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在骄阳似火的七月里,我们毕业了。虽然中学的生活令我们憧憬,但是六年了,同学们之间的友情,老师的关怀备至,都让我们留念。舍不得亲爱的同学们,舍不得循循善诱的老师们,舍不得和蔼可亲的校长,舍不得陪伴我们成长六年的母校……这里给大家分享一些关于再见小学话题作文,供大家学习。

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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. And it is the most popular festival in China. People often do different things before Spring

Festival. Some of them clean and decorate their houses. Some of them go shopping and buy some flowers. Some of them stay at home and do nothing. I usually help my mum clean the house. People get together and have a big meal at Spring Festival. They often eat fish, pork, goose, chicken, vegetables, soup and so on. I like Spring Festival very much, because adults give me some lucky money.

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篇1:小学春天英语

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spring comes.ltsgetting warmer and warmer.Everything is dry, trees, fields and even the air. Just then, it rains. lts as soft as silk. ltwashes the dirty of the earth and waters the plants and the fields. lt also waters peoples hears. Farmers stand in the spring rain and smile.Spring rain is as dear as oil They seem to see the harvest time inautumn. Spring rain brings water to the air. It also brings hope to people.

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篇2:小学英语字母和写作的学习方法

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英语字母教学作为英语学习的基础,是小学英语教学中重要一环,这一阶段的教学,教师应给予足够的重视,通过各种教学组织形式使这一阶段的学习得以很好的落实。学好26个字母对以后单词的学习起着至关重要的作用。因此,在学习字母阶段,我们要利用一切可利用的资源,创设情境,让学生和字母交朋友、做游戏。

一、字母读音教学

1. 注重示范发音的正确性

字母发音直接影响着学生单词的发音,而且学生错误的发音一旦形成就很难再纠正。因此教师在教学字母之前一定要多听录音,纠正好自己的发音。在课堂教学中教师要让学生听磁带跟读,观察他们的口形,并鼓励模仿得好的学生示范领读,帮助其他同学纠正发音。

2. 把握学生的发音难点

受各地方方言的影响,学生对字母的发音往往会出错。比如:南方人容易把A读成/e/。因此,教师要把握好学生方言发音难点,预先采取各种教学方法防止错误发音的出现。

3. 强化个别字母教学

尽管许多学生对字母有了一定程度的掌握,但大多数学生都没有进行过系统的字母学习,中间难免存在着许多似是而非的现象。例如学生对GgJj两个字母的读音容易混淆,对Uu和Ii这两个字母的发音不到位。教师在教学中应针对这种情况加强这几个字母的训练。

4. 注重读音归类教学

把字母按读音进行分类是字母读音教学的一个重要任务,也是学生觉得有一定难度的一项内容。为了使学生能更好得掌握,教师可采用分家游戏的方法,按家族将26个字母进行分类记忆。首先将字母划分为七个家族,再对号入座,最终编成一首音素家族chant 帮助学生记忆:

A、H、J、K 是A 家族,A,A是族长。

E的家族有八位,BCDE,GPTV,E,E是族长。

/e/ 的家族没有族长,它的成员有七位,FLMN,SX 和Z。

U 的家族有三位,UQW,U,U是族长。

I 的家族有两位,IY,I,I是族长。(手势指着自己)

R 和O单独住,它们自己是族长。

5. 注重语音暗线的铺垫

在三年级下册学生用书中,字母读音和字母例词的安排是一条语音暗线,教师教学时要努力让学生掌握字母的正确读音,并初步感知字母在例词中的读音,为以后学习语音奠定基础。比如讲到字母Ee时,例词是egg,elepghant,教师可突出字母E的发音。英语有48个国际音标,如果学生能在学习 26个字母的同时掌握与此相关的26个音素,将会为以后的语音学习打好基础。

二、字母书写教学

字母的书写过程要一步步进行:先观察性状,再观察笔顺、占格情况,然后书空,使用活动手册进行描红,最后达到仿写。

1. 字母认读的教学

字母的书写首先要求学生能正确区分一些形近的字母。有些字母可以通过猜谜的方法让学生记住它们的形状特点。例如:弯弯的月牙(C)、一条小蛇 (S)、三叉路口(T)、1加3(B)、一座宝塔(A)、胜利的象征(V)、大号鱼钩(J)、一张弓(D)、一扇小门(n)、一棵小苗(r)、一把椅子 (h)。这些谜语既能让学生记住字母的形,又能激发学生的学习兴趣。同时,还可以让学生自编谜语学习字母,充分发挥学生的想象能力。另外,还可以将字母的一部份遮住,让学生根据漏出来部分来猜字母。

2. 字母书写的教学

字母的书写是小学生的一个薄弱环节。小学的英语书写一定要求学生做到严格遵照书写规范,教师绝对不能马虎。因为英语字母有印刷体和书写体之分,所以容易使学生在书写时发生混淆,教师在教学时应多在这方面进行强调。

(1)笔顺教学

教师要充分利用多媒体设施让学生仔细观察字母的笔画和笔顺。正确的笔顺在活动手册的描红练习中有正确的示范。但有时学生会受到汉语拼音笔顺的影响,错误书写字母,因此教师要对容易出错的笔顺进行比较细致的指导。如i和j都是后加点,t先写钩,H先两竖等。建议教师不妨采用汉语拼音的教法,使用一些形象的比喻,帮助学生理解记忆书写规则,防止笔画出错。比如:H是一双筷子拴根线,j是海豹顶皮球,i是小海狮头上顶个球,t是伞把带开关等。

(2)格式教学

字母的占格同样是字母书写教学中的一个教学难点,尤其是当字母的大小写混在一起的时候,学生很容易混淆。这样,教师要先清楚示范,提醒学生注意并总结字母占格的规律。同时,教师还可以借助儿歌帮助学生掌握字母的占格规律。如:英语书写,四线三格,大写字母一二格,上不顶线是原则;小写字母认准格,上面有 ‘辫’一二格,下面有‘尾’二三格,无‘辫’无‘尾’中间格;i,t中上一格半。在学生掌握了字母的占格规律后,还要通过活动手册上的描红来加强练习。这里要注意的是,到一定阶段的时候,教师要让学生能在没有四线格的一条线上,甚至是没有任何线的白纸上也能正确地表示出字母的书写格式。

三、操练

字母操练我们还可以采用游戏的形式。

1. What’s missing?游戏

学了几个字母以后,把字母卡片放在一起让学生认读,然后抽去其中的一张,让学生寻找:What’s missing?此时,学生注意力高度集中,急于表现自己,识记的效果就会很好。

2. 左邻右舍游戏

学生准备好已经学过的字母卡片,教师出示一个字母,让学生找出它的左邻右舍,请找到的几个学生快速把字母拿到讲台上站在相应的位置上,其余的学生一起认读这几个字母。

3. Make letters游戏

让学生用肢体动作表示不同的字母,或让学生用火柴棒拼出不同字母的形状。

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篇3:小学六年级英语作文:家规

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"The home has rules, the school has the school rules, animals have the tortoise". The rules of my house has a lot of, the worst is the exam, take an examination of nine is three times in a row there will be a long time cant play computer, I will always be begged said: "cant play computer, then I can watch TV!" But my mothers answer, always will be: "NO!" Then I have to be dead.

The first is the neat miserably. Is my little sister, her playful raillery free all day playing, lessons are abandoned. Soon her test scores decline sharply, see have sent three times, sister pull a long face every day cant play computer, watch TV, see her nervous complain: "this day how bitter!"

Fine sister know to turn up and test scores rose slowly, recently has returned to the standard, so she is now free, full of smile on her face, and turned back to a sunny girl.

Discipline is not the tortoise, is a good law, norms we just follow the world too PingLuo!

“家有家规,校有校规,动物有乌龟”。我家的家规有很多,最惨的是考试连续考九十分以下三次的话,就会有一段很长的时间不能打计算机了,我总是会苦苦哀求说:“不能打计算机,那我可以看电视吗!”但妈妈的回答,永远都是:“NO!”这时我也只得死心了。

第一次被这家规整惨的人。正是我不知天高地厚的妹妹,她整天嘻皮笑脸自由自在的玩,功课都荒废了。很快的她的考试分数急速下滑,眼看已经三次被罚了,妹妹愁眉苦脸天天不能打计算机、不能看电视,就看她欲哭无泪的抱怨著:“这日子多苦啊!”

还好妹妹知道改过向上,考试的分数慢慢上升,最近已经恢复标准了,所以她现在已经自由了,她的脸上充满笑容,又变回了一位阳光女孩。

家规不是乌龟,是规范我们的好法律,只要遵从就天下太平罗!

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篇4:关于科学家的英语作文小学

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Today, with the fast development of science and technology, the artificial

intelligence has gone much further than people can imagine, such as the robot.

Now the first robot is admitted to be a citizen, which scares so many people.

Many scientists had predicted that someday robots would replace human being not

only in physical work, but also in minds. How terrible it would be. It is said

that scientists saw two robots discussing by creating a new language, then they

decided to turn down the machine and made them stop working. They knew clearly

the danger may happen in the future. Most people have thought about

self-consciousness that robot may have some day, but scientists still have a lot

of passion in searching the robots. They want to complete everything. But no one

can make sure what they can bring for human being.

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篇5:英语生日会小学五年级日记

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放暑假了,妈妈带我去龙江参加英语生日会。

我们到了那里,我看到许许多多的小朋友在看动画片呢。这是,老师来了,给我们唱起来生日歌,我们非常开心。接着老师让我们做一个游戏。老师说:‘’让一个女生,一个男生上去。2人把双手高高举起,然后剩下的同学 手拉手在一起钻山洞,谁被捉住了就要换人。“游戏开始了,我们就都跑了起来。老师说:”STOP。“我被捉住了,我换人了,我后面的杨飞翼也被捉住了。

下面老师给我们发了一顶小帽子,小洋烛灯,还拿来三层的蛋糕,老师让我们手拉手,许一个心愿。开始吃蛋糕了,我们非常兴奋,坐在我旁边的小朋友吃的满脸都是。笑的我们乐开了嘴。

要是下次还能来参加生日会,那该多好呀!

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篇6:幸运的一天小学六年级英语作文

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Today is a fine day.And I am very lucky.

In the morning,I’m go fishing in a river with my parents.As time goes by,I am fishing a big fish.I am very happy,but my parents have no one fish.Next,I am fishing a small fish,but I still happy.Because my parents still have no one fish.It’s time to go home,I am fishing ten fishs,but my parents are only fishing a small fish.In the afternoon,I am playing football with my buddies.MingMing has the ball,he is kicking it to me.I am kicking the ball.It’s a beautiful goal. Next, PingPing has the ball,he is kicking to Mike.Now,Mike has the ball,he is kicking it.It’s a goal.Now,we are winning.

Today I am very lucky.And I am so happy.

今天是晴朗的一天。我很幸运

在早上,我去钓鱼和我的父母在河里。随着时间的流逝,我钓一条大鱼。我很高兴,但我父母没有一条鱼。接下来,我钓鱼的小鱼,但我仍然高兴。因为我的父母还没有一条鱼。是时候回家了,我钓鱼十条鱼,但我的父母只是捕捞小鱼。在下午,我和我的朋友踢足球。明明有球,他是踢我。我踢球。那是一个美丽的目标。接下来,记者拿球,他是迈克踢。现在,迈克拿球,他是踢它。这是一个目标。现在,我们正在赢得。

今天我很幸运。和我很高兴。

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篇7:狗小学五年级英语作文

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DOG    Wong!wong!wong!   Ah well cute,A white dog,Is a public dog.   A pair of sparkling eyes,A light gray hair,There are a small mouth,The longer of the two butterfly-like ears, Many seem to next mustache nose in a very cute. It is a favorite play, the mouth of the total did not blow a mouth full of small balloon . The small dog named Peas,Peas are born masters of the day bought, like buying seeds, like water, they are the large seeds, So called Peas.

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篇8:调皮的塔米小学六年级英语作文

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Tammy was in a bad mood. Her parents had insisted that she was too young for a cell phone,no matter how much she begged. “But Sun and Alicia have cell phone!” Tammy cried. “If I don’t get one, I won’t be popular.”

“Having a cell phone doesn’t make you popular,” Tammy’s dad said. He is always saying stuff like this, As if he knew what it was to be in fourth grade. “Besides,” Dad said, “your school doesn’t allow cell phones, and you can call your friends from the house as soon you finish your homework.”

“But I can’t send them text messages,” Tammy relied.

“You can use email,” Mom said. “Cell phone are expensive. we want you to wait until you can pay for part of the cost before you got one.”

“By that time I won’t need one,”Tammy said. “Nobody will know who I am. I might as well moved to a desert island!”

“In that case, I’ll get you some empty bottles and some paper,” Dad said. “Bottle messages are much cooler than text messages.”

“Ugh,” sighed Tammy.

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篇9:小学英语作文环境

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As we all know, pollution is harmful to living beings. There are many

different types of pollutions in this world. For instance, water pollution, air

pollution, noise pollution and so on. Water pollution cause many kinds of

disease that have negative effects on human beings, sometimes the diseases will

take people’s life away. Dirty air will increase the rate of getting lung

cancer. While the noise pollution will cause insomnia. People’s health condition

will be damaged.

In my humble opinion, people should take measures to control the pollution.

Recently, not only the government, but also individual has taken part in the

action of protecting the environment. This is a good sign. Rivers are being

cleaned, air is purified, and the people come to realize that the importance of

protecting the environment.

However, this is not enough, the problems are still exist. Not all of them

have been solved. Some factories are still pouring dirty water into the rivers

or give off the toxic gas into the sky. We should know that protecting the

environment needs everybody’s effort.

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篇10:小学五年级英语作文:环保

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导语:环境污染问题日益严重,我们应该保护环境,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

The world we live in is becoming more and more intolerable because of environmental destruction. Bird flu and Sars are two typical examples that environmental destruction may threaten our life. Besides, forest destruction , water and air pollution result in decrease of planting land and unpleasant weather.

Serious as the problem seems, we can come up with some measures to deal with it. First of all, the authorities should adopt the policy of "sustainable development", and laws concerning environmental protection should be put into effect and enforced strictly just as our government has been doing.

What s more, every citizen should realize the seriousness of the problem and make concerted efforts to protect our environment. In addition, planting trees helps improve and beautify the environment.

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由于环境的破坏,我们生活的世界变得越来越难以忍受。禽流感和Sars是两个典型的例子,环境破坏可能威胁我们的生活。此外,森林破坏,水和空气污染导致种植面积减少和不愉快的天气。

这个问题似乎很严重,我们可以提出一些解决的办法。首先,当局应该采取“可持续发展”的政策,有关环境保护的法律应实施和严格执行,正如我们的政府一直在做。

更重要的是,每个公民都应该认识到问题的严重性,并共同努力保护我们的环境。此外,植树有助于改善和美化环境。

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篇11:小学英语满分作文MyFamily我的家庭

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There are three people in my family. Theyre father, mother and I。My mother is a Chinese teacher. She is not tall, nor short, just right. She is fat. She likes to eat noodles and vegetables. Her favorite colors are brown and red. She doesnt like animals. She lets me to learn playing piano. I love her because she is nice and hard-working. She cares for me a lot. She is take cares of grandparents. Sometime my father and my mother fight each other。

My father is a manger. He is thirty-six years old. He is fat and tall. He is good at maths and physics. He cares for me much. Sometimes he buys me stationary. I like my dad。

Now its my turn. My name is Tina. Im eleven years old. Im not thin, nor fat, just right. Im tall. I go to Simon English School. Im in grade four class one. I like to eat french-fries and some friends but I dont like meat. I can paint. My best friends are Lily and Helen. My favorite colors are black, white, yellow and blue。

Sometime in my family everything is very nice。

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篇12:小学二年级英语作文The Stars 星星

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Have you ever wondered about theStars? In some ways, stars are like people. They are born, then grow old, and at last they die.

A star is born from dust and gas. Slowly the dust and gas make a ball. The ball gets very hot. Then it stars to give off light.

The young star grows into a giant. Many years go by. The older star begin to get small again. At last its light goes out. The stars life is over.

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篇13:BusyWeekend小学六年级英语作文

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Hi ,this is Wang Fang Ping, I’m going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I’m going to go shopping with my friend by bus. I’m going to buy a pair of new shoes, some books and magazine. Then I’m going to visit my grandparents by bike.

On Sunday, I’m going to my friend home. We will do homework.. Then, in the evening, I’m going to supermarket with my brother. He likes toy very much.. In the market, I’m going to buy five notebooks, one pen, three pencils, one pencil-case, a color pen and many snacks. At home, we are going to watch TV together. That will be fun. What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

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篇14:关于保护动物的小学生英语作文

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Animals are our best friends. But there are many bad things about them. So we should try our best to protect animals.

First, let us know the status of the animal. Now, animals are facing very great danger. For example, there are many kinds of animals will die out. And there are many people eat precious and wild animals. They are nasty. As students, we should stop this behavior and protect animals.

Then, let us know we should how to protect animals. We should protect they habitat. If you see other people mindlessly trample animal homes, nicely remind them of the damage theyre causing. We can not also eat some wild animals. We should ask other people to protect them, too. Let we protect animals together!

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篇15:小学二年级英语作文200字

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Many years ago there lived in Hangzhou a girl called Aqiao. One winter morning she walked into a valley. To her surprise, she found herself in a different world.

There were rows of white houses with mulbery trees in front of them. Many ladies in white were singing and picking the leaves from the trees. They fed the leaves to little silkworms. Aqiao learned how to reel silk and how to dye it.

When she returned home, she began to raise silkworms and taught her neighbours how to do it. It was said that this was how people started to raise silkworms in China.

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篇16:MyCousinStella三年级英语作文_小学英语作文500字

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I have many cousins. I like Stella best. She is a pretty girl. She likes eating cucumbers , eggplants, cabbages… She doesn’t like eating eggs and milk. So she is very short.

Stella is an excellent student . She is the monitor of her class. She likes studying and she studd. So she is always the top student in her class.

In this summer holiday , I spent a very happy time with her in Sichuan . I often miss her very much.

I like my cousin best!

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篇17:自我介绍的小学生英语

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Hello, My name is Gu Siyao. My English name is Hellen. I am 12 years old. I form Xiouzhou Experimental Shool. I love my school. Because my school is very beautiful and big .The trees are green and the sky is blue. The classes are interesting and exciting. The teachers are not strict. And the students are very lovely. They always help each other.

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篇18:小学生关于爱的英语作文Love

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Loveto us human is what water to fish.Love shines the most beautiful light of humanity,we born in it,we live by it.Too often we take it as granted,but we should know love is a priceless gift we should cherish.But how to cherish the love?I have heard a saying :the quickest way to receive love is to give it; the fastest way to lose love is to hold it too tightly the best way to keep love is to give it wings.

It is important for us to learn to love as the first class in our life.Only when you know how to love than you will be a real man in this world.Love brings us warmth in the fearful coldness,love brings us bright when life gets hard and dark.Love brings us confidence toward life when we are tired out and want to give up.

Love deserves all the admiring words,and love is even beyond the life and death.That is what love is all about in my eyes.

爱我们人类是水的鱼。爱最美丽的人性之光照耀,我们出生,我们活。我们常常把它当成理所当然,但是我们应该知道爱是无价的礼物,我们应该珍惜。但是怎样珍惜别人的爱呢?我听到一种说法:最快得到爱的方式就是给它,失去爱最快的方式是把爱抓的太紧保持爱的最好方式就是给爱一双翅膀。

对我们来说是很重要的学会爱作为第一个类在我们的生活中。只有当你知道如何去爱比你将是一个真正的男人在这个世界上。爱在可怕的寒冷带给我们温暖,带给我们光明的生活变得艰难的时候,和黑暗。爱带给我们对生活的信心,当我们累了,想放弃。

爱值得爱和欣赏的话,甚至超越了生与死。这就是爱我的眼睛。

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篇19:小学二年级英语作文:Whatawonderfulday

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导语:每天都是好心情,跟大家分享你美好的一天吧!以下是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Last month I went to an amusement park, because I had an excellent grade on my final exam. At the beginning when we drove through the gate, I throught what a magnificent gate. The gate was huge and decorated with many fancy things, such as fake jewelleries, and shinning glass. On the way to the entrance, I could see some wild animals wondering on the place, just like lions, elephants, and hippoes. Also there are iron fences to block them , I still felt exited,

When we entranced the amusement park, I was shocked by what appeared to my eyes.The venders were dressed in colorful and fanny costumes. The souvenir shops were selling things that I’ve never seen before. The roller coaster was so scary and exciting. We tried almost everything in the amusement park, and none of them was boring.

At the end of the day, we were having dinner in the stylish restaurant. The waiters and waitresses were beautiful and handsome, and the food was owesome too. Everything in the restaurant was well designed, such as the tables, chairs and the utensils. We sat next to the window, so we could see the night view of the whole amusement park.。 How beautiful it is! I throught.

After I came home, I could still remember the moment clearly when I saw the night view. It was such a wonderful day for me.

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上个月我去了游乐园,因为我期末考试考得很好。一开始我们开车经过大门时,我看到了一扇多么宏伟的大门。门是巨大的,装饰着许多花哨的东西,如假珠宝,和闪闪发光的玻璃。在入口的路,我能看到一些野生动物在游走,就像狮子,大象。也有铁栅栏阻止他们,我仍然觉得退出,

当我们进入游乐园,我被什么似乎我的眼睛感到震惊。小贩都穿着五颜六色的服装和范妮。纪念品商店出售我以前从未见过的东西。过山车是如此可怕和令人兴奋。我们几乎在游乐园试了所有的东西,没有一件是无聊的。

在一天结束的时候,我们在时髦的餐厅吃饭。服务员都很漂亮、帅气,和食物。餐厅里的一切都是精心设计的,如桌子、椅子和餐具。我们坐在窗户旁边,这样我们就可以看到整个游乐园的夜景了。

回家后,当我看到夜景的时候,我还清晰地记得那一刻。这对我来说是如此美好的一天。

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篇20:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法

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一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:

(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。

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