笑容。

记得那晚我睡得特别香,这就是我的老爸,一个耐心负责的老爸。

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篇1:小学给爸爸的一封信

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爱抽烟的老爸:

您好!

老爸,您浑身上下的那股烟味啊,真够呛人的,虽然我知道您跟顾客谈生意要用到香烟,但是在没顾客的时候能不抽烟吗?

我在一本书上看到过一个故事,名叫《烟虫和酒虫》,这两只小虫子跟上一个人后(就像你),这个人过了许多年后就进了隔离房,他得了癌症晚期。我不想让你拥有癌症,即使你不怕得了癌症也顾顾其他人啊。我来店里时你常常把那股含有大量尼古丁的烟往我身上吐,你不知道,吸二手烟的人(就像我)比你们吸烟的人更可怜,因为只有少量的尼古丁被你们吸进去了大部分都吐出来了。

老爸啊,你不是没看见,而是不愿意看,在每个烟盒子的侧面上都有写着“吸烟有害健康”。即使没看见,但是,我都提醒你N多遍了。老爸,你不是聋子吧?还是我提醒不够多?你才不听吧。“吸烟有害健康”他们并不是白写的而是真的有害健康,因为尼古丁有毒。

身体健康

你的儿子:_X

20_年2月5日

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篇2:我的爸爸小学生

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我的爸爸今年四十岁了,他高高的个儿,身材既不胖也不瘦;短短的头发又黑又浓,就仿佛一片浓密的黑森林;眼睛又黑又亮,性格开朗,爱运动。我很喜欢他,他是我学习、生活中的良师益友。

记得在我上一年级的时候,看到我们小区里的小朋友骑着自行车在院子里转来转去,很是神气,我很羡慕,可我自己怎么学也学不会,心里很着急。爸爸知道后,就在周末抽空带我到楼下院子里学骑自行车。他先耐心地一遍又一遍给我讲解骑自行车的要领,然后扶着自行车的后架,让我慢慢练习骑车。在爸爸的细心讲解和鼓励下,我越骑越好,也渐渐快了起来。爸爸为了不让我摔跤,一直扶着自行车后架在后面跟着跑,半小时过去了、一个小时过去了、两个小时……我终于学会骑自行车,不用爸爸扶了!可我看到此时爸爸的头发、衣服都被汗水浸湿透了,爸爸真是我的好“师傅”啊!

我和爸爸不但是父子关系、师徒关系,还是无话不说的好朋友、有福同享的快乐玩伴,有什么悄悄话我都愿意和他说,有什么好玩具我们都一起玩。今年春节,爸爸买了一架玩具遥控飞机给我,我和爸爸便到操场上玩起来。爸爸尽管是个大人,但是一玩起玩具来却童心未泯,不停地和我比赛谁把飞机遥控飞得最高,结果玩具飞机在他的遥控下越飞越高,超过遥控范围,飞去和白云作伴,再也不回来了……再结果是他又得再买一架玩具遥控飞机赔给我,哈哈,笑死我了!

这就是我的爸爸,他很爱我,我也非常爱他。

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篇3:小学生描写动物的英语作文

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我最喜欢的小动物是小猫,我们家就养了一只小猫,它是邻居送过来的。因为现在那只小猫已经死了,所以我会经常想起它。

My favorite little animal is a kitten, and we have a kitten in our house. It was sent by a neighbor. Because the kitten is dead now, so I often think of it.

小猫长得很漂亮,他有一身雪白的毛,爪子下的肉垫可以使他走路没有一丁点声音。最独特的是他的眼睛:一只眼睛是蓝色的,另一只眼睛是绿色的。蓝眼睛像蓝宝石,绿眼睛像绿宝石。

The kitten was beautiful. He had a snow-white coat, and the pads under his paws made him walk without a single sound. The most unique is his eyes: one eye is blue, the other eye is green. Blue eyes are like sapphires, green eyes are like emeralds.

小猫很贪吃,有时一斤重的鱼不一会儿就“消灭”了。有一次,妈妈做了一碗鱼汤。小猫跳上桌子,津津有味的吃了起来。正在吃的时候,它被我发现了,于是我狠狠的教训了他一顿。小猫耷拉着脑袋,好像在说:“我再也不敢了。”我立刻笑了。

Kittens are voracious, and sometimes a pound of fish will soon be wiped out. Once, my mother cooked a bowl of soup. The cat jumped onto the table and ate it with relish. While I was eating, it was discovered by me, so I gave him a hard lesson. The little cat drooped its head as if to say, "I dare not."." I laughed at once.

现在那只小猫已经死了,从那以后,我每次见到小猫,都要和它嬉戏一番。小猫,你到底去了哪里了呢?

Now that kitten has died, since then, every time I see a kitten, I have to play with it. Kitty, where the hell have you been?

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篇4:我的爸爸小学作文300字怎么写

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我的爸爸留着平头,一双炯炯有神的眼睛像两颗黑葡萄似的,眼睛下面还有一张能说会道的小嘴。

我有一个孩子气的爸爸。记得妈妈曾经给我说过这样一件事,爸爸原来喜欢抽烟,可是每次抽烟都要被妈妈说。于是爸爸就想出一个办法,躲在厕所里抽烟。但是竟然还是被妈妈发现了,听了爸爸一系列故事,我情不自禁的笑了。我的爸爸,真是一个长不大的孩子。

我的爸爸还是一个球迷,每当爸爸回家,首先要做的就是打开电视机看球赛。我见爸爸一走就去抢遥控器,可是爸爸听见了声响就飞快的跑到沙发上坐着看,连事都不做了。可是妈妈却让爸爸去剖鱼,听爸爸说了一声嗯就把鱼拿到电视机前去。一边剖一边看球赛,过了一会儿我听见砰的一声,连忙跑过去看。爸爸倒没事鱼有事,逃走了。爸爸还是什么都不知道的盯着球赛,嘴里还说:“加油,快点,跟上去。”

这就是我的爸爸,虽然他总是和我抢电视器,但是我还是很爱他。

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篇5:体育小学英语作文

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Every sportsman should have sportsmanship. When defeated, he should GREet his opponent and congratulate him. If he can't, on one will care to be his opponent because he lacks basic decorum and the spirit of a good sportsman. A true sportsman has a generous heart, admits to his loss and does not act with vexation. Learning to have sportsmanship is very important. It doesn't always matter whether one wins or not. What's even more important than results is what you have learned from each competition.

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篇6:圣诞节小学生英语

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Today, I had an interesting Christmas. In todays morning song, the teacher told us about the story of Christmas and the legend of Santa Claus, and so on.

The most interesting thing is the afternoon. In the afternoon, the students in our class first made a handmade greeting card and then shared the Pingan fruit, the apple.

Manual is the teachers idea. This card is to be given to mom and dad and to thank them for their hard care for a year. The method is: Handmade cover is a "Merry Christmas", there is a pine tree, pine trees on both sides are some of his paintings about Christmas figures etc.. The back is a letter of gratitude to mom and dad. The handwork seems simple, but its hard to do it. I was anxious to cut the paper, and all the sweat was crying. After cutting the paper, the framed frame is cut. After cutting the box, draw the pine tree first, then fold it along both sides of the pine tree, and finally decorate it with the edge, so that the card is almost ready. The cover read "Merry Christmas" and write a letter of thanks to mom and Dad, will be accomplished.

After the card for mom and Dad, we started to divide the apples. Every student is rushing to the forefront. The class is bustling with excitement. Everyone is happy to eat apples. They are chattering Like a bird flying away.

This is an interesting Christmas, a meaningful Christmas, a happy day!

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篇7:小学生英语作文新年

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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. And it is the most popular festival in China. People often do different things before Spring

Festival. Some of them clean and decorate their houses. Some of them go shopping and buy some flowers. Some of them stay at home and do nothing. I usually help my mum clean the house. People get together and have a big meal at Spring Festival. They often eat fish, pork, goose, chicken, vegetables, soup and so on. I like Spring Festival very much, because adults give me some lucky money.

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篇8:封信小学生英语

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September 15, 2009

Dear David,

Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well.

Hope to see you soon in Beijing.

Yours,

Wang Ming

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篇9:小学生写人英语作文:我的爸爸

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My father is long with a pair of bright eyes, high nose, wearing a pair of thick glasses, laughing very cute, like a rubber doll. However, the raw gas is very terrible. I remember one time, I would not play the piano, my father gave me a teachers shelf, his eyes staring round, fingertips almost to my nose, and said angrily: "You in the end is playing, or Do not play? "Looks like only ready to eat sheep wolf.

My dad is a teacher, he loves to learn. Every morning, after eating breakfast, began to read English. He usually did not work against the computer, that is, reading, but also wrote a lot of books.

Dad usually likes to tell me jokes, often amused me laughing. Do not know when he gave his students class, will not this?

Dad went to exercise every afternoon, sometimes running, sometimes skating, sometimes at home doing sit-ups, and sometimes as my sports equipment, lifted it!

I love my dad, no matter what I am, I will not change my father.

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篇10:小学作文:爸爸妈妈我想对你

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敬爱的爸爸、亲爱的妈妈

你们好!

今天,我――作为你们的女儿要郑重的发出不满!最近不知你们的心情是好是坏?可也不能老把我当出气筒出气呀,你们知道吗,你们让我自认为待遇还不如咱家楼下那两条狗呢!它们受到主人的细心呵护,主人把它们当儿女养,而我呢?整天被你们骂来骂去的,你们懂得换位思考吗?呜呜呜……

就举几个例子吧:一个星期六的早晨,我睁开朦胧的睡眼,看了看挂在墙上的时钟,呀!才八点多,我想着:“再睡会儿吧,反正早上也没什么事!”可不知这一睡就睡了两个多小时。当我被妈妈你叫醒时,一些难听的话已传入耳边。妈妈试问你知不知道我也有尊严呀!

同样也是在一个星期六的上午,我正在屋里做周末数学的扩展练习(三),完成后我给爸爸检查,其中有一道计算题的简便方法有很多,但爸爸一定要用他的方法做,我不肯,他就和我吵了起来。后来,你干脆把那道题擦了。爸爸你懂得我也有自己的看法吗!

另外,我想借此机会对爸爸您提个意见,爸爸我希望您在我考试成绩不理想时(在爸爸眼里95分以下),别总把责任往我身上推:在我考的好时(在爸爸眼里98分以上),也别把功劳往自己身上揽。

虽然我们家有很多的不开心,但是开心的事也不少。如:一天,我拿着一张英语奖状回到家,和你们共享了我的快乐。你们还表扬了我一番,使我越来越有信心了!

我相信只要你们和我一起纠正错误,我们家一定会越来越快乐、幸福的!

事事顺心幸福快乐

你们的女儿陈靖雯

[小学作文:爸爸妈妈我想对你

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篇11:小学六年级英语一封信

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

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篇12:Mybirthday小学四年级英语作文

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My birthday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday.

Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents, sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also, I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me.

They do not go to buy one, but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.

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我的生日是在XXX。我一直都在我的生日快乐和悲伤的情感。

我为什么开心?我的朋友过来和我一起庆祝他们给我的生日礼物有时让我十分惊讶的礼物。同时我能感觉到我的家人有多爱我因为我的父母总是为我做一个生日蛋糕。

他们不去买一个但让人自己。我感到很高兴。然而我知道我的母亲是最痛苦的人遭受了我来到世界上。我为我的母亲感到抱歉她遭受了什么。但是我答应她我会好好照顾她当我有这样的能力。

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篇13:,小学生我的爸爸英语作文

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My dad is an ordinary person. He is not tall, not fat nor thin, very healthy. His skin is white, straight nose, do not look at his eyes small, but can have God.

Dad is an engineer. His biggest hobby is the car, there is love to repair things. As long as there is something bad, looking for him to repair on the line. For example: mothers cell phone, grandfathers mosquito swatter, home TV, washing machine, and my remote control cars and aircraft it ... ...

However, my father has a bad problem --- "did not remember", lost all day. Sometimes forgot to go out with a cell phone, and sometimes forgot to turn off the TV and fans before going to bed, and sometimes buy the fruit into the refrigerator and forget to eat the next day and buy the same fruit back. Once, my father in the parking lot to call the mother: "car keys forgot to bring you to help me win it." Mom at home looking for a long time did not find, frowned and called him: "I can not find Ah, or you come back to find it, see you did not remember! "Dad had no choice but to breathe on the eighth floor to find their own keys everywhere, the results that day he was late for work.

This is my father, an ordinary person. Although he is sometimes bad memory, but he is working from work is serious.

I love my father, because he loves to play with me, often will take me to swim, take me to ride a bike, take me to the plane ... ... I would like to learn with him, learning difficulties will never give up their own Of the tenacity.

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篇14:一次有趣的钓鱼小学六年级的英语作文

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My father likes fishing。 He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn。

One day, he took me to fish, too。 In autumn, fish have grown up。 It is the best season to fish。 First, we chose a good place。 Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook。 Afterwards, I threw the fishhook into the river。 I waited for a long time。 Suddenly, I saw the float sink。 I was very happy。 I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm。 The fish played a trick on me。 I was very angry。 But my father said to me, “it takes time。 You need to be more patient。” I tried again。 A few minutes later, I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father。 My father praised me, “what a good angler you are!”

我爸爸喜欢钓鱼。他总是和他的朋友们在秋天去钓鱼。

一天,他带我去钓鱼,太。在秋天,鱼长大了。这是最好的季节鱼。首先,我们选择了一个好地方。然后爸爸帮我把鱼钩上的蚯蚓。后来,我把鱼钩到河里。我等待了很长一段时间。突然,我看到了浮沉。我很高兴。我把它从水里拔了出来,但我只看见了一半的蚯蚓。那条鱼在我身上起了个圈套。我很生气。但我父亲对我说:“这需要时间。你需要有更多的耐心。”。几分钟后,我钓到一条大鱼,我把它拿给我爸爸看。我父亲表扬了我,“什么是一个好的钓鱼者你!“

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篇15:体育英语作文小学80词

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It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal

with and overcome whatever hardship one is confronted with.2、As in the picture,

the athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman.I most like the human is Liu Xiang 。 the famous athlete Liu Xiang

striding forward in the Olympics Games in Athens. Determination is universally

regarded asa highly praised quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary

ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship one is

confronted with. It is this kind of spirit that enables us to endure the

difficult moments and attain our goals.

The determined spirit gives us light when we are in dark moments and

encourages when we are frustrated. With this quality, no enemy can overwhelm us,

and noobstacles can stand in our way. There are many examples of success being

achieved solely through the strong will of the spirit. As in the picture, the

athlete is running, with a determined spirit, towards the finishing line in

order to obtain the gold medal, considered as the symbol of success for any

sportsman. It is determination that leads to success. ?

It is not easy to cultivate this determined spirit. To do this, we must

establish a firm faith in our actions and be ready to devote ourselves to them.

We must boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get

rid of the weak points of our moral character. Around us, there are quite a few

people with this intense determination and spirit and set a good example for us

to follow.

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篇16:我的爸爸小学作文300字

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我的爸爸今年四十多岁,高高的,胖胖的。要问他为啥这样胖,其实是有小秘密的。

他喜欢吃好吃的,是我们家的“吃货”。他最喜爱做饭,厨艺还不错呢。每次出差回家,他都会笑眯眯地问我:“小贝,想吃什么呀?”我就会提出一大堆的要求。第二天一大早,爸爸就出门了。没过多久,他拎着大包小包满满的食材回家,马上就钻进了厨房。不一会儿,厨房里热闹起来。“哗哗,哗哗”,那是爸爸在摘菜洗菜;“咚咚,咚咚”,那是爸爸在切菜配菜;“嗤啦,嗤啦”,菜下锅啦;“咕嘟,咕嘟”,浓汤冒泡啦。每当这时,我就会跑到厨房门口,深吸一口气,大声说:“哇,什么好吃的,这么香!”开饭啦,有鲜美的鸡汤,金黄的炸鸡腿,红红的糖醋排骨,碧绿的炒青菜……全家人津津有味地吃着,我心里忍不住赞美:“爸爸真棒!”

他还喜欢玩电脑游戏。只要一有空,他就会舒舒服服地坐上电脑椅,打开电脑,眼珠子紧盯着屏幕,全神贯注地玩起来。尽管如此,他的电脑桌旁总是少不了一大堆美食,不知不觉就一扫而光了。

好吃,不爱动,爸爸能不胖吗?我喜欢我的胖爸爸。

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篇17:,小学生我的爸爸英语作文

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My dad is an ordinary cable worker, he is running out every day. In the summer, Daddys skin was as dark as the Africans.

He is very trustworthy. Once, Mom and Dad took me to visit my grandmother. We just stepped into the grandmothers threshold, my fathers phone rang, he picked up the phone to listen to: "Hey, who?" Like a middle-aged man is like: "I am Xiao Li, my house power outages, Please take a quick look at whats going on. "" Well, yes, Ill come right now. "Daddy put his cell phone and was ready to go.

At this time the sky thunder, and then began to pour down the rain. My mother seeing his father said: "My husband, outside the rain was so big, you do not go, if afraid of him waiting for you, you return to a phone to explain to him the situation is not it?" "Yes, Under such a big rain, you do not go out. You have not come to see me for a long time, how to get it? "Grandma also said so. But my father smiled and shook his head: "No, ah, promised how people can be dishonesty? Moreover, people are not very urgent, it will not be so tight, I can keep the credit ah!" Finished, my father wear raincoat , Riding a battery car, rushed into the rain. I stood at the door watching my fathers figure gradually disappeared in the rain, it seems to understand what ... ...

When my father came back, the whole body was soaked, even the shoes are covered with mud, but his face is full of smile. Dad with their own practical action told me: a person must have integrity, promised someone elses things must be said to do.

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篇18:我的爸爸英语作文

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My father is forty-three years old. He is a teacher. He works very hard. He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers. He like doing sports and he likes basketball best.

My father loves me very much. He cheeks my homework every day. He often buys delicious food for me. On weekends we often go to the park with my mother. I love my father.

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篇19:我的铅笔盒小学英语作文

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i have a good friend. her name is pencil-box. she is a very beautiful girl. look! there is a picture on her face. it’s a picture of flowers. her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. from monday to friday, i go to school with her. when i want to copy or write the new words, i open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. she helps me a lot. and i like her very much.

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篇20:小学生作文:我帮爸爸妈妈做家务

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“哎哟!”妈妈轻轻地叫了一声,我还是听见了。

我赶紧放下手中的笔,从书房跑到客厅,看见妈妈一手拿着拖把,一手捂腰,一脏痛苦 表情。她看见我来了,勉强又装着没事的样子。

“妈,你怎么了?”我关切地问道。

“没怎么,没怎么。”妈妈像做错了事的孩子一样答道。我疑惑地望着妈妈,妈妈见状赶紧说,“你还不赶快去做作业,做完作业就复习功课,这中考就快到了啊。”

“哦。”我应了声,转身进了书房,旋即拉上了房门。坐在椅子上,午后的阳光洒在桌沿上,我忽而感到莫名的烦躁,拿出抽屉里的武侠小说漫不经心地翻动着,却一个字也看不进去。

我走到客厅,一屁股坐在沙发上,随手拿来一摞报纸,正准备看,妈妈跑了过来,从报纸中抽出一张黑色的胶纸,转身走了。

“那是什么?妈。”我问道。

“没什么,一张没用的纸。”妈妈显然有些慌张,顿时语无伦次。

我一个箭步冲上去抢了过来,一看,原来是透视图。“妈,你怎么了?”我慌了。 “真的没什么,就是前几天拖地时腰扭到了,你看,一切正常。”妈妈忙指着检测单给我看。“我就是不想影响你学习,才没对你说的。”

我一看,真的没什么问题,就抢过来妈妈的拖把,“我来帮你拖地,你休息一下吧!” “不行,不行,你快去做作业,我真的没事。”

我放下拖把,把妈妈拉到沙发上坐着,对她说:“你就安安心心地坐着吧,其它的事你就别管了。”

妈妈拗不过我,只得坐在沙发上看着我。

提起拖把,还挺沉的,但今天再沉也得拖。我学着妈妈平常的样子先从一角拖起。我弯下腰,攥着拖把来回地拖着,回头一看妈妈,她正笑着看我呢。我更加卖力地拖着,终于完成了客厅和餐厅。但已是汗流浃背,腰酸背痛,不过我还是提着拖把向厨房走去。妈妈见状跑了过来,拖过拖把“好了,今天就别拖了,等我老了,有你拖的呢!”妈妈笑着说。

我又回到了书房,推开一条门缝向外看去,妈妈佝偻着腰在厨房拖着地,不时停下来用手捂着腰,看着这一幕,我的眼睛红了,心里很不是滋味。

从那以后,我把那一摞武侠小说封在床底。多少个挑灯苦熬的夜里,我的脑海中总会浮现那幕画面:一个母亲佝偻着腰拖地,时不时停下来用手捂一下腰,午后的阳光将她的背影撑得很大很大

评语:朴实的文字中,渗透着小作者与母亲的浓浓情谊,生动的描写细节给文章增色不少,事件的叙述清晰而流畅,文章的结尾余味无穷,给读者留下许多想象的空间。

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