高中英语作文我的家乡哈尔滨（实用20篇）

Today is Monday; I wake up at 6 o’clock in the morning. Then I have my breakfast at home and take the subway to school. I am quite excited about this day, because our chemistry teacher will teach us to do an interesting experiment. This experiment is about how to create soap. Last week, the chemistry teacher promised that we would have something fun in this week. Making our own special soap is the mission in this class.

今天是星期一，我早上六点就起床了。再吃过了早餐之后，我搭地铁去学校。对于今天要做的事情，我很兴奋。因为我们的化学老师要教我们做个有趣的实验。这个实验就是如何制作肥皂。上个星期，化学老师向我们保证这周会做个有趣的实验，而创造出属于自己的一块肥皂就是这次课的主要内容。

When the experience begins, the whole class is very exciting; we mix the oil, water and lye. You need to be very careful, because the lye is harmful to the skin. Then we will stir the oil and lye for about ten minutes, the chemistry reaction will make the liquid into solid. Then the soap comes into being. Although the process is tired, we have a lot of fun. The most important thing is we learn how to make soap. The time passes so quickly, we feel very busy but learn a lot of useful things.

当实验开始的时候，整个班级都很兴奋。我们把油、水和碱液混合在一起。你必须非常小心，因为碱液会腐蚀皮肤。然后我们就开始搅拌液体。大约10分钟过后，发生的化学反应就把液体变成了固体，肥皂就形成了。虽然这个过程很累，但是我们得到了很多乐趣。最重要的是我们学会了如何制作肥皂。时间过得太快，我们感觉很忙碌，但也学到了很多有用的东西。

My hometown is located in a very beautiful place. It was once a green city. But now it is becoming dirtier and dirtier. Lots of buses are running on the streets and plenty of factories are built around my hometown so that the heavy smoke is the most usual view there. Besides, more and more trees are cut down, as a result, we can not hear the birds singing in the blue sky. But I still love my hometown like before. It is in the place that I was born. So I hope that we can take action to change our hometown into that beautiful place like before.

我的家乡坐落在一个非常美丽的地方。曾经是一个绿色的城市。但现在是越来越脏。许多公共汽车在街道上行驶，许多工厂都在我的家乡建造，因此，浓烟是最常见的观点。此外，越来越多的树木被砍伐，因此，我们不能听到鸟儿在蓝天上歌唱。但我还是爱我的家乡。它是在我出生的地方。所以我希望我们可以采取行动来改变我们的家乡，像以前那样美丽的地方。

我的家乡在黑龙江省望奎县，是一座农业小城，虽然这里没有什么名胜古迹，更没有奇珍异宝，不能与大城市相提并论，现在望奎县已经有了翻天覆地的变化。

小时候，妈妈对我说：“儿了，你不知道啊！原先的马路可是土路，有时候一过马车就尘土飞扬，人们一路过就呛的都不行了，那时候从家里都没有什么电视机、电风扇、电灯，只有一个人家就有一台黑白电视机，挂墙上一到晚上人们都领着孩子拿着小板登一家三口人去那个有电视的人家去看电视，那时候她只有两件衣服，得她哥哥、姐姐穿完她才能穿都缝过补丁了。她天天走着走，走到学校上一会课，老师就说：“集体，抬手，跺脚”，要不然太冷了。

现在人们都过上了好日子了，家家户户都有了液晶电视、电脑和电风扇······。查阅资料很方便了，人们也能睡上舒服的大床，自己家都有一台小轿车，上学也方便了。如今，人们也住上了楼房，我们学校原先是土房，现在是砖房，原来吃的是大饼子，现在大饼子都不爱吃了，都是大米饭、鱼、鸡肉、排骨······等许多食品。

如今人们的生活好了，高速公路代替了泥泞的古道，破旧的土房变成了幢幢厂房，儿童乐园充满了欢声笑语，彩灯喷泉装的像仙境一样。我要好好学习把望奎县建设的更加美好。

Many people regard money as the most important thing in their life, but I dont agree with them. There are so many things that money cant buy. The first, money cant buy us knowledge, abilities and experience. The second, money cant buy us a happy mood and a good health.

However, money plays a significant role in our daily life. We cant live without it, because we have to use money to buy our daily necessities, like food, drinks, clothes, books, and so on. And we also need money to pay for our houses and education.

All in all, we should have a correct concept of money. We cant live for money, but take it as a tool leading a better life.

The after-class activities in my school are colorful. Every day we play basketball, football, do rope skipping and so on. But I like the Month of Science and Technology and the Cultural Festival most. In those days, we have a chance: to show ourselves to all the students. We can invent something with some classmates. And we can act in a play or make a speech or take part in the competition of singing. I enjoy myseff in those activities.

我们学校的课外活动丰富多彩。每天我们打篮球、踢足球、跳绳等等。但是我最喜欢科技月和文化节。那时我们有机会向所有学生展示我们自己。我们可以和其他同学一起做小发明。我们还可以表演、演讲或参加唱歌比赛。我非常喜欢这些活动。

Good morning! My name is Somiar, and my Chinese name is Lu Ziyan. I’m from the Second Experiment Primary School in Jinyun. I study in Class 3, Grade 5. I like my teachers and classmates. And I like my family, too. That is a lovely family. There are three members in my family---my father, my mother and me. My mother is a teacher, my father is a cook. They all love me, and I love them, too. You see, I’m a lovely, easy-going and kind girl. I like reading books, singing songs and playing computer games, and also I’m fond of speaking English with my English teacher, Miss Chen. Because I like English. Do you like English? Do you love me? I hope I can not only improve my English but also make more friends by the speech.

早上好!我的名字是Somiar，我的中文名字叫卢紫嫣。我是来自缙云第二实验小学。我在5年级3班学习。我喜欢我的老师和同学们。我喜欢我的家庭，太。这是一个可爱的家庭。在我的家里--我的父亲有三个成员，我的妈妈和我。我的妈妈是一名老师，我的爸爸是一个厨师。他们都很爱我，我爱他们，太。你看，我是一个可爱的，随和，善良的女孩。我喜欢阅读，唱歌和玩电脑游戏，我也喜欢我的英语老师说英语，陈小姐。因为我喜欢英语。你喜欢英语吗?你爱我吗?我希望我不仅能提高我的英语，但也让更多的朋友的演讲。

Today, I’d like to talk about my hometown---Lishui. I love my hometown. It’s a beautiful land in the southwest of Zhejiang. It’s famous for green mountain and clean water. It’s the first country pictured in China. There are many great places of interest in my hometown, such as Sendo, Nanming Mountain, East-west Rock and so on. Every years, many people come to visit Lishui and take some beautiful photos. And you can see the photos in some books. How beautiful! Have you been there? It’s a pity really, if you not.

今天，我想谈谈我的家乡---溧水。我爱我的家乡。这是浙江西南部的一个美丽的土地。这是著名的绿山和干净的水。这是第一个国家在中国的照片。在我的家乡有很多伟大的名胜，如仙都，南明山，东西岩等。每一年，很多人来溧水参观、拍照。你可以看到一些书的照片。多么美丽!你去过那里吗?遗憾的是真的，如果你不。

Do you know Ou River? It’s a river of people’s life. It keeps running and running all the year round, just like a lively horse. There are many resources and special products in my hometown, like Qingtian stone carving, Longquan double-edged sword and Qingyuan mushroom. Do you know them? All of them are famous in the world. How cool! I love my hometown. It’s getting more and more beautiful now. One day, I think it will be the centre of shopping as well as traveling.

你知道欧江吗?这是一条河的人们的生活。它不停的奔跑一年四季，就像一个热闹的马。我的家乡有很多的资源和特殊的产品，比如青田石雕，龙泉宝剑、清远蘑菇。你认识他们吗?他们都是世界上著名的。多酷!我爱我的家乡。它变得越来越漂亮了。有一天，我认为这将是购物中心以及旅游。

Would you like to visit my hometown? I hope to see you soon. “One world one dream.” Let’s have a great time in my hometown Lishui.

你想去参观我的家乡吗?我希望不久能见到你。“同一个世界同一个梦想”。让我们在溧水度过一个美好的时间。

That’s all. Thank you!

这是所有。谢谢你!

Spring is my favorite season. In spring days, everything comes out. While

you are walking outside, your eyes will be filled with green.

In spring days, our world is a sunny place, which is covered with green

trees and colorful flowers, so it can be described as a paradise. Especially

when you are in the countryside, you can see green mountains, vast fields, clean

streams, and all the living creatures, coexisting harmoniously. All of them make

up the most beautiful picture in the world.

In spring days, the sun shines brightly, and theres also some pleasant

breeze. So how charming it is while feeling the spring wind blow us. Its also

wonderful to enjoy the beautiful sunshine. You will also get a lot of

refreshments while having a walk outside.

I hope we can enjoy the life of spring every day.

参考翻译

春天是我最喜欢的季节。春天一切都发芽了。在外面散步，眼睛里看到的都是满满的绿色。

在春天，我们的世界是一个充满阳光的地方，到处都覆盖着绿色的树木和色彩缤纷的鲜花，所以它可以说得上是一个天堂。尤其是当你在乡下时，你可以看到绿色的山，广阔的田野，清澈的小溪，和所有的生物和谐共存。所有这些组成了世界上最漂亮的画。

春天，阳光灿烂，还有一些令人愉快的微风。所以感觉到春风吹过我们的时候该是是多么的令人陶醉。也是享受美丽的阳光时候。你也会觉得恢复精力当你到外面走一走时。

我们希望我们可以享受春天的每一天生活。

Movie is my favorite that I always watch movies when I am free. Since I like English very much, so the English movie is my favorite, too. Among so many films I have watched, the one I like best is High School Musical. This film tells the stories about two high school juniors from rival cliques – Troy Bolton, captain of the basketball team, and Gabriella Montez, a beautiful and shy transfer student who is a hard working girl. Together, they try out for the lead parts in their high school musical. In this process, a series of stories happen, but in the end, the musical achieves great success and Troy and Gabriella fall in love with each other. It’s totally a happy ending. I like this movie because the high school life in that is so colorful and amazing, which I admire so much. Besides, everyone loves happy ending of love story.

我喜欢电影，平时有时间的时候我一般都是看电影。我非常喜欢英语，因此英语电影也是我喜欢看的。在我所看过的电影中，我最喜欢的是《歌舞青春》。这部电影讲述了两个高中生的故事——学校篮球队的队长Troy Bolton和性格害羞、长相甜美、成绩优异的新生Gabriella Montez。他们要一起主演学校的音乐剧。在这个过程中，发生了一系列的故事，而最终，音乐剧获得了成功，他们之间也碰撞出了爱的火花，完美落幕。我喜欢这部电影的原因是因为电影中展现的高中生活丰富多彩、奇妙无比，让我十分羡慕。再者，有谁不喜欢爱情故事的大圆满结局呢。

A Day in the Zoo

There has been a long time for my family not to go out for the activity, because my father is busy all the time. But last week, my father finally finished his project, so that he could take a rest for some time. My father advised us to go to the zoo, I was so excited, because I hadn’t seen many animals in my life. In the zoo, there were so many people, it was so lively. I saw the monkey, the giraffe and so on. I saw these animals in the TV usually, but I saw them in front of me that day. The peacock impressed me so much, it looked homely when it laid down the ground, but when it stood up and opened the wings, it was so gorgeous. People said peacock was proud, indeed, it would not please people. I had a good time in the zoo.

对于我的家人来说，我们已经有很长一段时间没有外出活动了，因为爸爸总是很忙。但是上周，我的爸爸终于完成了他的项目，所以他能休息一段时间。爸爸建议我们去动物园，我很兴奋，因为我目前还没有看到过很多动物。在动物园里，有很多人，非常热闹。我看到了猴子，长颈鹿等等。我平常在电视上看到这些动物，但是那天我亲眼看到了。孔雀给我的印象很深刻，在它躺在地上的时候，看起来很普通，但是当它站起来，打开翅膀，是那么的美丽。人们说孔雀是傲慢的，确实，它不会取悦人们。在动物园里我度过了一段美好的时光。

[高中英语作文动物园一日游

I am very familiar with my hometown, I was impressed by the clarity that is the bottom of the river because it has good memories of my childhood. There are many in the riverbed of the small fish and small stones, they are often hiding in a rock, then you can rock to hold down the small fish will swim in the future while you rock hands on just after the fish swim in your Your hands

Handy to be able to fish the arrested, but sometimes you encounter the clever fish grasp it, because you rock hands on it after the tour has been a long, so we devised a method: From the store,

Lane bought firecrackers to fish, but sometimes the fish will be killed, I will be arrested and a number of friends will come to fish with Charcoal. First of all, we will pick a piece of local fish would be a good pick if there is no fire and then we have to look around a number of stone

Head circumference of a circle, to find some of the fire burning matches, take a fish in the final tool to let the fish go, then garnish salt and MSG, the delicious baked fish at once, if we caught fish will not eat From home with some of the corn

, And some sausage to grilled vegetables. Since that fish every time we come here to play.

Each year we will be in a small river in the bamboo forest to play, we will hand with two bamboo, and then turned himself in the future, no one who is more than double the victor. Sometimes we will play with stones in the river bypass the requirement is up

Solid and often beautiful I always win, although I take a slow, but I use my patience to win the game.

I love you beautiful river!.

The Pregant Teenage Girl

Recently, a girl who was born after the year of 2000 showing a picture of her pregant image in Weibo. This teenage girl wrote down the words that she was busying giving birth to a child for her so called husband, who was also a teenager. Soon this picture became the hot issue. People were so shocked by the girl’s young face, which looked so innocent and she was just no more than 16!Such a young girl surely did not have the ability to raise a kid, what’s more, they even did not figure out the meaning of responsibility. The problem of family education was brought to the public again. The root of young pregancy lies in the parents’ caring. The lack of communication between parents and chidren is easy to have such problem. It is not appropriate to have baby at such early age.

最近,一个出生在2000年后的女孩在微博展示了她怀孕的照片。这少女写下一些话,她忙着为所谓的丈夫生孩子,他丈夫也是一个少年。很快这张照片成为了热点。人们如此震惊于这位女孩稚嫩的脸,她看上去很天真,不超过16 岁!这样一个年轻的女孩肯定没有能力抚养孩子,更重要的是,他们甚至没有弄清楚责任的意义。家庭教育的问题再次被带到公众面前。如此年轻就怀孕的根源在于父母的关怀程度。父母和子女之间缺乏沟通很容易有这样的问题。如此小的年纪就有孩子是不合适的。

[高中写人英语作文

一次就好、陪您看天荒地老。--题记

又一次来到故乡，重温这熟悉的味道，很久没有回来过了，看到的一切都觉得陌生。土灰色的砖瓦、粗壮的大树、破旧的木门、漏雨的茅屋、还有那房门前静静等候的六旬老人，一束光从上面斜射进来，暖暖地照在我们身上，还有那外面知了的叫声，整个构成了一和谐的乐曲、有节奏、有韵律、或许正是因为心里的暖，使夏天也让人觉得不那么的烦躁，反而更多的是那一份安谧和宁静。使记忆仿佛回到了儿时那美好的时光，我们在地面上追逐，奔跑、没有让人省一点心、大人们都快急得口冒烟了、我们却依然笑得如此灿烂。那时候的我们多单纯、多可爱啊！转眼、已经过去十年多、回过头来看、真是令人难以忘怀。在家里闲不住的我、起身想去外面走走、透透空气。正好、太阳也差不多要下山了、不是很晒、习惯性地又走到了那棵大树前、它记载了很多我童年的回忆、为我们遮风挡雨、陪我一同走过了十五个春秋。我们小时候特别喜欢在它树底下捉迷藏、玩老鹰抓小鸡。

如今、我们都已经长大了、它也长高、长壮了。成为了一棵参天大树、笔直地挺立在那里、就像一名战士誓死守候自己的家园一样、显得那么威严。我轻轻地用手触碰了一下它、感觉它又增添了好多的皱纹、正如爷爷脸上那被岁月划下的痕迹。顿时心里有了那么一丝丝凉意、手在不经意间碰到了一个硬硬的东西。只知、凑近一看、才发现原来是蝉蜕。我伸手、将它与树分离、它真的好轻。我把它举到眼前仔细端详了一下。这真是个极其精心的东西。棱角分明的头、线条刻画得十分细致。我很不解、蝉是怎样从这个仅仅只有一毫米厚的壳中钻出来的、而且没有一点破损、真的是令我震撼不已。后来、我才慢慢了解到蝉这种生物、蝉从卵开始就一直被被深埋地底。也许是一种一直被遗忘的生物吧！但是、它从来就没有放弃过一个梦想重见光明。也正如我们三年的苦读、只为自己有一个好的未来。

天空渐渐地穿上了深蓝的礼服、一轮月亮、如小船般、高高悬在天际。空明清澈、皎洁的月光照射下来。照亮了曲径分岔的小路、小草、小花、它们都睡去了、沉沉的睡去了。宁静的夜、唯有月儿深深浅浅地在天海中若隐若现、是不是在月下格外思念。也对、如此寂静、空明、澄澈的月色照亮了多少无眠的心。那么大岁数的爷爷、还总是喜欢种很多的蔬菜、来劳累自己。都说了要他不要那么辛苦、这些菜买又不用很多的钱。可他却总是像个顽皮的小孩一样、不肯听。下午的时候、我去菜园里逛了一圈，菜长得郁郁葱葱。我们要走时、他还要提很多的菜让我们带带回去吃、不论我们怎样推辞、他都还是坚决要给我们。没办法、总不能辜负老人家的一片心意啊。我们便乘车回去了。关上思念的闸门、抬头望去、那一轮明月依然皎洁、天空还是那样清澈、干净。飘着几片云儿、依稀几点星星、亮晶晶的。虫儿低吟、清风徐徐、似乎带走了我的祝福、让上天保佑吧！你一定会长命百岁的、一定。这就是我们做儿孙们最大的心愿了。

再美好的东西、也经不住遗忘；再悲伤的东西、也经不住时间。--后记

[家乡的味道1200字高中生高分作文

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is

rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had

no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken

place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals,

cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is

greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard

so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

Sichuan is located in the Upper Yangtze Valley in the southwestern part of the country. The second largest of the Chinese provinces, it covers an area of 220,100 square miles (570,000 square kilometres). Szechwan is bordered by the provinces of Kansu and Shensi to the north, Hupeh and Hunan to the east, and Kweichow and Yunnan to the south and by the Tibet Autonomous Region to the west and the province of Tsinghai to the northwest. It is the most populous province in China. The name Szechwan means “Four Streams” and refers to the four main tributaries of the Yangtze River, which flows through the province. The capital, Cheng-tu, is located in the centre of the province.

From economic, political, geographical, and historical points of view, the heart and nerve centre of Szechwan is in the eastern basin area, commonly known as the Sichuan, or Red, Basin. Its mild and humid climate, fertile soil, and abundant mineral and forestry resources make it one of the most prosperous and economically self-sufficient regions of China. The area has been seen by some as China in a microcosm and is often viewed as a country within a country. The Chinese call the basin Tien Fu Chih Kuo, which literally means “Heaven on Earth”.

家乡是一幅山水画。 ——题记

四季

春雨蒙蒙。朦胧的雨犹如一支绿色的笛子，吹着灿烂的音符，飞出深深浅浅、柔柔嫩嫩的层层绿意。远山如眉，微微耸起，似微嗔，纷落的雨潮湿了它的思念。

夏夜宁静。树端的叶子，以凛然不动的姿态显示自己的坚贞；池塘里的蛙语，在畅谈一个美丽的童话。你坐在我身旁，如一朵清荷，默默地数着星星。

秋晨清凉。秋风，带走了满树绿色的眼睛，只留下枝丫间徘徊的失望和叹息。几朵雏菊，探在墙角，含苞轻放，盈盈笑颜，醒人眼目。冬雪漫漫。那些美丽洁白的影子，又从遥远的天国飘来。天地间所有的故事，都因这凝固泪滴的濯洗而变得圣洁无瑕。月光婆娑的夜晚，有无怨的心语。

风光

山水相依，沟壑纵横，丘陵相连。家乡名不见经传，所以山也平常，水也平常，平常到不经意间就把它们忽略了。

家乡的山大多不是很高，没有诗词里那份“会当凌绝顶，一览众山小”的豪迈气魄；也不似江南的山，郁郁葱葱，钟灵毓秀。祖祖辈辈的汗水浸透之后，山上山下有了四季轮作，山背上的一行行深深足迹里，承载了春的希望和秋的收获。

家乡的河曲曲折折，蜿蜒蛇行，犹如一根透明的带子，把星罗棋布

的池塘水库连成一串。阳光折射，清澈见底的河床有鱼虾嬉戏；垂柳掩映，宁静的水面宛如家乡的女子一般，温文尔雅，随风泛起细碎的涟漪。啊，那就是家乡，我魂牵梦萦的地方！

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

Once Chairman Mao said one is never too old to learn, his famous words inspire people to keep learning all their lives. Since we are small, we study at school, then we have to learn until we are at college, after graduate from college, we finish our education in the school.

Then the new stage comes, we start to work, making money, learning knowledge seems unnecessary to us.

This is totally wrong, we learn all the time, even we are out of school, we have lessons from life.

Life is a big topic, we have to learn it all the time. We have to deal with trouble, learning to make friends and accept fail.

All these things we will not learn at school, we have to learn by ourselves, we are students and teachers. If you think you finish learning after school, you are narrow minded.

毛主席曾经说过“一个人要活到老学到老”，他的著名话语激励着人们终身学习。

当我们还小的时候，我们在学校学习，然后直到大学前，我们都要学习，大学毕业后，我们完成了在学校的学习。然后新的阶段到来，我们开始工作，挣钱，学习知识似乎不必要了。

这是完全错误的，我们一直学习，即使不在学校，我们学习生活。生活是一个大主题，我们不得不一直学习。我们要处理麻烦，学着交朋友和接受失败。所有的这些东西我们都不会在学校学到，我们必须自己学习，即是学生也是老师。如果你觉得你出了学校后就完成了学习，你的思想就很狭隘了。

[高中英语作文：终身学习

In ancient times， people called the six Yin number， nine known as Yang number。 September 9 this day， two together called "Double Ninth Festival"， the day also called "festival for the elderly"， is our country a long history of the festival。

After this afternoon， I and my classmates are on duty， 43 bus ride home。 The car is very crowded， I can not easily find a seat， a bottom seat， you can have a good rest for a while。

However， the car just after a stop， there is a old man on the train， he probably slightly hunched， over sixty。 I immediately thought to give seats to the old， but thought， he managed to sit down， let the pity。

How do ah? In the end is to let do not let? I think， as a young pioneer， if lets me not， then how to the front of my red scarf?? cant think， I must let。 So I stood up and said： "Grandpa， you come to sit!" I saw my grandfather smiled， then slowly sat down， and said to me： "really good boy!"。

Although I lost a seat for me to rest， but I got the words of praise and happy mood， which is how happy ah!

Care for the young is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation， we must continue to carry forward the spirit of this!

在古代，人们把六称为阴数，九称为阳数。九月九这一天，两阳相聚称之为“重阳”，这一天又叫做“老人节”，是我国一个历史悠久的节日。

今天下午，值勤过后，我就和同学一起坐43路车回家。车上很挤，我好不容易才找到一个座位，就一屁股坐下了，可以好好的休息一会了。

可是，车刚过了一站地，有一位老爷爷上车了，他微微驼背，大概六十多岁的 样子。我马上就想到了要给老人让座，但又转念一想，自己好不容易才坐下，让了怪可惜的。

怎么办啊?到底是 让还是不让?我想，身为一个少先队员，如果我不让的话，那又怎么对得起我胸前的红领巾呢?不能再想了，我一定要让。于是，我站起来，说：“爷爷，您来坐吧!”只见爷爷笑了笑，然后慢慢地坐下，并对我说：“真是好孩子!”我听了以后，心里也乐了，因为我做到了。

虽然我失去了一个供我休息的座位，但是，我却得到了表扬的话语和愉快的心情，这是多么快乐呀!

尊老爱幼是我们中华民族的传统美德，我们一定要让这种精神继续发扬光大!

My hometown four island ring, beautiful scenery. I love the weather, hot summer, love it fallen leaves of autumn, I love snow of winter, but the more love the beautiful spring.

The spring flowers in full bloom, the hometown of hillside orchard is full of flower, a beautiful apple blossoms, pink peach blossom, beautiful pear flower... Flowers to greet the arrival of spring, sending out the aroma. Attracted a lot of bees, dance around the flowers.

The river willows new shoots in spring breeze blowing, like a fly on the sky, the birds fly freely in the air, the river little tadpole looking for mom.

Grass, a group of lovely children happy flying a kite. Only beautiful kite flying in the sky, suddenly, lively up in the sky, the eagle kites, small fish kite... A bird in the sky as if to say: "seem more a few friends."

The distant fields, the farmers took advantage of the good times busy sowing in spring, they play is not only a seed, but of hope.

Hometown spring is beautiful!

我的家乡四周山环，风景美丽。我爱它的天气，炎热的夏天，爱它落叶的秋天，也爱下雪的冬天，但更爱美丽的春天。

春天百花盛开，家乡的山坡上的果园里开满了花，有美丽的苹果花，粉红的桃花，漂亮的梨花……花儿迎着春天的到来，散发着香气。吸引了许多的蜂儿，围着花儿翩翩起舞。

小河边的柳树抽出新芽，在春风吹拂着，像飞上了天空，小鸟在空中自由飞翔，河里的小蝌蚪在找妈妈。

草地上，一群可爱的小朋友在高兴的放风筝。一只只美丽的风筝飞上了天空，顿时，天空中热闹起来了，有老鹰风筝，有小鱼风筝……天上的小鸟好像在说：“好像多了几个朋友。”

远处的田野里，农民趁着春天的大好时光忙着播种，他们播的不仅是种子，而是希望。

家乡的春天真美啊!

Zeng Qiao is one of my friends. She is a beautiful, outgoing and good-tempered girl. She smiles frequently. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same dormitory, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. At first, I don’t like her very much, because she is always talking. It seems that she can’t stop open her mouth. I am a little bit quiet and introverted, so I seldom talk to others. But gradually, I find that she can have influence on others by what she says. Zeng Qiao likes sharing interesting things with others. For example, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood or her former classmates. She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend.

我的家想象哈尔滨是个秀丽的城市。

这里四季分明，鸟语花香。秀丽的步行街上欧式建筑矗立两旁。果戈里大街、中山路，车水马龙，一派繁荣的景象。松花江边游人如织。神奇的太阳岛，像颗璀璨的明珠放射出耀眼的光芒。

冬天的哈尔滨更是美不胜收。白雪皑皑洁白的大地，银装素裹。古老的索菲亚教堂在白雪的映衬下，更显得秀丽、庄严。每年兆麟公园的冰雕比赛，更是吸引了众多来自海内外的冰雕喜欢好者，大显身手。

冰雪大世界，每年都是冰雪节的重头戏。那里有世界最高的冰建筑，最长的冰滑梯，最奇特的冰饭店……那里是冰的世界，雪的海洋，一定会使你流连忘返。

这就是我深深喜欢着的家乡，我为它自豪。今天的我要加倍努力，才能为家乡明天的辉煌贡献力量！