高三英语作文：关于手机是否影响学习的英语作文(20篇)

寒假过大年，作为学生如何兼顾学习、玩乐可，科学安排寒假的学习和生活呢?希望同学们能充实而有意义地度过寒假，弥补过去的不足，适当预习，给下学期的学习铺平道路，小鹿给大家提以下建议，供大家参考。

1、快速完成寒假作业;

完成寒假作业切记拖拉，一鼓作气把会的题目先做完，通过思考能够做出来的题也尽量完成。然后把不会的他们整理好，带到书店，看对应的参考书对应的例题，不管有多少也都可以在半天里统统完成!当然，回家后还需要细细消化吸收一番。有个别难题，到年后请教同学或老师。

2、制定一张计划表

做一个寒假的学习计划，安排好自己每天要做的事情，按照计划学习。寒假里，同学们可自由安排的学习时间比较充足，每个同学可以根据自己的情况，选择记忆效果的时段，来安排需要记忆的语文、英语等内容，复习效果会事半功倍。

另外，一天中各学科的复习应该穿插进行，也利于提高效率。

3、注意补短;

各科成绩均衡很重要。同学们可以利用这个寒假纠正自己的偏科习惯。在时间的分配上，很多同学都把自己不喜欢的学科放在最后，等到不得不做时，才硬着头皮做，这样更加加重了畏难情绪。

建议同学们不妨把自己薄弱的学科都放在每天学习的时间来做，这时精力比较集中，克服困难的信心也会增强。其实只要努力，大部分学生的偏科现象都可以纠正过来。

为了保证有效果，还必须使用学习流程补差，先查漏后补缺。当天以收获半成品为主，后面三天再完成半成品的加工。这样可以大幅度提高学习的效率，同时也保证学习的质量。

4、劳逸结合，安全过假期;

放假期间，同学们可以利用充足的时间每天安排一些有意义的体育活动，既能增强身体素质，还能陶冶情操、磨炼意志。例如，篮球、足球、兵乓球、羽毛球等都是不错的选择。尤其对初三学生而言，更要加强体育锻炼，别因为假期懒惰而影响自己的成绩。

Nowadays, with the development of technology, many young people stay

indoors and play computer all the time. Especially for those who stay up very

late or go out to play for fun until midnight, then they wake up at noon the

next day. This is the unhealthy lifestyle, and they need to make some

changes.

First, having regular break time and enough sleep is the basic way to keep

healthy. Some young people hang out for fun after work. They need to release

their pressure and have fun with their friends. They go home very late and then

next day get up, preparing to work. In the long run, they not only have low

efficiency, but also damage their bodies.

Second, keep the balanced diet. Most people are picky about food. They only

choose the food they like and lose the balance of nutrition. For most kids, they

like to have meat and refuse of the vegetables and fruit. It is not good for the

growth of their bodies.

The healthy lifestyle helps people live the harmonious life. Besides having

enough sleep and keeping balance diet, taking exercise is also in need.

I am not fond of basketball,let alone to play it.But I have seen a wonderful basketball game between my class and postgraduate class.It is so wonderful that I cannt help asking myself "Is it real".The answer is pretty yes.I also learn a lot from the game.

我不喜欢篮球，更不用说打了。但我已经看到了我们班和研究生班之间的一场精彩的篮球比赛。它是如此美妙，我不禁问自己，“这是真的吗”。答案是肯定的。从比赛中我也学到了很多。

First ,teamwork is very important.You are sure to fail if you play by yourself.So five members must play together and well orgnized.Second ,you should have a aim.In order to reach it,you should try your best.

首先，团队合作是非常重要的。你一定会失败的如果你只靠自己的话。所以五个成员必须一起参与、组织好。其次，你应该有目标。为了达到这个目的，你应该尽你最大的努力。

Last,never give up whatever have happened.Even if you get low scores,you shouldnt give up.If there is a will,there is a way.If there is a will ,there is also a opportunity.And you can make failure into success.Believe yourself and believe your team.You are the best one.

最后，无论发生什么事情永不放弃。即使你得到较低的分数，你也不应该放弃。有志者事竟成。如果有志着，也会有机会。你可以把失败变成成功。相信你自己，相信你的团队。你是最好的。

What I saw was a great opportunity to provide computing technology in a more efficient way.That was the core idea of what became dell computer Corporation, and that’s one we were stuck over ever since.当时我看到一个大机遇就是以更有效的方式提供电脑技术。那后来成为了戴尔公司的核心理念，自那以后我们便一直坚持不懈。

I started the business with a simple question: how can we make the process of buying a computer better?The answer was :sell the computer directly to the end customers.Eliminate the reseller’s markup and pass the savings on to the customers.我是从一个简单的问题开始创业的：我们如何使购买电脑的过程变得更方便?答案是：直接把电脑卖给终端用户。去除转销商这一层的钱，并把省下的钱还给用户。

There is an old Chinese saying: Top students come from strict teachers.

Perhaps affected by this saying for a long time, we believe it right. However,

as time flies, lots of things have changed. Therefore, I am eager to discuss

what relation is the best between teachers and students.A teacher can treat a

student in two ways .One is strict, and the other is friendly. Most teachers

prefer the first way.To start with, we certainly have to admit that strictness

is very effective, especially to the naughty pupils.

As pupils we aren’t able to control ourselves well or fix our attention on

one thing for a long time. We do most things because they are interesting or we

feel like doing. We are always looking out of the window in class. Sometimes, we

get to play games and forget our homework. On this occasion, strictness is a

must. It not only forces us to do the right thing, but also helps us develop a

good learning habit, which is of great importance during our whole life .In

other words, it is the first step to success.Still, everything has two sides.

Its weak points are very obvious. You see, there’re top students in a class,

where average students make up the majority. Then teachers’ orders or

suggestions are for the majority, not for top students. However, top students

always have their own study plans and prefer special homework, so orders usually

won’t take great effect on them.

Maybe you have thought out that teachers can give orders only to the

majority and set some freedom to top students. However, it’s impossible .For a

whole class, teachers couldn’t give order to part of the class, for the majority

would question why they needn’t do such work, but we need? It would be probable

that they think teachers treat them not equally, and will not obey teachers’

orders any more. This is a difficulty for teachers.It also has another

disadvantage——the communication problem .Since teachers are strict, we never

tell teachers our personal affairs or secrets. Mostly we just tell them to our

friends, but as students too, they couldn’t help to solve our problem, such as

puppy love, communication problems or study problems .Not being solved

completely, they always disturb us, influencing our daily life and study. I’m

sure that you think that making friends with teachers can solve the problem, and

you are eager to do so as well. But if we do so, new problems will come out .You

see, an adult couldnt control himself well at times, let alone us students.

However if teachers are our friends, I doubt whether their orders will take

effect any more .You see, have we ever treated our friends’ orders as orders? We

think they’re only jokes. This is another difficulty for teachers.Additionally,

our parents have the same problem. Yes, we need to be friends, but not complete

friends. We need to keep a certain distance, making us communicate well and

willing to take your orders. I remember a story.One day, a lady had her rest

room decorated. And a skilled worker was bricking up the wall. Seeing large

cracks between the bricks, she questioned why. The worker told her after this

summer, the bricks would become bigger, and those cracks would disappear.That is

not only decoration, but also communication. The principle is the same.

Today, the world is learning mandarin. According to the report, there are

over one hundred million foreign people learning Chinese. Whats more, a lot of

foreign companies are having their workers master not only Chinese language, but

also the culture. Chinese dream influences so many people, which provides great

business chances and let the young people realize their dreams. Just as the

successful person said, the 19th century belonged to the UK, 20th century

belonged to America and the 21th century surely belonged to China, whether

people liked it or not. We need to master the chance and equip ourselves with

many skills, so that success will come at hand.

Why to find suitable for you at the center of the target, you must ask

yourself these questions: where I know I to go and why? I why want to do is do?

What I want to stand and believe what? I get up every morning is for the sake of

what? The things I do every day is for the sake of what? In my life the most

important value? In fact, the reason why you set a goal is far more important

than the goal itself.

Dedicated to the pursuit of their goals and life value is clear why I have

these dreams. They spent a lot of time to think before every important aspect of

his life, they will think about who you are, what they want to do and want to

make what kind of contribution. If you do not have clear goals, also could not

find support for the urgent reason, finish your dream, you cant like

myself.

No dream, no hope, you cant do any meaningful things. If your whole life

just go with the flow, there is no goal that you cannot really love or respect

yourself.

If you just mix one day for a day, every day after work and weekend

holiday, are made with TV and boring dinner party to pass the time, then you

cant get any sense of achievement, there will be no satisfaction, let alone

happiness.

We all need to have a goal to release the full potential. The target is

larger, the greater the can inspire the potential of the. Studies show that many

people are not happy, feel pressure big, like the debate and argumentative,

because cant find meaning in life, goals and direction. They think life is too

boring!

As an old saying goes, "spring". This semester I have made the new plan.

This semester, Im going to get rid of some bad habits. I am a Chinese representative, but I not to be able to change a bad habit of always: I listen to the class very fast, but when the teacher asked, in fact, I usually can answer up, but I am timid, afraid to bold hands. Even if the teacher said: "wrong it doesnt matter." I still cant raise your hand. So in this semester, I will try to break the following five years of my bad habits.

First of all, Im going to each class at least for one hand, the accumulated, one semester I can correct the bad habit. In this way, the teacher can like me.

Also, this term we mathematics textbooks, other students all have already learned a third, so, I have been a bit behind other students, because of this, I have to work harder, more oil, so my grades will not lag behind. Now, I need to start doing more extracurricular practice, I am determined to not be a problem to beat, I will use my efforts to prove, Ill catch up, let the teacher to me sit up and take notice.

And I want to get rid of a bad temper, is the classmates to ask me questions, I always do their own thing, dont listen to him, I think it is not respect others. From another Angle to think, if I come to ask questions, how sad thing it is being rejected!

I have a flaw, that is, sports is not good, every time to the final, achievement is to pass the exam. Because I at ordinary times less exercise, just cause sports achievement is not good enough, so in this sunny spring, I want to exercise more, to do a good job of the health care. As long as I every day so, I think I should be able to level again.

Ok, dont say, my new term plan to say the last three days and three nights! I have to do now is get rid of bad habits and bad temper, so you can do a cla.

俗话说得好：“一年之计在于春”。这个学期我也制定了新计划。

这个学期呢，我打算改掉一些坏习惯。我是语文课代表，可是我的一个坏习惯总是改不过来：我上课听得很牢，可老师发问时，其实我一般都能答上来，可是我胆小，不敢大胆举手发言。就算老师说：“答错没关系。”我还是不敢举手。所以在这个学期里，我一定要尽力改掉这个跟随我五年的坏习惯。

首先，我打算每堂课至少要举一次手，这样累积下来，一个学期我就可以把这个坏习惯改过来了。这样，老师就可以喜欢我了。

还有，这学期我们的数学课本，别的同学都已经学过三分之一了，所以，我已经比别的同学落后了一点，正因为这样，我一定要更努力，更加油，这样我的学习成绩才不会落后。现在，我要开始做更多的课外练习，我决心不会被一个个难题给打败，我一定会用我的努力证明，我会赶上去的，让老师对我刮目相看。

另外我要改掉一个坏脾气，就是别的同学来问我题目时，我总是管自己做自己的事，不听他的话，我觉得这样就是不尊敬别人。换个角度来考虑，假如是我来问问题，被人拒绝是多么难过的事呀!

我还有一个缺陷，那就是体育不好，每次到了期末，成绩都是及格。因为我平时少锻炼，才导致体育成绩不够好，所以在这个充满阳光的春天，我要多锻炼，做好各项保健工作。只要我天天这样，我想我应该可以再升一级。

好了，不说了，我的新学期计划可以说上个三天三夜呢!我现在要做的就是改掉坏习惯、坏脾气等，这样才可以做一个全优生。

谚语是广泛流传于民间的言简意赅的短语，多数反映了劳动人民的生活实践经验，而且一般都是经过口头传下来的。接下来是小编为你带来的关于勤奋学习的英语谚语。

Fools learn nothing from wise men, but wise men learn much from fools.

愚者不学无术，智者不耻下问。

By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.

读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。

Books and friends should be few but good.

读书如交友，应求少而精。

A young idler, an old beggar.

少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

A man cannot spin and reel at the sametime.

一心不能二用。

It is never too old to learn.

活到老，学到老。

Readingis to the mind while exercise to the body.

读书健脑，运动强身。

Knowledge starts with practice.

实践出真知。

Complacency is the enemy of study.

学习的敌人是自己的满足。

A good book is a best friend who never turns his back upon us.

好书如挚友,永远不相负.

Study to be what you wish to seem.

学习可成为你所理想的人物。

Knowledge advances by steps not by leaps.

知识的获得是循序渐进而不是突飞猛进的。

A book that remains shut is but a block.

书本不常翻,犹如一块砖.

Art is long, but lift is short.

人生有限,学问无涯;人生有限,艺术无穷;人生有限,学海无涯;

Learning is an ornament in prosperity, a refuge in adversity, and a provision in old age.

学问在得意时是装饰品，失意时是庇护所，年老时是供应品。

Experience keeps a dear school, but fools learn in no other.

经验学校学费高,愚人旁处学不到。

Learning makes a good man better and ill man worse.

知识能使好人更好，坏人更坏。

A handful of common sense is worth bushel of learning.

一点小常识常胜过很多有价值的学问。

A little learning is a dangerous thing.

一知半解,为害不浅。

Knowledge makes humble; ignorance makes proud.

知识令人谦虚;无知使人骄傲。

Knowledge is power. 点击听机器人阅读!

知识就是力量。

A man becomes learned by asking questions.

不耻下问才能有学问。

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy; all play and no work makes Jack a mere boy.

只工作，不玩耍，聪明孩子要变傻

There is no end to learning.

学无止境。

No pains, no gains.

不劳则无获。

With the development of science and technology, there are more and more new

products appearing in human beings’ life. Cell phone is a good example.

Nowadays, cell phone has been widely used in people’s daily life. It seems that

people can’t live without it. In my opinion, cell phone really brings so many

advantages to mankind.

First of all, cell phone is very convenient. People can connect with anyone

in anywhere if that person has a mobile phone, too. In other words, people have

to write letter in paper and then wait for a long time to make the letter

arrived the destination in the old days, but now people can write message on

cell phone and then send it to the person they want in a second or just dial

that person’s mobile phone number and then they can talk with each other in a

few second. Secondly, mobile phone can act as a safe guarantee. When people face

dangerous, they can use cell phone to dial 110 to report to the police or ask

for help from friends nearby. And when people worry about another man, they can

call him to make sure whether he is OK or not. Last but not least, mobile phone

contains much interesting entertainment, which can bring lots of happiness to

human beings and make their life more colorful.

In general, cell phone is the product of high-tech, which brings lots of

benefits to our human beings.

There are some primary schools and secondary schools stipulate that the student bring the cellphone to school is not allowed. There is a lot of discussion about whether the students use the cellphone is good or bad.

有些中小学规定不允许学生把手机带到学校。这引发了很多讨论，学生使用手机是好是坏。

The supporters think the cellphone is widely used today, the students usually keep themselves in touch with their parents or guardians via the cellphone any time. As for the security issue, the cellphone is necessary. On the other hand, the students can use it as a tool of study. They can search the study materials on line by using the cellphone, it will cut down much cost of the time, make the study more efficiently.

支持者认为，手机在当今时代已经广泛运用，学生可以用来与家长和监护人随时保持联系，对于安全问题来说，手机是非常必要的。另外，学生也可以将手机作为一个学习工具。他们可以用手机上网搜索学习资料，这将会大大减少时间成本，让学习变得更加有效率。

And other people think that the juveniles is not matured enough to use the cellphone in the right way. There were some reports said that some students used the cellphone to cheat in the exam. And also, many parents found that their children would attain some inappropriate information from the net service on the cellphone, it is not easy to supervise that. What the worst result is, they become a cellphone addict, stick to the cellphone anywhere anytime.

而另外一些人则认为，青少年们还不够成熟，不能正确的使用手机。有些报道称有些学生用手机在考试时作弊。此外，很多家长们发现他们的小孩通过手机的网络服务会获取一些少儿不宜的信息，这并不好进行监督。而最坏的结果是，他们会变成一个手机上瘾者，不管什么时候、到哪都要粘着手机。

There are the advantages and disadvantages of the cellphone, I think the most important of all is how to use it as the best tool of our life instead of letting it control your life.

手机有利有弊，我想最重要的是怎样将它变成生活里最好的工具，而不是让它控制你的生活。

寒假是复习过程的中转站，更应当作考前的加油站，在这黄金时间内，不仅可以进行知识和方法自行拓展，也可以进行心理和生理的自我调整，斗志昂扬迎接新的挑战。

高考是教学的指挥棒，为了更好的落实二期课改精神，高考命题坚持以能力立意的原则，平时的复习中，是在老师的指导下进行“齐步走”，任务也较重，应接不暇。而寒假就可以自主支配，加强对相关知识的拓展，能力问题的钻研，使“长”的更“长”，“短”的不“短”。

方法的不妥有时会阻碍人的进步。寒假期间可以进行大胆的尝试，寻求适合自己的最佳学习方法和考试技巧。特别注意劳逸结合，养精蓄锐，保持有效的生活和学习规律，不打乱已经形成的“生物钟”。开学时，既保证了知识上心中有效，又保证了身心上精力充沛。为此我向同学们提一些建议，供参考。

一、过好“完成任务关”

根据一贯的规律，各个学校会布置一定数量的暑假作业，作为复习工作的延续和补充，也为同学们巩固和提高提供了练习的素材。并且，开学的时候要检查任务完成的质量和效果。所以，必须完成老师指定的任务，才能心安理得，才能有进一步去干其他事情的时间和心情。在完成指定任务时，要有计划有安排，宁愿适当提前完成，不可延迟，每年都有同学安排不合理，把老师布置的任务放在最后几天做，谁知突然有了特殊事情，虽然后来快马加鞭，挑灯夜战，但是任务还是难以完成。

二、过好“查漏补缺关”

相当一部分同学考试时分数不高，不少是会做的题做错，特别是基础题。究其原因有的是知识方面的，有的是属能力方面的，也有是因情绪波动而引起的。因此，要加强对以往错题的研究，找到错误的原因，对易错点进行列举、归纳、对症下药、治标治本，使犯过的错误不再重犯，会做的题目不会做错。

其实，不少同学知道查漏补缺，但是每天的练习很多，完成都很吃力，那有时间去查漏补缺，只有听之任之了。现在机会来了，应该抓紧时间进行疑难突破。

三、过好“回归课本关”

不论高考怎样考，基础知识的灵活运用是必不可少的。一般情况下每种题型(选择、填充、解答)的前几题都是基础题的，有的只是一些概念的直接应用，有的是一些知识点的简单组合，而这些只要基础知识到位，一般不易失分的。寒假中，若能把每一章后面的复习小结好好的读一读，其中有对每个知识点的讲解、有相关的例题、有注意点，这往往是考生平时所忽略的，不妨每天读一、两章的复习小结，对于基础知识的把握是很有好处的。

四、过好“总结关”

学习是个“由薄变厚”，再“由厚变薄”的过程，平时的复习中，以本为本，进行练习和巩固，不断进行思考和拓展，使得知识和方法不断丰满而充实。现在该“由厚变薄”了，针对教材，以知识点为线索进行梳理，使得知识系统化，记忆的效率也会提高许多，运用起来就会眉目清楚，得心应手。在梳理时，最好不要用课本中的原话，尽量用自己的语言进行理解性描述，然后对照纠正，这样效果会更好。

五、过好“创新探究关”

研究性能力的考查已经成为高考考查的热点内容，平时受到时间的限制，难以展开深刻的探究，而利用假期就可以一展拳脚。

Last year, I went to Guilin for travel. On the train, I felt so bored. A

girl who sat next to me was reading a book, which caught my attention. I asked

her about the book, I found that I had read it before and then we discussed

about the novel. We talked happily, when the train arrived, we got off together.

When we got aparted, we promised to keep in touch. We communicated by the

computer. Now a year has passed, we become good friends and I miss her all the

time. She is a genuine friend. I plan to go to Guilin again and then we will

meet.

21世纪是一个互联网时代。现在的科技日新月异，使人们的生活变得便捷高效，如手机缴费，网上购物等，就连过年的习俗给“压岁钱”也悄然升级了。

早在20__年的时候，便掀起了一股“抢红包”的热潮。“抢红包”这一活动活跃在微信中，使用起来极其地方便，微信红包有很多的用途：可以当做生日祝福，也可以用来发奖金，还可以用来发压岁钱……

就在今年的除夕夜中，大家都拿着手机，紧盯着屏幕，满面笑容地谈天说地。这时，我感到很奇怪，以前大家在这个时候，都是在收红包送红包的，可是为什么今年静悄悄的呢?好奇的我刚要发出疑问，旁边的表弟却比我早了一步：“奶奶，咱们去年都是在收压岁钱的，今年为什么没有了呢?”表弟这一问正中下怀。奶奶听了，笑着对我们说：“哎呀，你们不说，我都要忘记啦。”奶奶拿着手机，“红包是有的，只不过，今年要特别点。”说完他晃晃手中的手机，“用手机?”我们都很奇怪，“是啊，最近不都流行用手机来发红包嘛，所以我们也来跟一下风。”奶奶对我们说道：“要在我们那个群里发，大家要快点，不然要没啦!”奶奶刚说完，我们就立马全神贯注地盯着手机，生怕自己没抢到;而小点的弟弟妹妹呢，就围在自己的爸爸妈妈旁边，帮他们加油。

其实，“抢红包”这一新兴事物归根到底也是人类发明的，如果没有他们，就没有互联网，更没有这个崭新的21世纪互联网时代。所以，我想对他们说：“谢谢你们的敢于创新，让我们的生活变得多姿多彩!”

Recently,haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of

China.People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air.So it

is necessary to find out the reason why leads to that and work out the

resolution.If we trace the cause for haze weather ,the main points are as

follows ,first,china s air quality standards are rather lax and evaluation

factors are limited,so you will see that current air appraisal system has

defects.Second,some people just go for economic interests instead of turning out

products according to relevant law and regulations.They tend to use obsolete

equipment in which they are high likely to emit a great deal of wasted air.

Third,across our society ,relevant protection awareness has not built up so

that people havent formed a habit of using green product and saving energy as

much as possible.Just for the sake of convience to go out,people rely more and

more on travelling and working by car while car is the main cause for the haze

weather

To settle this problem,a series of meaures should be taken as follows.First

,we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate

pollutants.Second,we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep

perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people s

daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that

ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze.

Third,we should develop green and energy-saving energy to lower the

emission of haze and improve air quality.As far as i am concerned ,if we work

together to be able to do such measures ,our environment will getting better and

better and haze weather will vanish completely.

As Goethe says, “man errs so long as he strives”, no one can avoid making mistakes. Therefore, what we need to do is to recognize and revise our mistakes and learn from them.

For one thing, from mistakes, we learn to be more careful and observant. Small though a mistake is, it can destroy the whole plan that we are engaged in. Therefore, in the process of finding mistakes, we are also shaping our characteristics of carefulness and cautiousness and strengthen our capacity of observation. We understand that success consists of details and we could not ignore the smallest mistakes.

For another, the process of finding and revising mistakes is also a process of changing our way of thinking. In many cases, we find that our mistakes are not in what we have done, but in the methods we have used. Thus, when we find that we are wrong, we would try another way to carry out our plan. In this process, we are trying to think in other ways and our capacity of thinking is also improved.

In a word, mistakes are inevitable but we have to take a proper attitude towards them. And making mistakes is not totally a bad thing because we can learn some enlightenment from it.

正如歌德所说：“人只要奋斗就会犯错误”，任何人都会犯错。因此，我们需要做的是承认错误，改正错误，并从中学习。

一方面，从错误中，我们要学会更加细心，学会观察入微。一个错误再小，但也能破坏我们从事的整个计划。因此，在发现错误的过程中，我们同时也在形成细心谨慎的性格，加强我们的观察能力。我们会明白成功是由细节组成的，我们不能忽视哪怕是最小的错误。

另一方面，发现错误、改正错误的过程也是改变我们的思考方式的过程。在很多情况下，我们发现我们的错误并不在于我们所做的事情，而在于我们所使用的方式。因此，当我们发现我们犯了错，我们就会尝试另外的方法来实施我们的计划。在这个过程中，我们试着用另外的方式思考，我们的思考能力同时也得到了提高。

总之，错误是不可避免的，但是我们要采取正确的态度去对待。同时犯错也不完全就是坏事，因为我们可以从中学到一些启示。

October 1st is the national day of our country, which is a public holiday for the whole country. It’s an important day that marks the beginning of PRC. On that day, there are plenty of celebrations holding throughout the country, from the central government to the general people. And public places, including big squares, parks are decorated in festive theme. In recent years, the national holiday means the golden week as well, which is a short holiday that all people expect to. With the improvement of living standards, people have more money and desire to travel and the golden week is a good chance for them. Besides, for those people who would not go out, it’s a good time to have a good rest as well. Therefore, the national day means a lot to the Chinese.

10月1日是我国的国庆节,这对于整个国家是一个公共假日。这是一个重要的日子,标志着中华人民共和国开始。在那一天,有很多庆祝控股全国,从中央政府到一般人。和公共场所,包括大广场,公园在节日的装饰主题。近年来,国家节日意味着黄金周,这是一个短暂的假期,所有的人都期待。随着生活水平的提高,人们有更多的钱和渴望旅游黄金周是一个很好的机会。除此之外,对于那些人不出去,这是一个很好的时间来好好休息一下。因此,中国的国庆节意味着很多。

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

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31.3.5雷锋日，出门多让路，车位多让出，开口多祝福，对人多帮助，动物多呵护，花草多爱护。学习雷锋好榜样，助人为乐要弘扬，祝你开心快乐每一天。

32. 助人为乐热心肠，无私奉献有担当，舍已为人胸怀广，爱岗敬业创辉煌，小事做起不张扬，热爱生活心坦荡，学习雷锋纪念日，传递爱心，愿雷锋精神永传唱!

33. 让和谐友爱成为一道春风，文明就在你我身边，让奋发向上成为一股力量，勇气就在你我身边，让助人为乐成为一种风尚，雷锋就在你我身边。

34.今天是雷锋纪念日，拿起手机，编辑一条爱的短信，发给有爱心的人，重温雷锋精神，做新时代的雷锋，更好的为人民服务。

35. 学习雷锋不寻常，助人为乐多帮忙;微薄之力不轻量，举手之劳不张扬;舍己为人好榜样，互敬互爱百花香;和谐美满保安康，短信祝福俺送上。

36.学习雷锋好榜样，看到困难要帮忙。路见不平一声吼，哪怕吼完你就走。做好人，做好事，好人终有好报。学习雷锋日，愿你帮助别人也能收到别人帮助!

37. 雷锋，是我们生活海洋里的一座灯塔，指引我们寻找幸福的港湾，乐于助人，勇于奉献的雷锋精神，将指引我们继续前行，雷锋日快乐。

38. 雷锋虽然离开了我们，但是今天的雷锋精神依然存在，让我们伸出爱的双手，勇于奉献，乐于助人，做新时代的雷锋，让短信把雷锋精神代代相传，快乐的生活。

39. 学习雷锋精神在当代不落伍，学习雷锋精神在当代有必要，学习雷锋精神在当代受尊敬，学习雷锋精神在当代受欢迎，学习雷锋精神在当代很流行。

40. 学雷锋，谨记心，好榜样，要传承，你也来，我也到，齐动手，传温暖，发短信，递问候，关怀到，祝福享，共和谐，益身心，乐善美，齐分享。

There is a big skating ground near our school. In winter, I often go skating there, and I enjoy the sport very much.

At first, I only went there to watch others skating. Some with good skills could skate wonderfully. I admired them from the bottom of my heart. But I couldn’t do it myself. I was only an onlooker. How I longed to skate myself!

I began to make up my mind to learn it. But as soon as I stepped on the ice, I stumbled over myself. At once, some people caught me, and I turned red over their laughter. I became so disappointed that I decided to give up. When I was about to leave, a girl came towards me with a smile and said, "Never mind, try again and you will succeed." I tried again and again, but still fell again and again. I put up with the wounds and pains and stood up and went on trying. At that moment, the girl came up again. She said loudly to me, "Ok, you are doing very well." Then she signed a "V" to me with her fingers. I was very obliged, and with her encouragement, I made great progress. Soon, I could skate quite well.

While doing anything, we often meet many kinds of setbacks, but we shouldn’t lose heart, we should overcome them with confidence instead of getting away from them. Then we will gain one victory after another.

一天晚上，我梦见爸爸带我去手机城买手机。

我看了各种各样的，有鱼形状的，还有灯炮形的。

突然，我看见了一个橡皮那么厚的手机，售货员看见了，她说：“别看它小，功能却很强大，在手机上面有缝细，它能任意变出任何工具。如果小偷来了，你别害怕会被偷走，因为会识别好人和坏人，但没了电，也不用担心，因为这手机是用光充电。小偷一偷，月光一照，就会飞速地充电，手机早已发觉了，就会立刻报警，所以就不用害怕会被偷走了，就算没有月光，也有路灯，只要有一点点光，就会立刻充满电。

而且右边还有一个小小的红色按钮，如果你没有找到其它什么功能，就按下它，只要说一说，不管是游戏还是相机……都可以下载到。

你觉得这手机是不是很智能呢。