新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语(汇编20篇)
优秀的写作能力并非是我们与生俱来的;用英语进行写作,更是一项艰难的任务。有人觉得,写好英语作文,难于上青天;但也有人说,英语写作可以是一场迷人的心智旅程。这里给大家分享一些关于150字英语年级,供大家参考。
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1000介绍娱乐活动英语作文
全文共 922 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays, a lot of recreational activities are available for people to release their stress of work or study. Recreational activities have aroused a hot debate in society. When it comes to recreational activities, people’s ideas are not cut from the same cloth.
Abundant recreational activities make people’s life more colorful and people can release their stress with amusement. Also, participating in recreational activities helps promote our competence. However, too much recreational activities will bring problems. For instance, many young students are addicted to online games, which will generate bad effects on their studies and might lead bad consequences.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between amusement and study or work. Of course, we should join some recreational activities after study, but we need arrange our time properly. Only in this way can recreational activities provide more benefits for us.
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篇1:初中初一英语介绍自己的作文范文
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+ 加入清单I am Sally, Everyday
I am very busy. I have too many rules in my house. I have to get up at six o’clock every morning. I must have my breakfast at 7:00 o’clock . I can’t meet my friends after school because I have to walk my dog.(.溜狗) I can’t watch TV on school nights. And I have to be in bed by 10:00 o’clock. On weekends, I have
to make my bed and clean my room. Then I have to wash the dishes. Later I have to go to the Children’s Palace to learn the guitar. I love music. But I can’t listen to music at home .I never have any fun. My life is so boring. What can I do ?
篇2:英语作文介绍别人
全文共 423 字
+ 加入清单My English teacher is MiLiu, she is a young lady. She has long hair and big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth. She speaks English well. She likes eating fish very much. She likes eating fruit, like grapes, apples. She also likes sweet dessert.
Her bedroom is big. There is an air-conditioner and some flowers in her bedroom. She likes pink flowers and green plants. She likes nature very much.
I like my teacher very much.
篇3:面试空姐的英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单Good morning everyone,my name is XX,and my english name is XX. Iam 21 years old and iam from (qingdao/XX) .
I have very happy family, they were my mother,my father and i. my father is soldier and my mother is doctor .i love them verymuch,we leave very luckly everyday!
I have some interests, four example: play piano singsong ang swimming.I have lend so much from them.
when i was young, i haved a dream, i was dreaming flying in the sky, so ,i long to work in the plain. then, iam here,i weash you would take me, because iam looking four would, to working four(china easten airlines),nice meeting you again.
thank you !
篇4:英语自我介绍·
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+ 加入清单My name is xxx. I was born in (Dalian, Liaoning )xxx province in February 1994. I am average height, medium build.(我中等身高,不胖不瘦)I have long black hair and I wear a pear of glasses. I usually wear a red coat and a black trousers.Bcause my favourite colours are black and red .My father is a worker,and he works very hard .My mother is an Enlish teacher ,and she is kind to her students. I have a small room .There is a bed and a desk in it . The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.I have many haobbis ,for example, I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won a prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. That is me ,a lovely girl.
篇5:介绍我家庭的英语作文
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+ 加入清单导语:每个人都有自己的家庭,你会跟大家怎么介绍你的家庭呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
My name is Yu Geqin. I’m nine years old. There are three members in my family, my father, my mother and I.
My father is a teacher. He is very handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. He works very hard. He’s busy from morning to night. He’s the cleverest man of my family. He can solve the difficult problems, too.
My mother is very beautiful. She has two big eyes and her black hair is long. My mother is worker. She is good at her job. She is also a good housewife.
I have a happy family. I like it very much.
英语作文翻译:
我叫于格沁。我九岁。我家有三口人,我爸爸,我妈妈和我。
我的父亲是一名教师。他很英俊。他总是戴着一副眼镜。他工作很努力。他从早到晚忙着。他是我家最聪明的人。他也能解决这些难题。
我妈妈很漂亮。她有两只大眼睛,黑色的头发很长。我妈妈是工人。她擅长她的工作。她也是个好主妇。
我有一个幸福的家庭。我非常喜欢它.
篇6:介绍自己的英语作文
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+ 加入清单My name isxx. I am graduate from xxx seniorhigh school and major in xx. There are xx people in my family. My father works in a computer company. And my mother is a housewife. I am the youngest one in my family.
In my spare time, I like to read novels. I think reading could enlargemy knowledge. As for novels, I could imagine whatever I like such as a well-known scientist or a kung-fu master. In addition to reading, I also like to play PC games. A lot of grownups think playing PC games hinders the students from learning. But I think PC games could motivate me to learn something such as English or Japanese. My favorite course is English because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. I wish my English could be improved in the next four years and be able to speak fluent English in the future.
篇7:空乘面试英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I canmake a good performance today. Im confident that I can succeed. Now I willintroduce myself briefly. I am 26 years old, born in Shandong province. Igraduated from Qingdao University. My major is electronics. And I got mybachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2003. I spent most of mytime on study, and I’ve passed CET-6 during my university. And I’ve acquiredbasic knowledge of my major. It is my long cherished dream to be an engineer andI am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.
篇8:自我介绍九年级英语作文
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+ 加入清单My name is Zhang Danqing . I’m a 15-year – old girl . I am in Class Eight , Grade Nine. My favorite subject is English , because I think stying English is much more easier than others . My favorite color is green , I think the color of green symbls the nature. I love my family, sometimes I go to park or take a trip with them on holiday .
I love playing volleyball very much . I always play volleyball with my friends on weekends . I don’t like eating junk food , I think it’s bad for my health . I eat fruit and vegetables every day . I exercise three or four times a week . so I have a good body and I am in good health.
I am working hard . I want to become a teacher when I grow up , because as a teacher I can teach many children and make them knowledgeable. In a word , this is me , a sunny girl .
篇9:大学开学1分钟自我介绍英语大众版
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+ 加入清单Hello everybody. My name is Stone. I come from Sichuan province in China.
I am very happy to come here to study with you.When I arrived at this school three days ago, I fell in love with it.It is so beautiful and exciting here, and everyone is kind to me especially Kim.This class feels just like one big family to me.
I’m interested in sports, music and mountain climbing.I also enjoy playing soccer. I would love to play with you sometime.I hope I can become your friend soon. Thank you very much.
篇10:关于自我介绍英语
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+ 加入清单Hello, everyone. I’m so happy to make a speech here. Now let me introduce myself.
My English name is …I’m….years old. I’m in Class… Grade Three.
I have a warm family. There are three people in my family. My father, my mother and me. My father is a … My mother is a … They love me and I love them too.
I have many friends. We go to school and go home together. We study and play together. We often help each other.
I have many hobbies. I like drawing, reading and singing. I can sing some English songs. Today I want to sing a song for you. ….
This is me, a happy girl/boy. Do you want to make friends with me? That’s all. Thank you.
篇11:介绍笔友的英语作文
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+ 加入清单I have a penfriend. His name is Lee. He is a eleven years old American boy. We haven’t seen each other, but we have exchanged our photoes. He is handsome. From his letters ,I know that he is good at maths and bad at PE. He likes music. He often sing at home before his family. He lives a happy life. I like him. Trough him, I can learn more information about the foreign country.
我有一个笔友。他的名字是李。他是一个十一岁的美国男孩。我们还没有见过对方,但我们交换了我们的照片。他很英俊的。从他的信中,我知道他数学学得很好但是不擅长体育。他喜欢音乐。他经常在家人面前唱歌。他过得很幸福我喜欢他。通过他,我可以了解到更多外国的信息。
篇12:商务写作注意事项
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+ 加入清单切忌主客不分或模糊。
例子: Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.应改为 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀, 不是report.)
句子不要零碎。
例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 两个句子应该连在一起:He decided not to audit the last ten contracts because of our previous objections about compliance.
结构对称,令人容易理解。
例子: The owner questioned the occupants lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为: The owner questioned the occupants lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract.
单复数不要搞乱,不然会好刺眼,看着不舒服。
例如: An authorized person must show that they have security clearance. 应改为 Authorized persons must show that they have security clearance.
动词和主语要呼应。
想想这两个句子的分别: 1. This is one of the public-relations functions that is under-budgeted. 2. This is one of the public-relations functions, which are under-budgeted.
时态和语气不要转换太多。
看商务英语已经是苦事,不要浪费人家的精力啊。
标点要准确。
例如: He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 应改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment.
选词正确。
像 affect和effect,operative和operational等 等就要弄清楚才好用啦。
拼字正确。
有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒。
大小写要注意。
除非 必要不要整个词都大写,除非要骂人。例如: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样。要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了。
篇13:三年级英语自我介绍范文
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+ 加入清单Hello,My name is Amy.Im 9 years old.I am a student in Yu Cai school.I am tall and thin.I have short hair and big eyes.I am good at singing and danging.I like reading books.I like my classmate,I like my teacher.
篇14:学生的自我介绍英语带翻译
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+ 加入清单Hello,everybody.大家好
My names( ).我的名字叫( )
Im in Class( )Grade six of( )school.我在( )学校6年级()班级 Im tall(short).Im ( )centimeters.我很高(矮),我()厘米。 I like English very much.我非常喜欢英语
Beacuse English is interesting.因为英语很有趣。
So my English is very good.所以,我的英语很好。
I acquire many award.我获得过很多奖项。
I hope that every of you will love me。希望大家能喜欢我。
篇15:自我介绍英语含翻译
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+ 加入清单I am a lovely girl, I like to make friends, but I am more introverted, so there are only two good friends in my class. Do you know why? Let me tell you.
My courage is relatively small. In the first grade, almost no one came to play with me. My two good friends, we were in a kindergarten. From grade one to grade six, I had few friends.
Im going to go to junior high school. I hope I can have more good friends. Would you like to be a good friend of mine?
篇16:介绍自己的英语
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+ 加入清单Everyone has hobbies.Hobbies are the important things in our life.I also
have hobbies.Next,let me tell you.Exercise is my one hobby.I love sport.The
more exercise I do,The more healthier I have.After I have dinner,I often go for
a walk with my sister on the streets,and when class is over,I usually play
badminton with my friends.Sometimes I play ping-pong,too.So I think I live in a
wonderful life.
Reading is my the other hobby.In weekends,I often read some novels.Such
as《Jane Love》。《Zhao Hua Xi She》and so on.That can make me improve my
Chinese.
This is my hobbies.If you have hobbies,you can exchange with me.
篇17:小学自我介绍的英语
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+ 加入清单一、Hello, my name is Tom. I’m from JianXi. I’m 10 years old. I’m short and thin. I’m a student. I study in Class2, Grade 5 of primary school. I like English class very much. Because English class is so much fun. There are 4 people in my family. They are my mother, my father, my sister and me. I like hamburger and chicken very much. Do you like me?
二、Hello everyone,My name is xxx . I am from China, with a height of xx cm, and a weight of xx kg. ,I was born in xxxx xx xx, My favroite subject is xxx。My favorite month is February,My favorite season is spring , My favorite sprots is runningMy favorite food is hambuger,,My favorite housework is sweeping the floor, I want to be a computer engineer , You could ask me why , ha , because I like piaying computer !
三、Good morning (afternoon), teachers and students!
My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im an active(活泼的) girl. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang.Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College.I like Chinese, Maths ,English and so on.I study very hard,I hope I can become a excellent student. I like making friends and wish to be friend with all of you.This is me. Please remember (记住)me, your good friend --JinYue. Thank you very much!
四、Hello, everyone. My name is JinYue. Beauty is my English name. Im ten years old. Im a student of Class one Grade four from Affiliated Primary School of Hefei Pedagogical College. I like singing 、dancing、drawing and playing Pingpang. I like English. I hope to become your good friends. Thank you very much!
五、Goodafternoon, teachers! Today, I`m very happy to make a speech(演讲) here. Now, let me introduce (介绍)myself. My name is ZhuRuijie. My English name is Molly. I`m 12. I come from Class1 Grade 6 of TongPu No.2 Primary School. I`m an active girl. I like playing basketball. Because I think it`s very interesting. I`d like to eat potatoes. They`re tasty(好吃的). My favourite colour is green. And I like math best. It`s fun. On the weekend(在周末), I like reading books in my room. I have a happy family. My father is tall and strong(强壮).My mother is hard-working(工作努力) and tall, too. My brother is smart.(漂亮) And I`m a good student. My dream(梦想) is to be a teacher, because I want to help the poor (贫穷的)children in the future(在将来). Thank you for listening! Please remember(记住) me!
篇18:行程中的注意事项
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+ 加入清单1.游客较多,外出时营员需穿着统一营服,便于识别。
2.在军事体验过程中,要服从教练,谨听教练的叮嘱;在旅游过程当中,请认清自己的队伍、对旗、成员和导游,跟着队伍走,认真听导游的讲解,不要追逐打闹,旅游途中有时会经过陡坡、湖泊等景点,请结伴绕道而行,千万不能冒险前往,时刻保持统一行动。
3.在参观过程中,尽可能做记录,为以后写作文及参营感受时留下宝贵材料。
4.营员手机、书包、钱、相机等贵重物品要随身携带;吃饭、游览、购物时不要乱扔乱放。
5.中途不要随意离开队伍去买纪念品、矿泉水,不去团队未安排的景点游玩。不要与陌生人接触,不要接受陌生人的食物,以免上当受骗。
6.随身携带带队人员的电话,出现走失时不要惊慌,查看带队工作人员的电话,打电话时要说清自己所在的位置,周围存在什么标志性的建筑,等候工作人员前来,紧急情况下致电110求救。
7.注意交通安全法规。
8.天气炎热,预防中暑。
篇19:介绍中国长城英语
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+ 加入清单The Great Wall of China
The Great Wall of China is called the "Ten thousand Ii Great Wall" in Chinese. In fact, it s more than 6 000 kilometres long. It winds its way from west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it reaches the sea. It is one of the wonders of the world.
The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries. The first part of it was built during the Spring and Autumn Period. During the Warring States Period, more walls were put up to defend the borders of the different kingdoms. It was during the Qin Dynasty that the kingdom of Qin united the dif ferent parts into one empire. To keep the enemy out of his empire, Emperor Qin Shi Huang had all the walls joined up. Thus, the Great Wall came into being.
The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk side by side. Along the wall are watchtowers, where soldiers used to keep watch. Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came.
It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any modern machines. All the work was done by hand. Thousands of men died and were buried under the wall they built. The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of the flesh and blood of millions of men.
Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese but to people from all over the world. Many of them have come to know the famous Chinese saying: "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."
中国的万里长城被称为“万里长城”。事实上,它有6000多公里长。它蜿蜒地从西向东,穿过沙漠,越过高山,穿过山谷,直到最后到达大海。它是世界奇观之一。
长城有二十多个世纪的历史。它的第一部分是在春秋时期建造的。战国时期,有更多的城墙被用来保卫不同王国的边界。正是在秦朝,秦国把帝夫的发福部分统一为一个帝国。为了把敌人赶出他的帝国,秦始皇把所有的城墙连在一起。于是,长城诞生了。
长城的宽度足以让五匹马或十个人并排走。沿着墙的是瞭望塔,士兵们常常在那里守望。当敌人到来时,在塔上点燃了火作为警告。
在古代没有任何现代机器的情况下,很难建造这样一堵墙。所有的工作都是手工完成的。成千上万的人死了,被埋在他们建造的城墙下。长城不仅是由石头和泥土建成的,而且是几百万人的血肉所组成的。
今天,长城不仅对中国人,而且对来自世界各地的人都有兴趣。他们中的许多人都知道中国著名的谚语:“没有到达长城的人不是真正的人。”
篇20:写考场议论文的注意事项
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+ 加入清单一篇内质不错的文章,字迹可憎,其分值往往不理想。为何?其一,字和卷面差,按评分要求要扣分,其二,试卷的“面目”在一定程度上控制着阅卷者打分的情绪。下面是小编为大家搜集整理出来的有关于写考场议论文的注意事项,希望可以帮助到大家!
一、审题立论
审题即在行文前对作文材料中展示的各个组成部分作准确、全面的审读和理解,然后按要求进行写作。纵观2005~2006年高考议论文题目,主要包括命题型和话题型两种形式。但无论哪种形式,只要我们认真审清题目的内涵和外延,就可写出构思深刻的作文。下面,就结合一些实例作简要介绍。
(一)命题型议论文的审题
1、推敲含义。这种方法主要适宜于直接以词语为题目的文题。这类题目相对而言比较简单,考生只要能够准确把握词语的意义,就可以根据词义立意。例如今年湖南高考要求以《谈意气》为题,写一篇议论文。考生只要结合材料中提供的一种解释就可立意,如可谈志趣、性格与交友的关系;可谈意气用事的危害;还可通过历史人物(如苏轼、范仲淹等)生存状态的概说,表现他们超脱旷达、心忧天下的精神风貌。
2、理清关系。这种方法主要适宜于直接以短语为题目的文题。这类题目难度较大,考生首先必须了解短语的结构,明确它们的关系,然后确定写作方向。如《失败和成功》是对比关系,就要论证两者的互相转化;《人与路》(2006年江苏高考作文题)是选择关系,就要阐明两者之间的相互关系;《小溪、大河、大海》是比喻关系,就要分析它们所蕴涵的道理。
3、联类对比。这种方法主要适宜于写作重点难以把握的文题。对于这种命题,考生不妨将它与另一个相似的题目进行比较,从中辨明各自的侧重点确定立意。如果考生难以把握《谈六合 彩的危害》的重点,就可将它与《谈六合 彩的由来》进行比较,前者侧重于挖掘六合 彩的危害,后者侧重于探究六合 彩的起源。这样一来,写作重点就凸显了出来。
(二)话题型议论文的审题
1、重视概念的内涵。话题有时是以一个概念的形成出现的,比如“诚信”、“欣赏”、“选择”等。概念都具有特定的内涵,忽视了概念内涵就有走题之虞。如以“热”为话题作文,提示语中已经列举了“网络热”、“打工热”、“炒股热”等例子,指的是一种社会现象,就不能将“热”理解为“热情”、“热心”等。如果错误理解内涵,作文之始就误入歧途了。
2、重视背景语的指向。背景语往往是命题者着意营造的一种情境,不同的背景语引发的思维走向是不同的。只有审清了背景语的思维指向,才能保证写作中思维模式与文章内在文脉的贯通。
请看下面一则材料:
哲理之于人生,时时相随,事事蕴涵,处处显现。逆境出人才,顺境就出不了人才?做人坚持“行方”原则,具有润滑功能的“行圆”策略就可抛弃?人生,需要我们思辨的哲理太多太多:德与才、苦与乐、美与丑、愚与智、荣与辱……请以“人生哲理”为话题写一篇文章。审读背景语,我们会发现,要求我们写的“哲理” 应是矛盾对立的双方。
3、重视提示语的暗示。话题作文在开放中又有限制,这些限制多出现在提示语中。比如有这样一则材料:
人的一生总要与书打交道,在与书的接触过程中,一定会有一些故事发生,之后就会有一些属于自己的思考。请以你与书的交往过程或以对书的思考为内容范围写一篇文章。
提示语中包含着丰富的信息,“你与书的交往过程”隐藏的限制至少有:(1)要写自己的,不能写他人的;(2)要写出过程,最好是写成散文或记叙文。“对书的思考”透露的信息则有:(1)要以写对书的感悟、体验以及书对“我”的启示教益为主;(2)文体上最好写随笔、杂感或议论文。有了上述思考,就可以保证在审题中没有大的失误。
考试作文审题是很重要的一环,写作水平再高,审题不准,偏离要求,也不能得高分。准确抓住中心要求,认真审题,审题关一过,构思就容易了。
二、引用论据
“事实胜于雄辩”,但初学者对材料论据往往原原本本地引用,以叙代议,结果不仅减弱了论据的作用,甚至淹没了论据。
一则事实材料的含义往往很丰富,叙述事实作论据时,就不能不考虑“取其一点”,这样才能集中火力真正有效地证明论点。所以,我们要学会对材料剪裁、概括与拓展。
从论点需要出发,注意叙述的角度,把握好材料的侧重点,剔除掉与论点无关的材料与数据,使二者尽可能吻合。
例如要论述“创造发明来自于勤于思考、善于分析”这个论点,可这样叙述:
瓦特的故事大家都很熟悉。小时候,看到火炉上茶壶的盖子被水蒸气冲开,他就感到惊异,引起了他的深思和追问,想问个究竟,从中得到了启发,并思考着如何用水蒸气来掀动更重的东西。后来,瓦特在英国格拉斯哥大学工作中发现,已有的蒸汽机有很大的缺点,于是他年年月月地观察着、思考着、分析着、试验着,终于在一七八二年创造出万能蒸汽机。
叙述材料要求文字简洁,内容明确。
记叙性的材料,因为为了感人,所以通常写得生动细致,而议论文中的叙述,目的是为了说理,因此,不需原本照抄,否则会喧宾夺主,淹没事例的重点。叙述时紧扣论点,截取与论点有关的文字,用极简练的语言表达出来,切忌啰唆与含糊,拖泥带水,杂乱无章。
例:请以马克思和居里夫人的事迹来论证“人生的意义在于贡献而不是索取”这个论点,要求论据高度概括,只用一两句话。
“马克思致力于无产阶级的解放事业,尽管有时喝开水,啃馒头,他对此都甘之如饴;居里夫人一生清贫,却将自己历尽艰辛提炼出来的价值一百万美元的一克镭,奉献给了人类。他们追求的是人类的解放,科学的进步。”
〔简评〕
“致力于”强调了贡献之大,与喝开水、啃馒头形成对照,指出求索的极少;一个“甘之如饴”,把马克思的品质、情操、胸怀都写了出来。
“一克镭”前用了“价值一百万美元”、“历尽艰辛提炼出来的”,都不要报偿,奉献给了人类,而且是在“一生清贫”的情况下做出的,这不是贡献极大而索取极少吗?
这两例和论点结合紧密,吻合浓缩得很好,抓住了侧重点,高度概括。
三、叙述材料要善于拓展
拓展,就是把材料中与论点相关的部分扩展开来,使叙述的内容与所要论证的观点紧密联系起来;或者将蕴涵在材料中并不显露的地方加以挖掘、扩充,使材料能成为论证论点的有力论据。同时叙述材料时,突出或增补一些与论点相同或相近的词语。
如瓦特之例,不仅扣住论点,而且剪取故事中与论点“勤于思考,善于分析”相吻合的这一侧面,突出这一面。如多处强调瓦特“感到惊异”、“想问个究竟”、 “追问”、“深思”、“思索着”、“分析着”、“试验着”,这些扩展语句是不可少的。少了这样的语句,再好的例子也不能很好地为论点服务。
例文:
有钱难买幼时贫
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球王贝利喜得贵子,有记者贺道:“看他长得多壮,今后一定会成为优秀运动员,成为像你一样的体育明星。”贝利不假思索地答道:“他有可能成为一名优秀运动员,但绝不会有我这样的成就。因为他现在就很富有,缺乏先天竞争意识,而我小时候非常贫穷。”在贝利看来,一个人能成才,或在事业上有所造诣,幼时贫穷起着至关重要的作用。
“幼时贫”之所以金贵,在于它能够使孩子提前涉世,早日领略人生,认识生活的艰难,从而增强竞争意识,发愤长智求知学本领,乃至成就事业。高尔基没有早年丧父当童工、做学徒,饱尝人间苦难的经历,是不可能写出他的自传体三部曲等名著的。陈章良自幼贫寒,9岁上小学,在17岁跳级考入大学后,未向家里要过一分钱,靠微薄的助学金和课余劳动所得出色地完成了学业。正因为他不怕吃苦,才能够28岁当教授,30岁获侯赛因青年科学奖。
“天将降大任于斯人也,必先苦其心志,劳其筋骨,饿其体肤,空乏其身,行拂乱其所为。”(孟子语)今天,我们没必要让孩子都去“饿体肤”,但注重孩子的早期教育,让他们懂得衣食不易、生活之艰辛,则是很有必要的。
〔简评〕
四则论据,突出“有钱难买幼时贫”,“善浓缩,会概括”,文章短小精悍很具说服力。