高中英语作文我的家乡哈尔滨（精彩20篇）

Lush, without it; Flowers bloom, without it, my hometown. It is no majestic Yellow River, and not on the bottom of the lijiang river; It is not the majestic mount tai, overlapping nor xiangshan red as fire, have the beauty of of primitive simplicity, unique beauty.

Speaking of my hometown, it is not famous town, but also has a charming scenery.

Spring home, in the full YanZhuang. You look! The branches have been slightly out of cyan, of azalea purples, outside the window began to hear birds chirp, is that the bird is singing the songs of spring! A little under the rain, in my hometown pastoral, everything is unripe brightness, beautiful. Under the sun, the hometown of stream was more limpid, ripple, with a golden light. Hometown spring is vibrant, energetic.

The summer home, covered with green light qiao summer gown. The honey bees are busy in the early morning. In the afternoon, cicadas in the trees of nights. Night, the crickets sing in the grass. Hometown has a pond, lotus was flourishing, dragonflies flying, is really "xiao-he only expenses furore, early have a dragonfly made from above. Hometown of the children in the lotus pond heartily enjoy joy: swimming, fishing, catching shrimp, lotus root.

Hometown of autumn, wore a gold red solemn evening dress. Home, in the field is full of red fruit. , falling leaves on both sides of the street, rustling, issued a "rustling" sound. Hometown of autumn is the season of maturity, it is the season of harvest, is a full season, it was the season of planting.

Hometown in winter is very beautiful, but no snow float in the sky of the elegant scenery, magnificent scenery throughout all the land of snow, but the whole qing river, past the old Bridges, decorated with home.

Spring in the summer, summer ushered in the autumn, autumn ushered in the winter, winter ushered in the spring, my hometown in the changing seasons, but his place in my heart is always the same, he is always the first, because I love my hometown at the four seasons, and my hometown.

This is my hometown - jiangmen.

郁郁葱葱，少不了它;百花争艳，少不了它——我的家乡。它虽没有浩浩荡荡的黄河，也没有清澈见底的漓江;它虽没有峰峦雄伟的泰山，也没有红叶似火的香山，却有着古朴的美，独特的美。

说起我的家乡，它虽不是名镇，但那里也有迷人的景色。

春天的家乡，穿起了万紫千红的艳装。你瞧!树枝上已微微露出了一些青色，一串串杜鹃花姹紫嫣红，窗子外面开始听得见唧唧的鸟鸣了，那是小鸟正在唱着春天的歌儿呢!下过一阵雨后，在我家乡的田园里，万物生辉，美极了。在阳光的照耀下，家乡的小溪显得更加清澈，微波荡漾，泛着金色的光。春天的家乡显得生机勃勃，富有活力。

夏天的家乡，披着青葱轻俏的夏衣。清晨，蜜蜂忙着采蜜。午后，知了在树上长鸣。夜晚，蟋蟀在草丛高歌。家乡有片池塘，荷花开得正旺，蜻蜓满天飞，真是“小荷才露尖尖角，早有蜻蜓立上头”。家乡的孩子们在荷花池里尽情地享受欢乐：游泳，摸鱼，捉虾，采藕。

秋天的家乡，穿着金红色的庄严的晚礼服。家乡的田野里，到处是金红的果子。大街两旁的树叶，萧萧地落下，发出“簌簌”的响声。家乡的秋天是成熟的季节，是收获的季节，是充实的季节，也是播种的季节。

家乡的冬天很美，但没有雪花飞扬的风雅景色，大雪遍地的壮丽风光，惟有那一条条清秀的小河，一座座古老的小桥，装饰着家乡。

春迎来了夏，夏迎来了秋，秋迎来了冬，冬迎来了春，故乡的四季在变幻，但是他在我心中的地位是永远不变的，他永远是第一位，因为我爱我故乡的四季，和我的故乡。

这就是我的家乡—江门。

The traffic problem is one of themost serious problems in my hometown. Recently, more and more people have privatecar, but the roads are so narrow that we have to fight against the heavytraffic when we go out. Especially during the rush hours, cars and buses areunable to move. To make things worse, many people are killed in the trafficaccidents. How miserable it is!

在我的家乡交通问题是最严重的问题之一。现在越来越多的人拥有私家车，但道路却是如此的狭窄，所以我们出门的时候都必须和交通拥挤对抗。尤其是在繁忙时间段，汽车和公共汽车都动不了。更糟的是，许多人在交通事故中丧生。那是多么悲惨的啊!

For the sake of our life andsecurity, some measures must be taken to change the present situation. In thefirst place, as there are a great many cars, we should control the number ofprivate cars and vehicles and use the public transportation more often.Secondly, the government should widen the roads and build more flyovers, so asto ease the traffic pressure and reduce the traffic accidents. In addition, theundergrounds and light rails should be constructed, so that we can have morechoices when going out and do not have to worry about the traffic jams in thefuture.

为了我们的生命和安全起见，我们必须采取一些措施来改变现状。首先，因为有很多车，所以我们应该控制私家车的数量，更经常使用公共交通工具。其次，政府应该拓宽道路，建造更多的立交桥，以缓解交通压力，减少交通事故的发生。此外，应构建地铁和轻轨，这样我们将来外出时可以有更多的选择也不用不必担心交通堵塞。

I believe the traffic problem couldbe solved if we devote our actions to them.

我相信如果我们采取行动的话交通问题是可以解决的。

As a child, I am so luck. I don’t need toworry about food. I always have enough delicious food, live in a big house, andhave beautiful clothes to dress. I am so happy that I have no idea to treasureall these things.

I am a kind of particular about food. I often eat a littlefor one dish and the throw it away, because I have many choices.

I will be fullafter eating several dishes. But one day, I watch a piece of news on TV.

It isabout some Africa children who are suffering starvation. They are so poor.

Theyare not only having no food to eat but also having little water to drink. A bowlof rice is very rare for them.

Seeing their longing eyes, I feel guilty. I amregret about wasting food before.

How can I waste so much rare food? From nowon, I will try my best to save food, to do something for them.

作为一个孩子，我是如此的幸运。我不用担心食品的问题。我总是有充足的美味食物，住在大房子里面，穿着漂亮的衣服。

我是如此的幸福，所以我都没想过要珍惜这一切。我可以说得上是挑食的人。

我经常吃一样菜只吃一点点，然后就扔掉了，因为我有很多的选择。吃了几道菜后我就会饱了。但是有一天，我在电视上看到一个新闻。

那是关于正在遭受饥饿的非洲儿童。他们是如此的可怜。他们既没有食物也没有多少水可以喝。一碗白饭对他们是那么的弥足珍贵。看到他们那双渴望的眼睛，我感到很内疚。我很后悔一直在浪费食物。我怎么能浪费那么珍贵的食物呢？从现在开始，我会努力节约粮食，为他们尽一份力。

[高中英语作文：节约粮食

China has long been known as “the land of ceremony and propriety.” Today however people often complain that public morals are no longer what they used to be. A family for example likes a cell of society which also mirrors the general mood of a country. As we know the Chinese have very strong family ties. But with the emergence of a “modern” concept to families people find that problems like high divorce rate and extramarital affairs become more serious than ever before.

Another example: the name of Lei Feng who was always ready to lend a helping hand to others used to be known by almost all Chinese as a model to learn from. But today some people claim that “the spirit of Lei Feng” is outdated. Fashionable ideas say money talks. In the early stage of the market economic development the appearance of some evil phenomena is not surprising. But we should not sit passively by and let it run rampant. Instead active measures should be taken to improve morals and ethics of the public.

Personally the media should play a leading role in this regard. They should spare no effort to praise the good and criticize the evil. They should guide people how to tell the truth goodness and beauty from the fault ugliness and evil.中国素有“礼仪之邦”的今天，然而，人们经常抱怨公共道德也不再是过去的样子了。一个家庭，例如，喜欢一个社会的细胞，这也反映了一个国家的一般情绪。正如我们所知道的，中国人有很强的家庭关系。但随着家庭的“现代”概念的出现，人们发现问题的高离婚率和婚外情变得比以往更为严重。

另一个例子：雷锋的名字总是愿意伸出援助之手给别人，被称为几乎所有的中国人作为一个模型来学习。但今天，有人声称“雷锋精神”已经过时了。时髦的想法说钱谈判。在市场经济发展的初期，一些恶现象的出现并不令人惊讶。但我们不应该被动地坐着，让它横行。相反，应采取积极的措施来改善公众的道德和道德。

就个人而言，媒体应该在这方面发挥主导作用。他们应该不遗余力地赞美善和批判邪恶。他们应该引导人们如何从错误、丑陋和邪恶中讲真话、善和美。

The Spring Festival,Chinese New Year,is the most important festival for all of us.All family members get together on New YearEve to have a big meal. At the same time,everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 oclock,some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly.We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is!

On the first early morning of one year,many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door.Some houses windows are sticked on red paper cuttings.The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days.

So during the fifteen days,we always visit our relatives from door to door.At that time,children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents,grandparents,uncles,aunts and so on.

The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival.It names the Lantern Festival.So the Chinese New Year comes to the end

In my hometown, the air is polluted seriously. However, in recent years,

the pollution gets from bad to worse, because of the increasing number of

private cars. Especially during the rush hours, too many private vehicles move

slowly on narrow roads, emitting a large amount of waste gas. Moreover, the

poisonous gas sent by the nearby factories is also one of the main causes of

pollution. Therefore, it’s demanded that immediate and effective measures must

be taken to restrict private cars and public transportation must be developed to

the largest extent. Besides, we should use renewable and clean energy

recourses.

In everybody’s eyes, I am a good girl, because I make the good marks in the exams and help my parents to do things. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I follow my parents’ words. I don’t think that to do something goes against the adults is the wise choice, but I do want to do something new. Recently, I want to cut my hair and make the short style. My mother doesnt agree with me, because she thinks a girl should have the long hair. This time, I insist on my idea. Finally, she supports me. Trying something new makes me feel happy and be myself. The short hair makes me look like a cool boy and I like this style. My friends admire me to have the courage to change my image.

我的家乡马鞍山是一座美丽的小城，它位于长江下游南岸，是安徽省的东大门。马鞍山历史悠久，因楚汉战争时，楚霸王项羽战败后自刎，乌雅马思念主人，马鞍落地化为一座山而得名。这里山美，水美，人更美。

马鞍山享有“九山环一湖，翠螺出大江”的美誉。佳山、雨山、慈嵣健⒋笄嗌降染抛笊较袷侵诙嗔徵缣尥傅谋κ阕涸诔鞘械闹芪АＩ讲辉诟撸邢稍蛎Ｂ戆吧降纳剿蛭毯松詈竦娜宋钠⒍挥猩５蓖康拇笄嗌绞悄掀氪笫诵惶髯钪影牡胤剑衫畎滓苍谡饫锪粝铝宋奘Ч琶洹

九山之中，最美的要数翠螺山了。远远望去，它就像一枚青螺，伫立在长江之中，正如唐诗“遥望洞庭山水色，白银盘里一青螺”中描写的一模一样。最奇妙的还是下雨天，山上一片雾蒙蒙的，仿佛置身于仙境一样。夏天，翠螺山像一位仙女，用她的衣袖拂去路人的炎热与烦躁。翠螺山上还有许多著名的景点：林散之艺术馆、延园、万竹坞。。。。。。游人在这里登高望远，流连忘返。

马鞍山的山美，水也美。城中间的雨山湖好似一颗碧绿的明珠，让这个小城显得越发的美丽。湖边到处是大树参天，鸟语花香，使人仿佛置身于远离喧嚣的森林中。你看，雨山湖的水真清啊，清得可以看见湖里的小鱼；雨山湖的水真静啊，静得像一面大镜子。我真想抓一块石头打个水漂，又生怕破坏这幅漂亮的画卷。公园的周围有很多宽阔的草坪，这里四季常青，老人们、孩子们有的引吭高歌，有的草坪起舞，有的下棋遛鸟，一派悠闲自得的样子。

马鞍山山美，水美，人更美。如果你来作客，好客的马鞍山人一定会用长江鲥鱼、刀鱼、金毛蟹还有采石矶茶干招待你，欢迎你来作客！

My hometown is in the northeast, where there is a lake called "jingbo.

In the spring, the willows of the jingbo drew new yaren, bamboo shoots also emerge from the ground. The animals are awake: frog crawling around, waiting for the arrival of the summer; The little squirrel jump around, to look for food to the...

Summer, jingbo is full of vitality. Round the lake decorated with all kinds of small stone, stone is covered by green moss. The green of little noise in the grass, the quietly open a flower, for these made up a simple wreath. Water is so clear, can see the lake sand. There are fish in the water. May be it is because there are fish, so drew green duck. Each duck holding the bottom jump into the water, the frog also called on the lotus leaf.

Autumn has come, the maple leaves fall. Leaves fall around the perimeter of the lake, like only butterflies. The weather gradually turned cold. Frogs, turtles, green ducks are returned to the cave.

Finally look forward to in the winter! Its snowing. A gust of wind blowing, diffuse to a layer of mist on the horizon. Heavy fog, not as long as its snowing. After a while, just like white snow began to fall. First and falls, then gradually expand, flying, the earth covered with a layer of "silver". A piece of white between heaven and earth.

Ah! These are beautiful! I love these!

我的家乡在东北，那里有一个湖叫“镜泊湖”。

春天，镜泊湖旁的柳树抽出新芽儿了，竹笋也从地里钻出来了。动物们都苏醒了：青蛙爬来爬去，等待夏天的到来;小松鼠跳来跳去，去找吃的去了……

夏天，镜泊湖充满生机。湖的四周镶嵌着各种各样的小石头，石头上还覆盖着嫩绿的青苔。那绿的没有一点儿杂色的草，那悄悄开放着的花朵，给镜泊湖编了个朴素的花环。水是那样清，清的能看见湖底的沙粒。水里还有鱼。可能正是因为有鱼，所以引来了绿毛鸭。一只只鸭子抱着屁股往水里跳，青蛙也在荷叶上叫个不停。

秋天来了，枫树掉叶子了。叶子掉在湖的四周，就像一只只蝴蝶。天气逐渐变冷了。青蛙，乌龟，绿毛鸭都回山洞去了。

终于盼到冬天了!下雪了。一阵风吹来，从地平线上漫来一层轻雾。雾重起来，没有多久就下雪了。过了一会儿，就下起了白花般的雪。先是零零落落，后来逐渐扩大，横飞过来，给大地披上了一层“银装”。天地间一片洁白。

啊!镜泊湖真美!我爱镜泊湖!

My hometown is a small village in Chaoyang County of Liaoning province. If you come here, the countless festival customs will make you open your eyes. One of the most popular and favorite festivals is the annual Spring Festival in my hometown.

The Spring Festival has always been paid attention to, so the preparation for the pre Festival is also a long time, usually one month or half a month before the festival. During this period, people will always catch up with the big collection. The people coming back from the collection must be big bags of small balls, just like a big move, and those packages will have money hanging, couplets, some tobacco, sugar, tea and so on. The Spring Festival is six or seven days from the time, the hostess will take home are cleaned inside and out, clean and neat, so as not to give the guests a bad impression. One day before the Spring Festival, people were busy. The morning is posted paste antithetical couplet, register fund, at noon the hostess will be a sumptuous meal to invite two parents, one family enjoyable, fun. The night is more lively, eat dumplings and set off firecrackers, lamps and candles of a myriad families crowded.

The genius of the Spring Festival is a real buzz. On this day, people are busy getting up early to prepare breakfast, "for", everything must be careful, not negligence. The laobiye offerings are better than we eat dinner. First of all, right in the middle of a big plate, or put on three with red spots Steamed Buns, or put a plate of dumplings, and two small plates on both sides of large plate on it, put some orange, apple, and sugar, and incense to incense constantly, listening and speaking this one family can bless peace throughout the year. To finish for Lafayette, we can eat a meal. Dumplings are this day will eat meals, but not less packets must eat, the rest is good, which means "May there be surpluses every year". After dinner, we all want to put on new clothes, new shoes and socks, which represents the "new year". People will go to visit high streets and back lanes during the day, they see the elders to see knock, and comes with a spring festival!" And now this kind of custom has been forgotten by people. This day is also the most children a happy day, because not only can follow their parents to go to the door, enjoy a good treatment, but also can get lots of gift money. Theres a lot of money. If you want to buy anything, youll be happy. Children can not be punished by their parents even if they make mistakes, because it is the Spring Festival, and they are all festive and do not care about those unhappy things.

One month after that, relatives came to my house every two or three days. I was the happiest person because I could eat delicious food again. This is the time when people get the fastest weight, because they have a good date every day, so people begin to worry about their body.

Although I am now studying in a strange land, I cant go home very often, but I always cherish the memory of the Spring Festival in my hometown. That lively scene even missed the hometown that I raised for over ten years.

With the development ofscience and technology ,different kinds of pollution has been produced andcaused global concern recently.

As we know, people have beenliving on the earth for thousands of years, human activity damaged natural environment, such as excessive abuse of natural resources ,the sewage dischargedfrom factories ,the animal slaughter ,kinds of chemical fertilizers andgreen-house effect. All that is mentioned above has a bad impact on the eco-system .Now, many animals aredying out. We are suffering from unhealthy food and water, we are faced withharmful rays and global warming. It was ourselves who had made a series oftroubles. As you can see, we are the final victim.

Above all, if we human beings cannot recognize theseserious problems and try our best to solve them soon, we would finally lose theenvironment suitable for us to live. So, it is our duty to protect theenvironment ,but what should we do to protect it?

In my opinion, the first and important thing is tounite all forces ,that is to say---gather all hearts together. Next we shouldprotect and plant more trees, which can dispose of the dust in the air. As forfamilies, it is effective to ride bicycles rather than drive cars. Don’t litteranywhere as you like. In addition, sorting and recycling the rubbish also playan essential role in the protection of our earth. We’d better call on everyone aroundus to lead a low-carbon life, as it may make a difference to the environment.

Thus, it’s high time that we did something to improveour surroundings. Everybody should raise the awareness to protect our motherearth. Let’s appeal to more people to join us.

All in all ,there’s no doubt that keeping the balanceof human and nature ,we will benefit a lot.

the beijing zoo is the largest in asia and one of the largest in the world. there are hundreds of different kinds of animals in it.

we can see yellow, green, orange and brown birds, which can sing nice songs. the elephants have a long nose and big ears and they are kind to humans. we can also see big and little monkeys running and dancing, just like happy children. pandas, with good manners, are very friendly and polite to visitors. we will certainly have a good time there.

My father is a great person. He is a hero in my heart. He is tall but not strong. He is a driver. He often talks a litte and seems that he is serious. Actually, sometimes he is real serious. In my memory, he never hits me except once. It is because I ignored their forbidding to go swimming in the river alone. I was so sad as my father hit me. But now I understand that it is because he worry about me. Moreover, although our family is not weathy, he will give all the things that I want to me. And he works hard to support our family. I know that he loves us and we also love him.

余秋雨先生在《霜冷长河》中说：“有水相连的遥远是忧伤，而有山峦阻隔的遥远是绝望。”家乡没有通往远方的河流，所以乡亲们不曾忧伤；虽然层层的山峦阻断了视野，但乡亲们并没有绝望，祖祖辈辈不断开拓，路，不断伸向远方。

爷爷说，路是远方和大山深处的通道，家乡的路，很久远，很绵长。即使爷爷用他的一生去回想，也描述不尽家乡所走过的路的绵长。爷爷坐在家门口那饱经岁月沧桑的老梨树下，靠着躺椅，眼神迷离地看着村口三条向外的路，跟我讲述家乡的路的历程。

爷爷小时候问祖爷爷，天有多大？祖爷爷回答：就你看到的那么大。于是，爷爷认为四周的山便是支撑天的柱子，而天就是扣着村庄的伞盖。从那以后，爷爷就渴望着找到路，爬上山顶，去看看天，但从山脚到山顶嶙峋的怪石阻碍了小小的他。待他十二岁那年，村里人组织起来翻山越岭挖了一条如蛇形的狭窄小路，小路通到了镇上。爷爷第一次牵着马儿驮着十几斤玉米籽卖了5角3分钱，花了整整一天的时间，但爷爷却激动了一个星期。

后来，日本鬼子的铁蹄践踏了华夏大地，十六岁的爷爷和同伴沿着那条弯曲的小路走向远方，走上了抗日救国的道路，把日本人赶走后，从战争中幸存下来的爷爷作文带着荣耀踏上了归途。路依旧没有改变，经历了疯狂的文革之后，忽然有一天，四周的山猛烈颤动，狗四面叫，鸡八处飞，原来是政府在放炮开路，一年半后，三尺多宽的路将深山里的村庄与外面的世界接通了。爷爷说，那是改革开放后的第十五个年头，爷爷牵着马到县探访了他的战友。2003年，群山再次震颤，伴着挖土机的轰隆声，村里的娃子们好奇地围着中午停工的挖土机转来转去。2006年，爷爷笑眯眯地搭着汽车去看望嫁到城里的小姨，回来时感叹了一次又次。爷爷看着那三条路，一条比一条直，一条比一条宽，一条比一条远，我看到他眼中饱含着一种叫做泪水的液体，他闭上眼，嘴角衔着笑说：“真想永远这样看着村里的路通往更远的地方。”

家乡的路越变越好，乡亲们的日子越来越红火，一家接一家地建起了新楼，一人走得比一人更远。我也沿着家乡的这条路，到了镇上读了初中，今天我已坐在县高中明亮的教室；明年，我即将站到了高考的门槛，我相信，我会沿着家乡的路把自己的人生演绎得更加美丽、更加精采。

家乡的路啊！是你，带给了爷爷幸福的感想；是你，带给了乡亲们崭新的希望；是你，把我带出了深山，一步一步走近我的理想，走向更远的地方。

My hometown no places of interest, no busy bustling metropolis, no waves of the sea. But I still deeply in love with my hometown. There are thick woods, there are also contend in beauty doo-yan wild flowers, and grass tenacious vitality. Can be seen everywhere in the rows of houses not neat, like a winding ups and downs of the waves.

Spring coming, hometown scenery especially beautiful. The grass stretch and a yawn, emerged from the dirt, leaves sprout up, too. At that time, the lovely swallow flew back from a distance, chattering under one roof, as if to say: "here is a good place, here we are a home!" Flowers blinked his pair of big eyes, curiously looked at all the world. The children take off the thick cotton-padded jacket, free to play on the grass, singing and dancing, happy like a free bird.

When the hot sun hot summer comes, a green watermelon let people go to chan mouth water. When the children came to the brook, took off his sandals, soaked feet in the river, the clear river water enabled us to forget about the heat.

The golden autumn season, pomegranate like a red lanterns hanging on the trees. The autumn wind blowing, the rice layers on the golden waves, especially beautiful. This time of year is the busiest time of the adults: rice and cotton ` ` ` ` ` ` although they have been too tired to breath, but depend on their face hung the joy of harvest.

Winter, the earth covered with a layer of thick quilt. Friends to chase in the snow, make a snowman, snowball fights ` ` ` ` ` ` is really fun!

I love my hometown, the home of this beautiful, simple!

我的家乡没有名胜古迹，也没有繁华热闹的都市，更没有惊涛骇浪的大海。但是我依然深深地爱着我的家乡。这里有茂密的树林，也有争妍斗艳的野花，还有生命力顽强的小草。随处可见的一排排房子高低不齐，像一条条蜿蜒起伏的波浪。

春季到来，家乡的风景格外美丽。小草伸伸懒腰，打着哈欠，从泥土里钻了出来，树叶也冒出了新芽。这时候，可爱的燕子从远处飞了回来，在一间屋檐下叽叽喳喳地叫着，好像在说：“这儿是个好地方，我们在这里安个家吧!”花儿眨着那双水灵灵的大眼睛，好奇地打量着这个世界的一切。孩子们脱下了厚厚的棉袄，尽情地在草地上嬉戏：唱着、跳着，快乐得像一群自由自在的小鸟。

当烈日炎炎的夏季来临时，绿油油的西瓜让人馋得直流口水。这时孩子们便来到小溪边，脱掉凉鞋，把脚浸在河里，清澈的河水使我们忘掉了炎热。

金秋时节，石榴像一个个红灯笼挂在树梢上。一阵阵秋风吹过，稻子泛起一层层金色的波浪，格外美丽。这个时节是大人们最忙的时候：收稻子、收棉花``````虽然他们已经累得喘不过气，但他们脸上依赖挂着丰收的喜悦。

冬天，大地盖上了一层厚厚的棉被。小伙伴们在雪地里追逐、堆雪人、打雪仗``````真是其乐无穷!

我爱我的家乡，爱这个美丽、朴素的家乡!

There is a saying that man proposes, god disposes, which means man plan the

things and the rest of the outcome lies in the luck. This saying reflects the

connection between hard-work and luck, which is though sometimes we have worked

so hard, luck occupies great position, the unexpected things happen and refrain

us from succeeding. In order to be successful, people work so hard, they believe

they can achieve their goals, but lacking luck stops them achieving their goals.

So working hard doesn’t mean bringing people success directly, they just need to

try more times, without luck, they still can make their goals. Luck can help

people close to success, without hard-work, they can’t be successful. Hard-work

and luck make people realize their goals, but without luck, people still can

make it by trying more times.

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

Today was Saturday, early in the morning, I woke up and stayed at home the whole morning to watch TV. After finishing my lunch, I had nothing to do, so I decided to call my friends out. I headed to the coffee shop which was near a square.

There were a lot of people in the square, some women were dancing and singing, while some men were taking the chess. I walked into the coffee shop, chose a table which was near the window, so that I could see the outside scenery.

When my friends came, we talked happily, we shared the things that happened during these days.

Then all my pressure was relieved, I forgot about the annoyance on my study. At that moment, I was enjoying the time talking with my friends. I had the great time this afternoon.

今天是星期六，一大早，我就起床了，整个上午，我都呆在家里看电视。

在吃完午饭后，我没有什么事情去做，因此我决定叫我的朋友们出去。我前往一家广场附近的咖啡店。广场里有很多人，一些女人在唱歌和跳舞，然而一些男人在下象棋。我走进了咖啡店，选择了一张近窗口的桌子，这样我就能看到外面的风景。

当我的朋友们来了以后，我们聊得很愉快，分享了在这段时间发生的事情。然后我所有的压力都得到了释放，我忘记了学习上的烦恼。在那个时刻，我享受着和朋友们聊天的时光。今天下午我度过了愉快的时光。

[高中英语作文：午后时光

when my teacher told me to prepare for this competition i restated, hesitated.everybody in my class knows that. i never learned english in my primary school.i couldn’t speak english one year ago, but now, could i take part in this competition? no, i can’t. is aid to myself? i’m afraid ofmaking mistakes before so many learned professors and before my classmates and teachers.sud- denly!

a voice came to my ears.“everybody will make mistakes. even the very famous american president george bush” my english teacher said in my class.when i heard that, i think i can. i runinto my teacher’s office happily. “i will do it.” i said. so i stand here today. in front of you.

My hometown is in xiushui county, jiangxi province, there is a beautiful place. Trees all the year round, flowers in full bloom.

Spring, connect dressed in colorful dress, lightly stepped onto the stage, she put the long sleeves, shrub land were stained green. Connect and dainty hand weave beautiful flowers, to go to the audience. Flower fly to the green earth, fly to the green trees, instantly, between the green leaves of green compose full of flowers.

In summer, the hot sun baked the earth mercilessly. The cook was JiaoFa very hot, the ground seemed to have been a huge steamed over, make a person to breathe. But, this is the charm of summer, it let me have a kind of place oneself in the warm feeling.

Autumn is a harvest season, look, on the apple tree in the orchard, one is big and red apple crowded high up in the tree. The grapes of the vine tree and violet is big, it seems, is flow saliva. The pomegranate tree full of red pomegranate on, them one by one to get, if carelessly will fall down.

The breath of winter quietly came to earth, he will blow the world turned white; He a blow off the goose feather snow; A blow to the people to love for the winter; It blows the trees the clothing to blow away; It blows... .

My hometown is like an exhibition hall, the beauty of spring, summer, autumn and winter even show come out, I love my hometown!

我的家乡在江西省修水县，那里是个美丽的地方。一年四季树木茂盛，鲜花盛开。

春天，春姑娘穿着五彩的霓裳，轻盈地走上了舞台，她把长袖一挥，大地上的草丛树木都被染上了绿色。春姑娘又纤巧的手编织出一朵朵美丽的小花，向台下撒去。鲜花飞向绿色的大地、飞向绿色的树木，立刻，嫩绿的翠叶间缀满了朵朵鲜花。

夏天，火热的太阳毫不留情地烤着大地上的一切。大地被烤得发焦发烫，地面上仿佛被一个巨大的蒸笼罩住了，使人透不过气来。但，这就是夏天的魅力所在，它让我有一种置身于温暖中的感觉。

秋天是个收获的季节，看，果园里的那棵苹果树上，一个个密密麻麻又大又红的苹果高高地挂在树上。那棵葡萄树上的葡萄又紫又大，看起来，可真叫人流口水。那两石榴树上结满了红彤彤的石榴，它们一个个挨挨挤挤，好像一不小心就会掉下来。

冬天的气息悄然来到人间，他一吹将整个世界变成了白色;他一吹吹下了鹅毛般的大雪;他一吹吹来了人们对冬天的喜爱;它一吹把树木的衣裳给吹掉了;它一吹……。

我的家乡好似一个展览馆，把春夏秋冬的美景依依展现出来了，我爱我的家乡!

People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.

My preference depends on the purpose of the travel. On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path along a river or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus. net

When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot.

[最好的旅行方式高中英语作文