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新人自我介绍注意事项6篇 作文英语(汇集20篇)

优秀的写作能力并非是我们与生俱来的;用英语进行写作,更是一项艰难的任务。有人觉得,写好英语作文,难于上青天;但也有人说,英语写作可以是一场迷人的心智旅程。这里给大家分享一些关于150字英语年级,供大家参考。

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介绍我的日常生活的英语作文

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I am a first-year student in Nanjing University. Every day, I have a very busy and full schedule.

Education is very important to students. The reason is that our achievement determines whether or not we can early out duties to our country in the future.

I get up early every morning to prepare my lessons. Then I attend classes. The last two periods in the afternoon are usually free. I spend them either on the sports ground or in the library. In the evening I try to complete all the assignments on time.

On the weekends, I like to watch TV or go to the films.

Being a student is hard work, but studying makes you a useful person and it is also full of joys when you are ahead of your classmates in all subjects.

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篇1:大一英语口语考试自我介绍

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My name is xxx from beautiful "jiangbei city"-liaocheng. Now study in hometown of Confucius-qufu normal university.

My personality stable, also do not break again cheerful. Good at making friends, make more friends.

My hobby is widespread: listen to music, photography, playing computer, of course, the most like or physical exercise, basketball, ping pong, football, and so on, this is why I choose the cause of professional sports.

Now in college, I want to in the university study hard, and actively participate in school activities and occasionally to do a part-time job.

As for the future, after four years I may continue my professional, use

professional knowledge to find work, perhaps I will choose my own business.In a word, I will use my hands and ability to create life without regret.

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篇2:介绍我家的小狗英语

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I have two puppies in my house. One is white, one is gray. White called Pippi, it is very naughty so called Pippi. Gray called obediently, it is well behaved so it is called obediently. But I liked Pippi.

Pippi it loves to sleep and eat asleep. But it heard someones footsteps, but also how diligent, it will be barking, tell us that someone came. But when I came, it not only shouted, but also came out to meet me. It is very obedient, we call it out to play, it goes out to play, as long as we called Pippi at the door, it will soon run back.

Pippi its appetite ok, give it anything to eat, as long as not bad things can be. Pippi it is a big variety, and our geese like.

Whenever I am very sad when it will run over to coax me, accompany me to play. Every time I am happy when it will be happy. Its unhappy when ill take it out to play. It was happy when I was happy.

This is my dog my favorite puppy skin. Okay, yes, forget what Phi Phi sleeps like. It sleeps like people, most of them are legs straight to the right lying, it is like a sleep will be snoring.

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篇3:初一英语自我介绍80词作文

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Me Hello,everybody!My name`s Kevin Bill。I am a 15-year-old boy and I am from China。My favorite movie are Rush Hour and Mr。Bean。Do you know them?I think they are exciting action movie and interesting comedy 。My English teacher is a beautiful teacher and she`s always friendly to us。Her favorite sport is basketball and we always play basketball together。My favorite music is pop and my favorite fruits are apples and grapes。And Sunday is my favorite day。How about you ?What`s your name?

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篇4:参加英语大赛的自我介绍

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Good afternoon, everyone! My name is wjh. I am 12 years old. Now I’m a student in Xitan School. The school is a little far from my home, so I uaually get up early and go to school by bike. My favorite subject in school is English, because it’s very interesting. I like Chinese too. My teachers are kind and fun. I like them. I have many friends at school and we usually study and play together. On weekends, I usually go shopping with my mother, sometimes I climb moutains with my father. I love my parents very much and they love me.

I like eating fruits and vegetables, because I want to be healthy. Fish is my favorite food. It’s yummy. In four seasons, I like winter best. Because I like playing with snow. I made a beautiful snowman with my parents last year. I was very happy. I hope it will snow this year too.

I have a dog. His name is Xixi. He is very smart and lovely. I like playing with him. I think I am a happy girl. I often smile and I’m very friendly. I hope you like me. Thank you!

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篇5:2024年中考作文注意事项

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下面是小编为大家收集的中考作文注意事项,欢迎阅读。

一、审题

审题,是对题目的意义、范围和要求的审定。审题的过程,就是确立文章体裁、题材、中心和写作的过程。这是作文的第一步,不能有丝毫的马虎,否则将会“失之毫厘,谬以千里”。尤其是中考的时候,考生因为要抢时间,临场心理又十分紧张,为避免偏差,冷静审题显得特别重要。尽管中考作文命题有明文规定,在审题上不给考生设置障碍,但这并不等于说不需要审题。认真解读,把握题意,是中考作文成败的先决条件。

在审题方面,常见的问题有两种:一是对题目的含义理解不准确。如“我们是初升的太阳”这一中考作文题中的“初升的太阳”,很明显有比喻义,表明要求写出中学生风华正茂、生机勃勃、热情奔放的多彩生活,表现出他们活力的光芒,青春的气息。如果不能正确理解这一点,就很难写出像样的文章。又如“在______的影响下”中的“影响”,意思是对被影响者的思想或行为起作用,它与“帮助”、“教育”等的含义是有区别的。有些同学未真正懂得“影响”的意思,结果所写的作文成了“在______的帮助(教育)下”。二是未弄清题义,没把握住题目的要求。如“我和______”,很清楚是写双方的,而有些同学错以为是写“______”,成了“我的______”。同样道理,“在______的影响下”,尽管文章触及“被影响者”的变化,但内容很少,而大量的笔墨却花在“影响者”身上,这就颠倒了主次。另外,还有个别同学因过分紧张或粗心,没看清题目(包括要求)。这往往会导致文章内容与主题扣得不紧,严重的还会远离题意,甚至文不对题。

所以在审题时,一定要注意四个明确:明确题目的已知条件,明确文章的写作对象,明确文章要表达的中心,明确选材的范围。

二、立意

审题完毕,就要根据题目要求妥善立意了。所谓立意,就是确定文章的中心、主旨。在记叙文中,“立意”是确定文章通过写人记事所要表述的中心思想;在议论文中,“立意”指的就是确立文章的中心论点。

中考作文的立意要求我们从个人生活、家庭生活、社会生活和学校生活中选取鲜活的素材表达中心——表达积极向上朝气蓬勃的精神,表达自尊自强自信自律的情怀,表达对“真善美”的赞颂与向往,表达对老师家长的尊敬与感恩,从而展示中学生积极向上、健康乐观的风采,歌颂日新月异、蒸蒸日上的时代生活,抒发中学生纯真丰富的情感,表达睿智深邃的思想。

对照以上要求,就会发现我们在中考作文中问题还是挺多的:其一,文章中心不明。很多考生在作文时,写人往往只停留在他(她)做了什么事,而不注意他(她)为什么做了这些事;写事往往只停留在叙述事情的过程,而不注意写“事件”中包含的思想意义。其二,文章多中心。如有考生在写“见到儿时的朋友”一文时,既写了与朋友之间纯真的友谊,又写了党的政策给农村带来的巨大变化,同时还对现在农村中有些家长为了挣钱,早早让孩子辍学的现象提出了批评。一篇文章,有三个中心,结果表述每个中心只能是蜻蜓点水,极为肤浅。

所以,从立意的要求来看,我们在中考时要注意以下三点:一是要鲜明。文章歌颂什么,批评什么,主张什么,反对什么,应旗帜鲜明,不能含含糊糊、模棱两可。二是要正确。中考作文评分标准中对立意的要求是:记叙文要“思想感情健康”,议论文要“观点正确”,这是最基本的要求,要切实做到。三是要力求新颖、深刻、有创意。这是在前二者基础上更高一些的要求。文章要力争写出新意,写出深度,不要过多重复别人已说过多次的话题,不要就事论事、浅尝辄止。还要注意立意的时代性和针对性。

如有四位同学写自己游佘山的经历:第一位写了自己游佘山的过程,毫无疑问是“流水账”。第二位先抑后扬,先写自己上山时的艰难,然后写看到的佘山的美,进而赞美祖国的大好河山,立意显然比第一位有了进步。第三位从上山的路写起,上山可乘缆车或沿石阶上去,写自己沿阶而上的艰难,觉得山太高,爬不上去,最后克服困难终于来到山顶,欣赏到了山顶美景,这时却觉得山并不高,由此体会到“欲穷千里目,更上一层楼”的哲理,从而明白要想攀上高峰,必须作艰苦的努力,立意显然更高。最后一位则写自己在佘山的两大景点(佘山大教堂和佘山天文台)之间徘徊,因时间关系只能选择其中一个景点,最后自己选择了佘山天文台,文章论述的是一个普遍性的问题,那就是作为当代中学生在神学与科学之间该如何选择,立意同样出色。所以,同样一个题材,立意可以完全不同,写作时,我们一定要善于从自己独特的生活感受出发,寻找新颖的角度去开掘事物的特点,探求事物的本质。只有这样,我们才能提炼出正确、深刻、新颖的主题来。

三、选材

五彩缤纷的人类社会,为我们提供了取之不尽、用之不竭的写作材料。有位着名的作家曾经说过这样一句话:“材料选得准,选得好,文章已经成功了一半。”考生写作文应该注重捕捉生活的闪光点、挖掘生活的新鲜事。生活的闪光点、新鲜事并不是凭空产生的,是靠我们平时的阅读、生活的体验和知识的积累获得的。只要我们在日常学习和生活中,善于做生活的主人、写作的有心人,善于学习新知识、接受新观念、观察新事物、研究新问题,善于观察、深入思考、注重积累,就能为写作提供丰富的“素材源”。当然,生活中惊天动地的典型事件并不多,这就要求我们多留意平凡的小事,注意挖掘事物的本质,探究事物的内涵,提炼其中的精华。如鲁迅先生的《一件小事》,事虽小,但小事中蕴涵着大意义。

我们在作文选材中常常会出现如下问题:一是材料陈旧。有些同学写到老师往往就是挑灯备课或是带病工作,写到父母关心自己就是风雨之夜送患病的“我”上医院等。二是材料单薄。有同学以老师一次补课来表现老师对学生的爱;以一个50分测验成绩来作为证明我“从来没有”这样悲痛的依据,其本意是以细碎小事来反映一种崇高品德,用普通琐事来表现自己某种强烈情感,但由于材料过于单薄,结果往往达不到目的。三是编造材料,“借用”材料。部分同学由于缺乏必要的生活常识,平时自己又不注重积累,不注意观察周围的人和事,结果就造成材料违背生活的真实,甚或出现完全抄袭或变相抄袭人家作文的情况。

针对这些情况,我认为在作文的选材上我们应注意以下一个原则、两个方面。

一个原则就是紧扣主题选材。凡是跟文章主题无关的材料一律舍去,与文章主题关系不大的材料,原则上也一概不用,材料尽量要典型。

两个方面就是,一要注意选材内容的新颖,二要注意拓展并表现自己的知识面。在内容上,要让自己的文章富于时代气息,写社会生活中的新事物;要写真事,抒真情,写自己的生活体验与感受。现实生活是纷繁复杂的,人们对事物的观察、认识也不尽相同,怎样选择最佳的写作角度呢?首先要开拓思路,多列角度;其次要反复比较,选择角度;最后要深入挖掘,确定角度。大多数中学生,所过的无非是平淡无奇的生活,接触的是普普通通的“小”人物、琐琐碎碎的“小”事情,确实没有多少新奇的东西可写,但我们要善于发现这些凡人小事中的闪光点,那么,即使是老材料同样也可写出新意,也可以小见大。

譬如拿抱小孩来说吧,恐怕绝大多数同学都有过此生活体验,但又有谁想到拿来作文呢?有一位聪明的同学却想到了,她从陪表姐的孩子玩耍半小时而“累得精疲力竭,叫苦不迭”的体验中,提炼出这样一个颇有意义的中心:“由此,我想到了我小的时候,也一定是够调皮的,爸爸妈妈也一定是这么哄我,陪我玩,辛辛苦苦把我拉扯大的,这是多么不容易啊!这时,我不禁吟起了孟郊的诗句:‘谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。’我该怎样来报答父母对我的抚养之恩呢?”作文的主体部分就是描述与表现孩子玩耍的情形,并不难写;其所以成为一篇成功之作,在于她善于做生活的有心人,从这件很不起眼的小事中,发掘出了其中的意蕴。

四、行文

作文的行文方面涉及文章的详略安排、结构层次、过渡照应、首尾呼应,涉及文章写作时的记叙顺序、描写方法、修辞手法和名言警句的运用等。由于涉及的内容众多,在此不一一赘述,仅举两例加以说明。

譬如取舍要得当。有一同学写“喜欢游泳的弟弟”,文章大部分内容写其怎么去学游泳的,又是怎样逐渐爱上游泳的,但弟弟“如何喜欢”却写得很少。很显然,文章就失去了平衡。

再如描写要具体。有一同学写早晨的校园是这样写的:随着上课的音乐铃声,热闹的校园进入安静之中。大楼里不久就传出了朗朗的书声。再看另一段文字:随着早自修的音乐声铃,原来像一锅开水似的校园立刻变了样。二楼的教室里传出了“天苍苍,野茫茫,风吹草低见牛羊”。三楼的教室里飘出了陆游的“夜阑卧听风吹雨,铁马冰河入梦来”,还有王勃的千古佳句“海内存知己,天涯若比邻”。四楼的教室里则飞出了“万里赴戎机,关山度若飞。朔气传金柝,寒光照铁衣。将军百战死,壮士十年归……”噢,他们在复习,此起彼伏的朗朗书声合在一起,汇成了一首宏亮美丽的乐曲。两下一比较,高下自分。所以我们在描写时一定要注意避免语句的空洞、生硬,描述尽量要生动、形象。另外,还需指出的是,我们有些同学在作文中过分追求内容的浮夸、文字的花哨,过分追求文章中语言的华美,从而堆砌词语,结果往往给人以无病呻吟、矫揉造作之感,必须坚决杜绝此类情况发生。

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篇6:面试英语自我介绍内容

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each examiner:

i call/**, come from shandong province.this year is 21 years old, , is a student who will soon graduate.

passes the foundation knowledge that the teachers guidance controled a calculator with personal effort firmly in the school.mainly studied c language at the software aspect. c#. java etc. plait the distance language, the data structure, vf. access etc. database is applied, calculator operate system.studied the dreamweaver web page manufacture and the asp network to weave a distance also.studied the calculator network at the hardware aspect, the calculator construction with www.oh100.combine many times to attend to pack machine, set the fulfillment of the net operation lesson, make me control the work principle of the calculator and the set of the calculator network net process.

in addition, i attend various activities of the school organization to come to the oneself of 锻炼 actively and do various part-time to increase social experience.the teacher is divided into the group to us in the experiment and practice of the lesson remaining to complete mission, make we the deep comprehension arrive the importance of the team.the and the rise time acquires the school scholarship during the period of school, three staffs.

however necessarily limited at the knowledge that the school learn, therefore i would ready to take advice study in the later work, the backlog working experience, the exaltation work ability.hope your company to give me a displays an own opportunity!

this with the result that

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篇7:介绍小兔子的英语

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1.Rabbit is an cute kind of amimals.It has two long ears.They can make rabbits hear carefully.It also has a short tail.They make rabbits so lovely.Rabbits likes carrots.If you are lonely.You can keep a rabbit.It can be your friends.

2.The little Rabbit has a coat of white hair.The two ears are long and prick up on its head.It is furry,soft and white with two red eyes glaring above the chin.Its eyes are like a pair of small red hulbs.Exposed to sunlight,they become little pieces of red thread.Its ears are straight and long and they can turn and move slightly.How cute it is!

小白兔全身盖一层雪白的毛.两只耳朵很长,直立在头上.它长着一身柔软的毛,瞪着l双红眼睛.眼睛像1对红色的小灯泡,见到阳光时就微微眯起;耳朵长而直竖,有时还会微微转动,它多可爱啊

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篇8:自我介绍英语含翻译

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Everyone is good, I should be more obedient, I like green, blue in my heart is a symbol of freedom, happiness and loveliness. I wont be furious when Im angry, but I just face it.

Remember again, my deskmate clashed with another classmate, my deskmate fell in my bag, my bag is pressed by him, I was very angry, picked up his pen to fling caution to the winds and threw all of a sudden, pencil, pen, ruler of the fly.

Look at it! I can lose my temper in some times, but most of the time will be very obedient. Are you willing to be my friend?

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篇9:有关微信的介绍中考英语作文

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导语:微信可以说开启了给人与人之间的新时代,二维码扫描,视屏沟通,语音交流,微信上爆料,微信上公布最新的政策,最准的路况。这些方面可以说极大的方便了人们的生活。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Wechat is a new app that almost all the people use on their phone. you can video chat when every you want and its for free. also you can talk through that app. its very convience. You can sreach for people who live around you who are using the same app. but at the same time, people are addict to it. they can not live without it. and people are having less and less conversation face to face. even worse, some people got tricked in this app, and lost lots of money. so this app can be good or bad, depend which way you using it.

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微信是一个新的应用程序,几乎所有的人都使用他们的电话。你可以视频聊天时,你想要的,这是免费的。也可以通过该应用程序交谈。这是很方便的。你可以搜索生活在你身边的人谁使用相同的应用程序。但同时,人们也沉溺于此。他们不能没有它。人们面对面的交谈越来越少。更糟糕的是,有些人被骗了这个应用程序,并失去了很多钱。所以这个应用程序可以是好是坏,取决于你使用它的方式。

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篇10:介绍欧洲英语作文

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Germany

Germans love to decorate their house sat Christmas.Many houses will have little wooden frames holding electric candles in their windows,and coloured pictures of paper or plastic which look beautiful from the outside at night.Father Christmas brings presents in the late afternoon of Christmas Eve(December 24th),after people have been to a church meeting.The presents are then found under the Christmas tree.One person in the family will ring a bell and call everyone to come to the room.On Christmas Day,fish(carp7))or goose will be cooked.

德国

德国人喜欢在圣诞节装饰他们的房子。很多房子的窗户上都会有用小木架支起来的灯泡蜡烛以及印在纸上或塑料上的彩色图片,晚上从屋外看上去非常漂亮。圣诞老人在圣诞夜(12月24日)傍晚人们去教堂聚会之后带来礼物。礼物放在圣诞树下。每家有一个人摇着铃铛叫所有人去屋里看礼物。圣诞节人们烹饪鲤鱼或者家鹅。

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篇11:自我介绍英语优秀作文

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Hello, everybody, let me introduce myself a minute you know me, know me and accept me.

I am from Shandong xxx, 20 years old this year, my hometown in Chongqing, Sichuan has given me straightforward character, and yet steady, then the long journey to the city of Nanjing to study.

In fact, when the first came to college to learn with a certain ideal of my heart out, some depressed at first, but after some time, I recognize the truth, it is optimistic about the Internet Professional. "The 21st century is the century of network interconnection."

This remark is not false, as the Internets development, it has stuck for the 21st century to take off.

Later, interest in continuous culture process, I began to become interested in the Internet the next three years, I will continue to progress in the study spent.

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篇12:介绍我的家乡的英语

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My home village is a small one. It’s in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province. Small as it is, it’s very beautiful.

There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high.In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar. In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly. I love my hometown!

我的家乡是位于山西盂县的一个小村庄。它虽然小但非常美丽。

家乡被群山环绕,这些小山甚至比大山川还要美丽。春日里,我们在山巅放飞自制的风筝;夏天里,漫山遍野是长得绿油油的草木,各种野果美味诱人;秋日里,山下和山周围的玉米熟了,我们几乎天天能尝到新鲜的玉米;冬日里,雪花飘飘,大地银妆素裹,我们玩雪,有时还就着糖吃几口干净的白雪。我的家乡天空蔚蓝,空气清新,水儿甜美,人们好客。我爱我的家乡。

[介绍我的家乡的英语作文

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篇13:关于自我介绍是英语

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Im Hua Zhengxian. Im ten years old. Im in Class 5,Grade 4. My hair is short. My eyes are small. I get up at six oclock. I have breakfast at six fifteen. I go to school at seven oclock. I have lunch at twelve oclock. I go home at eight oclock. I watch TV at eight ten. I go to bed at nine oclock. I like playing computer games and going fishing. On Sunday morning, I usually do my homework. In the afternoon, I play games with my friends.

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篇14:介绍足球规则英语

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Football is a famous entertainment project, we play with feet. Many people love a football match. Football is their favorite topic of conversation. They usually go to the football matches and cheer for their favorite teams. We know when someone kicks in the goal that there is a score. Two teams are in the same place to kick. Both team has 11 people. We have 90 minutes in a match. We can pass the ball with our feet. You must run and run because maybe the others will kick the football.

In America we call it soccer, in England we call it football. That’s why we sometimes call it “soccer” or “football”.

If we have a football match, we must wear special clothes.

I think football is a good game to play, don’t you?

[介绍足球规则英语作文

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篇15:中考英语作文范文自我介绍500字

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根据以下要点提示写一篇60-80词的短文。

1、在学校学习汉语、英语、数学、历史和一些其他学科;

2、我学习很努力,最喜欢的学科是英语,经常找机会练习英语;

3、现在中国已经加入世贸组织wto,并且2008年奥运会将在北京举行,英语正变得越来越重要;

4、我将更加努力学习英语,将来为祖国作贡献。

I study Chinese、English、maths and History and some other subject at school.I study hard. My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics,English is more and more important .I will study hard and be dedicate to my homeland.

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篇16:电话面试英语自我介绍

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Presentation Hello! This is xxx! My English name is xxx. You can call me xxx! Training experience I am a student just graduated from xxx in early July. I was major in xxx which was mainly applied in Hardware. But i am interested in software programming! So I participated in the training of Mainframe in ITMS in May. Through the learning of the basic knowledge of mainframe, which contained TSO,JCL,VSAM,COBOL,Db2 and CICS, , I mainly mastered the basic theory of Mainframe. Through the training of programming and practicing on the computer, i can do the basic mainframe application development. I also took part in the soft skill classes which contained many topics about how to be a good team member , effective manner of presentation, communication and negotiation, how to finance your salary properly, how to set your life target and make plans to achieve effectively and so on. Project experience At the end of the training, I participated in the application development for the basic banking operation. The system contained the saving account and fixed deposit operation, transferring between two accounts, interest calculation, cheque operation and loan operation management. The project was done by three persons。

We mainly made use of the language COBOL, DB2, VSAM, JCL etc and programming technique skills. I took charge of the simulation, programming and testing of the interest calculation of fixed deposit, cheque operation management. The structure of the program was: the main part was structured by COBOL sentences embedded with SQL sentence, which dealed with the VSAM file and the table of database. Personal quality Firstly I am an easy-going person. Because I prefer sharing my opinions and feelings with my friends and partners. So I also like cooperating with others to accomplish a hard task. And I think team spirit can help you to succeed. Secondly I am a frank person. Because I think honesty is the most important quality every person in modern society. It will make you popular and trusted by partners. Thirdly I am a brilliant one. Because I am good at information collection, data analyzing and structure designing. I am eager to challenge new situation and learn new knowledge.

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篇17:注意事项

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重在“感”

不少同学开始写观后感,往往将“观”的内容写得很长,总爱把故事情节从头到尾加以介绍,生怕读者不知其内容,而发表“感”的文字却很少。如一个同学在写《一个独生女的故事》观后感时,先将整个故事从头到尾讲述了一遍,先写张鸣鸣如何品学兼优,再写张鸣鸣的父亲突然去世,母亲因承受不了这一打击而重病缠身;接着写张鸣鸣从自己学梳头开始,怎样担负起繁重的家务,接受一个个严酷的考验,然后写她在社会的帮助下一天天长大。最后结尾时才写到:我要向张鸣鸣学习,不被困难所屈服,从小要学做自己能做的事。针对这样一篇结构的观后感,我首先肯定他看得很认真,记住了影片的情节,但从观后感的文体要求上看,是不合格的。因全文只有最后一句“感”,虽然这句“感”的内容贴切,但文章没抓住“感”这个重点,写偏了,好像一篇电影内容简介。我强调学生应以“感”为主,从文字上看,“感”的内容大约占影片主要内容的四、五倍。文中适当引用影片内容,是为“感”服务的。因此,引用电影内容只要三言两语,不要具体叙述,更不要什么细致的描写。

联系实际

要写好“感”就该联系实际,深入发挥,把自己的“感”写深、写透。 这里的实际,不是单指自我实际,还包括他人实际,社会实际。

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篇18:空乘面试英语自我介绍

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Hello my name isXXX.I am XX yearsold.I graduatedfrom XXX.I have a dream since I was a child.I dream that one dayI can fly in the blue sky like the bird. Now I have the chance to make it cometrue. If i can take this job. I’ll try my best to do everything well.Because Ilove this job.

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篇19:大学开学1分钟自我介绍英语大众版

全文共 497 字

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Hello everybody. My name is Stone. I come from Sichuan province in China.

I am very happy to come here to study with you.When I arrived at this school three days ago, I fell in love with it.It is so beautiful and exciting here, and everyone is kind to me especially Kim.This class feels just like one big family to me.

I’m interested in sports, music and mountain climbing.I also enjoy playing soccer. I would love to play with you sometime.I hope I can become your friend soon. Thank you very much.

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篇20:英语比赛1分钟自我介绍

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I am a girl who loves life, is positive, optimistic and conscientious. In the study and life of high school, I not only learned a lot of knowledge, but also improved in all aspects. In the face of difficulties, I never go back, always start my mind, try to solve the problem and overcome the difficulties. And every solution to a problem, to overcome a difficulty, all of my confidence has been promoted. I believe that as long as there is enough confidence and double efforts, we will be able to overcome all kinds of difficulties and difficulties and lead to the other side of success. In the course of high school learning, I can take every course seriously, preview carefully, and review actively. When you have a problem, ask your classmates and consult your teacher. I will constantly improve the learning methods, find the most suitable learning methods, adjust the study plan, and arrange the time. I think of learning as a knowledge, to enrich my music, and to be full of interest in it.

I like music very much. I actively participate in chorus in school. In chorus team, we cooperate with each other, and compete for school, get excellent results, and win honor for school. And I am also very good at playing the guzheng, and I have won national awards. Through participating in the school choir, I deeply realized that doing anything requires not only enthusiasm, but also the spirit of conscientious and responsible and the spirit of cooperation with others. For individual competitions, it is necessary to take serious treatment, and more importantly, to practice more, so that it will not be unfamiliar.

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