初中英语说明文写作模板(精品20篇)

Today, we talk about mobile phones, and as mobile phones are growing, more and more people are using mobile phones, which brings us a lot of convenience. There are also countless people who are addicted to mobile phones, especially small-school students, and i dont really object to mobile phones, and mobile phones are a good relaxation tool. I dont think its bad to play a mobile phone, but the middle school students are self-control, and they cant control the length of time they spend on their phones. So im addicted to cell phones, so i suggest relaxing a mobile phone, but it requires parental supervision, proper play, and not obsolete. You can relax your emotions, so i suggest that every day you can come back to play for an hour a day and relax and dont be too old to play. Relaxing, relaxing, relaxing relaxation

Unit Fourteen

The Lord and the Hermit

Once upon a time there was a rapacious lord. He was relentless to his tenants and quelled them by placing quotas to their living condition. Soon he collected quantitatively great revenue and lived in a radiate palace. He was also renowned for his queer clothes.

One day the lord’s disease relapsed, so he rallied his subordinates for help. One of them said: “I’ve heard of a recluse who knows regimen well residing nearby. Why not visit his residence for help?” Another retorted: “Be prudent, maybe it is only a rumor.” But the rash lord was filled with rapture and ratified the visiting plan.??

On the next Sunday, the lord purged himself, held a quaint rite and started for the hermit’s home. They passed rugged rustic passages full of paddles and the lord almost recoiled. Finally they arrived. The lord felt disappointed at the recluse’s reception, but he wouldn’t relinquish the chance and talked to the hermit with reverence.

The hermit ruminated and reverted to the main topic in a pungent voice: “I’ve heard lots of your ravenous deeds. You retract the land you’ve distributed to the farmers and order them to redeem their land. You must redress your guilt and rehabilitate their freedom. Reimburse their respective debts and build refuge for them. You can retain the residue of your property.”??

The lord was reluctant to renounce his wealth and be rent from his palace. He rebuked: “Your advice is too reckless. I’m resolute not to accept it.”

“Why so repulsive? You cannot repudiate my words.” The hermit reiterated his suggestion and its resonance echoed. “Remit their taxes with rebates, or a riot is imminent.”

The lord again refuted. At last he went back in remorse.

In China, the subjects that students learnt are necessary. They can learn special classes when they enter university. Sometimes I think it will be perfect to have the special class in middle school. On the one hand, students can learn more things besides the necessary subjects. They can develop more practical skills. On the other hand, students can cultivate their interest by learning something different. Though it is a little hard to open special classes, because education pays attention to scores, I believe that someday more special classes will be open, as the class reform calls on people to pay attention to the development of student mind.

在中国，学生所学习的科目都是有必要的。当他们进入大学以后，他们可以学习特色课程。有时我觉得在初中开设特色课程是非常好的。一方面，学生除了必要科目之外还可以学到更多的东西。可以发展更多实用技巧。另一方面，学生可以培养他们的兴趣，学习不同的东西。虽然因为教育注重分数导致开设特色课程有一定难度，但我相信总有一天将会开设更多的特色课程，因为教育改革呼吁人们关注学生的思维发展。

The power of love

Love is the parents is the world‘s largest love， is in their minds share of family support them， let them come in the heart of the disaster sons and daughters.

Kitagawa， May 14， 2008， the parents who struggle with death more than 40 hours after the three-year-old girl Song Xin Yi finally rescued， rescue workers to feed her milk. Her parents live in the time， desperate to protect the fragile body of her， until both passing away， also maintained that posture. Parents touched by the love of God， let the children saved， small Xinyi Zaitianzhiling parents can comfort!

爱的力量

父母之爱莫过于是世界上最大的爱，是他们心中的那份亲情支撑着他们，让他们在灾难来临时心系儿女。

北川，2008年5月14日，在父母身下与死神抗争四十多小时后，三岁的小女孩宋欣宜终于获救，救援人员喂她喝牛奶。她的父母在活着的时候，以脆弱的身躯拼死保护着她，直到双双逝去，还保持着那种姿势。父母的爱感动了上天，让孩子得救了，小欣宜父母的在天之灵可以安慰了!

蝴蝶只能活几十天，红杉树可以活几千年；而地球却活了45亿年；人，只有一生。

蝴蝶——一个小小的生命，虽然只能活几十天，但它知道奋斗；从它努力将包裹自己的大衣撕破的那一刻起，它便已经意识到自己的生命不会太长；当它认真梳理它那还带着乳液未干的翅膀时它便意识到它的一生都要勤奋；它在采集花粉的同时，还要注意隐藏在美丽背后的杀手——螳螂，蝴蝶常常被螳螂攻击。侥幸逃过的蝴蝶还要遭到蜜蜂的驱赶，毕竟“一山不容二虎”因为蝴蝶实在太怕那根可怕钢针了，一看见它，就叫人打寒颤。这么小的生命，就有着这么大的困难，还能坚持让自己更美好的渡过生命仅有的几天，而我们人呢？

红杉树是恐龙时期生长的巨大的常青树的后代，喜欢潮湿的生存环境，它们400年才能成材，一些树已经活了2000多年，高耸的树冠覆盖着由几世纪落叶形成的寂静的地毯。厚厚的树皮使它们很少遭到火灾，但山崩和强风可摧倒那些老树，它们虽然经常遭到攻击，但是它们却能构从遥远的恐龙时代坚强的活到了现在，经历了风风雨雨的一棵棵红杉树用自己顽强的生命力，坚忍不拔的毅力，坚强不屈的精神活到了现在，这种精神值得我们学习。

大家可能不知道，年轻的幼树沿整个树身分蘖树枝，但是随着树龄增长，下层树枝逐渐脱落，而形成的浓密的上层树冠，树冠排斥了几乎所有投向地面的光线，结果只有在相对疏朗的森林底层，蕨类和而阴植物才能存活，同偶见的红杉幼树长在一起。世界上的红杉树数目也不多，可以称他们为“植物熊猫”，所以红杉树的生命是可贵的！

人，作为大自然的主载，寿命虽然不会太长，但是在这不长的时间里，我们又做了些什么呢？保尔曾经说过：人，最宝贵的是生命。生命对每个人只有一次。这仅有的一次生命应当怎样度过呢？每当回忆往事的时候，能够不为虚度年华而悔恨，不因碌碌无为而羞耻；在临死的时候，他能够说：“我得整个生命和全部精力，都已经献给了世界上最壮丽的事业——为人类解放而进行的斗争。”是啊，人们最宝贵的是生命，但人们却往往不珍惜他，难道，自然的主宰，地球上最智慧的生物，连一直小小的蝴蝶都不如？

生命的呼吁是强烈的，在这生命里仅有的一段时间里，应该抓紧时间学习让自己的后半生过得有滋有味，让自己的名字载入史册！

A Present For Mother’s Birthday.

Everyone should give his mother a present when his mother’s birthday is

coming. It is 25th May Sunday. Today is Han Mei’s mother’s birthday. So she

wanted to give her mother a special present. What present should she give? Maybe

a bunch of flowers a birthday card are the best presents. A card is cheaper. But

it is bad for trees. The more I buy cards, the more trees will be cut by people.

So what another present should she give? Let me tell you this present.

It was five o’clock. It was time to surprise her mother. When Han Mei’s

mother came home, Han Mei said Happy Birthday to her mother. Then she cleaned

her mother’s feet. As you can see, her mother was very surprise.

Why do you think it was a good present?

What kind of environment should be? Ought to be beautiful, but also should

be to let people feast for the eyes, but now all of you take a look at the

environment, beautiful? Let people feast for the eyes? The answer is no.

So what should we do? Today, Ill give you some advice to protect the

environment, the content is as follows:

We live earth is deteriorating rapidly, did we have to pay attention to

their own living environment cause harm to nature, you must not throw sundry,

especially those serious pollution of garbage, waste batteries, for example,

because the section waste batteries contain heavy metals, if flow to clean the

water, it is very much pollution, then try to save trees made items such as

paper, pencils, because waste these things is the destruction of the forest.

Also try to use less disposable lunch box, chopsticks and plastic bags and other

items, so as to avoid unnecessary waste and reduce waste.

There are some tips: walking to closing the master switch, in order to

avoid electrical appliances overheating explosion, a waste of money and waste of

electricity, save water, to shut the tap when brushing your teeth, wash dish

water to rice, rice water to water the flowers, wash water can sweep the floor,

so we can reduce some waste. 12 dont hunt wild animals, animal protection is

absolutely cant kill, but dont kill the common animals such as frogs, because

frogs eat 15000 bugs for us, and most are pests. Some people often dont think

that is, the stubborn still, so we should try to eat less wild animals, lead to

wild animals, the drop in sales no longer killing of wild animals.

Our forest is called oxygen plant, so to take good care of flowers and

plants, not to destroy the city greening, and actively participate in. But also

to cut down trees less, dont waste wood items, because waste these things is to

destroy the forest, so be used sparingly, to protect the forests of less and

less.

Use energy saving lamps to replace the ordinary light bulb, although some

expensive but can use less electricity. I appeal to you: in our daily actions to

protect earths environment, let our children and grandchildren live in a

beautiful environment!

celeberate the 55th national day chinese people will welcome the 55th national day two days later,october 1th.

in beijing,the tiananmen square is decorated by more than 300,000 pots of flowers,the chairman maos old icon is changed by a new one hanging on the tiananmen building.

in nanjing,sweet-scented osmanthus festival,misty rain culture festival in mochou lake,barbecue festival in gulin park will be held during the national day.

in chongqing,more than 2,000 of lights on bridge are renewed to welcome the national day.

during the national day period,raising the national falg ceremony,a concert of national music and an exhibition of patriotic films will be held in hangzhou,zhejing province.

happy national day!

I am the only child in my family, so my parents give me all the things I

want. I feel so satisfied with the life I owned. One day, I came to my friends

birthday party. After she made a wish and blew the candle, I couldnt wait

eating the cake. I took a piece of cake quickly and enjoyed the delicious

flavor. Suddenly, I saw my friend was splitting the cake and heading it to

others. Seeing my friends sharing the things together, I realized I should ask

their opinions. Since then, I learned an important lesson. Sharing promotes

communication and creates a harmonious environment.

Everyone has different hobbies.Some people like to paint and others like to play basketball.I have many hobbies because I like to do many things.Let me share a few of my hobbies with you.

To begin with,I really lie games,both indoor and outdoor.I like collecting cards and playing card games with my friends.But my favorite games are vidio games.I could play them all day long.On the other hand,I also like being outside in the fresh air and sunshine,so I play a lot of sports.I like riding and rollerblading very much,but swimming is my favorite sport.

In addition,I like to draw pictures and read comics,but please dont tell my parents because they dont approve.listening to music and singing songs are things I enjoy too,and Im learning how to play an instument--the guitar.Finally,I enjoy learning English because I like speaking with foreigners and I like watching Disney cartoons.

As you can see,my hobbies keep me busy and excited.Im always looking for new things to do!

[初中英语作文：我的爱好

1、说明文是客观的说明事物的一种文体，目的在于给人以知识：或说明事物的状态、性质、功能，叫做事物说明文；或阐明事理，叫做事理说明文。

2、说明要有顺序，这是使说明内容条理化的必要条件。常见的说明顺序有：时间顺序、空间顺序、顺序。

说明的时间顺序和记叙的时间顺序相似。

空间顺序要特别注意弄清空间的位置，注意事物的表里、大小、上下、前后、左右、东西南北等的位置和方向。

逻辑顺序常以推理过程来表现，一般包括从原因到结果、从主要到次要、从整体到局部、从总说到分说再到总说、从现象到本质、从特点到用途等几种类型。

3、说明文的语言的准确性是说明文语言的先决条件。表示时间、空间、数量、范围、程度、特征、性质、程序等，都要求准确无误。在准确的前提下，说明文的语言有的以平实见长，有的以生动活泼见长。

4、说明方法

为了把事物特征说清楚，或者把事理阐述明白，必须有相应的说明方法。常见的说明方法有举例子、分类别、列数据、作比较、画图表、下定义、作诠释、打比方、摹状貌等。写说明文要根据说明对象和写作目的，选用最佳方法.

i’m a tall and lively boy. i like playing basketball very much because it’s interesting. i like nba, too. there are many famous stars in it. such as alan, iveson, tim, donken, jordan, kobe, o’neal and so on. yao ming is in the nba, too. he’s chinese. he plays basketball well. he’s a center forward. he’s our pride. all the ball stars can jump, shoot and pour in the basket. so each game of the nba is wonderful. sometimes the players can perform miracles, i think.

this year’s champion is spur team. it’s one of the strongest contenders.

i like nba. i love basketball.

一、充分准备，打好基础。

为了提高初一英语作文写作水平，平时应加强阅读，多背诵一些句形、段落甚至短文。俗话说：读书破万卷，下笔如有神，只有多读，多记，多背诵，才能出口成章，下笔成文。此外，写好初一英语作文还要掌握一些应用文体的写作方法，如书信、日记、通知等，它们大多有固定的格式。

二、认真审题，明确要求

在写初一英语作文的时候仔细看清写作要求和提示，分清材料的主次，接着确定体裁、格式和人物、地点等要素；最后确定时态，同时考虑相关的语态搭配用法。 三、遣词造句、表达规范

初一英语作文用词要恰当，不可逐句把提示翻译成英语。写作时，应尽量选用你最熟悉、最有把握的词和句型来表达思想。如果有些单词不会些，有些句型不会表达，可以设法绕开，用熟悉的同义词、同义短语或同义句来代替。要学会善于运用适当的关联词，如and, or, but, so，because, since等，以使初一英语作文行文逻辑紧密，自然流畅。 四、认真撰写，卷面整洁

初一英语考试中也会有初一英语作文题，如果时间允许，书面表达一定要先写草稿。在抄写入答题卷前，要先进行检查修改。首先检查所写内容是否切题；之后检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当；最后检查所用时态、语态、人称是否符合要求，前后是否一致。 中考复习研讨会指导课件，极具价值。 关联词

1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both&and, not only&but also, neither&nor;2.表示选择: or, either∨3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, not&but, on the one hand&on the other hand;7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,

January 1st is New Year‘s Day. It‘s a great day for all the people throughout the world. As the saying goes, A good beginning is half the battle. So, many people go all out to celebrate the important day. On that day, I went to the Book City with my classmates. We bought a lot of useful reference books and interesting story books. I believe Knowledge is power. I hope I can learn a lot from these books and improve my study. In the evening, my family had a big dinner party. All the members in my family wished me a good luck in the new year.

My Net Friend

I was only nine years old when I learnt how to use a computer. My mother is my first teacher. I know how to type, how to copy a file, and how to visit a web site on the Internet. One day, mom was not at home. I turned on the computer and began to learn how to chat on net. The first one I met there was a boy called Tom. He greeted me politely. When he knew that I was only a 9-year-old girl, and almost knew nothing about chatting on net,he started showing me how to use the chatting tools, how to download, and how to send e-mails. I learnt a lot from him.

我开始学电脑的时候才九岁。妈妈是我的启蒙老师。我学会了如何打字，如何拷贝文件，如何上网登录网站。一天，妈妈不在家。我打开电脑，开始学着上网聊天。汤姆是我在网上遇到的第一个朋友。他礼貌地跟我打招呼。当他得知我才九岁，而且对网上聊天一无所知时，他开始教我如何使用聊天工具，如何下载，以及如何发电子邮件。我从他那里学到了很多东西。

上文是老师为同学们带来的关于网友的英语范文，同学们照例子也写一个自己的网友吧！

[初中我的网友英语作文

Be Grateful to Our Parents

I consider my parents as the most important people in my life. This is not because they re wealthy or famous. Rather, what I value about most is the care and love they show to me.

我认为我的父母是我生命中最重要的人.这并不是因为他们有钱或有名的.相反,我最珍惜的是他们给我的关心和爱..

My parents might work hard, but they re always there for me. Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need a hand, they come over first to support me and encourage me. I grew up with their constant care and love. While they re getting older with grey hair and wrinkles, they never lose dignity in both life and jobs.

我父母虽然努力工作,但他们总是陪在我身边.每当我陷入困境,迫切需要帮助时.他们是第一个支持我、鼓励我的人.我在他们不断的爱和照顾中长大.当他们变老而且出现白发和皱纹时,他们也永远不会失去生活和工作的尊严.

From my parents, I have learned that one person can really make a difference. I ll never forget their care and love. Gratefulness brings a great fullness to life. I wish they could always be happy and healthy. It is high time we expressed our gratitude to people we cherish!

你从我的父母身上,我知道一个人真的可以有所作为.我永远也不会忘记他们的关怀和爱.感恩使生活带来了的充实.我希望他们能永远幸福和健康.是时候我们要向我们珍惜的人表达我们的谢意了!

喜欢在太阳下山时出走，踩在暖暖阳光下，任微风拂起整齐干净的发丝，轻吻无瑕的脸颊。什么也不想，什么也不必想。仿佛置身于世外的鸟语花香，潺潺流水之中，余晖中的大雁，排着整齐的人字从无际掠过，引出无尽诗意，正如刘禹锡《秋词》中所说：晴空一鹤排云上，便引诗情到碧霄。

大自然的魅力无穷无尽，总是让人感觉若即若离的一种朦胧。所谓的鹰击长空，鱼翔浅底，驼走大漠，虎啸深山，便是大自然的一点极致。江山如娇多娇，引无数英雄竞折腰，这或许便是大自然的另一番风情。曾几何时，大自然的景物被文人用作托物言志、借景抒情的工具，大自然则又披上了一层神秘的感情面纱，与诗人、作家同悲共喜，感时花溅泪，恨别鸟惊心，落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色，枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马，夕阳西下,上下五千年，滚滚长江水，华夏一代代炎黄子孙，与大自然和谐相处时，又不断点缀修饰着这位伟大的母亲，这位世界上最漂亮、最温柔、最贤惠的母亲。

Earth Hour started in Australia with millions of homes and businesses turning their lights off for one hour. Now it has grown to become one of the world’s biggest climate change initiatives. People are all joining together in a global effort to show that it’s possible to take action on global warming.

Earth Hour has brought about some new changes to our lives. The iconic Bird’s Nest National Stadium and the nearby Water Cube National Aquatics Center, usually illuminated by floodlights, went dark at 8:30 p.m., while dozens of hotels, office buildings, shopping malls and restaurants also switched some lights off. People join activities such as candle-lit dinners and star-gazing parties as a response to the call for going dark. However, some critics have dismissed the event as simply a gimmick that will not make any difference.

From my point of view, Earth Hour is a global call to action to every individual, every business and every community. A call to stand up, to take responsibility and to get involved in working towards a sustainable future. Earth Hour is a message of hope and a message of action. Everyone can make a difference.

漫步山间小道，最惬意的便是能走在遮风挡雨的参天大树下，静听周围的虫鸣鸟啼。放眼田野，是数不清的相互缠绕点缀的花草树木。脚下的路湮没在幽深的丛林中，延伸至未知的前方渐渐地，融入大自然。只有不需要任何修饰装扮的景色，才是最美的新娘。正如清朝大学者王国维谈的有我之境与无我之境的相互渗透、相互融合。何为有我？何为无我？大自然的默契不是任何矫揉造作的修饰能媲美的，是用任何已知的华丽的言语都不能描摹的。

大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆。大自然的每一点，每一滴，都给人以一种无法超越的和谐的韵味。喜欢在疲惫的时候外出，远离尘世的喧嚣，世事的纷扰，独自享受这江上之清风，山间的明月的寂静。欣赏大自然，给自己一点抚慰。余晖中的大雁，轻轻掠过头顶，朝着太阳升起的方向翱翔。红彤彤的落日，散发着她的余晖，铺洒在纷忙的人群身上，便是一种别致，一种惬意，是你、我、他都拥有的一点灵动。

From June1, 2008, shops and supermarkets are forbidden from offering free plastic bags to customers, according to a new law. A nation-wide campaign against plastic bags has been launched.

Nowadays, Chinese people use up to three billion plastic bags a day. While being very convenient to shoppers, plastic bags also cause serious white pollution” and waste resources.

Though the ban may cause some inconvenience to shoppers, it can help reduce the use of plastic bags when people have to pay for them. Besides, the ban, in away, can promote public awareness of environmental protection.

So I think it necessary to forbid shops and supermarkets from offering free plastic bags. When shopping, we can use cloth bags or baskets instead of plastic bags as we used to.

[余辉中的大雁初中英语环保作文

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所谓“感”

可以是从书中领悟出来的道理或精湛的思想，可以是受书中的内容启发而引起的思考与联想，可以是因读书而激发的决心和理想，也可以是因读书而引起的对社会上某些丑恶现象的抨击、讽刺。读后感的表达方式灵活多样，基本属于议论范畴，但写法不同于一般议论文，因为它必须是在读后的基础上发感想。要写好有体验、有见解、有感情、有新意的读后感，必须注意以下几点：

首先，要读好原文

“读后感[1]”的“感”是因“读”而引起的。“读”是“感”的基础。走马观花地读，可能连原作讲的什么都没有了解，哪能有“感”?读得肤浅，当然也感得不深。只有读得认真，才能有所感，并感得深刻。如果要读的是议论文，要弄清它的论点(见解和主张)，或者批判了什么错误观点，想一想你受到哪些启发，还要弄清论据和结论是什么。如果是记叙文，就要弄清它的主要情节，有几个人物，他们之间是什么关系，以及故事发生在哪年哪月。作品涉及的社会背景，还要弄清楚作品通过记人叙事，揭示了人物什么样的精神品质，反映了什么样的社会现象，表达了作者什么思想感情，作品的哪些章节使人受感动，为什么这样感动等等。

其次，排好感点

只要认真读好原作，一篇文章可以写成读后感的方面很多。如对原文中心感受得深可以写成读后感，对原作其他内容感受得深也可以写成读后感，对个别句子有感受也可以写成读后感。总之，只要是原作品的内容，只要你对它有感受，都可能写成读后感，你需要把你所知道的都表示出来，这样才能写好读后感。

第三、选准感点

一篇文章，可以排出许多感点，但在一篇读后感里只能论述一个中心，切不可面面俱到，所以紧接着便是对这些众多的感点进行筛选比较，找出自己感受最深、角度最新，现实针对性最强、自己写来又觉得顺畅的一个感点，作为读后感的中心，然后加以论证成文。

第四、叙述要简

既然读后感是由读产生感，那么在文章里就要叙述引起“感”的那些事实，有时还要叙述自己联想到的一些事例。一句话，读后感中少不了“叙”。但是它不同于记叙文中“叙”的要求。记叙文中的“叙”讲究具体、形象、生动，而读后感中的“叙”却讲究简单扼要，它不要求“感人”，只要求能引出事理。初学写读后感引述原文，一般毛病是叙述不简要，实际上变成复述了。这主要是因为作者还不能把握所要引述部分的精神、要点，所以才简明不了。简明，不是文字越少越好，简还要明。

第五，联想要注意形式

联想的形式有相同联想(联想的事物之间具有相同性)、相反联想(联想的事物之间具有相反性)、相关联想(联想的事物之间具有相关性)、相承联想(联想的事物之间具有相承性)、相似联想(联想的事物之间具有相似性)等多种。写读后感尤其要注意相同联想与相似联想这两种联想形式的运用。

编辑本段如何写读后感

格式

一、格式和写法

读后感通常有三种写法：一种是缩写内容提纲，一种是写阅读后的体会感想，一种是摘录好的句子和段落。题目可以用《读后感》;还可以用自己的感受(一两个词语)做题目，下一行是——《读有感》，第一行是主标题，第二行是副标题。

二、要选择自己感受最深的东西去写，这是写好读后感的关键。

三、要密切联系实际，这是读后感的重要内容。

四、要处理好“读”与“感”的关系，做到议论，叙述，抒情三结合。

五、叙原文不要过多，要体现出一个“简”字。

六、要审清题目。

在写作时，要分辨什么是主要的，什么是次要的，力求做到“读”能抓住重点，“感”能写出体会。

七、要选择材料。

读是写的基础，只有读得认真仔细，才能深入理解文章内容，从而抓住重点，把握文章的思想感情，才能有所感受，有所体会;只有认真读书才能找到读感之间的联系点来，这个点就是文章的中心思想，就是文中点明中心思想的句子。对一篇作品，写体会时不能面面俱到，应写自己读后在思想上、行动上的变化。

八、写读后感应以所读作品的内容简介开头，然后，再写体会。

原文内容往往用3～4句话概括为宜。结尾也大多再回到所读的作品上来。要把重点放在“感”字上，切记要联系自己的生活实际。

九、要符合情理、写出真情实感。

写读后感的注意事项

①写读后感绝不是对原文的抄录或简单地复述，不能脱离原文任意发挥，应以写“体会”为主。

②要写得有真情实感。应是发自内心深处的感受，绝非“检讨书”或“保证书”。

③要写出独特的新鲜感受，力求有新意的见解来吸引读者或感染读者。

④禁止写成流水账!

编辑本段要写关于学习的读后感应该读什么有感

(1)引——围绕感点 引述材料。简述原文有关内容。

(2)概——概括本文的主要内容 ,要简练,而且要把重点写出来。

(3)议——分析材料，提练感点。亮明基本观点。在引出“读”的内容后，要对“读”进行一番评析。既可就事论事对所“引”的内容作一番分析;也可以由现象到本质，由个别到一般的作一番挖掘;对寓意深的材料更要作一番分析，然后水到渠成地“亮”出自己的感点。要选择感受最深的一点，用一个简洁的句子明确表述出来。这样的句子可称为"观点句"。这个观点句表述的，就是这篇文章的中心论点。"观点句"在文中的位置是可以灵活的，可以在篇首，也可以在篇末或篇中。初学写作的同学，最好采用开门见山的方法，把观点写在篇首。

(4) 联——联系实际，纵横拓展。围绕基本观点摆事实讲道理。写读后感最忌的是就事论事和泛泛而谈。就事论事撒不开，感不能深入，文章就过于肤浅。泛泛而谈，往往使读后感缺乏针对性，不能给人以震撼。联，就是要紧密联系实际，既可以由此及彼地联系现实生活中相类似的现象，也可以由古及今联系现实生活中的相反的种种问题。既可以从大处着眼，也可以从小处入手。当然在联系实际分析论证时，还要注意时时回扣或呼应“引”部，使“联”与“引””藕”断而“丝”连这部分就是议论文的本论部分，是对基本观点(即中心论点)的阐述，通过摆事实讲道理证明观点的正确性，使论点更加突出，更有说服力。这个过程应注意的是，所摆事实，所讲道理都必须紧紧围绕基本观点，为基本观点服务。

We take a holiday of 7 days because of the National Day.As we all

know，October 1 is the National Day of China in Gregorian calendar.

In the holiday I went to visit the Yellow River Forest Park togeter with

three of my classmates.It was very boring when staying in the bus for a long

time，which made me doze off all the time，and at some time，I nearly struck my

head on the chair in the front of me.After two hours journery by bus，we finally

got to the park.But to my disappoint，there was nothing interesting here，except

some quiet normal things. Compared with the my school I stayed in，here was very

noisy and messy.

Though the park is beside the Yellow River，the air is still a little smelly

because there are a lot of animals such as horses，cocks and so on here，which

make lots of wastes every day while few people clean them. In a word，the park is

not so good as I had expected，and I felt unsatisfied about it.

When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain. Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool, then all my weariness has gone.

当夏天到来的时候，天气很热，很难见到雨。今天，在我起床的时候，我发现天气有点凉，准备下雨了。我很开心，我很想念雨。突然，天下起了雨，我跑出房子，看着天空，与雨共舞。我觉得很凉爽，我所有的倦意都消散了。

[初中描写雨的英语作文

Im a Middle Schools student.I am busy.Next summer, I have a long vacation

and I have a very good plan for this vacation.

I think about going to the Beijing. I heard Beijing is beautiful and there

are many peopie there who are friendly.

I am going to the Tianan Men Square, going to the Palace Museum ,going to

the Great Wall and going to the Beijing Hutong.These famous places can make me

to have fun.For something else , I can go shopping, go sightseeing, go having a

lot foods. At night, maybe renting videos and sleeping a lot……

A great vacation! I cant wait!