关于环保的初三英语作文（热门20篇）

What do I want to do when Im older? Someone wants to be a doctor. Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport. Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing. Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.

I like playing the piano and I good at it. So I want to become a piano player. Play the piano is very interesting. And you can learn something of music. Piano can make you like music. A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.

I play the piano when Im ten years old. Now Im in grand five. I hope when Im sixteen years old , I can become grand eight. Ill be harder and harder to practise.

Become a piano play is a hard job. But I believe I can do it.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：A piano player

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday. I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday. But I didn’t. Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.

I spend a lot of time on the homework.. Every day in my Winter Holiday, I always got up late. then I listened to the tape, it was nine o’clock. then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime! I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy!

I’m unlucky on the playing too. I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire. I ‘m careless to kindle the firecracker, so I’m very unlucky.

I still unlucky on my friend’s party. In the morning, I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10:50. After ten minutes, the party would start! So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home! And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home. My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me!

I’m worried and feel unlucky on my weigh. Last term, I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram! I must to do banting!

But most important, I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium, I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse, the monkey……in the sea. Now I’ve done it . It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.

We were sitting in the classroom quietly, waiting for the invigilator. We

were anxious to get the examination paper and see whether it was easy or

difficult.

The invigilator came into the classroom. He first looked around.

Then he counted the papers. We could only hear the papersfricative. I had a

look at my watch. We would be examined in eight minutes. I felt a bit nervous. I

thought to myself,"Will the exam be easy or difficult? Will the last question be

very hard for me to work out?"The invigilator began to deliver us the papers. I

had been ready. As soon as I got the paper, I began to write quickly. At this,

the invigilator said loudly,"You cant write until the bell rings".I felt sorry

for that. I watched the hands of the clock and thought hard. I counted

quietly,"four minutes, three minutes, two minutes,thirty seconds, twenty-five

seconds""Ding" The bell rang. We picked up our pens and began to write

quietly.

What a long time we had been waiting!

The Peoples Square is located in the center of Shanghai. In the north-east of the square stands the Shanghai Urban Planning Exhibition Hall. The Shanghai Grand Theatre is in the north-west of the square. Between two buildings stands the City Hall.In the south lies the Shanghai Museum, covering 58,000 square meters. In the middle, theres a large lawn. Many pigeons can be seen flying here and there. The Peoples Square is one of the tourist attractions in Shanghai.

翻译：

人民广场位于上海的中心。在东北的广场站为上海城市规划展示馆。上海大剧院在西北的平方。两座大楼之间站市政厅。在南方是上海博物馆,占地58000平方米。在中间,有一个大草坪。可以看到许多鸽子飞在这里和那里。人民广场是上海的旅游景点。

Today is Womens Day. I think it would be one of the most beautiful memories in my mothers life.

今天是妇女节。我觉得它会是我妈妈人生中最重要的记忆之一。

After school, I head to the supermarket which is not far from my home. Yes, you are right! I intend to cook a simple meal for my mother. It takes me an hour and a half to cook two dishes and a soup. It is not until my mom comes back that I finish my cooking. There is a sweet smile on her face. At that moment, there’s nothing could be better than her smile. Everything I do is worthy. With an air of warmth, I say, Mom, Happy Womens Day. Then she smiles.

放学后，我去了离家不远的超市。是啊，你猜对了。我想为妈妈做一顿简单的饭菜。我花了一个半小时，煮了两菜一汤。我妈妈回来前，我就煮好了。她脸上露出了甜美的微笑。在那一刻，没有什么能比她的微笑更美好的了。我所做的一切都是值得的。在温暖的气氛中，我说， 妈妈，妇女节快乐。”然后她微笑了。

How wonderful today is! I sincerely hope that my mother is happy every day.

今天是多么美妙啊!我真诚的希望我的母亲每天都是快乐的。

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Bird there is less and less fresh water in the world.Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Dot use paper cups. At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.

"There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

我们都知道,我们周围的环境变得越来越糟。在一些地方,我们不能看到鱼在河里游泳或树木在山上。鸟有越来越少的淡水。一些人甚至没有干净的水喝。所以我认为我们必须做些事情来保护环境。但我们能做些什么呢?如何保护我们的环境?例如,我们可以步行去学校或骑自行车而不是汽车。我们最好使用购物袋而不是塑料袋当我们去购物。我们应该使用纸的两边,当我们写。不使用纸杯。在我们学校餐厅,用我们自己的碗和筷子而不是一次性的。我们可以重复使用水和节省电力。总之,如果每个人都更加关注我们的环境,将会有更少的污染和我们的生活将会更好。

“只有一个地球”,我希望每个人都能保护我们的环境好。

Rush years, the flowers bloom. Junior high school three years will be learning to live the moment has passed. Leaving his alma mater, leave, students about to leave, the hearts full of nostalgia.

Forget, beautiful alma mater. In your arms, we become ignorant of everything from ignorance, from naive to mature, from the timid become brave. Here, we received a strict education; here, we form of discipline, good style; here, we obtain knowledge, understand the truth, people here grow sturdily.

Forget, dear teacher. You just like that "wind sneaked into the night, moisten things silently" spring rain, nourishing us these small seedlings. You let me understand : the sun is to illuminate the life, the gardener is how to take care of the flowers, spring breeze is how green the world... ... In my eyes, the teacher, you already tender majesty, both ordinary and great. That is my heart rain, you are the sunshine of my heart ... ... Will always be grateful to you.

Forget, my dear classmates. We walked side by side for three years, in these three years, we spent a wonderful time, gave me the seeds of a friendship, sowing into my heart. In be together morning and night, we grow together, in the blink of an eye, but separated from the heart, calm? So, please remember to spend every minute, let friendship!

Will treasure the rest of every minute and every second, do not let the six year be sorry. The alma mater, memories ; to leave a good impression ; give students leave a good memory.

My summer vacation life is happy, rich and memorable experience. Because, in the summer vacation with my mother took me to a beautiful environment the universiade cultural park to play ah, elder sister took me to eat roast wing, brother to accompany me to play chess, and young aunt, aunt to accompany me to play CARDS, play chess, I am more than happy!

In this summer holiday, I didnt go to any computer classes. But, do homework, read, self-study "new concept English" are all I have to do every day. Sometimes I will play badminton, cycling, watch TV, play computer, help my mother do some housework within our capabilities. I also see a lot of books, learned a lot of knowledge, also learned a lot of sense.

During the universiade, and I take concrete actions to participate in the volunteer service, to different U standing to participate in and experience different activities, I also to the underground parking lot to promote "green travel". Can still finished the task well, you didnt know it, I will soon find five owners, agreed to stop driving during the universiade, or signature, do not drive me as a small host universiade, I can deliver a large force, how proud I am!

Say so, I this year summer vacation life, compared with the past, is not the same feeling, is not the same wonderful!

我的暑假生活是快乐、丰富而又难忘的。因为，暑假里有妈妈带我去环境优美大运文化园玩呀，姐姐带我去吃烤翅，哥哥陪我下棋、还有小姨和姑姑陪我打牌、下棋呢，我多开心啊!

在这个暑假里，我虽然没有去参加什么兴趣班。但是，写作业、阅读、自学《新概念英语》都是我每天必须做的事情。我有时候也会打羽毛球、骑自行车、看电视、玩电脑、帮妈妈做一些力所能及的家务事。我还看了好多书，学到了好多知识，也懂得了好多道理。

在大运会期间，我以实际行动参与到志愿者服务当中，到不同的U站去参加和体验不同的活动，我还到地下停车场去宣传“绿色出行”。还能出色地完成了任务，你没想到吧，我很快就找到5名车主，同意在大运期间停开、或者不开车的签名，我作为一名大运会的小主人，我能为大运出一份力，我是多么的自豪啊!

所以说，我今年的暑假生活，与往年的相比，确实是不一样的感觉，不一样的精彩啊!

The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon, It winds its way

from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last

it reaches the sea. Its the longest wall on the earth, also one of the wonders

in the world.The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years. The first part was

built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by

hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came

into existence.Since then, it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.

Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world, has taken on a new look.

Its visited by large numbers of people from all parts of the country and the

world.

Prepare for the Chinese New Year

It’s about one and a half month away from the Chinese New Year, It is a festival celebrated by the Chinese people at the beginning of the lunar calendar year.

As of the Chinese traditional customs, our parents and grandparents will sweep every corner of the house and clean the windows until they gleam, and washing clothes, buying foods and goods for the new year’s future use and presents.

Children will be the most benefited group during this feast period. One month before that, they are expecting the new clothes, delicious foods. The firecrackers and the year’s allowance for their increased ages.

In recent years, with the rising of the standard of life, Chinese tend to make various holiday plans to spend a different and meaningful new year. Such as traveling abroad, or be absorbed in their hobbies, and even work.

Why today we try to spend our Chinese new year in such a different way? I think that’s because this is a era of free life and personality high-ranking. Though there are still something traditional, our young generation is attempting to make something new and suitable for ourselves. And we would like to take something really worth to be cherished in our memorable treasures. That’s amazing and wonderful!

I’ll always keep in mind that the Chinese new year is a great feast inherited from our ancestors, but if necessary, I would like to enjoy it by some ways personal.

Those who live in cities around the world are likely going to have similar

experiences about living and the associated challenges regardless of their

location on the globe. Most of these challenges revolve around stress which

studies have shown is a part of living. Regardless of what you do and your

profession and place stress is not avoidable but could be minimized. Those who

see stress as an enemy will probably live an irritable life which is quite

unnecessary.

How then do we cope with stress? I am going to give you tips that have

helped and are still helping me in coping with life in the city of Lagos

Nigeria, the most populous African city, where orientation of people is quite

different in many ways about stress and living with others.

导语：不论从何种角度，环保都是当代世界发展不可忽视的一环。它也不再仅仅是一种措施和行动，而是一种经济行为，并带动了一系列相关的产业。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的说明中国发展环保经济的状况的英语句子，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1. While developing its economy， China will handle properly the relationship among the population， natural resources and the environment.

2. The Chinese government pays great attention to environmental problems arising from Chinas population growth and economic development.

3. China relies on improving supervision， management and technological progress to promote environmental protection.

4. Land， arable land in particular， should be used reasonably and economically. Strong measures will be taken to strengthen the building of the urban environmental infrastructure， regulate industrial structure and lay-out， shun the unpromising way of pollution first， treatment afterwards， and strengthen prevention and control of the pollution in major river valleys to ensure the security of the drinking water of the inhabitants.

【参考译文】

1、中国在发展经济的同时，将处理好的人口之间的关系，自然资源和环境。

2、中国政府高度关注中国人口增长和经济发展所带来的环境问题。

3、中国依靠强化监督管理和技术进步，促进环境保护。

4、土地，特别是耕地，应该合理和经济地使用。将采取强有力的措施来加强城市环境基础设施建设，调整产业结构和布局，避免“先污染，后治理的工作方式，加强预防和控制主要河流污染以确保居民饮用水安全。

Welcome to Suzhou. Today I’m your tour guide. Suzhou is a beautiful place in Southeast China. It was built over 2500 years ago. So Suzhou is an old city with a long history. It’s famous for its gardens and Hanshan Temple. We are all proud of them. Many foreign tourists come to see them. In Suzhou, There are lots of old constructions like Tiger Hill, Beisi Pagoda and so on. After visiting them, you’ll be tired. But don’t be worried. There are also lots of snack shops in Suzhou. They are different from those in Western countries. They are much more delicious than some Western food. Suzhou is a modern city as well as an old city. There are lots of tall buildings and many other modern constructions in Suzhou, too. You can find hundreds of people in smart clothes in the street. What a beautiful city it is!

The earths environment is becoming worse now, but many people still dont take him seriously. Garbage all over the sky flying, floating to the branches, stream, everywhere, polluted the river, used to playing in the river fish shrimp all disappear without a trace, once singing in the branches of the bird is gone. People cut down trees, Chinas current annual production and discarding the forty-five billion pairs of disposable chopsticks, the equivalent of twenty-five million adult trees were cut down! A lot of plastic products to in one thousand years to break down on the ground, will also release greenhouse gases during! See here, you will be indifferent?

We should start small, do not litter, do not spit everywhere, private cars less, go out by car its best to do the bus, a variety of flowers and plants trees, go out to carry chopsticks and bag, avoid using disposable chopsticks and plastic bags, and so on.

On one occasion, I would not be eco-friendly. That night, I want to finish with the homework be thrown away, mother saw it, said to me: "these paper recycling can also reuse, waste, what a pity, the back of the paper can also be used, you can use it to make toilet paper it." I looked down and realized his mistake, from now on, I havent wasted.

The earth is our great mother, though she is four billion five hundred million years old, but young and aging of the earth is not measured by age, as the earths children, we should make our own mother forever young! Come on, lets work hard, I believe, if everyone make efforts, small power will converge into a great power, let our earth mother can restore health and beauty!

现在地球的环境越来越差了，可是很多人仍然不把他当回事。垃圾漫天飘扬，飘到树枝上、小河里，到处都是，污染了小河，曾经在河里嬉戏的小鱼小虾都消失的无影无踪，曾经在树枝上唱歌的小鸟也没了踪影。人们大量的砍伐树木，中国目前每年生产和丢弃四百五十亿双一次性筷子，相当于两千五百万棵成年树遭到砍伐!很多的塑料制品得在地下埋上一千年才能被分解，期间还会不断释放温室气体!看到这里，你还会无动于衷吗?

我们应该从小事做起，做到不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰，少开私家车，出门坐车最好做公共汽车，多种花草树木，出门要随身携带筷子和袋子，避免使用一次性筷子和塑料袋等等。

有一次，我就没有做到环保。那天晚上，我想把用完的作业被扔掉，妈妈看见了，对我说：“这些纸回收还可以再利用，浪费了多可惜啊，纸的背面还可以用的，你就用它做草纸吧。”我低下头，认识到了自己的错误，从今往后，我就没有在浪费了。

地球是我们伟大的母亲，虽然她已经有四十五亿岁了，但地球的年轻与衰老并不是用年龄来衡量的，作为地球的孩子，我们应该让自己的母亲永远年轻!来吧，让我们一起努力，我相信，如果每个人都作出努力，微小的力量将汇聚成巨大的力量，让我们的地球妈妈一定能恢复以前的健康和美丽!

The Olympic Games will be held this year.I am so excited and I think the games will be interesting and also fascinating.But now,the important is,how should we do with the Olmpics if I am a volunteer?To solve the problem will be extremely difficult,because nowadays lots of people devote themselves to society and you can not hold an opportunity easily.So just try my best.

We can go to the English Corner to help them to send some DIY newspapers and go to the neighborhood to tell the stories or history about Olmpics to the people who are curious to learn.Also,we can go on the streets to find the problems such as putting away the trash anywhere,saying out the impolite words.That will be meaningful.I am sure that I will succeed.Believe it,do it!

Nowadays,with more and more serious problem such as the global increasing temperture,the melting ice and the rising sea-levering,people are recognizing the important of developing the low-carbon economic now.

There are many ways we can do to reach the loe-carbon economic.Fristly,discovering others fuels which is more clean and more green to instead of the using of carbon.Secondly, we should have the save-energy conscious and do something which we can make,for instance,using the bus ranther than car when you go out,re-use the thing that can be recycle used,reducing the use of plastic bags.Last but not least,we should plant more trees or other greenplants,in which way we can not only improve the environment,but also can make our home more beauty.

In my opnion, the most important thing to reach the low-carbon economic is everyone must try their best do what they can do for it.Once everyone have the sence of low-carbon economic and have the action by themselves ,it will be earlier to reach it.

如今,随着越来越多的严重的问题,如全球温度上升,冰川融化和sea-levering上升,人们认识到发展低碳经济的重要了。

有很多方法我们可以达到loe-carbon经济。第一,发现其他燃料,更清洁和更绿色,而不是使用的碳。其次,我们应该有燃油节能意识,我们可以做些什么,例如,使用公共汽车跑其他非汽车当你出去时,重复使用可以循环使用的东西,减少塑料袋的使用。最后但并非最不重要,我们应该种植更多的树木或其他绿色植物,在其中我们不仅可以改善环境,但也会使我们的家园更美丽。

在我因为,达到低碳经济的最重要的事情是每个人都必须尽自己最大的做他们能做的事。一旦每个人都有低碳经济和有行动的意义上,它将早些时候到达。

Now, people advocate low carbon life, our class also launched a "green low carbon knowledge contest" activities.

Attending this activity, I just know, originally did not use electrical appliances, but dont pull the plug, or will power. I also have a little ashamed, because I think of my old things: once, when I was over the computer, but forgot to turn off the computer, went to bed until I remembered that the computer didnt shut, but I dare not to turn off the computer, because I was afraid of scold by mom and dad, how to do? I had to go in only when mom and dad sleep off. But it also takes up a lot of electricity. There are a few minor is dont forget to turn off the electric fan, or forget to turn off the lights, then I dont think is electricity that takes up a little? But now I know, this is not the environmental protection.

Hence, under my advocacy, our family began to low carbon life action, I posted a warm prompt: on television watching TV unplug; On a computer with a tip: over the computer to shut down in a timely manner. Mother specially is guarding the light has not related, if caught, who pay the electricity bills this month. Dad is responsible for checking the electrical plugs. I think: if we always stick to it, so can save a lot of electricity, really can realize low carbon life.

Here, I would also like to remind you that want to low carbon life, is about to take a bus, private cars less, smoke less, a variety of trees, to reduce the carbon dioxide, make our air more pure and fresh, the water cleaner, more green trees, sky more blue!

现在，人们都提倡低碳生活，我们班也开展了一次“绿色低碳知识竞赛”的活动。

参加完这次活动，我才知道，原来没有用电器，但是不拔插头，还是会耗电的。我同时也有点惭愧，因为我想起我以前的一些事：有一次，我玩完电脑，却忘了关电脑，直到我躺到床上的时候才想起电脑没关，但我不敢去关电脑，因为我怕被爸爸妈妈骂，怎么办呢? 我只好在爸爸妈妈睡着的时候才去关的，但也耗掉了很多电。其实还有几次要不就是忘了关电扇，要不就是忘了关灯，那时我觉得就不那耗掉一点电吗?但现在我知道了，这样做很不环保的。

于是，在我的倡导下，我们全家都开始低碳生活行动，我在电视机上贴了一张温馨提示：看完电视要拔插头;在电脑上贴了一张提示：玩完电脑要及时关闭。妈妈专门是看管电灯有没有关的，如果被抓到，这个月的电费就谁交。爸爸就负责检查各电器的插头。我想：如果我们家一直这样坚持下去，一定能节省很多电的，真正的能实现低碳生活。

在这里，我还想提醒大家，想过低碳生活，就要多坐公交车，少开私家车，少抽烟，多种树，来减少二氧化碳，使我们的空气更加清新、水更清、树更绿、天更蓝!

I used to be a problem student. I was always late for school, listened to music and ate snacks in class. What’s worse, I hardly ever finished my homework on time.Luckily, with the help of my teachers and classmates, things changed a lot. Now I behave well and study hard. I can almost finish my homework well with the help of my classmates. What’s more, I get on well with others and always help others. I have learned a lot over these three years, but I know I could hardly succeed without the people who helped and supported me—my teachers, my parents and my classmates.

I won’t forget the days I have spent in my junior high school. I’m looking forward to new experiences in senior high school. Although the life in high school is hard ，I have confidence to do better in the future.

导语：英语写作能力作为体现语言交际能力至关重要的一个方面,写作测试是对学生书面交际水平及能力进行检验最有效的途径。以下是yjbs作文网小编为您收集整理的写作技巧，希望对您有所帮助。

要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色，写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语，而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的，属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of，而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时，B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强，也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式，特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构，这是对的，但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构，且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇，更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型，而应注意句式的变化，如长短句结合，简单句、并列句与复合句共用，还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格，分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多，而且多处使用there be结构，显得单调、乏味，而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中，我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点，同时为使主题突出,结构严谨，我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上，NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句，开门见山，随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分)，使全文结构紧凑，表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整，如“40%的同学认为应收门票，但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首，而后部分另起一句放在句末：They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急，主题突出，条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词，在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的)，这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节，这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

写作技巧：

一、要善于模仿

对大多数学习英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。

谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?

首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。

其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学习，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。

最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。

二、要灵活变通

在批改英语作文的过程中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。由于中英文之间的差异和词汇量、表达法积累的不足，出现难于表达的情况是十分正常的。关键问题在于如何处理。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，套用在这个问题上就很合适。写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。

有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“what is it made of?”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“it is made of miss hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。

比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。

最后，许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

Today, my parents took me to my grandfather’s home.I talked with my grandfather for a little while and then I played with my brothers and sisters.

After a while, my elderly brother suggested going to the park and having a rest.“That’s a good idea. ” I said.Then we prepared for the outing.However, after lunch, the sky turned dark and rained heavily.Therefore, our plan was an impossible due to the bad weather.How pity it was!All the afternoon, we could only have fun in house.

We played cards, watched TV and played computer games.We were happy, but we still hoped that we can go out next time.

今天，我父母带我到爷爷家。我和爷爷聊了一会天然后我就和兄弟姐妹们玩。

过了一会，我的哥哥提议去公园然后休息。“好主意”我说。接着我们就为外出做准备。但是，吃过午饭，天空变得黑暗还下起了大雨。因此，我们的计划因为坏天气泡汤了。太可惜了!整个下午我们只能在家里玩。

我们打牌，看电视，玩游戏。我们和开心，但是还是希望下次能够出去玩。

初三英语作文：Our School

Our school, which was set up in 1945, lies in the south of Changchun City. It is famous in our city.

It has 24 classes. 8 classes in each grade. The number of the students and teachers adds up to over 2,000. In the front of the school stands a high classroom building, behind which is a lab buiding. We have many of our chemistry and biology classes in it. Between them is a new library built 3 years ago. There are a large number of books there. After lunch a number of students like reading there.

On the right there is a football field and two basketball courts. They are our favorite places in our spare time. It is said that a swimming pool will be built to the left.

Our school is big and beautiful, covered with green trees and colorful flowers. Many piople call it a garden school. It’s really a good place for us to study in.

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