初一英语写老师的作文实用20篇

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make

great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to

learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I

work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and

helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me

to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my

gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

亲爱的梁老师：

您好!我写信是想要感谢你为我做出的努力。在你的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大的进步。一年前，我的学习成绩很差，我不想再学习了，但是你从来没有放弃我。你告诉我我很聪明。只要努力，我一定很棒。近年，你很关心我的学习，帮了我很多。当我犯错的时候，你总是指出错误并帮我更正。现在，我的学习比以前好多了，我想向你表达我的感激。祝您一切顺利。

This semester, my class has a new English teacher. She is a young and beautiful lady. We have a great impression on her. However, after several classes later, things have changed. Firstly, she always talks in English. We don’t understand her words. We tell her that, but nothing changes. Besides, she always asks us in English. The result is that we can’t answer her question, because we can’t understand her. In addition, she is serious and never smiles to us. We feel so depressive to have her lesson. Therefore, all students are afraid of having English lesson.

这个学期，我们班换了新的英语老师，是一位年轻美丽的女老师。我们对她的第一印象很好。但是，几节课过后，情况就变了。第一，她总是用英语说话，我们根本听不懂她说什么。我们和她说了这个问题，但是并没有用。第二，她总是用英语问我们问题，结果就是我们都回答不上来，因为我们还是听不懂。第三，她很严肃，从来不会对我们笑。上课时，我们都很压抑。因此，现在全班学生都害怕上英语课。

Everyone has his favorite teacher ,so do I. My favourite teacher is Miss

Wei, our English teacher. We felt English very difficult when we began to study

English. Miss Wei had a good idea to solve the problem. One day, Miss Wei came

into the classroom with some fruits, such as apples,bananas,and oranges. She

said: “Today we are going to learn the names of the fruits. You can eat the

fruits if you can tell me their names in English . ”All the students listened

carefully and studied hard . Someone even stood up to answer questions. Class

was over ,and the fruits were all eaten. From then on ,I am more and more

interested in English, and I want to say from my heart: “ Thank you, Miss

Wei!”

Punctuality is a good habit. It means to do things at the fixed time. When others are late and you have waited for a long time,you must be angry. And then you should try to be punctual. So you will win others’ trust. At the same time if you are always not punctual, you will become lazier and lazier, even fail in the life.

No punctuality is a bad habit. We should get rid of it. We should try to be punctual forever.

[Punctuality初一英语作文

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dreamEvery one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save peoples lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

小学五年级以前，真的很讨厌英语。说是讨厌，到不如说是因不懂而产生的厌恶和恐惧。久而久之，便也放弃了，面对一次次考试，也不显得那么惶急了。总是七十多分的成绩，在一个英语差班里，也只能算中等。

除了那几个成绩十分优秀的同学在九十分以上外，剩下的，只有等待奇迹的降临。有的时候，真希望幸运女神也能眷顾我一下，让我不再为英语而发愁，让我能顺利的考上初中。当然，那只是幻想，但他的出现，让我如愿以偿。

一个偶然的机会，妈妈听说七班的英语老师教的很好，英语成绩年级第一。便从我的好友那要到了电话，好友很热心，他的英语很突出，就是上了那个老师办的辅导班。妈妈讲电话打通后，那边传来了老师甜美的声音，经过交谈，才知道，他姓蒋。妈妈把我七十八分的成绩告诉蒋老师时，没想到她竟说："还可以."我吃了一惊:第一次有人这样说。我的信心大增，不在那么失落。

于是，我便开始了我的转变。

周六时，我都会准时到达她家里，和十几个学生一起，听她讲课。风雨无阻，我真的希望有一天，我能不再为我的英语发愁。

她讲的很详细，因为没有课本，所以有的人便向年级比自己高的表哥表姐借了一本，而我没借到，蒋老师便帮我借了一本，并鼓励我好好学。她告诉我：“其实英语并不难。”真的吗？不知怎的，我有些相信了她说的话，也许英语真的不难。从那时起，我们的关系便近了。

她讲的很好，从简单的单词，到句子，再到课文，再到语法，她讲的很详细，严肃而又不失幽默，学得多而不累。在她的引导下我渐渐的爱上了英语，开始尽情地在英语世界里遨游。

此后，每一次英语考试，我与第一名的分数不相上下，她也和我一起在蒋老师那里学英语，只是比我早。

我很庆幸，能遇上蒋老师，是她改变了我，使我能顺利考上初中。

我会将她永远的记在我的心里，我敬爱的英语老师——蒋老师！

[我的英语老师作文700字

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

黄老师非常喜欢狗，因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。

My Teacher＇s House

My English teacher has a big house.

It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen.

In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them.

This is my English teacher’s house.

[英语作文我的英语老师的房子

When you are scrawled written assignments, will think of the teacher let you write your homework is to who? When you are absent-minded in class, will think of the teacher prepares a lesson of hard, tired? Driving when you hear the teacher caught a cold to cough, will think of the teacher to the class and class? When you are sick, when the teacher asked cold ask warm to you, will think of the teacher care for you? When you make a mistake, the teacher criticism, you will know that this is for your own good?

Time flies, we slowly grow up, the teacher slowly getting old. Her unusual love for us, do you have any feeling. That every little bit of love, no change for us.

当你正潦草的写着作业时，是否会想起老师让你写作业是为了谁？当你在上课时心不在焉时，是否会想起老师备课时的辛苦，疲惫？当你听到老师感冒时一阵阵咳嗽声的时候，是否会想起老师为了全班同学而上课？当你生病时，老师对你问寒问暖时，是否会想起老师对你的关爱？当你犯了错时，老师严厉批评你时，是否会知道这是为你好？

时光飞逝，我们慢慢长大了，老师慢慢变老了。她对我们非同寻常的爱，你有没有感受。那一点一滴的爱，对我们丝毫没有改变。

I have a good English teacher. Her name is Wu Fang. She is 34 years old. She has short curly hair and is of medium build, she is tall. And she has many habits!

She likes playing badminton and basketball. She is healthy.. She likes reading, singing, dancing… . She says she will be our best friend. Many students love her very much.

My English teacher is very strict(严厉) with us. Her English is really good, she gives us some advice about how to learn English well. She tells us to practice English every day. And listening to English music is also a good way to improve(改善）our English.

This is my English teacher. A popular English teacher!

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[我的英语老师作文素材

teacher is science teacher. he’s very strong. he has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. he often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes.

my science teacher is very kind. and he is very smart, isn’t he? today, we have science class. we are very happy. because he is so funny. who is he? he’s a mr. zhang .

Last week, our school was holding the sport meeting, I felt so excited, because I took part in the 800 meter race. When I heard the shot voice, I started to run, at first, I kept the uniform space, I planned to run quickly in the last 200 meter. But I felt so tired, I wanted to give up, then my desire to win made me stick to the end. I am so proud of myself.

上周，我们学校举行了校运会，我感到很激动，因为我参加了800米竞跑。当我听到开跑声音的时候，我开始跑，刚开始，我保持匀速，我计划在最后200米快速跑。但是我感到很累，想要放弃，然后我的求胜欲望使我坚持到了最后。我为自己感到自豪。

她，时而温柔，时而严肃，时而幽默，时而冷漠。一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，微启的红唇，高挺而小巧的鼻子，再配上那白里透红的脸，可真是打眼啊。

在茫茫人海中，你总能很快认出她，因为她的头发又直又长，让我们这些女生看了好生羡慕。风一吹，她那一袭长发便飘扬在风中了，为她增添了一丝凌乱美。

在我的眼中，她是一位平易近人的老师，也是一位关心同学的“知心姐姐”。

记得上个学期，在一次英语听写中，我因为粗心大意才得了“85“分。对于这个分数，我很惭愧，因为我把字母“l”由于写的太快竟变成了字母“r”，这让我很是后悔，后悔自己的大意而丢掉了不该丢失的分数。下课后，她到我的座位旁，我以为她来批评我的，可没想到的是她却用十分温和的语气对我说：“你看这个单词本来不会错的，你是不是没仔细写啊？”我有些懊悔的点了点头。“下次要认真点，知道了吗？”我神情沮丧地说：“老师，我知道了，下次我会注意的。”说完，她还认真的帮我分析了这些错题的原因。

还记得，我由于生病没来，等到我去时，她就问我怎么了，好点没有，让我甚是感动。一股暖流从我心底悄然流过，使我的整个身心都变得愉悦起来。

那天的考试，我们全班考得很糟糕，她很失望，对我们说：“你们班这次考试很差劲，优生和及格人数连全班的三分之二都达不到，怎么回事？”语气中带着严肃又带着对我们的失望。她的眼神望着我们，让我们觉得无地自容，对不起她，但是，这饱含失望的眼神，也成为了我们奋发向上的动力。

她笑起来样子很可爱，让人不由自主的喜欢她。她讲课时很认真，有时为了让我们弄懂还反复强调。她还怕她讲多了，我们脑子会混乱，便询问我们。她在课上会说一些笑话，惹得大家笑，不过，这样，我们反而更亲近她，

如果你想倾诉一些事情，她肯定会认真的聆听，然后用她那灿烂的笑容来融化你心中的阴霾……

这就是我们的英语老师——贺老师，一位温柔、令人喜欢的老师。她是我们的老师，也是我们的朋友，更是我们宣泄烦恼的聆听者。

I began to like English when I entered the senior high school. I owe it to my English teacher who has stimulated① my great interest in learning English and then influenced my future, and whose name is Zhang Yanshu----a name I will keep in my mind forever.

She showed great love to us which is deeply appealing to②our heart. Different from other teachers, she has never been impolite to us. Oppositely, she treated us equally. She made efforts to attract us to the world of English, to understand the beauty of the language and enjoy the cultures of the foreign countries. With her skillful help, the students in our class took great interest in this course and improved rapidly.

She was kind and patient. She did not mind the students slowness in learning new knowledge, but it did not mean that she was not strict with us. To make what we had learned strong, she often asked us to recall③ the knowledge in class. This was also a method to examine the homework she had assigned④. In that case, we had to work hard so as to live up to⑤her hope.

She is such an excellent teacher that we got so much from her, not only the knowledge but also kindness, diligence⑥ and appreciation for beauty. All these will be useful to all my life.

Do you have any hobbies? If not ,what do you do in the holidays ? I have

many hobbies .On weekdays ,when I study in school ,I play with my classmates

.Sometimes I play volleyball with them,sometimes I play football with them .I

think playing football is very interesting and exciting .But when I get home ,I

like listening to music alone .Also I like reading story books.When I am not

happy about something ,I usually draw some pictures though I am not good at

drawing .On weekends ,there is no class ,I like shopping with my friends and my

parents .

Lets take a look at the weather in Shanxi Province for the next 24

hours.Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to

twenty-eight.A strong wind would reach Datong, which could cause much rain,The

temperature would be sixteen to twenty-six.Yangquan would be sunny with the

highest temperature of thirty degree. Linfen would be windy and its temperature

would be twenty-three to thirty-two.We would have a sunny and hot day in

Yuncheng.Its temperature would stay between twenty-eight to thirty-four.

My mother of medium height, white skin, not very beautiful but dignified and easy, her dress is just like people, not fashionable but very elegant. My mothers character is bad, often lose his temper. Strengths, weaknesses, you want to know? My mother is a man of ingenuity, will do a lot of exquisite handicrafts. Fengling is very good-looking, she will do what all have, in the shape of different colors, hung in the window, my home is very beautiful, especially under the wind chimes look gorgeous in that some of small ornament, whenever there is a wind blowing, they will send melodious bell, it sounds like the wings, can fly far away.

Do you know? My mother a bath just half an hour. Her do the housework is also very clean. 5 o clock in the morning get up to do breakfast for the family to eat, at 9 o clock in the morning will go to the market to buy food, come back and then do a housework. Cook a meal at 11 o clock. Wash his clothes, and 2 PM 3 PM to do the housework. Shes housework: sweeping, washing clothes, sweep the floor, washing the dishes, and so on household chores, few are also countless. The evening she often said: "oh ~ today the housework so much do I waist sour backache." Father and sister, I have no words to say. In fact, we want to help her, but we help her. She said: "go away, you do not clean."

You say my mother is very love clean and industrious again?

我的妈妈中等身材，皮肤白白的，不十分漂亮但端庄大方，她的穿衣打扮也跟人一样，不时髦但很高雅。妈妈的性格不好，常发脾气。优点很多，缺点也不少，你们想知道吗? 妈妈是个心灵手巧的人，会做许多精巧的手工艺品。她做的风铃很好看，什么形状的都有，颜色各异，挂在我家窗前，非常漂亮，特别是风铃下的有些小装饰好看极了，每当有风吹起的时候，它们就会发出悦耳的铃声，那声音像是长了翅膀，能飞得很远很远。

你知道吗?我妈妈一洗澡就半个钟头。她做家务也非常干净。早上5点起床做早餐给一家人吃，早上9点就去市场买菜，回来后就做一做家务。到了11点就做饭。下午2点洗衣服，3点做家务。她的家务范围是：扫地，洗衣服，拖地，洗碗，等等家务，数也数不清。晚上她常常说：“唉~今天家务好多做得我腰酸背痛。”爸爸和姐姐，我都没话可说。其实我们想帮她，不过我们一帮她。她就说：“走开走开，你们做得不干净。”

你说我的妈妈是不是很又爱干净和勤劳?

郭老师是我们的班主任兼英语老师。她有着国字形的脸，看起来很对称。虽然是女老师，但眉宇中却透着一股威严，说起话来干脆利落，我爸爸就说我们班主任是巾帼不让须眉。她对我们要求特别严格，一切按班规办事，不管谁违反规定，决对定“斩”不饶。郭老师的英语非常棒，我想在全校是数一数二的，教学非常严谨。我在上小学时，自以为英语学的很不错。刚入初中时，班主任让每个人做一个座右铭。由于受《天天向上》这个娱乐节目影响的缘故，我加上了一句DAYDAYUP，郭老师看到后，很快帮我纠正了这个中国式英语的错误。作为班主任，郭老师对每个学生都严格要求。她有一套“来无影，去无踪”的神技。虽然，她表面上对我们不闻不问，可是对我们的情况了如指掌。有好几次上别的课时，有人小声说话，课后老师对那些同学说“你们，给我出来一趟”(这是老师最经典的话)。吓得他们腿都软了，其他同学吓得也是后背直冒凉气，甚至怀疑班主任有“千里眼”或“顺风耳”。不过如果哪位同学有了那怕一丁点儿的进步，她也会有世上最好听的语言来表扬他。说实在的，现在的学生都是独生子女，在家里都是娇生惯养的，确实需要一个严格的老师来为我们的成长保驾护航。英语老师——我们的良师益友。

In this chapter of the novel,Jane met her new friend-Helen.What Helen said really impressed me a lot,driving me think deeply.

“Life is too short to hate other people.We all have faults,but when we die,only the pure flame of the spirt will be left.Thats why I never think of revenge,I never consider life unfair.I live in calm,looking forward to the end."

Honesly speaking,I complained about my life or people around me now and again,wodering why it was always unfair to me.However,think it over,I shouldt have been so mean.Time flies.We need to expand the width of life instead of wasting time to think about something meaningless.

他，戴着鸭舌帽，他，披着一件灰外套，好似一个老干部。他就是我的老师——应老师。还记得我们的师生之旅是从我小升初那年开始的。那时，我来到一个完全陌生的地方，难免有些生疏。可是他的课，我觉得格外亲切。

那是他上的英语课，在课堂上告诉了我们一个记单词的诀窍，就是用音标记单词，可是刚接触音标的我，根本搞不清楚哪几个字母读哪个音，使我的听写没的不堪入目，应老师见了，不由的开起了玩笑：“我可真是伤心啊！”他说完后没有马上走开，反而是帮我认真的分析起来，边说边让我作笔记。让我记清楚，下次听写不要那么多错，那么辛苦的订证。

窗外的鸟儿在欢唱，伴着我“唰唰”的写字声和应老师的讲解声。

“colour，green，smart……。”又是一次听写，可这次，我有了应老师亲身传授的听写宝典，终于破了我的记录，拿了听写的第一个一百分！拿着听写本时，我的耳边好似又响起应老师给我认真的讲解声。

应老师在我的脑海中不只是英语王，还是一个“百科全书”。

在上课的前几分钟，应老师总会来和我们“谈谈人生”，“八婆八婆”。就拿最近几次的英语课来说说吧。