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父亲节的英语日记

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My dear father,Today is Father Day,I want to say to you:"I love you !"Because you gave me life and love me.You have to in order to our home to work hard every day.I also want to say to you:"Im sorry!"because I often make you feel angry.I know I shouldnt do it.I promise I wont in the future.Do you remember you teach me play basketball?I want to play basketball with you.Who is winner?I think you can and I compare.Finally,I hope you have a happy Father Day.I love you forever.

我亲爱的爸爸,今天是父亲节,我想对你说:“我爱你!”因为你给了我生命和爱我。你要为了我们的家努力工作每一天。我也要对你说:“对不起!”因为我经常让你生气。我知道我不应该这样做。我保证不会在未来。你还记得你教我打篮球吗?我想和你一起打篮球。谁是赢家?我想你可以和我相比的。最后,我希望你有个快乐的父亲节。我永远爱你。

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篇1:在父亲节的英语作文

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dear dad,

today i was at the shopping mall and i spent a lot of time reading the father’s day cards. they all had a special message that in some way or another reflected how i feel about you. yet as i selected and read, and selected and read again, it occurred to me that not a single card said what i really want to say to you.

you’ll soon be 84 years old, dad, and you and i will have had 55 father’s days together. i haven’t always been with you on father’s day nor have i been with you for all of your birthdays. it wasn’t because i didn’t want to be with you. i’ve always been with you in my heart but sometimes life gets in the way.

you know, dad, there was a time when we were not only separated by the generation gap but completely polarized by it. you stood on one side of the great divide and i on the other, father and daughter split apart by age and experience, opinions, hairstyles, cosmetics, clothing, curfews, music, and boys.

the father-daughter duel of ’54 shifted into high gear when you taught me to drive the old dodge and i decided i would drive the ‘54 chevy whether you liked it or not. the police officer who escorted me home after you reported the chevy stolen late one evening was too young to understand father-daughter politics and too old to have much tolerance for a snotty 16 year old. you were so decent about it, dad, and i think that was probably what made it the worst night of my life.

our relationship improved immensely when i married a man you liked, and things really turned around when we begin making babies right and left. we didn’t have a television set, you know, and we had to entertain ourselves somehow. i didn’t know what to expect of you and mom as grandparents but i didn’t have to wait long to find out. those babies adored you then just as they adore you now. when i see you with all your grandchildren, i know you’ve given them the finest gift a grandparent can give. you’ve given them yourself.

somewhere along the line, the generation gap evaporated. age separates us now and little else. we agree on most everything, perhaps because we’ve learned there isn’t much worth disagreeing about. however, i would like to mention that fly fishing isn’t all you’ve cracked it up to be, dad. you can say what you want about wrist action and stance and blah, blah, blah...

i’ve been happily drifting for a lot of years, dad, and i didn’t see you getting older.

i suppose i saw us and our relationship as aging together, rather like a fine wine. numbers never seemed important. but the oddest thing happened last week. i was at a stop sign and i watched as you turned the corner in your car. it didn’t immediately occur to me that it was you because the man driving looked so elderly and fragile behind the wheel of that huge car. it was rather like a slap in the face delivered from out of nowhere. perhaps i saw your age for the first time that day. or maybe i saw my own.

fifty years ago this spring we planted kohlrabi together in a garden in charles city, iowa.

i didn’t know then that i would remember that day for the rest of my life. this week, we’ll plant kohlrabi together again, perhaps for the last time but i hope not. i don’t understand why planting kohlrabi with you is so important to me but it is. and the funny thing about it is, well, i don’t know quite how to tell you this, dad...i don’t even like kohlrabi...but i like planting it with you.

i guess what i’m trying to say, dad, is what every son and daughter wants to say to their dad today. honoring a father on father’s day is about more than a dad who brings home a paycheck, shares a dinner table, and attends school functions, graduations, and weddings. it isn’t even so much about kohlrabi, ’54 chevrolets, and fly-fishing. it’s more about unconditionally loving children who are snotty and stubborn, who know everything and won’t listen to anyone. it’s about respect and sharing and acceptance and tolerance and giving and taking. it’s about loving someone more than words can say,and it’s wishing that it never had to end.

i love you, dad.

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篇2:有关父亲节的英语

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Dear John, It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,

亲爱的约翰: 今天是父亲节。它是一个特别的日子, 不是吗? 在这个特别的日子我认为我们应该做一些事情来向我们的父亲表达我们的爱。我的爸爸和我是好朋友。不论我什么时候遇到困难, 他总是在那里准备帮助我。今天, 我将为他制作一张漂亮的卡片, 在上面写上我的谢意和最美好的祝愿。然后下午我将帮助他洗汽车, 在晚上做他最喜欢吃的食物。此外, 晚饭后我将和他散步, 然后和他下象棋, 因为他非常喜欢下象棋。我确信他将非常高兴。你的父亲节计划是什么? 我期盼着你的来信。

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篇3:英语作文:父亲节的一封信

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Father's Day Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the morning.It was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him. Suddenly I got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.

What a wonderful surprise!

[英语作文:父亲节的一封

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篇4:父亲节英语

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If you ask me, who Loved Me? I must answer, of course, is my favorite dad.

Rained today, can give my father to buy clothes and shoes was sent ah, looking forward to a father from Monday through Fathers Day, it is also going to rain!

I put on my raincoat firm ran home, half an hour later to the home, and even locked the door. At this time the rain had stopped it! Dad called, he says that they are mother and pouring it. And quickly went to where to find them. I shouted a voice:

I help my father lift tube, put the finished pouring tube turn up north. Finally, my shoes are wet, but I am still very happy. Mom and Dad did not think Id come to help, but also very happy. I think as long as Mom and Dad need us, we stay with them, even if we do not buy a gift, they will be very happy.

Fathers Day, I accompanied my father had, he was pleased, and I am even more happy.

Fathers Day, Fathers Day is not just that we have to think in the end the lack of what Mom and Dad? Mom and Dad need us, we are in front of it? Thanksgiving Dad, Thanksgiving mother. Fathers Day, you stay with your parents yet?

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篇5:关于父亲节的英语作文带翻译

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Dear John, It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,

亲爱的约翰: 今天是父亲节。它是一个特别的日子, 不是吗? 在这个特别的日子我认为我们应该做一些事情来向我们的父亲表达我们的爱。我的爸爸和我是好朋友。不论我什么时候遇到困难, 他总是在那里准备帮助我。今天, 我将为他制作一张漂亮的卡片, 在上面写上我的谢意和最美好的祝愿。然后下午我将帮助他洗汽车, 在晚上做他最喜欢吃的食物。此外, 晚饭后我将和他散步, 然后和他下象棋, 因为他非常喜欢下象棋。我确信他将非常高兴。你的父亲节计划是什么? 我期盼着你的来信。

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篇6:描写父亲节的英语作文

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My father I think my father is a kind man, he love help people, and always forget to do something for himself. He has a good sence of humor, yes, I like that. That always make us happy. I think he is a friend of mine. Because he always talk with me. I often feel I am not his daughter but his friend. I think that my father is a good father and also a good worker. He works very hard. So he can’t play with me or my mum for long time. He think work will make him happy because work has many funny. So he always teaches me: don’t think work is a hard thing. My father has many hobby. For example, he like reading, and he also like play computer game. He use his hobby to realx. He can feel very happy if he work, and also play. He is a good man, isn’t he?

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篇7:父亲节的英语日记

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Today is FatherDay .i love my father so much that i ve done many things for him.

in the morning i bought some flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase. in the afternoon i went to buy some vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family . After supper, i gave father the card that i made myself and said" Happy Fathers Day" to him. Then i told him to pay more attention to his health and not to overwork. i aslo promised to try my best to get the first place in the coming exam .Hearing this word,father

laughed aloud.

Today is a special day , warm and meaningful.

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篇8:父亲节英语

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Dear John, It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it? I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be very happy. What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours,

Li Hua

亲爱的约翰: 今天是父亲节。它是一个特别的日子, 不是吗? 在这个特别的日子我认为我们应该做一些事情来向我们的父亲表达我们的爱。我的爸爸和我是好朋友。不论我什么时候遇到困难, 他总是在那里准备帮助我。今天, 我将为他制作一张漂亮的卡片, 在上面写上我的谢意和最美好的祝愿。然后下午我将帮助他洗汽车, 在晚上做他最喜欢吃的食物。此外, 晚饭后我将和他散步, 然后和他下象棋, 因为他非常喜欢下象棋。我确信他将非常高兴。你的父亲节计划是什么? 我期盼着你的来信。

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篇9:庆祝父亲节精选英语

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Fathers Day Cards (父亲节贺卡)

Cards are a great way to tell your father how much you appreciate him. Theyll brighten his Fathers Day whether they arrive in the mail or from the hands of a paint-stained kid.

Fathers Day E-Cards (父亲节电子贺卡)

Send your tech-savvy dad a free Fathers Day e-card to let him know youre thinking of him. Choose from our pre-made cards or use your own picture for a personalized greeting.

Fathers Day Recipes (父亲节食谱)

Lets face it, dads love to eat. Make it a family project to show Dad you appreciate him by inviting the kids to help cook some of his favorite foods on Fathers Day.

Fathers Day Crafts (父亲节手工制品)

Sometimes the best gift for Dad is handmade. With these crafty ideas, kids of all ages and skills can create something unique to give to Dad for Fathers Day.

Fathers Day Gifts (父亲节礼品)

We have some great ideas for gifts your father will love. Find the perfect gift for Fathers Day, even for a dad who seems to have one of everything.

Fathers Day Ideas (父亲节想法)

This is Dads day, so make it fun for him. Fathers Day can be as fancy as presents and dinner at a restaurant or as relaxed as a walk in the woods followed by a family movie.

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篇10:感恩父亲节英语

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Tomorrow is fathers day, and my fathers busy figure is shaking in front of my eyes, how can I express my love for my father? Id like to go, oh, yeah, thats the way to do it.

Fathers day came, and I said to my mother, "mom, today is fathers day. Lets give dad a surprise." "Mom said," ok." I put it on my mothers ear and whispered, "we are..."

My mother and I messed up the house, as if we didnt know anything. Dad went home, looked at his house and asked, "do you know what day it is?" My mother said, "let me see, is the world anti-drug day?" "No." Dad pointed to the day on the clock. I cried out, "its our banjis birthday!" Dad listened, as if his heart were broken.

Baba bowed his head and entered the room. My mother and I broke into the room and said, "happy fathers day!" Then my father hugged me and mom, and we all laughed.

This is my happiest day of the year.

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篇11:父亲节礼物英语作文

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导语:父亲节快到了,你想给爸爸怎么过这个节日呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。

提示:1.如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:

2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。

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Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

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父亲节就要到了,你一定想送礼物给你父亲。不同的人喜欢不同种类的礼物。

如果你有足够的零花钱,你可以买一件有用但不贵的东西,比如领带。我想你爸爸会喜欢的。但是,如果你没有足够的零花钱,你可以做一些你可以做的事情,例如,你可以准备一杯茶。当你父亲下班回来时,他可以喝。

无论你做什么,最重要的是让你父亲在父亲节快乐。你不这么认为吗?

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篇12:父亲节英语

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Fathers Day, contrary to popular misconception, was not established as a holiday in order to help greeting card manufacturers sell more cards. In fact when a "fathers day" was first proposed there were no Fathers Day cards!

Mrs. John B. Dodd, of Washington, first proposed the idea of a "fathers day" in 1909. Mrs. Dodd wanted a special day to honor her father, William Smart. William Smart, a Civil War veteran, was widowed when his wife (Mrs. Dodds mother) died in childbirth with their sixth child. Mr. Smart was left to raise the newborn and his other five children by himself on a rural farm in eastern Washington state. It was after Mrs. Dodd became an adult that she realized the strength and selflessness her father had shown in raising his children as a single parent.

The first Fathers Day was observed on June 19, 1910 in Spokane Washington. At about the same time in various towns and cities across American other people were beginning to celebrate a "fathers day." In 1924 President Calvin Coolidge supported the idea of a national Fathers Day. Finally in 1966 President Lyndon Johnson signed a presidential proclamation declaring the 3rd Sunday of June as Fathers Day.

Fathers Day has become a day to not only honor your father, but all men who act as a father figure. Stepfathers, uncles, grandfathers, and adult male friends are all honored on Fathers Day.

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篇13:关于父亲节英语作文FathersDay

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Fathers Day is a festival of thanking our fathers. About started in the early 20th century, originated in the United States, it has been widely circulated around the world, but its date is different because of the differences of the regions. The date of the most popular is on the third Sunday of June each year, and there are 52 countries and regions in the world celebrating the fathers day on this day. They have various ways of celebration, most of which is related to gifts and family dinner or other activities.

父亲节是感谢我们的父亲的节日。大约在20世纪初开始,起源于美国,在世界广泛流传,但它的日期是不同的,因为不同的地区。最受欢迎的日期是每年6月的第三个星期日,世界上有52个国家和地区在这一天庆祝父亲节。他们有不同的庆祝方式,大部分有关礼物和家庭聚餐或其他活动。

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篇14:父亲节初中英语作文

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英语作文:

Tomorrow is fathers day, I want to send two gifts for dad.

I take everyone to take a nap at noon, I took out fifty yuan pocket money to buy a gift, to the flower shop, I dont know which one to buy, this I see that look, finally found the right flowers, gave the money to the boss. I went and bought several packets of paper folding wishing star, came home, I put the flowers in the vase, add some water inside, then hid the flowers where nobody pay attention to. Ok so, I started to fold the wishing star, every star, I wrote a blessing, a star, the two stars were folded · · · · · · one hundred and seventy-nine, dont look at these small stars, but each star in with my blessing to my father. Wishing star after the discount, I put it in a nice little gift box, can look forward to come tomorrow.

Early the next morning at six o clock, I quietly walked into the room, I put the flowers and wishing star on the table, I was out of the room. Slowly fragrance filled the room, dad was smoked aroma woke up and found it still reads: dad happy fathers day. Dad smiled on his face.

中文翻译:

明天就是父亲节,我想给爸爸送两份礼物。

中午,我趁大家睡午觉的时候,我拿出五十元的零花钱去买礼物,一到了花店,我却不知道要买哪一种,我这看看那看看,终于找到了合适的花,把钱给了老板。我又去买了几包折许愿星的纸,回到了家,我把花插进了花瓶,在里面加点水,便把花藏到没人注意的地方。花弄好以后,我就开始折许愿星,每一颗星星里我都写了一个祝福,一颗星,两颗星······共折了一百七十九颗,别看这些小小的星星,但每颗星星里都包含着我对爸爸的祝福。许愿星折完后,我把它放在一个精美的小礼盒里,期待着明天能快点到来。

第二天清晨六点钟,我悄悄地走进房间,我把花和许愿星放在了桌上,我便走出了房间。慢慢的香味便弥漫了整个房间,爸爸被香味给熏醒了,发现上面还写着:爸爸父亲节快乐。爸爸脸上露出了笑脸。

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篇15:关于父亲节英语

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Fathers Day is on the third Sunday of June. Everyone will express their

love to fathers. In Chinese tradition, the role of father is always described as

a quiet man. Though he doesnt talk much, the way he shows his love can be seen

all the time. Father deserves the applause as mother.

Most peoples impression about a father comes from a classic article they

learned in primary school. The article described a traditional father sent his

son to school at the station. When the boy saw his fathers back, he felt so

touched. The essay has been read by generations and they know a father’s way to

show love.

Unlike the western countries, where people show love by kiss and hug, the

children are educated to show their love openly, Chinese way to show love are

much invisible. Many people feel hard to speak out the word love. For the young

parents, they start to make some change. They express their emotion bravely.

Love needs to be spoken out. We should let our parents to know we love them

every day.

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篇16:父亲节英语作文400字

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yesterday was fathers day。 i had planned to give my father a present。 but i didnt remember it until in the morning。it was too late to post a card to him。 so i decided to buy something。 when i was in the department store。 i found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him。

suddenly i got an idea。 i ran home and opened my computer。 i made a beautiful card and mailed him through the internet。 then i began to make supper。 when father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table。 then i asked him to check his e-mail。 he was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box。

what a wonderful surprise!

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篇17:父亲节英语作文400字

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Yesterday was Father's Day. I had planned to give my father a present. But I didn't remember it until in the was too late to post a card to him. So I decided to buy something. When I was in the department store. I found it was not easy for me to choose something right for him.

Suddenly I got an idea. I ran home and opened my computer. I made a beautiful card and mailed him through the Internet. then I began to make supper. When father came home, he was very glad to find a big meal on the table. then I asked him to check his e-mail. He was amazed to find a beautiful card in his e-mail-box.

What a wonderful surprise!

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篇18:父亲节的英语作文

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导语:父爱是太阳,即使在乌云密布的日子里,我也能感受到他的光芒。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!

Dear Dad,

Today I was at the shopping mall and I spent a lot of time reading the Father’s Day cards. They all had a special message that in some way or another reflected how I feel about you. Yet as I selected and read, and selected and read again, it occurred to me that not a single card said what I really want to say to you.

You’ll soon be 84 years old, Dad, and you and I will have had 55 Father’s Days together. I haven’t always been with you on Father’s Day nor have I been with you for all of your birthdays. It wasn’t because I didn’t want to be with you. I’ve always been with you in my heart but sometimes life gets in the way.

You know, Dad, there was a time when we were not only separated by the generation gap but completely polarized by it. You stood on one side of the Great Divide and I on the other, father and daughter split apart by age and experience, opinions, hairstyles, cosmetics, clothing, curfews, music, and boys.

The Father-Daughter Duel of ’54 shifted into high gear when you taught me to drive the old Dodge and I decided I would drive the ‘54 Chevy whether you liked it or not. The police officer who escorted me home after you reported the Chevy stolen late one evening was too young to understand father-daughter politics and too old to have much tolerance for a snotty 16 year old. You were so decent about it, Dad, and I think that was probably what made it the worst night of my life.

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亲爱的爸爸,

今天我在购物中心,我花了很多时间读父亲节贺卡。他们都有一个特殊的信息,在某种程度上反映了我对你的感觉。然而,当我选择和阅读,并选择和再次阅读,它发生在我身上,没有一张卡说,我真的想对你说。

爸爸,你很快就84岁了,我和你一起度过了55个父亲节。父亲节那天我没有和你在一起,也没有和你一起过生日。不是因为我不想和你在一起。我一直与你在我的心,但有时生活的方式。

你知道,爸爸,有一段时间,我们不仅被代沟隔开,而且完全被它所极化。你站在大分水岭的一侧,我在另一方面,父亲和女儿分离的年龄、经验、意见、发型、化妆、服装、音乐、和男孩宵禁。

当你教我驾驶旧道奇的时候,“54”的父亲Daughter Duel转向高齿轮,我决定我会驾驶“54雪佛兰”不管你喜欢与否。警察护送我回家后,你报告的日间偷来的晚了一天晚上太年轻不懂父亲的女儿政治和太旧了,有足够的宽容,对这个16岁的。你真是太体面了,爸爸,我想那可能是我人生中最糟糕的夜晚。

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my father.

I think my father is a kind man,he love help people,and always forget to do something for himself.He has a good sence of humor,yes,I like that.That always make us happy.

I think he is a friend of mine.Because he always talk with me.I often feel I am not his daughter but his friend.

I think that my father is a good father and also a good worker.He works very hard.So he can’t play with me or my mum for long time.He think work will make him happy because work has many funny.So he always teaches me:don’t think work is a hard thing.

My father has many hobby.For example,he like reading,and he also like play computer game.He use his hobby to realx.He can feel very happy if he work,and also play.

He is a good man,isn’t he?

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父亲节英语作文:My Father

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.

Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that we’re living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.

Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We can’t have anything without him. Now I’m pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss

him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

点评:

本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。

作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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