新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语精彩20篇

导语：说到中国跳水队，你最先想到的是谁呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

She started training in competitive diving in 1988. She took up diving when she was six-years-old at the Baoding Training Base. In 1992, she was selected to dive for the Chinese national team.

Guo represented China at the 2004 Summer Olympics, earning a gold medal in the 3 meter womens synchronized springboard along with Wu Minxia before finally winning her first individual Olympic gold in the 3 meter womens springboard. She is the leading member of the Chinese national womens diving team after Fu Mingxia. Currently her goal is to win medals at the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing.

After the Athens Olympics, Guo gained much fame and was signed up by McDonalds. She was later banned by the national team for excessive commercial activities, but was later taken back.

I believe she will win her 3rd even 4th gold medals in the “Water Cube”.

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她于1988开始参加竞技跳水训练。她在保定训练基地六岁时开始从事潜水运动。1992，她被选中为中国国家队跳水。

郭代表中国在2004届夏季奥运会，获得金牌的3米女子跳板随着吴敏霞在女子3米跳板最后赢得了她的第一个个人奥运金牌。她是继伏明霞之后中国国家女子跳水队的主要成员。目前她的目标是在北京2008奥运会上获得奖牌。

雅典奥运会后，郭获得了很大的声誉，并被麦当劳签约。后来她被国家队禁止从事过多的商业活动，但后来被召回。

我相信她在水立方会赢得第三枚甚至第四枚金牌。

Sakura is the Japanese name for ornamental cherry trees, Prunus serrulata, and their blossoms. Cherry fruit (known as sakuranbo) come from a different species of tree.

Sakura, a well-known and ubiquitous symbol of Japan, are represented on all manner of consumer goods, including kimono, stationery, and dishware. Cherry blossoms are an enduring metaphor for the ephemeral nature of life, and as such are frequently depicted in art. There is at least one popular folk song, originally meant for the shakuhachi (bamboo flute), titled "Sakura", as well as a number of pop songs. "Sakura" is also a common Japanese female name.

Sakura is indigenous to the Himalayas and east Asia. Some trees can be found in China and Korea but the largest number and variety of sakura, more than 305 species, can be seen in Japan. Many of them were artificially hybridized or grafted by the Japanese many centuries ago.

"On the other hand, in China, cherry blossom is the symbol of feminine dominance, female beauty and sexuality. Additionally, the cherry blossom is the Chinese symbol of feminine principle and it also symbolizes love in the language of herbs. Interestingly, cherry blossom is the flower of the April in China, whereas in Japan, it is wisteria." Spring flowers of Japan

Japans most beloved variety is the Somei Yoshino. Its flowers are nearly pure white, tinged with the palest pink, especially near the stem. The flowers bloom, and usually fall within a week, before the leaves come out. Therefore, the trees look nearly white from top to bottom. The variety takes its name from the village of Somei (now part of Toshima in Tokyo). It was developed in the mid- to late-19th century at the end of the Edo period and the beginning of the Meiji period. The Somei Yoshino is so widely associated with cherry blossoms that jidaigeki and other works of fiction often depict the variety in the Edo period or earlier; such depictions are anachronisms.

Other categories include yamazakura, yaezakura, and shidarezakura. The yaezakura have large flowers, thick with rich pink petals. The shidarezakura, or weeping cherry, has branches that fall like those of a weeping willow, bearing cascades of pink flowers.

Annually, the Japanese Meteorological Agency and general public track the sakura zensen, or Cherry-Blossom Front. Nightly forecasts follow the weather segment of news programs. The blossoming begins in Okinawa in January, and typically reaches Kyoto and Tokyo at the end of March or the beginning of April. Then it proceeds north, arriving in Hokkaidō a few weeks later. Japanese pay close attention to these forecasts. They will go to parks, shrines and temples with family and friends and hold a "flower viewing party" known as hanami. Hanami festivals celebrate the beauty of sakura, and for many, it is a chance to relax and enjoy the beautiful view. Hanami custom in Japan dates back to many centuries ago. It is witten in Nihon Shoki that the Hanami festival were already held in the 3rd century.

Most Japanese schools and public buildings have sakura trees outside of them. Since the fiscal and school year both begin in April, in many parts of Honshū, the first day of work or school will coincide with the cherry blossom season.

Good morning， Dear Professors:

Its my honor to introduce myself. My name is XXX， I am fromXXCountyXXProvince， December XXXX I was born in a poor family， and my parents are farmers， I love and respect them very much. We were delight with my becoming a fresh man in September 1997. Luckily， I was permitted to be a graduate student after 4 years colorful life on campus. I received my Bachelor degree2001 inXX Institute of Science and Technology， then a Master degree2004 inXX University of Science and Technology. For those 7 years my major was Die Design. Before I received my Master degree， I had done the subject of XXXXXXXXXXX. For the past 3 years， I have been inXXXXXXCollege， where I have been and still am a teacher. I teach students Machine Design etc. I have published more than 10 first-author papers.

Thats all， thanks!

Shanxi Province got its name due to its location to the west of Taihang Mountain. Shanxi neighbored on Hebei, Henan, Shaanxi and Inner Mongolia & Autonomous Region. It is located to the east of the Yellow River, and is also known as Hedong. Shanxi belonged to Jin State in Spring and Autumn Period, so it is abbreviated in Jin. Shanxi occupies an area of 156,000 square kilometers (about 60,000 square miles) and has a population of over 32 million, including its minority ethnic population. Its capital is Taiyuan City.

When to go

Being at a high altitude, Shanxi Province has a cold and dry climate and has an annual rainfall of between 400-600 millimeters. The province is also frequently plagued by sandstorms, especially in the spring, so it is often useful to bring along both sunglasses and a hat when visiting. Generally speaking, the provinces climate is the best between May and October.

History

Shanxi is one of the birth places of Chinese civilizations with a long history and traditional culture. As early as one hundred million years ago, the ancestors of the Chinese lived and propagated in this region. Legend tells us that the Yellow Emperor, founder of the Chinese nation, once lived in Shanxi for a certain period. Today, many Neolithic sites from that period can still be seen dotted across the vast expanse of the province.

What to see

Shanxi is endowed with an abundance of cultural sites from its long history. Most of the ancient structures were built before the Liao and Song Dynasties. So it is the reason why Shanxi is often called the Chinese Ancient Architecture Museum. The more obvious of these include: the Buddhist wonder of the Yungang Grottoes in Datong City, the ancient city of Pingyao which was listed as a World Cultural Heritage site by UNESCO in 1997, the oldest and tallest ancient wooden pagoda in China, the Wooden Pagoda of Yingxian County and the remote Shuanglin and Jinci Temples, which are well worth the long journeys for the visitors.

Of course, there are a number of natural magnificent and beautiful places that can also be seen in Shanxi. The most famous of them include Wutai Mountain with the longest and most prestigious history in the four most well-known Buddhist holy lands of China, the whistling rage of the Yellow Rivers Kettle Spout waterfalls (Hukou Waterfalls) and one of the Five Sacred Mountains in China - Mt Hengshan.

My home village is a small one. It’s in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province. Small as it is， it’s very beautiful.

There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring， we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high.In summer， the trees are green and the grass is green， too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn， the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter， when it snows， all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar. In my hometown the sky is blue， the air is clean， the water is sweet and the people are very friendly. I love my hometown!

我的家乡是位于山西盂县的一个小村庄。它虽然小但非常美丽。

家乡被群山环绕，这些小山甚至比大山川还要美丽。春日里，我们在山巅放飞自制的风筝;夏天里，漫山遍野是长得绿油油的草木，各种野果美味诱人;秋日里，山下和山周围的玉米熟了，我们几乎天天能尝到新鲜的玉米;冬日里，雪花飘飘，大地银妆素裹，我们玩雪，有时还就着糖吃几口干净的白雪。我的家乡天空蔚蓝，空气清新，水儿甜美，人们好客。我爱我的家乡。

[介绍我的家乡的英语作文

My name is.I am eleven years old this year.I am tall and thin with two big eyes.I like reading,collecting stamps,playing the piano,playing table tennis,traveling and so on.I also like eating meat because it is delicious.I am interested in maths and English.I study hard every day so I am good at maths and English.I also like playing basketball on weekends with my friends.My favorite star is Yao Ming.I admire him very much.

October 1stis the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节，这是全国的共同节日。这一天是中华人民共和国开始的标志。在那天，全国到处都有很多庆祝活动，上至中央政府到普通老百姓。公共场所，包括大的广场和公园，都装饰成节日主题。近年，国庆节同样也是所有人都期待的短假黄金周。随着生活水平的提高，人们又更多的钱和渴望去旅游，黄金周对他们来说是一个很好的机会。除此之外，对于那些不想外出的人来说同样也是休息的好时机。因此，国庆节对中国人来说意味着很多。

[介绍国庆英语作文

Once known as Changan, Xian is the political, economic, cultural and transportation center of Shaanxi Province, with its jurisdiction over five counties including Changan County. Located in the middle of the Central Plains of the Yellow River Basin, Xian stands between Qinling Mountain to the north and the Weihe River to the south. It is an important birthplace of the Chinese nationality as well as one of the places of human origin and prehistoric cultural centers in Asia. Its long history and rich cultural heritage has covered the old city with a mysterious veil.

As a world-famous ancient capital, Xian has been designated as the capital of 13 ancient Chinese dynasties such as the Western Zhou, Qin, Xihan, Xinmang, Eastern Han, Western Jin, Former Zhao, pre-Qin, post-Qin, Western Wei, Northern Zhou, Sui and Tang dynasties. Many important historical events took place here, such as the Red Eyebrow Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Western Han Dynasty (206BC-8AD), the Huangchao Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Tang Dynasty (618-907) and Li Zicheng Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Ming Dynasty (1368-1644) all once established temporary political powers in Xian. it also witnessed the famous Xian Incident in modern history. All these have left with Xian a lot of cultural relics. In Xian there are altogether 314 key cultural relics sites under protection, of which 84 belong to state or provincial level. Unearthed cultural relics reach 120,000, many of which are rare treasures in the world,

including the Stele Forest, the two Wild Goose Pagodas, the Clock Tower, the remains of Banpo Village and the city wall of the Ming Dynasty. In addition, there are ancient sites such as Han City, Tang City, Efang Palace, Weiyang Palace and Daming Palace, as well as the Huaqing Pond and pits of Qin Emperor Shihuangs Terra-Cotta Soldiers and Horses. Xian is a great place of revolution, and the Site of the Office of the Eighth Route Army can clearly demonstrate this. Located in Xian are also a number of universities and research institutions, including Xian Jiaotong University, Northwest University and Northwest Polytechnical University.

Xian is the biggest processing industrial base and the largest trade center in the central and western part of North China, as well as the starting point of the Silk Road. The Silk Road has become a wide road connecting China and other countries. It is a road to civilization, friendship, trade and cultural tourism.

Xian (Chinese:西安), is the capital of the Shanxi province in the Peoples Republic of China . As one of the oldest cities in Chinese history, Xian is one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China because it has been the capital of some of the most important dynasties in Chinese history,including the Zhou, Qin, Han, the Sui, and Tang dynasties. Xian is the eastern end of the Silk Road . The city has more than 3,100 years of history, and was known as Changan (traditional Chinese: 长安).

Long holidays are usual during Spring Festival, Labor Holiday (1-7 May), and National Holiday (1-7 October). The number of travellers is often greater during Summer (May-August), although the most pleasant season for visiting Xian is Autumn.

Xian (Chinese: 西安), is the capital of the Shanxi province in the Peoples Republic of China . As one of the oldest cities in Chinese history, Xian is one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China because it has been the capital of some of the most important dynasties in Chinese history,including the Zhou, Qin, Han, the Sui, and Tang dynasties. Xian is the eastern end of the Silk Road . The city has more than 3,100 years of history, and was known as Changan (traditional Chinese: 长安).

Long holidays are usual during Spring Festival, Labor Holiday (1-7 May), and National Holiday (1-7 October). The number of travellers is often greater during Summer (May-August), although the most pleasant season for visiting Xian is Autumn.

[英语作文介绍西安景点

导语：扬州是中国剪纸流行最早的地区之一，早在唐代，扬州已有剪纸迎春的风俗。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When early spring festival, many local people like sticking each kind of paper-cut on windows .Not only the paper-cut window decoration has contrasted the jubilation festive atmosphere, moreover has also brought beautiful enjoyment for the people.

The paper-cut is one kind of extremely popular art. Because it mostly is pastes on the window, therefore people general name it “the paper-cut window decoration”. The paper-cut window decoration usually with the color red and it content rich, like the cultivation, the spinning and weaving, fishing, tend sheep, feed hogs, raise chickens and so on.

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春节的时候，许多当地人喜欢在窗户上贴各种剪纸，剪纸窗花不仅烘托了喜庆的喜庆气氛，而且给人们带来了美丽的享受。

剪纸是一种非常流行的艺术。因为它大多是贴在窗户上的，所以人们一般称之为“窗花”。剪纸窗花通常以红色和红色为主，内容丰富，如养殖、纺织、垂钓、放羊、喂猪、养鸡等。

Mothers love, like a long river, she quiet, occasionally with a slightly ripples; Her clear, can see the activity on pebbles in the river; She gently, such as the spring breeze slowly to send me. Mothers love for me, I also countless. However, in my impression deepest is the following a few things:

It was a summer night, suddenly the power went out, cant blow fanner. Hot cant sleep, my mother took their fan back and give me a breeze, let me fall asleep. Not only has a comfortable and cool, cool wind also mixed with mom to my thick love, bring me into the sweet dreams.

Another time, I in his home village and play with my cousin. I and my cousin play together I run, but with a small stones I tripped and fell. After I get up, I found more lap a wound, the wound is big and red, and blood flow out, it hurt so much I tears dc. Mother took me to the next to the small clinic simple after disinfection, ready to take me back home, but she was afraid to touch my wound, it just took me home.

Every night when I was learning, every once in a while, mother will always ask me: "daughter, thirst not thirsty, drink some water." And then holding a large glass of water. Water is always warm, let the house is full of warm meaning. Her mother know that I am afraid of hot, so the water right every time. She drink a first, say: "hot", just pass me water to drink.

The father loves the mountain, a mothers love is like the sea. Drop a mothers love can make a mothers love of the great river. Mom, I love you!

What I expect for city life is not just about drink bars, shopping mall, entertainment center etc, although they are indeed better than the facility in the rural areas. What I expect for city life is a clearer environment, not only in the surroundings but also in peoples spirit. I hope the people around me are all good mannered with politeness and courtesy, there is no quarrel, no battle, people treat each other with respect. I hope there would be no traffic jam as in Beijing our country capital today where traffic jam happened everyday, which make the citizens feel depressed and great pressure.

我的房间很可爱，也很明亮。它不大，但是干净整洁。

一走进我的房间，你就会看到一扇大窗户。透过窗户你可以看到蓝蓝的天空和绿色的树。有时你也会看到一些鸟儿在天空飞翔。

在窗户下面是一张大桌子。桌子上放了一些学习用品和我的笛子。

在桌子的右边是一个书架。在书架上你能找到各种书籍。我最喜欢关于动物和科学方面的书籍。紧挨着书架的是我最喜欢的东西——电脑。它使我获得知识，让我快乐。在门的对面是我的舒适的床。在我床上的墙上有两张地图。一张是中国地图，另一张是世界地图。我可以从它们那里学到很多东西。

这就是我的房间。我喜欢独自呆在我的房间里做作业。在我的业余时间里我还喜欢在我的房间里吹笛子。我的房间是我的小世界。

My room is lovely and bright. Its not big,but its clean and tidy.

On walking into my room,you can see a big window. Through the window you can see the blue sky and green trees. Sometimes you also can see some birds flying in the sky. Under the window is a big desk. On the desk there are my school things and my flute. On the right side of the desk is a bookshelf, you can find all kinds of books on it. But my favourite books are about animals and science. Next to the shelf is my favourite thing—computer. It gives me knowledge and makes me happy. Opposite the door is my comfortable bed. On the wall above the bed are two maps. One is a map of China,the others is a map of the world. I learn a lot of things from them.

This is my room. I like to stay in my room alone and do my homework. I like playing the flute in my spare time in it. My room is my small world.

高中自我介绍英语作文一

My name is________ . There are ________(数字) people in my family. My father is a Chemistry teacher. He teaches chemistry in senior high school. My mother is an English teacher. She teaches English in the university. I have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

I like to read English story books in my free time. Sometimes I surf the Internet and download the E- books to read. Reading E- books is fun. In addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

I hope to study both English and computer technology because I am interested in both of the subjects. Maybe one day I could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

高中自我介绍英语作文二

My name is________ . I am from ________. There are________(数字)people in my family. My father works in a computer company. He is a computer engineer. My mother works in a international trade company. She is also a busy woman. I have a older sister and a younger brother. My sister is a junior in National Taiwan University. She majors in English. My brother is an elementary school student. He is 8 years old.

Because of my father, I love surfing the Internet very much. I play the on-line game for about 2 hours every day. I wish I could be a computer program designer in the future. And that is why I am applying for the electronics program in your school.

高中自我介绍英语作文三

My name is Li Hua. I was born in the city of Dalian, Liaoning Province. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. Then I entered

NO. 6 Middle School where I mainly learned the subjects like Chinese, mathematics, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I have been very fond of and good at English and computer ever since. Therefore I placed first in the school computer competition last year. My hobbies include swimming in summer, skating in winter as well as collecting stamps and listening to popular music in my spare time.

高中自我介绍英语作文四

I am linjiang. I was born in jilin changchun. I graduate from Henan University of Urban Construction. I started learning English since I was 15 years old.My father is a farmer . And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family. My brother have a lot of American friends. That’s why I have no problem communicating with Americans or others by speaking English.

In my spare time, I like to do anything relating to English such as listening to English songs, watching English movies or TV programs, or even attending the activities held by some English clubs or institutes. I used to go University for a short- term English study. During that time, I learned a lot of daily life English and saw a lot of different things.

I think language is very interesting. I could express one substanceby using different sounds. So I wish I could study and read more English enlarge my knowledge.

高中自我介绍英语作文五

My name is ________. I am graduatefrom ________ seniorhigh school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlargemy knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future

Hello my name isXXX.I am XX years old.I graduatedfrom XXX.I have a dream since I was a child.I dream that one day I can fly in the blue sky like the bird. Now I have the chance to make it come true. If i can take this job. Ill try my best to do everything well.Because I love this job.

Hello my name isXXX.I am XX years old.I graduatedfrom XXX.I have a dream since I was a child.I dream that one day I can fly in the blue sky like the bird. Now I have the chance to make it come true. If i can take this job. Ill try my best to do everything well.Because I love this job.

Good morning everyone, my name is XXX.I am XX years old.I graduated from XXX.I have a dream since I was a child.I dream that one day I can fly in the blue sky like the bird. Now I have the chance to make it come true. If i can take this job. Ill try my best to do everything well.Because I love this job.Thank you .

[面试空姐的英语自我介绍

I think reading as the most rewarding entertainment activities in my spare time.

Not only does reading provide me with a wide range of knowledge, it also broaden my mind towards the world. Different sorts of books contain various thoughts of life, work, relationships and cultures. When reading a novel, I can experience joys and tears of the characters through one story after another. When it comes to a biography ,I can even speak to the great person as if he stood towards me. Don’t always regard reading as tools to prepare for exams or show off how knowledgeable the person is.

A true reader is the person who shows knowledge naturally while communicate with others. Reading indeed has an important impact on people’s behavior, which is the reason why I will never give it up.

ChengDu is a wonderful place located in Sichuan province.This city is well decorated and designed which attrects lots of tourists every year.

Chengdu has large amounts of tourist spots such as Wangjiang Park,Dujiang Dam and so on.Such spots are all easy to get and they dont cost much.Whatmore ,with the rapidly developing economy,Chengdu has become an international metropolis.

Why not come to this amazing city to get a rest and have a look of these beautiful sceneries.Just cherish this hardly-get chance.Dont hestitate.

Nowadays playing computer games is a very common hobbies, especially among young people and teenagers. However there are many arguements on whether computer games are advantageous to people or not.

Although many people doubt the advantages of computer games, if used wisely computer games can actually be used in educational purposes, for example typing games to allow students to learn typing English or Chinese. Also another advantage of computer game is that the games may be played together among friends or family members, which may improve the relationship between family members and allow parents to know more about their children on their hobbies and interests.

However computer games if misused can also have very bad effects on human beings. Firstly spending long time in front of the computer screen will bring to various health problems, such as eye sore, back pain and headache. Also if people spend too much time on computer games rather than the work they should do, for example school work for students and projects and presentations for employees, it may have bad effects on their real life and social life status.

It is true for everything that it is beneficial if used wisely, therefore although computer games are widely said to be bad for people, it can still be used as a good tool if used wisely.

My name is ________. I am graduatefrom ________ seniorhigh school and major in ________. There are ________ people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlargemy knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese.My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.

下面是小编为大家收集的中考作文注意事项，欢迎阅读。

一、审题

审题，是对题目的意义、范围和要求的审定。审题的过程，就是确立文章体裁、题材、中心和写作的过程。这是作文的第一步，不能有丝毫的马虎，否则将会“失之毫厘，谬以千里”。尤其是中考的时候，考生因为要抢时间，临场心理又十分紧张，为避免偏差，冷静审题显得特别重要。尽管中考作文命题有明文规定，在审题上不给考生设置障碍，但这并不等于说不需要审题。认真解读，把握题意，是中考作文成败的先决条件。

在审题方面，常见的问题有两种：一是对题目的含义理解不准确。如“我们是初升的太阳”这一中考作文题中的“初升的太阳”，很明显有比喻义，表明要求写出中学生风华正茂、生机勃勃、热情奔放的多彩生活，表现出他们活力的光芒，青春的气息。如果不能正确理解这一点，就很难写出像样的文章。又如“在______的影响下”中的“影响”，意思是对被影响者的思想或行为起作用，它与“帮助”、“教育”等的含义是有区别的。有些同学未真正懂得“影响”的意思，结果所写的作文成了“在______的帮助(教育)下”。二是未弄清题义，没把握住题目的要求。如“我和______”，很清楚是写双方的，而有些同学错以为是写“______”，成了“我的______”。同样道理，“在______的影响下”，尽管文章触及“被影响者”的变化，但内容很少，而大量的笔墨却花在“影响者”身上，这就颠倒了主次。另外，还有个别同学因过分紧张或粗心，没看清题目(包括要求)。这往往会导致文章内容与主题扣得不紧，严重的还会远离题意，甚至文不对题。

所以在审题时，一定要注意四个明确：明确题目的已知条件，明确文章的写作对象，明确文章要表达的中心，明确选材的范围。

二、立意

审题完毕，就要根据题目要求妥善立意了。所谓立意，就是确定文章的中心、主旨。在记叙文中，“立意”是确定文章通过写人记事所要表述的中心思想;在议论文中，“立意”指的就是确立文章的中心论点。

中考作文的立意要求我们从个人生活、家庭生活、社会生活和学校生活中选取鲜活的素材表达中心——表达积极向上朝气蓬勃的精神，表达自尊自强自信自律的情怀，表达对“真善美”的赞颂与向往，表达对老师家长的尊敬与感恩，从而展示中学生积极向上、健康乐观的风采，歌颂日新月异、蒸蒸日上的时代生活，抒发中学生纯真丰富的情感，表达睿智深邃的思想。

对照以上要求，就会发现我们在中考作文中问题还是挺多的：其一，文章中心不明。很多考生在作文时，写人往往只停留在他(她)做了什么事，而不注意他(她)为什么做了这些事;写事往往只停留在叙述事情的过程，而不注意写“事件”中包含的思想意义。其二，文章多中心。如有考生在写“见到儿时的朋友”一文时，既写了与朋友之间纯真的友谊，又写了党的政策给农村带来的巨大变化，同时还对现在农村中有些家长为了挣钱，早早让孩子辍学的现象提出了批评。一篇文章，有三个中心，结果表述每个中心只能是蜻蜓点水，极为肤浅。

所以，从立意的要求来看，我们在中考时要注意以下三点：一是要鲜明。文章歌颂什么，批评什么，主张什么，反对什么，应旗帜鲜明，不能含含糊糊、模棱两可。二是要正确。中考作文评分标准中对立意的要求是：记叙文要“思想感情健康”，议论文要“观点正确”，这是最基本的要求，要切实做到。三是要力求新颖、深刻、有创意。这是在前二者基础上更高一些的要求。文章要力争写出新意，写出深度，不要过多重复别人已说过多次的话题，不要就事论事、浅尝辄止。还要注意立意的时代性和针对性。

如有四位同学写自己游佘山的经历：第一位写了自己游佘山的过程，毫无疑问是“流水账”。第二位先抑后扬，先写自己上山时的艰难，然后写看到的佘山的美，进而赞美祖国的大好河山，立意显然比第一位有了进步。第三位从上山的路写起，上山可乘缆车或沿石阶上去，写自己沿阶而上的艰难，觉得山太高，爬不上去，最后克服困难终于来到山顶，欣赏到了山顶美景，这时却觉得山并不高，由此体会到“欲穷千里目，更上一层楼”的哲理，从而明白要想攀上高峰，必须作艰苦的努力，立意显然更高。最后一位则写自己在佘山的两大景点(佘山大教堂和佘山天文台)之间徘徊，因时间关系只能选择其中一个景点，最后自己选择了佘山天文台，文章论述的是一个普遍性的问题，那就是作为当代中学生在神学与科学之间该如何选择，立意同样出色。所以，同样一个题材，立意可以完全不同，写作时，我们一定要善于从自己独特的生活感受出发，寻找新颖的角度去开掘事物的特点，探求事物的本质。只有这样，我们才能提炼出正确、深刻、新颖的主题来。

三、选材

五彩缤纷的人类社会，为我们提供了取之不尽、用之不竭的写作材料。有位着名的作家曾经说过这样一句话：“材料选得准，选得好，文章已经成功了一半。”考生写作文应该注重捕捉生活的闪光点、挖掘生活的新鲜事。生活的闪光点、新鲜事并不是凭空产生的，是靠我们平时的阅读、生活的体验和知识的积累获得的。只要我们在日常学习和生活中，善于做生活的主人、写作的有心人，善于学习新知识、接受新观念、观察新事物、研究新问题，善于观察、深入思考、注重积累，就能为写作提供丰富的“素材源”。当然，生活中惊天动地的典型事件并不多，这就要求我们多留意平凡的小事，注意挖掘事物的本质，探究事物的内涵，提炼其中的精华。如鲁迅先生的《一件小事》，事虽小，但小事中蕴涵着大意义。

我们在作文选材中常常会出现如下问题：一是材料陈旧。有些同学写到老师往往就是挑灯备课或是带病工作，写到父母关心自己就是风雨之夜送患病的“我”上医院等。二是材料单薄。有同学以老师一次补课来表现老师对学生的爱;以一个50分测验成绩来作为证明我“从来没有”这样悲痛的依据，其本意是以细碎小事来反映一种崇高品德，用普通琐事来表现自己某种强烈情感，但由于材料过于单薄，结果往往达不到目的。三是编造材料，“借用”材料。部分同学由于缺乏必要的生活常识，平时自己又不注重积累，不注意观察周围的人和事，结果就造成材料违背生活的真实，甚或出现完全抄袭或变相抄袭人家作文的情况。

针对这些情况，我认为在作文的选材上我们应注意以下一个原则、两个方面。

一个原则就是紧扣主题选材。凡是跟文章主题无关的材料一律舍去，与文章主题关系不大的材料，原则上也一概不用，材料尽量要典型。

两个方面就是，一要注意选材内容的新颖，二要注意拓展并表现自己的知识面。在内容上，要让自己的文章富于时代气息，写社会生活中的新事物;要写真事，抒真情，写自己的生活体验与感受。现实生活是纷繁复杂的，人们对事物的观察、认识也不尽相同，怎样选择最佳的写作角度呢?首先要开拓思路，多列角度;其次要反复比较，选择角度;最后要深入挖掘，确定角度。大多数中学生，所过的无非是平淡无奇的生活，接触的是普普通通的“小”人物、琐琐碎碎的“小”事情，确实没有多少新奇的东西可写，但我们要善于发现这些凡人小事中的闪光点，那么，即使是老材料同样也可写出新意，也可以小见大。

譬如拿抱小孩来说吧，恐怕绝大多数同学都有过此生活体验，但又有谁想到拿来作文呢?有一位聪明的同学却想到了，她从陪表姐的孩子玩耍半小时而“累得精疲力竭，叫苦不迭”的体验中，提炼出这样一个颇有意义的中心：“由此，我想到了我小的时候，也一定是够调皮的，爸爸妈妈也一定是这么哄我，陪我玩，辛辛苦苦把我拉扯大的，这是多么不容易啊!这时，我不禁吟起了孟郊的诗句：‘谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。’我该怎样来报答父母对我的抚养之恩呢?”作文的主体部分就是描述与表现孩子玩耍的情形，并不难写;其所以成为一篇成功之作，在于她善于做生活的有心人，从这件很不起眼的小事中，发掘出了其中的意蕴。

四、行文

作文的行文方面涉及文章的详略安排、结构层次、过渡照应、首尾呼应，涉及文章写作时的记叙顺序、描写方法、修辞手法和名言警句的运用等。由于涉及的内容众多，在此不一一赘述，仅举两例加以说明。

譬如取舍要得当。有一同学写“喜欢游泳的弟弟”，文章大部分内容写其怎么去学游泳的，又是怎样逐渐爱上游泳的，但弟弟“如何喜欢”却写得很少。很显然，文章就失去了平衡。

再如描写要具体。有一同学写早晨的校园是这样写的：随着上课的音乐铃声，热闹的校园进入安静之中。大楼里不久就传出了朗朗的书声。再看另一段文字：随着早自修的音乐声铃，原来像一锅开水似的校园立刻变了样。二楼的教室里传出了“天苍苍，野茫茫，风吹草低见牛羊”。三楼的教室里飘出了陆游的“夜阑卧听风吹雨，铁马冰河入梦来”，还有王勃的千古佳句“海内存知己，天涯若比邻”。四楼的教室里则飞出了“万里赴戎机，关山度若飞。朔气传金柝，寒光照铁衣。将军百战死，壮士十年归……”噢，他们在复习，此起彼伏的朗朗书声合在一起，汇成了一首宏亮美丽的乐曲。两下一比较，高下自分。所以我们在描写时一定要注意避免语句的空洞、生硬，描述尽量要生动、形象。另外，还需指出的是，我们有些同学在作文中过分追求内容的浮夸、文字的花哨，过分追求文章中语言的华美，从而堆砌词语，结果往往给人以无病呻吟、矫揉造作之感，必须坚决杜绝此类情况发生。

Football is the world’s most popylar sport. We play football at the playground. We also have fun when we play football. We also call it soccer.

Our students must do exercises everyday to stay healthy, and I’ve found that play football is a very good way to stay healthy. Football players must be rugged. It’s one of the most popular sports all over the world. We can run on the ground for a long time and we also can prove our friendship with the members of our team.

More and more people like watching football matches. They can’t sleep or eat when their teams are playing. They shout for their players. I think many Chinese football players have done better match after match. But we will have a long way to go to Asia and to the world. We should learn from foreign teams. Foreign players and coaches must be invited. Dalian Wanda, Shanghai Shenhua and Guangdong Apollo are among the best teams.

I love playing football, because I can play football to stay healthy, football is a good sport.

My mother is 38 years old, but she never tells others how old she is. She says she just doesnt want them to know about it! My mother is a well-known doctor in our area. She works hard. She often gets up very early in the morning and rushes to the hospital to look after her patients. She is kind to her patients and treats them the way she treats her family. Sometimes I wonder whom she loves more, her patients or me.

My father is 40 years old. He has short hair, big eyes and a small mouth. He is my best friend.

My father is a teacher. Just like my mother, he is very busy. He doesn?ˉt have any holidays or weekends. Every morning he goes to school very early and stays with his students until late in the afternoon. It seems that he never gets tired! His students love and respect him. He always tells my mother how good it is to be a teacher, because his students make him feel young. He thinks my mother should be a teacher, too! But so far she hasnt taken his advice.

I will be a new student in my fathers school this summer. I will work harder and I hope one day I can be a good doctor like my mother.