去购物作文英语初一(20篇)

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.

Good is our traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Letter is a kind of invisible power, is also a kind of intangible wealth, or connect the rope of friendship. An honest man, no matter how much he has faults, when in contact with him, mind you will feel relaxed. Such a person, will be able to find happiness, achievement in career. This is because people, for the people who will be to one another.

Honesty is a jewel of great price, how many money can sell, also should not be discarded. Mencius said: "honesty, and the way of heaven; honesty of, the way of people also." Honesty is very important. Personal integrity is the principle of life, is also the embodiment of the interpersonal relationship. Enterprise honesty is a must to promote the development of enterprise good conditions. The integrity of the whole society is the guarantee of to the state and the people and the people and the countrys own performance. Overall integrity of a society is the society in every ones integrity, each persons integrity is the integrity of the enterprise, every enterprise directly influences the integrity of the peoples trust in the society.

Honesty is also the most common and most basic social ethics value needs. Todays society, with the increasingly complex of exchange relationship, increasingly strong market stereos need for integrity. Economic activities not only need good faith and political activity, all social sectors such as spiritual culture need to be honesty. Specifically, the partys 16 big reports to focusing on the honest and trustworthy, to strengthen the ideological and moral construction of the whole society.

Good faith is indispensable to life. If you dont have the good faith, we will have no better tomorrow. So we have to honest and trustworthy, to be a good citizen. That will make the world more beautiful even more brilliant.

一诺千金是我们中华民族的传统美德。信是一种无形的力量，也是一种无形的财富，还是连接友谊的绳索。一个诚实的人，不论他有多少缺点，同他接触时，心神你会感到清爽。这样的人，一定能找到幸福，在事业上会有所成就。这是因为以诚待人的人，别人也会以诚相见。

诚信是无价之宝，用多少钱都卖不了，也是不应该随意丢弃的。孟子说：“诚者，天之道也;诚之者，人之道也。”诚信是非常重要的。个人诚信是做人的原则，也是人际关系的体现。企业诚信是一个推动企业良好发展的必须条件。整个社会的诚信是对国家和人民的保证，同时也是人民和国家的自身表现。总的来说一个社会的诚信就是这个社会中每一个人的诚信，每个人的诚信就是个企业的诚信，每个企业的诚信直接影响人民对社会的信任程度。

诚信也是社会最普遍的也是最基本的伦理价值需要。当今社会，随着交换关系的日益复杂，市场立体对诚信的需要也日益强烈。不仅经济活动需要诚信，而且政治活动、精神文化等一切社会领域都需要诚信。党的十六大报告明确提出，要以诚实守信为重点，加强全社会的思想道德建设。

诚信是生活中不可缺少的。如果没了诚信，我们就没有美好的明天。所以我们要诚实守信，做个良好公民。这样世界才会更加美好更加灿烂。

Love is a stranger a hand; Love is the teacher sets a white hairs in the homework; Love is the mother of a move, let you feel the warm.

A little boy, I hate my mom, but since that time, I understand the mothers love.

On one occasion, I was just about to do the homework, but found that I lost my homework, Im afraid I carelessly, didnt see it, just opened the bag, take out your book all, one by one to find, but not yet, my heart suddenly tense up, thought: without the book I cant do the homework, tomorrow, but how to account with the teacher! True when I worry, mom came back, I just want to let my mother to help me get to the school, but have to see mother look very embarrassing, appear very tired, very worry, dont let mother go, cant replacement tomorrow, let mother go, mom look very tired today, should have a good rest at home. When my mother found my exception, a little angrily said: "what are you doing! Dont do your homework?" I speak hesitatingly ground to say: "my homework...... in the school, cant... help me to get?" After mother, drop a words: "I cant help you any more, let you suffer, next time do not!" I reluctantly went back to the room and felt very upset, and in the end I had to do other homework well first, after a while, I heard a door shutting, also didnt care.

The next morning, I was bedding bag, found that fall in the school yesterday book appear in the table above, feel very strange, suddenly recalled that door shutting in the brain, ask mother, mother said: "I cant help you with, it must be you didnt see!" But I think mother lying, ask grandma, grandma, mother to help me to get in the rain at night, my heart was warm, head emerge with a tired mother help me to take his umbrella rain notebook.

At this point, the warmth welled up in my mind.

爱是陌生人的一把搀扶;爱是作业本里老师落下的一根白发;爱是母亲的一个举动，让你体会到温暖。

小的时候，我讨厌我的妈妈，但从那次以后，我懂得了妈妈的爱。

有一次，我正准备做作业，可是发现我的作业本不见了，我怕是我粗心，没看见，就翻开书包，把本子全都拿出来，一本一本的找，可还没有，我的心一下子紧张了起来，心想：没有了本子我就没法做作业了，明天可怎么跟老师交代呀!真当我犯愁的时候，妈妈回来了，我就想让妈妈帮我到学校拿一下，可有看妈妈脸色很难堪，显得十分疲倦，就很忧虑：不让妈妈去吧，明天没法交代，让妈妈去吧，妈妈今天看起来很累，应该在家好好休息。就在这时妈妈发现了我的异常，有点生气地说：“你在干嘛呀!不好好做作业?”我吞吞吐吐地说：“我的……作业本……在学校里，能不能……帮我去拿一下呀?”妈妈听后，丢下一句话：“我可不会再帮你了，让你吃吃苦头，下次就不会这样了!”我无可奈何地回到了房间，心里忐忑不安，最后我只好先把其他的作业做好，过了一会儿，我听到了一声关门声，也没怎么在意。

第二天早上，我正在理书包的时候，发现昨天落在学校里的本子出现在桌子上面，感到很奇怪，突然脑子里回想起那关门声，就去问妈妈，妈妈说：“我可没帮你拿，准是你自己没看到!”可我觉得妈妈在撒谎，就去问奶奶，奶奶说是妈妈晚上冒雨帮我去拿的，我的心一阵温暖，脑袋里浮现着劳累了一天的妈妈打着伞冒着大雨帮我拿本子的情形。

此时，阵阵暖意涌上我的心头。

With the development of e-commerce, shopping online becomes a new way of shopping which is getting more and more popular. Many citizens are likely to shop through internet nowadays.

随着电子商务的发展，网上购物成为一种新的购物方式，越来越受欢迎。许多市民可能现在通过网上商店。

Generally speaking, shopping online offers lots of advantages with its convenience the most prominent. There are many commodities on the internet where you can search whatever you want. Besides, you just click the mouse can you get all information you want, so that you don’t have to go to the shop personally. In addtition, the commodities on the Internet is usually cheaper than the stores which can save much money.

一般来说，网上购物提供了方便，最突出的优点。网络上有很多的商品，在那里你可以搜索你想要的任何东西。此外，你只需点击一下鼠标就可以得到你想要的所有信息，所以你不必亲自去商店。另外，在互联网上的商品比能节省多少钱一般商店便宜。

However, everything has two sides. You can not see the products or check their qualities and some of the sellers on the Internet is not so honest. And, for those who enjoys shopping around different stores, shopping online perhaps will make them boring.

然而，任何事物都有两面性。你不能看到产品或检查他们的品质和互联网上的一些卖家不诚实。并且，对于那些喜欢在不同的商店购物，网上购物可能会让他们无聊。

In my opinion, shopping online has more advantages than disadvantages, and with the improvement of e-commerce, there will be more people to shop on the Internet.

在我看来，网上购物的利大于弊，而且随着电子商务的发展，将会有更多的人在网上购物。

Almost all people work hard for success, but not all people can success.

Many people ask how to make success. I think the answer is persistence. The way

to success is full of failure and difficulty. People should never give up when

meet them. If you give up, you can’t be successful. No matter how hard it is,

persistence must be there.

I have experienced a lot of interesting things in this winter holiday, and the most interesting of them is the Spring Festival.

In the evening of February 17th, aunt and uncle went to our home and spent the Spring Festival with my family. My aunt and aunt came here, and I went up to them to greet them. I smiled and said, "wish aunt and uncle a happy new year." "I wish you a happy new year and good academic progress." Then, the aunt from her bag and took out a big red envelopes for me, I opened one, wow, there are 1000 yuan!

I took the money carefully into the red bag, held the red bag in my hand, and flew into the room and put it in the drawer. Time to eat, everyone excited to come to the dinner table, dinner can be really big ah! There is Eight Delicacies Rice, Double cooked pork slices, fried octopus, ten dishes, all my love, I see slobber to flow out. Everyone sat on the seat and began to eat after each others blessing. The meal was finished, I was full of food and full, and the belly drum was like a big ball.

Its eight oclock. Lets watch the Spring Festival party together. The Spring Festival Gala programs can be really wonderful ah, there are humorous sketches, beautiful dance, songs of various exquisite beyond compare, everybody clap. I love comedy starring Zhao Benshan "plan", it is very interesting, I laugh all stomach pain, their mother is laughing. The Spring Festival evening finished, we went to the outside put firecrackers, firecrackers have all kinds of types of Mantianhong, cupola, the lamp...... The number is not over.

My father got a cigarette, pointing to a string of firecrackers and said to me: "come, you go to that point." I took the cigarette, slowly walked to the string of firecrackers, put the cigarette head to lead to "burn!" I screamed and ran as fast as a rabbit hid behind my mother. Snapping me tight over his ears, eyes closed. Pau finished everyone see me, laugh, I also smiled. I have a very happy Spring Festival this year, and I look forward to the early arrival of the Spring Festival next year. .

You know? Is tired, happy, is happy, because today I have a good spirit in class.

In the afternoon, I was very happy to answer the question, the teacher was very happy to boast of me. For a moment, when I was in math class, I was active. My teacher didnt call me. I was very angry. I would be very angry when I arrived in the afternoon. In the 3 or 4 class, I would answer the teachers questions in Chinese, math and Chinese classes. The "bell" class, we rushed out of the classroom, "bell" class, math class, the last section about the problem, I did not finish, I am afraid, the teacher said to take the book, 3 and 12 teacher said that a problem, I raised my hand and said the problem, the teacher praised me. I came home and I told my mother that my mother was happy.

The summer vacation this year, our family person went a lot of a lot of

amused interesting place plays, we went 101 buildings, lunar eyebrow explores

Eden, gao Tie explores a house... etc amused interesting place plays, what I

feel happy days always passes is very fast, I spend the summer vacation this

year very happily, so I just can feel happy to light always passes very quickly.

I am written down so that our family has the summer vacation this year the 101

buildings that go to Taipei city, when elevator still does not have attic, can

see Taipei city, I feel I am like is big giant, the house resembles is toy

house, the car resembles is toy house, the person resembles is small ant euqally

small, I feel absorbing.

Besides, our family still has go lunar eyebrow explores Eden, over there

very big! We play skyscraping annulus first, skyscraping annulus can reach very

tall place, we play corsair later, corsair left and right sides shakes special

stimulation, we still have go playing very resemble rotating the You Le

establishment of coffee cup, establishment of this You Le is very amused, if did

not help good armrest up to be able to slip all the time,will slip, this I feel

very interesting, we still have go playing imperial crown swing, establishment

of this one You Le wont be very exciting, when rotating, have slightly wind is

blown, this feeling seems to blowing fanner, nevertheless, the fanner of its

nature, besides this a few swim interestingly again amusedly outside happy

establishment, still have a lot of amused You Le establishment! The summer

vacation this year, our family besides go 101 buildings and Eden of lunar

eyebrow exploration play, still have go Gao Tie explores a canal to look around,

gao Tie has the thing of a lot of a lot of Guan Wugao iron inside exploration

house, have: Film appreciation, the game that fish, drive Gao Ties game, for

very the appearance of Gao Tie is 3 pediform principle... wait a few amused

interesting establishment, I acquired a lot of knowledge inside house of tall

iron exploration.

I feel although this one summer vacation passes exceedingly quickly,

nevertheless, I went to the place of a lot of playing in this one summer

vacation, also increased the knowledge of a lot of in a lot of place, I saw

Taipei city in the 101 buildings of Taipei city, also explored a house to

understand Gao Tie in Gao Tie, had termed begins now, my hope is fine

nevertheless summer vacation comes quickly, can look around to each district and

amuse oneself.

I live in Hangzhou.It is a beautigul city.It’s my hometown.Every year it attracts large number of tourists come here all over the world.We have Xihu here and many places of interest.I think you will love it when you see it oneday.I want to grow up quickly.Andj I will try my best to protect our city and make a contribution to it.I think if everyone protects it ,my city will becone much more beautiful.I love my city!

我住在杭州。这是一个漂亮的城市。这是我的家乡。每年都吸引大量游客来这里世界各地。我们在这里拥有西湖和许多名胜古迹。我想你会爱它，当你看到这一天。我想快点长大。与我会尝试为保护自己的城市作出最大的贡献。我想，如果每个人都能保护它，我的城市将变得更加美丽。我爱我的城市！

China has 271 million online consumers, meaning that almost half of Chinas 591 million Internet users buy products online. E-commerce sites Taobao and Tmall, which saw a combined $$1 trillion in sales in 2012, will both be running promotional campaigns during Chinas Singles Day. Among the offers: 50 percent discounts on products like boyfriend body pillows and hoodies that read "I am single because I am fat." Amazon。cn declared that the site would sell "20,000 products discounted by as much as 90 percent." That includes a wedding ring, which singles can presumably buy, just in case.

中国有2亿7100万网络消费者，这意味着中国的5亿9100万网民中有近半数在网上购物。如淘宝和天猫的网购网站，在2012年销售量加在一起有1万亿美元。这两家网站都会在中国的光棍节这天发起促销活动，他们的促销策略是相关商品的五折优惠、比如“男朋友抱枕”、上书“我肉多所以我单身”的套头衫等。亚马逊网称将该站上将有“2万件商品1折优惠”，这其中包括结婚戒指——也许单身人士会买一只来以备日后可用。

Jack Ma, founder of Internet giant Alibaba, told Chinese Premier Li Keqiang late last month that Alibabas sales on Singles Day 2012 were "nearly $$3.3 billion" -- more than double the roughly $$1.5 billion purchased on Cyber Monday in 2012. For Singles Day 2013, Ma expects sales to exceed $$4.9 billion.

网络巨头阿里巴巴的创始人马云在10月底会见李克强总理的时候曾对总理坦言，2012年光棍节期间，阿里巴巴的销售量有“近33亿美元”——比2012年美国的“网购礼拜一”创下的约15亿美元销售量翻了一番。对2013年的光棍节，马云预测销售量将突破49亿。

As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.

The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development.

If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.

As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.

Im happy to have such a good summer holiday!Of course,I have many things to prepare.

First,I need to make a plan about my holiday.I will do my homework 5 hours a day,and I want to read some famous English books to improve my English study.Then, I will see some funny comedies . Mr.Bean or Tom Hankss movies all cool! They can relax myself!If I have enough time,I will go dancing swimming! I wanna keep fit,you know!And,I will spend some time on my math.I always be careless on the math exam.I want to be careful!

I really have a large number of things to do,maybe Its a bit busy nervous.but I like this sort of life.I will try my best to do these tings!I believe myself,I can do all of them!Its nice to have this kind of courage!

我很高兴有这样一个好暑假!当然,我有许多事情要准备。

首先,我需要制定一个计划关于我的假期。我将做我的家庭作业5小时一天,我想读一些著名的英语书来提高我的英语学习。然后,我将看到一些有趣的喜剧。Mr.Bean或汤姆·汉克斯的电影都很酷!他们能放松我自己!如果我有足够的时间,我将去跳舞游泳!我想保持健康,你知道!我将花一些时间在我的数学。我总是被粗心的数学考试。我想要小心!

我真的有大量的事情要做,也许这有点忙紧张。但是我喜欢这种生活。我将尽我最大的努力做这些事!我相信我自己,我可以做的!很高兴有这样的勇气!

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year.Playing basketball is always my favourite,so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together.Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

我计划今年的暑假要花费在运动上.打篮球一直是我最热爱的,所以我的一些同学和我将会组建一个小队并且互相打比赛.有时我们可以和其他球队进行对抗比赛,我很享受当我们赢得比赛时的感觉.

Hello everyone,I am a Chinese girl.My name is Kitty, this is my English name,I like it very much.I am 15 years old.

大家好，我是一个中国女孩。我的名字是Kitty，这是我的英文名字，我非常喜欢它。我15岁。

I like dog very much,so I have a littler dog ,her name is Jing Jing.I like music very much,I can play the piano,sing songs.my singer star is S H E,do you know them?I like them very much.

我非常喜欢狗，所以我有一个小的狗，她的名字叫晶晶。我非常喜欢音乐，我会弹钢琴，唱songs.my歌星是S H E，你认识他们吗?我非常喜欢他们。

My father and mother both love me,I love them ,too.Sometimes,I like to play computer games or to watch TV.This is Kitty.

我的父亲和母亲都爱我，我爱他们，太。有时，我喜欢玩电脑游戏或看电视。这是基蒂。

Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.

My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.

I’m sure it’s very important to dream. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.

每个人都有梦想。作为青年学生，我们的梦想多姿多彩。它们构成了伟大的中国梦。梦想可以是远大的，也可以是微小的。实际上，远大的梦想是从实现许多微小的梦想开始的。

我叫李红。我也有一个梦想：我希望成为一名伟大的科学家。从现在起，我必须好好学习，为实现梦想而努力。不管遇到怎样的困难，我都要克服它，决不会放弃。

我相信梦想的力量。有些梦想是比较现实的，有些梦想可能并不那么现实。不管我们的梦想是什么，我们都应该为了梦想而坚持，总有一天它们会实现的。

导语：如今，几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服，这引起了越来越多的关注。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Nowadays, almost all junior and senior students wear school uniforms which attract a growing number of attention. But the evaluation of students and parents on the school uniforms is always dissatisfied than commended. Don’t we want to wear school uniforms? Absolutely not. The real reasons are that the uniform style is old fashioned and the color is too dark. Besides, the school uniform is expensive but poor quality. In school, we are willing to wear school uniform, but we just hope that the style of uniform is what we like and suit for us.

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如今，几乎所有的初中生和高中生都穿校服，这引起了越来越多的关注。但是，学生和家长对校服的看法总是不满多过赞成。我们想穿校服吗?绝对不想。真正的原因是校服的款式过时了，而且颜色太暗了。除此之外，校服又贵质量又不好。在学校，我们愿意穿校服，但是我们只希望校服的款式是我们喜欢并且适合我们的。

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

An unforgettable thing during Summer vacation

暑期难忘的一件事

It was a sunny day today,when I got up in the morning, I decided to see my grandparents. So I took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me, and I was very happy, too.

今天天气不错,太阳天.当我早上醒来,我决定去看看爷爷奶奶,所以我乘巴士中午到了那里,爷爷奶奶看到我很开心,而且我也很开心。

In the afternoon, my farther asked me to help him water the plant, and I was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

下午爸爸叫我帮他给植物浇水,看到那些在风中微笑的花儿我很开心。

In a word, today is a unforgetive day. because I saw my relatives and helped people.

总的说来,今天是难忘的一天.因为我去看了亲戚也帮助了他人。

初一五一英语作文1

These days the May Day holiday, my mother is going to take me to play in the public ecological garden.

Because unfamiliar terrain, white ran a lot of road, only "ah-ha!" to the ecological garden of the masses.

Ecological YuanHou bought tickets and went into the masses, a look, really a lot of people, there are a lot of fun projects dont money, make me happy from ear to ear.

Walk, see a pond, fishing, I can be happy, because has always been very love fishing, can be approached a look, just know to rent cost ten dollars, but I managed to persuade his mother, rent the fishing rod.

Started fishing, there is a group of fish came up, but only in the next to look, not biting. I saw big fishes swim by, but I sat uncomfortable, move the fish all fled away.

I summarized the reasons for the failure of the last time, after waiting for fish to, did not move, do not emit sound, eyes also unchanged, finally, a big carp bite the hook, but immediately loosened, ate half of the bait, when I was frustrated, I saw it with a bite, I quickly put the hook, the fish really big trouble ah, just pull the lever to bad, I have a hard, give it up, and in this way, we can eat the grilled fish at noon today.

In addition to these, I also played a lot of things, and now that I think about it, really want to play again!

初一五一英语作文2

Today is May Day, I follow mom to dinghai haisan park by bus.

Here people mountain people sea, there are a lot of children accompanied by mom and dad to play there. Some playing with kites, some are playing gyro, some in fishing.

I quickly came to the goldfish. Theres water on the bottom, the goldfish have greatly small, colors: red, orange and purple! I saw many people in the fishing, and also bought a fishing pole gaps.

Soon, my fish bait was snapped, quickly pull up the fishing pole, in line with your hands, I catch a frisky goldfish was came up, I carefully put the fish into the basin, the heart is extremely happy! But the goldfish is too small, I also want to hook to larger goldfish. But in the next few minutes, always dont take the bait fish, or fish ate fish bait, but has not been pulled, I was so angry, I stared straight the way of just overjoyed when already flew to the cloud nine, clamouring to go back home. Mother told me at this moment, fishing to calm down, take your time, not impatient. Listen to the mother, and I put down the fishing pole, patiently caught up, indeed as expected and caught 3, and a than a big. So, I take 4 goldfish went home happily.

Along the way, my heart never know how much excited, because I not only hook into the big goldfish, also understand such a truth: do not impatient, be patient, itll be successful!

初一五一英语作文3

May 1st is the international labor day, is the world labor peoples freedom anniversary, for we students, is a long-awaited festival, is also in our winter vacation the again after the holidays, have a three-day holiday. Given that we can open again, happy, happily free sent time, space and dominate their own!

In the labor day holiday, I was going to with dad to Olympic sports center to do some sports like playing basketball, table tennis, some exercises. However, because of my father and an empress have never been to hainan, want to go to hainan play, so Ill just have to reassure the idea, stay at home to play. I turned on my computer as usual, but, but online is different from usual, I suddenly reminded us in the 21st century is the age of information technology, many people celebrate May Day on the Internet.

I also have their own space on the Internet, many know uncle aunt, play games on the Internet know school friends and classmates will come to my QQ space, in their different ways to celebrate with me "51" international labor day! Not only in my QQ space, in baidu post bar has a lot of brother elder sister also uncles and aunts blessing each other together the happiness during the holidays, we like the family happy, happy, I think network not only, and our warm home!

This years "51" section, and we all had a good time. Through the "51" section, the real from different sides showed the new achievements in the construction of spiritual civilization, also showed the fundamental role of everything for the masses, in the interests of the masses. I think next years "51" international labor day will have a more pleasant and beautiful!

When it comes to the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, you will think of Dragon Boat Festival and zongzi. Do you know the origin of Dragon Boat Festival? Let me tell you something about it.

Qu Yuan, a doctor in the state of Chu, had always loved the country, but his patriotic heart was unfairly treated by Zi Lan and Jin Shang. In the early May ad 278, five, Qu Yuan was patriotic and angry, holding a big stone, jumping into the Miluo River and suicidal. The people of the state of Chu were all sorrowful. They all rowed a boat to save Qu Yuan. But a vast ocean, where there was Qu Yuans shadow, the gang had been in the Miluo river for half a day, and had no choice but to find Qu Yuan corpse. The bamboo tube in Steamed Rice cast the hope that the fish in the water is not the original body of gnawing humiliation. After that, every year on the 5th day of the fifth month of the Chinese lunar calendar, the local people rowed the rice into the river in the bamboo tube, and later, the rice in the bamboo tube was changed to zongzi.

On the annual Dragon Boat Festival, people pack zongzi, buy zongzi and eat zongzi. The shape of zongzi is very special, neither square nor round. The zongzi is wrapped with green rice dumplings wrapped in glutinous rice and jujube. The color and appearance of the dumplings are very good. The taste of the dumplings is unique. It is a unique taste of the zongzi. It is both a delicacy of summer and an appetizing food, and a good nourishing nourishing product.

Whenever I eat zongzi, I think of Qu Yuans patriotism.

新学期新打算，就要有新的目标，开始我们新的旅行，向着我们的新目标去奋斗，去实现我们崇高的理想。下面是小编为您带来的是初一新生活英语作文相关内容，希望对您有所帮助。

With elementary school knowledge, with the character of primary school, with primary school habits, we entered the junior high school gate, at this time, we have become a veritable junior high school students. We are faced with the first turning point in our life, exciting and exciting.

Entering the class, everything is strange, strange students, strange teachers, even tables and chairs are strange, I am happy, I am lonely.

Look at the timetable. Im almost shocked. So many classes, what history, biology, geography... Its so scary. And this is the textbook, I have never touched, I am happy, I am helpless.

In class, or the teacher speaks too fast, or I do not have books, and do not listen, I lost, I confused. If I listen carefully, even to the realm of self denial, I rejoice, and I rejoice.

Ah! This magical first day! Turn me into a sentimental person, turn me into a sentimental person, change me into a wise and sensible person, and turn me into a person who knows how to value time.

Now I realize how beautiful this new stage and new life are!

带着小学的知识，带着小学的性格，带着小学的习惯，我们踏进了初中的大门，此时，我们已是名副其实的初中生。我们面临着人生中第一个转折点，又是激动，又是兴奋。

踏进班级，一切都是陌生的，陌生的同学，陌生的老师，就连桌椅也是陌生的，我高兴，我寂寞。

看看课程表，我差不多快惊呆了，这么多门课，什么历史呀、生物呀、地理呀......真是多得让人感到可怕。而且这是课本都是我从没接触过的，我欢乐，我无助。

上课时，或是老师讲得太快，或是我没有书，而听不进去，我失落，我迷茫。若我听得很认真，甚至到了“忘我”的境界，我喜悦，我欢腾。

啊！这神奇的初一啊！把我变成了一个多愁善感的人，把我变成感情丰富的人，把我变成一个乖巧懂事的人，把我变成一个懂得珍惜时间的人。

现在，我才领悟到，初一这个新阶段、新生活是多么美好啊！

[初一新生活英语作文