写厦门的英文作文【优秀20篇】

April Fools Day is a day to play jokes on others, No one knows how this holiday began but people think it first started in France.

In the 16 th century, people celebrated New Years Day from March 25 to April 1. In the mid—1560s King Charles IX changed it from March 25 to January 1. But some people still celebrated in on April 1, so others called them April Fools.

Each country celebrates April Fools Day differently. In France, people call the April Fools “April Fish”. They tape a paper fish to their friends backs to fool them. When he or she finds this , they shout “April Fish!”

In England, people play jokes only in the morning. You are a “noodle” if someone fools you. In Scotland, April Fools Day is 48 hours long. They call an April Fool “April Gowk”. Gowk is another name for a cuckoo bird.

In the America, people play small jokes on their friends and any other people on the first of Aprol. They may point down to your shoe and say, “ Your shoelace is untied.” If you believe them and look down to see, you are an April Fool then.

美丽的厦门岛，屏护着一个恬静的小海湾，这个一大块软体绿玛瑙似的小海湾深处，花木掩映中有个叫刘五店的小渔村，小渔村不大，却闻名遐迩。

为什么呢?因为这一带海湾里出产一种叫文昌鱼的小小鱼儿。这鱼儿两头尖尖，活像一条小扁担，粉红透明的，最长不过月厘米，一般只有三四厘米.可是却大名鼎鼎!

刘五店的渔民们也把文昌鱼叫做“扁挑虫”。这种小小的鱼儿，没有头，所以在分类学上被列在“无头亚科”。也没有鳍，没有鳞，没有脊推骨，连眼睛、耳朵、鼻子也统统没有。可是它有一条脊索，这一下就身价百倍了。

因为这样一来，它就成了无脊椎动物进人脊椎动物的过渡类型的代表动物，成了研究生物进化的一个不可缺少而又比较稀有的材料。所以你别看它在我国只不过是一种并不太贵的美味，在外国可是被当成珍贵标本陈列在博物馆和实验室里的宠儿。

鱼类学文献上说，古文昌鱼是鱼类的祖先。现今的文昌鱼还保持着古文昌鱼的特性和原始生活样式，所以有一些学者把现今的文昌鱼也叫“鱼儿的祖先”。

我国早在唐朝时候就有了关于文昌鱼的记载。刘五店渔民捕捞文昌鱼的历史也已不下300年。恩格斯在《自然辩证法》里曾经借文昌鱼的例子嘲笑那些把事物看成非此即彼一成不变的形而上学者，他风趣地写道:“不仅动物和植物的个别的种日益无可挽救地相互融合起来，而且出现了文昌鱼和南美肺鱼这样的动物，这种动物嘲笑了以往的一切分类方法;最后，人们遇见了甚至不能说它们是属于植物界还是属于动物界的有机体。”

是啊，世间许多的事物，本来就是相对的，好像文昌鱼:你说它是脊椎动物吧，它没有脊椎骨;你说它是无脊椎动物吧，它又终究有一条脊索，可是在我们之中却总有那么一些人，他们遇事只喜欢简单化和绝对化，分析的、发展的、辩证的头脑，是难于长到他们的脖子上去的。

风平浪静，阳光灿烂，给九龙江的淡水冲得盐分变低了一些的刘五店一带浅海沙地上，小小的文昌鱼半截钻在沙里，半截露在沙外在觅食了。

根据以下提示的内容描述你的房间。

你居住和学习的房间是个小小的房间。虽然小，但对你来说却是够用的。房间在三楼，朝南，房间的前面有一扇窗，后面是你的床。你的书桌就在窗口边，椅子在书桌前面，书桌的左边有个书架，书架上放着许多书。书桌上放着一盏灯，房间左边墙上有两张画。右边墙上有一幅彩色照片，你非常喜欢你的房间，常常将它打扫得干干净净。

词数： 100 左右。

The room in which I live and study is a small one， but not too small for me. My room is on the second（third）floor， which faces south.

There is a window in the front of my room，and a bed at the back. My desk is at the window in front of which is a chair. There is a bookcase to the left of the desk， and there are a lot of books on the bookcase. A lamp is on the desk. There are two pictures on the left wall， and a colour photograph on the right wall. I often clean it. I like my room very much.、

[描述我的房间的英文作文

Hello everybody. My name is Tom. I come from Hebei province in China.I am very happy to come here to study with you.When I arrived at this school three days ago, I fell in love with it.It is so beautiful and exciting here, and everyone is kind to me especially Kim.This class feels just like one big family to me.I’m interested in sports, music and mountain climbing.I also enjoy playing soccer.I would love to play with you sometime.I hope I can become your friend soon.Thank you very much.

大家好。我的名字叫汤姆，我来自中国河北。我很高兴来这里和你们一起念书，当我三天前来到这个学校时，我就喜欢上它了这里是那么美丽，那么振奋人心，这里的每个人都对我很亲切，特别是Kim 老师。而这个班集体对我来说就像一个大家庭。我对运动、音乐和爬山很有兴趣。我也喜欢踢足球。我非常想和你们一起踢球。最后，我希望我能很快成为你们的朋友，谢谢。

我的家乡在厦门，相传远古时代是白鹭鸟生活、嬉戏的地方，所以它还有一个美丽的名字叫“鹭岛”。鹭岛虽只是个岛，却是我国著名的海滨风景城市，同时是中国的四个经济特区之一。

厦门四面环海，绵延千里的海岸线，与祖国的宝岛――台湾隔海相望，蓝天碧海，气侯宜人，风景秀美，每年都吸引了世界各地无数的游客来到这里旅游观光。鼓浪屿因为家家户户都有钢琴而出名，被称为“琴岛”，漫步在岛上干净的小路上，会不时传来一阵阵悠扬的琴声，岛上绿树成阴、鲜花盛开，四季长青，有如人间仙境。厦门这几年经济发展速度很快，发生了翻天覆地的变化，一幢幢造形各异的大厦拔地而起，马路宽阔整齐、四通八达，到处是绿树，到处是草地，整座城市就像一座花园，海沧大桥、厦门大桥将鹭岛与大陆紧紧连在一起，厦门再也不是原来的厦门。

一天晚上，我在甜密的梦乡中梦见：蔚蓝的大海下，鱼儿欢快地游着，一条闪着金光的海底隧道，尤如海里的七色彩虹，架起了厦门到翔安的另一条高速通道，人们乘着车悠闲地走在隧道里，将可观看齐妙的海底世界，享受海底翱游的美妙感觉；鼓浪屿的东南方，一座比鼓浪屿面积更大、景色更优美的人工岛已经建成了，人们称它为“仙境岛”，美国迪斯尼乐园在这里落户，米老鼠、唐老鸭等热情欢迎着世界各地的小朋友；突然有一天，鹭岛上车流、人流少了许多、车水马龙的景象不见了，厦门的第一条地铁通车了，从此，人们上班、学习再也不用为堵车的现象而发愁了，空气也更加清新……

清晨，我从梦中醒来，原来是一场梦啊！我在心里盼望：不久的将来，我的这些梦想一定很快就会实现，那时的厦门将更加美好。因为我们大家都爱厦门。

Hello, my friends, My name is Cherie. I come from BeiHai, a city of GuangXi

province. Now I want to tell you something about me hometown. BeiHai is a

beautiful city near the sea. There are several places worth visiting.

The most famous place is the Silver Beach. You can take the no.2 bus and

take no.3bus to the Silver Beach. You can get off the bus at the Beach hotel

stop and set the luggage or have s rest at the hotel. Then go back the road

which the bus have come. The beach is not far from the hotel, you can’t miss it.

The seafood is very delicious, you can have some for supper after swimming. The

world under the sea is a fantasy place. When you go into it, you will feel that

you are really under the sea. There are so many kinds of fish swimming around

you.

The most exciting program is “dancing with the shark” .that is some girls

who dress as the fish dive into the water and play.

朋友的 描述英语作文范文一：My Friend Tony Brown

I have a good friend.His name is Tony Brown.His 14 years old.He is an English boy.His birthday is Maech 27th.Ans his telephone number is 256-4561.Hes study in NO.1 Middle School.Hes good at playing violin.He can also play drums and dance very well.His hobby is singsing,too.His favorite song is Justing biebers One time.His favorite subject is music,because its very relaxing.And he likes blue best.Do you like him?

温馨的海上花园——厦门是个美丽的地方，也是个可爱的地方。因为，这里有风景优美的鼓浪屿、海滩……

鼓浪屿人多又热闹，那里有海底世界、郑成功雕像……海底世界有各种各样的鱼，好看极了。

海滩上有拣不完的美丽的贝壳，大的、小的、颜色不一，形状千奇百怪。海水有深有浅，人们总爱踩到上面去。每当有东西浮过来时，人们总会把它捡起来。特别是小孩，总会拣一些有趣的东西玩。

最有趣的是退潮。退潮时，人们会跑去捉小螃蟹，因为小孩子们最喜欢这小东西了。运气好的话，还能捡到宝贵的药材——海马。

每当夜幕降临的时候，美丽的厦门瞬间穿上了绚丽多彩的衣裳：一栋栋大楼点上彩灯。各种颜色的灯有顺序地闪着光，仿佛她们在比谁的衣服更漂亮。闪耀到人们的眼睛都快睁不开了。

许多摊子也在这时候叫卖，人们一个个被吸引，摊子的东西渐渐地被大家买光了，真是热闹极了。

温馨的厦门，你是我们美丽的家园，我们为能生活在这里而感到骄傲和自豪！

我的家乡在厦门，厦门是一座沿海城市，还有一个美丽的厦门大学，下面我就写写我对家乡的喜爱。

厦门的春天，百花齐放，有红艳艳的杜鹃花，粉红粉红的桃花，还有那火红火红的莿桐树……在这座城市的人们，每天都能闻到花儿的清香，陶醉在这一片片花海之中。

厦门的夏天，炎炎盛夏，热在三伏。每天回家，每一脚踩在地上，就像是踩到烫斗里似的，有一种热气蒸腾的感觉，好像走路都会走出红印子来。然而，厦门的夏天，树特别碧绿，仿佛是夏爷爷把一桶桶绿色的颜料倒到了一棵棵六神无主的小树上，它们立刻变得精神抖擞活力十足。

厦门的秋天，简直是一个金灿灿的世界，收获的季节，瓜果飘香，农民伯伯看了这番景象，眼睛好像也放出了一道一道的金光呢！

厦门的冬天，虽然看不到白雪皑皑，但不像北方的冬天那样寒冷，还给我们带来了一片绿色的景象。

我非常喜欢厦门的春、夏、秋、冬四季。你的家乡在哪儿呢？能不能说给我听听？

December 25th is Christmas day, my mother tells me: Christmas is not a traditional Chinese festival, it is the biggest festival in western countries in a year, which is equivalent to the Spring Festival in China.

Coming to the street, everyone feels the atmosphere of the festival. Almost all the stores have Christmas trees, some in the doorway, and some in the hall. The Christmas tree pyramid, wearing a green dress, wearing a small bell, jingle bells, a gentle touch, a beautiful voice; golden light, like the blinking stars; small lantern flashing, riotous with colour, very beautiful!

Look! The bank stood a door on the high ropes "snow doll". Wearing a blue hat, wearing a blue vest, gloves and shoes are blue, chubby face, curved eyebrows, round eyes, like two bright purple grapes, pointy nose, orange, triangular, and the smile is so cute! My little sister yo couldnt help stretch her chubby little hand, holding the snow doll, but also the tender sound Nenqi said: "hello! Hello! "

However, the most striking is the yidie shopping hall side, a beautiful picture of a big table with a white foam show, seems to tell the story of a fairy tale: in a beautiful red house, the seven dwarfs happy life together. On Christmas day, they bounce ran out of the house, snowball, snowball fights, snowmen in the snow...... Three, decorate the Christmas tree, which has a height of about four meters, wearing a golden coat, covered in studded sapphire, dazzling. At this time, only listen to the clatter, clatter... From far closer, the Santa Claus is full of gifts, and they dance with joy.

A lot of people in this photo, I was no exception, accidentally also get covered in snow"!

I went to my new house to my room. It is very big and beatiful. I will use a

blue wardrobe and a blue bookcase. I saw a big bed and there was a blue sheet on

it, I really liked them, because my favorite color is blue. But my desk was

brown. In fact, I like brown, too. And there were many pet dogs and pet bears.

They were cute, really eute. I loved them very much.

我去了我的新房子,我的房间。这是非常大的和美丽。我将用一个蓝色的衣柜和一条蓝色的书架。我看见一张大床上有一个蓝色的纸上,我真的很喜欢它们,因为我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色的。但是我的桌子是棕色的。事实上,我喜欢棕色,真是太好了。有许多宠物狗和宠物的熊。他们是可爱的,真的eute。我非常爱他们。

As Im growing up, I am facing both frustration and gains. First, let me talk about my frustration. As I am going to a higher grade, I have more and more home work, and the study is getting more and more difficult. So I have leand letime to play with my friends and classmates. But, at the same time, I am learning more knowledge. I understand more things and I am happier and happier. I am also ma-ki-ng more and more friends. I have more hope towards the future. The most important is I am learning more responsibilities as I am growing up.

Dim lamp, I looked at the cup of tea, boiling water, the impact of time and time again, let me feel the fragrance of tea. That bitter taste in his mouth, a point slightly sweet, but also by my greedy mouth to the occupation, and eyes dim, hazy outlines of the memory, can no longer be hazy memory already.

Work as much as "cook a meal," a playful little, the teachers serious "inhibition" the laughter of the Miao, the pressure of the heavy, "created" in the dreams of us - growing pains. Open the heavy book of memories, that little thoughts, perhaps tired of back and some memories back.

"At first" arrive, I am a fragile being "enemy" aimed at the "vulnerability" opened a fierce shot, that vulnerable, I, in the "blood" at the expense of ground could be a "sleeping inside burning the midnight oil to see volume, Dreaming rang Beishi "and I once again stood up. Those days are dark, puzzled me, and learn and sometimes I have to find a seat has not yet withered and yellow grass, and sometimes a desk, windowsill side to see the rows of trees standing in the distance is hard, for the only be able to issue a final touch of Brilliant Green. What are those trees? I have no way of knowing what effect this relationship? As long as they are trees, would be sufficient. When I looked at them a daze, the heart will be a myriad of thoughts, when my eyes back to the tree when the mood suddenly see the light, the pressure disappeared and instead engaged in learning among busy.

[成长的烦恼英文优秀作文

Dear Mother,

Your hard work!

At the moment whether you are in the high temperature machine room in the

hands to mechanically operate the machine; At the moment, whether you have been

too busy to think about me in school; At this moment the midnight bell is about

to strike, whether you are still empty belly, endure the roar of machinery in

busy overtime, I clearly see your swarthy face has a trace of years, sweat beads

gathered into a stream winding down...

Mom, Im afraid Im going to lose sleep tonight because I made an

"unforgivable" mistake. I have slapped myself several times, but the thought of

your frail figure is too much for my conscience to bear. In order to make a

living, you and your father work away from home all the year round. This year,

you were going to accompany me to study. "Sophomore year, key!" I know this is a

decision you and Dad have made after much thought and consideration. Considering

the situation at home, I refused.

I bought you a ticket to go away with tears in my eyes, and very

reluctantly put you on the train, I can clearly see the tears twinkling in your

eyes. Mom, I dont envy others wearing brand clothes, wearing brand jewelry; I

dont envy them having their parents pick them up every day; I dont envy them

eating nutritious breakfast prepared by their parents every day.

Although I can only with boiled water, eating steamed buns, but I know that

my mother gave me love is not lost to anyone. Mother you have been told me to

pay attention to nutrition, improve food, but I learned from the mouth of your

fellow villagers that you drink porridge with pickles every day, today is the

weekend, a week of steamed bread I want to do a la carte; My shoes are broken,

my thumbs are "happy", I want to buy a pair of sneakers at a reduced price;

Mid-term exam is coming soon, I learn not solid enough, want to go to Xinhua

bookstore around. So, I chuang the only two hundred dollars, this is my hard

work, under the pillow has been pressed flat, I know three years when the money

is much, I dont want to old to you for money, and brother next year will rise

the third year.

Walk in the street, those common sneakers also want 30, 50 yuan, later I

still wear old shoes into the Xinhua bookstore, come out, it is dusk, into the

vegetable market, I picked a jin of cabbage, a jin of carrots. This time, I

spent $2.70. But What I never expected, mother, was that when I took the money

that night, it was gone. Two hundred dollars just disappeared, And I broke down,

and it felt like the sky was falling down, and I went crazy and searched

everywhere I went today, but... Mom, Im sorry to you, and dad, when I was going

to tell you, but you called to tell me that you were injured, accidentally cut

by the machine on the hand, you let me how to open my mouth! I didnt have a

night class, I cried, and cried happily on the playground for a whole night.

The pressure on study, the loneliness in life, the condemnation in my

heart, the pain of missing my loved ones, mom, can you understand my mood now?

Mom, I miss you.

Your daughter

暑假里，我和母亲一起来到了闻名遐迩的鼓浪屿。

母亲告诉我，鼓浪屿位于厦门岛西南隅，因为海浪拍击岩石，声音像打鼓一样，所以叫“鼓浪屿”。听她这么一说，我就更加向往了。

坐在轮渡上，老远就看见了一朵巨大的绿色蘑菇开在海岛上。呵，那可不是蘑菇，而是一棵大榕树。登上海岛，我才发现大榕树真像巴金爷爷在《鸟的天堂》中写的那样，“枝上又生根，有许多根直垂到地上，伸进泥土里”，真像一位挂满胡子的老爷爷在欢迎我们。

俗话说：不登日光岩，不算到厦门。我们随着游人登上了日光岩顶，站在上面，整个人都沐浴在阳光里，大概“日光岩”这个名字就是这么来的吧。眺望远方，碧海蓝天，海上吹来的微风使人心旷神怡。海边沙滩上，游人有的在追逐，有的在戏水，还有的在捡贝壳，欢声笑语伴随着浪花的轻吟，给这里增添了无尽的欢乐。日光岩脚下，绿树掩映着新建的楼房，白墙红瓦，分外显眼。

从日光岩下来，我们又直奔向往已久的皓月园。远远的，就看见海边一块巨大的岩石上矗立着一尊雕像，那就是民族英雄郑成功。我们不由得加快脚步，来到雕像脚下，瞻仰英雄的英姿。看！他身披铠甲，手按宝剑，威风凛凛，让人肃然起敬。那炯炯有神的双眼，正专注地眺望着大海，仿佛在盼望宝岛台湾早日回到祖国的怀抱。

听母亲说，鼓浪屿还有“建筑博物馆”和“钢琴之岛”的美誉。从皓月园出来后，我们特地上街走了一回，果真如此。走在街上，随处可见各种中外风格的建筑物，既有民族建筑，也有西洋景观，古朴典雅，美不胜收。漫步街头，随时可以听到悦耳的钢琴声从各座房子里传出来，让人感觉仿佛走进了天然的音乐会场。

鼓浪屿啊，你那仙境般的景色，真让人流连忘返！

dear vvx,

my name is vvx.im writing to you to introduce my family to you.there are four people in my family.they are my father, my mother, my sister and i. my father is a worker in a factory. my mother is a teacher in a middle school. my sister is a primary school student and she is 8 years old. i’m a middle school student and i’m 14 years old.

look forward to hear from you soon.

yours,

vvx

Last autumn we took a trip to Qianshan by bus.It is about thirty miles from the city.We planned to put up in a hotel there in order to watch the sun rise the next morning.

As soon as we got there,we began to climb up the mountains.How great the sight is!We felt as if we had entered amother world full of beauty,peaeefulness and loveliness.There are hundreds of mountains,one after another.there are magnificent cliffs,one above another.We climbed up vigorously and breathed the fresh air greedily.As the sun was going down,we descended to a little hotel at the foot of the hill,where we had a big dinner,and then went to bed early so as to regain the energy ior the expedition next morning.

Before daybreak,we reached the peak of the highest mountain after a hard groping and climbing in the dark.Unaware of the cold wind,we stood motionlessly,with our eyes fixing at the hr end of the east.Suddenly thin ravs of red hue spread across the sky.As the redness deepened,some mysterious clouds moved across thc sky,dividing heaven from the earth.Just at this moment,up from the brightening far east rose the sun.It was so red and yet so tender that we could gaze at it with naked eyes.and a slight applause from us.the amazed spectators,rang through the peak.Up,up it rose,adding to itself strength and glory at every step.It dazzled with vigour,driving away darkness,cold,and misery from the earth,and bring light,warmth,and happiness to men.

We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.We jumped and shouted like innocent children and we bathed in the first rays of the sun with the peak till it was time for our return.

As we all know， the environmentaround us is getting worse and worse . In

some places we can’t see fishswimming in the river or trees on the hills. Not

only does it affect our lives and health， but also has a great affection in the

future. So I thinkwe must do something to protect the environment. .But what can

we do?

Now green commuting and a low-carbon life are more and morepopular in the

society .For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike ， we can use

shopping baskets notplastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides

of the paper when wewrite .

In a word ，if everyonepays more attention to(makes a contribution to) our

environment ，there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.

一个冬日的早晨，我和爸妈一起去感受了一下新开张的地铁一号线。在寒冷的冬天，坐着温暖舒适的地铁，我和爸妈的心情好到了极点。“厦门这些年，变化真大，尤其是交通，变得方便多了。”爸爸由衷地感慨起来。

“以前厦门是什么样的呢?”我好奇地问。

“记得那年刚到厦门的第一感觉就是路‘宽’。”爸爸若有所思地回答：“路上没什么车子，路自然而然就‘宽’起来。湖滨南路还能看到几辆车，湖滨北路的`车就比较少了。”

“那时候爸爸上班的地方，是不是很偏僻啊?”我像个主持人似的采访起大人们来了。

“是啊!爸爸以前上班在海沧区，每天上下班要从厦门大桥和杏林区绕一个大圈呢，你说远不远?以前只有厦门大桥这一个进出通道，出岛很不方便;现在有了集美大桥、杏林大桥、海沧大桥、翔安隧道，交通方便得多了!”

“我也来说一个环保方面的变化吧!”妈妈打开话匣子，就像数家常似的，“记得有一段时间，筼筜湖受到了污染，随处可见漂浮物，湖水发臭，鱼、虾、蟹大面积死亡，许多白鹭飞离了厦门，无家可归。后来，厦门市政府花了大力气对筼筜湖及周边进行综合治理，筼筜湖又恢复了以前的样子，湖面变得清澈了，湖水微波荡漾，白鹭又回来了，湖水中又有鱼和虾了。”

是啊!改革开放，给中国带来了翻天覆地的变化，这种变化，像龙卷风一样席卷全中国，给人们的生活带来了巨大的改善。厦门，这个有着“海上花园”美誉的海滨城市，也在不停地变化着。

8月21日下午，我和老妈，还有表哥，一起乘飞机前往厦门。由于飞机晚点，到达目的地快9点了。夜晚的厦门非常美丽，华灯高照，流光溢彩。我们订的宾馆在海边，只听那阵阵的波涛拍打着海岸，很有节奏。海风吹拂过来，很是舒服。还没参观游览，我已经喜欢上了这里。

第二天我们去了沙滩，沙子金黄细软，脚踩在上面，是多么的舒痒。远眺大海，只见远处有座岛屿，问老妈才知道那是荆门岛。啊！台湾的荆门岛离我们好近呀，看上往，你是多么的孤单，隐隐约约的，我想那里也和这里一样美丽，但不知你什么时候才能回到祖国母亲的怀抱？

第三天我们往了胡里山炮台，还往了鼓浪屿。胡里山炮台让我印象最深。刚进炮台，就看见很多小炮，有红缨炮等……，这些炮都是“小小小不点”，“超级大家伙”还在后头呢。往下走，就是一条长长的画廊，展示了很多抗战时用来打击敌人的场景，走过画廊，来到一个高高的洞口，往里张看，“哇——”我大叫起来，原来里面放的世界炮王——克虏伯大钢炮，那威风凛凛的架势，真让人觉得是站在高高山岗上的大猛虎，我发现旁边还有一架小车，上面放着一颗四十公分长的炮弹，我想，这是大钢炮的“小秘书”吧！我敢肯定，在那纷飞的战火年代，这件宝贝发挥了巨大的作用，杀伤了很多敌人。

Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father, he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery. On the contrary, we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge . if (Capitalize "If" since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king, how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So, every thing has two sides, the bright side and adumbral side. Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.

Comment:

Be careful with your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Too many uncessary mistakes.It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet. Thats quite objective and convincing.

厦门夜景实在美，真是令人过目不忘。

那天晚上我和父亲乘车看厦门风景，一路上迷人的灯光不断地吸引着我，你看夜幕下的厦门显得格外漂亮，五颜六色的霓红灯把厦门打扮成一个花枝招展的仙子，不停闪烁的灯光，像仙子好奇的眼光，灯光时而红、时而黄、时而远、时而近，色彩丰富、图形多变，这一定是仙子在参现日新月异的城市了。

一道道彩虹飞起来！轮渡的风景更是迷信我。你看，路旁彩灯一闪一闪的，发出了五彩缤纷的光芒，更体现出了大楼的高大，其他的大楼也在炫耀着自已，五颜六色、绚丽多姿。看！远远望去，在十字路口处，一群群“小精灵”缓缓挪动着，一会儿向左，一会儿向右…..真有趣！

走在演武路，哇！太美了。整座大桥被一只只闪闪发光的“萤火虫”包围着，发出点点白光，与环岛路结合在一起，就像是一条腾空飞跃的闪光巨龙盘旋在鹭岛周围。

今晚的厦门灯光璀璨，想来，是很多人都不曾见过的绚丽多彩，赛过烟花瞬间的绝美。你可别小看这小小的不起眼的小电灯，它为这不断变化的城市厦门，穿上迷人的彩衣，也让美丽的厦门夜景在我们的心中永远成为闪烁的一颗星！