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1000描写冬天的作文英文
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+ 加入清单Winter came, and the snow was falling. The trees were so cold that they took off their green coats and put on a white coat. The earth also took off its colorful coat and put on a snow-white coat.
Suddenly, just listen to “ jichajizha ” the sound, I looked out of the window look, the original is the children in the snowman, snowball fights, play happy.
The roadside plum blossom opened, spit out the elegant fragrance, a gust of wind blowing, the petals of a plum blossom, then one fell, like the red butterfly flying down.
Well, the scenery is beautiful in winter!
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篇1:下雨天,真好!作文800字
全文共 740 字
+ 加入清单又下雨了呢,我望着天空喃喃自语道。
记得她搬家离开的那一天,我哭了一晚上。那天晚上雨声大极了,乌云覆盖了整个夜空,连月光和星星都看不到。
自从她离开的那天起,我对下雨一直怀有厌恶的感觉。
撑起一把伞,平静的绕开一个个水洼,路上只能听到旁人的争吵汽车的鸣笛和沙沙的雨声——令人烦乱,这嘈杂的一切!
突然,一阵狂风袭来,将雨伞上的一只黄色的千纸鹤卷走了。我心头一惊——那是她临走时送我最后的礼物,是我最重要的东西啊!我二话不说追着跑了起来,连雨伞都嫌碍事扔掉了。
不知是不是这只千纸鹤引起的,记忆的碎片一点点努力拼凑:原来的我是极爱下雨天的,尤其是有她在的时候。放学前,只要看到窗外开始下起雨来,不管蒙蒙细雨还是滂沱大雨,我和她一定都欣喜若狂。因为在放学回家时,我们总是会走那条人不多的小路,周围宁静得只能听到雨水打在树叶上“淅淅沥沥”的声音,像孩子们在欢快地笑。水洼一个连着一个,我们从不躲着走,踏进去,跳出来,比谁踩出的水花大。尽管每次都是她赢我,尽管每次都把裤脚弄湿,可我丝毫不在意,一路上满是欢声笑语……
回忆起这些,我的心不知怎么的也跟着雨飘了起来。雨水滴答在我的脸上、身上,却感受到一股熟悉的清凉。水洼也顾不得绕开,积水溅到我的衣服上,可我内心却莫名升起一种兴奋而又轻松的感觉。耳边的雨声不再嘈杂,汽车的鸣笛声也逐渐消失于耳旁。
我笑了。两年来第一次在雨中大笑,在雨中奔跑,就像两年前和她在一起时一样。我感受到了下雨天带给我的快乐,带给我的自由,我想我重新爱上了下雨天,是它让我从过去的痛苦中解放!
终于追到了千纸鹤,它早已湿透,我的心却并不那么的悲凉。黄色的千纸鹤,寓意温暖的笑容。我不会再为过去的事而一直沉浸在悲伤之中,即使外面下着倾盆大雨,我心里的阳光与笑容依旧灿烂。
下雨天,真好!
篇2:下雨天
全文共 252 字
+ 加入清单滴滴答答!滴滴答答……雨滴在屋檐上唱歌,雨滴在花朵上跳华尔兹,雨滴在溜滑梯上玩耍……雨滴真是顽皮啊!
下雨天成群结队的青蛙也出来了,叫声响彻云霄,大家也欢天喜地来赏雨。那可爱的小雨滴,滴答滴答的一直下,好像在打鼓一样,青蛙也赶紧鼓大肚皮,快乐的唱起歌来!
下雨天,蚂蚁不行出来工作,只能躲在蘑菇下休息,欣赏那诗情画意的风景。因为雨中,花儿们笑嘻嘻,可以舒舒服服的洗冰水澡,也可以喝那冰凉凉的露水,真是既凉爽又解渴啊!
雨停了彩虹出来了,太阳也露出笑脸,大家心花怒放,迎接雨后的艳阳和那座弯弯的七彩缤纷的七彩桥。
篇3:下雨天,真好作文700字
全文共 723 字
+ 加入清单“嗒,嗒,嗒,啪嗒,啪嗒啪嗒……”雨的脚步由远及近。
“下雨了!”大家在路上大喊。一些没带伞的准备不周的人士,用手挡着头,撒开双脚朝着家的方向狂奔,只为让自己身上少落些凉凉的雨点。而另一些带伞的“先知”们,感叹着“幸好带伞了”,不紧不慢地撑开准备已久的雨伞,慢悠悠地走着。
我趴在窗口,望着窗外如丝般的春雨,不禁感叹自然的神奇。
雨如第一次登台演奏的乐师。“嗒!”这是雨的乐师用尽自己的生命奏出的琴声;“啪!”这是雨的乐师将自己砸向大地击打出的鼓点;“叮!”这是雨的乐师轻触防盗窗摇晃出的铃声。它们是伟大的,用自己的生命奏响了春雨的乐章。
雨如同资深的舞者。在空中牵起舞台的道具——水雾,扭动自己柔软的腰身。风是最好的领舞,雨的舞者簇拥着她,甘当伴舞,随着她的风向摆动。虽然能演出的时间很短,但也没有一个伴舞不配合那领舞的骄傲的风。风身边的伴舞换了一批又一批,但他们,都舞着,绽放自己的美丽。
雨如世界专业的跳伞运动员。等时机已到,便一个接着一个从云层向下方的土地跳去。他们刚一跳下云层,便撑开了无形的降落伞。待到他们安全着陆时,便会在路上用自己的身体接住后来落下的同伴们,嘘长问短,分享自己在空中的奇观。
雨如顶尖画家。他们将自己和其他雨点分成各大派系。有的是抽象油画派,他们将自己调和成浓度很高的颜料,点滴在树叶上,使树叶变得更加翠绿;有的是清新水彩派,利用明快的色调加以晕染,形成草地那若有若无的绿;有的是现代数码派,将走五亮度调暗,再点缀一些绿、白、红;又的是古典水墨派,他们花样最多:浓、重、焦、轻……这些绘画大师在这里绘出了一幅《春雨图》。
渐渐地,雨停了,我从想象中被拉回了现实,幻想中,雨点变得多姿多彩。我离开了窗口,微微一笑。下雨天,真好……
篇4:汤姆叔叔的小屋英文读后感
全文共 3036 字
+ 加入清单Joy depicts the crisis of faith that overes Rabbi Banish of Komarov, who, having buried his four sons and two daughters. Only through the mercy of the God he has denied, manifest in a radiant vision of the dead Rebecca, his beloved youngest daughter, is the rabbi’s belief restored. The sense of wonder and the touch of heavenly joy that linger after the vision dissolves convince Rabbi Banish of the folly of judging God’s actions by human standards. The rabbi has interpreted the apparent tragedy of his children’s premature deaths as evidence of God’s alienation, forgetting that God is by definition inscrutable. That God’s purpose transcends man’s ability to prehend it is made clear to the expiring rabbi when the family dead approach his deathbed with arms outstretched to enfold him among them. For theirs is the kingdom of heaven to which a loving God has called them; and their deaths have evidenced not God’s wrath but his grace.
A version of Rabbi Banish’s deathbed revelation appears to Rabbi Nechemia in Something Is There. At twenty-seven he is already racked by the doubts that torment Rabbi Banish. So shaken is his belief in God that he deserts his rabbinical post in provincial Bechev for the flesh-posts of Warsaw. Although the prostitutes, unclean food, and shady business dealings which he witnesses there hold no attraction for the erstwhile rabbi, they intensify his revulsion from the world created by God and therefore his alienation from God himself. Unlike Rabbi Bainish, whose intimations of immortality and consequent rededication to God precede his radiant deathbed vision, Rabbi Nechemia cannot allay his doubts until the very moment of death, when a light he never knew was there flickered in hid brain.
While his dying words—something is there—resolve his crisis of faith, they e too late to affect the spiritual renewal attained by Rabbi Banish. No explicit promise of immortality, let along of salvation, attends Rabbi Nechemia’s vision. Perhaps grace is accorded Rabbi Banish because his doubt is triggered by devastating personal losses, and withheld from Rabbi Nechemia because his despair is the bitter fruit of idle speculation about the unknown. Whatever the reason, relatively few of Singer’s characters are granted at the moment of death the transcendent vision of unity between man and God that appears to Rabbi Banish in Joy. For the fortunate few, release from time into eternity is affected by a divine visitation which obliterates distinctions between past and present, living and dead.
These kinds of characters are lost in their world because of the seducement of the material world. They doubt their formal faith and gradually give up what they believed. But after they have experienced so much hardship, they realize that they cannot adapt to the life of the outer world so they regress to the former life with formal faith. They realize the importance of God and they begin to think seriously about the relationship between man and God. At last they find their right way of their life.
篇5:父亲节英文日记
全文共 1170 字
+ 加入清单Tomorrow is fathers day, and my fathers busy figure is shaking in front of
my eyes, how can I express my love for my father? Id like to go, oh, yeah, thats
the way to do it.
Fathers day came, and I said to my mother, "mom, today is fathers day. Lets
give dad a surprise." "Mom said," ok." I put it on my mothers ear and whispered,
"we are..."
My mother and I messed up the house, as if we didnt know anything. Dad went
home, looked at his house and asked, "do you know what day it is?" My mother
said, "let me see, is the world anti-drug day?" "No." Dad pointed to the day on
the clock. I cried out, "its our banjis birthday!" Dad listened, as if his heart
were broken.
Baba bowed his head and entered the room. My mother and I broke into the
room and said, "happy fathers day!" Then my father hugged me and mom, and we all
laughed.
This is my happiest day of the year.
明天就是父亲节,爸爸忙碌的身影在我眼前晃来晃去,用什么方法表达对爸爸的爱呢?我想来想去,哦,对了,就用这种方法吧。
父亲节如期而至,我对妈妈说:“妈妈,今天就是父亲节了,我们给爸爸一个惊喜吧。”妈妈说:“好。”我贴在妈妈的耳边,小声地说:“我们就这样……”
我和妈妈把家里弄乱,好像什么都不知道。爸爸回家了,看了看家里,问:“你们知道今天是什么日子吗?”妈妈说:“让我想想,是世界禁毒日吗?”“不是。”爸爸指了指钟表上的日子。我大声说道:“是我们班季彦良的生日!”爸爸听了,好像心都碎了。 爸爸低着头,走进了房间。这时,我和妈妈闯进了房间里,同声说:“父亲节快乐!”这时,爸爸一把抱住了我和妈妈,我们都笑了。
这是我家今年最快乐的一天。
篇6:有关天气的英文谚语
全文共 814 字
+ 加入清单1.for a morning rain leave not your trip.
不要因为早晨下了一场雨就不去旅行。
2.when dew is on the grass,rain will never come to pass.
草上露珠闪,告别下雨天。
3.fish bite best before a rain.
大鱼吃小鱼,天空要下鱼。
4.when ladybugs swarm,expect a day that’s warm.
蚂蚁搬家,天将雨。
5.if bees stay at home,rain will soon come.if they fiy away ,fine will be the day.
蜜蜂迟归,雨来风吹。
6.on cloud nine.
飘飘然如上九重天。
7.Red sky at night,sailor’sdelight.Red sky in the morning,sailor take waring.
早霞不出门,晚霞行千里。
8.Halo around the sun or moon ,rain or snowsoon.
日晕三更雨,月晕午时风。
9.When ladybugs swarm,expect a day that’s warm.
蚂蚁搬家,天将雨。
10.If bees stay at home,rain will soon come.if they fiy away ,fine will be the day.
蜜蜂迟归,雨来风吹。
11.mountains in the morning. fountains in the evening.
早晨天上积雨云, 晚上地下降暴雨。
12.red sky at night, sailor’s delight.red sky in the morning, sailor’s warning.
晚上天色红,水手乐呵呵;早晨天色红,水手急煞煞。
篇7:在写一封信英文
全文共 1348 字
+ 加入清单Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you for a rapid response to our invitation. Enclosed you will find an
outline of events to take place during International Week here at the University
of Montana. I will also list a number of possible speaking engagements so that
you can choose those things in which you are most interested. As far as topics
are concerned, the topics for classroom visits are generally determined by the
professor, but most professors are very flexible. We have approximately
thirty-five faculty members that teach courses in Asian Studies, ranging from
language and culture to history and economics.
Here is a tentative schedule:
Sunday, April 8th
10 am - Cultural Exhibition opens
12 am - International Festival begins with a speech by the university
president and an introduction of visiting dignitaries
1-5 pm - Opportunity to visit festival, interact with student performers,
taste foods
6 pm - Dinner with Director of Mansfield Center Phil West, Ambassador Mark
Johnson, and staff of Mansfield Center
As you can see, there is tremendous interest in China here at the
University of Montana. Please let me know if this outline suits your purpose,
and if not, please dont hesitate to offer any suggestions for changes. We can
arrange as many or as few speaking engagements as you have time for.
Thank you for your attention and enthusiasm.
Yours sincerely,
Lily Ma
篇8:下雨天故事作文300字
全文共 292 字
+ 加入清单只要看见天空乌云密布,就知道即将要下雨了。下雨天,总是让人感觉是悲伤,是上天在哭泣吗? 还是上天给大自然洗礼呢?
我喜欢下雨时,成群结队雨,滴答...滴答...清脆声响,敲打着遮雨棚,好像在开大自然音乐会,只要仔细听,就能听到奇妙声音。
我更爱用力踩家门前积水,会让水花四溅,家人快速走避,顿时,我便会开心哈哈大笑。
我讨厌下雨天,因为体育课只能在室内上课,真是扫兴!道路上十字路口,车辆都会塞成一团,喇叭声此起彼落,十分吵闹,有时倾盆大雨还会造成土石流、道路坍方、农作物受损等严重灾害,大家一定要小心防范。
我好怀念雨过天晴后大自然为天空搭建绚丽彩虹桥,雨先生您是不是该让太阳公公露脸了呢?
篇9:提高竞争力的英文
全文共 1526 字
+ 加入清单It is truth that gender discrimination still exists when female comes to find work, some females never mention her gender on the resume, just to make sure that the employers will give them the chances to get the interview. Females should improve their competiveness, so that they will have more work chances.
事实上,当女性去找工作的时候,性别歧视仍然存在,一些女性从来不在简历上提到自己的性别,仅仅是为了确保雇主能给她们机会面试。女性应该提高她们的竞争力,这样她们就会有的工作机会。
First, the female should show their positive attitudes toward the life and work. Female students should see their advantages clearly before hunting for a job, and highlight it in their resumes. For instance, they might emphasize that they are careful and considerate in work, patient and cooperate with colleagues as well. But the positive toward life and work brings them to a high level, which will impress the employer.
第一,女性应该展示她们乐观的生活和工作态度。女学生应该在找工作前清楚地了解她们的优势,并在简历上面强调。比如,她们可以强调她们在工作上认真和细心,对同事有耐心和乐于合作。但是乐观的生活和工作态度能让她们更上一个台阶,也能给雇主留下深刻的印象。
Second, female students must be confident. Lots of big companies like to hold a group discussion to select people, those who are silent and find it difficult to get involved in the discussion will not be considered. The employers think such people are not confident and won’t do well in the work.
第二,女学生必须自信。很多大型公司喜欢举行小组讨论来选人,那些保持沉默和难以融入讨论的人是不被考虑在内的。雇佣者认为这样的人不自信,无法胜任工作。
It is necessary for women to improve competiveness, if they want to go further than males. The positive attitude and being confident will let female win more chances.
对于女性来讲,提高竞争力是很重要的,如果他们想要比男性走得更远些。乐观的态度和表现自信会让女性赢得的机会。
篇10:有关常识的英文谚语
全文共 761 字
+ 加入清单A good name is sooner lost than won.
美誉难得而易失。
A good name is earlier lost than won.
失去美名易,得到美名难。
A good name is better than riches.
好名誉胜过有财富。
A good medicine tastes bitter.
良药苦口,忠言逆耳。
A good maxim is never out of season.
至理名言不会过时。
A good marksman may miss.
智者千虑,必有一失。
A good horse often needs a good spur.
好马常要好靴刺。
A good horse cannot be of a bad colour.
良马的毛色不会差。
A good heart conquers ill fortune.
善心克厄运。
A good healthy body is worth more a crown in gold.
健康的身体贵於黄金铸成的皇冠。
A good head and an industrious hand are worth gold in any land.
聪明脑袋勤劳手,走遍天下贵如金。
A good friend is my nearest relation.
良友如近亲。
A good fame is better than a good face.
好的名望胜於好的相貌。
A good face is a letter of recommendation.
好的相貌就是一封推荐的介绍信。
A good dog deserves a good bone.
有劳得奖。
A good example is the best sermon.
身教胜似言教。
篇11:有哲理性英文的小故事
全文共 408 字
+ 加入清单Little Robert asked his mother for two cents. "What did you do with the money I gave you yesterday?"
"I gave it to a poor old woman," he answered.
"Youre a good boy," said the mother proudly. "Here are two cents more. But why are you so interested in the old woman?"
"She is the one who sells the candy."
【释义】
好孩子 小罗伯特向妈妈要两分钱。
"昨天给你的钱干什么了?"
"我给了一个可怜的老太婆,"他回答说。 "你真是个好孩子,"妈妈骄傲地说。"再给你两分钱。可你为什么对那位老太太那么感兴趣呢?"
"她是个卖糖果的。"
篇12:圣诞节的一封信英文
全文共 3885 字
+ 加入清单Dear Father Christmas,
So my friend has asked me to write to you... I have to confess its been
hard to know what to say. Mainly because like most adults I feel preposterous
asking anything of you because our time with you is surely done. Now we get our
own presents, control our own fates, take responsibility for our own actions,
and live in the world we have created... so its not for us to turn around and
plead for your help with the environment, the migrant crisis, the NHS,
education, food banks, human rights, fundamentalism and wars. Though God knows
we need all the help we can get with all these man-made problems and more.
And its not that you arent compassionate and full of joy. Youre great.
In spite of you being changed into different colours for corporations and being
bastardised to represent materialism gone mad - despite probably originating in
some season based pagan druid ritual a million thought miles from requests for
spontaneously combusting hoverboards... Kidadults cynically pointing this out
after having their moment of belief in you are wasting everyones precious time.
Because you are not for them. You are for the children. Children who need some
magic in a world where the borders between innocence and responsibility, playful
imagination and cold, adult obstacles are continually shrinking.
This is what Id like to ask you to help with. A little more time for
children to be children. Stretch the moment of magic and playfulness. Distract
them from the realities of a world gone mad so that they can laugh with their
breath rather than sob with their tears. Especially those caring for family
members, or suffering illness, hunger or poverty. Especially those hiding in
buildings as bombs rain down, or being handed shaking with fear or cold into a
boat to escape environmental disaster or war. Please help to light up their
worlds with a moment of joy and hope.
When I think about it youve got it tough this year... And when I really
think about it Im not sure that asking you for a lightsaber and getting one
(not that I ever did by the way) is equatable with controlling the space time
continuum and making the good of childhood last a little longer.
But you do inspire wonder and awe amongst those that write you letters and
go to sleep hoping there might be a new object in their possession come dawn.
You inspire good behaviour and, at least in my memory, some desperate last
minute attempts to redeem bad behaviour so as not to be overlooked. Spare a
thought too for those millions who want to write to you but through illiteracy
cant. Hear their words and help to give them the time and chance to learn how
to read and write so they can better their lives and escape their impoverished
beginnings.
I feel a little sorry for you. And I guess Ive done exactly what I said I
wouldnt... Asked you to help with adult problems and solve some of the greatest
worries we have for our children. I promise to leave some extra port and mince
pies for you!
Lots of love
Benedict
亲爱的圣诞老人:
我的朋友叫我写信给你……我真的不知道该对你说什么。主要因为跟大部分成年人一样,我觉得跟你要东西似乎很荒谬,因为我们和你已经没有交集了。如今我们自己给自己买礼物,掌控自己的命运,为自己的行为负责,并且生活在我们自己创造的世界里……所以我们没有理由找你帮忙解决这些问题,比如环境问题、移民危机、NHS医保系统、教育、食物银行、人权、原教旨主义和战争。尽管上帝知道,我们需要各种援助去解决这些人为的危机和麻烦。
我并不是说你没有同情心或不乐观。你很伟大。尽管你被各种大公司篡改的面貌全非;被妖魔化以代表那疯狂的拜金主义——简直像异教徒的仪式那样,每到这个季节就要用礼物填满欲望,比如那种可能会自燃的悬滑板。那些童心未泯的成年人竟然生气地认为你是在浪费每个人的宝贵时间,却忘了他们自己也曾相信你。因为你不属于成年人,而是属于孩子们的。孩子们需要一些魔力,因为这个世界上,天真与责任、欢乐的想象力与冷漠以及成人障碍之间的界限正在不断的缩小。
这才是我想求你援助的。让孩子们的童年更长久些吧。延长那充满魔力与乐趣的时刻。让孩童们忽略这疯狂又现实的世界,让他们拥有欢笑而非流泪。尤其是那些过早需要承担家庭责任或身患疾病的孩子们,又或者是那些遭受饥饿与贫穷的孩子们。尤其是那些躲在位于枪林弹雨的建筑中、或者是那些怀着恐惧与寒冷不断颤抖、被塞进船里以逃离灾难和战争的孩子们。请你用希望和欢乐照亮他们的世界。
当我想到今年你处境艰难时……当我仔细思考,我不确定这样是否合理:即找你要一把光剑(虽然我并不曾得到过)来控制时空介质,从而使得美好的童年时光再久一点。
但对于那些给你写信、期待着你会在天明前送给他们礼物而入睡的孩子们,你带给他们好奇和敬畏。你激发了善行,至少在我的记忆中,一些孩子在最后一刻试图弥补过错,以避免因此受罚。还希望你体谅一下数百万想跟你写信却不会写字的人。请你倾听他们的声音,给他们时间和机会去学习读书和写字,这样他们就可以过上更好的生活,逃离贫困的处境。
我对你感到一丝歉意。我好像做了我明明说自己不会做的事……我希望你能帮忙解决成年人造成的麻烦,缓解我们对孩子的某些担忧。我保证,我会给你留超多肉馅饼的!!
满满的爱
本尼迪克特
篇13:圣诞礼物英文作文
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+ 加入清单In my impression, I dont seem to have ever received a Christmas gift. But this year I have received several pieces of Christmas gifts, gifts received the moment, indescribably happy!
It happened on Christmas day, I came to the school with the joyful mood, suddenly found his pocket which turned out to have a lot of lessons for Christmas, I sat on the seat quickly put out gifts found above the names of many students, I am excited golden beans are falling out, everyone looked at me and said "Zhao Runze, dont cry. This is a token of our ah! Again, you have to go, we are not allowed to send you ah (in fact, forget to tell you, I actually have to transfer)! We dont have anything to send you. Its Christmas day, and well have to give me a Christmas gift. Haha, dont be sad, our school will always welcome you! " I didnt cry when I heard them.
The second day I was going, and when I went, everyone was sending me off, and some of my good classmates were crying. I dont think Im crying too. They cry and comfort me. I think this is the best Christmas gift!
Now, I am learning in the new school, the new school atmosphere and the new environment. My classmates are treating me very well. I hope to write this composition so that my former classmates can see it. I want to tell them, "I miss you!"
篇14:怎样写出正确的英文好句
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+ 加入清单每年都有很多考生问老师,怎么提高写作?除了阅读,考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子,大家无论学习阅读还是写作,首先要弄清楚一个问题,什么叫做好句子?
好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点,那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。
特点一:整体性
句子的整体性:即能表达单独的、完整的思想。
Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想:1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外,还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。
【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.
特点二:连贯性
句子的连贯性:即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分,没有虚假的平行结构,没有指代不请的代词,没有不清晰的句内关系。
Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的,但是句内关系不清楚,到底谁进入了教室?
【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"
Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.
【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差,可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。
【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.
特点三:准确性
句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的,不必要的词。
Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.
【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌,需要精简。
【提升】He returned in early August.
特点四:重点突出
好的句子应该重点突出,词的选择,词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。
Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
【分析】这个句子比较平淡,可以修改一下动词。
【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"
特点五:语法正确,句式多变
句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句,文章读起来会晦涩难懂,并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之,全篇都是短句,感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。
Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.
【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题,另外还有完整性,准确性问题。
【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.
如果同学们在写句子的时候,注意以上五点,相信大家一定能够写出正确,完整,准确的英文句子。
篇15:英文日记
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+ 加入清单The summer vacation is ing。 I will do my homework first so I am going to do
my homework every morning。 In the afternoon, I will play basketball and table
tennis with my friends。 In the evening I will read English and listen to English
program。 Sometimes I will go and visit my grandparents and help them do some
housework。 I am going to take a piano class。 My parents and I will go to Hainan
for about a week。 I believe I will have a busy and interesting summer
vacation。
篇16:描写冬天英文作文
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+ 加入清单The winter snow, you see, the garden tree branches hung a silver necklace, grass stems on a sparkling pearl. In the field, the wheat has been covered with a thick layer of cotton padded jacket. (-)
A naughty child in the snow in the snowman, snowball fights, throwing snowballs.
Ah! Its the snow that makes the winter wind white.
篇17:下雨天,真好
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+ 加入清单吃完早餐,我轻手轻脚地来到奶奶的床前,想问候生病的奶奶。
“是政远吗?”一丝柔弱而亲切的声音飘进我的耳朵。
“是我!”
“今天下雨,要多穿点衣服!”“别忘了带牛奶!”“你安心上学去吧,不用担心奶奶!”我还没有张口,奶奶就连珠炮似的把关爱和嘱咐送过来,我只有不停地“嗯!嗯!嗯!”
“停电了,政远!”,妈妈着急地喊起来:“妈妈要赶去上班,今天只能你自己上学了!”
真是“屋漏偏遇连阴雨”,平时都是奶奶安排我的早餐,帮我穿戴整齐,妈妈用电动车先送我上学,再去上班。今天,奶奶的高血压犯了,早餐本来就比较匆忙,又遇上意外停电,电动车没有电梯不能下楼,只能自己步行。时间这么紧,还要冒雨赶到学校,倒霉透了。
妈妈已经急急忙忙地赶去上班了,一连串的问题突然摆在我的面前,我顿时手忙脚乱起来,随手抓起一双皮鞋套在脚上,背上书包,撑起雨伞,就往学校奔。
绵绵不断的春雨,在空中划出一道道平行线,在地面筑起一个个小水洼、一条条小溪流;浓雾裹着寒意,耀武扬威地笼罩着房屋、车辆和行人,一片冷飕飕的世界。唉!今年武汉的冬天赶也赶不走,3月都过了,还春寒料峭,寒气逼人。
为了不迟到,我深一脚浅一脚地向学校疾奔。忽然,脚底有冰凉的感觉,可能是水浸进了鞋子里,我瞟了一下脚底,原来穿上了一双漏底鞋,奶奶曾经特别嘱咐过,下雨天不要穿它,可是,它偏偏就在下雨的时候正儿八经地套在脚上。
到了学校,发现水已经把脚下的袜子都浸湿了,刺骨的寒气往上直涌,我情不自禁地打了一个寒战。没办法,只好自认倒霉了。
上完第一节课,有同学喊我:“朱政远,你奶奶来啦!”我诧异地看见奶奶步履蹒跚地向我走来,银灰色的头发挂满水珠,红扑扑的脸上堆满慈祥的笑容。我看到奶奶,看到她脸上笑容,一股暖意油然生起;看到她满面红光,知道那是既赶路又爬楼梯,血压升高的反应,连忙担心地迎了上去。
奶奶说:“我不放心,怕你穿错了鞋,起来一看,果然错了。这么冷的天,脚泡在水里,会生病的。”她让我坐在椅子上,帮我换上了干净的鞋袜,一股暖流从脚底往上窜,顿时暖遍了全身,同学们羡慕地聚在我们周围,分享着我的温暖和甜蜜。
要上课了,奶奶又嘱咐了几句,就转身离开。
我望着奶奶颤巍巍的背影,望着银灰头发上闪闪发亮的水珠,我的双眼湿润了、模糊了。
雨啊,停一下吧,让奶奶平安回家!
篇18:初中英文
全文共 791 字
+ 加入清单It is indeed difficult to live without a mobile phone as it helps us in day
to day activities. I cannot live without a mobile phone. Todays generation uses
mobile phones for chatting, surfing and playing games. They dont use the mobile
phone for the real purpose. I admit that living wothout a mobile phone is
extremely difficult but I can live without addicting apps like Facebook, Twitter
etc. The iPhone is a gadget that is encouraging to use social apps and addicting
games. These gadgets though facilitate our work but are making us their slaves.
For example, if a persons iPhone is not working properly, he will be filled
with anger. As new technology is creating new gadgets, so are people raising new
demands. They also hamper academics. Buy a mobile phone but use it for something
productive.
篇19:有关公园英文
全文共 527 字
+ 加入清单Last weekend i went to the park with my friends.We went there by bus on saturday ,The weather was sunny ,When we arrived there,we saw many kinds of flowers ,they are so beautiful,There were many people ,some kids played football,some girls flyed the kites,and some old people played chess,we sang and danced there,In the afternoon we played some games ,when we got home we felt tired ,but happy.
上周末我和我的朋友去公园。我们在星期六乘坐巴士去那里,天气晴朗,我们到那里时,我们看到了各种各样的花,它们是如此的美丽,有许多人,一些孩子在踢足球,一些女孩飞的风筝,和一些老年人下棋,我们唱歌跳舞,在下午,我们玩了一些游戏,当我们回到家时,我们感到很累,但很高兴。
篇20:下雨天作文
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+ 加入清单一早就闷闷的,外面的天象人的心情一样阴霾。心好象掉到了胃里面和着胃酸,抽搐着,不再分泌快乐的因子。我坐在电脑边听着音乐心也难以平静。抱着膝盖坐在椅子上翻着书,听着一直喜欢的蓝调也不觉得舒服。
天渐渐暗了下来,空气沉沉的,屋子好像一下子变小了许多。一切的色彩斑斓都消失了。风铃轻轻的响了,下雨了。我抬头看看窗外,暗灰的色泽,把世界笼罩得幽冥昏黯。我来到窗边看着倾盆的大雨,路边的大树被雨水打击的垂下了头。一颗颗雨水撞击着树叶,地面,碎了,碎成了一潭水,再也聚集不起来了。看着纷飞的雨景,仍能闻到灰尘的味道。万物都静静的享受着雨的滋润,静静的听着窗外的雨声,让久违的心情得以沉淀……
外面的雨点滴落在我的脸上,顺着脸慢慢的滑下,真凉!越来越多的雨水飞了进来,仍然不想离开。看着路上行人艰难的走着,想起小时候一下雨就偷偷跑出去,在雨中笑着,踏着雨水开心的走着,直被外婆发现。我喜欢躺在外婆的床上看着雨水落在透明的琉璃瓦上,听着雨水敲打在瓦片的声音,看它们落在假山上敲打着我不知名的小草。喜欢看每一滴水的精灵打落在青石路面上用最后的美丽,微笑着逝去,用它短暂的一生洗去地面的尘埃……我喜欢雨后的世界,看什么都那么干净美丽!空气那么清新!一直以来我以为自己是个喜欢下雨过程的人,可明明我最在意的还是结果,喜欢下雨,有一部分也是喜欢结果。空气很新鲜,城市很干净,这就是结果。过程的美景在眼里,我留恋,却留不入心里……人在慢慢成长才知道原来曾经的自己是那么的幼稚。在人一生中每个人都必须学会与遗憾和不完美共存,必须去接受所有的不如意。对于那些喜欢和不喜欢我的人我的心中充满了感激,因为是他们让我成长让我明白什么才是真正的人生。而这种成长的滋味不是片面的能用酸甜苦辣就可以形容的,它太深刻时刻提醒我向着更为贴近现实生活的方向前进。
每个人都有无数的梦想。可这些梦想就像雨点,掉落下来撞击到地面,碎了,碎成了一滩滩的水。碎的不留痕迹,碎的干净利落。