关于我最喜欢读书的优秀作文通用5篇 初一作文英语(热门19篇)

How to Learn English Well

English is one of the most important subjects in middle school.  Almost everyone knows that we should learn English well, but few of us know how to learn it well. Karl Marx has set a good example for us. He once said, "When one is learning a foreign language, he must use the foreign language." In this way, he could use several languages. A saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." When we learn English, we should read more, speak more, listen to English from time to time and practise writing every day. Don"t be afraid of making mistakes. Only in this way can we learn it well.

导语：随着环境污染愈加严重，水资源也被破坏，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

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在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。

Winter quietly away, it received a voice. Connect with lightsome pace, came to the grass, hide and seek in the grass, hidden in the grass, the grass grow the bud, become full of vitality; Connect again came to the forest, standing on the treetops sing a beautiful song, the tree immediately more green than before; Connect again came to the river, see willow messy hair hanging over the little river, voice hurriedly ran, as the willow comb my hair, after a while, willow hair look brand-new.

Connect will never forget its best friend - fields. The field scenery beautiful, like a beautiful walked into the continuous picture; The wild flowers of the field is really brilliant, brilliant have attracted many bees to honey. The food of the field is really green, green like the green grass.

Connect to the wheat field, and the field to play games, connect to farmer uncle pull weeds, water the young trees flower and Chinese cabbage, the fields into the sea of green.

Connect the nature plant flowers and plants become more green and more vibrant, watered farmer kind of wheat and cabbage pulling weeds fertilizer, let pests away from wheat and cabbage...

Connect to the nature and the farmer uncle kind of food added the awaken of spring, I love spring.

冬天悄悄地走了，它迎接了一位春姑娘。春姑娘迈着轻盈的脚步，来到了草地，在草地里捉迷藏，藏在了小草里，小草长出了嫩芽，变得生机勃勃;春姑娘又来到了森林，站在树梢上唱了一首优美的曲子，大树马上比以前更加翠绿;春姑娘又来到了小河边，看见柳树头发乱七八糟的垂在了小河边，春姑娘连忙跑过去，为柳树梳头，过了一会儿，柳树的头发变得焕然一新了。

春姑娘永远都不会忘记它最好的朋友——田野。田野的景色真美啊，美得像是走进了连绵不断的画卷;田野的野花真艳啊，艳得引来了许多的蜜蜂来采蜜;田野的菜真绿啊，绿得像被绿草染过似的。

春姑娘到麦田里，和田野玩游戏，春姑娘为农民伯伯拔杂草，给小树小花和白菜浇水，田野变成了绿色的海洋。

春姑娘使大自然的植物花草变得更绿更生机勃勃，给农民伯伯种的麦子和白菜浇水拔草打肥料，让害虫离开麦田和白菜……

春姑娘给大自然和农民伯伯种下的粮食添加了春意，我爱春天。

Stress is a state of being upset that happens when we are under pressure.

Both our feelings and our bodies get upset.

We can even get emotionally and physically sick if we have too much stress

for too long. Stress can come at us from every direction. For instance, it can

come from fights with other people. It can come when we have too many things to

do and too little time to do them. It can also come when we do not have enough

money to pay for what we want. Since stress can make us sick, we have to learn

how to deal with it. There are good ways and bad ways to do so. We should deal

with stress in good ways, of course. Good ways to cut down on stress include

changing our lifestyles. For example, we can learn either to get along with

people or to stay away from them. We can decide what to do now, what to do

later, and what to leave off doing forever.

We can also figure out how to get money or we can cut down on what we want.

We should not deal with stress in bad ways because bad ways to cut down on

stress just lead to more troubles, for example, skipping out and leaving our

work undone, blaming our problems on someone else, stealing or cheating.

Blowing balloons is an interesting game. You may have some ideas of it. It is of great value to your health, especially to those who are fat. People usually make an airless balloon halfairfilled, put it on the hand, then blow it hard. Shortly after it flies up, his partner blows it away towards the opposite party. And the opposite blows it back.

Repeat doing so until the balloon drops onto the follr. Any party onto whose floor the balloon drops will be the loser. So any party who tries to control the balloon’s direction and blows it with great efforts will make the balloon fly straight to the other party and will have more opportunities to win.

[初一英语作文 Blowing Balloons

With big eyes， there is an emergency ears like flying up to now。 You guess what？ Let me guess， is the rabbit。

A rabbits eyes like ruby， of course， I also gave a name to my rabbit called ruby。 Because the rabbit eyes glistened like ruby。

Remember once， my mother took me to go for a walk， I bring my ruby went to the park。 Ruby remembered it home for many years， because of the ruby grew up in the park， but his mom and dad have vanished into thin air， I also know that the rabbit is very poor， but I also didnt find its relatives。 The rabbit ears soon ran off， may be sad， I had to chase her for a long time。

This is my favorite little animals。 Smart， lovely ruby。

眼睛大大的，有紧急情况耳朵像飞的一样竖起来了。大家猜猜是什么？猜不到吧，就是兔子。

兔子的眼睛像红宝石一样，当然，我也给我的兔子起了一个名字叫红宝石。因为兔子的眼睛像红宝石一样亮晶晶的。

记得有一次，妈妈带我去散步，我带着我的红宝石来到了公园。红宝石想起了它多年的家，由于红宝石是在公园里长大的，但是他的爸爸妈妈却消失得无影无踪，我也知道兔子很可怜，但是我也没有找到它的亲人。兔子很快就竖起耳朵跑了起来，可能是伤心了，我追了很久才追到。

这就是我最喜欢的小动物。聪明、可爱的红宝石。

I think reading is important in the whole life for people. There are many benefits of reading. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Before you learn to write, you must know how others write. Thirdly, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Finally, reading helps us become self-cultivation that would be beneficial to our whole life. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. Then, you may find the great charm and benefits of reading.

我认为阅读对人们来说是终身受用的.阅读有许多好处.首先,读书可以使我们增长见识,不出门,便可知天下事.其次,读书能够使我们的阅读和写作能力得到提高.在你学会如何写之前,你得首先知道别人怎么写.再者,阅读能扩宽我们的知识面和眼界,这对我们将来找工作是很重要的.最后,阅读使我们变得有修养,这对我们一生都是很有好处的.因此,不管你现在多大,不管你在干什么,现在就开始读书吧.然后,你就会发现阅读的魅力和好处了.

My family has two lovely bunny, they have a pair of ruby-like eyes, with the ball as interesting tail, there are a pair of long and white ears. They are very cute, you will certainly fall in love with them.

Bunny likes to eat rabbit grass. This is a very common grass, everywhere can see, green leaves, which can be squeezed out of fresh milk, very strange. I have never noticed this grass before, but now a rabbit, I know that the world has such a strange grass, and everywhere are the same with the weeds.

Bunny eat when the devour, less than ten seconds, you will find a little grass, because it has been in the belly of the bunny. Bunny will also be issued when the baby sounds very loud voice, "Pakistan twitter ... ..." I stood outside the meter can hear the sound. Oh, the two bunny looks so cute, why can I eat so ugly?

Bunny also like people will sleep like it! Every time you sleep, they will consciously went to my carefully prepared small mat, comfortable to lie down, the four fat fat feet down to their own Arms, for fear they are cold, and then slowly put the ruby-like eyes closed, shrink into a group, looks like a velvet snow white ball. I looked at them happily and covered them with green little quilts. In order not to wake them, I also called the people around to speak a little!

Bunny is very cute, their every action will make you crazy to love them, I have been the two "little star" fascinated.

Good is our traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Letter is a kind of invisible power, is also a kind of intangible wealth, or connect the rope of friendship. An honest man, no matter how much he has faults, when in contact with him, mind you will feel relaxed. Such a person, will be able to find happiness, achievement in career. This is because people, for the people who will be to one another.

Honesty is a jewel of great price, how many money can sell, also should not be discarded. Mencius said: "honesty, and the way of heaven; honesty of, the way of people also." Honesty is very important. Personal integrity is the principle of life, is also the embodiment of the interpersonal relationship. Enterprise honesty is a must to promote the development of enterprise good conditions. The integrity of the whole society is the guarantee of to the state and the people and the people and the countrys own performance. Overall integrity of a society is the society in every ones integrity, each persons integrity is the integrity of the enterprise, every enterprise directly influences the integrity of the peoples trust in the society.

Honesty is also the most common and most basic social ethics value needs. Todays society, with the increasingly complex of exchange relationship, increasingly strong market stereos need for integrity. Economic activities not only need good faith and political activity, all social sectors such as spiritual culture need to be honesty. Specifically, the partys 16 big reports to focusing on the honest and trustworthy, to strengthen the ideological and moral construction of the whole society.

Good faith is indispensable to life. If you dont have the good faith, we will have no better tomorrow. So we have to honest and trustworthy, to be a good citizen. That will make the world more beautiful even more brilliant.

一诺千金是我们中华民族的传统美德。信是一种无形的力量，也是一种无形的财富，还是连接友谊的绳索。一个诚实的人，不论他有多少缺点，同他接触时，心神你会感到清爽。这样的人，一定能找到幸福，在事业上会有所成就。这是因为以诚待人的人，别人也会以诚相见。

诚信是无价之宝，用多少钱都卖不了，也是不应该随意丢弃的。孟子说：“诚者，天之道也;诚之者，人之道也。”诚信是非常重要的。个人诚信是做人的原则，也是人际关系的体现。企业诚信是一个推动企业良好发展的必须条件。整个社会的诚信是对国家和人民的保证，同时也是人民和国家的自身表现。总的来说一个社会的诚信就是这个社会中每一个人的诚信，每个人的诚信就是个企业的诚信，每个企业的诚信直接影响人民对社会的信任程度。

诚信也是社会最普遍的也是最基本的伦理价值需要。当今社会，随着交换关系的日益复杂，市场立体对诚信的需要也日益强烈。不仅经济活动需要诚信，而且政治活动、精神文化等一切社会领域都需要诚信。党的十六大报告明确提出，要以诚实守信为重点，加强全社会的思想道德建设。

诚信是生活中不可缺少的。如果没了诚信，我们就没有美好的明天。所以我们要诚实守信，做个良好公民。这样世界才会更加美好更加灿烂。

I am a love reading girl, since I was young, I very love books, and book the indissoluble bond. I put the book as an indispensable nourishment, he saw a book like the hungry to see bread, fondle admiringly. Because the book is the source of human wisdom, is the ladder of human progress. Book give me knowledge and wisdom, and also gave me strength and courage. In my room, there is a large bookcase, there are all books, every birthday, mom and dad asked me to want what gift, I will blurt out: "a book, I as long as the book." When reading, I often forget all about eating and sleeping, as if into another world.

Reading, can make us grow many knowledge, solve the problem. On one occasion, grandmother domesticated some hares, hares to depilate, grandma see hares like bite lice, gradually to open mouth, the neck fur with red meat, and then use the tongue to the sides, and behind them in a hurry to say to me: "you see how this rabbit. Red meat are exposed, it doing?" . I to grandma said with a smile: "it is the hair removal, then fluff will regrow of glistening." My grandma listened to, smiled and said to me: "how do you know?" I proudly said: "from the book to see." It seems that these reading useless really big ah.

Colorful in the book, read the "lei feng diary let me know how people live to be more of others, read" how the steel was tempered "which I understand the difficulties cannot be back, have the perseverance and strong will to overcome difficulties.

The book is a kaleidoscope. Books are the grand view garden, the book of life colourful, here the color rings. Come on, let us into the ocean of the book.

我是个爱读书的女孩，我从小就十分喜爱书籍，和书结下了不解之缘。我把书当作不可缺少的营养品，看见书就像饥饿的人看到面包一样，爱不释手。因为书是人类智慧的源泉，书是人类进步的阶梯。书给我知识和智慧，也给了我力量和勇气。在我的房间里，放着一个大书柜，那里全都是书，每逢生日，爸爸、妈妈问我要什么礼物，我都会脱口而出：“书，我只要书。”读书的时候，我常常废寝忘食，仿佛进入了另一个世界。

读书，能使我们增长许多知识，解决问题。有一次，姥姥家养了些长毛兔，长毛兔要脱毛了，姥姥看到长毛兔像咬虱子似的，渐渐把脖子上的皮毛咬裂开口，露出红肉，然后又用舌头向身后舐着，着急地对我说：“你看这兔子是怎么了。红肉都露出来了，它在干什么呀?”。我笑着对姥姥说：“它是在脱毛呢，然后会重新长出白花花的绒毛。”姥姥听了，笑了，对我说：“你是怎么知道的呀?”我得意地说：“是从书上看到的。”看来这读书用处真不小呀。

书里的内容丰富多彩，读了《雷锋日记》让我懂得人活着要更多地为别人着想，读了《钢铁是怎样炼成的》使我懂得了遇到困难不能退缩，要有毅力和坚强的意志去战胜困难。

书是万花筒。书是大观园，书里的生活五彩缤纷，这里世界色彩斑澜。来吧，让我们起步入书的海洋。

书是一把雨伞，在我无助时小心翼翼地为我撑起一片蓝天；书是一道金光，使我一步步从黑暗中走向金光铺照的区域；书是一张纯洁的纸，抹去我心灵上的污点

当我拿起一本心仪的书，鼻子微微靠近，一股股浓浓的墨香扑鼻而入，如同一眼淙淙泉水洗刷我的心灵，每一页、每一张都有着让人回味无穷的奥秘。

我的数学一向不好，成绩永远在80分上下晃悠，无论怎样努力，成绩都无太大变化，我有点心灰意冷，觉得自己不是学数学的料，就想放弃。看见我不思进取、破罐子破摔的行为，妈妈鼓励我：“加油，你能行！”但背后却也无奈。我会经常在纸上乱画，捶打桌面来发泄，就在我欲哭无泪时，一本《再试一次》挽救了我。

那是一本极不起眼的书，淡蓝的封面上只有一株兰花，里面讲的是一位大学生毕业后，在商海中摸爬滚打，最后成为百万富翁的故事。情节并不新颖，还有些俗套，但里面有一句话令我印象很深：当你失败时，千万不要放松，如果此时放松，就失去成功的信念，那之前的努力就白费了。失败只是对你的考验，多一次失败，你就离成功近了一步，再试一次，或许你就成功了。难道我离打破数学“80”分的魔咒越来越近了？于是，我坚持了下来。

这是一句让我难忘的话，每当我失败沮丧时，就会想起这句话，也就会振作精神再试一次，终于我的数学成绩有了突飞猛进的变化，我笑了，妈妈笑了，我觉得那本书也笑了。

再美的彩虹也会消失，再夺目的花朵也会凋零，只有读书的收获会成为永恒的美丽。我将它们珍藏起来，使我受益终身。

我十分感谢书，我爱读书！

In the last century, the government carried out the policy of family

planning to control the increasing population. So most families have only one

child, but recently, a new policy has been announced and people can have the

second child. It sounds like the good news for the family, as the only child can

have a sibling to company. While for some parents, they seem to be not the

qualified parents. A boy complained that his parents’ second child was the smart

phone, because they lowed down their heads all the time. Many parents did not

realize the lack of communication with their children. If they want another

child, they’d better learn to communicate their kids first.

Things in life than the books. It can let us know the heaven and earth,

know life. It makes our temperament, not pleased by external gains, not to

sorrow. Books are our spiritual lair, the source of life. Achievements of

ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign, to has close relationship with books,

and is good at absorbing nutrition from the book. Get into the habit of hobby is

reading books from the reading, to experience the fun of reading, learning and

mastering some reading method, this is not the first great thing in life? Now, I

will share with you to read all kinds of fun!

A great pleasure in reading than when you when you are racking their brains

for a problem, mystery, or on a particular question seems to smell, open the

book, you will find that has been done to the full, in SAO itch you. The

"steady" feeling you so comfortable, so comfortable.

Reading for fun, different people have different for engaged in manual

Labour, a leisure reading; For people engaged in mental Labour, the book can be

a panacea, boredom, reading can be permitted; When sorrow, reading can lotus;

Reading can be smoothly when excited...

Reading gives a person is calm, quiet, comfortable happy, is fame, money

can not be replaced, the spirit of the book, like the human nutrition agent,

without it, life will be defect. Let us not leave a regret, picked up the book!

Sure you can understand the true meaning of life from the book!

There is an English saying.It says,"Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." Have you ever heard it before?It means that we should go to bed early and get up early.If we do,we shall be healthy.People must have enough time to sleep.We should sleep for 8 hours every day.So we must do our homework quickly and go to bed before 10 p.m.Proverbs can always give us some enlightenment.To know some proverbs is good for us.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

，I Like History Lesson，这是我喜欢历史课的英语作文范文，大家赶紧来看看吧。

The lesson I like most is history, because the historical stories are interesting. When I was a little child, my grandparents often told me the great events in history. In the middle school, we have history lesson. Some of my classmates think that history is uninteresting. And there are many things to remember, which is hard for them. However, I have different opinions. If you are interested in it, you will find it would be much easier. I like the ancient history of our country most. Our country has a long history, so there are many interesting stories. In addition, my history teacher is funny and knowledgeable. He always makes the lesson vivid and interesting. I like his lesson very much.

我最喜欢的课程是历史因为历史故事很有趣。当我还是个小孩的时候，我爷爷经常告诉我历史中的大事件。初中的时候我们开设了历史课。我有些同学认为历史没有意思，而且又很多东西要记，这对于他们来说很困难。但是我对此有不同的看法。如果你对它感兴趣就会觉得它容易得多。我最喜欢的是中国古代历史。我们国家历史悠久因此有很多有趣的故事。此外，我的历史老师很有趣而且学识渊博。他总是能够使课堂生动有趣，我很喜欢上他的课。

Miss Hou is my English teacher, she is 28, we all like her. My English is really bad at first, I am afraid of having Miss Hou’s class, when she finds this, she doesn’t blame me, she tells me that the only way I can learn English well is to fall in love with English, she asks me to watch English movie, it works. Miss Hou is my favorite teacher.

候老师是我的英语老师，她28岁，我们都很喜欢她。我的英语一开始真的很不好，我怕上候老师的课，当她发现了，她并没有责备我，她告诉我唯一能学好英语的方法就是喜欢上英语，她叫我去看英语电影，这起作用了。候老师是我最喜欢的老师。

If ask me who my favorite teacher is, I will no doubt answer you that Miss Hou is my favorite teacher. She is an English teacher, she is kind to everyone, she is not like other teachers who are so strict to students. As Miss Hou is so popular among students, students learn English with high enthusiasm, that is what they return to her. Miss Hou is a good teacher.

如果你问我我最喜欢的老师是谁，我会毫无疑问回答你候老师是我最喜欢的老师。她是一位英语老师，对每个人都很好，她不想其他的老师那样对学生很严格。候老师很受学生的欢迎，学生怀着很高的热情学习英语，这是他们所能回报她的。候老师是一位好老师。

I remember the first time I see Miss Hou, she walks in class, and then talks with students about small things. She doesn’t talk about English in the first class, everyone feels Miss Hou is so amiable, we like her so much. Miss Hou is good at teaching us, she explain the question very patiently, when we understand, she will be move to the next topic, Miss Hou is a good teacher.

我记得我第一次见到候老师，她走进教室，然后和学生讨论一些小事情。她在第一次课上并不讲英语，大家都觉得候老师很和蔼，我们很喜欢她。候老师很擅长教我们，她很耐心地解释问题，当我们明白了，她才会讲下一个题目，候老师是一名好老师。

“书是人类进步的阶梯”，这是高尔基的一句名言。而如今我也早已深深的爱上了书。

幼儿园时期在童话书的海洋里，我认识了许多童话人物：白雪公主，卖火柴的小女孩和青蛙王子等。这些人物在我童年时的脑海中常常浮现出来，而我也经常思考着这些童话故事，为什么白雪公主不能对付过她的继母？为什么没有人买小女孩手中的火柴呢？为什么难看的小青蛙会变成英俊的王子？直到现在我才知道，那些童话故事中的主角往往是善良的化身，不忍心对付那些心狠手辣的人，这样作者才能更加突出他们的善良。

走进小学的大门后，各种长短篇小说像磁铁一样吸引着我，我从此觉得那些童话故事太小儿科了，于是《简爱》、《大学》和《童年》等中外驰名的名著出现在我的视眼中。其中我最喜欢的一本就是《水浒传》了，这本书里介绍了梁山好汉们的结义、打斗的事情，使我身临其境，像是进入了书里的情景。

直到今天，我的书架上已经满满的，没有空档，我决定要读遍天下好书，让我的大脑里装满知识。

“读万卷书，行万里路。”我要畅游在书的海洋。

春雨淅淅沥沥的下个不停，滋润着世间万物。这些春雨近看如同一颗颗珍珠。远看好似一根根细小的绣花针，布满了天空，天地间如同在雾气之中，给春天增添了几分美丽的色彩。 The next next to the rain of spring rain, moisturizing all things in the world.These spring rain looks like pearls.From a distance, it looks like a small embroidery needle, covered with the sky, and the world is like in the mist, adding a bit of beautiful colors to spring.

春雨像细纱般，降临到了人间，在阳光的照耀下，好似一颗颗闪耀的钻石，为小草、大树又增添了几分色彩，几分华丽。

春雨像细纱般，降落到人间，轻抚着美丽的鲜花，让花儿不再害羞，尽情地绽放，向春天呈现出它的色彩。

春雨像细纱般的悄悄地来到农田，它浇灌着农民伯伯用自己勤劳的双手播种的希望。

春雷轰轰隆隆，敲开了河面的冰窗。让小溪快乐的流淌，春雨如同一个大钟，唤醒了河底的小鱼，告诉它们春暖花开的季节到了。春雨也如同一个服装师，给小溪穿上了它亲手制作的碧波涟漪。

小朋友们正在追逐嬉戏，春雨也如同一个可爱顽皮的孩子，被小朋友们的欢乐笑语吸引过来，和他们一起开始了游戏。春雨无处不在，它还来到了大山上，抚摸着这里游人的脸庞，让他们倍感清凉。

春雨也是一位魔术师，洗刷完空气和大地上的尘埃，还不忘最后的退场秀，给人们留下新的希望。

Recently, it has been reported that a boy argued with his father and then

he left home and the policed found him, taking him home after half a month. It

sounds so ridiculous for the boy to leave home for such a long time, but

thinking further, the lack of communication between the father and the son makes

this joke. There always some people wonder why we need to get higher education,

because we may not earn money as much as the workers. In my opinion, the purpose

of education is not for the money, but for the better person we will become. If

the father knows how to communicate with his son and his son is considerate,

then things wouldn’t become so bad. We need receive education and become the

wise person, so we can communicate better and create a harmonious

environment.