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925初中假期的英语作文
全文共 1866 字
+ 加入清单Tired of the dull day of the holiday, there was a habit of walking on the street。
Just go out, days of rain, like the night sky in the fog, with a wind chill。 Fortunately, shops on both sides of the street lights to create a warm cold, I suzhebozi towards darkness。 Suddenly cried out in a calm shock eardrum: Hey, man, get up! Go away。 With the sound! found a man crouched in the roof。 The shadow with different differences, people spontaneously gathered in the past。
Then a light house, I looked at the old man shivering body, with disheveled hair, worn underwear。。。。。。 involuntarily shivered。 People around together more, who shouted nature is the owner, but we do not know the origin of the elderly。
Some in the crowd whispering, some cigarette in the limited, some in the head sigh。。。。。。 suddenly I felt a moment of silence。 The mouth parched and tongue scorched after a child shouted: Daddy, grandpa is not cold? yes! everyone seems to be inspired by the what, many people began negotiations with the owner。 Under the watchful eyes of the people, the owner blushed, everyone help homeowners。 To restore the confidence, and the boys to act tough and talk soft helped the old man into the room, a middle-aged man has Fengfenghuohuo beside the restaurant brought in hot surface。
Some people off。 I -- an onlooker chouchushou from his trouser pocket, came back to me naive children, in shame to take a step。
厌倦了假期白日的平淡,于是就有了在街道上散步的癖好。
刚出门,天就微雨,似夜空中的雾,沾满了一身,夜风凉飕飕的。幸好街道两旁的店家灯火给寒冷平添了几许暖意,我缩着脖子走向黑暗。蓦地一声断喝在平静中震荡耳膜:喂,老头,快起来!快走开啊!随着声音在一处屋檐的阴影中发现了一个蜷曲着的老人。伴着不同的差异,人们不约而同地围了过去。
接着屋里的一片灯光,我打量着老人发抖的身子,低垂的蓬乱的头发,破旧的衣裤。。。。。。不由地打了个寒颤。周围的人越聚越多,叫喊的人自然是房主,但大家都不知道老人的来历。
人群之中有的在窃窃私语,有的在有限地点烟,有的在摇头叹气。。。。。。我忽然感到口干舌燥了。片刻沉默后,一个童音在嚷:爸爸,老爷爷不冷吗?是啊!大家似乎是受到了什么启发,好些人开始跟房主交涉,众目睽睽之下,房主涨红了脸,:大伙帮个忙。房主恢复了自信,和几个小伙软硬兼施地把老人扶进了房内,一个中年人已经风风火火地在旁边的饮食店中拿来了热腾腾的面。
好些人散去了。我--一位看客,从裤兜里抽出手,耳边回响起幼稚的童音,在羞愧中重新迈开脚步。
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篇1:初中假期的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Every vacation is expected, every holiday is memorable, every holiday is worth remembering, every holiday is colorful, every holiday is wonderful. The long-awaited vacation that really makes people feel relaxed and wanted the bag flew into the air and let him ruin, hate books will be torn in two, with the solution of the heart "stuffy" school for such a long time, always feel like chanting, blankly.
In October 1st, there was an inevitable national day of golden week. I heard from my familys TV that Change two will launch and launch at the Xichang Satellite Launch Center at eighteen fifty-nine, fifty-seven seconds in October 1st this year. I took off at nineteen oclock. When I witnessed the great cause of aviation in China, I remembered the Change No.1. It has applied for more than 10 patents, and more than 80 patents are being applied. The Change two should be better because the times are improving. Ive also heard about the Diaoyu Island in China. - the Diaoyu Islands, the full name of "Diaoyu Islands" shidori called Senkaku islands". The Diaoyu Islands by the Diaoyu Islands, yellow tail Island, Akao Island, South Island, North Island, South Island, North Island and flying Seto island and other islands, a total area of about seven square kilometers. It is located in the east longitude 123 degree - 124 degree 34 ", the north latitude 25 - 4" - 26 degrees.
Think about the history of China and think about Chinas present. Though China is very weak on the surface, if todays president wants to dominate the world, China can still do it.
每一个假期都是令人期待的;每一个假期都是令人难忘的;每一个假期都是值得回味的;每一个假期都是丰富多彩的;每一个假期都是奇妙的。盼望已久的假期一到,真是让人倍感轻松,恨不得让书包飞到空中让他自取灭亡,恨不得将书本撕成两半,以解心头之‘闷’,开学这么长时间了,总觉得像念经,呆呆的。
十月一日,有一个无法忘记的国庆黄金周,这次我在家中的电视中得知了嫦娥二号将于今年十月一日十八时五十九分五十七秒在西昌卫星发射中心点火发射。十九时整起飞,当我亲眼目睹了中国的航空伟业的时候,我又想起了嫦娥一号,它已经申请了十多项专利,而且还有八十多项专利正在申请中,这个嫦娥二号应该会更好,因为时代在进步。我还听说了,中国的xx事见。——xx,全称“xx群岛”,倭人称其为“尖阁列岛”。xx群岛由xx、黄尾岛、赤尾岛、南小岛、北小岛、大南小岛、大北小岛和飞濑岛等岛屿组成,总面积约七平方公里。它位于东经123°——124°34″,北纬25°4″——26°。
想一想中国的历史,想一想中国的现在,中国表面上虽然很弱,但如果今天的主席向称霸世界的话,中国还是可以做到的,只是现在的主席想的只是和平而已。
篇2:我的学习初中英语作文
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篇3:初中国庆英语
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+ 加入清单national day plan
with the coming of national day, i have a one week holiday.
i really expect to it, because i want to have a short trip during these days.
i will travel tojiuzhaivalleywith my parents for three days.
i have heard that the scenery ofjiuzhaivalleyis very beautiful in autumn and it’s the best time to travel there.
autumn is my most favorite season so i want to enjoy the beauty of such a wonderful place.
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i am sure it will be a wonderful journey.
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篇4:保护环境的初中英语作文
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篇5::初中写秋雨的英语作文
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The spider is afraid to hide in the leaves, the geese insist for their own dreams, braving the rain, flying in the air ... ...
The rain was still falling from the sky, and the house was surrounded by rain. From the window, the window seemed to be surrounded by a layer of gauze, and I looked like a waterfall.
After a while, the rain was getting smaller. From the window looked, and a new look, misty rain, like a needle like, I am good to observe, the rain stopped, the field was restored calm, the streets painted a long river. Open the window to see, like in the sea, the air is particularly fresh, the spider hanging from the tree. A rainbow hanging in the sky, that scenery do not mention the United States.
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+ 加入清单My Plan for Winter Holiday
How time flies. This term ends quickly and the winter holiday is coming. I make a general plan for it. Firstly, my teachers leave us some homework, so I must earnestly finish them on time. I plan to finish them before the Spring Festival, and then I can enjoy the festival with all my heart. Secondly, I will spend some time with my friends. Generally, we study together but have little time to play. During the holiday, we want to have fun together. Finally, I will visit my grandparents with my parents, and then we will spend the Spring Festival with them. I haven’t seen them for a long time. I miss them very much. This is my winter holiday plan. What is yours?
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Every day,I will go to exercise for an hour,it can let me have a strong
healthy body.I will arrange two hours to do the teacher the assignment.Reading
for an hour,reading can let me know a lot of extra-curricular knowledge,to the
all-round development.We will accumulate some good word,when reading a book to
improve my writing.
Except,I will also let the parents give me quote some interest groups,let
me batteries.Floods and other disasters in learning to swim,to save his life.To
learn the piano,can develop around the brain,flexible with your fingers.Learn
how to dance,to be able to make the body soft and build the temperament of your
high school.Pen calligraphy,three grade for me to use a ball-point pen to write
a good foundation.
Read thousands of books,not equal to view.This summer,mom and dad will take
me to different places let me open mind.We are going to go to
England,Beijing,Inner Mongolia,xinjiang,Taiwan,sichuan,hubei,hunan.Because to
place a lot,so I want to strive,to finish the homework earlier.
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an adult. As children, we cannot do many things, while after we grow up, we can.
However, we often complain that I don’t want to grow up when we become adults
actually.
Firstly, growing up means more responsibilities. We should make a living by
ourselves or we should support our parents when they can’t earn enough money to
make a living.
Econdly, after graduation, we need to work instead of accomplishing
nothing. We should have a target and work for it, so we have pressure on
jobs.
Every coin has two sides. Grow up can also broaden our horizon, offer us an
opportunity to know more about our world, love and protect the important person
in our life. Don’t be afraid of growing up, just be a better person and enjoy
our life.
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上周日我和我的父母去阳明山公园。这是一个阳光灿烂的日子。所有地方都有树木和花卉。高高的树木和漂亮的花闻起来很香。
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I like to go to the mountains and I like to see nature,too.I really enjoy the nice day at this interesting place.I hope I can go there again someday.
我喜欢去爬山,我喜欢看自然。我真的很享受美好的一天在这个有趣的地方。我希望我能有一天再去那里。
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+ 加入清单The Spring Festival, the most jubilant and important festival in China, is
observed by most Chinese people at home and abroad. Our hometown is not an
exception.
Similar with other places in china, we prepare for the festival about half
a month before. With the lunar New Year approaching, the red lanterns are hung
up along the main streets, making the ancient town filled with the festival
atmosphere. While people clean up their houses, decorate it with traditional
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+ 加入清单My three middle school life is coming to an end.
In these past three years, we all have experienced a lot.
We have many good friends who studied and played together.
Our respectable teachers has taught us so many things that how to study, how to deal with questions, how to get along with others. Thanks for my teachers education for me.
Now, Im going to try my best to complete my lessons and use the freetime to do meaningful things.
I think I will miss you who are our friends and teachers.
在过去的三年里,我们都经历了许多。
我们有许多一起学习玩耍的朋友。
我们尊敬的老师教会我们很多东西,如何学习、如何处理问题、怎么与人相处。多些我的老师对我的教育。
现在,我将会尽我所能完成我的学业,利用课余时间去做有意义的事情。
我想我将会想你们的我的朋友、我的老师!
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+ 加入清单Different people have different career outlooks. Some people want to become
civil servants; some people hope to start their own business; some people dream
of being freelancers, and so on.
However, my ideal job is teaching. Firstly, I’m told that teachers have a
high income. With the high income, I can open a training school to help the
children in poor families with their education. Secondly, teachers always have
summer and winter holidays, thus I will have more free time to relax myself.
More importantly, teachers are angels to students, who can pass on the knowledge
to students as well as help them develop their hobbies and interests. I can’t
imagine how happy I will feel when I see my students become elites.
In order to be a qualified teacher, I should read more books to acquire
more knowledge, and train my patience and improve my communication and
handwriting abilities.
篇17:初中英语学校生活作文
全文共 541 字
+ 加入清单How time flies! It has been three years since I came to the school。 My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees。 The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework。 My classmates are all very friendly to each other。 We always help each other。 I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends。 I enjoy my school life。 However, I dont do well in math。 I’ll try my best to study math during the summer holidays。 Now Im going to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates。 Ill miss my school life。
篇18:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle
school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in
touch with parents and classmates.Also,they can be used to listen to music or
take photos. But others think that we dont need to talk with parents and
classmates with mobile phones,because we meet them every day. And mobile phones
may influence our study。
In my opinion,its not wrong to follow the fashion,but the most important
thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way。
篇19:关于初中军训英语作文
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+ 加入清单Military Training
In our country, when we go to middle school, we must attend to the military training. Most students are afraid of it, because the training often happens in hot summer. In summer days, the weather is too hot to stand. But students have to stay outside all the day. In addition, the training is very hard. Students have to learn to be a solder. They have to obey many rules that they don’t have to in daily life. And the trainer is very strict to students. They do like our teachers who care us patiently. However, military training is a good way to train students’ strong will power. It’s useful to the life of students. Therefore, it’s necessary to student.
作文翻译:
在我国,当我们去上初中的时候,我们必须参加军训。到部分的学生都害怕军训,因为训练通常是在炎热的夏天进行。夏天,天气炎热难熬。但是,学生必须一整天都呆在外面。另外,训练还很辛苦。学生们必须像士兵一样。他们必须遵守很多在日常生活中无需遵守的规则。而且,教官对学生很严厉。他们像老师一样耐心照顾我们。但是,军训也是一种锻炼学生意志的好方法。它对学生的生活很有帮助。因此,军训对学生是很必要的。
篇20:初中英语写作的基础
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+ 加入清单一、找到学生写作中存在的问题
1.汉语思维的影响。学生在写作中经常用汉语思维,忽略了英汉语序之间是有差别的,导致出现了大量的式英语,尽管洋洋洒洒一大篇,却没有得分点。
2.词或词组的用法及搭配出现错误。如enjoy,finish等单词后面只能接v-ing形式;“forget to do”和“forget doing”在意思上存在着显著的差异等。学生在做选择题或用所给词的适当形式填空时,大多数学生能做对,但在作文中,学生往往忽略了其用法,出现了不必要的错误。
3.时态、语态的构成及使用错误。例如,一般过去时的否定句中,助动词didn’t后的动词用原形,而完成时的句子中往往用动词的过去分词,在这方面,学生的拼写容易出现错误。
4.单词的拼写错误,标点使用不当,不注意大小写,遗漏冠词,介词的误用等。
5.结构松散。关联词的使用可使上下句和段落合理衔接,承上启下,使表达合乎逻辑,同时使文章结构严谨、紧凑,部分考生的作文虽然内容和语言还不错,但是由于过于执着于表格所给内容的顺序,没有进行灵活的处理,整篇文章看起来就象是句子翻译,并且句与句之间关系松懈,缺乏连接,以至于文章毫无流畅、优美之感。
二、如何培养学生英语写作能力
1.从单词入手。单词是英语学习的基础,单词过不了关,写作就无从谈起,因为单词是写作的基本单位。但是单词记忆又是学生学习英语的最薄弱环节,因此我们必须时刻告诫学生,单词的学习过程,实际上就是人与遗忘作斗争的过程,要长期坚持下去。 志和必胜的信心。
2.由“句式”到“段落”的训练阶段。从七年级开始就对学生进行书写小段落的训练,做到口笔同步。随着教学的不断深入,写作内容也不断丰富,八年级就要注意段落中的时态差异、句型变化以及过渡句的使用等。到了九年级就要注意文章的体裁、格式、写作方法、复句的正确性以及中外文化的差异性。
3.课前几分钟进行Free Talk。学生可以准备谜语、笑话、小故事、即兴演讲等。之后向听的学生进行提问,其他学生只有认真听才能回答出问题。Free Talk为学生提供了很好的实践机会。
4.在课堂上,我们要注重听说的训练,给学生提供大量的口语练习材料,从句子到对话,从对话到文章,以培养学生的语感。同时,加强写的训练,利用所学的句型大量翻译句子,使学生能够真正做到举一反三。此外,还要让学生在练习时注意区分英汉语序的不同。
5.要求学生多写多练。教师按照每个单元呈现的重点内容为学生规定文题或写作范围,指导学生写一些代表性的文章,并结合学生比较优秀的作文进行讲评,取其精华,去其糟粕,完成一篇优秀的范文。使学生在讲评的过程中领略这些文章的优缺点,教会学生如何自己修改作文,并将范文抄写在固定的作文本上,不断积累,并随知识的不断扩展对已写的文章根据需要不断进行修改或扩充,使其更加完美。
6.加强背诵。看了好文章,不单是理解就够了,还应该在理解的基础上多多背诵,才能达到融会贯通、据为已有的效果。英语宜多诵多背,把一些句型、短语,一些文章的片段或全篇,背得滚瓜烂熟,让这些材料在你的脑袋里扎根,当你要用的时候,它们便会而然地冒出来。背诵可以培养正确使用语言的习惯,增强语感,这样就可以避免生搬硬套地写一些式的。加强背诵能变难为易,变费力为省力,能有效地帮助学生提高写作能力。现在背诵和熟记一些语言材料,对中学生来说将会受用无穷。
7.通过缩写和改写课文,培养学生的概括能力。缩写课文会激励学生去认真钻研课文内容,有助于加深学生对课文的理解,提高学生归纳和进行简要表达的能力。缩写课文一般应该用自己的话来写,不能只停留在拼凑原文的词句上。这样既可以使学生熟练掌握英语表达方法,也是对知识进行再创造的一个过程。