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Cinderella is a beautiful girl. She has two ugly stepsisters. They are not kind to Cinderella. Cinderella does all of the work. She must cook, clean and do everything.

One day, a letter comes to the house. It is a letter from the prince. He will have a big party. He would like the three girls to come. The prince wants to find a wife. Cinderella cant go to the party because she doesnt have beautiful clothes. Her stepsisters have beautiful clothes. They look very happy. Cinderella is very sad. Cinderellas stepsisters leave the house. They are going to the princes party. Cinderella cries. She also wants to go to the party. Suddenly, a woman shows up. She is a kind fairy.

"Dont worry," says the fairy. "You can go to the princes party." "I cant go," cries Cinderella. "I dont have a nice dress."

It will be all right," says the fairy. "Go get a pumpkin, six mice and a rat." Cinderella quickly finds them. "What will you do?" Cinderella asks. The fairy waves her wand over the pumpkin.

The pumpkin is now a beautiful silver coach. The fairy waves her wand over the six mice. She changes them into six strong men. The six men will walk with the coach. Then the fairy changes the rat into a man. He is the driver of the coach.

The coach is beautiful, but Cinderella still looks sad. "I still cant go to the party. My dress is too ugly," she says. "Dont worry," says the fairy. She waves her wand and makes Cinderellas dress beautiful.

Now Cinderella has a nice dress. It is gold and very pretty. Her shoes are made of glass. Cinderella is so beautiful. She can go to the party.

"You must leave the party before twelve oclock," says the fairy. "At 12:00 the magic will end."

"I will be back before twelve oclock," says Cinderella. She gets into the coach to go to the party.

The princes palace is full of people. They are all happy to be at the big party. All the girls want to marry the prince. Then Cinderella walks into the palace. "Who is she?" everyone asks. "Shes so beautiful," they say.

The prince sees Cinderella. He asks her to dance with him. All night long they dance and talk. The prince and Cinderella fall in love. At twelve oclock, Cinderella runs out of the palace.

Cinderella runs and loses one of her glass shoes. She must get home before twelve. She is late. She runs into the house. Now, she is wearing her old dress again.

The prince finds Cinderellas shoe. "I know this shoe. It belongs to that beautiful girl. Ill find her," he says. The next morning, he goes from house to house to find her. He goes to Cinderellas house. The two ugly stepsisters try on the shoe, but their feet are too big.

"Can I try it on?" asks Cinderella. "Yes," the prince says, so Cinderella tries the shoe on. It fits her foot. "I have found my princess," the prince says. Soon Cinderella and the prince get married. They live happily ever after.

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篇1:关于寒假趣事英文作文

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My Winter Holiday Plans Well,winter holiday is coming. So what I am going go do? I am going go read English books,surf the Internet,play badmingoon every day.And first I am going go finish my homework.In addition,I am going go leave Shangou for Xiamen with my family and we are going go stay there for ten days.And after we are getting there, we are going go eat delicious food,climb the mountains in the Jin Bang Park.That must be a lot more fun and we will very excited.How about you?What are you going go do when the Winter Holiday is coming?

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篇2:英文介绍信范文

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Dear Admission Committee:

Miss Pan Bei requested a letter of recommendation from me to support her application for graduate program at your university. As her teacher, I am pleased to comply with her request.

I first got to know Miss Pan when she enrolled at university and I was the assistant director of her class at that time. Being a professor for several years, I noticed that due to the lack of self-learning ability, it is really challenging for students, even those performing excellent in senior school, to keep up with the college speed. However, as a diligent girl without any solid background in Computer Science before college, she adapted quickly to the especially competitive environment in our department. At the end of the first year, she earned the 5th rank in her class, while ranking 1st among the girls. I was fairly impressed by her self-learning technique and exceptional efforts. Hence, I believe, goal-oriented, not afraid of inchoateness and with persistence, she has the quality to make achievements.

What distinguished her among her classmates, I think, was that she went far beyond acquiring excellent scores in the exams and instead got her range of knowledge enlarged. In spring, 2006, Miss Pan took the course I taught named Algebraic Structures and Combinatorial Mathematics. This inquisitive and assiduous young woman was sometimes the last to leave after my class, raising novel questions related to the subject. I found that she understood the knowledge in depth and detail. Furthermore, I still remember during the spring vocation in May, due to the break-down of my mail box, I missed her mails to discussing some questions. But the following week during the course time, she asked me directly. Her zeal for knowledge and the spirit to explore answers really leave me a deep impression. Finally, she was among the few students who got almost full marks in every test in class which showed her exceeding grasp of every chapter. Thus, I gave her 98/100 for the excellent performance in my course.

In summary, I have every reason to believe that Miss. Pan will make outstanding performance at your university as a graduate. I would appreciate greatly if you give her a favorable consideration. Please feel free to contact me directly if more assistance is needed. Faithfully yours,

Wanling Qu, Professor

Department of Computer Science and technology Peking University

Email: qwku.edu.cn

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篇3:完美的世界作文英文

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People always complain about the society, because they think they are treated unfairly and so many things are unpredictable. It seems that if everything is under controlled will be the wonderful thing for them. However, after seeing the movie about the controlled life, I don’t think the wonderful world is a good choice.

When people’s consciousness is no longer belong to them, what will happen? Then things are predictable and they don’t feel anything They can’t feel the real happiness and sorrow, then life becomes meaningless.

Though people don’t have any annoyance in the wonderful world, they are the walking dead. I’d rather to live with happiness and sorrow, which make my life meaningful.

[完美世界作文英文

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篇4:上海英文旅游经历

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I think Shanghai is a city full of times.It is an international metropolis, but also has the biuldings of the Republic of China.

On my first night in shanghai,I went to the Huangpu River.There is bright light on the tall buildings on the other side.It was comfortable to walk by the river and enjoy the wind.

The second day I visited the Oriental Pearl.It’s the symbol of Shanghai and it is located in the Huangpu River at the point of Lujiazui.And then I took the subway to cross Huangpu River tunnel for sightseeing.It connects the Bund, Shanghai and Pudong.There are all kinds of colors and patterns transforming constantly in the tunnel.I was very excited. The Bund, Shanghai is on the other side of the Huangpu River.There are 52 different styles of classical revival buildings.It is the symbol of the history of Shanghai.When I saw these buildings,I could felt the style in Shanghai at that time. Madame Tussauds and Old millfun 1933 are my favourite.I saw many Chinese superstars’ wax figures such as Wu Yifan,Huang Xiaoming in Madame Tussauds.And there are also internastional stars,sports stars,cultural celebrities and so on.These wax figures are like a real person.I was very interested in it.Old millfun 1933 is famous.Tiny Times and Running man have shoted here.It is not gorgeous ,but it reserved integrity.It shows us the culture about that time.

Shanghai gave me a perfect holiday.

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篇5:初中英文

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When cellphone became popular many years ago, parents and school at first

banned students to take cellphone into classroom, but now, even the small child

has owned a cellphone. The use of cellphone cant be banned. For students, they

get used to keeping cellphone at hand, but the overuse of it can be blamed to

their parents. Some parents dont set good examples for their children. When

they are together, they just leave cellphones to kids and let them kill the

time. If they show the beautiful scenery around and teach kids to appreciate the

world. Then cellphone wont take up their time.

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篇6:初中英文

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How to Make Friends

It’s hard to makefriends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to

make friends whenyou have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you

talk to them. Don’t be afraid to show people whatyou are really good at. Talk

about the things you like and do best. Be a goodlistener. Let people talk about

themselves before talking about yourself. Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to

help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a

friendindeed. That way you’ll have a bigger group to choose from and havemore

chances to make friends.

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篇7:荒岛余生观后感英文

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The sun rises every day, and the tide rises and falls. The date on which the stone was marked on the wall with a stone on the island, the coconut water has no taste, the first eaten crab should be the worlds most delicious food, and later did not have any flavor. “ I invented the fire! ” and when he shouted the words excitedly, I really believed in the worlds “ fire ” indeed, it was invented by krishnamurti. Its more exciting than Edison invented the electric light, and is there anything more meaningful than that?

People can endure the pain of the body, can endure hunger, can endure the cold, but how can people tolerate long-term absolute loneliness? But the pocket watch Kylie, but fortunately there is volleyball become Weixin, followed from the mail. If a man is desperate, what he needs most is not his ideal for tomorrow, but whether he has friends today. Here by a netizen said: “ Kylies watch and make chuck feel love; let friends feel Weixin chuck friendship; open wings let mail chuck feel responsibility. ” even though he has guessed that Kylie must marry another friend, but he is Weixin talking to yourself, encourage a volleyball of their own, the mail sent to almost no possibility, but for now the police grams, their presence is enough, can let him feel the love and affection and responsibility, can let him continue to have the courage to survive and have a glimmer of hope. He is how to cherish these things, an impulse to chuck Wilson thrown out, he was so afraid to go back to “ WBL, sorry, I will not leave you ”.

The sea finally brought a sail &mdash to the crew; — a piece of iron. It was so precious that he could not wait to see what God would give him. He spent all the islands he could take as ropes, and made a sailing boat that was as important to him as Noahs ark. With a few coconut, together with the friend Weixin, leave this piece did not dare to think of living alone for four years the island, began to seek the rebirth of the airlines. When he gradually away from the island, looking back, is how complex feelings, perhaps all emotions can not be said, only in the heart of their own exclamation “ really can not believe! ”

The vast sea, a boat, a few nights of rain, is still in the sea, the sea ruthless friend Weixin away, chuck aware he will like this around like whale to stay the sea, but whale ah, here is your paradise of happiness, it is my grave!

The cargo ship arrived, and the cargo ship came in early, not late. “ Im not going to talk about the movie here; the plot must be arranged like this, ”. It seems not to chuck life. If he dies, you and I and all people will not be reconciled. “ Kylie — — ” only the most sincere hope that chuck survived Kylie let chuck in a long call to see the ship, “ Kylie — — ”

Chucks back, almost all of my friends than he is to be happy, after the disaster, chuck has no daxitaibei, let joy to my friends. If it turns out that Charlie has changed a lot, one of them is to understand how important it is to support and encourage friends. On the plane, he said to Stan, "“ when Marie died, I wasnt there. Im sorry. I should be there for you, &rdquo.";.

After dinner, chuck face a big table meal, when he saw the crabs, this very common dish, he has become a life-saving food, now think about it, really love a tired! The process lighter, lighter senior human wisdom invention, do not love, no matter how beautiful also, very low but I invented drilling wood fire, how do you appear in the table, rather than on the island!

Kylie, Kylies beloved, and the most difficult years to accompany her through his heart. “ I dont know what to say to her. What should I say?. &rdquo is going to see Kylie; Chuck! After she first thought lost chuck, was married to be at a loss what to do, chuck saw dental dentist Lucheri. Now, suddenly she appeared, and she was at a loss again. In the rainy night, Richard drove to Kylie. “ one thing I want to know ” chuck say this Kylie heart knew he wanted to know what — — how do you marry the dentist Lucheri! But they all understand this reason, on the island of chuck had already foreseen such a result, if not Lucheri, then would be someone else. But Chuck is clever, the director is also clever, chuck asked: “ the Tennessee football team in Nashville now? ” “ Oh, my days ” Kylie was so relieved, knew each other sadness is not necessary to open it so clear. I quite agree with the directors arrangement.

太阳每天在升起,潮起潮又落。察克用石头在墙上标记下在岛上度过的日期,椰子水已没有了任何味道,第一口生吃螃蟹应该是天下最美的佳肴,而后来也没有任何味道了。“我发明了火!”当察克兴奋的喊出这句话的时候,我真正的相信这世界的“火”确实是察克发明的。这要比爱迪生发明电灯更加让人振奋,还有比这更有意义的发明吗?

人可以忍受身体的伤痛,可以忍受饥饿,可以忍受寒冷,可是人要怎样才能忍受长期的绝对的孤独呢?还好有怀表里的凯莉,还好有排球变的维信,还好有跟着飘来的邮件。如果说在一个人绝望的时候他最需要什么,不是他对明天还有多大的理想,而是今天是否有朋友在鼓励。这里借一位网友的话:“凯莉的怀表和相片让察克感受到爱情;朋友维信让察克感受到友情;未打开的翅膀邮件让察克感受到责任。”尽管他已猜到凯莉肯定要另嫁他人,朋友维信只不过是他跟自己说话、鼓励自己的一只排球,那份邮件几乎没有继续送到的可能,但对于现在的察克,它们的存在已经够了,已经可以让他感受到爱情,亲情和责任了,已经可以让他继续有勇气生存下去并怀有一丝希冀了。他是多么珍惜这些东西,一次冲动察克把维信扔了出去,他又那样害怕的去找回来“维信,对不起,我再也不丢下你了”。

大海终于给察克送来一面帆——一块破铁皮。这已经弥足珍贵了,他无法再期待上帝会给他带来什么更好的赏赐。察克用尽小岛所有可以取之为绳的东西,做好一个对他来说如同诺亚方舟一样重要的帆船。带上几个椰子,和朋友维信一起,离开这片不敢再想起的独自生存了四年的荒岛,开始寻求重生之航。当他渐渐远离小岛,回头再望时,是怀有怎样复杂的心情,或许万般情绪不能言表,只会在心里对自己感叹“真不敢相信!”

茫茫大海,一叶孤舟,几夜风雨,依然是茫茫大海,海浪无情的把朋友维信带走了,察克意识道他将会像这身边的鲸鱼一样永留大海,可是鲸鱼啊,这里是你快乐的天堂,却是我的坟墓!

货船来了,货船在不早不晚的时候,在察克已经释然的时候终于来了。“在这里我不讨论电影故事情节必须如此安排”。看来察克的生命还不到归期。如若他死了,你,还有我和所有人都不会甘心的。“凯莉——”唯一的最真切的令察克怀有希望活下来的凯莉让察克在看到货船时发出久别的呼唤,“凯莉——”

察克的回来,几乎所有的朋友都比他自己要开心,是的,经过此次大难后,察克不再有大喜大悲,让欢喜留给朋友们。如果说这次经历让查理改变了很多,那么其中之一就是更明白对朋友的支持和鼓励多么重要。在飞机上他对史丹说:“玛丽去世时,我不在,对不起,我应该在你身边给你支持”。

饭后,察克面对一大桌的美餐,当他看到大闸蟹的时候,这个非常普遍的一道菜,曾经成为他救命的食物,现在想想,真是又爱有厌!那个工艺打火机,人类智慧发明的高级打火机,一点都不可爱,再怎么漂亮,也极抵不过我所发明的钻木之火,你怎么就只出现在这个餐桌上,而不是那个小岛上呢!

凯莉,察克所深爱的并且在他心底陪她走过最艰难岁月的凯莉。“我不知道该对她说些什么,我该说些什么呢。”查克快要见到凯莉了!而她先是以为失去了察克,不知所措以后,嫁给了曾为察克看过牙病的牙医卢杰里。现在察克突然出现了,她又不知所措了!还是那句话,终究要面对。雨夜察克驱车赶到凯莉那儿。“有件事情我很想知道”察克说出这句话时凯莉心里早就明白他想知道什么——你怎么嫁给了牙医卢杰里!可是这个原因他们都明白,在岛上察克就已经预见到了这样的结果,如果不是卢杰里,便会是另外的人。但察克是聪明的,导演也是聪明的,察克的问的是:“田纳西的足球队现在在纳什维尔?”“哦,我的天”凯莉如此松了一口气,彼此心知肚明的悲情没有必要再那么明朗的翻开来说。我很赞成导演这么安排。

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篇8:英文环境污染作文

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The environment is everything around us,for example,air,water,animals,plants,buildings and so on.They all affect us in many ways and closely related to our lives.People cant live without the environment. Everybody needs to breathe air,drink water and eat food every day.We burn coal to keep warm,and we use wood to make paper.As a result,we become the part of the environment.

The environment has been getting wores and wores for many years.We have been upgrading our living standard, meanwhile the environment has been polluted.Somke form factory chimneys pollutesthe air.Machines and engines make noises that annoy us constantly.Animals are homeless because the forcests are decreasing every minute.Streets are crowded with people and vehicles.The environment painful for us to live in it now.So its time to solve those problems.

Fortunately,it isnt too late to correct our mistake.People are coming to realiza the importance of the environment.We have begun to try our best to improve it.Laws are being made dealing with air, water and noise pollution.The river be bright,the sky will be clear,the flowers will be beautiful,and the sunbeam will be dazzling and pretty.We believe that we wil be able to save our environment and live in a better world

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篇9:以选择职业为题的英文作文

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Every one faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduation from college or university, which plays a vital role in his life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with zest and vigor, as well as contribute to his country.

To make a wise choice, two important things should be taken into consideration. One is the interest, the other, the demands of people and society. Only if the two aspects are connected, can a man show his talent and ability to the best advantage. If the two conflict, the former should be under the latter, for the peoples interests are more important than the individuals.

In regard to my choice in the future, I am fond of learning foreign languages; what is more, with the implementation of the Open-Door Policy, exchange between home and abroad in economy and culture has been growing significantly, thus Im determined to be a qualified interpreter.

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篇10:写圣诞节的英文

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My Christmas Day

Chritmas is the day that Jesus Christ was born. people in the world celebrate and worship this day in his honor. The santa claus will come out and send presents for children. Christmas cards and decorated trees are all over the place. The carolling of Christmas songs echo through the air. I am not a Chirstian, but I also enjoy the atmosphere of Chrismas. I wish everybody have a merry Chirismas.

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篇11:诚信简单英文作文

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it is true that most of us value honesty highly. however, nowadays we often confront  confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on. i think that we  should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others  and the whole society. the reasons can be listed as follows.firstly, only honest people can  be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.

secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the chinese people, can make our life  easier and more harmonious. thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable. a case in  point is that singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a  comparatively low criminal rate.

responsbility can be understood in many ways. for the parents , they have had the  responsibility for caring for and fostering their children since the birth of their baby.for  teachers,both in kindergartens and colleges,they also should be responsible for the study and  life of their students,that is to say,teahers are the second parents of children somewhile.

for us,as a friend of others,it is our responsibility to help our friends when they are in  trouble or faced with difficulties. each one has the different responsibily based on their  roles but we must take it for granted that we are responsible for the society.

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篇12:描写人的英文

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Hello everybody ! Today, we have a new friend! Her name is Gianni Brown,and she is 14 years old!

She isinNO.1Middle school and study in the first class, we are in the same class! We are good friends. She likes painting. Because she thinks that painting is a identity thing. But I dont like painting, because I think that is very boring. I like playing video games, because I think it can make me relax. Gianni also like playing games, but her playing is not very good! Her favorite subjectare art, music and sports. Her favorite teacher is the living creature teacher! Because she thought he was very interesting. His favorite animal is a kitten, because she felt cats is very lovely!

This is my friend, I hope we are good friends forever!

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篇13:关于写狗的英文

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我有一只.它白黄相间.它看上去像一只小狐狸.它很可爱.我们都喜欢它.它的名字叫Hali.

它有两只小耳朵和两只又大又亮的眼睛.它的大鼻子是黑色的.它的鼻子很敏锐,耳朵也很敏锐.它的牙齿很尖利.它经常在中午睡觉.上午和下午它通常和我们出去.它早晨起得很早.

很多人都非常喜欢Hali,因为它是一只很有趣、很好的狗.

I have a dog. Its white and yellow. It looks like a small fox.Its

very lovely. We like it very much. Its name is Hali.

It has two small ears and two big bright eyes. Its big nose is black. Its nose is very sensitive and its ears are sensitive,too. Its teeth are very sharp.

It often sleeps at noon. In the morning and in the afternoon it usually goes out with us. It gets up very early in the morning.

Many people like Hali very much because its a very funny and nice dog.

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篇14:致客户的一封信英文

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Dear customers

Hello!

Since its establishment, _ beauty salon has received your strong support

and help. On the occasion of the coming New Years day and new years day, _

beauty salon is grateful to you with cordial greetings and sincere thanks.

Time flies, and in a flash it is another year. Looking back on the progress

and success of _ beauty salon this year, we can not do without your attention,

trust, support and participation. Your understanding and trust is a powerful

driving force for our progress, and your care and support are the inexhaustible

source of our growth. Your every suggestion, let us excited, prompted us to

continue to work hard. With you, we will have a steady stream of confidence and

strength in our journey forward; with you, our cause can flourish and develop

endlessly.

In the new year, we hope to continue to get the trust, care and support of

you and all consumers. You and all consumers are welcome to make suggestions and

criticisms to us. We will serve every customer with sincerity, sincerity,

sincerity and enthusiasm. Customer satisfaction is our eternal pursuit! We will

continue to provide you with the most sincere service, and constantly strive to

achieve "no best, only better"! (original from blog 138)

Thank you again for your trust and support!

I wish you good health! Happy family! Everything goes well!

salute

Salute!

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篇15:给妈妈道歉的一封信英文

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Dear Mother,

Im really sorry about tonight. It was more than nine o clock in the

evening. I still went to my friends house and got to eleven o clock

I knew something big had happened, so I went over and sat down. My mother

cried and scolded me, saying that I had to go out so late and called all the

people I knew on my mobile phone. I was ashamed and I knew I was wrong, but my

mother asked me to tell me where I had gone and tell her the name of that person

and the method of communication

But I dont want to, because now young people dont like their parents to

worry about them, more dont like their friends to worry about me. I know my

mother is worried about me, but I hope you can put your heart at ease with me

because I have grown up.

I have the ability to distinguish the good and bad things and practices,

but in the eyes of parents, I am always a child mother scold me while crying,

eyes red and tears, my heart is so painful, I really know that I was wrong,

should not let my mother worry.

Mom, dont worry about me any more. I have grown up and have my own

privacy. I hope you can respect me.

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篇16:怎样写出正确的英文好句

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每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一:整体性

句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二:连贯性

句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三:准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四:重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五:语法正确,句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。

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篇17:英文日记

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No sooner had the summer vacation begun than I returned to my native town。

Of course I must make good use of it; otherwise I would incur the displeasure of

my parents。

In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines。 In

the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river。

At night (In the night) I watched television with my family (the members of my

family)。 hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed。

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篇18:我爱我的家英文作文

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I have a happy family. There are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father works a long way from home. And my mother is a housewife. My brother is a student who studies in the school.

In a word, my family is full of happiness.

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篇19:初三英文

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During May Day holiday, I went to my uncle’s home to meet my new little

bother and he is a baby.

My little bother has got big eyes, a small nose, and a small mouth that

looks like a cherry. But my little bother cant talk, and the only thing he can

do is crying.

My little bother is very lovely. He likes frown very much. When he frowns,

it looks like that he is just thinking some questions. When he falls to sleep,

it looks like swimming. When he cries, the sound is very interesting. It sounds

like he is counting numbers or he is singing. Maybe he wants to be a singer.

I love my little brother, Do you like him? I hope my little bother can be a

super star in the future. At that time I will be proud of him.

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篇20:高一英文作文:anunforgettableday!

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Person’s life is made up of countless days, while some days may be boring, some are precious and unforgettable memories.

July 15,XX, the day I’ll never forget. It was a sunny day, but I was anxious, nervous and meanwhile, a little excited, for I was waiting for the arrival of my university admission notice. It was not until 3 pm that I finally waited the arrival of a green mail car full of hope. Only when I got the admission notice, did I believe that I was really admitted to my dream university—…university. It not only meant my past efforts and persistence not in vain, but also meant that I would say goodbye to the dull high school life, and step into the colorful university life. I was so happy and immediately called my parents to tell them the good news, and then teachers and classmates.

What an unforgettable day!

[高一英文作文:an unforgettable day!

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