新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语(20篇)

自我介绍是向别人展示你自我介绍好不好，甚至直接关系到你给别人的第一印象的好坏及以后交往的顺利与否。下面就是小编整理的高三英语口语自我介绍，一起来看一下吧。 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇一：

Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!

OK. This is me .A sunny girl. 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇三：

Good morning/afternoon/evening, my name is . It is really a great honor to have this opportunity/chance to introduce myself. I would like to answer whatever you may raise, and I hope I can make a good performance today.

上午好/下午好/晚上好!我的名字叫……。今天有机会进行自我介绍深感荣幸。我乐意回答

你们所提出来的任何问题。我希望我今天能表现的非常出色。 大学英语口语自我介绍范文篇二：

I am years old, born in province/Beijing, northeast/southeast/southwest…… of china, and I am currently a freshman(大一新生)/sophomore(大二学生)/junior(大三学生)/senior(大四学生) student at Capital Institute of Physical Education.

我今年……岁，出生在……省/北京，它位于中国的东北/东南/西南……等部。我目前是首都体育学院大一/大二/大三/大四的学生。

忌措辞缺乏文采

这类作文标题太平淡、太直白，不能给人以美感。这一现象多是由于考生的语言功底不深厚、不过硬造成的。下面是某些考生自拟的作文标题：9.我选老王;10.大李更具风采;11.要爱岗敬业;12.为小刘喝彩。上述作文标题虽然切题且简洁，也旗帜鲜明地体现了作者的“思考、权衡与选择”，却因为缺少文采和美感，难以吸引读者的目光，“第一感觉”很一般，获得高分、得满分自然也就无从谈起了。

高考写作应该避免的三大禁忌

一：无视整体，断章取义

就是没有从整体上把握作文试题所给材料的含义及有关要求，而是仅凭其中的只言片语来立意。如此立意，往往失之偏颇。

二：联想随意，解读过度

就是没有站在中心角度或重要角度来立意，而是联想太随意、无遵循，对作文试题所给材料进行了过度解读。如此立意，往往失之于宽。

三：附和偷懒，没有主见

就是没有提出属于自己的观点，而是照搬照抄他人的看法，或人云亦云，或老生常谈。如此立意，往往失之于旧。

My name is XXX dragons, Mistress (2) class of students, who lives in Funan side of Shuijingfang community.

I am very ordinary, in the whole school more than one thousand students are very inconspicuous. In grade two, my grades are 18 and 11 in the class.

But I also have different experiences with my classmates. I finished my freshman year course when I was four years old. In order to go to school earlier, I left Chengdu to study in Huanggang at the age of five. Back in Chengdu, I was less than six years old when I was in grade two. Maybe its dad who wants me to go to his study place later.

I like to shoot balls, jump rope, run, eat Kentucky Fried Chicken, Beijing roast duck, of course, my favorite is to read. My bookcase is full of Chinese and foreign famous books, and every book is covered with my stamp. Dad says there arent many people in my class who read so many books.

Friday was my lucky day. My English teacher gave me a little certificate of "learning English dolls" and an English book. I put him in a book with Chinese and mathematical rewards and pencils, and treasured them in my desk.

I never buy toys or snacks myself. Want to eat, want to play, want to see and parents say a word, buy or not buy by them to decide. I rarely play games on the computer, too.

My weakness is watching TV and playing games. Ill fix it later.

Since I was very small, I was very shy in the public place, so I always

avoided giving performance in front of so many people. Though I tried hard to

get over it in school, I still felt uneasy in the public place. When I came to

the job market, I realized that I must get over my fear, or I would lose my

stage.

I still remembered the horrible experience for my first interview. Early in

the morning, I got a called that I was given a chance to the job interview. I

felt so excited. When I came to the company, I found there were other six young

people competed with me, then I started to feel nervous. The employers asked us

to sit in the round table and introduced ourselves one by one. When it was my

turn, I lowed down my head and spoke in low voice. Then the employers continued

to let us give speeches in the stage. I lose confidence and made the horrible

performance.

This interview taught me a lesson that I must get over my fear, or I will

lose chances. So I practise hard and dare to stand in the stage.

Good morning/afternoon everyone! It is my honor to be here and I really appreciate you offer me the chance of interview .Now I will introduce myself first .My name is……from Xiangfan in Hubei province. Im an honest, responsible, and warm-hearted person. I can adapt different environments quickly .Second I like this kind of field very much and I take it as my career .Till now I have one year experience in this field. As a 21 years man, Id like to experience more to enrich myself and then it can help me to laid good foundation for my future career .There is no use doing what we love ,we must love we do just like the field. At the same time, I am really proud of myself applying for this job. I hope you can give me a chance and I will try my best to do it better. Finally , I hope your hotel can become the best one among hotel industry。 Thanks for your time.

早上/下午好，各位考官。我很荣幸在这应聘这个职位，并且很感谢该酒店给我提供一个面试的机会。现在，我首先来介绍我自己：我叫……，来自湖北襄樊。我是一个诚实、富有责任感、待人热情的人。我能够在短期内适应各种不同的环境。第二，我非常喜欢饮食这个行业，并且我把它当成我的终身职业。到目前为止，我在饮食行业有一年的经验。作为一个已过21岁的成年人，我想要体验的更深来丰富我的生活，并且在那个时候，饮食工作能帮我未来的职业规划奠定一个好的基础。做我们喜欢做的事情往往没有用，我们必须热爱上我们要做的事情，就好像饮食这个领域一样。同时，我以应聘这份工作而感到自豪，希望贵店能给我一个展示的平台，我将全力以赴将它做到更好。最后，我希望贵店的事业如日中天，做饮食行业的领头人。谢谢您抽出时间来面试。

I am a lovely little girl, although I am 9 years old, but the understanding of the animal makes you cant believe a ferocious tiger, strange Chinese sturgeon, a giant pandas, a naughty dolphins, with the lion king of the forest, a sly fox, and clever monkey in these animals, my favorite animal is the white rabbit, the rabbit is a common animal, but I saw a small white rabbit remembered in the snow in the joy! Because I like rabbits, so I know it very well!

小白兔长得很普通，雪白雪白的毛儿，非常漂亮，要是下雪，动物们一定以为白兔是雪中小精灵。长长的耳朵，像黑宝石的眼睛，还有一张三瓣嘴，宛如听了什么笑话，笑得嘴都裂开了。

The rabbit is very common, white hair, very beautiful, if it were to snow white, animal must think snow elves. Long ears, black stones like the eyes, and a three valve mouth, like to listen to what a joke, grin cracked.

我猜白兔长得不特别是因为它吃得不好，吃一些萝卜或者青菜，我就搞不懂它为什么不吃肉呀?如果我是白兔，我就吃肉，不吃萝卜。

I guess the rabbit isnt particularly because it is not good to eat, eat some carrots or cabbage, I do not know why it does not eat meat? If I was a rabbit, I eat meat, do not eat radish.

我很喜欢兔子，所以小时候妈妈给我买了一只可爱的小白兔，可惜它在我家只过了一天就死了，还记得那天中午，妈妈买了青菜，我就拼命地把菜往小白兔的笼子里塞，白兔狼吞虎咽地大吃起来，好像一个星期没吃饭似的。就这样我让它吃了很多青菜，结果它被吃撑死了呀!唉!我真希望兔子像千年老龟一样活那么长时间呀!

I like the rabbit, so when my mother bought me a cute little rabbit, but it in my home, only one died, remember that day at noon, my mother bought vegetables, I tried to put food into the small rabbit rabbit cage plug, eat like wolves and tigers to eat, If hadnt eaten for a week. So I let it eat a lot of vegetables, it is eat dead! Oh! I really hope that the rabbit like a thousand year old turtle live so long time!

听了我的介绍，你喜欢兔子吗?

After listening to my introduction, you like rabbits?

Qingdao, a beautiful seaside city, is located in the southeast part of Shandong Province. To the east, a short distance across the Yellow Sea, lie Korea and Japan, making Qingdao an important city for international trade.

For thirty three years, until 1949, Qingdao was a colony of Germany and Japan. As a result, buildins in Qingdao have a great deal of European architecture. This foreign architecture -a remnant of the colonial past- now beautifies this seaside city.

The red roofs, green trees, blue sea, and azure sky form a bright and colorful picture of Qingdao. The city is sometimes known as the Switzerland of the Orient.

Surrounded by the sea on three sides, Qingdao attracts many tourists with its charming seascape. Sights like the Eight Passes Villas, the Zhan Bridge, Wusi Square, Mt. Laoshan, will help you remember Qingdao. Just walking on the sand and listening to the surf breaking on the beach becomes enjoyable.

Qingdao offers food with distinctive flavors--especially seafood. So take this chance to enjoy the delicious seafood of Qingdao. Also, Qingdao is the home of the famous Qingdao (Tsingtao) Beer. Have a bottle of pure Qingdao Beer right here in Qingdao!

The Qingdao Municipal Government recognizes the importance of the tourism industry and has further plans to develop tourism in Qingdao. To enhance the tourism industry, Qingdao now sponsors the Qingdao International Beer Festival, the Qingdao International Sea Festival, Beach Culture Festival, the Sea Affection Festival, and the Summer of Qingdao Festival.

In cooperation with the Beijing Olympic Games 2008, Qingdao will hold the Sailing Competition in the Olympic Games in 2008. This great event brings a great opportunity for this charming city to build its bright future.

Situated in the western outskirts of Haidian District, the Summer Palace is 15 kilometers (9.3 miles) from central Beijing. Having the largest royal park and being well preserved, it was designated, in 1960 by the State Council, as a Key Cultural Relics Protection Site of China. Containing examples of the ancient arts, it also has graceful landscapes and magnificent constructions. The Summer Palace is the archetypal Chinese garden, and is ranked amongst the most noted and classical gardens of the world. In 1998, it was listed as one of the World Heritage Sites by UNESCO.

Constructed in the Jin Dynasty (1115-1234), during the succeeding reign of feudal emperors; it was extended continuously. By the time of the Qing Dynasty (1644-1911), it had become a luxurious royal garden providing royal families with rest and entertainment. Originally called Qingyi Garden (Garden of Clear Ripples), it was know as one of the famous three hills and five gardens (Longevity Hill, Jade Spring Mountain, and Fragrant Hill; Garden of Clear Ripples, Garden of Everlasting Spring, Garden of Perfection and Brightness, Garden of Tranquility and Brightness, and Garden of Tranquility and Pleasure). Like most of the gardens of Beijing, it could not elude the rampages of the Anglo-French allied force and was destroyed by fire. In 1888, Empress Dowager Cixi embezzled navy funds to reconstruct it for her own benefit, changing its name to Summer Palace (Yiheyuan). She spent most of her later years there, dealing with state affairs and entertaining. In 1900, it suffered again, being ransacked by the Eight-Power Allied Force. After the success of the 1911 Revolution, it was opened to the public.

Composed mainly of Longevity Hill and Kunming Lake, The Summer Palace occupies an area of 294 hectares (726.5 acres), three quarters of which is water. Guided by nature, artists designed the gardens exquisitely so that visitors would see marvelous views and be amazed by perfect examples of refined craftwork using the finest materials.

Centered on the Tower of Buddhist Incense (Foxiangge) the Summer Palace consists of over 3,000 structures including pavilions, towers, bridges, and corridors. The Summer Palace can be divided into four parts: the court area, front-hill area, front-lake area, and rear-hill and back-lake area.

Front-Hill Area: this area is the most magnificent area in the Summer Palace with the most constructions. Its layout is quite distinctive because of the central axis from the yard of Kunming Lake to the hilltop, on which important buildings are positioned including Gate of Dispelling Clouds, Hall of Dispelling Clouds, Hall of Moral Glory, Tower of Buddhist Incense, the Hall of the Sea of Wisdom, etc.

Rear-Hill and Back-Lake Area: although the constructions are fewer here, it has a unique landscape, with dense green trees, and winding paths. Visitors can feel a rare tranquility, and elegance. This area includes scenic spots such as Kunming Lake and Back Lake , which presents a tranquil beauty, Garden of Harmonious Interest , built by imitating the layout of Southern China’s classical gardens, and Suzhou Market Street, endowed with a strong flavor of the water town Suzhou.

Court Area: this is where Empress Dowager Cixi and Emperor Guangxu met officials, conducted state affairs and rested. Entering the East Palace Gate, visitors may see the main palace buildings: the Hall of Benevolence and Longevity served as the office of the Emperor, the Hall of Jade Ripples where Guangxu lived, the Hall of Joyful Longevity, Cixis residence, the Garden of Virtue and Harmony where Cixi was entertained, Yiyun House , where once lived the Empress Longyu, and Long Gallery, which measures the longest in Chinese gardens.

Front Lake Area: covering a larger part of the Summer Palace, opens up the vista of the lake. A breeze fluttering, waves gleam and willows kiss the ripples of the vast water. In this comfortable area there are the Eastern Bank and Western Bank, Seventeen-Arch Bridge, Nanhu Island, the largest island in Summer Palace, Bronze Ox, an imposing statue beside the lake, and Marble Boat, built in western style with elaborate decorations . On the western bank float six distinct bridges amongst which the Jade-Belt Bridge is the pretty!

Me Hello，everybody!My name`s Kevin Bill。I am a 15-year-old boy and I am from China。My favorite movie are Rush Hour and Mr。Bean。Do you know them?I think they are exciting action movie and interesting comedy 。My English teacher is a beautiful teacher and she`s always friendly to us。Her favorite sport is basketball and we always play basketball together。My favorite music is pop and my favorite fruits are apples and grapes。And Sunday is my favorite day。How about you ?What`s your name?

My name is xxx, masters graduate. Worked for three years before the marketing and management, two-year teacher; I always believe that "gold, no matter where will sparkle." In the three years of marketing, I market planning and development, marketing, administration, personnel training and so forth have been a profound exercise, accumulated a lot of valuable experience in a lifetime.

I always believe that "gold, no matter where will sparkle." I could on its own intelligence and hard work in the field of non-professional to obtain gratifying results, in their own areas of expertise naturally not far behind, "perfect" the goal of my life chasing. Six months and two years of teaching assistant experience in training me confident calm, graceful temperament; as undergraduate research design experiment of the counselors, participation in aquatic Key Laboratory of pilot projects, such as tutoring not only the exercise of my independent research and development capabilities, and further reinforces my knowledge, experimental skills. As always uphold the "Learning" criteria, so I pay attention to social development and security grip pulse, based on reality, and strive to cultivate themselves into the market economic system needs both education and scientific research, market development and management generalists.

[外企英语面试的自我介绍

American eating is funny. They eat almost everything with a fork, and it appears that holding a knife in ones right hand longer than a few seconds is considered to be against good table manners.

The system is that if it is absolutely necessary to use a knife, people take the fork in their left hand, and cut off a piece of meat or whatever it is in the normal manner. Then they put the knife down, transfer the fork to their right hand, and only then do they transport the food to their mouth. This is clearly ludicrous(滑稽可笑), but it is considered good manners.

There are several results of this system. First, if it is not absolutely necessary to use a knife, Americans dont use one, because obviously this greatly complicates(使复杂化) things, and you will therefore see them trying to cut things like potatoes, fish and even bacon(熏猪肉) with a fork. Second, towards the end of a course, since only one implement(器具) is being used, food has to bo chased around the plate with the fork - and for the last mouthful the thumb has to be used to keep the food in place, although one is not supposed to do this.

Third, tables are generally laid with one knife and two forks, the outside fork being for the salad. There is no need for foreign visitors to follow the American system and try to eat the salad with only a fork, but if you do use your knife, remerber to save it for the meat course. Even desserts(甜食) (except ice cream) are eaten with a fork if at all possible, and the spoon you see by your dessert is meant to be for coffee (but if you use it for your dessert no one will say anything).

It is my honor to have this opportunity to introduce myself. Dear Sir:

My name is yangyan, I major in Clinical pharmacy and I will graduate in July this year.

Generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.

During the past few years, I have learned systematically the theory of profession and got the basic manipulative skills about Pharmacy experiment . I have alreadypassed CET-6 in english and CCT-2 (=the second level) on computer . Also I have won several honors . In the hospital, through the year of internship , I learned a lot of knowledge in clinical practice. It may be helpful to my future study .

Thank you .

[医生求职英语自我介绍

Very happy and we feel we are one together - young teachers heroic

feelings, My name is Ling, graduation Yidu teacher.

I was crying my choice too, have work for me sad too, because I embarked on

a career like I did not do a very poor teacher, I cry many times my choice, they

can In countless grief I have been comforted, when I saw both of that is full of

naive, but eager to swim in the ocean of knowledge a child, my sinking, floating

calm the mind, and slowly I also learn from practice feel the teachers pride,

he was like a Spring Silkworms, like the dedication of their own candles no

regrets, I have seen it countless teachers no regrets, and with their youth and

lives to defend the sanctity of the teaching profession, but also what they use

their own actions, with traces of life, inspired by those of us who come after,

I have reluctantly enamel reluctantly, by the reluctance to wholeheartedly love

this job, because I have seen that life will go beyond the utilitarian, although

meals for life, But the living is not for eating, living in the possession of

many small minded, short-term birth in eternity, while the teachers are such a

career.

I know that a teacher tired, bitter, but to their own ideal, I still would

like to pursue, to the surging waves of fighting, to sinister mountain climbing,

there may be storms, a storm, the road may be bumpy, but I still would use

laughter, with songs to fill ups and downs, I will meet with the merry laughter

of the rising sun, I will be flying the heart to face my work and life. Yes

ah!

my name is . there are 4 people in my family. my father is a chemistryteacher. he teaches chemistry in senior high school. my mother is an english teacher. she teaches english in the university. i have a younger brother, he is a junior high school student and is preparing for the entrance exam.

i like to read english story books in my free time. sometimes i surf the internet and download the e- books to read. reading e- books is fun. in addition, it also enlarges my vocabulary words because of the advanced technology and the vivid animations.

i hope to study both english and computer technology because i am interested in both of the subjects. maybe one day i could combine both of them and apply to my research in the future.

我的名字是。有4人在我的家人。我的父亲是一个chemistryteacher。他教高中化学。我的母亲是一名英文教师。她教英语的大学。我有一个弟弟，他是一个初中学生，是联考的准备。

我喜欢阅读，在我空闲时，英文故事书。有时我上网冲浪和下载电子书籍阅读。阅读电子书籍的乐趣。此外，还扩大了，因为我的先进技术词汇和生动的动画。

我希望学习英语和计算机技术，因为我感兴趣的是两个科目。也许有一天，我可以把他们和今后适用于我的研究。

[面试中的英语自我介绍

Hello everyone,

my name is Lee. This is really a great honor to have this opportunity, and I believe I can make good performance today. Now I will introduce myself briefly. I am 20 years old，born in Guangdong province, south of China, and I am a senior student at Guangdong ××University. My major is English. And I will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in June.

In the past four years, I spent most of my time on study. I passed CET4 and CET6 with a ease and acquired basic theoretical and practical knowledge of Language. Besides, I have attended several Speech competition held in Beijing, which really showed our professional advantages. I have taken a tour to some big factories and companies, through which I got a deep understanding of English for application.

Compared to developed countries, unfortunately, although we have made extraordinary progress since 1998, our packaging industry is still underdeveloped, messy and unstable, and the situation of employees in the field is awkward. But I have full confidence in its bright future if only our economy can be kept at the growth pace still. I guess you may be interested in why I choose this job. I would like to tell you that this job is one of my lifelong goals.

If I can work here,I will work hard. As to my character, I cannot describe it well, but I know I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading and listening to the music, but I am not lonely, for I like to chat with my classmates about almost everything. My favorite pastime is to play volleyball, to play cards or to surf online. From life at university, I learn how to balance study and entertainment. By the way, I was an actor in our amazing drama club. I have a few glorious memories on stage.

Good morning professors.Thank you for providing me with such a chance to introduce myself and I hope I can make a good performance today. My name is Zang Yinfeng ,a boy who is from Xing Yue Middle School and has dreamed of entering your school.The strong desire for knowledge has promoted my progress in subjects.I am a hard working student. In the past years,I have won several awards in the competions of English and Computer.Owning strong organizational ablities is my another advantage.I once served as monitor,announcer and so on. English is always my favorite subject and I am good at English .English is my favorite subject, because it’s such a widely used language.

In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlarge my knowledge. In addition to reading, I also like to play basketball. I have been trained in the school basketball team.I think playing basketball not only builds up my body， but also helps me to learn to work in a team.That’s all.

Thank you.

就英语作文书信格式而言，蓝天外语的老师给出了介绍。信头，指的是写信人的地址。但是，地址的写法与中文的有区别，顺序应该从小到大。写日期的时候应注意，年份要写完整，月份除了May, July外，其他的月份可以使用缩写，但是不能使用数字来表示。写收信人姓名及地址的时候要注意使用称号，如对普通男子用Mr,对未婚女子用Miss,对已婚女子用Mrs等。称呼是指对收信人的称呼，一般会使用Dear….信文是信的主要内容，也是信的主体部分。署名的时候一般使用Yours, ….附言是当写信人突然想起还有事情要说的时候，在信的署名下面写上P.S., 然后写上要补充的内容即可。

小升初作文阅卷老师在多年的评卷‘磨炼’中，早已练就了一套‘三眼淘汰法’。你的作文是优是劣，阅卷老师仅凭这‘三眼’即可定乾坤。下面是小编分享的作文需要注意事项，欢迎阅读。

一、第一眼看整体

主要看字体是否工整，卷面是否清洁，布局是否合理——这是试卷出现在老师面前那一刻的第一印象。若字体潦草、卷面肮脏、布局不合理(头大尾长身子小、段少字多密麻麻)，就会让阅卷人眼花缭乱、头晕目眩，厌恶之情骤然而起。此时，阅卷人对你的作文已有了一个极差的印象和不好的分数了，你的作文亦有‘全军覆没’或‘大势将去’之危险;要想‘扶大厦于将倾’，除非你的内容非常精彩，否则，你是难逃‘厄运’的。其实，对‘情节恶劣’者，阅卷老师连内容也不看就已经把分数定下来了。所以，我们决不能忽视文章的形式美——真正的美是形式和内容的完美统一。鉴于此，现提出对策：

1、书写认真。字体工整，不草不连;笔迹清晰，黑白分明;字在格内，大小适中;卷面清洁，不涂不抹;字数不多不少(少则‘残废’，多则‘臃肿’)。

2、布局合理。头尾短小精悍。开头结尾段字数均应控制在百字以内，否则，头大尾长身子小，比例失调，影响美观。

段落稍微多一点。若段落太少，既不美观又无层次感，更让人觉得满眼都是密密麻麻的字，容易引起视觉疲劳，一般情况下，千字以内文章分成7段左右为宜。

3、选好文体。一般说来，如果写记叙文，运用小标题、日记体、分镜头式等片断组合法写成的文章清爽直观、疏密有致、思路清晰、层次分明，能给人整体美感的效果，易引起阅卷者的兴趣。

二、第二眼看审题

主要看文章的审题是否准确、角度的切入是否得当、立意是否准确鲜明;若审题错误、角度失当、立意不明等，即平时所说的‘跑题’，那你的文章也就没戏可看而被立即判为‘死刑’，即使你的语言再有文采，事例再丰富新颖等等，亦是‘英雄无用武之地’矣!

另外，应引起我们高度重视的是：考场作文不宜写得太含蓄、深沉，否则，让阅卷人不易把握;再说，当时天气热，任务紧，谁愿通过反复阅读来琢磨观点、概括中心?那么，你的文章就有可能成为阅卷人的‘笔下冤魂’。所以，最好能让阅卷人比较容易地明白你的观点，要做到这一步，有如下对策：

1、精心打造标题。看标题，是老师了解文章是否切题的一个非常重要、必不可少的步骤。因此，我们拟题时，不妨将切题的字眼嵌入其中，如《人生自古谁无死，留取诚信照汗青》、《患者吴诚信的就诊报告》、《问君哪得暖如许，为有爱心活力来》、《理想海阔凭鱼跃，选择天高任鸟飞》、《感情是帆，认知是船》、《真情诚可贵，理智价更高》等。其中‘诚信’、‘爱心’、‘选择’、‘感(真)情’、‘认知’、‘理智’就是切题的字眼。这些标题，既体现了作者的观点，又文采斐然、光芒四射，怎能不让阅卷人眼前一亮，大为振奋!

2、恰当使用副标题。若正标题不易懂，则辅以副标题进行提示。

3、巧妙运用题记。可以开篇用名人名言来引起老师的注意。

4、用心写好首尾。因为开头和结尾也是老师寻找文章观点的‘战略要地’，所以，如果写议论文，最好开头用言简意丰的语言开门见山地摆出观点，结尾以韵味无穷的语言呼应观点。另外，还可在文中反复紧扣文眼。

5、选择适当文体。如使用小标题，既有提纲挈领、条分缕析之效，又可以减少过渡性文字的铺排，从而使主题集中、重点突出、简洁醒目。

6、少写心理感觉。感觉这东西，往往是说者清楚，听者模糊。写多了，易陷入‘隐晦’，让人误认为‘跑题’。因此，建议大家该叙事时叙事，该说理时说理，该抒情时抒情，千万别‘跟着感觉走’。

三、第三眼看选材

主要看材料是否切题、丰富、新颖——若选材不能说明观点，则属牵强附会;若材料单调，则说理空洞无力;若材料平庸，则落入俗套。鉴于此，建议：列一个材料菜单，当我们围绕立意选出材料后，不要急忙下笔，要进行一番分析、比较和筛选，力争既切题又新颖独特。

如果说，前两眼淘汰的是‘假冒伪劣产品’，那么，第三眼淘汰的就是平庸之作了。当然，并非经过这三眼的检验，你的作文就能得高分了，老师还会通过第四眼、第五眼甚至两三遍来看你的立意是否高远，构思是否新巧，语言是否有文采等等。然而，可以断定，如果你的作品能经得住这三眼的检验，分数也不会太低了。

写到这儿，或许你会说，作文的规矩也太多了，不错，考试作文依然是‘带着镣铐跳舞’——既要符合应试作文的要求、规矩，又要跳出激情，舞出精彩。这其中的奥妙，就看你的适应与创新的能力了——适应者生存，创新者取胜!

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