高三英语作文带翻译：投诉信【推荐20篇】

For the first time in everyones experience! For example: the first time to

ride a bicycle, write a book, play a computer for the first time, keep a dog for

the first time, etc! And my first time is climbing!

On a sunny holiday, our family unanimously decided to take exercise -

climbing Maanshan! Maanshan ecological park is located in the south of Yangwu

village, Daling mountain. The main peak is 329.2 meters above sea level. It is

divided into two small peaks at the front and back. It is named Maanshan because

of its shape similar to Maanshan. It used to be a quarry. All the stones mined

were transported to all parts of the city as building materials, bringing

considerable economic benefits to the local area and seriously damaging the

ecological environment. In order to build a civilized, harmonious and ecological

home, the village committee decided to close the quarry and invest 5 million

yuan to build it into an ecological park. Now there are Jinling, Qixingling,

Jiti stone, Qilin mountain and other scenic spots. When I came to the foot of

Maanshan, I stared at the top of Maanshan stupidly. In my mind, I thought of the

complacent expression of climbing to the mountain. After that, I cant wait to

follow the route to the top of the mountain!

At first, I was a living tiger, just like a hungry tiger, flying to the top

of the mountain! The road is getting steeper and steeper, and the fork road runs

across. Its half the way to the top of the mountain. After a long time, the

physical strength is naturally consumed and the knowledge is not much. Im

sweating!! Seeing thousands of houses, cars and pedestrians under my feet, I

secretly encouraged myself: there is still a little way to go, stick to it, and

soon climb to the top of the mountain, dont be discouraged, learn to stick to it

on this road! Only persistence can make people succeed! Time flows silently on

me. I climb to the top of the mountain. I am ecstatic and rush forward in one

breath. Finally climbed to the top of the mountain! Ah! The scenery at the top

of the mountain is so intoxicating and impressive!

As if everything under my feet is my world! The whole village can be seen

clearly. I learned a truth from it, that is: in life, whether it is laid-off, or

encountered difficulties, or be fired and so on. Dont be discouraged. As a human

being, we should learn not to be discouraged in the face of difficulties. In all

kinds of tests of life, just like climbing a mountain, we cant give up halfway,

as long as we stick to it, we will succeed!

I like riding bicycle

Today,I rode bicycle to travel around the Guilin central.I enjoy the

scenery while riding bicycle.The scenery of Guilin was so beautiful that I

couldnt help to take photos,which finally cause my cellphone lacked of

memory.Riding bicycle is not only helps me to keep fit，it also a good way for me

to travel and enjoy scenery.I like riding bicycle.

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我喜欢骑自行车

今天，我骑自行车游玩桂林市区。我一边骑车一边欣赏风景。桂林的风景真的很美丽，让我忍不住拍照，结果导致我手机内存不足。骑车不仅帮助我保持身体健康，对我来说也是可以用于游玩和欣赏风景的好方式。

Bat falling upon the ground was caught by a Weasel, ofwhom he earnestly besought his life. The Weasel refused,saying, that he was by nature the enemy of all birds. TheBat assured him that he was not a bird, but a mouse, andthus saved his life.

Shortly afterwards the Bat again fellon the ground, and was carght by another Weasel, whom helikewise entreated not to eat him. The Weasel said that hehad a special hostility to mice. The Bat assured him thathe was not a mouse, but a bat; and thus a second timeescaped.It is wise to turn circumstances to good account.

一只蝙蝠坠落到地面上来，被一只鼠狼捉住了，蝙蝠哀求讨饶。鼠狼不答应，说它自己最爱和鸟类为敌。蝙蝠便证明它自己不是鸟，只是一只老鼠，因此鼠狼就放了它。

不久这只蝙蝠又坠落到地上来，被另一只鼠狼捉住，它同样地哀求讨饶。那鼠狼说它自己最恨老鼠，蝙蝠证明自己并不是老鼠，而是一只蝙蝠；因此，它第二次又安然地逃离危险了。随机应变乃聪明之举。

[少儿英语作文带翻译：蝙蝠和鼠狼

MY SCHOOL LIFE 我的学校生活

When I was six years old, I began to go to school. The first school (which) I attended was a primary school. There were many subjects (which were taught in the school, such as Chinese, arithmetic, history, geography, drawing and so forth. Since I was (became) a student, I studied very hard. My parents were quite proud of me.

After I had studied there for three years, I entered a junior high school. When I was twelve years old, I became a student of a senior high school. I still studied very hard. Except on sick leave I was never absent from class. Everybody looked upon me as a model student.

我六岁的时候，就开始上学了。我第一个上的学校是一所国小。学校里教的课目有许多，诸如国文，算术，史地，画图等等。既然我是一个学生，我就用功读书。我父母深以我为荣。

我在那边读了三年后，就进入初中。我十二岁的时候，就成为一个高中的物理学。我依旧用功读书。除病假外，我永不缺课。人人都把我看作是一个模范生。

[我的学校生活英语日记带翻译

My childhood, it is a song with a happy mood, a record of my childhood fun, big and small.

Remember once, my mother to sleep on the sofa, 3 years old I sit on the floor playing with blocks, three feet saliva down, and I am also helping to put on a pair of, silly smile. Suddenly, I saw a like rabbit ears two iron piece, and put on a small black ball. I take this black things, bare little feet "kipper, snapped," ran the sofa over there.

Then I "ride" on mom, picked up the iron went to mother in the nostrils, mother was I woke, see this stupid idea, I will understand. Mom smiled and took me, I gladly run. Mother catch up with me, a picked up said to me: "kid, dont always think of some way to deal with me!" I jumped out of his mothers arms and ran away.

This is my childhood story, remember now, I feel funny.

我的童年，是一首带着欢乐调子的歌曲，记录着我童年大大小小的趣事。

记得有一次，妈妈在沙发上睡觉，3岁的我自己坐在地上玩积木，口水垂下三尺，我也顾不上抹一把，傻呵呵地笑着。突然，我看到一个好似兔耳朵的两个铁皮儿片儿，插在一个黑色的小圆球上。我拿着这黑东西，光着小脚丫“吧嗒、吧嗒”地往沙发那边跑。

然后，我“骑”在妈妈身上，拿起铁片就往妈妈鼻孔里插，妈妈被我弄醒了，瞧见我这副傻样儿，就明白了。妈妈笑着拍了我一下，我乐呵呵地跑了。妈妈追上我，一把抱起我说：“小鬼，别总是想办法对付我了!”我跳出妈妈的怀抱，跑了。

这就是我的童年趣事，现在回忆起来，就觉得可笑。

导语：近年来,环境保护仍存在许多问题。其中最严重的问题之一是空气、水和土壤的严重污染。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reduced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

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近年来,环境保护仍存在许多问题。其中最严重的问题之一是空气、水和土壤的严重污染。污染的空气对人体健康有害。污染的水导致疾病和死亡。此外,随着现代城市的快速发展,植被已大大减少。

为了保护环境,许多国家的政府做了很多。已采取立法步骤控制空气污染,保护森林和海洋资源,制止任何环境污染。因此,政府在今天的环境保护中发挥着最重要的作用。

我认为,要保护环境,政府必须采取更具体的措施。首先,它应该让人们通过教育充分认识到环境保护的重要性。第二,应该更加努力使人口规划政策付诸实践,因为更多的人意味着更多的人意味着更多的污染。最后,故意破坏环境的人应该受到严惩。我们应该让他们知道破坏环境意味着毁灭人类自己。

On the side of the mountain some cannot calculate measuring the height of the building.

It is a mountain, the mountain of overgrown with weeds and jungle, covered with white paper and the piles of the tomb.

Dreamed of in a flash difference to pull open. The depth of the lingering thoughts like write lyrics. Dead, whats the point? Alive, what is the value?

Busy all day not intentional. Spare time thought of love, career, family love, friendship. Is that there is no thought that green filled with trees and grass, colorful flowers and BaoLei, the calm mind suddenly enlightened rainbow after the rain, the head of the blue sky. White clouds, and birds. And suddenly touching the water in the mountain.

How much time back home, watching the sunset in the mountains down, listen to the well flying birds twitter called, feeling from underground water cools the ding-dong, see the distant mountains and Jeremy goldkorn, as well as in the jungle, which is totally neatly long picnic, sleep in the evening on the grass in the open to hear of the worm light at night...

Unable to describe the good and noble sentiment. A mountain, located in the hometown of the soil at home and left me through overlapping ignorance of stone and NiBa Road for several times, when ignorance of boring let me miss. Once upon a time... Originally I only belong to natural, not to return to earth. Dont want to grow up, and time just tested the fragile life.

Really want to make a pot of wine, drunk in my country.

山的一边上又多了几幢无法算测高度的楼房。

那是一座山，一座长满野草和丛林的山，还有就是那一堆堆挂满白纸的坟墓。

没想到差别竟在一瞬间拉了开。像写抒情诗一样地缠绵思想的深度。死了，有何意义?活着，有何价值?

整天忙碌无心。空闲的时候想到过爱情，事业，亲情，友情。就是没有想到过那绿腾腾的树林和野草，那缤纷的花儿和苞蕾，那雨后沉着思想豁然开朗的彩虹，那头上的蓝天。白云和飞鸟。还有忽然触到的山中水流。

多少次回到家乡，看夕阳夹在山中落下的情景，听那学成飞舞的小鸟儿叽喳叫过，感受来自地下的水的清冽叮咚，看远方的山峦和高岗，还有就是在那些长得整整齐齐的丛林中搞野炊，睡在空旷傍晚的草地上听入夜的虫儿轻鸣……

无法形容那些好和高尚的情操。家乡的一座山，家乡的土，留下了我走过重叠无知好几次的石头和泥巴路，小时侯无知时的趣让我怀念。从前……本来我只属于自然，不回归尘世。本来不想长大，而时间硬是检验了脆弱的生命。

真的想提一壶酒，醉到在我的乡村。

My name is Li Haoyi. Im nine years old. Im a monkey. School: Park Primary School, class two (3).

I was a lively and cheerful and brave pupils in the class is worthy of the name "big star". I was very good at math. I was sealed by Mr. Zhou as a representative of math class. I also got the good praise from Mr. Huang.

Once, I saw in the exercises when the teacher Huang and Professor Zhou refers to me, I think that is calling me. After the exercise, the teacher let my mother come to school, I was more nervous! When my mother talked to the teacher, I knew that my sister was praised. (call to a false alarm.)

Look, this is me!

Mingming came to my house today. We spent some time playing computer games.

We played basketball game online. I chose NBA and Mingming had to take CBA. Of

course, I won finally. We had a good time.

明明今天来我家。我们一起玩电脑游戏。我们打在线篮球游戏。我选NBA 球队，明明只能选CBA球队。当然，我赢了。我们玩的很开心。

tknown before. I gain some knowledge about animal life, such as, different

lives of various kinds of animals, the relationship between people and nature,

people and animal, and the importance of animal protection. I want to say that

animals are part of nature as we are. They can not be separated from the humans.

We must keep nature in balance. Please give your love to animals. Stop killing

them.

scourage and stamina. He lost his gold medal because of his illness. As

soon as he regretfully put down his gun, he fell unconscious and was earried

away on a stretcher. Mo Huilen also lost her gold medal painfully. The young

girl was not satisfied with a silver and braved for the gold at the risk of

losing it. She showed the true spirit of sportsmanship. I sing in praise of them

even if they lose. In my opinion we should praetice what we preach and stick to

the Olympic creed that the most important thing in the Olympic Games is not to

win but to take part, just as the most important thing in life is not the

triumph but the struggle. The essential thing is not to have conquered but to

have fought wen.

slove animals. Never do any harm to them.

以前就知道了。我对动物生活有了一些了解，比如，各种动物的不同生活方式，人与自然的关系，人与动物的关系，以及保护动物的重要性。我想说的是，动物和我们一样都是自然的一部分。它们离不开人类。我们必须保持自然的平衡。请把你的爱献给动物。别杀了他们。

勇气和毅力。他因病失去了金牌。他一遗憾地放下枪，就不省人事，被担架抬走了。莫慧琳也痛失金牌。这个年轻的女孩对一枚银币不满意，冒着丢失的危险去抢金子。她表现出真正的体育精神。即使他们输了，我也要赞美他们。在我看来，我们应该践行我们所宣扬的，并坚持奥林匹克信条：奥林匹克运动会最重要的不是胜利而是参与，正如生命中最重要的不是胜利而是斗争。最重要的不是征服了，而是战胜了_。

爱动物。不要伤害他们。

★高中英语日记100字★

★初中英语日记范文★

★小学英语日记带翻译★

★儿童节英语日记★

My day was good and bad.

In the morning, I go to class at 8, in the second class, we met a substitute teacher, the teacher to our special good, particularly concerned about us, for our sake. We have a pleasant time of it in the morning.

But not a well in the afternoon, my father and I eat for lunch after dinner went to the new supermarket, with 40 RMB card to buy things, bought a bunch of things, and finally the invoicing, the salesman told us that this card is in the big shopping mall shopping, but cannot be used here. Can pay cash! Bad luck!

My day just passed, and there are good and bad!

我的这一天过的又好又不好。

早晨，我8点去上课，到第二节课的时候，我们遇到一个代课老师，那老师对我们特别的好，特别关心我们，什么都为我们着想。我们都愉快的度过了一上午。

可下午可不怎么顺利了，我和爸爸中午吃了饭后去了新百超市，拿着四十元的卡去买东西，买了一堆东西，最后结账的时候，售货员告诉我们这个卡是在上面的大商场购物，但在这里不能用。能掏现金了!倒霉呀!

我的一天就这么过去了，又有好事又有坏事!

大家好！我叫茅庆东，今年13岁了，在金碧实验学校读书。

Hello everyone！ My name is Mao Qingdong. I am 13 years old and I am studying at the Golden Blue experimental school.

小的时候，别人说我像个男孩子，没错，我的确没点孩子的样儿。我像猴儿一样，以开心起来，像疯了似的，一个劲儿地跳。爸爸说习惯成自然，别再跳了！可是我哪儿会听呢？

When I was young, people said I was a boy. Yes, I did not have a child. I like monkeys like to laugh, like crazy, a kick to jump. Dad said that the habit was natural, dont jump again! But where can I hear it?

我的爱好是数学和英语。数学老师和英语老师非常喜欢我，特别是英语老师，对我，总摆出那张慈祥的脸孔，数学老师也一样，每次都以娃娃脸来面对我，而我的数学和英语成绩总是很好的。当然，语文也一样。

My hobbies are math and English. Math teachers and English teachers like me very much, especially English teachers. They always show Zhang Cixiangs face to me. As for math teachers, they always face me with dolls, but my math and English scores are always good. Of course, the same is the same in Chinese.

我喜欢西瓜和芒果，他们的味道非常好，你也不妨去试试!

I like watermelon and mango. Their taste is very good. You might as well try it!

我喜欢跑步，他对我的身体有着很大的好处。我有一个远大的理想，那就是我要当一名伟大的企业家，所以我还喜欢天蓝色和银白色，它代表着我要飞向天空。

I like to run, and he has a great advantage for my body. I have a lofty ideal, that is, I want to be a great entrepreneur, so I also like sky blue and silver white. It means I want to fly to the sky.

我是个好胜心非常强的人。考试时，别人比我考得好，我不服气，平时更加努力，结果取得了更好的成绩，因为我知道，只有海胜心腔的孩子，才会取得成功！

I am a very strong person ambition. In the exam, others did better than I did. I was not convinced, usually I worked harder, and I got better results, because I knew that only the children of Haisheng heart cavity could succeed.

我的优点是勇敢，我勇敢地去参加所有的竞赛，而且已参加，就必须给捧个证书回来，否则，我是不会甘心的。我的缺点是不爱举手回答问题，我也常对自己说，难道我的手就如千斤这么重么？怕什么？明天我就举手！可是到了第二天，我又像老鼠那样，缩到地洞去了，不是我会改正它的。

My advantage is bravery. I am brave to take part in all the competitions, and I have to take part in, and I have to give a certificate back. Otherwise, I wont be willing to be willing. My shortcoming is that I do not love to raise my hand to answer the question, and I often say to myself, is my hand as heavy as a kilo? What are you afraid of? Ill raise my hand tomorrow! But on the second day, I was like a mouse, and I shrunk to the cave, and I wouldnt correct it.

这就是我，你喜欢我么？

This is me. Do you like me?

Protecting the Environment

In the last several decades, our earth has been extremely polluted, such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on. In recent years, the extreme weather becomes more and more frequent. Winter gets colder and summer becomes hotter and it rains more frequently. All of these warn us that protecting the environment is a serious and emergent event. As our general people, we should build proper lifestyle. We should pay attention to water and light saving. When we go out, we should firstly choose the public transportation. The most important is that we must realize that we can do a lot of things to protect our environment. Its our duty to make our home better. Let’s change from ourselves.

在过去的几十年里，我们的地球已经极度污染，比如大气污染，水污染以及噪音污染等等。近几年，极地气候越来越频繁。冬天越来越暖，夏天越来越热，还经常下雨。所有的这些都警示我们保护环境是一件严肃紧迫的事。作为普通老百姓，我们应该形成合适的生活方式。我们应该注意节约水电。出门的时候我们应该首选公共交通。最重要的是我们必须意识到我们可以做很多事情来保护我们的环境。使我们的家园变得更美好是我们的责任。让我们从自己开始改变。

[初中英语作文及翻译：保护环境

A friend is a lamp, guide you; when you lost A friend is an umbrella, zhefengdangyu for you when you difficult; A friend is a fire, warm you when you have the cold; A friend is...

My friend is an honest modesty, learning super nice man, he did not talk much, at ordinary times but gushing in helping me. In my mind, he was the one who can do real friends.

About me and his story, it was three days and three nights also said not over. Remember that a few days before the final exam last semester, I suddenly a cold have a fever, it can, in order not to affect the final exam, my mother let me temporarily leave an injection, after two or three days sick, but my class fell in, although is not new review period, but a key part of the review but I missed it. I, recovering from a back to school, was like a cat on hot bricks, at that moment, he comes silently behind me, gave me a pat, and then put the book on the table, "I knew you would try so hard, its not, you didnt come to this a few days, I made notes in detail, however, will wait for you to come back, I well give you, so you cant drop too much." Listening to his words, I suddenly realize, looked at his sincere, warm in my heart, even say a word, just nodded his head. Then, he carefully explain the review the content of a few days, I seriously listen, with his help, I put the knowledge learned.

When I need his uninvited; In when I am in trouble, he brought me help; When I get good grades, he happy for me. In my disappointment, he gave me encouragement, he is my true friend.

朋友是明灯,在你失落时指引你;朋友是把伞,在你困难时为你遮风挡雨;朋友是团火,在你寒冷时温暖你;朋友是……

我的朋友是一个诚实谦虚,学习超好的人,他平时的话不多,但在帮助我的时候却滔滔不绝。在我的心目中,他才是可以做真正朋友的人。

说起我和他的故事,那简直是三天三夜也说不完。记得那是上学期期末考试的前几天,我突然感冒发烧了,实在打不起精神,为了不影响期末考试,妈妈让我暂时请假打针,过了两三天病就好了,可我的课却落下了一大截,虽然是复习期间没有新课,但复习的关键部分我却错过了。大病初愈的我回到学校时,急得就像热锅上的蚂蚁,就在这时,他悄悄地来到我身后,轻轻地拍了我一下,然后把书本摆在桌上,“我就知道你会着急,这不,你没来这几天,我可是详细地做了笔记,就等你回来,我好给你讲,这样你就不能落下太多了。”听了他的话,我恍然大悟,望着他那诚恳的模样,我心里热呼呼的,一时间竟然说不出话来,只是点了点头。然后,他仔细地讲解着这几天复习的内容,我认真地听着,在他的帮助下,我把落下的知识学会了。

在我需要时,他不请自来;在我困难时,他给我帮助;在我取得好成绩时,他替我高兴;在我失望时,他给我鼓励,他就是我真正的朋友。

My summer vacation

This years summer vacation, I so happy.

The summer vacation, I at home carefree get boring, until one day, my dance teacher told me that we are still in perfect order, dance dance of the class is rhythm feeling worse, if good rhythm, can go to the match in a couple of months.

Once I listen to, the game soon, then looking for right away. Ah! Where there is a plate to exercise good rhythm?

"Ah," I sighed. Suddenly remind of a computer. Yi? The computer can play MP3, isnt it? Ha ha! Some I le. I immediately opened up the computer, listening to music. I have heard for three weeks, finally recognized the lasting appeal. Turned out to be "dong man dong man" "dong man dong man" every first "dong" is "a" first "man" is "2" the second "dong" is "three" the second "man" is the "four". Rhythm is "1234, 1234" repeatedly, but want to use English.

I believe that as long as we work hard and have good grades.

Happy summer vacation, happy summer vacation, summer vacation without anxiety.

我的暑假

今年的暑假，我过的特别开心。

暑假，我在家闲得无聊，直到有一天，我的舞蹈老师告诉我，我们这个班舞蹈跳的还是井井有条，就是节奏感差些，要是节奏感好，过几个月就可以去比赛了。

我一听，马上就要比赛了，便马上到处找起来。啊!哪里有碟子让了锻炼好节奏感啊?

"哎"我叹了口气.突然想起电脑.咦?电脑不是可以播放MP3吗?呵呵!有的我乐了。我立即把电脑开起来，听曲子。我听了整整三个礼拜，终于听出了里面的韵味。原来是"咚哒哒咚哒哒""咚哒哒咚哒哒"每第一个"咚"就是"一"第一个"哒哒"就是"二"第二个"咚"就是"三"第二个"哒哒"就是"四"。节奏就是"一二三四，一二三四"重复不停的念，不过要用英文。

我相信，只要我们努力比拼，就一定会有好成绩的。

开心的暑假，快乐的暑假，没有忧虑的暑假。

[我的暑假生活英语作文带翻译3篇

An interesting thing happened on yesterday.At night,when I was sleepping ,I

dreamed I sleeping on a dogs body,and the dog suddenly jumping up and shouting

at me,he said:"I want to eat you,you smell very delicious!"Then I ran away

quickly......"ling ling ling!!!"A big sound was happened,I woke up

quickly,then,I thought,where I am?Oh,that is my dream,just a dream.

昨晚发生了一件有趣的事情。晚上，当我睡觉的时候，我梦到自己睡在一只狗的身上。这只狗突然跳起来，并且冲着我大叫：“我要吃了你，你闻起来太美味了。”我吓的快速的逃跑。。。“呤呤呤”我在一阵响亮的声音中醒来，然后想：我在哪?哦，我在做梦，幸好那仅仅是一个梦。

Hello everyone！ My name is Chen Jiaobing. I have a pair of eyes, curved eyebrows, not tall nor short, every hair in a ponytail.

My favorite color is blue. My hobby is singing and dancing... My favorite people are my family, my friends and the people worthy of my respect.

My greatest dream is to have wings of angels or elves and fly freely in the blue sky. I am very outgoing, I like to make friends, to be good to friends.

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

My summer holiday, I will

Looking forward, looking forward to, the annual summer vacation is finally here!

I cheerfully summer of a better life for their design: first of all, I will read many books, Yang hongying, zheng yuanjie, I want to once see a enough; Also, I want to exercise my body well, swimming, playing, ride a bike, I want to be in a happy movement minus my whole body fat...

But, mother is pushing a boring summer vacation plan to me: morning, learn aoshu; In the afternoon, learn, English writing; In the evening, summer vacation homework. Oh my god! Where this is leisurely summer vacation, this is clearly a new summer class!

I protest! My summer holiday, I decide! My mother schedule discontentedly, write a few words - "I want to happy! I want to relax!"

Yes, I want to learn, also want to play, my summer vacation must is up to me.

我的暑假我作主

盼望着、盼望着，一年一度的暑假终于到了!

我兴致勃勃地为自己设计暑期的美好生活：首先，我要读很多课外书，杨红樱的、郑渊洁的，我要一次看个够;还有，我要好好锻炼我的身体，游泳、打球、骑自行车，我要在快乐的运动中减去我的一身肥肉……

可是，妈妈却把一份令人生厌的暑假计划推给我：上午，学奥数;下午，学写作、英语;晚上，做暑假作业。天哪!这哪里是悠闲的暑假，这分明是一所新开的暑假课堂!

我抗议!我的暑假我作主!我不满地拿过妈妈的计划表，在上面写上几个大字——“我要快乐!我要放松!”

是的，我要学习，也要玩，我的暑假必须由我作主。

Spring is coming, a burst of spring rain also arrived. The rain continuous underground, silently onto the earth. A few days later, I want to go to long gang mountain, see the spring is really about.

Just to long post at the foot of the mountain, I was shocked that the beauty of spring, see, originally a piece of yellow mountain, green trees now, as if everything is contended for replacement of spring, lianshan cabin door the row of winter haruki was just out of twigs to cover. Spring scenery like will flow, from here to there, is a piece of green, the mountain is the sea of green.

Appreciate for a moment, I went to the mountains. Just entered the trail, the trees on both sides of the attracted me. Pieces of stretching to bud, green as jade, like a jasper, like paint on. Some still leaf buds, leaves embrace each other together, like a group of good brothers inseparable. These branches swaying trees, for the long gang mountain contributed the most to life.

Looked down and saw more than the trees green with a green came into my eyes, I stare big eyes, carefully looked at the gorgeous color. The green green a little more than pale green, but more shallow than the plum green. In the light of the sun, will also reflect a bright light. This is invisible to the green in normal times, only in the spring of the mountain, to see this mysterious green. In the soft grass, there are pieces of beautiful wild flowers. These small and exquisite flowers, one here, there, one point for grass cui more beautiful. A gust of wind blowing, several kinds of flowers together, refreshing.

This is the long gang mountain and the beautiful spring, makes me intoxicated.

春天来了，一阵阵春雨也到来了。雨绵绵地下着，无声无息地洒向人间。过了几天，我便想去长岗山看看，看看春天到底是怎样的。

刚到长岗山脚下，我就被这春天的美丽给怔住了，看，原本一片枯黄的山，现在已经树木葱茏了， 仿佛一切都争着更换春装，连山中小屋门前那排冬春树也被刚抽出来的嫩枝给覆盖了。春色仿佛会流动似的，从这儿到那儿，都是一片绿色，整座山都是绿色的海洋。

欣赏了一会儿，我就向山里走去。刚走进小道，两旁的树木就吸引了我。一片片舒展开来的嫩叶，绿的好像是翡翠，像碧玉，像是用颜料涂上去似的。有的还是叶苞，一片片叶子互相抱在一起，好像一群难分难舍的好兄弟。这些枝叶婆娑的树，为长岗山贡献了最多的生机。

往下一看，比树木更绿的一抹绿进入了我的眼帘，我瞪大眼睛，仔细地看着这艳丽的颜色。这绿色比嫩绿更绿一点，但又比梅绿更浅一点。在太阳的照耀下，还会反射出亮丽的光芒。这种绿在平时是看不到的，唯有在春天的山上，才能目睹这种神秘的绿色。在软绵绵的草丛中，有一朵朵美丽的野花。这些小巧玲珑野花，这儿一朵，那儿一族，为草丛点璀得更美。一阵风吹过，几种花香融合在一起，沁人心脾。

这就是长岗山美丽的春天，令我陶醉。

There is no doubt that we should never go out there to see what happens; instead, we should take actions to make things happen. A telling example is Youyou Tu. She and her colleagues made 380 extracts from 2,00 herbs before they finally succeeded in discovering the pure substance qinghaosu, which can be used to treat malaria. As we all know, there were numerous scientists who wanted to find this substance, but it was her firm actions that made her the first Chinese Nobel laureate in medicine.

Why?Reasons are quite simple and can be listed as follows. To begin with, only by taking actions can we find the best way to solve those problems we are facing, but as a bystander, we can learn nothing meaningful. In addition, in an age full of ruthless and relentless competitions, without taking actions to make things happen, we are bound to lose those valuable opportunities. For instance, if Apple had just gone out there to see what happens in mobile phones, it could not have presented the amazing product, iPhone, to us.

Accordingly, we college students should not just be a watcher but a doer. In my humble opinion, we can start from applying what we have learned into practice.

毫无疑问,我们永远不应该走出去看看发生了什么;相反,我们应该采取行动让事情发生。一个生动的例子就是由你。她和她的同事做了380提取物2 00草药才终于发现了纯物质青蒿素,可用于治疗疟疾。我们都知道,有很多的科学家们想找到这种物质,但这是她公司的行为,让她第一个中国医学诺贝尔奖得主。

为什么?原因很简单,可以列出如下。首先,只有采取行动才能找到最好的方法解决我们面临这些问题,但作为一个旁观者,我们可以学到什么有意义的事情。此外,在一个充满残酷和无情的竞争时代,没有采取行动让事情发生,我们注定要失去这宝贵的机会。例如,如果苹果刚刚在手机看看会发生什么,它不可能呈现惊人的产品,iPhone,给我们。

因此,我们大学生不应该只是一个观察者,但一个实干家。依我拙见,我们可以从应用所学付诸实践。