新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语（精品20篇）

一、要将重点放在一个“感”字上

不少同学开始写观后感，往往将“观”的内容写得很长，总爱把故事情节从头到尾加以介绍，生怕读者不知其内容，而发表“感”的文字却很少。如一个同学在写《一个独生女的故事》观后感时，先将整个故事从头到尾讲述了一遍，先写张鸣鸣如何品学兼优，再写张鸣鸣的父亲突然去世，母亲因承受不了这一打击而重病缠身;接着写张鸣鸣从自己学梳头开始，怎样担负起繁重的家务，接受一个个严酷的考验，然后写她在社会的帮助下一天天长大。最后结尾时才写到：我要向张鸣鸣学习，不被困难所屈服，从小要学做自己能做的事。针对这样一篇结构的观后感，我首先肯定他看得很认真，记住了影片的情节，但从观后感的文体要求上看，是不合格的。因全文只有最后一句“感”，虽然这句“感”的内容贴切，但文章没抓住“感”这个重点，写偏了，好像一篇电影内容简介。我强调学生应以“感”为主，从文字上看，“感”的内容大约占影片主要内容的四、五倍。文中适当引用影片内容，是为“感”服务的。因此，引用电影内容只要三言两语，不要具体叙述，更不要什么细致的描写。观看了《伟人爱迪生》后，我要求学生：谁能用最简单的语言概括故事内容?有个同学说：本片主要讲述爱迪生从一个身无分文的打扫地下室的清洁工成长为一个举世闻名的大科学家的过程;还有个学生补充说：主要讲了他发明电灯的事，他给全世界带来了光明。我将两位同学的发言进行比较：前者准确些，后者只是无数发明中最突出的一项，并肯定他们能用简短的语言概括故事内容，然后让学生抓住一点谈自己的感受。如爱迪生刻苦钻研的精神，不怕失败的精神，敢于创新的精神等，这样写出来的文章就克服以叙述故事为主的毛病了，不仅突出“感”字，而且读后能感人。

二、“感”是重点，不等于离开“观”

有的同学写观后感，只是在开头提一下“观了某部影片后，大有启发”等字样，以后就脱离了原片。说上一通自己的感想，牛头不对马嘴，无实际意义。要让“观”和“感”相吻合。如《火烧圆明园》的观后感，我进行指导后让学生先打草稿，然后收了部分习作，发现有的同学“感”与“观”内在联系不紧，有的根本无联系，他们写了一下影片内容后，就写到日本帝国主义侵略中国，如何在中国烧、杀、抢。抓不住影片的主题思想。为了解决这个问题，我从中找了几篇写的好点儿的进行评讲、引路。有个叫王天波的同学在题为《落后就要挨打》一文的结尾时这样写到：影片中那几根石柱至今还挺立在圆明园的废墟上，仿佛在警示人们“落后就要挨打”，我们作为新中国的接班人，一定要学好本领，把祖国建设得更加强大，不让历史悲剧重演。在这段结尾中，习作者再次将“观”到的“几根石柱”抓住，发表“落后就要挨打”的“感”，使文章全文一体，使“感”发于“观”、“观”服务于“感”。

三、要联系实际而“感”

要写好“感”就该联系实际，深入发挥，把自己的“感”写深、写透。

这里的实际，不是单指自我实际，还包括他人实际，社会实际。

如观了《四个小伙伴》，我让学生说说丁小东等四个小伙伴他们开始错在哪里?你们也有过他们的想法吗?学生讨论很热烈，认为四个小伙伴错在认为只做一件好事就会成功。有个同学说，他自己原来就有类似的想法，每年三月五日，他都做一件好事，他认为自己就是雷锋似的好少年了。还有个同学说，他为班级主动打扫过两次清洁，有的一次也没主动打扫，却还被评为“红花少年”。认为老师、同学们偏心。看了《四个小伙伴》后，他和四个小伙伴一样，都认识到只有踏踏实实，一步一个脚印去做，才能实现自己的理想。

[《开学第一课》观后感及写作指导

My hometown Nanchang is the Peoples Republic of China Jiangxi Provinces provincial capital, Chinese one of 35 super cities, has the essence or quintessence of things tianbao, the human outstanding earth deities since the ancient times fine reputation.It has more than 2200 years history and the deep cultural inside story, is the Peoples Republic of China State Council names the historical city.Not only Nanchang is the ecological environment exquisite the Chiangnan region of rivers and lakes, Communist Party of China it the colors raise place.Has the honor to receive many times the Peoples Republic of China"the nation cultured and civilized city", "the national health cityadvanced city", "the Chinese outstanding traveling city", "thenational two supports model city" the title.

Nanchang is situated at middle and lower reaches Yangtze River, westPoyang Lake the Nanan, is only 11 the provincial capital city whichwith southeast the Yangtze River delta, the Zhujiang Delta and Fujianthe economic zone adjoin west, receives opens, north-south north andsouth. Beijing nine, Zhejiang and Jiangxi provinces, the Anhui Jianxithree bar iron routes connect to this, is Beijing nine on-line theonly provincial capital city; 105th, 320, 316 federal highways gothrough vertically Nanchang; The Changbei international airport mayreach national each big city; The water transportation enters YangtzeRiver after Ganjiang River to leave East China Sea. Looked from theeconomic significance that, Nanchang has become international andeastern part the coastal developed area industry gradient shift idealarea.

My name is Yin Zhaoyi. Im nine years old. Im from Hengyang, Hunan. I love writing and reading.

I was a lively and cheerful girl, face, round eyes, long eyebrows, high nose, black hair, big mouth, short stature, long limbs.

Today is Sunday. I asked my mother if I could go to the library to read books. My mother said yes, I went straight to the library happily, and there were very few people in the library. I picked up a book and looked up. An hour passed, and two hours passed. Until 6 oclock in the evening, I found it was 6, and I ran home at full speed.

Nowadays,with the rapid increase of population,the problems of overloading in cities is becoming more and more serious around the world.

For instance,the resources such as education,jobs,health care that a city can supply is limited.So more populations mean that everyone living in the city have less welfare.In addition,the phenomenon of pollution can also be aggravating.And the traffic jams will disturb drives frequently.

In order to deal with the problems caused by overloading,in my opinion,Lowering the birth rate is the essential methods.On the other hand,another way which is executable to reduce the pressure of population in cities is to move people from cities to suburban areas.Of course,this need the help of governments.

In a nutshell,it is time for us to make efforts to control the population timely.

Good afternoon, teachers! My name is YangXiaodan. I`m 11

now. I`m from Class2 Grade 5 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. My English teacher is Miss Sun. She`s quiet and kind. She`s short and young. My good friend is ZhangBingbing. She`s 12. She`s tall and pretty. We`re in the same class. We both like English very much. I like painting , listening to music, playing computer games and

reading books. My favourite food is chicken. It`s tasty and yummy. I often do my homework and read books on Saturdays. This is me. Please remember YangXiaodan. Thank you very much!

Autumn is a beautiful season, Tianmei, water beauty, the field more beautiful.

Walking the field path, the roadside neat white poplar stretched a huge arm, such as a vigorous soldiers, mighty. The leaves of the branches have been put on yellow. Breeze blowing, rushing sound. Leaves could not withstand the temptation of the autumn wind, naughty flying in the air some, then fluttering leisurely fell to the ground, the earth covered with a layer of natural carpet. Carpet yellow, soft, stepped up to rustling.

Through the field path, golden wheat field greeted. Autumn wind blowing, wheat waves rolling, I seem to exposure to the golden ocean. Wheat waves in the sun shining under the glare, thorn people were blinded. But how can I let this charming scenery? Risking the pain of eyes have to enjoy some. You look! Pigeon wheat grinning mouth, swinging laughing waist, frequently nodded, mutual respect. They must be in the open harvest dance, no wonder the wind girl a long time do not want to leave for the wheat field bursts of fragrance.

Distant, corn is also quite straight pole, seems to guard this beautiful field. Perhaps they are also attracted by this fascinating scenery, willing to do this beauty guardian.

Watching the wheat waves rolling, sniffing array of wheat incense, peasant uncle a smile full of face surfaced in front of me. I was drunk and immersed in this fascinating scenery.

I love the autumn, the more beautiful autumn fields.

to introduce myself(介绍我自己)

hello,every one!(大家好)

my name is **** . (我叫****)

im a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改)

i live in the beautiful city of rizhao.(我住在美丽的rizhao城)(你可以把rizhao改成自己家乡的城市的名称的拼音)

im an active ,lovely and clever boy.(我是一个活跃的可爱的聪明的男孩)

in the school , my favourite subject is maths . (在学校，我最喜欢数学)

perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well .(也许有些人认为这很难学)

but i like it.(但我喜欢他)

i belive that if you try your best, everything can be done well.(我相信每件事付出努力就会有害结果)

i also like sports very much.(我也很喜欢运动)

such as,running,volleyball and so on. (像跑步、排球等等)

im kind-hearted.(我很热心)

if you need help ,please come to me .(如果你需要帮助，就来找我)

i hope we can be good friends!(我希望我们能成为好朋友)

ok.this is me .a sunny boy.(好了，这就是我，一个阳光男孩)

I have a little white rabbit. It is snow and white, really like a mass of white cotton. Eyes are very beautiful, like two rubies inlaid in the white face. Ears are very long, put up is particularly clever. It signed the front legs short and small, hind legs are fat and strong, so can only jump, can not run. Tail is also very small, almost can not see. It stands like a man.

I remember one time I pulled a radish from the yard, it did not even jump with me in front of me, while I do not pay attention to the mud with the mud to Diao away. I always do not want to let it eat unclean things, this time and as usual, we have done a fierce "struggle", of course I will win, when I put the clean radish in front of it, it thought me Throw in the towel, they triumphantly eat radish.

My little rabbit is so cute!

Anyone seen pandas today I went to the zoo. Giant panda it has a fat body wearing a big glasses it loves eating bamboo is a national level to protect animals.

In 20xx the national wild giant panda 1590 only. Adult pandas from 120 ~ 180 10 ~ 20 cm long, 60 ~ 110 kg weight. Trunk tail is white, two ears, eyes, legs, and shoulder are all black, I eat other plants, and even dead animals. , appetite is big, also to spring or a stream to drink every day. Living between 2400 ~ 3500 meters mountain bamboo forest. The living environment humidity is very big, a fairly large temperature difference. The pandas scientific name actually called "panda", meaning to "bear" like a cat, that is to say, "nature is similar to bear, and the appearance is similar to the cat.

The panda only more than 160 people have to protect giant pandas.

谁都见过大熊猫今天我去了动物园。大熊猫它长着一身胖胖的身体戴着一个大大的墨镜它很爱吃竹子是国家一级保护动物。

20xx年全国野生大熊猫有1590只。成年大熊猫120~180尾长10~20厘米，体重60~110千克。躯干是尾白色，两耳、眼周、四肢和肩胛部全是黑色，偶食其它植物，甚至动物尸体。日食量很大，每天还到泉水或溪流饮水。居住于海拔2400~3500米的高山竹林中。其生活环境湿度很大，温差也比较大。熊猫的学名其实叫“猫熊”，意思即为“像猫一样的熊”，也就是说“本质类似于熊，而外貌却相似于猫。

熊猫只剩160多大家一定要保护大熊猫。

My name is XXX. I am a local person who is 21years old. I am from chongqing and I am of the opinion that my hometown is a beautiful city.

我的名字叫XXX。我是一个当地的人是21years老了。我来自重庆和我的看法是,我的家乡是一个美丽的城市。

Moreover, I would like to say something about my family. I have my mother ,my father,and my elder sisther,they love me very much,I know my parents have so much hops and dreams for me。So I must study well.

此外,我想说我家庭的一些事。我有我的母亲,我的父亲,我的哥哥sisther,他们都很爱我,我知道我的父母有如此多的蛇麻草和梦想,所以我必须好好学习。

I have the confidence because I have such ability! I am kind-hearted, patient, outgoing and creative. I am a hard working student especially do the thing I am interested in. I will try my best to resolve any problem no matter how difficult it is. I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning.

我有信心,因为我有这样的能力!我是善良、有耐心、外向和创造性。我是一个勤奋的学生尤其是做这件事我很感兴趣。我将尽我所能去解决任何问题,无论它有多么困难。我始终相信,你将很容易落后,除非他继续学习。

In spare time, I like reading books, surfing on the Internet, listening to music like, classic, or light music, because they can make me feel relaxed. Nobody could keep on working efficiently, therefore proper amusement is a must. In addition, I insist on do some physical training such as running, and horizontal bar as well. By doing this, I can always stay healthy.

在业余时间,我喜欢看书,上网,听音乐,喜欢音乐,古典,或轻,因为它们能使我感觉轻松。没有人能保持工作效率高,因此适当的娱乐是必须的。此外,我坚持做一些体育锻炼,比如跑步、和单杠等。这样做的话,我能够始终保持健康。

That’s all. Thank you for giving me such a valuable opportunity!

这就是全部。谢谢你给我这个宝贵的机会!

[介绍我自己英语作文

Hello! my chinese name is Yin Xiaoyan and English name is Anna.Im a happy girl. Im 13 years old. Jly 22th is my birthday.

Our school is very nice.Im in class 3 ,Grade 6.Im go to school by bus. I have many teachers. I love them.

I have many habbies.I like swimming,reading and listening to music.my favourite food is rice, my favourite fruit is apple and my favourite colour is blue. The dog is my favourite animal.Why? Because dog are very lovely!

This is me! A happy and lovely girl!

Everyone:

Hello!

I am a third year master major in automation at ×× University, P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering, I am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.

Education background

In 1995, I entered the Nanjing University of Science & Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester,In 1999, I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test.

At the period of my graduate study, my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester, I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year, I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department, which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently, I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.

Research experience and academic activityWhen a sophomore, I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab, I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis & dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.In retrospect, I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and experience, which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research interests include: Network Scheduling Problem, Heuristic Algorithm research (especially in GA and Neural network), Supply chain network research, Hybrid system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.

Thank you!

大家好：

我是××大学一名大三的学生因为对工业工程这个行业的巨大兴趣,我正在申请博士研究生课程。

教育背景

1995,我进入了××大学的科学与技术专业，这是被广泛认为是中国最好的工程学校。在接下来的本科学习期间,我的学术记录在整个专业中一直很杰出。我每学期都被授予头等奖,1999,我有幸进入研究生课程的入学考试。在我的研究生学习期间,我的总平均成绩(3.77 / 4)，在所有的学会说呢过中排名前5。在第二个学期,我成为了老师的助手,这个在我们学校只给有才华和成熟的学生。这一年,我获得了宏碁奖学金，作为唯一的候选人，这是杰出学生赋予我的大学的最高荣誉。目前,我正在准备我的毕业论文,并试图获取优秀的毕业论文的荣誉。

大二的时候，凭着自己的经验和学术研究,我加入了人工智能爱好者协会,并开始缩小我的兴趣我的未来研究。随着OpenGL和Matlab的工具的发展,我设计了一个仿真程序的运输调度系统。现在已经有不同的研究小组在学院广泛应用。我承担并完成了南京市污水处理厂的污水分析处理项目。这是我第一次把一个实验室的想法转换成一个商业产品,回想起来,我发现自己站在坚实的基础上,在理论和经验,这为我准备了博士课程提供了很好的便利。我未来的研究方向包括:网络调度问题的启发式算法的研究(特别是在GA和神经网络),供应链网络的研究,混合动力系统的性能分析与Petri网和数据挖掘。

谢谢大家！

写人是作文的基本命题。写人，可以侧重写人物的外部表现，即写他在做些什么，或者有哪些动人事迹;也可侧重写人物的内心活动，写他在一件事面前，在与别人交往中，或在一种特定的环境中的内心变化，和随之产生的喜、怒、哀、乐之情;也可以交错地写人的外部表现和心理活动。

写人的文章应注意以下几点：

⒈交代清楚他是什么人，如他的年龄、性别、外貌、职业、性情，及与自己的关系。

⒉要写出人物的特点。就是要写出这个人与其他人不同的地方。只有把特点写出来了，才能给读者留下深刻的印象，文章也才能与众不同，有了新意。

⒊要通过具体的事件来表现人物，决不能象老师给你写品德评语那样来写人。所选的事件要能充分表现这人性格和品质。当你把事情写好了，人物也就写好了。如当你读完《董存瑞舍身炸暗堡》以及《我的战友邱少云》以后，你对这两位英雄就有了深刻的印象了。

⒋要抓住人物细微的动作及其变化，给予具体，生动的描写。即抓住细节刻画人物，使原来比较平板、模糊的形象变得栩栩如生，有血有肉。如《一夜的工作》中，周总理扶正转椅就是一个细节描写，它表现了周总理有条不紊的工作作风。

⒌在进行人物语言描写时，要符合人物的身份和性格，因为不同的年龄、职业、性格等的人物，他们所讲的话是不同的，即使是同一个人，在不同的情况下所讲的话也是不同的。

⒍要紧紧扣住人物的特点和文章所要表达的中心思想来写人，不要想到什么就写什么，马虎拼凑，拉拉杂杂，更不能重复罗嗦，画蛇添足，使人看了不知在说什么。

1.在文献综述时，应系统地查阅与自己的毕业设计选题直接相关的国内外文献。搜集文献应尽量全，尽量选自学术期刊或学术会议。掌握全面、大量的文献资料是写好综述的前提。

2.文献综述的题目不宜过大、范围不宜过宽。

3.在引用文献时，应注意选用代表性、可靠性和科学性较好的文献。

4.在文献综述中，应说明毕业设计选题方向的发展历史、他人的主要研究成果、存在的问题及发展趋势等。文献综述在逻辑上要合理，即做到由远而近先引用关系较远的文献，最后才是关联最密切的文献。要围绕主题对文献的各种观点作比较分析，不要教科书式地将有关的理论和学派观点简要地汇总陈述一遍。评述(特别是批评前人不足时)要引用原作者的原文，防止对原作者论点的误解。

5.文献综述要条理清晰，文字通顺简练。采用的文献中的观点和内容应注明来源，模型、图表、数据应注明出处。

6.文献综述中要有自己的观点和见解。鼓励学生多发现问题、多提出问题，并指出分析、解决问题的可能途径。

7.毕业设计(论文)的文献综述主要是为自己进行毕业设计(论文)提供文献方面的帮助和指导，所以，只要把自己所作题目的相关文献找准、找全，然后对这些文献中的观点、方法、原理、材料等进行归纳和总结，形成文字就可以了。总之，一篇好的文献综述，应有较完整的文献资料，有评论分析，并能准确地反映主题内容。

8.文献综述的总字数要求不少于3000字，应重点提出主体部分。

9.合理选择字体和行间距，力求整体布局合理、美观。

My hometown is in Gansu Lixian, there are many mountains.

In the distance, the mountains look like a green planet surrounded by forests. The stone on the mountain dressed the mountain as a world of stone.

The trees grow more luxuriantly in summer and dress up as green cashmere. The mountain terraces like people walking the steps, also like the mountains in Grandpa smile.

The mountain became a yellow world in autumn, and the fruits and crops were ripe, and the mountain was like a magician, constantly changing crops and fruits for human beings.

In winter the mountains covered with a white dress, like an angel, in the fog, the mountains like a bottomless mountain, no matter how you cant see the mountain bottom.

This is the mountain of my hometown all the year round, I love it.

Good morning，ladies and gentlemen. I am Tracy from Guangzhou Huamei

International School. I am a shiny girl. My family love me and I love then too.

Do you know how help at home? Let me tell you about that.

My mom works very hard every day. She comes home very late in the evening.

Usually my dad cooks for us. Sometimes I help my dad to wash the vegetables.

Sometimes I set the table. I always wash the dishes when we finish eating. After

I finish my homework I often water the flowers. I also look after my pet fish. I

feed the fish before I go to bed.

I really enjoy helping my parents at home. Do you think I an a helpful

girl? I think so!

Thank you!

早上好，女士们，先生们。我是特蕾西从广州华美国际学校。我是一个闪亮的女孩。我的家人爱我，我也爱然后。你知道怎么帮助在家吗?让我来告诉你。

我妈妈每天工作很努力。她晚上回家很晚。通常我爸爸为我们做饭。有时我帮我爸爸洗蔬菜。有时我摆桌子。我总是洗盘子，当我们吃完。我完成我的作业后，我通常浇花。我也照顾我的宠物鱼。我上床睡觉前我喂鱼。

我非常喜欢帮助我的父母在家里。你认为我一个一个有用的女孩吗?我想是这样的!

谢谢你们!

Good afternoon， my dear professors

I am very glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is XXX， 23 years old. I come from xianyang， a beautiful city of Shaanxi Province. Majoring in Environmental science, I will graduated from the Urban and environmental department of XXX University in the coming July.

Generally speaking， I am a hard-working student. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. In my spare time, I have broad interests like many other youngsters. Just like my father， I am open-minded ，quick in thought and very fond of football. Frequently I exchange ideas with my family during super. I like reading books, especially those about history.These work have urged me develop active and responsible characters.

I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning. Of course, if I am given a chance to further my education in this famous University, I will spare no effort to master the latest knowledge in my field and make good preparation for my future profession. If possible， I will go on with my study for doctorate degree. In a word， I am looking forward to making a solid foundation for future profession after two years study here.

Hello,everyone here.Now,please let me introduce myself to you.I am the only girl in my family. For my own hobbies, I love traveling，listening to music and reading.From these hobbis, you can see,I would like to live a free life.Of course, everyone has some strong points.without myself exception,for instance,both of playing the piano and drawing are my strong points.At present,I am satified with my life. The activities in school are great.My teachers and classmates are friendly to me.For my parents,both of them are managers.They are always busy working.As for my ideas of going abroad to study, I think it is useful and wonderful if we have the chance to do so.I also would like to go abroad to study to improve myself.Thats all.Thank you.

My name is Fang Yu, 11 years old this year, grade five.

I have long hair, thin eyebrows below the mosaic of a pair of glossy black eyes, slender figure. My hobbies are playing guzheng and painting. But my biggest hobby is reading and playing chess. Let me first talk about the book bar.

Books are an essential part of my life. I love reading, and sometimes Im crazy about it. Mom said I was a little bookworm. Once, I was reading a book, watching it, my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy sugar. I was seeing a joke and laughing. I later learned that my mother asked me to go downstairs to buy things, and I hurried to buy them. I bought a book again. Mother asked: How did you buy salt? I was so careless!

The next thing is to say chess. When I feel bored, I play chess with my brother. If a tie, I will come here again. If I win, I jump three feet high. If I lose, Ill go to the heart of my happy pet guzheng.

I should say my happy pet, I learned the guzheng for two and a half years, the play is good, the competition still won the two prize! Envy? Painting does not say.

Look at my self - introduction. Do you want to be a friend with me?

我叫方雨，今年11岁，上五年级。

我有长长的头发，细细的眉毛下面镶嵌着一双乌亮的眼睛，苗条的身材。我的爱好有弹古筝、画画。不过我最大的爱好是看书、下象棋。我先说说书吧。

书是我生活中必不可少的一部分。我爱看书，有时看的都着了迷。妈妈说我是个小书迷。有一次，我正在看书，看的津津有味，妈妈叫我下楼买糖，我正看到一段笑话，哈哈大笑。后来才知道妈妈叫我下楼买东西，我连忙去买。买回来我又去看书。妈妈问: 怎么买的是盐? 我真粗心呀!

下面该说象棋了，当我觉得无聊时，就和弟弟下棋。如果打成平局，我还要再来一次。要是我赢了，我一蹦三尺高。要是我输了，我就找我的快乐宠物古筝谈(弹)心去了。

该说我的快乐宠物了，我学古筝两年半，弹的还不错，比赛中还得了二等奖呢!羡慕吗?画画就不说了。

看了我的自我介绍，你想和我成为朋友吗?

Good morning Sir, (What will you say if it is a woman?)

I am glad to be here for this interview. First, let me thank you for finding time in the midst of pressing affairs.

I am 25 years old and I am local. (I live locally sounds better) I am seeking an opportunity to work with XXX as Sales. (IN sales or As a Sales representative/whatever)。My professional experience and my awareness of your unparalleled reputation have led me to want to work for your company.

I have a bachelor degree with a major in Mechanical and Electrical field.(pause) Graduated from the XXX university in 20xx. Over the past three years, I have worked with XXX Co.,Ltd as Sales (again, in sales or as a sales man/person/rep?) who responsible (with responsibility mainly) for the market of Hunan. During this period, I have learnt much. I learned the values of teamwork and commitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and commercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your company.

I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure.

In my free time, I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton.

I am expecting to become your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say ’I would love to become you colleague/join the company)

Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. ’Being offhand’ means to be rude, inconsiderate, ill-mannered so I don’t think that is whay you mean! In advance of what? ’Let’s leave it at that’ is a command, it sounds rather abrupt and ill-mannered to me, again I don’t think this is what you meant. How about ’I would love to join your company and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.’ and just finish with a smile!)

Thanks.

[外企面试英语自我介绍

The Great Wall

The Great Wall runs across North China like a huge dragon,It winds its way from west to east,across deserts,over mountains,through valleys till at last it reaches the sea.Its the longest wall on the earth,also one of the wonders in the world.

The Great Wall has a history of more than 2000 years.The first part was built during the Spring and Autumn Period.All the walls were joined up in Qin Dynasty.All tile work was done by hand.Thousands of people died while building the wall.Thus the Great Wall came into existence.

Since then,it has been rebuilt and repaired many times.Now the Great Wall,the admiration of the world,has taken on a new look.Its visited by large numbers of people from all partsof thecountry and the world.

长城

长城,像一条巨龙横亘华北地区,它穿过沙漠,越过高山,跨过山谷,由西到东蜿蜒曲折,最后到达大海.它是地球上最长的墙,也是世界奇迹之子.

长城有2000多年的历史.它开始修建于春秋时期.秦朝时,所有的城墙联结在一起.所有工作都是用手完成的,成千上万的人在修建长城时死去.长城就是这样出现的.

目前为止,长城重修多次.现在的长城面貌一新,迎接来角全国和全世界各地的游客.