小升初英语作文范文10篇带翻译(精品20篇)

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? Currently, 为了欢迎新同学，晚会在我们学校被举办。

inordertowelcomethenewstudents,aneveningpartywillbeheldinourschool. As the chairman

of the Students’ Union, I’m writing to invite you to join us.

Here is a 简单(简洁)安排briefschedule . First, it

will be held in the school meeting hall from 7:00 to 9:00 p. m. next Sunday.

Additionally, 将会有很多被老师和学生们所呈现present的很棒的表演(there be句型)therewillbemanywonderfulperformancespresentedbytheteachersandstudents, such as singing, dancing, performing plays and so

on.

Everyone is longing for your coming, and

如果你能给出一个表演，它将会是更令人欢呼的。itwouldbemorecheerfulifyoucouldgiveaperformance.

I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the

confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you.

请让我知道你的决定如果方便的话。Pleaseletmeknowyourdecisionifitisconvenientforyou.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Holiday soon, I am looking forward to, worry a moment slipped away, the in the mind feel very satisfied; Depressed mood, the twinkling of an eye, it disappeared without a trace, let me have a lot of energy, in a happy mood!

Finally is going to have a holiday, I must grasp well this holiday time in a hurry, live a life of leisure, uncontrolled, during this time, our whole family will go to watch the lovely animals in the zoo, I also hope that in this holiday season, scuba diving, fly to the green island to play with.

In my this period of vacation, make me the most memorable time, is to go to the zoo, watch the lovely animals, let me satisfied, in the memory like seals, imprinted in my mind, never forget it.

In the period of the holidays, I have fully grasp, a holiday for me this is an important document, although very short, but let me excited, the next vacation, I have to enjoy it well, in this period of holiday, let me unforgettable, deeply imprinted on my mind, dont wash off.

快要放假了，我非常的期待，烦恼一瞬间就溜走了，心里觉得很满足;原本沮丧的心情，一眨眼，就消失得无影无踪，让我活力充沛，心情很愉快!

终于要放假了，我一定要好好地把握这个光阴匆匆的假期，过着悠闲、不受控制的生活，在这段期间，我们全家要一起去动物园里观赏可爱动物，我也希望在这个假期里，坐飞机去绿岛潜水，玩个痛快。

在我这段的假期中，令我最难忘的一次，就是去动物园里，观赏可爱动物，让我心满意足，在那一段回忆就像印章一样，印在我的脑海里，永远不会忘记。

在这段假期里，我有充分的把握，这一段假期对我而言就是一份重要的文件，虽然很短，却让我兴奋难耐，在下一个假期里，我一定要好好的享受一下，在这段假期里，让我终生难忘，深深的印在我的脑海里，洗也洗不掉。

I am good at writing and I am interested in travelling around the world,So I want to become a reporter in the future.

As a reporter, I can communicate with many different kinds of people. I can show the real world to readers.

As a metter of fact, to be a good reporter is not easy.

It is a challenge for me.

Now I must study hard and lay a solid foundation. Also I must build up my body.

我善于写作，也对环球世界也是非常感兴趣，因此，未来我想成为一个记者.

作为一个记者，我就可以和不同种类的人进行交流，我也能够把真正的世界展现在读者面前.

事实上，成为一个好记者是不容易的，对我来说是一个挑战.

现在我必须努力学习打下坚实的基础，还有必须要锻炼身体.

The Winter Holiday We are going to have the winter holiday.During the holiday we will have the Spring Festival.So all of the families in China are having a busy time.All of the children in China like Spring Festival very much,because they can eat many delicious food and get many money.But children in China have to do the homework for Winter Holiday.So that the could remember what they have learn the year before.Each of the children likes Winter Holiday. 我们即将放寒假,在寒假期间,我们将要过春节,所以所有中国家庭都十分忙碌,所有的中国孩子都十分喜爱春节,因为他们可以吃很多好吃的食品和得到很多的压岁钱,但是中国孩子必须在寒假里做作业,以便他们能够记住他们以前学的东西,每个孩子都喜欢寒假!

My winter holidays plans

My winter holidays plans me studying for my English , I will make great efforts to learn English. Persist in listening to half hours of English every day. I will accomplish the school assignment that the teacher arranges best with the quickest speed. I can not forget to take the body exercise certainly also , I may take the body exercise coming drawing out 30- - 1 hours in time in every day. I play with the once computer coming certainly may draw out one small Duan time , watch one meeting TV or. Certainly need only 1 hour. This it is my winter holidays to plan!

我的寒假计划

我为了我的英语学习,我将努力学英语.坚持每天听半个小时的英语.我将以最快速度最好的完成老师布置的作业.我当然也不会忘记锻炼身体,我会在每天的时间中抽出30——1小时来锻炼身体.我当然会抽出一小段时间来玩一下电脑,或者看一会电视.当然只要1小时.这就是我的寒假计划!

May Day is coming. I?m so happy because my father and my mother take me to

WuQuan Park this holiday. In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers.

There are many children and many happy playing games, too.

My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears,

deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever

and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!

I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.

【参考翻译】

五一节即将来临。我很开心,因为我的父亲和我的母亲带我去五圈公园这个节日。在公园里,我看到很多树和美丽的花朵。有许多孩子在快乐的玩游戏,。

我的父母带我去动物园。有狮子、老虎、鹰、熊、鹿、猴子等等。我最喜欢猴子,因为他们非常聪明，他们让我们开怀大笑。他们是多么可爱啊!

那天我玩得很开心，多么美好快乐的假日啊。

My mother always complains about my bad behavior, like I don’t eat up the food and sometimes I don’t have responsibility on what I do. I decide to behave myself, I want to help my mother to relieve her pressure. So I want to be a good child, I will eat up the food, no more pick up them and I also will keep on finishing the job I do.

我的妈妈总是抱怨我的坏习惯，比如我不吃完食物和有时候我对自己做的事情没有责任感。我决定自我自律，我想要帮助妈妈减轻她的压力。所以我想要成为一个好孩子，我会把饭吃饭，不再挑食，我也会坚持做完自己的工作。

[小学四年级英语带翻译作文

I have a happy family, in this family, the love of the parents and the objects of love, make my life be filled with joy and warmth, all day long I have lived in this atmosphere of love.

In this home I like to eat meat, vegetables is not how to love to eat. For that mom and dad said I many times, but I think meat is delicious, have a dad to let me eat food deliberately and I rob food to eat, mum was fired one of my favorite celery fry meat, mother put the food in front of me, I kept carrying meat to eat, very delicious! Dad came to the table, put the dishes in the middle of the table, I quickly pull the food bowl, dad to pull the food bowl and the past, and so the two of us pull to go, I was angry, put down the chopsticks to walk, see dad is eaten all the food, I am helping in anger, picked up the chopsticks quickly grab, whether its meat or food into my mouth, I dont know why the celery is delicious, from then on I began to eat green vegetables, I know dad with rob method put off the bad habit of I dont eat green vegetables, dad do everything is good for me.

Family just like our trees, I live in a happy home, mom and dad like branches lived happily let me, Im like a leaf. I want to study well, better to put the family construction, also is I want to be a beautiful leaf, to put the tree dressed up beautifully and.

我有一个幸福的家，在这个家里，父母之爱，一草一木之爱，使我的生活时时充满着欢快与温馨，我整天就生活在这爱的气氛里。

在这个家里我很喜欢吃肉，青菜就不怎么爱吃。就因为这个爸爸妈妈不知说过我多少次，可是我就是觉得肉好吃，有一次爸爸为了让我吃菜故意和我抢菜吃，那天妈妈炒了一个我最爱吃的芹菜炒肉，妈妈把菜放在我面前，我不停地挑着肉片吃，真香啊!爸爸来到桌子旁，将菜放在桌子中间，我急忙把菜碗拉过来，爸爸把菜碗又拉了过去，我们俩就这样拉来拉去，我生气了，放下筷子走了，眼看爸爸快要把菜全都吃完了，我就顾不上赌气了，拿起筷子快抢，不管是肉还是菜都进了我的嘴了，不知为什么芹菜也蛮好吃的，从那以后我就开始吃青菜了，我知道爸爸用抢的方法治掉了我不吃青菜的坏毛病，爸爸做的一切都是为我好。

家庭就像我们的大树，我生活在幸福的家里，爸爸妈妈就像树枝让我快乐地生活着，我就像一片叶子。我要好好学习，要把这个家庭建设的更好，也就是我要做一片美的叶子，要把大树装扮得漂漂亮亮。

Although my hometown is in the middle of the countryside, but there elegant environment, ma of farmland, green, relaxed and happy making a person!

Walk on the path of the field, breathing the fresh air, the grass is green and luxuriant., at the foot of the flowers smile. This beautiful scene, let me nervous mood ease up.

Come to my house along the quiet and tastefully laid out and the path. Sitting in a small yard, the first thing you encounter is a few lush poplar tree. They are tall, like a guard to protect our home, thank you, lovely poplar. Through the gap of poplar and is layered terraces, green seedlings are thriving, the farmer uncle of the field are weeding them sweating in the hot sun. To the autumn harvest, they are hard-working, I silently raised an admiration of love.

Yard was clear the left side of the lotus pond, lotus leaves with a blooming lotus flower, lotus leaf strips under small fish in the chase; Hiding in the lotus lotus seed, how to pick a flower! "Little Eva hold boat, white lotus back. Dont understand Tibetan, duckweed open." Bai juyis "pool" emerge in my mind. How I want to do a small bai juyis Eva, to enjoy the lotus pond in boundless fragrance.

Garden on the right side is the kitchen, the kitchen has a thick bamboo forest. Cicadas do not know where, only to hear "see, see" a cry.

Looked up at the sky cbsi, look down at yard before the clear brook, to listen to the song of the birds cry, is really "people in the middle", home feels good!

我的家乡虽然在偏僻的农村，但那儿环境优雅，漫山遍野的农田，绿油油的，令人心旷神怡!

漫步在田间的小路上，呼吸着新鲜的空气，脚下小草青翠欲滴，花儿眉开眼笑。这美好的情景，让我紧张的心情一下子舒缓起来。

顺着幽雅的小路来到我家。坐在小院里，首先映入眼帘的是院边几棵郁郁葱葱的杨树。它们高大挺拔，像一个个卫士保护着我们的家园，谢谢你们，可爱的杨树。透过杨树的空隙望去，是层层叠叠的梯田，绿油油的秧苗正在茁壮成长，田间的农民伯伯正在除草，他们在炎炎的烈日下挥汗如雨。为了秋季的丰收，他们不辞辛劳，我的心里默默地升起一股敬佩之情。

庭院左侧是清澈的荷塘，荷叶上顶着一朵朵盛开的荷花，荷叶下一条条小鱼在追逐嬉戏;荷花里藏着一朵朵莲子，多么想摘一朵呀!“小娃撑小艇，偷采白莲回。不解藏踪迹，浮萍一道开。”白居易笔下的《池上》浮现在我的脑海里。我多想做一次白居易笔下的小娃，去尽情享受荷塘里无边的清香。

庭院右侧是厨房，厨房后有一片茂密的竹林。蝉不知在哪里，只听见“知了，知了”一片叫声。

抬头仰望瓦蓝的天空，低头看看院落前清澈的小溪，侧耳倾听鸟儿的啼叫，真是“人在画中游”啊，家乡给人的感觉真好!

Good morning,everyone! I`m very happy to have this chance to give my

presentation. Before I start my speech, please let me ask you a question. Do you

think you are confident in yourself? If you are, do please raise your hand.

My topic today is “ to Be a Confident Person.”

What is confidence? Confidence is to trust yourself. Confidence is to look

upon yourself. It is not to indulge in self-admiration. It is not to get

extremely arrogant. It is not to get dizzy with success or to be opinionated. It

is just to inspire yourself ahead of a quality of mind, in high spirit, full of

energy. It is to meet the challenges of life in a positive mood. It is to

overcome your inferiority, farewell, to get rid of the trouble of a a ready-made

panacea.

Remember, I have just entered junior high school. In the face of the

challenge of new environment, in the face of so many new courses and learning

contents, I lost faith in my own and gradually developed a psychological sense

of inferiority. Achievement glided ceaselessly. It is a teacher and mother who

encouraged me and let me regain confidence. Gradually, my grades got higher and

higher and everything began to go on well. Gradually I adapted to the life in

middle school.

Friends, lets say goodbye to inferiority. Let’s be a confident person.

Because: only if you have self-confidence, can you control yourself; only if you

have confidence, can you achieve success and create your a brilliant life of

your own!

大家好!

今天我演讲的题目是：做一个自信的人。

什么是自信?自信，就是自己信得过自己，自己看得起自己。它，不是孤芳自赏，也不是夜郎自大，更不是得意忘形和自以为是;而是激励自己奋发进取的一种心里素质，是以高昂的斗志，充沛的干劲迎接生活挑战的一种乐观情绪;是战胜自己，告别自卑，摆脱烦恼的一种灵丹妙药。

还记得，我刚刚升入初中时，面对新的环境，面对那么多的新的课程和学习内容，我对自己失去了信心，逐渐产生了自卑心理，成绩不断下滑，是老师和妈妈及时帮助我、鼓励我，让我重新找回自信。渐渐的，我的学习成绩及各个方面都有明显进步，逐渐适应了初中的生活。

朋友们，让我们告别自卑，做一个自信的人吧。因为：只有拥有自信，才能拥有自我;只有拥有自信，才能走向成功，才能创造自己辉煌的人生。

How to learn English is a diffcult question .but now i have a good idea .

I think we have many ways to learn English .For example .

First of all ,we can listen to English miusc and watch English language movies .

Sencond, i think we can read english books it helps us to memorize words .

Next we can listen to english tapes i think it helps us to memorize words ,too .

Finally . we can talk with english penpal .it will help our spoken .

I hope every body will get good grides.

翻译：

怎样去学习英语是一个困难的事情。但是现在我有一个好主意。

我认为我们有许多的方法去学习英语。例如第一我们可以去听英语歌还有可以去看英语电视。

第2 ，我认为我们可以去读英语书它能帮助我们去记住英语单词。

然后我们可以去听英语录音 ，我认为它也能帮我们去记住英语单词。

最后，我们可以和英语笔友一起交流 。它将会帮助我们的语法。

我希望每个人都将获得一个好成绩。

[六年级英语日记带翻译如何学习英语

This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar。 At the beginning， I couldn＇t do well at all and often made mistakes。 I was very low-spirited， but father and mother encouraged me a lot。 So I began to try my best。 Gradually， I could do a very good job。 I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time。 I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation。 I believe I can do better next time。

这个暑假我在一家快餐店打工。起初，我也不在所有和常犯错误。我非常低沉，但爸爸妈妈给我很大鼓励。所以我尽力做到最好。渐渐地，我可以做得很好。我感到非常兴奋，当我收到支付的第一次。我已经作出了我的心，在这个寒假里找一个兼职的工作。我相信我下次能做的更好。

[暑假打工英语作文及翻译

My name is WangLei . My birthday is on August 11. We have a good

birthday party. My mother makes a birthday cake for me. It’s big and tasty. My

father give me a football. Because I like playing football. Many friends come to

my home .We are very happy. They give me a lot of presents and some birthday

cards. We sing and dance. We eat food and fruit. We play games together. We have

a good

time.

【参考翻译】

我的名字叫王磊。我的生日是8月11日。我们有一个很好的生日聚会。我妈妈使我一个生日蛋糕。它是又大又好吃。我父亲给我一个足球。因为我喜欢踢足球。很多朋友来我家。我们非常高兴。他们给了我很多的礼物和一些生日贺卡。我们唱歌跳舞。我们吃的食物和水果。我们一起玩游戏。我们有一个美好的时光。

在学校我有一个朋友。她是个女孩，她叫王旭，她1 3岁。我也13岁。我们在同一个班。她英语比我学得好，因此她经常帮我学英语。我也帮助她学习。

我们是好朋友。

I have a friend at school. She is a girl. Her name is Wang Xu. She is thirteen. Im thirteen, too. We are in the same class.She studies English better than I,so she often helps me with my English . I help her with study,too.

We are good friends.

我有一个非常好的朋友。她叫胡丽丽。她今年14岁。她有一双漂亮的大眼睛，短头发。她又高又壮，但不胖。她对人非常友善。

她喜欢做运动，比如打网球、羽毛球和踢足球。她有许多爱好，她喜欢听音乐、读书、画画、唱歌和跳舞。有时我们在校内说英语；有时我们在校外玩羽毛球。我们经常在星期六或星期日去游泳或去钓鱼。我们上学时，她非常刻苦地学习功课。

在下午，我和我的朋友胡丽丽在操场上玩游戏。我们总是玩得十分开心！

她永远是我的好朋友！

I have a very good friend. Her name is Hu Lili. Shes fourteen years old. She has big beautiful eyes,and short hair. She is tall and strong, but not fat. Shes very kind to people.

She likes doing sports,such as tennis, badminton and soccer. She has many hobbies:listening,reading,drawing,singing and dancing. Sometimes we speak English in our school. Sometimes we play badminton out of the school. We often go swimming or go fishing on Saturdays or on Sundays. When we are at school, she studies very hard at our lessons.

In the afternoon I play games on the playground with my friend Hu Lili. We always have a good time!

She is my best friend forever!

[我的朋友英语作文和翻译

Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid.

Snowflakes swirl float down from the sky, gentle and soft. I walk alone in the house, quietly enjoying a rare snow brings us happiness.

Its snowing! XueShen seems to be for the left off in winter, tears kept flowing from its eyes. Countless snowflakes in the sky, flying with the wind, and present a variety of colors, colorful, like a rich stone, like a diamond. Close look at it, will see it is white, clean and pure white, white. It is like silk, and flying in the air, and the hexagonal body twisted her beautiful...

White snowflakes gently down on the grass, as if the earth put on a white dress. Snow onto the grass out of their little head, snow children to play, play in... White color in front of my eyes appear, snow-white voice echoed in my ears, the taste of white in my nasal side... As if everything is snow to dye the color, as if the whole world champions in the silences of his white!

雪花纷纷扬扬地从空中飘落下来，轻轻的，柔柔的。我独自漫步在屋外，静静的享受着难得的雪景带给我们的快乐。

真是大雪纷飞啊!雪神好像在为即将离去的冬天送行，泪珠不断的从它的眼中流出来。天空中无数的雪花，随风飘扬着，呈现出各种颜色，五彩缤纷，像宝石，又像钻石。近看它时，会看到它的白，纯洁的白，美妙的白。它像丝绸，在空中尽情的飞舞，尽情的扭动着她美丽的六角形身姿……

雪白的雪花轻轻降落在草地上，好像给大地穿上了一件雪白的盛装。雪下的小草使劲儿地出他们幼小的脑袋，雪上的孩子们尽情的玩耍，嬉戏着……雪白的颜色在我的眼前呈现，雪白的声音在我的耳边回荡，雪白的味道在我的鼻边萦绕……仿佛一切都被雪染了色，仿佛整个世界欧在雪白的静默之中!

Just days before the arrival of winter vacation, Im still thinking what to do to make my life more meaningful winter vacation. I suddenly thought of mother daily toil in recent years, always wash his clothes, and cook for us every day, mop the floor... Such as housework. Change is my words might complain about, but mother doesnt even have a complain about words, mom is really great!! So I decided to a large mobilization "family", want to let mom have a good rest, to comfort her daily toil. Come before the Spring Festival, cleaning, make the home look brand-new, like a pipe dream of beautiful.

In addition, I want a winter vacation, go to the aunt home borrows a few good book. As a result, there are two benefits: first, can increase my knowledge. Two, would not have to think about the computer, the computer is like a naughty little monkey, will only tell me: "come and help me to boot, Im waiting for you!" Carelessly will fall into the abyss ─ ─ ─ increase my myopic degree!!!!!

Look!! My winter holiday plan is very full!! I also feel this way in this summer holiday, I will very happy, very happy. May this winter holiday can bring more joy for me!

在寒假来临之前，我 还在思考要做什么事才能让我的寒假生活更有意义。突然我想到，这几年妈妈平日的辛劳，每天总是为我们洗衣服、煮饭、拖地......等家事。换成是我的话 可能会抱怨连连，可是妈妈连一句抱怨的话都没有，妈妈真的是很伟大呀!! 于是我决定来个“全家大动员”，想让妈妈好好休息，来慰劳她平日的辛劳。趁春节的时候，来个大扫除，让家里焕然一新，有如镜花水月般的美丽。

另外，我想要在寒假的时候，去阿姨家借阅几本好书。这样一来，有两种好处：一、可以增加我的知识。二、就不会去想到电脑，电脑就像个顽皮的小猴子，只会告诉我：“快来帮我开机，我在等你唷!”一不小心就会掉进深渊───增加我的近视度数!!

看!! 我的寒假计划很充实吧!! 我也觉得这样一来在这个暑假，我会过的很快乐、很开心的。愿这个寒假能带来给我更多的快乐!

寒假即将到来，请根据下面提示，写一篇70~90字的寒假计划。

提示：rest, Spring Festival,visit,help parents,play with friends, do homework,mend up English,prepare for new term. Plan for the winter Holiday

winter vacation plan

How time flies（时间过得真快）,unconsciously(不知不觉地） the next winter vacation （寒假）will soon come.In order to improve（提高） myself as well as enjoy a happy holiday,I made the winter vacation plan.

Firstly i want to continue with my study,i think study is a life process,so no matter what the situation I am in,i will look for chances to continue it.I have bought several new books ,including those books on my major(专业）and some novels ,I will try to finish reading them in the holiday and write notes.

Secondly,since it is the holiday,I will share it with my family and friends .You know the spring festival will soon come, I believe I would chatting and play games with my friends and family .I think I will enjoy the vacation.

寒假计划

时间过得真快，不知不觉得下一个寒假就要到了，为了提高我自己同时快乐的度过假期，我制定了寒假计划。

首先，我会继续学习，我认为学习是一种终身的过程，所以不管我处在那种情况之下，我都会寻找机会学习。我已经买了一些新书，这些书有的跟我的专业有关，也包括一些小说。我将努力读完他们并写下读书笔记。

其次，既然是放假，我将和我的家人朋友一起度过，你知道春节就要来临了，届时我会和我的家人朋友一起聊天啊，玩游戏啊等等，我相信我定会度过一个快乐的假期。

[寒假计划英语作文附翻译

Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.

春节是中国最重要的节日.

It’s to celebrate the lunar calendars new year.In the evening before the

Spring Festival,families get together and have a big meal.

春节是为了庆祝农历新年的来临.除夕夜,一家人聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的年夜饭.

In many places people like to set off firecrackers,Dumplings are the most

traditional food.

在很多地方,人们都会放鞭炮,饺子是最传统的食物.

Children like the festival very much,because they can have delicious food

and wear new clothes.

孩子们非常喜欢这个节日,因为他们可以有好吃的食物同时可以穿新衣服.

They can also get some money from their parents.

他们也能得到父母给的压岁钱.

This money is given to children for good luck.

压岁钱给孩子们,以求好运.

People put New Year scrolls on the wall for good fortune.

人们把春联贴到墙上,以求好运.

The Spring Festival lasts about 15 days long.People visit relatives and

friends with the words “Have all your wishes ”.People enjoy the Spring

Festival,during this time they can have a good rest .

春节将持续大约15天,人们在拜访亲朋好友前常用这句话:“祝愿”.人们喜欢春节,因为在这段时间里他们可以好好休息一下了.

My hobby is very broad. What to read, listen to music, I like it. But my favorite, favorite, that is - look at a map.

I love to see the map, it seems to have become a part of my life. Hanging on the wall of my house, and a map of China and a map of the world. Every day I looking at that is made up of dots, lines, symbols of the world, drunk I do not know return often, it is ecstasy than reading a book. Because I love to see the map, so I know many geographical knowledge, such as what is the biggest desert in the world, where is the capital city of Canada...... Even read the cousin of sun yat-sen university also kua I understand more!

I love the map simply love to mad. At ordinary times, I always keen to find a map to see. Some is a pile of waste paper to others, I always go up and see if it is a map. Even I also regularly to see when cleaning, result the classmates all day with strange eyes looked at me, I very bitter. But because of my efforts, my home there are now several zhang from real estate newspaper clippings on the map. On one occasion, I saw a piece of paper in the class, there is a map on it. A map! I was excited and cried. The students looked at me with strange eyes again: in order to map, even the life all dont you? Perhaps really well. I want to.

Map has brought us benefits, also brought me trouble. But anyway, maps, I love you graffiti.

我的爱好很广泛。什么看书啦，听音乐啦，我都喜欢。可是我最喜欢的，也就是最喜欢的，那就是-看地图。

我爱看地图，它似乎已成了我生命的一部分。在我家的墙上，挂着一幅中国地图和一幅世界地图。每天我都看着那由点、线、符号组成的世界，经常‘‘沉醉不知归路’’，简直比看书还入迷。正因为我爱看地图，所以我懂得许多地理知识，比如世界上最大的沙漠是什么啦，加拿大的首都在哪里啦……连读中山大学的表哥也夸我懂的多呢!

我爱地图简直爱到了发狂的程度。平时，我总是乐此不疲地寻找地图来看。一些在别人看来是一堆垃圾的废纸，我总是凑上去看看是不是地图。就连打扫卫生时我也习惯性地去看，结果同学们一整天都用怪怪的目光看着我，害得我好苦。不过正因为我的努力，我家现在已经有好几张从《房地产报》上剪下来的地图了。有一次，我在班里看到了一张报纸，上面有一幅地图。地图!当时我就激动得大叫起来。同学们又用怪怪的目光看着我：为了地图，你连命都不要了?或许真的这样吧。我想。

地图给我带来了好处，也给我带来了麻烦。但不管怎样说，地图，我爱你没商量。

There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as swimming, running, and

dancing. However, the sport that I like most is basketball. When I was in junior

high, I started to play basketball in school. At that time, I found I had loved

deeply this sport. Now, I would like to watch basketball games as much as I can.

The basketball games have given me the most wonderful time in my life.

我喜欢许多类型的运动，比如游泳、跑步和跳舞。然而，我最喜欢的运动是篮球。当我还在初中时我就开始在学校打篮球。那时，我发现我已经深爱这项运动。现在，我想尽我所能观看篮球比赛。在我的生命中篮球比赛给了我最美妙的时间。

听、说、读、写、译，是我们学习英语中最重要的五个方面，不可偏废。前面发了一些关于口语和音标的帖子，有家长建议我写一些关于写作的内容。

大家都知道口语要说的地道，而我们的写作往往停留在中式英语的误区中，而且很难发现。

“为什么我的词汇量如此丰富却仍然写不出能让阅卷老师满意的作文?”相信不少同学都曾有过这样的疑问。词汇量的多寡往往并不是一篇英语作文质量好或者坏的关键。许多同学即便很努力地去准备作文，但最终分数仍然不理想，这很可能是因为他们陷入了某种写作的误区。今天，张译云老师就要为大家列举比较常见的三种英语写作误区，希望能帮小勇士们“对号入座”，并施以针对性的改进。

误区一：用中文思维串联英文词汇

一些同学在绞尽脑汁也写不出英语作文的情况下，会先按照题目写一个中文稿出来，然后再借助电子辞典翻译出一篇所谓的英语作文。还有一些同学习惯性地用中文的表达方式来写英语作文。这就造成了所谓的中国式英语作文。在这样的作文里，我们常常读到以下这类用中文的语法和英语单词拼凑出来的句子：

“When Iwas a child,my parents very love me。”(正确表达：When Iwas achild,my parents loved me very much)。

解决之道：强化语法

要想流利的掌握一门外语，你需要能够使用该语言思考。而将中文式思维转变为英语思维的最根本的途径之一就是强化语法知识。很多同学的词汇量很丰富，但是对于怎么用，什么时候用却并不明白。而这些恰恰是语法知识所能告诉我们的。哪些词要用在句中，哪些词应该用在句尾，语法里都有相应的规定。一旦用错了位置就会写成英国人看不懂的英语作文。另外，对于词汇所存在的不同的形态也应该注意。

误区二：过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大局”

不少同学在写英语作文时，将过多的注意力放在“优美的文笔”上面。因此，他们不停地用电子辞典搜集华丽的词藻，并运用难度颇高的句式，以期能让自己的作文“技高一筹”。但事实上，多数情况下会弄巧成拙。太生僻的单词同学们运用起来并不能得心应手，而且使用太复杂的句型也常常会出错。

解决之道：用平常心表达平常事

要写作要求学生能够综合运用逻辑、词汇和语法等多种知识和技能来完成一个写作任务，但并不苛求学生去做标新立异的创作。因此同学们无需力求完美地到电子辞典里去找生僻的词汇，也不需要写得多么高深莫测，而是应该抱着平常的心态去描述自己看到的东西，表达自己想到的内容，将学过的词从记忆深处调动出来，复习语法课上学到的知识。用这样的心态写出来的东西内容虽简单但不乏生活气息，语言虽稚嫩，但却准确易懂。

误区三：文章冗长细枝末节过多

不少学生在写作中的一大担心就是文章的长度不够，再加上对于“可适当增减细节，不可字对字的翻译”的误解，于是便充分发挥想象能力，加入了很多离题较远的细枝末节。这样的文章写出来更像是一篇“大杂烩”，从中找不到任何主题。还有一些作文，句子和句子之间的连贯性不强，逻辑思维混乱，读起来让人摸不到头脑。

解决之道：理清思路，言之有物

我认为，很多人之所以写不够题目要求的作文字数，其中一个重要原因就是对于题目本身没有理解透彻。建议同学们不要急于下笔，而是先考虑清楚自己要说几点内容，这些内容之间的逻辑关系是怎样的。