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新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语(通用20篇)

优秀的写作能力并非是我们与生俱来的;用英语进行写作,更是一项艰难的任务。有人觉得,写好英语作文,难于上青天;但也有人说,英语写作可以是一场迷人的心智旅程。这里给大家分享一些关于150字英语年级,供大家参考。

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介绍家乡的优秀英语

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My hometown is in ZhenZhou city china,There are a lot of people live here,Its a famous city.The people are very friendly.The climate here is very pleasant.

My hometown has different seasons,spring.summer.autumn and winter.I like the spring ,because flowers are very beautiful,the weather is very sunny,what a lovely spring days!i hate cold weather,

so i dont like winter.we have a lot of rain in autumn,this is my favoures seasons,in this seasons,we can see many different colors,i love the colors of the trees-red,gold,yellow and brown .fairly cool for this time of years!summer is always hot,Its quit muggy in summer.

My hometown has different food,the food is excellent and quit cheap ,Its doesnt pollute.In the restaurant,you can enjoy good service and delicious food .

welcome you to my hometown travel!

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篇1:自我介绍英语作文600字

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Hello everyone! My name is Amy, this year twelve years old, I am from Xiaoshan District of Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province, the first primary school, is the sixth grade students.

You see, I am slim, so I round face, the nose is not high but it is the most important, because I protect their eyes, so my face is not a small pair of glasses.

I am warm and generous hospitality and a love of helping others, remember that in an emergency evacuation drill, we are reading poetry, suddenly broadcast rang, the students rush out of the classroom, in the course of my run, the students saw his feet twisted, he left behind. The other students, have run to the playground, to see this scene, I quickly ran back to the past, to help him up, I helped him, we went to the playground, and afterwards, the teacher praised me for the disciplinary board, not only that, but also let the students to learn from me do you know? At that time my heart.

I am good at skateboarding, write a soft brush, and speak English, my English is not good, in an English exam I ranked second last time, I felt very unhappy, I encourage myself to Study hard to win glory for the class, then, although I did not get the first, but I am not discouraged, I have tried my best.

I also have a very great dream. When a pilot is flying, he can fly his own airplane one day and fly freely in the blue sky. What an exciting and happy thing it is!

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篇2:介绍我自己英语作文

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Hello, everybody! I am glad to stand here and introduce myself. I am XXX and my English name is XXX. I am eleven years old. My birthday is on Christmas Day. I am a student of Grade 6, Class 1 of Ruhe New District Primary School. I like to play violin, reading, swimming, skiing and surfing the internet....I have a lot of hobbies! The color I like best is silver. My favorite food is hamburger. When I grow up, I want to be a writer because a writer can write many books which are useful to people (I dont know if this is correct or not). Thank you very much for listening to me. Thank you once again!

大家好!很高兴能在这里做自我介绍!我叫XXX,我的英文名字叫XXX,我今年11岁了,我的生日在圣诞节,我在汝河新区小学六年级一班念书。我喜欢拉小提琴、看书、游泳、滑雪、上网……我的爱好很广泛!我喜欢银色,我最喜欢吃汉堡包!长大后我想当一名作家,因为作家能写很多对人有益的书(不知道对不对)。谢谢你们的聆听。谢谢!

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篇3:[英语自我介绍]

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Hi! Hello, my name is Pan Ziyang, I am a lively and lovely little girl, I would like to introduce myself to you!

I have curly hair, sometimes is the "lion Mao" is sometimes beautiful wave volume, I have a cherry small mouth, the one and only.

My dress is sometimes very fashionable, avant-garde fashion sweater, sometimes cute skirt, I sometimes wear cool coat.

My body is round, tall, everybody calls me "fat girl", round body is also very distressed, alas!

I put the "female man" image of the performance of the most incisive, at that time, I took a box of apples from the ground floor has been carried to the seventh floor, have no rest, on the floor, I gasped, aunt suddenly said Mom gave both box watermelon to me, let me get down, no I can only take measures! I was carrying two boxes of watermelon, carrying a bag from the first floor to the seven floor, and when I got home, I immediately fell asleep in bed.

This is me, a lively and lovely woman.

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篇4:介绍舞蹈英语作文80字小学

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When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain.

Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am

so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran

out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool,

then all my weariness has gone.

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篇5:英语作文介绍西安景点

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Once known as Changan, Xian is the political, economic, cultural and transportation center of Shaanxi Province, with its jurisdiction over five counties including Changan County. Located in the middle of the Central Plains of the Yellow River Basin, Xian stands between Qinling Mountain to the north and the Weihe River to the south. It is an important birthplace of the Chinese nationality as well as one of the places of human origin and prehistoric cultural centers in Asia. Its long history and rich cultural heritage has covered the old city with a mysterious veil.

As a world-famous ancient capital, Xian has been designated as the capital of 13 ancient Chinese dynasties such as the Western Zhou, Qin, Xihan, Xinmang, Eastern Han, Western Jin, Former Zhao, pre-Qin, post-Qin, Western Wei, Northern Zhou, Sui and Tang dynasties. Many important historical events took place here, such as the Red Eyebrow Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Western Han Dynasty (206BC-8AD), the Huangchao Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Tang Dynasty (618-907) and Li Zicheng Peasant Rebellion at the end of the Ming Dynasty (1368-1644) all once established temporary political powers in Xian. it also witnessed the famous Xian Incident in modern history. All these have left with Xian a lot of cultural relics. In Xian there are altogether 314 key cultural relics sites under protection, of which 84 belong to state or provincial level. Unearthed cultural relics reach 120,000, many of which are rare treasures in the world,

including the Stele Forest, the two Wild Goose Pagodas, the Clock Tower, the remains of Banpo Village and the city wall of the Ming Dynasty. In addition, there are ancient sites such as Han City, Tang City, Efang Palace, Weiyang Palace and Daming Palace, as well as the Huaqing Pond and pits of Qin Emperor Shihuangs Terra-Cotta Soldiers and Horses. Xian is a great place of revolution, and the Site of the Office of the Eighth Route Army can clearly demonstrate this. Located in Xian are also a number of universities and research institutions, including Xian Jiaotong University, Northwest University and Northwest Polytechnical University.

Xian is the biggest processing industrial base and the largest trade center in the central and western part of North China, as well as the starting point of the Silk Road. The Silk Road has become a wide road connecting China and other countries. It is a road to civilization, friendship, trade and cultural tourism.

Xian (Chinese:西安), is the capital of the Shanxi province in the Peoples Republic of China . As one of the oldest cities in Chinese history, Xian is one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China because it has been the capital of some of the most important dynasties in Chinese history,including the Zhou, Qin, Han, the Sui, and Tang dynasties. Xian is the eastern end of the Silk Road . The city has more than 3,100 years of history, and was known as Changan (traditional Chinese: 长安).

Long holidays are usual during Spring Festival, Labor Holiday (1-7 May), and National Holiday (1-7 October). The number of travellers is often greater during Summer (May-August), although the most pleasant season for visiting Xian is Autumn.

Xian (Chinese: 西安), is the capital of the Shanxi province in the Peoples Republic of China . As one of the oldest cities in Chinese history, Xian is one of the Four Great Ancient Capitals of China because it has been the capital of some of the most important dynasties in Chinese history,including the Zhou, Qin, Han, the Sui, and Tang dynasties. Xian is the eastern end of the Silk Road . The city has more than 3,100 years of history, and was known as Changan (traditional Chinese: 长安).

Long holidays are usual during Spring Festival, Labor Holiday (1-7 May), and National Holiday (1-7 October). The number of travellers is often greater during Summer (May-August), although the most pleasant season for visiting Xian is Autumn.

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篇6:空乘面试英语自我介绍

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Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview. I hope I canmake a good performance today. Im confident that I can succeed. Now I willintroduce myself briefly. I am 26 years old, born in Shandong province. Igraduated from Qingdao University. My major is electronics. And I got mybachelor degree after my graduation in the year of 2003. I spent most of mytime on study, and I’ve passed CET-6 during my university. And I’ve acquiredbasic knowledge of my major. It is my long cherished dream to be an engineer andI am eager to get an opportunity to fully play my ability.

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篇7:英语自我介绍

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Hi, my name is xxx. Im xx years old, a middle school student apparently.

I love music very much although Im not very good at singing. Ive been playing guzheng, an ancient traditional instrument for a long time and now Im in level 10, which means a really high level among the amateurs. Apart from that, I also like to reading and writing. They both give me a lot of fun and build my unique personality as well as my goal and dream. I like Wangfei very much. She could be my favorite singer.... Personally, Ive been considering I have a really complicated personality BECause sometimes dont really like to study, sometimes.....

However, Im very positive and look forwards to my future BECause Im the one who will realize my goal.

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篇8:简单的英语自我介绍

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good morning, my name is jack, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious university in september.

now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 21 years old,born in HeiLongJiang province,northeast of china,and i am curruently a senior student at BeiJing xx university.my majoris packaging engineering.and i will receive my bachelor degree after my graduation in June.in the past 4 years,i spend most of my time on study,i have passed CET4/6 with a ease.and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides, i have attend several packaging exhibition hold in Beijing, this is our advantage study here, i have taken a tour to some big factory and company. through these i have a deeply understanding of domestic packaging industry.compared to developed countries such as us, unfortunately,although we have made extraordinary progress since 1978,our packaging industry are still underdeveloped, mess, unstable, the situation of employees in this field are awkward. but i have full confidence in a bright future if only our economy can keep the growth pace still. i guess you maybe interested in the reason itch to law, and what is my plan during graduate study life, i would like to tell you that pursue law is one of my lifelong goal,i like my major packaging and i wont give up,if i can pursue my master degree here i will combine law with my former education. i will work hard in these fields ,patent ,trademark, copyright, on the base of my years study in department of p&p.

my character? i cannot describe it well, but i know i am optimistic and confident. sometimes i prefer to stay alone, reading, listening to music, but i am not lonely, i like to chat with my classmates, almost talk everything ,my favorite pastime is volleyball,playing cards or surf online. through college life,i learn how to balance between study and entertainment. by the way, i was a actor of our amazing drama club. i had a few glorious memory on stage. that is my pride

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篇9:介绍鲁迅英语

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鲁迅曾经说过:“真的猛士,敢于直面惨淡的人生,敢于正视淋漓的鲜血。”下面是小编为你整理的有关鲁迅的英语作文,希望对你有帮助! 鲁迅的英语作文篇1

Lu Xun is my favourite writer. He is one of the most famous writers in China. He wrote a lot of literary works.

He was thin and not tall. He always wore a long old coat in that time. At first, he wanted to be a doctor and save people’s lives. So he learned medicine, but later he found the Chinese were in sensitive when they faced the oppression of their enemies. So he began to write articles to wake the people up.

Lu Xun wrote some famous novels, he attacked the social mores in that time, and in his works, many persons were known very well, such as “Ah Q”“Kong Yi ji”.

I like Lu Xun because I also want to be a great writer like him. I like reading and writing, and I often write some articles in my free time. Though I don’t have good literary talent or a large vocabulary, I spend lots of time reading and writing to improve my writing skills.

Lu Xun is my hero, I will learn more from him. I believe I can be a great writer like him in the future. 鲁迅的英语作文篇2

As it is known to us all ,LuXun is a famous Chinese writer. He is not only a writer, thinker, but also the founder of Chinese Literature . He wrote many classic (经典的)novels and his stories, which are translated many languages, were made into film,such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice,which deeply showed peoples suffering in the old days.

Because of his achievement to Chinese literature, Chairman Mao spoke highly of him. Besides, some of his works were selected into the text books in high school and university. I think youll gain a lot from reading his works.

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篇10:英语作文介绍济南

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Jinan is in locate northern latitudes 36 degrees 40 cent,east longitude 117 degree.Jinan is in South of Mount Taishan and North of Yellow River.there is belonging to warm temperate zone greatly six sex monsoon weather area,clear all the year round,sunshine full in Jinan.The year average air temperature is 14 Celsius degrees,the year average rainfall is 650-700 millimeters.

Jinan is called "Quan Cheng(泉城)"and is coast in Chinese the east economic big province-Shandong the provincial capital of the province.Jinan is a whole province politics,economy,culture,science and technology,education and banking center.Jinan is also a national approval of the coast open city and vice- province class city.The benefit goes down south to govern six areas,one County class City,the total area is 8227 square kilometers,population 5,960,000,among them downtown population 2,600,000.Helping the south is one of the city of"national city comprehensive real strenght 50 strong" and"whole country invest hard environment 40 excellent.

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篇11:三、关于第一人称“我”作文的几个注意事项

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一是要注意叙事的典型性和独特性。既然是“我”,讲述的都必须是作者自身的故事。刻意虚构,但是虚构的时候,必须真实而独特。一旦虚构出了漏洞,作文的分数就会大打折扣。尽管中考作文是一锤子买卖,而考文因阅卷的仓促,会为某些师生的备料作文、套改作文留下可趁之机,但是,无论怎么准备,作文本身的真实性和感人特色,必须是独特的。例如,我们小时,一到放学回家的路上,就写学雷锋叔叔做好事。遇到坏人坏事,就是在偷生产队的庄稼。这种千篇一律的情节,不仅虚假,而且是写作的重复,考场作文绝对不能这样写。可见,考生日常的积累、生活阅历和思考,是写好考场作文的必备。

二是要注意抒情的扣题、人称与主题的关联。尽管中学生作文的开头结尾方法很多,各种作文书的范文也很多。但是,我们要记住的是,一般来说,作文的结构通常是“总分总”。末尾的一段,就是用来抒情的——作文这样写,怎么也是最正常的办法。也就是说,无论你怎么写作文,最后一段必须有这么一个设想:人称加抒情,而且是围绕题目关键字的抒情。

如河北省的《陪伴》,你最好在最后一段写上什么事物陪伴你,使你的人生得到了哪些感悟或者体味。

三是要必须有适量的描写,尤其是细节描写和心理描写。在记叙文中,要想使文章更加生动,除了文章框架的完整和合理外,细处的描写十分关键。房子建成了,还不能住,因为必须要装修。而描写,就是房子的装修。因为中考作文“我”出现得极多,考生必须用好用足描写。在几种描写中,细节描写和心理描写是最关键的。在描写时,必须不能脱离“我”,心理描写,也必须是“我”的心理。把我的心理写到位了,既扣题又生动,作文就容易得高分。

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篇12:英语作文介绍自己最喜欢的老师

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My Favourite Teacher

Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.

She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.

She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.

This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?

我最喜欢老师

嗨,我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师,但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。

她很年轻,但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌,和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。

她喜欢读书和运动。下课后,李老师经常和我们一起运动,我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。

这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?

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篇13:人物介绍英语作文

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Mo Yan, is a famous contemporary Chinese writer. In 2012, He became the country’s first Nobel Literature Prize laureate。

Born Guan Moye, the author writes under the pen name Mo Yan, which means don’t speak in Chinese。

Mo Yan was granted an honorary PhD of Arts by OUHK and was appointed guest professor at the Qingdao University of Technology. Relying on a series of countryliterary works, Mo’s claim to fame came in the 1980s when he established a reputation for being a so-called root-seeking writer. His works were strongly influenced by magical realism and told the tales of numerous legends which took place in Gaomi, Shandong Province. Mo isrenowned for his unique perceptions of reality, imaginative descriptions, de-familiarizationprocessing, mysticism and a pioneering style。

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篇14:初一英语自我介绍作文

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导语:来到新班级遇到新朋友,我们都会进行一次自我介绍,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Hello, my name is Lin Fan, the first day of school I know our class have a classmate, also called Lin Fan, how have the fate ah, the teacher in charge teacher sun because my age small call me "xiao Lin sails". I believe you to me you are not familiar with, let me introduce myself.

I am 13 years old and I am an honest, cheerful, lively and steady boy. My advantage is that every time on learning seriously complete the teacher the assignment, my grades are ok. The disadvantage is that, cant take the initiative to answer questions in class did not dare to speak out, some careless in the exam, sometimes simple question is wrong. Due to primary school didnt cram English, so English learning not enough system, the result has been not so good. I very like painting, also like Internet, love to play games.

While, as Ive become a middle school student, in the new semester, I want to get rid of the defects in learning, with a new attitude to meet new learning, also hope that teachers and students to guide me, help me, believe we can become good friends.

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大家好,我的名字叫林帆,开学的第一天我就知道我们班级还有一个同学,也叫林帆,多么有缘份呀,班主任孙老师因为我年龄小一点叫我"小林帆"。相信大家对我还不熟悉,下面我做一下自我介绍。

我今年13岁,我是一个诚实、开朗、活泼又稳重的男生。在学习上我的优点是每次都认真完成老师布置的作业,我的学习成绩还行。缺点是课堂上不能主动回答问题,不敢大声发言,考试时有些马虎,有时简单的问题也会答错。由于小学阶段没有补习英语,所以英语学习的不够系统,成绩一直不太好。我非常喜欢画画,也喜欢网络,爱玩游戏。 一转眼,我已经成为一名中学生了,在新的学期里,我要改掉学习上的缺点,用一种崭新在学习态度迎接新的知识,也希望老师和同学们多指导我、多帮助我,相信我们也能成为好朋友

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篇15:个性的英语自我介绍

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It’s my honor to introduce myself. My name is XXX, I am fromXXCountyXXProvince, December XXXX I was born in a poor family, and my parents are farmers, I love and respect them very much. We were delight with my becoming a fresh man in September 1997. Luckily, I was permitted to be a graduate student after 4 years colorful life on campus. I received my Bachelor degree2001 inXX Institute of Science and Technology, then a Master degree2004 inXX University of Science and Technology. For those 7 years my major was Die Design. Before I received my Master degree, I had done the subject of XXXXXXXXXXX. For the past 3 years, I have been inXXXXXXCollege, where I have been and still am a teacher. I teach students Machine Design etc. I have published more than 10 first-author papers.

That’s all, thanks!

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篇16:介绍美国的英语

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After a brief reunion with our American aunt, we soon embarked on a trip to the east of the United States. Our first stop was New York.

On July 21, we got up at 6:30 am and after more than half an hours drive, we came to Wall Street. There was a bull in the street, and I took many photos with my parents. After that, we went to the Empire State Building and passed through security. Then, lets go through the winding corridor to the elevator, and soon, a delicate elevator will we carry on the 80 layer, through the 80th floor of pictures and words, I understand the process of the Empire State Building construction in the 1830 s, the U.S. government in 400 days time built the 102th floor of the Empire State Building, is a miracle. Were on the 86th floor, and the 86th floor is a sightseeing layer that can get a full view of New York City. Then we went to the met and saw the Egyptian temple, the dunhuang murals, the longyan grottoes and so on

Then we followed the guide to the intrepid America and saw the American space agency NASAs space shuttle.

Finally, we went to times square, but I didnt buy anything I liked.

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篇17:介绍朋友的优秀英语

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I have a good friend.Her name is Huang Jiayan .She was twelve years

old.She is very polite and helpful.She has two big eyes,a small nose and long hair .Her hobby is singing ,dancing,read books and surfing the internet.

This is my good friend.

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篇18:介绍平安夜英语作文

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Today is Christmas Eve, Christmas Eve that eating apple a day is also a kind of custom. On Christmas Eve to eat the apple, because apple has a cavity, in peace. On this day, on Christmas Eve Santa Claus will sit sleigh, presents for the children. The next day, the children were present, will be very happy, I am really looking forward to Santa Claus gave me a gift!

今天是平安,平安夜这一天吃苹果也是一种习俗。之所以在平安夜吃苹果,是因为苹果里有一个苹字,代表平平安安。平安夜这一天,圣诞老人会坐着雪橇,给孩子们分发礼物。第二天孩子们受到礼物,就会很高兴,我也很盼望圣诞老人给我送一个礼物呀!

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篇19:应聘hr的英语自我介绍

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I came from * * university of technology, has the good professional knowledge and operating ability, and in * * * month by the national human resources management division (level 3) exam. Solid grasp of human resources management related knowledge, be familiar with human resources development, performance management and appraisal, compensation management and enterprise strategy management process, familiar with the study and master the "labor contract law" and relevant theory of the social security act.

My English level is outstanding, in the second grade passed cet4 test, have a good reading writing and spoken English. During the period of school, has repeatedly take part in the national college students English contest and get good grades.

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篇20:论据使用注意事项

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1、论据必须为论点服务,即观点和材料要统一,能证明论点。

2、论据要典型,不能用诸如“我同学就是一个这样的人”,同时论据更要丰富(多积累、勤积累才能做到)

3、论据要新颖。新颖方能吸引人。选择新鲜的别人尚未用过的论据是金子,别人已用的论据你能变换角度用是银子,别人经常用的而你又照搬照用的是石子。记住:写作文时,如果你能一下子想到的事例,别人也会一下子想到,所以就注定你的论据不够新颖了。

4、论据丰富时,事例排列的顺序应当这样:古今中外。

(三)论证

论证是运用论据来证明论点的过程和方法,是论点和论据之间的逻辑关系纽带。论点是解决“需要证明什么”,论据是解决“用什么来证明”,论证是解决“怎样证明”。

中学阶段常用的论证方法有:引用(引言)论证、事例(名人、时代人物)论证、正反对比论证、类比论证、因果论证以及比喻论证。举例:

一、揭示实质法

这种方法,就是在列举出属性相同相关的几个事例之后,对其进行归纳升华,点明论据所包含的道理,揭示出论据与论点之间的逻辑联系,回扣深化论点。如:

史学家司马光写《资治通鉴》花了19年;相声艺术宗师侯宝林为学谐语手抄一部10多万字的《谐浪》;俄国大作家托尔斯泰写《战争与和平》花了27年;德国著名医生欧立稀连续试验914次,终于研制成治疗人体内锤虫和抗螺旋体病菌的新药——新坤凡纳明。这些事例充分证明了古今中外无数有成就的人之所以取得事业的成功,秘诀就在于他们有恒心和毅力。(考场优秀作文《恒心和毅力是成功之本》)

这段文字中,作者在列举古今中外成功者的四个事例之后,点明了其中包含的道理,从而使中心论点“恒心和毅力是成功之本”得到了有力的论证。论据与论点联系紧密。

二、正反对比法

这种方法,就是列举正反两种事例形成对照,然后加以分析,论证观点。如:

黑格尔曾经自夸德国人天生就是哲学家。然而就是这样一个天生严谨自律的民族,却在一个狂人的引诱下,使世界陷入了战争的深渊。60年前的那幕惨剧:生灵涂炭、妻离子散、血流成河……生者在对往者的审视中找到了道德的标杆,也找到了纪念的理由。德国人用尽一切方法阻止时间淡褪那血色、稀薄那呼声:修建集中营纪念馆,全力处理战后的善后问题,还有那德国总理在犹太人纪念碑前的惊世一跪!德国人在60年里不断地反思,不停地纪念,终于完成了灵魂的自我救赎。德意志民族向世界展示了理性的力量,也赢得了世人的尊敬!

但纪念一旦脱离理性的制约,就会变成不可控制的魔鬼。日本在60年前那幕惨剧中同样扮演了不光彩的角色,作为亚洲地区的主要刽子手,日本犯下的罪行罄竹难书。往者已矣,大和民族的纪念却是如此这般:右翼势力大肆鼓吹“中国威胁论”,还妄图为二战罪行翻案;不顾史实修订历史教科书,文过饰非,美化侵略罪行;更有首相一年一度的靖国神社“拜鬼”……日本这种偏离理性范畴的“纪念”活动,自然得到各国人民的一致谴责。有句话说得好:“跪着的德国人比站着的日本人更高大!”可见理性的纪念才是正确的纪念,理性让纪念闪耀出人性的光辉。(考场优秀作文《让纪念闪耀理性光芒》)

以上两个论据,一正一反,对照鲜明,有力地论证了“理性的纪念才是正确的纪念,理性让纪念闪耀出人性的光辉”这一中心论点。

三、反向假设法

这种方法,就是列举事实论据后,从正面或反面假设分析,从而揭示论据和论点之间的内在联系。如:

学习借鉴会助你成功,但一味模仿则必将导致失败。

赵人邯郸觉得楚人走路好看,便盲目模仿,落得最后忘记了自己的步伐只得爬回赵国的下场。东施羡慕西施的美丽,觉得她一肌一容,尽态极妍,便学习她的姿态,照搬她的动作,可她终究不是西施,在别人看来她不但不美丽,反而成为做作的典范。真是偷鸡不成反蚀米,她的一腔苦水只能硬生生地吞进肚里。

倘使邯郸能在学步之时,融自己的步伐特点,在借鉴的同时取长补短走出自己的一步,形成独特的步伐特点,可能他就不至于爬回赵国了,说不定还会走出他人推崇的步伐;假若东施能充分认识自身的特点,发挥自身优势而不是盲目模仿,或许也会成为一种新形式的“美”的代表,使欣赏她的人在她的石榴裙下拜倒。(考场优秀作文《走出属于自己的一步》)

上面文字所举的是两个反面论据,接着用“倘使……会……”“假若……会……”两个复句从正面假设分析,从而很好地论证了“走出属于自己的一步,才会彰显个性,取得成功”这一中心论点。

四、正面推理法

这种方法,就是通过对所举事例的正面剖析,以小见大,从而推论出其具有的普遍意义,强化论点。如:

史载:晋平公让大夫祁黄羊推荐南阳县县令,祁黄羊毫不迟疑地推荐解狐。晋平公惊讶地反问道:“解狐不是你的仇敌吗?”祁黄羊笑了笑说:“您让我推荐的是县令,并没有问谁是我的仇敌呀!”果然,解狐很有才干,成为百姓拥护的好县令。又一次,晋平公让祁黄羊推荐一位法官,祁黄羊推荐了祁午,晋平公听后又很震惊,说:“祁午不是你的儿子吗?你推荐他不怕别人说闲话吗?”祁黄羊认真地回答说:“我是把最能胜任的人推荐给您,并没有考虑他是谁的儿子。”事实上,祁午正如他父亲所言,办案精细果断,政绩显著。孔子闻此曾赞叹道:“善哉,祁黄羊之论也!外举不避仇,内举不避亲。”是啊,祁黄羊两次推荐人,虽然都直涉感情,但他的认知、判断却完全不受感情的左右。可见,认知之“理”是“情”外之物,它因人而异,并非总受“情”的束缚。(考场优秀作文《怎一个“情”字了得》)

这段文字通过对祁黄羊推荐人才事例的剖析,从正面推论出了“感情左右理性并不能一概而论,应因人而异”的道理。

五、引申类比法

这种方法,就是把所列举的事例加以引申或类比,联系实际,从而突出其观点的现实意义。如:

英国数学家多番维尔倾注了30多年的精力,把圆周率值推算到小数点后800多位。可是后人发现,他在第300多位时就出了错误,也就是说,他后面二十几年的努力都是白费。科学是容不得半点马虎的,多番维尔如果能在推算过程中经常客观地审查自己的步骤和数据,就可能不会留下这个遗憾了。科学如此,人生又何尝不是?常常听人后悔自己做得不好,什么不该做;事后再多的悔恨也于事无补,我们应该从中吸取教训,对“出”的意义有一个更好的认识。(考场优秀作文《人生的“出”与“入”》)

这段话由英国数学家多番维尔的事例,引申出一个人做人、处事或认识社会应“出乎其外”,审察反观,这样才会少犯错误。

六、因果分析法

这种方法,就是在列举事例的基础上,分析产生这一事实的直接或间接的原因,而原因就是所要证明的观点。如:

三国时的马谡,乃蜀军一员大将。镇守街亭,他把20万大军驻扎在高山上,久经沙场的老将王平力劝他撤离此山,理由让在场的将士信服,唯有马谡仍然坚持自己的观点。结果被司马氏围山断水,放火烧山,蜀军不战而乱,几乎全军覆没;马谡也被依军法身首异处。街亭失守,是因为马谡不懂兵法吗?不,他自幼熟读兵法,曾献计于诸葛亮,使其七擒孟获,平定南方边境;又离间曹睿与司马懿,使司马懿被罢官归田。马谡的失败,是因为他狂妄自大,固执己见,不能听取别人的正确意见。“前事不忘,后事之师”,我们在决策、办事时不能盲目自信,要择善而从,虚心听取他人的意见,这样才能获得成功。(考场优秀作文《自信,但不能盲目》)

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