北京高考英语作文题目：李华照顾生病的妈妈（优秀20篇）

题目：立灾难沃土，书成长华章

阅读下面的材料，完成写作。(60分)

疫情期间，博雅中学为高三学生举办主题为“在灾难中成长”的成人礼活动，通过视频向高三全体师生及家长直播，请你以学生代表身份写一篇发言稿。

疫情期间，你应《人民日报》约稿，代表中国“新一代青年”撰文，给其他发生疫情国家的青年加油鼓劲，表达心声。

2022年春节，你由大学返回母校，原班主任邀请你以“疫情”为背景，就“追星”话题为高一学弟学妹做一次演讲，请写出演讲稿。

要求：结合合材料，自选角度，确定立意;切合身份，贴合背景;符合文体特征;不要套作，不得抄袭，不得很露个人信息;不少于800字。

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尊敬的老师和家长，亲爱的同学们：

大家好!

花经风雨更娇艳，松历霜雪益挺拔，梅因苦寒自幽香，剑由磨砺方有锋。同学们，疫情未尽，我辈已成，今天我发言的题目是“立灾难沃土，书成长华章”!

同学们，忆往昔，灾难为沃土，沃土可结果——或曰旷达，或曰智慧!

松下幸之助说：“自古以来的伟人，大多是抱着不屈不挠的精神，从逆境中挣扎奋斗过来的。”此言得之。看那苏学士“途中遇雨，雨具先去”，反而在“穿林打叶声”里“吟啸且徐行”，终悟“变”与“不变”之哲理，得“清风”“明月”“无尽藏”之旷达;看那西南联大师生“国难维以至此”，却在战火中执鞭，在轰炸里苦读，“内树学术自由之规模，外来民主堡垒之称号”，获经天纬地、泽被四方之智慧。同学们，我辈已成，亦该如他们立灾难沃土，深植其根。

同学们，看今朝，灾难为沃土，沃土可结果——或名奉献，或名担当!

塞内加说：“烈火试真金，逆境试强者。”此言不谬。看那林生斌于大火中痛失爱妻娇子，却对生活报之以歌，捐收益，建学校，资助疫区;看那抗疫人员于病毒肆虐时却逆行而上，舍团圆，抛幼子，勇战一线。家人尽逝，生活之灾难，林生斌用奉献护万千“童真一生”;疫情突发，时代之灾难，医护人员用担当守国民“春暖花开”。同学们，我辈已成，正应如他们立灾难沃土，力拔其节。

同学们，望来日，灾难为沃土，沃土可结果——或为萤火，或为栋梁!

西培尼士说：“人处患难之境,如香草之受压榨则芬芳愈烈。”此言无差。灾难之中，更该“博学之，审问之，慎思之，明辨之，笃行之”;逆境之时，更该立“一览众山”之志，执“中流击水”之力，务“如琢如磨”之行，待来日，或如雨衣妹妹，不辞苦累，以我之微光，奉送一隅温暖;或如钟南山，心怀锦绣，以我之闪耀，照破山河万朵。同学们，我辈已成，自当如他们立灾难沃土，茁壮其干。

尼采说：“那些能将我杀死的事物，会使我变得更有力。”疫情可杀

人，亦可成人。同学们，疫情未尽，我辈已成，让我们立灾难沃土，深植其根、力拔其节、茁壮其干，这灾难定必将结成硕果，不负青春。同学们，疫情中奋起吧，书就成长华章;灾难中振翅吧，写就壮美诗篇!

我的发言结束，谢谢大家!

“一人能否成才，与天资有关，更与后天所受的教育以及自身的学习有关。”这句话给了我一个深刻的印象。

在我的记忆深处，一提起“天才”二字，我便感触颇多。小学开始，老师便开始教授我们这样一句至理名言：天才就是百分之九十九的汗水加上百分之一的灵感。这句话正是出自于一位自小便不聪慧的爱因斯坦大科学家，这可是他的亲身感受。要知道爱因斯坦四岁了才学会说话，可知他的天资还不如一个普通人，可是他为什么后来却会成一个伟大的科学家，流芳百世呢?那是因为他从小便善于学习，善于提问，由此可知，后天良好的自身学习和教育占据了多么重要的地位。看来，自古以来能够成为国之栋梁的人，或许并不一定存在着天赋。

相反，文中的方仲永的确是一个不可多得的神童，他本来可以成为国家的栋梁之才，可最终却一事无成，我们要责备的不仅仅是他的父亲贪图小利，不让他学习，丧失了一个天才，但同时我们也不妨问问方仲永自己是否愿意去学习，如果他肯学习，还会落得今天这个下场吗?

自然，像方仲永这样有才能的人，古往今来，也不是从无出现过。古时候，有个人名为江郎，是个天资聪慧的人，自幼便会作诗习文，每日他都可写出许多精彩绝伦的文章，他家也是门庭若市，不少人还花钱买他的文章。可是后来，他因终日不去学习，最终再也写不出那样美妙的文章，他家自是门庭冷清，人人叹息：“真是江郎才尽啊!”

要知道人的天资的确存在着差异，但这并不是关键的因素，重要的是后天好的培养和学习。也正如华罗庚所说：“聪明在于勤奋，天才在于积累。”所以，我们应正确认识自己。

总而言之，“天才”与“学习”的关系就是：天才+学习=国之栋梁;天才+不学习=碌碌无为;不是天才+学习=有用之才;不是天才+不学习=蠢材。

然而想到自己，我似乎感到了惭愧，我不属于天才，而面临着后天良好的教育环境，我的学习时好时差，我将成为有用之才还是蜕变为蠢材，谁能告诉我答案呢?或许能回答只有我自己。

我始终牢记着这样一句话：世上根本没有什么天才，也并不存在着什么蠢材，未来要走什么路，只在一念之间，在这一念之间，或许我们攀上了高峰，或许我们跌入了万丈深渊，如此而已……

阅读下面的材料，根据要求作文。(60分)

美国有句谚语：“除了上帝，任何人都必须用数据来说话。”人们不能漠视数据，数据是科学的度量。

有学者认为，我们正处在一个数据时代。随着社交网络的逐渐成熟，移动带宽的迅速提升，云计算、物联网的应用多样，数据的运用和创新给公民、政府、社会带来了种种的挑战和变革。

上面的材料引发了你怎样的思考?请结合自己的体验与感悟，写一篇800字文章。

优秀作文素材：

由于北方地区灰霾天气频发，被称为灰霾“元凶”的细颗粒物(PM2.5)受到空前关注。许多人都在呼吁政府尽早出台PM2.5的评价标准。环境监测标准将逐步与国际接轨，使监测结果与人民群众对青山绿水蓝天白云的切实感受更加接近。

生活的经验告诉我们，凡事要做到心中有数。有“数”的标准，未必是感观上的眼见为实，而可能是习惯于对科学数据的求证。在各类统计数据中，常见到表格、数据、箭头、报表，把它们准确制成了柱状图、折线图、曲线图，于是，人们觉得生活获得了实证性，或者说科学性。

数据让生活变得可测量，有时候，符号化、数据化的结果，有可能偏离生活的真实。近期的例子就是PM2.5。

空气质量监测结果与老百姓感受不符，已表现突出。在一些城市，空气质量优良率多年保持90%以上高比例，优秀空气天数也呈逐年大幅增长的趋势，而与数据上的“大好形势”不相符的是，人们抬头见到蓝天的次数并未增多，在一些“光灰”城市中，甚至连10米以外的风景也无法辨识。

很难说，数据不符合人们的感受，就是有意为之，或者是欺骗。普通人通过蓝天可见度来界定空气质量，而掌握专业知识和一系列指标、数据的人，则通过收集和分析数据来判断空气质量。前者是生活的直观，后者是逻辑的结论。你说看不见蓝天，他告诉你数据说“空气质量良好”，甚至当你肉眼见到蓝天白云，数据仍可能告诉你说“还有浮尘”。这就是生活与数据之间的距离。事实上，PM2.5本身就是数据之一，在它之后，随着技术的进步，很可能有更多的检测手段与数据被“发明”出来。

科学技术使得生活感受得到量化，因而可以被测量。这是现代社会的一个基本特征，生活的数据化也许更趋于精确，但也可能背离人们的直观感受。

数据化的生活与感受的生活之间的距离，将会永远存在，不可能真正一致。就环境监测标准而言，应尽可能地接近人们对蓝天白云的切实感受。

In my mind, mother is the greatest. Because my mother not only gave me life, gave me lots of love. When I meet with difficulties, always can hear mother encouraging words, and when I am happy, my mother is also the most happy.

Remember, when I was two or three, economic difficulties in the home, in order to life, mother left me to work in another city. That day, my mother and I are very miss each other. My mother often calls, is to listen to my voice. And every time I hear the phone ringing, I will be the first to pick up, because I guess may is mothers call, but many phone not mom, that moment I felt very disappointed. As long as I heard my mother to come back to see me, I will jump for joy. But mother come back each time only two or three days of time, and separate time is so long. After mother left, I miss my mom every night to cry, want to mother came back with me. Let me the deepest impression a telephone is: mom, lets move to changsha, I am very happy, because I can always and mother living together.

Finally reunited, but mother because of work need to travel a lot. Every time mother on a business trip, I hate to mother, looked at his mother out of the house, I will run to the window and looked at his mothers shadow gradually disappeared in the crowd. I wonder: mom is in order to make my life better, just work so hard. When I grow up must repay mother well. Now, I want to said to mother: mom, I love you!

1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问language teacher. 你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何.请按下面写 What frequently brings back memories of 一封电子邮件1.感谢他得关心2.介绍情况:(1)my school teacher is his special qualities. First of 去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气(2)人们已认识all, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember 到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发we always long for his class with great eagerness 生(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么Dear because his lecture were humorously delivered, Bill,I’m glad to receive your letter, thank you for never failing to provoke loud laughs. Second, he your caring for the weather and my health. Now gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer-- an I’d like to tell you something about the smog. awakening of a passion for learning. He not only Since the winter last year, the smog has occurred led us to an appreciation of the beauty and a lot of times. it has done great harm to our daily perfection of Chinese and literature, but also life. many traffic accidents happened just because aroused our great interest in exploring something of the heavy smog weather, more and more deeper in this field. Finally, I was deeply people have to go to see the doctor because the impressed by the respect he showed for us, for he serious disease caused by the smog, quite a lot of treated us like friends rather than students. flights have to be put off, a great number ofAlthough it is nearly 10 years since I people have to stay at home for fear of the attended his last class, he is the talk of our old poisonous air caused by the smog. classmates, and I know part of him has alreadyPeople have realized the great harm caused stayed in my heart. by the smog and the importance of protecting the 5.Is English Not Important Any More（英语不再environment. people all over the country are 重要） taking measures to reduce the smog weather. the Recently, the Ministry of Education has drafted a government suggests people go to work or school

Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the

ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that

anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.

In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.

9. 节约是中华人民的传统美德，然而，当前国人的浪费现象却十分严重，尤其是餐桌上的浪费。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文，描述你的一次“餐桌浪费”经历，并结合当前的“光盘行动”(Clear Your Plate Campaign) With large amounts of food thrown away with the public traffic, such as the bus and the

underground. Also we should plant more trees.

or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste According to me, I will go to school by bike

in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect anywhere. the environment as possible as they can. would you like to tell me some good forward to your reply.

ideasI’m looking 2.作文要求：例：1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信

的现象2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、考试

作弊等)3、讲求诚信的意义Honesty is a

virtue Comes the Wolf Almost all of us heard the story （诚信是一种美德）

What we can learn from the story is that we must

“ when we were little kids.

“ Here

be honest. However, thereof dishonesty nowadays. ’re lots of phenomena other people but also to yourself. Take the case of Being dishonest does great harm not only to fake milk powder for example. After drinking this

kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their

legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected

their health. To our great relief, the producers got

accused and punishedconsequences in the end. for all the serious reliable will make other people trust you, which Having the reputation of being honest and will provide you many benefits and give you

opportunities that others may not get. Being

honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with

others and people will be friendly to you and

support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way. and start the wonderful journey! Let’s pick up our “ backpack “ —honesty, 3.build an energy-saving society(

型社会)

建立一个节约

近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会

献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。

请你根据以下要点：1.不浪费粮食和纸张 2.

尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋 3.毕业生将书赠

给低年级同学循环使用？参考词汇：方便筷

disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of

“doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in

our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned

about the increasing lack of energy and provide

their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t

waste any food or paper, though they appear very

easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think

it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks

and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly

recommended that those used textbooks as well

as reference books of graduates, which are still in

good condition, not be thrown but recycled.

Actually, there are still quite a lot that we

can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride

bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these

will definitely help to build an energy-saving

society.

4.有关“人与事件”话题The Most Unforgettable

Person in my memory

(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是(2)为什

么他 (或她)一直在我心中 (3)结论

In my life I have met many people who are

really worth my recalling. But perhaps the most

unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese

reform about English, it is said that English will be not the subject that take into account of the College Entrance Exam, a lot of students feel excited, because they think English will not be their burden. The reform may relieve some students who are week in English, they think they donEnglish, because English is not important any ’t need to spend so much time in learning more. The fact is that they get the wrong idea,

English still important even though it will be no more considered to be the College Entrance Exam. The trend is people learning English since they are young, parents pay special attention to the children’s second language, so most students now are good at English. What’s more, English is the most widely used language, it can enhance a student’s competition. So English is still important to learn. 6.Work and SuccessSince we go to school, we are taught that no pain, （付出与成功） no gain, it means that if people want to be successful, they must work hard. But the truth is that not everyone can get what they want, even they work hard so much, but if working hard does not bring success, why should they still need to work hard. In my opinion, working hard doesn’t mean the person can success certainly, success needs more factors, like the time, the luck and other things.There is no doubt that if the person does not work hard and fight for his goal, there is no way for him to get what he wants. Some actors start their career at the very young age, when they are also 40, they become famous suddenly, if they give up, they can’t be waiting for their reputation. So working hard, there is much chance to get succeed. 7.No Pains, No Gains（一分耕耘，一分收获） It is obvious to everybody that the only way to achieve ones goal is to work hard. Just as the old saying goes;no mill, no meal; Have you ever seen a man who succeeds just by idling aboutOf course, the answer is; No; so we know if you want to gain something, you will have pains.The farmers harvest by a year of arduous work; the scientists gain achievements by years of devoted researches; students get good marks by working hard; even the little ants have their food by working hard day and night. 1 know there are always some people who wait for the opportunities falling on them. They may attribute their failures to lack of good chances. Therefore, there are so many people gaining nothing at last. Clever men know that the more effort they make, the bigger chance they will have to be successful.So, when others achieve their aspirations and you still gain nothing, dont complain about the unfair fate and dont give up, either. Remember: no pains, no gains. 8.The Importance of Self-Confidence（自信的重要 ） People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person. each year, the problem of food waste is

widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.

What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.

Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.

10.【校园生活】假如你是诸暨二中高三(1)的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力学习，实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and

smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

11.根据下面提示，有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题

(1)写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。(3)注意：单词数提出自己的看法。120个左右。

Wealth and Happiness

happiness to them. It is true that most of them try Some people think wealth can bring

to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness them happiness. For example, when one gets a But some people believe wealth can。

’t bring fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!

wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that society. If you have money you can lead a

comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remembermoney is not everything12。

： 生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看

空气;有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾;真正的生态游 享受自然，同时也是一种责任’要保护自然，保护野生动物’带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing.. Some 2

I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our

responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

第三部分 英语写作经典句型

By +doing, … can … 通过/借着...，..能够.. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的国家富有我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意

By taking exercise, we can always keep fit.通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

… enable + Object(受词)+ to + V ...使..能够.. What an important thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

On no account can we ignore the value of

knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 On no account can we + V =by no means, … 我们绝对不能...

Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the

conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是， 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好 四.举例句型

1.Lets take...to illustrate this.2.lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.3.

Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of….6.This offers a typical instance of….7.We may quote a common example of….8.Just think of…. 五.常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来，……一直被视the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, ) the + ~ est + + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)

名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever A + be + 形容词最高级 + B + have/ has ever + (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)

Bai jing is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.白晶是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

The + 较级 + S + V … 形容词比较级愈… + S + V愈…

, the + 形容词比The harder you work, the more progress you make. The more books we read, the more learned we 你愈努力，你愈进步。

become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V;;;Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to +V

Nothing is +形容词比较级+ than to + do sth. Nothing is easier than to give up.容易的事了。

没有比放弃更Nothing is more important than to receive education.It is time + S + 没有比接受教育更重要的事。过去式 该是...的时候了 It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

It is conceivable that knowledge plays an

important role in our life. 可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

It is conceivable + that It is obvious + that 从句从句 (明显的 (可想而知的)

) It is apparent + that 从句 (显然的) It pays to help others.It pays to do sth. ...是值得的。帮助别人是值得的 There is no doubt

+ that 从句 毫无疑问的...

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

There is no one but … 没有人不...

There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。

… cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。 We cannot emphasize the importance of

protecting our eyes too much. 保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调

The reason why + 从句 is + that 从句 ...的原因是..The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 That is the reSummer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t ason why … 那就是...的原因 like it. 夏天很炙热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 An advantage of An advantage of using the solar energy is that it is + that 从句.的优点是... won’t create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

Due to / Owing to / Thanks to sth./ doing因为. Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.So + adj. + be + 因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。 So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste 主语 + that 从句：如此.以致于 it.

by no means = in no way 一点也不

be+forced/ compelled/ obliged + to do不得不 Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.Those who … ...违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。的人...

Smoking has a great influence on our health.对我们的健康有很大的影响。

抽烟have a great influence on 对...有很大的影响 Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.染对我们的生存造成一大威胁

污Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益 Overwork does harm to health.有害do good to对...有益do harm to工作过度对健康对..有害高考英语作文万能句子：8种实用句型 一.开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned就……而言

2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 地说......

可以肯定4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的， 5.It has to be noticed that... 6.Its generally recognized that... 它必须注意到，它普遍认为... ...7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为... 8.Its hardly that... 9.Its hardly too much to say that... 这是很难的......

它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that...别注意的是

需要特11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问， 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that..更重要的是 二.衔接句型

1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...

3.As stated in the previous paragraph4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 如前段所述然 而问题并非如此简单，所以…… 5.But its a pity that... 6.For all that...对于这一切但遗憾的是...... In spite of the fact …

that...尽管事实......

7.Further, we hold opinion that..为

此外我们坚持认8.However , the difficulty lies in..然而困难在于 9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 我们要注意...

同样，10.not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

11.In view of the present station.12.As has been mentioned above...鉴于目前形势正如上面所提到的…

13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 角度上我们可以说

从这个14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 一方面，即 … 然而我们还得看到事物的另三.结尾句型

1.I will conclude by saying... 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...最后我要说… 因此，我们有理由相信…

3.All things considered,safely said that...它可以有把握地说总而言之 It may be ......

4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…

5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨

为……，但今天的情况有很大的不同。

3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为…

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展，越来越多…

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论，是否…

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者。

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is

essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想有必要看看双方的论据。

六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法 1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it Despite their similarities, A and B are also

different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…. 七 演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。 2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...，但以下是最典型的。 3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.面的可能是最有效的。有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.5. The reasons are as follows. 一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。 八 因果推理法常用句型

1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot.

4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The

effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。

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Instant noodles are great to eat no matter what the situation may be. They are easy, extremely quick to make and require little knowledge to make them taste delicious.

First, the noodles must be placed in a bowl with about five hundred milliliters of boiling water. There is a small package with spices that should be added into the noodles. Cover the container and wait for about three minutes until the noodles are soft. Upon lifting the cover you will find a tasty and filling dish that took you less than five minutes to make.

So if youre in a hurry or just craving for instant noodles, tear open a package and see for yourself just how easy it is.

在任何情况下方便面都是食用佳品。食用方便、迅速，而且不需要什么知识。

首先，用大约500毫升的沸水将方便面泡在碗里。把一小包调料放在面条里，盖上容器不要管它，大约三分钟后面条变软。当打开盖后你就会吃到荚味、加好调料的面了。整个过程不到五分钟。

如果你忙碌或只是想吃到方便面，打开一包自己试试，真是太容易了。

If you are in a hurry or hungry, what would you like to eat? I guess the answer should be instant noodles. Yes, instant noodles are easy to make and taste good. It can save you lots of time because it doesnt need cooking.

Now let me tell you how to have it.

First, put the noodles in a bowl, along with the soup stock.

Then, pour in 500ml boiling water.

Next, cover the bowl and stands for three minutes.

Now, lift the cover and you can have the noodles at once.

It takes less than five minutes.

It is really easy, isnt it?Please try it by yourself!

如果你很忙或很饿，你想吃什么?我猜一定是方便面。对，方便面很容易做且味道不错。它不需烧煮，因此很省时间。

现在让我来告诉你如何食用方便面。

首先，将面和汤料放入碗中。

然后，加入500m1沸水。

接着加盖3分钟。

现在打开盖，你马上就可吃到面了。

整个过程不到五分钟。

真的很容易，是吗?你亲自试试吧!

My Favorite Food 我最喜欢的食物

There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice.In China, most of the people in the south eat rice. And I like fried rice best.

It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that time I always make fried rice by myself. I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious. It makes me happy. After eating it, I am not hungry any more. Fried rice is my favorite.

世界上有许多不同种类的食物。我最喜欢的食物是米饭。在中国，大多数人在南方吃米饭。我最喜欢炒饭。

它真的很美味。当我从学校回家，我总是饿。那时我总是自己做炒饭。我经常认真地做饭，它是如此美味。它使我快乐。吃了它之后，我不再饿了。炒饭是我的最爱。

Cupcake 纸杯蛋糕

Last night, when I saw the TV series, I find a new food，that is the cupcake. The show shows me that the cupcake is just like the cake, but it is a little different. It is smaller and has many favors. So I go to the cake shop, but I can’t find the cupcake, then I learn that it is special. Only few shops sell it. I want to taste it.

昨晚，当我在看电视剧的时候，我发现了一种新的食物，那就是纸杯蛋糕。节目展示了纸杯蛋糕就像蛋糕一样，但是有点不同。它更小，有很多风味。所以我去蛋糕店，但是找不到纸杯蛋糕，我才知道纸杯蛋糕是比较特别的。只有一些小的商店才有。我想要尝尝。

巨大的水果味蛋糕 Huge fruit flavored cake

youll need the following: a cup of water, a cup of sugar, four large eggs, two cups of dried fruit, a teaspoon of baking soda, a teaspoon of salt, a cup of brown sugar, lemon juice, nuts, and a bottle of whisky.

你需要以下几点：一杯水，一杯糖，四个大鸡蛋，2杯干果，一茶匙小苏打，一茶匙盐，一杯红糖，一杯柠檬汁，一瓶威士忌，一瓶威士忌。

sample the whisky to check for quality.

样品的威士忌要检查质量。

take a large bowl. check the whisky again. to be sure it is the highest quality, pour one level cup and drink. repeat. turn on the electric mixer, beat one cup of butter in a large fluffy bowl. add one teaspoon of sugar and beat again.

拿一大碗。再次检查威士忌。要确保它是最高品质，倒一杯酒。重复。打开电动搅拌器，在一个大碗里打一杯黄油。再加一茶匙的糖，再打一次。

make sure the whisky is still okay. cry another tup. turn off the mixer. break two leggs and add to the bowl and chuck in the cup of dried fruit. mix on the turner. if the fried druit gets stuck in the beaterers pry it loose with a drewscriver.

确保威士忌仍然是好的。另一个有哭。关上搅拌机。打破二雷格斯和添加的碗和盘干果杯。特纳的混合。如果炸druit卡住的beaterers它撬松一drewscriver。

sample the whisky to check for tonsisticity. next, sift two cups of salt. or something. who cares? check the whisky. now sift the lemon juice and strain your nuts. add one table. spoon. of sugar or something. whatever you can find.

品尝威士忌检查tonsisticity。下一步，筛选双杯盐。或某事。谁在乎呢？检查威士忌。现在过滤柠檬汁和你的坚果。加一张表。匙。糖或某物。无论你能找到什么。

grease the oven. turn the cake tin to 350 degrees. dont forget to beat off the turner. throw the bowl out of the window, check the whisky again and go to bed

在烤箱中润滑。把蛋糕变成350度。别忘了击败特纳。把碗扔到窗外，再检查一次威士忌，然后去睡觉

鸡肉三明治 Chicken sandwich

1．First ,put the mayonnaise on a slice of bread .The cut u an onion and a tomato .Add these to the sandwich .Next ,put some lettuce and the chicken slices an the sandwich .Put the relish on the chicken .Finally ,put another slice of bread on the top.

1。首先，沙拉酱放在一片面包上。砍你一个洋葱和一个西红柿。把这些加在三明治上。接下来，把一些生菜和鸡肉片的三明治。鸡上放些佐料。最后，把另一片面包放在上面。

食品安全问题之我见 My View on Food Security

Over the past couple ofyears, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. Theprevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which thegovernment could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of thePeople Daily. -

在过去的几年中，几起食品丑闻案件已经在各种媒体上披露。全社会的食品安全问题已经成为一个热题。食品不安全的盛行已经大大影响了群众的健康，根据人民日报网络版，政府不应该忽视这一问题。

There are a couple of drivingforces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course ofthe rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to therising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulationand punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. -

我认为这一不良行为的背后有很多驱动力。首先，在快速的经济进化过程中，我们忽视了道德教育，从而导致了这一问题不断上升。更重要的是，缺乏足够的对那些非法生产者的监管和处罚加强了这一局面。

As Confucius instructed, itis better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turnback this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign toeducate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsiblecorporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I amfirmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy morerisk-free foods in the days ahead.-

正如孔子教导的，迟到总比不到好。我们应该采取及时严厉的措施来扭转这一不好的局面。政府应该发起大量的道德运动以教育所有的市民，并制定更严厉的法律打击那些不负责任的企业，并禁止他们再次进入食品行业。我坚信，通过我们的共同努力，我们一定会在未来的日子中享受更多的无风险食品。

人要时刻肩负责任

阅读下面的材料，根据材料涉及的基本内容写一篇文章，谈谈自己的感受。

一艘货船卸货后返航时，突然遭遇巨大风暴，老船长果断下令：“打开所有货舱，立刻往里面灌水!”水手们担忧：“往舱里灌水是险上加险，这不是自找死路吗?”但还是半信半疑地照着做了。虽然暴风巨浪依旧那么猛烈，但随着货舱里的水位越来越高，货轮渐渐地平稳了。船长告诉那些松了一口气的水手：“一只空木桶，是很容易被风打翻的，如果装满水负重了，风是吹不倒的。船在负重的时候，是最安全的;空船时，才是最危险的时候。”

[注意]立意自定。题目自拟。不少于800字。

【文题解析】：着重抓住最后船长说的话——负重是最安全的。

【佳作赏析】：人要时刻肩负责任

“船在负重的时候，才是最安全的;空船时，才是最危险的时候。”老船长的话揭示了这样一个道理：“人生亦是如此，只有时刻肩负责任，人前进的步伐才会坚实无阻。”

面对人生的挫折，只要我们有礁石般的守护的责任感，那么再大的风浪也只不过是过眼的浪花，面对海浪滔天，我们岿然不动;面对人生的风雨，只要我们有巨轮般执着的责任感，那么再肆虐的飙风也只不过是胜利的前奏，面对狂风骤雨，我们信步远航。是的，随时肩负一份责任，就有了刚韧不拔的意志风发。信步于人生的曲径，再大的风狼也只不过为行程增添几份豪迈。我们脸上始终挂着刚毅的坚强，拈花一笑。

责任或许只是杜甫的一句：“安得广厦千万间，大庇天下寒士俱欢颜!”身处贫境，仍念寒土，这是顶天立地的责任感。一语道破对天下的忧虑，一语倾出他广博的胸怀，正是杜甫这种忧国忧民的责任感，虽屡遭贬谪，怀才不遇已不沉沦;虽箪瓢屡空，环阻萧然，亦不改其志节。“出师表真名世，千载谁堪伯仲间!”感慨之中他抒出自己的志向;“何时眼前突兀见此屋，吾庐独破受冻死亦足!”呼吁之中他寄予自己的期望，恩泽后世无数书生骚客，教其以爱己之心爱人，甚至爱人超乎其己。沉重的责任感使杜甫勇于面对动荡的社会，用广博的胸襟容纳百川，他毅立为一座灵魂的高山!

责任或许只是史迁的“究天人之际，通古今之变，成一家之言”的目的。为到后世回望的眼神不再迷茫，为了搭起历史与历史精神的殿堂。史迁的坚持源于他的责任感，使他虽遭腐刑仍不彷徨。奋笔疾书，史删成岭，他成就了永恒的辉煌!

一个人的责任感不能用大小去恒量的，它涵盖了目标定格的角度，精神价值的尺度。它是范仲淹“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”的忧国，它是李密“乌鸟私情，愿乞终养”的忠孝，它是苏轼“壮年出使白发归”的愚忠;不管千古兴替，时刻谨记：天下兴亡匹夫有责。那么身边这些挫折在我们眼中还值得一屑吗?

架起生命的航帆，拿出礁石的坚韧，带上厚重的责任，迎着海风，勇敢向前吧!

妈妈：

您好！

妈妈，您能不能给我些休息的时间？虽然学习对小学生是最重要的，但是我也需要休息。您知道吗，2015年的冬天我连日本的雪猴都比上上，没有泡温泉、没有滑冰、更没有滑雪。

妈妈，您能不能给我些鼓励？在我考试没考好时，不要不停地唠叨我的错。如果您给我些鼓励，我就能更加努力地学习，下次拿个满分回来。

妈妈，您能不能让我多些自主权？我已经不是一个小孩子了，可以判断对错了，不要什么事都是您帮我干，害得我有时连一点小小的日常琐事都不能处理。

妈妈，我想我给您最好的礼物是以后做一个有用的人，相信我一定会如您所愿。

祝您工作顺利！

萌萌

3月18日

朝阳师范附属小学四年级:崔雨萌

妈妈生病了，整整一周都没去上班，连我的公开课也没去听，看着生病的妈妈，我心里很着急。

作为男子汉的我担负起照顾妈妈的任务，虽然我不知道妈妈得了什么病，但我发现妈妈经常用热水袋放在肚子上，感觉上好像舒服了许多，我就会在热水袋变凉时，拿起热水袋帮妈妈加热。如果妈妈想喝水，我就给妈妈端来水，如果被子乱了，我就帮妈妈铺一铺。有一天在五区，妈妈又需要热水袋，但是电热水袋忘在三区，刚好爸爸在家，我俩拿着老式热水袋就去装热水，可是烧水太慢了，我急中生智说：“不如去接水龙头里的热水吧。”爸爸摇了摇头说：“那的水不够热。”我脸上刚刚燃起的欣喜转眼间又变成了着急，就在我们干着急的时候，爸爸说：“干脆接饮水机里的水吧。”我说：“好。”我们父子俩一起上，不一会儿就接满了水，给妈妈送去。

经过这次事情，我长大了，会关心妈妈了，会体贴妈妈了，我感觉到了帮助妈妈是多么快乐、自豪。

地上本没有路，走的人多了，便也成了路。鲁迅先生的这句话包含着许多真理。学习之路也如他所说，有些本没有的东西，思考的人多了，学习的人多了，知识也就自成一体了。

“真难！不写了。”三四岁的我，在学习这条路上蹒跚着。学习新的知识，就是这路上的山丘。而我，就是一个刚学会爬的婴孩。“哎呀呀，我们家的孩子这么聪明，怎么就不会做呢？乖宝，你那么棒一定能做到地出来的。”妈妈在旁边神情夸张地说道。我点了点头，重新抓起躲在桌角的笔，奋笔疾书起来。

“碰！”我又从自行车上摔下来了。回头望望身后的爸爸，要溢出眼眶的生理盐水被我硬生生的憋了回去。重新站起，扶着自行车，，又开始了新的一轮学习。跌跌撞撞，磕磕绊绊，浑身是伤的我学会了骑自行车。“爸——，你看！”我兴奋不已。“碰”地，我又摔到了，我有些挫败，正要爬起。忽然，面前的光被一道身影遮挡住。是爸爸，他逆着光，向我伸出手，眼中是殷切的鼓励。我将手递出，爸爸稍一用力，我便被他拉起。一抹阳光，透过爸爸，找到了我的身上，暖洋洋的。

入秋，微凉。校道上的花草显露一片败迹。手里拿着的成绩单，一如枯萎的花草，一片败迹。我攥着成绩单的手因用力过度而泛白，眉头皱得出了深深的沟壑。迎面走来的，是老师，我想躲避老师。我赶紧转过身去。老师还是发现了我。她扫了扫我手里的成绩单，也不问我成绩如何。她用如三月春风的眼神望着我，我在这目光下竟渐渐放松。老师温柔地开口道:“我啊，以前考得不好了，也会一个人出来待着，不想其他的，望着这天，这地，操场上的人们充满活力的笑，我也就会重新充满能量呢。”说完，摸了摸我的头，径自走远了。

学无止境，顾名思义，学习之路永无尽头。这路，我们从落地降生开始走，白了头，一辈子也就在这路上了，。它太长了，如果孤身一人，在这路上注定是走不远的。一路上，我有家人，良师的陪伴、扶掖。路依是漫漫，我却也不孤单。

那是昨天发生的事情，妈妈生病了。爸爸在外地工作不能回家照顾妈妈。因此照顾生病的妈妈和调皮的弟弟就成了我的额外工作。

吃过早饭，我,带着弟弟去给妈妈买药,骑上电动车，带上弟弟就出发了,药店离我家有八、九百米,我低速行驶一会儿便到了药店。拿好药后飞一般的回家,把保暖瓶里的温水倒在碗里，把药递给妈妈。

让妈妈吃完药，我要做的任务只有看弟弟，时间过的真快呀，一会儿的工夫就该做中午饭了。这时我让弟弟在沙发上看会儿动画片，玩一会儿游戏，我到家旁边的超市买来的牛肉和土豆，葱，大料包和一个柠檬。我把土豆切成一小块一小块的，放在碗里，我在切牛肉的时候不小心刀划过手背留下了一个伤痕，我忍着疼继续做饭。

我把燃气打开，在锅里倒了一点油，油热后把八角等放进去，把土豆和牛肉倒进去翻炒，又往锅里倒了四碗水，等锅里冒泡的时候放入酱油、盐、大料包、葱、料酒，开小火慢炖。炖了一个小时香气飘出来的时候，关火，弟弟用筷子夹出一块牛肉，也顾不得烫，直说好吃，我把牛肉和土豆盛出来，香飘满屋，我把蒸好的米也盛出来，给妈妈送过去。妈妈说我长大了，会照顾别人了。那一刻，我觉得我长大了。

学习是一个指路标，它指引着我们前进的方向;学习是一个游乐园，让我们在快乐的同时学到知识。学习是我们人生中最重要的一课。

语文，就好比一个百花齐放的大花园，优美的好词好句就像一朵朵五彩缤纷的花，而我们则是这大花园中一只只勤劳的小蜜蜂。在语文中，我喜欢阅读和作文。优美文章中的每一个好词、每一个好句，都让我们心旷神怡;有些文章倾注了作者的所有感情，让人潸然泪下。阅读不仅能锻炼我们的理解能力，还能让我们囤积好词好句。作文能表达我们的真情实感。伤心时，写一篇短文泄泄情绪;愤怒时，写一篇议论文以表抨击;高兴时，就写一篇记叙文表达自己兴高采烈的心情······此外，我们的语文老师上课非常有趣，经常跟我们侃侃而谈，大讲特讲中国的历史;有时就一本正经地提出问题，让同学们解答，我们都非常喜欢他。因此，语文成了我最喜欢的学科之一。

数学有点儿令人望而生畏，因为它的神秘。可我觉得它就像一位博学广闻、和蔼可亲的老者。什么圆周率“PI”，什么加减乘除，都涵盖了许多方面的知识。数学就像一个活泼的小精灵，一会儿藏在书中，一会儿跑到超市的货架上，一会儿有显示在计算器上，变化多端，令人捉摸不透。在题海中扬帆起航，感觉还是不错的。我们的数学教师才27岁，上课常开玩笑，让原本枯燥无味的课堂变得其乐融融。所以，我们每次都会竖起耳朵聚精会神地听着。

体育无疑是最快乐、最轻松的一门课程了。同学们在操场上打篮球、打排球、跑步、跳绳，身体和心理都得到了极大的放松。

音乐，像一位能歌善舞的仙女;美术，是陶冶我们情操的训练场;英语，像一只百灵鸟;自然，是大地母亲的怀抱······;

书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。我们只有化压力为动力，才能在学习这条充满快乐却又坎坷不平的道路上走得更远、更踏实。

为了扎实有效地搞好作文复习备考，我们就几种常考题型加以具体分析并给以写作指导，希望考生能够从中获得启迪。

一、关系型话题作文

关系型话题作文是近年考试的热点。__年全国十五套考题就有十套是考关系型话题，__年全国十六套考题又有近一半是关系型话题作文，今后几年还可能会考及。

写好关系型话题作文要注意以下几点：

整体把握

首先对话题题干及对话题核心词的把握要有整体意识，要分析出彼此间的紧密联系。比如面对多个核心词的关系型话题作文，考生必须具有整体把握

理性思维

关系型话题作文对学生的理性思维

关系型话题作文要突出二者关系的同时，还应该有侧重，要分清楚矛盾的主要方面与次要方面，要善于敏锐地捕捉重点，敢于突出重点，做到两点论与重点论的统一。如__年高考全国卷话题作文“遭遇挫折和放大痛苦”，审题时考生当然应准确把握两个词组间的关系，但面对挫折，人们的选择有许多种，有人化解痛苦，有人放大痛苦，有人则以平常心视之。选择不同，人生的境界也大有高低。如果考生在审题时能以“遭遇挫折”为侧重点，能够从如何对待挫折这个角度切入去行文，而不是流于表面的在两者关系间泛泛而谈。那么文章将在深度和广度上得到有力的拓展。

二、命题作文

命题作文一直是高考作文的重要形式。从形式上看，命题作文一般没有明确具体的要求，看似宽松而自由，实际上它要求更高，写作起来也更难。因为其他作文在制定框框的同时，也往往或在审题上，或在立意上，或在选材上给你提供可供选择的信息，给那些“无话可说”“无东西可写”的考生开掘一下思路。命题作文则不同。它没有限制，也就无从参考，需要“另起炉灶”，在上述各方面动更大的脑子。

那么在考场上如何写好命题作文呢?

审文体

已规定文体的，按规定文体写作，如__年北京卷“说安”，要求自选角度写一篇议论文;两种文体均可的，选择自己擅长的、准备最充分的。近两年高考命题作文大多要求为“除诗歌外文体不限”，那么，考生就要根据平时作文得分情况考虑哪一种文体自己最拿手。比如__年高考重庆卷要求以“自嘲”为题写作，假如你擅长记叙，你不妨写一个善于自嘲的人的幽默故事;假如你擅长议论，你不妨分析评价鲁迅先生的自嘲本领，挖掘自嘲背后的无奈等。

未明确规定文体的，要审其隐含信息。带有“论”“谈”“说”一类字眼的，显然是议论文;带有“……记”字眼的，显然是记叙文体。同时还要看题目“最”适合哪种文体。有些题目，虽未规定文体，但仔细分析，往往有“最佳文体”。如《时间啊，时间》，写成记叙文或一般议论文都不够完美，如果学习高尔基的《时钟》，写成散文化议论文，就可以取得形象化的说理效果，而且还可以多角度、多侧面、多层次展开论述。又如__年天津卷“留给明天”，这个文题当然可以写成议论文，联系现实生活议论今天与明天的关系，提出怎样才算真正地为明天着想，批评一些人在政治上和经济上的短视。但最合适的文体莫过于记叙性的文章。不仅容易写出文采，而且构思上容易写出个性。

审立意

命题作文的审题，关键在于弄懂题目的含义。含义弄懂了，立意就有了方向性，有了基础。首先要分析题目的字面含义。其次是分析题目的语法结构，第三是分析把握题目中的关键词语，第四是挖掘其言外之意。如“留给明天”，主语、宾语的空缺，给了我们很大的联想、想象的空间。那么到底留什么给明天呢?留下时间?留下想象?留下遗憾?还是留下理想?留下和父母摩擦之后一直想说却没有说出口的道歉，清寒是青春期莫名甜蜜而又惆怅的情愫?今天享受前人成果的我们。又会给明天的子孙们留下什么呢?只要我们结合“留给明天”这个题目的结构特点，填补上这个主语、宾语的空缺，就会成功地化解这个大题、虚题，避免写得空泛、空洞。

又如辽宁卷“今年花胜去年红”，在这个题目中。“胜”就是“胜过”“超过”的意思，它实际上隐含着今天与昨天的对比。暗示着今天对明天的展望，而一个“胜”字，很斩截地告诉我们：世事在变化，时代在前进，无论暂时的情形是怎样的，我们的明天一定会更美好!所以这篇文章应该写得蓬勃乐观、积极向上，要肯定“今年花”的红艳度胜过去年。

立意方面还有两个很重要的问题需要注意，一要内容健康、充实，积极向上，杜绝不健康的庸俗的观点，特别是那腐朽错误的甚至是反动的观点。二要立意力求深刻新颖，同时，要处理好时代特征与传统继承之间的关系，不能一味地求新求活而失之偏颇。

三、给材料作文

材料作文(不包括漫画作文)是高考作文的重要形式，材料作文又是考生最感头痛，普遍反映无从下手的命题形式，有许多考生常常在这上面“栽了跟头”，出现较大的失误。其失误往往不是出在谋篇布局或语言表达上，绝大多数是审题立意上出了偏差。

材料作文，所给材料一般包括题干、基本素材和要求(包括注意事项)三部分。所谓审题，必须对这三方面做深入、仔细、全面的分析。这个分析，是“精读”，而非“略读”;是反复揣摩，而非不经意的浏览。立意在文章成败中的决定性作用决定考生必须在审题上使出很大的精力和一定的时间，考生要宁愿在审题上多花一点工夫，拿准了再动笔，也不要仓促上阵，写到“半截腰”发现立意错误再返工。精读意识、研究意识、揣摩意识必须牢牢树立在每位考生头脑中。

如何写好给材料作文呢?

分析挖掘本质

有些材料，原文并没有具体的议论，只有形象的甚至是零碎的语句。这就需要考生透过这些词语，分析挖掘它所包含的深层意蕴。如__年上海高考文题，材料较多，审题的时候便需要多花一份力气。其实，大量的材料完全可以用一个话题来概括——文化生活与青年一代的成长，不能把选材统一到这上面来，就应该算作偏离题意了。材料中的提示是“需要对当今的文化生活作一番审视和辨析”，所以，写作的时候不宜对武侠言情小说、流行歌曲、卡通等做简单的肯定或否定，而应当结合社会需要、现实状况以及自己的亲身经历进行深入分析。可以谈谈金庸、梁羽生、古龙等小说对你成长的影响，可以谈谈琼瑶、三毛作品给你成长的启迪，可以谈谈高晓松、老狼的校园民谣对你成长路上心灵的撞击，可以写变形金刚、奥特曼动画片等给你童年带来的愉悦，而今这种心情的变迁。当然，水平更高、视野更的同学应该深入分析到这些流行文化所带来的深层影响和产生原因，从未来青年文化素养培植的角度冷静地评价它。

提炼概括观点

有些作文材料，特别是寓言和故事，它并不给你提供现成的观点，需要考生自己去提炼概括。这时可运用分析综合法。以1995年高考全国卷《鸟的评说》这首寓言诗为例，“麻雀说燕子是怕冷的懦夫，燕子说黄鹂，徒有一身美丽的装束……苍蝇说麻雀寸光鼠目”。材料虽然很长，但仔细对每一种鸟的表现进行分析、概括，就会发现，它们犯了一个共同的错误。看问题的方法有问题。只看到人家的短处，看不到人家的长处。应该怎么办?答案是显而易见。于是论点出来了：不要只看到人冢的短处，不要求全责备。换一种角度看问题……

如__年湖北卷，提供的材料是清末学者王国维的一段论述。试题要求考生根据这则文字谈感悟，一直到结尾也没有给出话题，但这并不等于什么都可以写。因为仔细理解，材料中实际上仍然包含着一个隐蔽性的关系型话题——入乎其内和出乎其外。所以，只有在这样一个范围内谈自己的认识，阐明各自的内涵和两者的关系，在实际生活中找到事例加以佐证，才应该说是正确理解了材料。

四、独字题作文

近两年高考出现了一种新的题型，即文章的标题只有一个字，如__年上海高考文题“杂”，__年上海高考文题“忙”，我们把它叫做“独字题”。独字题一般词义明白清楚，看起来很简单。但由于没有修饰和限制，题目本身在文体、立意、选材以及其他方面没有任何导向，写起来往往要比多字题困难，尤其在审题和选材上难度更大，如何写好独字题作文呢?不妨从以下几方面人手：

辨别词性，确定文体

词性对文体有一定的制约作用，写前可以根据不同的词性来确定文体。一般来说，是动词的适宜于写记叙性文章，如《悟》《悔》《醒》《求》《盼》《恋》《追》《诱》《考》等，像《悟》这个题目，就可以通过一个具体事件的叙写，并领悟其包含的道理。是名词的，大多数是跨类题，即可以写成记叙类的。也可以写成说明类或议论类的，如《路》《虹》《窗》《桥》《锁》《镜》《药》《蚀》《雾》《煤》等。可根据自己掌握的材料、理解的深度、文体的特点和要求等方面而决定。

了解特性，把握内涵

一个可以作为题目的字，它的内涵往往是多方面的。既有它本质特性方面的意义，又大都有它比喻、象征方面的意义。如__年上海高考文题“杂”，其内涵是相当丰富的，它既可以指具体事物的杂乱无章，也可以指情感的复杂多变，也可以指形势或矛盾的纷纭繁杂。在审题时，要尽可能了解得广一点，使自己有广阔的选择余地。

五、看图作文

看图作文题提供的主要材料不是文字，而是有一定意义的图画。作文的要求是把图中用线条、色彩描绘出来的形象及包涵在形象之中的思想感情用语言文字表达出来。写作时要注意以下几点：

仔细观察画面。这里所谓画面形象，包括画面上描绘出来的人物形象(面貌、表情、服饰、动作等)和景物、器物。看图时，要抓住人物、景物和器物的特征，对画面上提供的每一个细节都不能轻易放过。

领会把握主旨

要做到这一点，就必须在仔细观察画面形象的基础上。弄清人物与人物、人物与周围事物之间的关系。只有这样，才能体会到作者通过形象描绘表达了什么样的思想感情。

发挥联想想象

对于看图作文，联想想象极其重要，这是图画材料自身的特点所决定的。图画它只表现事物一瞬间的形态，不能像文字材料那样描述事件发生发展的连续过程，不能像文字材料那样多侧面地刻人物，不能直接地表达思想和抒发感情。一些抽象的事物，如“社会风气”“道德水准”等，文字材料可以很方便地传达给读者，图画材料则难以胜任。正是图画材料的这些特点，决定了作文者必须根据画面上提供的线索，展开合理的联想和想象，进行种种必要的增补，这样才能做到上下文联贯，故事情节完整，人物形象具体丰满，主题思想鲜明突出。

语文作为一门基础学科，涉及的知识面特别广，上下五千年，纵横八万里，古今中外，天南地北，无所不包。因此，语文不是随便就可以学好的，非下苦功夫不可。我们在学习语文时，要把握好四个字，即“趣、积、记、练”。

一、趣——培养浓厚的学习兴趣

孔子云：“知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。”兴趣是最好的老师，热爱是求知的向导。其实语文知识本身就具有无穷的趣味。那奥妙无比的表意文字、形象生动的修辞方法、跃然纸上的人物形象、扣人心弦的故事情节，都能引起我学习语文的浓厚兴趣。只要大家用心去学，兴趣便会自然产生，随着兴趣的增加，相信大家的知识也会逐渐的丰富起来。

二、积——养成良好的积累习惯

荀子日：“不积跬步，无以至千里;不积小流，无以成江海。”语文知识浩好烟海，学习语文不是一朝一夕的事情，更不可能一蹴而就。要学好语文，关键是在平日里一点一滴地去积累，日积十，月积百，年积千千万。“驽马十驾，功在不舍”，只要你坚持下去，日积月累，你的语文水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

三、记——掌握适用的记忆方法

有人说：“要想出口成章，须得成章入心”。这话很有道理。识记是学习语文的重要途径。只有不断的记忆，方能积累，方能丰富。汉字词语的音形义，流传千古的名言警句，古今中外的名家作品，都需要你熟记于心，只有这样，才能答卷如行云，下笔如有神。

四、练——提高能力的基本途径

郑燮云：“千磨万击还坚劲，任尔东南西北风”。听、说、读、写是语文学习的四项基本功，必须苦练，方能提高。一口流利标准的普通话，一手美观漂亮的硬笔字，一篇感人肺腑的好文章，一次震憾心灵的演讲，都要通过坚持不懈的刻苦训练才能实现。考场百分钟，场外十年功。只要你平日勤学苦练，一定会在语文这方面取得不俗的成绩。

但是仅仅掌握了这四个字的要领还不够，上课的时候还要认真听讲，要努力消化老师所讲的知识，有时候老师的一句点拨，胜过我们课后想半天。所以要珍惜课堂上的每一分钟时间。

努力吧，同学们!有付出就会有回报，只要我们认真去学，我们就一定会有收获。愿大家在旭日东升时奋斗，而不是到了夕阳西下时才去追悔。

internet slang be prohibited (互联网俚语应该被禁止……)

目前，一些诸如gg, mm, xia mi 等网络语言在青少年中极为盛行，并且出现在家庭作业报告，甚至全国入学考试的作文中。请你以 “should internet slang be prohibited (禁止)?”为题，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。

一些同学认为网络语言生动、时尚，网络语言充满幽默与智慧，使网上聊天更快捷。

另一些同学认为，网络语言缺乏思想性，没有被大部分人理解、接受，过多使用使人不解，甚至误解。

你的看法?

注意：

1. 短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数;

2. 词数：100左右

3. 参考词汇：生动的vivid;智慧intelligence

should internet slang be prohibited?

at present, internet slang, such as “gg, mm, xia mi”， has become popular among the teenagers.

there are different opinions on internet slang. some students think internet slang is vivid, fashionable and full of humor and intelligence. besides, it makes chatting on the internet quicker.

however, some other students think internet slang lacks depth of thought and is too simple. also, it is hard to understand and not accepted by most people. the words sometimes might make people confused, even resulting in misunderstanding.

every coin has two sides. in my opinion, living in the information age, if we don’t know the internet slang, we seem to fall behind the times. it will be ok as long as these terms are used correctly in proper situations.

导语：“光盘行动”倡导厉行节约，反对铺张浪费，带动大家珍惜粮食、吃光盘子中的食物，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

某英文网站举行专题征文活动。请根据下图，结合自己的生活实际，写一篇120-150词的英语短文。

注意：简要描述图片，并陈述自己的观点。

范文：

As is shown in the picture, two men had a big dinner in a restaurant, but much of the food was left and some was even untouched at all. When the waitress asked them to pack the remaining food, they felt very surprised, thinking that it was unbelievable for them to do things like that with too much money in their pocket.

It is a pity that many people act like the two men in the picture. In my view, we should pack the leftovers when we have meals outside. As we all know, saving is a fine tradition for our Chinese people and therefore we shouldnt waste a bit food. Also, there is not enough food in the world and there are many people starving. In addition, we students should form the habit of saving food and give away some to the people in need. Finally, we have the responsibility to help people around us realize the importance of saving.

Only in this way can we build up an economized society and live a happy and healthy life.

【参考译文】

如图所示，有两个人在一家餐馆里吃了一顿丰盛的晚餐，但剩下的大部分食物都没有了，有的甚至一点也不动。当女服务员要求他们把剩下的食物打包时，他们感到非常惊讶，认为他们在口袋里做太多的钱是不可信的。

可惜的是，许多人的行为像两个人在图片。在我看来，我们应该把剩菜打包当我们在外面吃饭。众所周知，储蓄是中国人民的优良传统，因此我们不应该浪费粮食。此外，世界上没有足够的食物，有许多人挨饿。此外，我们学生应该养成节约食物的习惯，并给有需要的人送一些食物。最后，我们有责任帮助身边的人认识到节约的重要性。

只有这样我们才能建立一个节约型社会和健康愉快的生活。

解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1.问题现状

2.怎样解决（解决方案的优缺点）

In recent days，we have to face I problem——A，which is becoming more and more serious. First，——（说明A的现状）。Second，——（举例进一步说明现状）

Confronted with A，we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing，——（解决方法一）。 For another ——（解决方法二）。 Finally， ——（解决方法三）。

Personally， I believe that ——（我的解决方法）。 Consequently， I‘m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ——（带来的好处）。

审题就是对题目要求进行全面、具体的分析，准确领会其含意，把握写作方向和要求，切忌片面理解，顾此失彼，舍本逐末。一篇文章在审题上站稳了，这篇文章的大方向就把握住了，写起来一般不会出太大问题。

一、审题的关键是准确

审题首先要逐字逐句地把作文题全面、细致地读清楚，同时注意关键字词，把这些关键字词反复咀嚼并仔细揣摩，还要细读命题中的“要求”或“注意”，并把它们全都体现在文章当中。考场上，怎样才能做到准确审题呢?审题的过程与构思作文又是一种怎样的关系?

1.审清“标志”，确定文章体裁

审题首先是确定文章体裁。一般情况下，每种体裁的文章，都有它自身的“标志”，抓住了体现体裁“标志”的关键词语，就可以确定所给题目属于哪种体裁，应写成什么体裁的文章。

2.审清要求，确定文章范围

审题不仅要确定文章的体裁，还要确定题目所划定的范围。在题目所给的范围内选材，才能使文章内容切题，重点突出。

3.审清“题眼”，确定写作重心

审题还要根据题目所给的条件来确定文章的重点，而确定文章重点的关键就是抓住“题眼”，比如关键词、重点句、暗示语等。把握住了“题眼”，也就把握住了文章的重点。

4.审清因素，确定文章内容

用“戴着镣铐跳舞”来形容考场作文可谓形象而熨帖。这个比喻已经形象地告诉大家，考场作文是一种选拔人才的考试，它有自己的规则，不可能让你信马由缰、天马行空，因此，拿到题目后，务必三思而后行，切忌草草了事。另一方面，只要我们认真地去审题，使作文题意明确和观点鲜明，完全是能够做到的。

审题年年有，年年有跑题。之所以出现这种现象，有时是因为考生的态度不够端正，缺少了一点耐心和细心。因此，审题时一定要端正态度，做到耐心、细心，力求快速、全面、准确。

阅读下面的材料，根據要求写作。(60分)

2019年2月，四川乐山一组雕塑中，右手在上、左手在下的“拱手礼”引发质疑。文史专家陈洪认为，雕塑施礼方式有误，拱手礼从揖礼演化而来，行礼时应右手成拳，左手在上，表示压住了具有攻击性的右手来表达善意。

2019年2月，甲骨文手机表情包已经成为斗图圈的“新宠”。设计者将几何化的甲骨文字转化成更加直观形象的动物，再配上时尚的网络用语，整组表情就像是一套五彩的、可爱的甲骨文动态识字卡片，让每个甲骨文字的图案意义一目了然。

传统文化是历史的产物，弘扬优秀传统文化对丰富当代人的精神生活具有重要意义。根据以上材料，请你谈谈应该如何弘扬传统文化。

要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要套作，不得抄袭;不少于800字。

【文题解析】

优秀传统文化既是民族复兴的精神动力，又是建设先进文化的重要基础。坚定文化自信，弘扬优秀传统文化，意义深远，使命神圣，任重而道远。“文章合为时而著，%歌诗合为事而作”，该命题与新时代主题共振，视角宏大，能充分发挥高考“立德树人”的导向功能;又贴近实际，综合考查学生的思想道德素养和科学文化素养。

作文题由两段材料构成，谈的都是当代人对中华优秀传统文化的传承。第一段材料是反面事例。四川乐山的雕塑“拱手礼”引发质疑，根据文史专家陈洪的说法，可知雕塑的施礼方式是错误的，可以看出是设计方忽视了对拱手礼的考证。所以传承优秀传统文化，要保持一颗敬畏之心和认真学习的态度。

第二段材料是正面事例。甲骨文手机表情包成为斗图圈的“新宠”，一是因为有神秘的甲骨文、亲民的设计、直观的动物形象、时尚的网络用语，又有图案与意义的完美结合;二是借助先进的技术手段和运作方式，甲骨文表情包借助手机成为一种沟通和交流的网络资源。

本题写作的具体任务是“如何弘扬传统文化”，写作时应综合材料内容及含意，归纳材料提供的写作方向，并联系当下弘扬传统文化的实际，选好角度，确定立意。

假设你是李华，你的英国网友Peter希望了解一下我国高考英语试卷（NMET）中的“短

文改错”（Error Correction）题型的情况。请你写一封回复邮件。并特别强调自己某一次因为没有严格按照要求答题被扣掉了本可得到的7分。

注意：1．词数100左右

2．内容请参照本卷该大题内容。

3．生词：（打）勾：tick 分：point 逻辑（的）：logic

Hi, Peter:

Thanks for your e-mail. Here I’m going to tell you what you asked about.

Error Correction, as the 1st section of Written Part of NMET, mainly tests the mastery of the use of words and grammar of English. The understanding of the given text is course important to the performance.

There are 10 numbered lines, each of which may have one mistake. You have to decide firstly whether there is a mistake or not. If not, put a tick in the numbered blank. If there is a mistake, you may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change word. You have to find out the mistakes in the use of words and/or grammar. Sometimes there may be a logic problem, which would be the most difficult.

Last time I got 7 points less than expected. Why? I didn’t put the answers strictly following the rule, although I did know how to do it.

Anything still unclear? Just write to me.

嗨，彼得：

谢谢你的邮件。在这里我要告诉你，你问。

误差校正，作为高考英语笔试部分第一部分，主要测试词汇和语法的掌握英语的使用。对文本的理解是很重要的。

一共有10株，其中可能有一个错误。首先你要确定是否有错误。如果没有，空格的空白。如果有一个错误，你可以添加一个词，划掉一个字，或改变的话。你要找到的词语或语法错误使用。有时可能会有一个逻辑问题，这将是最困难的。

上次我得了7分，比预期的少。为什么？我没有把答案的严格规则，虽然我不知道如何去做。

还不清楚什么呢？就给我写信。

我很想像其他同学一样一起进步，但是不知道为什么，只看见其他同学飞快的进步，我却在原地踏步踏。

这是我非常苦脑，我下定决心，为了能进步，我一定要改正我对学习的态度。

每天做作业时我总是写一个字看一看，写得好不好，每次我总要看看我的姿势正不正确做完我还会检查一遍，看有没有错的，以前我重不这样，我总是乱写一通，来骗老师，骗自己，因此董雪香的黑名单上总会有我的名字，我每天都会被批评，罚抄课文，现在董雪香的黑名单上不会再有我的名字了，老师也不会来找我的麻烦了。

为了能更快的进步，我每天坚持复习到11点才睡，我想比别人进步得更快，比别人学得更多，回答问题比别人更快，我一定会坚持不懈的复习。

为了能进步，现在我开始读起了榜中榜获奖作文，我想让自己的作文有更大的进步，写作能力逐渐提高，能写出精彩作文。

为了能进步，为了比别人更快的进步，为了能得到老师的认可，为了我能赢在起跑线上，我要找到进步的方法，我要努力去进步。