小升初英语作文【汇编20篇】

Japan was fun. It was very cool and windy. We flew kites in the park. I bought a watch there. I wanted to buy more, but I didnt have money. the gardens there were beautiful. I liked them the best. the department stores were too big. I couldnt find Mom. the food was delicious. We ate a lot of fish, and I also liked the vegetables and cake there. I hope I can go to Japan one more time.

Summertime is the best time of the year. There is no school for months and I get to do what I want. With no tests and no homework, Im as free as a bird.

夏季是一年中最好的时光。(几个)月不用去学校并且我可以做自己想做的事。没有考试、没有作业，我自由地像只小鸟。

I do many things during the summer vacation. I relax by reading books and watching TV. I also hang out with my friends or travel with my family. However, I dont only play in summer. I take advantage of the free time to learn more. For example, last summer I learned to swim. This summer I might study computers or English. Summer vacation flies by fast, so its important to do as much as you can.

暑假期间，我可以做很多事。我通过阅读与看电视放松自己。我也常常与朋友一起打发时间或者与家人一起去旅游。可是，暑假期间，我并不只是游玩。我充分利用闲暇时间去学习更多的(知识)。举例来说，去年暑假，我就学习游泳。这个暑假，我可能会学习计算机或英语(知识)。暑期过得很快，所以，对于你而言，应该尽可能做更多的事。

This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me.

My grandmother has short white hair. She looks very nice. My father has short black hair and small eyes. He looks very fat, so I often call him “fat man”。 He works at a factory. My mother works at a L.D.T. My mother has long black hair. She likes sports and traveling, so I often go on sports with my mother. On holidays my family often go to travel. I study at Guiyuan Primary School. We are very happy.

感恩父母，总以为是一个简单的事，但做起来只有一个字，难。但是，我们得对父母只有两个字，感恩。

Thanksgiving parents, always thought it was a simple thing, but it is only one word, difficult. However, we have only two words to parents, thanksgiving.

如果我们非要父母的东西，父母往往会把东西给我们，难道这温暖你感觉不到吗?我们遇到困难，还不是父母帮我们解决?

If we want to parents, parents tend to give us something, is it you feel warm? We met with difficulties, not the parents to help us solve?

我们总是说长大后报答父母，父母等这一天可是等得太久太久了，我们应该要从小事做起，做每一个细节都让父母感动，长大后，父母等这一天也是开心的，感动的。

We always say that grow up to repay their parents, parents of the day but waited too long for too long, we should start from the little things, do every detail to let parents moved, after growing up, parents of this day is happy, moved.

我们应该报答父母，如果父母打你也是因为你调皮，很多父母都抱有望子成龙，望女成凤的期望，长大后，别辜负了父母对你的期望。

We should repay my parents, if parents beat you is because you are naughty, many parents have children, look into the Phoenix womens expectations, after growing up, dont failed to live up to what your parents expect of you.

端午节到了，我也学会了包粽子，你会包粽子吗?不会就请跟我学吧!

The Dragon Boat Festival, I also learned dumplings dumplings, will you? Dont follow me!

我们一家三口到了奶奶家，奶奶、妈妈和我包粽子，奶奶已经把糯米泡好了，奶奶说要多泡一段时间，粘性才大。你想吃什么馅的?比如：豆沙、蜜枣、小枣等。我喜欢吃蜜枣馅的，奶奶把芦苇叶弄平，再把糯米、蜜枣放到芦苇叶上，把它们包在一起，然后用线绑起来。奶奶动作非常快，因为奶奶以前包过粽子，所以她很熟练的包完了一个粽子。可是糯米可不听我的话了，它总是从芦苇叶的缝儿钻出来，我费了九牛二虎之力才包完了一个粽子，但粽子的形状不像奶奶包的那么好看。奶奶鼓励我说：“不错了!”我又有了些信心，接着，奶奶又教我包了第二个、第三个粽子，比第一个包的好了许多。

We are a family of three to the grandmother, grandmother, mother and I package dumplings, grandma is glutinous rice cooked, grandma said to soak for a period of time, viscosity high. What do you want to eat stuffing? For example, bean paste, jujube, jujube and so on. I like to eat jujube paste, her grandmother to reed Ye Nongping, put the glutinous rice, jujube in reed leaves and wrap them together, and then tied up with wire. She moves very fast, because grandma used to package dumplings, so she is very skilled finished a zongzi. But the rice can not listen to my words, it is always from reed leaves seam drill out, I spent nine great lengths to finished a rice dumplings, but the dumplings package shape like Grandma so good-looking. Grandma said: "good!" I have some confidence, then, my grandmother taught me to pack second, third than the first packet dumplings, a lot of good.

奶奶点火煮粽子，过了一会儿，我就闻到了粽子的香味。我想：再过一会儿，我就能吃到自己做的粽子了!我坐在旁边等着粽子出锅。

Grandma ignition boiled dumplings, after a while, I smell the fragrance of zongzi. I think: after a while, I can eat to make their own dumplings! I sat next to the waiting dumplings pan.

“吃粽子喽!”我带着欢乐的喜悦，来到餐桌旁，“啊!”粽子的香味让我陶醉了，我包开了一个粽子，咬了一口，又香又甜，我们一家人品尝着美味的粽子。

Eat rice dumplings "myself!" I with joy joy, came to the table, "ah!" Dumplings fragrance makes me intoxicated, I opened a rice dumplings, bite, sweet, we are one family to taste the delicious dumplings.

我就这样过了一个快乐的端午节!

So I had a happy Dragon Boat Festival!

爸爸常说多阅读，会有好多好处的，就连老师也说阅读好处多多，也就是所谓的开卷有益吧。可是我却不知道阅读究竟有什么好的，在生活中到底有什么作用。

My father often said to read more, there will be a lot of benefits, but also the teacher say that reading benefits, the so-called reading enriches the mind. But I do not know what a good read, what role in life.

可是不久就改变了我的看法。

But soon I changed my mind.

有一次学校组织课外知识竞赛。有一道题是这样的：树袋熊为什么浑身是香的?三个选择：A与生俱来的，B生活在清香中，C它吃了一种香的树叶，时间长了就香了。这道题我在哪见过，哦，想起来了，就是前天阅读的一篇科学论文。里面提到的，说是树袋熊爱吃桉树叶，这种树叶里有一种成分，吃多了时间长了就香了。我选了C。过了几天，试卷发下了一看，果然是C。还有好多题，我都见过，才把它们做对的。

Once the school organized extracurricular knowledge contest. One question is this: why all the koala is sweet? The three option: A innate, B live on the fragrance, C it ate a fragrant leaves, a long time is fragrant. The question is where do I know, oh, come to think of it, is the day before yesterday read a scientific paper. Mentioned inside, said to be the koalas eat eucalyptus leaves, there is a component of the leaves, eat much long time is fragrant. I choose C. After a few days, the papers find a look, really is C. There are a lot of questions, I have seen, just put them to do.

还有一次，上作文课。老师要我们写关于劝学的文章。我就引用了一些名言、古诗。好多人都没有想到，可是我想到了。作文点评时，老师把这篇文章读给大家听，让大家学习，还表扬我爱读书呢。这些都是我平时多阅读多积累的效果。

Another time, the composition class. The teacher asked us to write a story about encourage learning. I quoted some words, poetry. Many people dont think of it, I think. Writing reviews, the teacher read the article to listen to everybody, let everybody to learn, I also praised the love of reading. These are my usual to read more than the effect of the accumulation of.

我终于明白了，阅读能让我们多补充课外知识，写出好的文章。当然最重要的是阅读让生活变得更精彩。所以说阅读好处多多。

I finally understand that reading can let us add more extracurricular knowledge, to write a good article. Of course, the most important is to read make life more exciting. Read so many benefits.

导语：英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。下面是小编收集的小升初英语作文写作技巧，欢迎大家阅读!

英语写作是一种创作性的学习过程。启动知识信息储存，构思立意，谋篇布局，遣词造句，对语言表达的正确性和准确性、思维的逻辑性和文章的条理性都比口语要求更高。通常英语写作有以下几个特点：紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求;以有指导的写作为主(guidedwriting)，便于考生在短时间内构思成文;突出试题的交际性，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力;增强试题的实用性，所选话题贴近学生学习生活，为学生所熟悉;看图作文主要考查考生运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。

英语写作注意两点

一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：

1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，全面了解写作要求。

2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。

二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。

从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常体会和领悟作者传递信息和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。

最后一个月如何训练英语写作

1.重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一。

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用(ontheotherhand，however，furthermore)、作者的表达方式(词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用)、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

2.在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练。

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

英文写作“四步走”

由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：

1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。

3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

4)写完后一定要再细看一遍。

主要体裁作文写作技巧

(一)写提示议论文应考虑的几点：

1.文章开头，能依据提示确立主题句(topic)阐明观点或看法。

2.会使用连接词分层次说明理由、缘由(supportingsentences)。

3.归纳总结，首尾呼应。

(二)看图作文应考虑的几点：

1.看懂图片，把图片展示的人物、地点、时间、事件等有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。

2.确定短文须用的时态和该用的人称。

3.确定体裁(说明文还是记叙文)，接着用简洁的语句描述图片或图表大意。

4.根据图片或图表大意议论。

一：用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis， she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light， turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

二：删除诸如"who is"或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

句：The novel， which is written in three parts， told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. 写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

My teacher - tan teacher. The stone set in a pair of handsome eyebrows, a pair of big eyes, a head of black hair, in the sunshine is so beautiful and so kind.

It is often said that we are the flowers of the motherland, the teacher is hard gardener, if it were not for the gardener cultivating, which we have these flowers blooming moment?

Tan teacher for our preview will learn knowledge, not every day is a day and night corrects students papers, there is no time to rest.

I love cry, every time I cry, tan teachers would comfort me: "dont cry, was originally a beautiful little girl, a cry is not good-looking." Tan at the same time, the teacher will be meaningful to speak the truth of life (I think) it to me: "man is iron, the meal is steel, every time you cry once, before the meal is free. Children, you have to understand that the way of life is not plain sailing, maybe you are a little difficulties to cry? No, crying is not solve the problem, so youre not about you, he still had his, how can again?"

Tan those simple language teacher always deeply imprinted in my mind, make me unforgettable.

我的老师——谭老师。一对清秀的眉毛，一双宝石般的大眼睛，一头乌黑的长发，在阳光下显得是那么的美丽，那么的和蔼可亲。

人们常说，我们是祖国的花朵，老师是辛勤的园丁，如果没有这些园丁的精心培养，哪有我们这些花朵绽放的时刻呢?

谭老师每天不是给我们预习将要学习的知识，就是日夜不停地批改作业，根本没有休息的时间。

我很爱哭，每次一哭，谭老师就会安慰我道：”别哭了，原本一个漂漂亮亮的小姑娘，一哭就不好看了。”同时，谭老师还会意味深长地讲一些人生的道理(我觉得的)给我听：“人是铁，饭是钢，你每哭一次，之前的饭就等于白吃了。孩子，你得明白这人生的道路并不是一帆风顺，难道说你遇到一点儿困难就哭吗?不，哭是解决不了问题的，你还不是照样过你的，他照样过他的，又能怎样呢?“

谭老师那些淳朴的语言总是深深地印在我的脑海里，使我终生难忘。

My familys house rules story has two principles: one, to be good; Two, on this basis, and strive to do a useful person.

Discipline is not just daughter, more of a tube we adults. From our daughter was born to now, nearly 9 years down, looking back, whatever our parents do good house rules, often daughter also did well; We parents lead the violation, or good house rules, often are punished.

In my home, before the rice then empress to wash hands, wash a face to brush your teeth before going to bed, basic implementation in place; The house rules related to the learning and effective implementation. I basic dont watch TV at ordinary times, do not play games, when they have free reading, try to go out to do outdoor sports, every week the husband read books at home too much at ordinary times, daughter, also frequently twice, read the phrases dictionary and math also enjoy it. Sometimes with a husband see reflection after several times, but there are some rules in our house, do not too ideal, such as "to bring things back where you", "their dirty things packed immediately", "no temper tantrum" and so on, to think of it, because our parents cant set a good example. So, her daughter set rules and implementation rules, also is our parents self-reflection, good chance to start.

Lead by example. Personally, I think in Chinese family education is to teach children more people skills, and school teach more knowledge of child education.

我家的家规故事有两个原则：一，先做个好人;二，在此基础上，再努力做个有用的人。

家规并不只管女儿，更是管我们大人的。从女儿出生到现在，快9年下来，回头一看，凡是我们父母做得好的家规，往往女儿也表现不错;我们父母带头违反、或者言不由衷的家规，常常都是空文。

在我家，饭前便后要洗手、睡前要刷牙洗脸，基本执行到位;与学习有关的家规也有效落实了。我平时基本不看电视、不玩游戏、有空就看书，尽量每周出去做户外运动，老公平时也在家看书多，女儿耳濡目染，也常常手不释卷，读成语词典和做数学题也乐在其中。有时还拿着老公看的三国志看上几遍，可是，我们家还有一些家规，做得不太理想，比如“哪里拿来的东西放回哪里去”、“自己弄脏的东西马上收拾好”、“不能乱发脾气”之类，细想起来，都是因为我们父母不能以身作则。所以，给女儿制定家规、执行家规，也是我们父母的自我反省、重新出发的好机会。

以身作则。我个人以为在中国家庭教育更多则教孩子为人处事的道理，而学校教的更多的是孩子知识方面的教育了。

每个人都拥有自己的房间，下面是语文迷为大家整理的写My bedroom的英语作文范文，欢迎阅读。

My bedroom英语作文一：

My bedroom is not big but it is bright. Because everyday the sunshine will come in. my bedroom is very simple. There just is a bed, a desk and a wardrobe. But I never feel my bedroom is empty, because it is the place belongs to myself and full of my passion. When I feel happy, I can laugh in my bedroom. When I am sad, I can cry in it. I know that no one will bother me, as it is my private place. And every morning the sunshine comes in, I feel warm in my heart just seems that I see my promising future. I like my bedroom.

我的卧室不大但是很明亮。因为每天的阳光会照射进来。我的卧室很简单。这只有一张床，一张桌子和一个衣柜。但我从不觉得我的卧室是空的，因为它是属于我自己的地方，充满了我的喜怒哀乐。当我感到高兴，我可以在我的卧室大笑。当我感到伤心时，我可以在我的卧室里面哭。我知道没有人会来打扰我，因为这是我的私人地带。每天清晨的阳光照射进来时，我感到我的心都暖起来了，就像看到了我充满了希望的未来。我喜欢我的卧室。

My bedroom英语作文二：

I have a bedroom .It is not big, but it is nice .There is a bed in my bedroom. A yellow toy dog is on the bed .Every night I sleep with it . Next to the bed, there is a desk. There is a bear lamp on the desk .I like the bear lamp because it’s cute. I like to do homework under the lamp every evening. I have a new computer in my bedroom .It is my best friend . Because I study with it, and play games with it . There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall.

I like my bedroom. Do you like it?

My bedroom英语作文三：

I have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chair. I also have a big and tall closet because I have many books. There is a big desk next to the window. I always do my homework at the desk. There is a family photo on the wall. I like my bedroom.

我有一个虽小但是漂亮的卧室。有一张漂亮的床和两把小椅子。我也有一个又大又高的柜子，因为我有许多书。有一张大桌长在窗户的旁边。我总是做我的家庭作业在桌子上。有一张全家福在墙上。我喜欢我的卧室。

My hometown is located in western hubei province, is a good place for beautiful scenery. Today Ill give you introduce the scenic spots in my hometown.

First of all I want to introduce is "shennong xi". It is a beautiful river, the river clear, on both sides of the picturesque, like a beautiful little girl between the mountains.

My hometown has a mysterious "passive hole". It is located in the mountains between, very long and narrow hole, the hole of the water is warm in winter and cool in summer, strange stalactites cave there are a lot of image, and bats, for passive hole was always full of suspense adds a layer of mysterious color.

Finally, I give you introduce "autumn pavilion". The connections that it is very big, because KouZhun young was once 3 years in our badong county magistrate, KouZhun county government is located in the autumn wind pavilion. The autumn wind pavilion modelling beautiful generous, majestic, when people see it will think of great feats of KouZhun was set in padang.

Friends! Our hometown is beautiful? You are welcome to our home a guest!

我的家乡位于湖北省西部，是一个风景秀丽的好地方。今天我就给大家介绍一下我家乡的风景名胜。

首先我要介绍的是“神农溪”。它是一条美丽的河流，河水清澈，两岸风景如画，犹如一个美丽的少女生在大山之间。

我的家乡还有神秘的“无源洞”。它位于大山之间，洞非常狭长，洞里的水冬暖夏凉，洞中有很多形象怪异石钟乳，还有蝙蝠，给本来就充满悬念的无源洞添上一层神秘的色彩。

最后我给大家介绍一下“秋风亭”。它的来头就很大了，因为寇准年轻的时候曾经在我们巴东县当过3年的县令，寇准的县衙就设在了秋风亭。秋风亭造型美观大方，气势磅礴，每当人们看到它就会想起寇准当年在巴东立下的丰功伟绩。

朋友们!我们家乡是不是很美?欢迎大家来我们家乡做客!

You have been to my home? Know my house? Want to know, that is just come with me.

My home located in a building in five mountains park to suck avenue, fifth floor, is about more than 140 square, 3 rooms 2 hall two toilet, a kitchen. Big enough. However, a few people live there, much a few minutes cold and cheerless.

My family like an army, mother is commander, father is an officer, my sister and I are poor batman, allow to dominate. At ordinary times, all is mother command to dad, dad shouted push my sister and I go to do all kinds of things. Although very reluctant, but under the situation of "persevering", we can only work hard. Sometimes, my sister and I are have a good time, father was to do a "heavy work", is "the last straw, no longer endure", we began a "peasant uprising". Dont down a few times, is dad that hard long rod laid the table. Sometimes, my sister and I are "good scar forget pain", again "more", win the brief. Do not believe, you see, we the accidental cocky manner, enough to keep the stranger. We had a few days later also comfortable day emperor, morale, momentum slowly fade, rebel forces also gradually weaken, down a peg or two was dad three times five divided by two, cut down. Alas, when batman this days.

See yet? This is my family. What do you think? In a word, I feel not good, not good.

你们到过我家吗?知道我家怎么样呢?想要知道，那就快跟我来吧。

我家位于黔北大道五峰公园的一幢楼里，第五层，面积大约是140多个平方，三室二厅二厕一厨。够大的吧。不过，人一少，住在那儿，倒多了几分冷清。

我的家庭好似一个部队，妈妈是司令，爸爸是军官，我和妹妹却是可怜的小兵，任人支配。平时，都是妈妈传令给爸爸，爸爸就吆喝着催我和妹妹去做各种各样的事。虽然很不情愿，但在“敌强我弱”的形势下，我俩也只能任劳任怨了。有时候，我和妹妹正玩得高兴，又被爸爸叫去做“重活”，实在是“忍无可忍，无需再忍”，我俩开始了“农民大起义”。可没威风几下，就被爸爸那硬邦邦的长棍子打下了台。有的时候，我和妹妹是“好了伤疤忘了痛”，又开始了“大反扑”，赢得了短暂的胜利。不信，你瞧，我俩那偶然的趾高气扬的神态，足以将陌生人拒之千里。我俩居然还过了几天舒服的皇帝日子，斗志、气势也渐渐消退，反抗的力量也渐渐削弱，威风被爸爸三下五除二，灭下去了。唉，这当小兵的日子真可悲啊。

看到没?这就是我的家庭。你觉得如何?总之，我觉得不怎么样，不怎么好。

A recent period, I heard the word "low-carbon life". By reading a book, is a kind of low consumption, low carbon life low energy, low costs, thereby reducing carbon dioxide emissions way of life. In the process of access to information, I know the baoding is the pilot city of small and medium-sized cities in China, as a primary school student, what can I do for low carbon life?

Before, I will turn the water every day, wash, wash a face USES 10 tons every month, now, the teacher told us to prepare two pails, used to store waste water. Waste water can be used to flush the toilet, mopping, watering the flowers. Also want to save electricity, after watching the computer or TV, to turn off the little red light on the outlet, in order to save power, as far as possible when the holiday homework during the day and night to turn off the lights for one hour early, use that one hour of time to go for a walk with my family. Both the power saving, and have played an important role in reducing weight, also enhance the feelings, is fully staffed! To use less disposable items (chopsticks, lunch boxes, etc.) to use less plastic bags, use environmental protection bags. Best travel on foot, private cars less, do less, do more buses. Thus do the "low consumption, low energy, low cost".

Low carbon life, everybody is responsible for, let me first, protect the environment.

最近一个时期，我听到了“低碳生活”一词。通过看书了解，低碳生活是一种低消耗，低能量，低开支，从而减少二氧化碳的排放的生活方式。在查阅资料的过程中，我知道了保定是全国中小城市的试点城市，作为一名小学生，我能为低碳生活做点什么呢?

以前，我就每天把水拧到最大，洗手、洗脸每月都要耗水十几吨，现在，老师告诉我们要准备两个水桶，用来储存废水。废水可以用来冲厕所，拖地、浇花。用电也要节约，看完电脑或电视后，要把插座上的小红灯关掉，以便节约电源，尽量放假时白天写作业，晚上早关灯一小时，用那一小时的时间和家人散步。既节约了电源，又起到了减肥的作用，还增进了感情，真是一举多得呀!少用一次性物品(筷子、饭盒等)少用塑料袋，多用环保袋。出行最好步行，少开私家车，少做出租，多做公交车。这样就做到了“低消耗、低能量、低开支”的作用。

低碳生活，人人有责，让我先行，保护环境。

Hello!My name is ZhouXichuan.I’m ten.i study in RongTai primary school.I’m in class One,Grade Five.Welcome to our classroom.This is my classroom.There is a big sign on the door,It says:Welcome to our classroom!There are forty-six desks and chairs in my classroom.This is my desk.My name is on it.This is my teacher’s desk.There are many interesting things.There is a fish bowl on the cabinet.His name is Goldy.Her name is Swimmy.There is a big blackboard on the front wall.My teacher writes our homework on it.There is a round clock near the door.It tells us what time it is.There are our pictures on the side wall.This is my picture.This is Lily’s.There is a reading couch in the corner.This is my favourite place,what is your favoueite palce?

Hello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.

你好，每个人!我的名字是兴小青。你可以叫我樱桃。

I’m in Class 0506. Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.

我在0506班。李楠是我最好的朋友。她十三岁了。她的生日是在十月第三和她出世在深圳。她与她的家人住在海门。她身高1.60米。她有乌黑的头发，戴眼镜。她很可爱，漂亮。

She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.

她喜欢吃饺子，巧克力，花生和蔬菜。她不喜欢猪肉，糖果和绿茶。

She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.

她喜欢听音乐。她有很多CD。她喜欢阅读和写作。她是数学俱乐部的最新成员。她有很多爱好，比如跳舞，跑步和玩电脑游戏。她最喜欢的爱好是画画，因为她喜欢各种不同的颜色。这是有趣的看图片当她完成他们。端午节是她最喜欢的一天。她长大后想成为一名医生。

We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.

我们总是玩的很高兴。我们在午餐时间坐在树下有一个很好的聊天。有时，我们从零食店买零食。上星期日，我们通常去书店。我们经常在一起学习。

My best friend is really great!

我最好的朋友真的很棒!

记叙文是记人叙事的文章，它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

When I read a grade a class, I was having fun with students, suddenly saw sitting on the seat Zhang Yuezheng absorbed in reading a book. Im surprised, ran to ask her: "Zhang Yue, why we are all in play, youre reading a book?" Zhang Yue no reply.

The second class, I once again see Zhang Yue sitting quietly reading position. I ran to repeat a sizable once had said, and this time Zhang Yue finally spoke, she said: "because reading can let us learn a lot of extra-curricular knowledge, can make our mind to move up, turn up." Zhang Yue words, I also think reading is a very good thing, since then I became like Zhang Yue love reading. In second grade, I and Zhang Yue were named as the "king" reading by the teacher!

Because Zhang Yue, I had the very big change, I now is becoming more and more love reading, book knowledge let me open horizon, enrich my mind, every day I swim in the ocean of knowledge. I must get to read this good habit to stick to it!

在我读一年级的一次下课的时候，我正在和同学们玩得开心，突然看见张越正坐在位子上专心致志地看书。我很奇怪，跑上前去问她：“张越，为什么我们都在玩，你却在看书呢?”张越没有吭声。

第二次下课时，我又一次看到张越一个人坐在位置上安安静静地看书。我跑上前去，重复了一次第一次说过的话，这一次张越终于开口说话了，她说：“因为看书可以让我们学到很多课外知识，可以让我们的脑子动起来、转起来啊。”听了张越的话，我也觉得看书是一件非常好的事情了，从那时起我就变得和张越一样爱看书了。二年级的时候，我和张越都被老师评为了“读书大王”了呢!

因为张越，我有了很大的改变，我现在变得越来越爱看书了，书本上的知识让我开阔了眼界，充实了我的大脑，我每天在知识的海洋中遨游。我一定要把读书这个好习惯坚持下去!

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.

1. 内容切题

内容切题是命题作文的基本要求，考生可从以下几个方面入手：

第一要认真审题。根据题目类别，弄清文体的要求，并判明文章的种类(议论文、说明文、记叙文)，同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想，若题目已经提供了提纲，还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后，切勿惟恐时间不够，提笔就写。一旦跑题，发现了再改就来不及了，常言道：“磨刀不误砍柴工”。

第二要注意设计安排段落。根据文章的中心思想，确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文，一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑，首先是某观点的合理成分或某物的长处，然后是该观点的不合理成分或该物的短处，最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目提供了提纲，只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。

第三要避免将记忆里较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地搬进作文，使作文结构松散，意思不明确，甚至会偏离主题。

2. 表达清楚，文字连贯

文章要做到表达清楚，文字连贯，文章各段落就必须根据提纲所确立的不同主题来展开，而且各段落的主题句要将段落的各个部分凝聚在一起，流利地表达段落大意，使段落中各部分以及段落之间的联系一目了然。

3. 句式有变化

有些考生对写作没信心，不敢大胆地使用所掌握的语言基础知识，包括英语句法知识，结果整篇文章都是以主、谓、宾句式为主的简单句子，文章显得刻板无生气。实际上，

I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year. I liked green plants, clear rivers lovely amimals there.I breathed the fresh air on the mountain sometimes I went swimming in the river. I kept a diary every day.

I liked not the scene of the countryside, 8ttt8.comalso the people there. I helped them to do farm work. I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons. The children were interested in English. They were good at reading writing, 8ttt8.comdid not do well in listening speaking. I helped them improve their listening speaking. Their parents thought highly of me. I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside.