英语考试成绩的英文(实用20篇)

如果你在二年级期末考了99.5分。家长可能有以下三种反应：一、欢天喜地，带你吃好吃的，喝好喝的去；二、骂你，0.5分被你吃了？三、没有任何反应，稍后偷偷的晒朋友圈。

我呢，在一次考试中幸运的考了99.5分。虽然有点遗憾0.5分的计算被老师“吃”了，但我很，噢，不，是一百分开心！

我连蹦带跳的回家了。神气的把试卷递给我妈妈，她一开完试卷，眼睛亮亮的，高兴的嚷着：“王靖媛，真是你考得吗？没拿错试卷回吧？……”当我点头告诉她，这是我的试卷时，她高兴地抱着我在客厅里转了3圈。

我一直怀着一种自信等着老爸，想象着他再表扬我的话，全家就每个人都把我表扬齐了。

五点、五点一刻、五点半……我等不了了！老爸怎么还不回来啊！我拿起手机准备打电话让他快点回家，哟！巧了，我听见钥匙开门的声音，随着一个高大的身影走进来，我一个箭步冲到门口，把试卷递给了爸爸，仰着头等待着美妙的表扬的话语从老爸嘴里飘出。老爸瞟了一眼试卷，大声的问我：“还有0.5分呢？被你吃了还是被你妹吃了？”虽然，他看着我瞬间变得乌云密布的脸，也安慰我“下次再努力”，可是我……

这件事让我明白，同一件事情在不同的人看来，结果都是不一样的。计划也永远赶不上变化！

I was born in a neither rich and nor poor family, and my parents can give me what I want. But they are strict to me. If I waste food and water, my mother will criticize me. To support the family, my father works very hard and he sacrifices a lot time to make money. So I realize the money comes not easy and won’t waste anything.

我出生在一个普通家庭，既不富裕也不贫穷，我的父母总能为我提供我想要的东西。但是他们对我管得比较严格。如果我浪费食物和水，妈妈就会批评我。为了支撑这个家，爸爸非常努力的工作，他牺牲很多时间来赚钱。所以我知道钱是来得不容易的，不会随意浪费。

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make

great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to

learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I

work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and

helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me

to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my

gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

亲爱的梁老师：

您好!我写信是想要感谢你为我做出的努力。在你的帮助下，我在学习上取得了很大的进步。一年前，我的学习成绩很差，我不想再学习了，但是你从来没有放弃我。你告诉我我很聪明。只要努力，我一定很棒。近年，你很关心我的学习，帮了我很多。当我犯错的时候，你总是指出错误并帮我更正。现在，我的学习比以前好多了，我想向你表达我的感激。祝您一切顺利。

作者：思佳

今天我们的考试成绩出来了，我们都很担心自己会考不好，而让我意想不到的事情，发生了……

今天我们念了数学的分数：“李常浩100，、李可欣99，田高博95……”到了70多分的时候，还是没有我。我的心不禁砰砰跳的更快：“我会不会不及格？”念到了“张思佳69。”我吓了一大跳，全部倒数第三，是一个多么“好的成绩”呀！我拿了卷子，在座位上，自己骂自己：“张思佳，你丢不丢人呀，同学们都考了80、90多分，你整个60多分，你还有没有脸呀？”

我看了看自己扣分的原因，都是在计算上扣得分，还有看错题目要求、粗心造成的。李老师给我们讲了一下我们问什么没有考好的原因，我也牢记在心。

这次数学期中考试的成绩，对我自身来说就是一种耻辱，我不会忘记的，这是次的成绩是对我来说的一种激励。我一定要在后面好好学习！

这次月考结束了，我觉得英语成绩不太理想。因为总分才127。5，而且还是加上附加分以后的成绩。自我很不满意，相信老师您也是吧！这次必须要好好反思自我到底哪里做得不好。最近我觉得自我的表现也比较差，A组的作文很少交，而且上课也不是很专心，总是和旁边的同学开小差，害得连旁边同学的成绩也一同退步了。背书那方面也不是很用心，记单词短语也马马虎虎，笔记抄了就算，也没有用心去记去背，所以导致这次月考的退步。

从试卷上分析，听力扣了2。5分，比以前都有进步。而单项选取、语法选取、完型填空这些题都是全对的。比较以前算是有很大的进步，因为之前做语法选取和完形填空总会错那么一两题。但阅读题失分就比较严重。错了三题，扣了6分。可能是考试时不够仔细，又比较焦急怕后面的题做不完，所以导致出现了错误。但是最糟糕的还是二卷的部分，作文满分十五分，自我竟然才得了八分。除了有点惊讶外，还有点后悔。后悔没有每一天写好Ａ组的日记，自我的语法错误又错得离谱。可能作文的资料还有点欠缺，而且我看高分的同学的作文字数都写好多，我的字数才她们的一半。所以才丢掉了这么多分。完成句子和单词填空这方面完成的也比较好，就因为完成句子没有注意时态被老师扣了分，虽然没有全对但相比前几次都是有所进步的。附加题部分就做得比较一般，才对了６个。做的时候不是很懂文章的意思，不会的那些都是乱选上去的，所以觉得完型填空这方面还是要多多加强练习才行。不然下次月考又又完型填空附加题，我就好吃亏了。

本人在今后的学习计划是继续坚持做阅读理解和努力背单词，争取能听写都能全对。保证以后认真落实每一个知识点，多点看笔记本和多记笔记里面的知识点，把此刻不会的都补回来，做阅读理解的时候再认真谨慎一点，在保证做题目的速度的同时也要保证正确率。有不会的知识点要及时问问同学或老师您，要及时解决当天课堂上的疑惑，写好课堂的反思，及时给您反馈意见。Ａ组作文要天天坚持写，就算再怎样样也得每个星期写几篇，作文写得太差，不写真的不能提高作文的分数。还有做好笔记，要及时抄，不能拖到回家的时候再抄。还有要整理和背好笔记，因为笔记真的挺重要的。上课必须务必要专心，坚决不和旁边的同学讲话或者开小差，不能影响别人同时自我又听不到老师您讲课。作业也要自我认认真真地写，不能因为一时的懒惰就去抄袭别人的作业。最后就是要在早读时大声并有感情帝朗读好英语，为听说考试做好准备。要好好对待英语，努力学好英语，时刻提醒自我英语需要进步。我不会让老师失望的。

期末考试结束后，面对四个班的成绩，我喜忧参半：喜的是个班成绩比较均衡，优秀率都在百分之八十以上，及格率百分之九十九。忧的是我所教的四个班中的学困生比其他班多几个。感觉自己在平时的转化学困生工作中下了不少功夫，为什么没有进展呢?我静下心来好好反思自己的工作，总结经验与不足，为下学期的工作做一下铺垫：

一、教学经验

1。精心备课，不打无准备之仗。每节课上课前，我除了精心编写教案、学案外，还上网搜集各种英语课本知识相关的小视频，小动画，制作精美使用的课件，尽量用多种手段吸引学生的注意。事实证明精心，好上课的材料是提高课堂效率的有效策略。

2.严宽结合，狠抓课堂常规。我一直坚持对学生充满爱的教育，但绝不是无条件无原则的爱。尤其是在抓班级教学常规工作中，我更是注重严宽结合，当学生注意力集中时，我就抓紧讲解基础知识。当学生表现疲惫不专心时，我就放慢速度，运用课堂口令帮助学生集中精力。如：我要求学生坐端正会说：one-two-three学生就说：A-B-C并坐好。我要求学生认真听会说：Listen!学生要说：I will listen!总之，恰当的口令语是保证课堂顺利进行的重要条件之一。

3.以鼓励为主，关注学困生。我感觉教师的鼓励是学生奋进的催化剂，尤其针对学困生。平时我总是多给学困生表现的机会，及时肯定他们的进步，坚持给他们写鼓励性评语，让他们时时尝到成功的甜头。一学期下来，个班的学困生明显减少，并且普遍增强自信心，发挥出较强的主观能动性，激发出前所未有的兴趣和热情，英语成绩持续上升，在这次期末考试中脱颖而出。对于纪律不好的学生，我也是坚持多表扬少批评的原则，只要他们一有好的表现，我就会在全班同学面前大加表扬，强化他们已经形成的好习惯。确保班上每一个孩子都能参与到课堂教学的有效互动中，提高了课堂教学效率，在这次期末考试中四个班的成绩名列前茅。

二、不足之处：

1.对待学困生缺少耐心，没有关注好每一个学困生，为他们制定恰当的补习计划和措施。

2.经常犯急躁情绪，没有很好的反思自己的课堂教学而怪罪学生不会学习。

今后我会在原有成绩的基础上继续努力，潜心学习，积极探索更加有效地教学策略，关注每一个学生，为他们的终生学习奠定坚实的基础!

对这次考试进行了一次彻底的分析，这次月考没有考好，总结原因如下：

一、学生对英语考试的态度不端正，遇到难一点的题不是去分析而是瞎做，遇到不会就不做。

二、作为教师缺少了在学生心中的威信。回想一个月以来我一向定位错误没有把自我定位于学生的老师而是学生的朋友，很少对学生严厉的惩罚，以致于学生敷衍了事，课上瞬时记忆，课后缺乏落实，根本无视英语考试的严肃性与重要性。

三、教师与学生都没有处理好兴趣与知识学习的关系。作为教师过于注重学生的兴趣，导致学生有兴趣就愿意学，没兴趣就不想学。

语重心长地说了这么多，我明白这些远远不够，最重要的还是今后工作中该怎样做：

首先，今后在教学过程中对学生要严格要求，和学生建立亦师亦友的关系，重新建立在学生心中威信，让学生从心里佩服尊敬自我。

其次，适当地多做题，是学生养成良好的解题习惯。

最后，教师与学生都要调整心态，正确应对考试，尽快从失败的阴影中走出来，为期中考试做好充分准备，争取打一场悲壮彻底、问心无愧的战役。

六级考试作文怎么办?来不及积累词汇来不及练习了，这里有一些作文模板挑几个熟记于心吧，一定能在考试中帮到你。

一、常见开头

1、It is well-known to us that……我们都知道……

As far as my knowledge is concerned， …就我所知…

2、Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus

Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……最近……问题引起了关注

3、Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face

现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题

4、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题。

5、With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……

随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……

6、It is a common belief that……

==It is commonly believed that……人们一般认为……

二、阐述观点

1、People‘s views on……vary from person to person。 Some hold that……However， o thers believe that……人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……

2、People may have different opinions on……

人们对……可能会持有不同见解

3、Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person。

==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)。人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。

4、There are different opinions among people as to……

对于……人们的观点大不相同

三、结束语

1、In short， it can be said that……

总之，他的意思是……

2、From what has been mentioned above， we can come to the conclusion that……

从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……

3、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……

把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……

4、Hence/Therefore， we‘d better come to the conclusion that……

因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……

5、There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点

6、All in all， we cannot live without……，but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题。

四、提出建议

1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了

2、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……

毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视

九月考试建议大家重点看一下几个话题：

教育、艺术、动物、汽车、老年人、工作，个人，住房等话题。九月写作总体来说难度有所提高，所以一定要注意多准备一些话题词汇和句型，套句。小作文考曲线图，流程图的概率比较高。阅读有可能难度进一步加大。重点突破list of headings, matching, summary。

下面为重点话题

Some people said the government shouldnt put money on art such as music and painting; they should spend more money on construction of public facilities. Agree or disagree?

Computers are less helpful to childrens study, and some people say computers have a negative effect on childrens physical and mental development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is responsibility of government to ensure the peoples healthy lifestyle. Some people believe that they should be free to make decision individual.。.

discuss both views and give your opinion。

Who should be most responsible for childrens education? Give your opinion and reasons for it?

Modern technology such as chemical fertilizers and machinery can provide us with cheap food; however it also has some negative effects on peoples health. What is your opinion?

Some people think that a large amount of time and money spent on the protection of wild animals and others think should be better spent on the human population .To what extent do you agree or disagree

Resultsis more important now.But it is difficult for many students to study it.Now I make some suggestion,maybe can help you.First,you should take notes and take them here and there.When you’re free,you can take them out and read it.Next,you should read Results loudly.Many students know many grammars,but talking with others is hard.

So reading is very important.It can make progress in your talking and listening,and it can also make you get excited,let you have a nice day.Then,talk with people in it’s interesting and very used.Finally,most importantly,try your best to learn English.No Resultspains,no gains.I hope you can improve your LearnGood luck!

Only the delicious food, know the whereabouts of your soul; Only the delicious food, listen with your heart to tell of the stomach. Have to hurry, how much we missed the pure delicious; Tip of the finger food, the food and love in your pocket. You have your personality, I have my pursuit: pot bag meat.

A week off to just into the house, smell a fragrant delicious cuisine. I am sure that mother gave me a delicious pot bag meat. I follow scent into the kitchen, did not beyond my expectations, mother in doing pot bag meat for me. Saw the delicious pot bag meat, stirs my saliva, slowly began to mean. I hurried back, that I may not let mother found. My mother asked me to write my homework first, and then wash your hands, give me to eat a delicious pot bag meat for a while.

I which have idea to write my homework, my mind only pot bag meat. I wash your hands, take the double I dedicated chopsticks quickly do the table. Soon, my mother brought a plate of golden pot bag meat came in, not mother put the pot bag meat on the table, such as I have already put a piece of into the mouth. Enjoy the pot bag meat delicious, mother see I eat with a smile. I asked my mother: "why dont you eat?" "I ate," mom said. I dont believe, just put a bowl to the mother. Then we together eat it with relish.

Pot bag meat, why are you so good? Let me have a special liking to you. Because the pot bag meat is permeated with mother selfless great love to me.

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Choosing an Occupation. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.职业的选择很重要

2. 如何明智的选择自己的职业

3. 你的职业选择。

作文范文

Every individual faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduating from university, which is of great importance in ones whole life. An appropriate occupation makes a man work with vigor and zest. Besides, it is beneficial for both the individual and the country。

To make an advisable choice, a graduate should take into account at least two aspects, namely, individual interest and the demand of the society. Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to the best advantage. If the two factors conflict, the former, in most cases, should give way to the latter, for it is interests that stimulate ones vigor and potentials。

In regard to my choice in the future, I want to work as an interpreter. I am keen on learning foreign languages, English in particular. Moreover, in the contemporary society, international exchange in economy and culture has been growing significantly. However, competent interpreters are far from enough. So I am determined to be a qualified interpreter。

[大学英语四级考试预测作文职业选择

Dalian is located at the southern tip of Northeast China, bounded by the Yellow Sea and Bohai Sea to the west, south and Shandong Peninsula across the sea, connected to the north and northeast of the mainland is a peninsula surrounded on three sides by the sea city.

China has three Peninsula, Shandong Peninsula, Leizhou Peninsula, Liaodong Peninsula. Liaodong Peninsula is referred to here. Because it is a peninsula city, it has the characteristics of the marine climate. She no winter cold, summer without heat. Especially in the summer, Dalian has become a desirable summer resort.

June 5, 2001 granted the United Nations only in Dalian in China, Asia, the second "World Environment 500" city. Jiang said that Dalian is "Northern Pearl", the State Secretary for Tourism to Dalian positioning "romantic."

Beautiful waterfront

If you plane to the plane arrived in Dalian, even when the birds eye view over the city of Dalian in the south with the sea between the sorrowful elegant Weigela is a long coastal road is a great viewing Ben Thanh line is not even the tourists will not come to the place even if only a day trip.

Hello, everyone! Im Feng Biyu, a girl of 19 years old. As you can see, I am very glad to get along with all of you and I hope we’ll have a good time in our subsequent study.

My hometown is in SiHong, Northern JiangSu Province, a beautiful place with a lot of clear rivers and lakes. When boating on HongZe Lake, I always feel free and relaxed. It is really a wonderful  place to enjoy your life.

I graduated from SiHong Middle School. It was set up in 1949 and now it  is more than 60 years old.

I have a lot of friends in my middle school. We love each other. Time goes by, but our friendship will never go away. They cheer me up, make me happy and do some help when I meet with difficulties.

Thats all, thank you!

77分！

七年级测验的数学试卷，发下来，我简直不敢相信自己的眼睛，数学一直是我的强项，这回竟只考77分，顿时，我傻眼，像一个傻子坐在自己的位上。

回想起当时：我一拿到数学试卷就不禁暗暗自喜：这张试卷上百分之八十是老师讲过的原题或同类题，还以为自己能考好，可是……

放学，我心里七上八下，忐忑不安。我想这次爸爸一定会大发雷霆，而妈妈一定是失望的唉声叹气。可今天，回家的路竟如此漫长。我做的很慢很慢，连蜗牛都能超过我，路旁的大树“哗哗”作响，好像在嘲笑我……

到家，一进门，我就躲进自己的房间里。我心里难受极：我还拍爸爸大声的呵斥，也还拍妈妈难过的眼神。可总是要面对呀。

一直挨到睡前，我才把试卷拿出来给妈妈签字妈妈浏览一下试卷，皱皱眉头但立刻又舒展开，又微笑着把试卷递给爸爸，爸爸接过试卷看看分数说：“既然数学是你的强科，你这纯属是粗心大意。”他将试卷放下，走过来摸摸我的头很平静的对我说：“不早，睡吧。把试卷放在这儿明天早晨我签字下次加油吧。”

第二天一清早，我看见客厅的茶几上放着两份试卷。我很纳闷：怎么是两份呢？拿起一看，我的眼泪簌簌地流下来。那份并不是试卷而是爸妈留给我的信条：

儿子：试卷字已签。我和你爸爸看你的试卷，帮你分析原因。相信你在今后的考试中不会再犯同样的错误。早饭在菜柜里。晚上见。

这一次考试成绩在我的意料之外。爸爸妈妈对待这次考试成绩的态度更在我的意料之外。让我和爸爸妈妈的关系更加紧密，也让我懂得：失败给我最好的礼物就是一个教训：一定要把题目读完，认真对待每一道题，不能马虎大意，试题写完后，认真检查，反复检验，不再换同样的错误，让这次考试作为前进的起点。

今天下午上英语课时侯老师说：今天我们英语考试，大家要细心哦！于是侯老师把卷子让大家传下去，然后侯老师说：要写班级姓名，还要检查背面有没有题，我们按照侯老师的话去做了，下午回到家，我上完钢琴课不久奶奶说：告诉你一个好消息，你猜是什么好消息？我猜来猜去猜不着，奶奶提示我了一下说：英语考试我说：英语考试得了100分，奶奶说：答对啦！因为我以前考英语时都没有考过100分，就是因为我没有细心答题、细心检查，这次我的了100分，所以我非常高兴！

我以后要再接再厉，不能骄傲。

I have a happy family. My family have five poeple:grandpa, grandma, father, mother, and me.

My grandparents live in countryside. They have six rooms. The room is big. There are two apple in the ground. They have sixteen goats and three cows. The goat is white. The cow is yellow. They are healthy.

My parents and me live in city. My father is a worker. His work is hard. My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher, She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock. In the afternoon, she doesnt go home. In the evening, she make supper. The food is delicious. I am a student. I have Chinese, math and English everyday. That is boring. I have many friends. After class, I play with my friends.

We are tried, but we are very happy. I love my family

我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。

我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。

我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。

我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭

想要顺利通过英语四级考试，相关的作文常用词汇考生们是需要进行记忆的。下面就随小编一起去阅读英语四级考试作文常用词汇，相信能带给大家帮助。

1. 认为，主张argue, maintain, hold, believe

2. 考虑take…sth. into consideration, consider, ponder, meditate, contemplate, think over, reflect on/ upon, meditate on the matter(思考这问题), ponder over

3. 下结论，断定come into conclusion, arrive at the conclusion, draw the conclusion, conclude, decide, assert(宣称)

4. 获得acquire, obtain, attain, reap

5. 赢得，取得earn, gain, procure

6. 支持，赞成approve of, in favor of, uphold, stand by ones side, agree with, give ones assent

7. 提倡advocate, recommend

8. 反对opposite, object to

9. 抵制resist

10. 意义深远的，重大的far-reaching, profound, significant, eventful(变故多的,重要的)

11. 重要的，有决定性的vital, crucial, critical, decisive

12. 充分运用optimize, make best use of, make full use of,

13. 使用employ, utilize(vt.)

14. 应用apply

15. 后来，然后 afterwards, later on, later, after all

16. 高兴的，心情好的be in a good mood, happy, cheerful, joyful, joyous, pleased, delighted

17. 当前，目前nowadays, at present, currently, presently

18. 表达voice, convey, express, deliver, communicate

19. 描绘，描述，描写depict, describe, picture

20. 勤奋的，勤勉的 diligent, studious(慎重的), industrious, assiduous

21. 认真的，谨慎的 conscientious, cautious

22. 冷静的，清醒的sober, reasonable, sensible, rational

23. 聪明的，有才智的intelligent，bright，wise，brilliant

24. 疲惫不堪的exhausted，fatigued，run-down，worn-out，weary

25. 适应be adapted to，be accustomed to，be adjusted to

26. 阻碍，阻止hinder(后面的), curb(路边), hamper, restrain, prevent, ward off, avoid

27. 好处，优点 advantage，merit，benefit

28. 坏处，缺点 disadvantage, defect, flaw, drawback, deficiency

29. 参加participate in, attend, take part in, go in for, engage in

30. 集中精力于 focus on, center on, concentrate on

31. 专心于 set ones mind on

32. 抽出时间做set aside, put aside, spare

33. 依赖，依靠rely on, lean on

34. 沮丧的，失意的 frustrated, discouraged, depressed, down-hearted, disheartened, low-spirited

35. 努力做，尽力做attempt to, make efforts to, endeavor(尽力) to, manage to do

36. 进步，成就，成绩advancement, achievement, accomplishment, feat, fulfillment, progress (v)

37. 志气，抱负，渴望 aspiration, ambition, yearning, thirst, long for, aspire after/ aspire to sth./ aspire to do sth.

38. 禁止ban, disallow(不接受), prohibit, forbid, ban sth./ ban sb. from doing

39. 除……之外 apart from, in addition to, along with

40. 开展，实施，做practice, carry on, conduct, perform, implement (bring into effect, put in practice.)

今天上午第二节课，我们都坐在位子上等着英语老师来给我们上课，没想到，英语老师拿着一叠厚厚的卷子进来了，我以为老师是发给我们今天的作业，便又坐在那里，乖乖听老师发言，但老师的一句话把我心中的石块提了起来：“下面我们要进行第五单元的考试。”同学们的嘴巴一个个都张成了“O”形。

张老师让我们先复习两分钟，这两分钟就好似两秒钟，转眼间就到了头。老师快速发下试卷，我做了几个深呼吸，先扫视一下所有的题目，心中有了个底儿，便开始做题。教室里静的出奇，连心脏跳动的声音都能听得清清楚楚。五十四根铅笔在试卷上飞舞，发出沙沙的笑声。我每遇到难题，都心头一紧，但接着就以极快的速度冷静下来，解决了问题。时间一分一秒的过去了，离交卷的时间越来越近，我的目光也翻滚在每一道题之间。

“当……当……当，”下课铃打响了，我心中的石块也安然落地，我匆匆交上试卷，心中还是有无数的疑问：我能考满分吗?还能保持第一名吗?

1．词语选择的重要性

在The Right Word at the Right Time的“序言”中，编者对词语选用的重要性作了一个很好的比喻：“Using the right word at the right time is rather like wearing appropriate clothing for the occasion：

it is a courtesy to others，and a favor to yourself-a matter of presenting yourself well in the eyes of the world."

显然，说话或写文章时用词适当比穿着适当难度大得多，因而也具有更大的重要性。在我国，古人写文章时常为一个词语的选用具思苦想，因而有“语不惊人死不休”的说法。

成语“一字值千金”也说明了选择词语的极端重要性。有时“一字之差”造成令人遗憾的败笔，或招致成千上万的经济损失。这些反面的教训也告诉我们必须重视词语选用的问题。

2．词语选择的可能性

实际上，我们每个人的脑子里都有了一个或大或小的词库，只要我们肯去发掘，往往可以得到更好的表达方式。这是我们做好词语选用的主观条件。

从客观条件广看，我们有各种类型的词典和参考书，只要我们平时多翻译、多阅读，写作时勤查考，就会在词语选用上不断进步。当然，一部好词典也不会毫无缺点，更难以面面俱到，因此在这里我们应牢牢记住著名英国作家、评论家和辞书编纂家Johson的话：

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。